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Iguchi Yuka - Grow Slowly (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hi M4M here

[General]
maybe add some custom drum sound and silent sliderbody?
I think it will be good for the mapset and improve the hitsounds much more

[Insane]
What happened to the hitsounds on this diff? is it still WIP? I'm just going to point out a few hitsound suggestions
00:13:104 (3) - finish on slider head
00:18:377 (6) - ^here too, lower volume though
00:23:104 (x) - add a beat here? Feels weird without it, or maybe move spinner to start from here
00:24:740 (1) - finish here
00:53:831 (1) - finish at slider head
00:55:104 (4,1) - switch NCs
01:24:013 - from this point on, just add some soft whistles? cause the music is quiet but the sliders are too silent

[Hard]
00:09:831 (1) - finish on slider end
00:24:740 (1) - finish on slider head
00:15:286 (6,1) - make this spacing a little bigger? cause the previous jumps have a bigger distance
01:13:831 (1,2,3) - fix up this spacing? it's confusing
01:15:468 (1) - extend spinner to 01:16:740

[Easy]
00:51:649 (4) - maybe NC this?
01:22:922 (1) - this spinner is way too long. The singer is still singing and there's also the piano. you should start spinner later or just remove it and map out the song

That's all from me
keep working on it!
Good luck!! :D
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Don't Give Normal!?
http://puu.sh/2VJSd.osu
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Don't Give Normal!?
http://puu.sh/2VJSd.osu
Yay~ Thanks :3 Updated!

Fixing mods now and putting hitsounds :3
Done~
creampuff
438 posts
Joined August 2012
creampuff
Yeah, hi again :3

[General]
  1. Nothing

[yanlu's Easy]
  1. 00:53:831 (1) It's the start of the chorus, and no hitsounds? It calls for one. Add finish to slider-head please.
  2. 00:55:649 (3) The clap here's not really necessary since it doesn't really fit with the music too well.
  3. 00:58:558 (3) ^
  4. 01:01:468 (3) ^
  5. 01:05:377 (1) Finish at slider-head please
  6. 01:07:286 (3) Remove clap
  7. 01:09:831 (2) Remove clap at slider-tail
  8. 01:10:922 (3) Add clap
  9. 01:16:377 (5) Remove clap at slider tail
  10. 01:22:922 (1) There's not much of a point of adding a finish and clap here.I don't think it's suited since the song's just about to end here.

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:377 (1) Not only does this finish here sound completely out of place, it also ruins the whistle pattern you were doing. I'd replace it with a whistle.
  2. 00:28:013 - 00:28:740 (1,2,3) Don't stop here! Continue the clap pattern. Suggestions;
    SPOILER
    00:28:013 (1) Add clap, remove whistle
    00:28:740 (3) Same here. Remove whistle to slider head, replace with clap
  3. 00:30:558 - 00:32:740 (1,2,3,4) Hmm, the finishes here don't make for a good pattern. The first finish at 00:30:558 (1) is ok, but they're just sort of random from there. Suggestions;
    SPOILER
    00:30:558 (1) Remove finish at slider-tail and/or replace with whistle
    00:32:740 (3) Remove whistle at slider-head and tail and/or replace with whistle(s)
  4. 00:34:922 (2) Remove finish at slider head
  5. 00:35:649 (3) ^ but keep the other finish at the tail
  6. 00:37:468 (2) Remove the clap at the slider-tail
  7. 00:38:195 (3) Remove clap and whistle at slider head and tail
  8. 00:39:286 (1) Remove normal hitsound here
  9. 00:40:013 (2) Let this note have normal hitsound
  10. 00:40:377 (4) Remove normal hitsound
  11. 00:41:104 (5) ^
  12. 00:42:558 (1) Don't start a clap pattern here when you're not going to continue it. Remove the clap.
  13. 00:46:558 (1) Remove both finishes here
  14. 00:49:104 (2) Remove finish at the repeat, remove clap at slider tail
  15. 00:53:468 (1) I wouldn't suggest placing this slider here, because it doesn't follow vocals. Shorten this slider to 00:53:831 and add a note at 00:54:195 or try something else
  16. 00:59:286 - 00:59:831 (2,3) This doesn't follow vocals either. How about this;
    SPOILER
    Sounds much better

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:922 (8) What an odd time to end this slider. And the rest after this sounds really empty. You can end the slider at 00:29:468 and add a note at 00:29:831
  2. 00:44:195 (5) Extend this slider to 00:44:740. It doesn't follow the vocals.

[Insane]
  1. 00:54:558 (3) No need for the finish here.
  2. 01:28:740 (1) Remove the finish here
    Pretty good.

Well, good luck~
Restrict
48 posts
Joined December 2012
Restrict
hi M4M :D

[General]
Overall it's already good :)

Consider adding 01:28:740 a spinner in every difficulty

Add to the tag
ending a certain scientific railgun to aru kagaku no railgun とある科学の超電磁砲 s misaka mikoto shirai kuroko uiharu kazari #and another character#

[Easy]
00:18:195 (3) - I think changing circle with 1/2 beat slider here would be better
01:09:831 (2) - It's too stretched... Check the reverse arrow
SPOILER
01:22:922 (1) - The slider is too long

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:17:831 - Add a circle

[Hard]
00:31:468 (3) - Reverse once
00:52:377 (3) - I suggest to change circle with either 1/2 beat slider (emphasizing instrument) or 1 beat sldier (emphasizing vocal)

Sorry i can't mod insane cos i'm not good enough :(
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:922 (8) What an odd time to end this slider. And the rest after this sounds really empty. You can end the slider at 00:29:468 and add a note at 00:29:831
  2. 00:44:195 (5) Extend this slider to 00:44:740. It doesn't follow the vocals.

[Insane]
  1. 00:54:558 (3) No need for the finish here.
  2. 01:28:740 (1) Remove the finish here
    Pretty good.
fixed all :3 Thanks for your mod!

[Hard]
00:31:468 (3) - Reverse once fixed
00:52:377 (3) - I suggest to change circle with either 1/2 beat slider (emphasizing instrument) or 1 beat sldier (emphasizing vocal) I think it's okay like this though :3
Thanks for your mod I'll mod yours ASAP
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
http://puu.sh/2Wuop.osu
All Fixed>W<
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/2Wuop.osu
All Fixed>W<
Updated~ :3
Hanabi
Hanabi
Sana's mod from M4M MODDING


[ Insane ]

00:02:558 (3) - NC
00:03:831 (6) - NC
00:05:468 (1) - NC
00:06:740 (4) - NC
00:08:377 (3) - NC
00:09:649 (8) - NC
00:14:195 (6) - NC
00:29:649 (2,3) - NC of each
00:47:649 (6) - NC
00:56:013 (4) - NC
01:08:377 (4) - NC
01:19:286 (8) - NC
01:25:104 (4) - NC
01:26:558 (2) - NC
01:28:013 (4) - NC
01:28:740 ~ 01:29:831 - Hit sound 5%

nice pattern so i adviced comboing and sound only.

[ Hard ]

00:03:649 (6) - NC
00:06:922 (6) - NC
00:15:286 (6,1) - UMM..too close..?
00:23:286 (5,6) - dont need spin -> http://puu.sh/2WAcf.jpg
00:24:377 (1) - add circle -> http://puu.sh/2WAd3.jpg
00:25:831 (4) - NC
01:20:740 (4,1) - Like this -> http://puu.sh/2WAfF.jpg
01:28:740 - song didn't finish..but it might not be matter~

[ Rainbow's Normal ]

00:13:104 (1) - slider finish at here -> 00:13:104
00:32:377 (2,3,4) - stack on straight line
00:40:377 (4) - like this -> http://puu.sh/2WApR.jpg
00:41:104 (1) - NC
01:10:558 (2) - LIKE THIS -> http://puu.sh/2WAsC.jpg


[ Easy ]

00:27:649 (1) - change slider's head and tail
01:24:377 (1) - spinner should finish here...


YEAH i love this song ;)


GOOD LUCK~!
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
recheck

[General]
check tag Please all same
why AudioLeadIn: 1996? change 2000 check plz

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:13:104 (1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:14:558 (3) - ^

00:34:922 (2) - add finish? first point
00:40:377 (4,5,6) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:53:468 (3) - forget finish? last point
01:05:468 (1) - and forget finish? first point

[yanlu's Easy]
00:34:558 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:50:195 (3) - add finish? last point
00:53:831 (1) - add finish first point
01:05:468 (1) - ^
01:14:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this.

01:19:649 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.


good luck~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Satellite wrote:

recheck

[General]
check tag Please all same
why AudioLeadIn: 1996? change 2000 check plz
fixed :3 thanks for the recheck :3
[ Insane ]

00:02:558 (3) - NC
00:03:831 (6) - NC
00:05:468 (1) - NC
00:06:740 (4) - NC
00:08:377 (3) - NC
00:09:649 (8) - NC
00:14:195 (6) - NC
00:29:649 (2,3) - NC of each
00:47:649 (6) - NC
00:56:013 (4) - NC
01:08:377 (4) - NC
01:19:286 (8) - NC
01:25:104 (4) - NC
01:26:558 (2) - NC
01:28:013 (4) - NC
01:28:740 ~ 01:29:831 - Hit sound 5%
all fix
nice pattern so i adviced comboing and sound only. ^.^

[ Hard ]

00:03:649 (6) - NC
00:06:922 (6) - NC
00:15:286 (6,1) - UMM..too close..?
00:23:286 (5,6) - dont need spin -> http://puu.sh/2WAcf.jpg
00:24:377 (1) - add circle -> http://puu.sh/2WAd3.jpg
00:25:831 (4) - NC
01:20:740 (4,1) - Like this -> http://puu.sh/2WAfF.jpg
01:28:740 - song didn't finish..but it might not be matter~
all fix
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
ritsu-tanaika
Hi again~

General: Really good map, but rainbow difficulty need some more improvement

yanlu's EASY

00:18:195 (3) - please change to slider to make the rhythm linked, no gaps
00:56:013 (4) - the slider should be bent further upwards



01:22:195 (4) - Please add finish sound

Rainbow's NORMAL

00:13:104 (1) - End of the slider should touch the white tick instead of red. if it ends on red, it just ends abruptly and doesnt match the vocal

00:40:377 (4) - ^

00:42:195 (1) - I dont think a NC is necessary

01:15:468 (1) - Audio for this slider should be reduced to 10%, add a timing section just before the slider, and change it from there

01:18:922 (3) - Please add a circle after 01:17:831 (2) - to not make such a large gap between notes


HARD

00:06:922 (1) - No need for NC, if same combo, then it could be more of a challenge for hard difficulty because it is camouflaged stack

00:44:195 (5) - The slider should be curved more to the right, but keep the coordinates the same



Add a circle note between 00:59:286 (4) - & 00:59:649 (1) -

The note will then become 00:59:468 (5) - if you choose to follow this mod

Perhaps finish the difficulty with a short slider, that ends at 01:30:195?

GOOD LUCK~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi again~ Hi :3

General: Really good map, but rainbow difficulty need some more improvement ^^

HARD

00:06:922 (1) - No need for NC, if same combo, then it could be more of a challenge for hard difficulty because it is camouflaged stack

00:44:195 (5) - The slider should be curved more to the right, but keep the coordinates the same



Add a circle note between 00:59:286 (4) - & 00:59:649 (1) - Hmm, I dont think it's neccessary to put one here :3

The note will then become 00:59:468 (5) - if you choose to follow this mod ^

Perhaps finish the difficulty with a short slider, that ends at 01:30:195? Put a spinner instead :3
fixed the rest ^^
GOOD LUCK~
Thanks for your Mod :3 I'll mod your ASAP
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi m4m from your queue/pm

[yanlu's Easy]

00:13:104 (1) - make i like this maybe? more interesting
img
00:18:922 (1) - whistle on head maybe?
00:21:831 (1) - finish?
00:26:195 (3) - well. move to 196|284 is more blanket. if you follow this dont forget to stack the next note with this.
00:36:740 (2) - move tail to 344|176
00:53:831 (1) - add finish?
01:17:104 (1) - add finish on head and arrow
01:18:922 (2) - add finish on tail
01:19:649 (1,2,3) - try this
img
http://puu.sh/2Xkgv.jpg
01:22:195 (4) - I think this pattern is better
img

[Rainbow's Normal]

00:08:377 - what about change it to and make it to this
img
00:13:104 (1) - end at 00:13:831 sounds better or make like
00:16:740 (2) - what happen with spacing here? 0.0 I think its confuse
00:21:831 (4) - finish on head?
00:32:558 (3) - I dont know is this on your purpose but move up 1 grid is better for me
00:34:922 - try this, sounds much better for me also add finish on 00:34:922 (3) head and 00:36:377 (4)
00:38:195 - try
00:40:377 (3) - end at 00:40:740
00:41:104 - this sounds better or
00:53:468 (3) - I think this slider shape looks ugly :/
00:56:740 (3) - move to 296|244 for blanket
01:18:558 / 01:18:922 - add note both
01:20:013 (2) - add finish

[Hard]

00:08:195 (3,4,5) - try this. looks much better for me
img/code

52,120,8195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,8377,2,0,P|108:36|144:40,1,65
124,108,8740,2,0,P|136:167|191:218,2,130
00:09:831 (1,2,3) - make it more blanket like
img
00:30:558 (1) - make it perfect stack
00:34:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:36:377 (1) - add finish
00:43:649 (4) - move to 192|204
00:49:468 (4) - move to 136|96
00:50:922 (1) - move to 188|72 then 00:51:649 - copy from 00:50:922 and ctrl+j ctrl+g and remove nc. done looks much better
00:58:195 (2) - better for me
img
01:18:558 (3,4) - look weird. move both to 384|114
01:26:558 - I have the nice one for you
code/img
256,68,85104,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,85468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,85831,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86558,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,87286,2,0,P|120:271|67:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,88013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,88377,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:03:649 - add note :/ smoothly to play if you dont want to spam the note so try this example:
img

00:06:558 - ^
00:09:468 - ^
00:18:377 - put note instead (normal note) and add finish also
00:29:468 - try this rhythm. sounds better and easier to play
00:30:195 (4) - what about make green line with 40% volume here and add finish. also make volume 60% and add finish at 00:30:558
00:33:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:34:922 (1) - add finish or add it instead
00:36:013 (3) - add finish on tail
00:36:740 (4) - ^
00:38:558 (9) - add finish on head
00:39:286 (10) - add finish
00:41:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:42:195 (6) - add finish
00:42:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:47:649 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:922 (1,2) - add both finish on head instead 00:52:377 (3) - add finish instead
00:59:286 (3) - add finish
01:04:558 (5) - ^
01:04:740 (6) - add finish on tail (01:05:104)
01:05:468 (1) - add finish on head
01:11:286 (3) - ^
01:13:649 - add note
01:14:195 (3) - remove clap add finish on head
01:14:740 (5) - ^
01:15:468 (7) - add finish
01:17:104 (1) - add finish on head
01:17:831 (3) - ^
01:19:286 (1) - add finish
01:20:013 (2) - add finish on arrow
01:21:286 (3) - add finish on tail

GOOD LUCK :D
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
@hoLysoup :fixed the nc. the long spin is fine~
@Tsusuko :useful hitsound mod,all fix your said :3
@Restrict : okay i fixed the slider reverse arrow flow~
@[ Sana ] :I can't understand your mod.sry nothind change.
@Satellite-san~ :all fixed! pro mod! :3
@ritsu-tanaika :sorry didn't change in ur mod..
@P A N :fixed some finish and blanket~

Thank you all for modding~ :oops:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Grow Slowly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52922
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:Ending yanlu Sun Rainbow a certain scientific railgun to aru kagaku no railgun とある科学の超電磁砲 s
BeatmapID:251497
BeatmapSetID:91504

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S ED.avi"
0,0,"rsz_to_aru_kagaku_no_railgun_1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1468.00525445979,363.636363636364,4,1,0,40,1,0
9831,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
12740,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
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85831,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
87286,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
88013,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 0,128,255
Combo5 : 128,0,255

[HitObjects]
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92,220,29468,2,0,L|64:124,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,30558,6,0,B|56:340|56:340|156:356,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,31649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,32013,2,0,P|308:236|348:264,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,33104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,33468,6,0,B|200:68|160:128|176:180|176:180|124:192,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,192,34558,2,0,B|52:228|72:252|100:264|100:264|104:276,1,100
208,328,35468,2,0,B|228:300|212:256|212:256|256:244|268:212,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,172,36377,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,128,36740,2,0,P|312:136|344:176,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,208,37831,2,0,B|285:261|346:254|346:254|404:244|429:293,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,38922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,39286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,284,39649,2,0,P|188:244|184:192,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,244,40740,2,0,P|268:180|360:204,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,41831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,188,42195,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,116,42558,2,0,P|368:84|320:76,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,43649,2,0,P|334:225|252:178,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,44740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,45104,6,0,P|176:244|244:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,82,46922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,71,47286,2,0,B|256:60|256:60|304:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,48013,6,0,P|336:244|268:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,49831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,50195,2,0,P|164:196|176:244,2,100,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,51649,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,52377,1,4,0:0:0:0:
24,92,53831,6,0,L|24:192|72:280,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,55286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,55649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,56013,2,0,B|104:172|104:172|104:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,56740,6,0,L|256:44|344:92,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,24,58195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,58558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,58922,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|340:168|304:176,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,59649,6,0,P|396:268|464:336,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,61104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,61468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,220,61831,2,0,P|184:188|132:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,220,62558,6,0,P|132:288|232:300,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,144,64740,2,0,L|304:144,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,65468,6,0,P|396:112|328:44,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,66922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,67286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,67649,2,0,P|152:236|196:260,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,68377,6,0,P|252:324|148:328,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,208,69831,2,0,B|34:165|8:180|24:140|8:116,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,70922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,156,71286,6,0,P|292:192|292:288,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72740,2,0,P|134:286|134:190,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,73831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,74195,6,0,P|300:128|328:112,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,75104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,75468,2,0,P|504:240|440:340,1,250,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,77104,6,0,P|260:180|196:252,2,200,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,287,78922,2,0,P|372:291|408:263,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,79649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,80013,6,0,P|506:238|480:144,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,81104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,108,81468,2,0,P|294:194|320:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82922,12,0,88013,0:0:0:0:

>xChippy : you may forgot to fix normal's "AudioLeadIn" to 2000 o.o?
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
[Hard]

00:08:195 (3,4,5) - try this. looks much better for me
img/code

52,120,8195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,8377,2,0,P|108:36|144:40,1,65
124,108,8740,2,0,P|136:167|191:218,2,130
00:09:831 (1,2,3) - make it more blanket like
img
00:30:558 (1) - make it perfect stack
00:34:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:36:377 (1) - add finish
00:43:649 (4) - move to 192|204
00:49:468 (4) - move to 136|96
00:50:922 (1) - move to 188|72 then 00:51:649 - copy from 00:50:922 and ctrl+j ctrl+g and remove nc. done looks much better
00:58:195 (2) - better for me
img
01:18:558 (3,4) - look weird. move both to 384|114
01:26:558 - I have the nice one for you
code/img
256,68,85104,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,85468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,85831,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86558,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,87286,2,0,P|120:271|67:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,88013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,88377,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:03:649 - add note :/ smoothly to play if you dont want to spam the note so try this example: I'm following the instrument :/ but if more people complain I'll change~ :3
img

00:06:558 - ^
00:09:468 - ^
00:18:377 - put note instead (normal note) and add finish also
00:29:468 - try this rhythm. sounds better and easier to play
00:30:195 (4) - what about make green line with 40% volume here and add finish. also make volume 60% and add finish at 00:30:558
00:33:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:34:922 (1) - add finish or add it instead
00:36:013 (3) - add finish on tail
00:36:740 (4) - ^
00:38:558 (9) - add finish on head
00:39:286 (10) - add finish
00:41:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:42:195 (6) - add finish
00:42:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:47:649 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:922 (1,2) - add both finish on head instead 00:52:377 (3) - add finish instead
00:59:286 (3) - add finish
01:04:558 (5) - ^
01:04:740 (6) - add finish on tail (01:05:104)
01:05:468 (1) - add finish on head
01:11:286 (3) - ^
01:13:649 - add note
01:14:195 (3) - remove clap add finish on head
01:14:740 (5) - ^
01:15:468 (7) - add finish
01:17:104 (1) - add finish on head
01:17:831 (3) - ^
01:19:286 (1) - add finish
01:20:013 (2) - add finish on arrow
01:21:286 (3) - add finish on tail
Fixed the rest ^^ Thanks for your mod ~! I'll mod yours ASAP
@yanlu Oops forgot to change ><
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Rhythm
00:18:195(3) using slider sounds better to follow the music
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:13:104(1) add finish at head
00:24:740(1)^
00:42:195(1)^
00:34:558(2) add finish at end
[Normal]
Placement
00:42:195(1) useless NC I guess
Rhythm
00:22:740 unnecessary green line
and more
00:35:649(2) it sounds weird since you can't catch the music properly. maybe like this
SPOILER
00:40:377(4) extend at 00:40:740 to follow the music
Hit Sonud
00:53:468(3) add finish at end
01:05:468(1) add finish at head
[Hard]
Placement
00:26:922(3) change the direction of the slider like this, it would be more nice flow
SPOILER
01:11:286(5) NC here
Rhythm
00:16:013 unnecessary green line
and more
00:18:377(5) extend at 00:18:740 to follow the music
00:59:468 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
00:48:013(2) add finish at head
00:53:831(1)^
01:05:468(1)^
[Insane]
AR8 looks fine
Placement
00:30:195(1) useless NC I suppose
00:36:740(4) NC here
00:37:831(6) Ctrl+G
Rhythm
00:18:377 unnecessary green line
and more
00:03:649 I'll expect a note here because of the drum sound
00:34:013(6) to follow the vocal, maybe it would be better
SPOILER

01:10:558(5) stream better since the back drum sounds so.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:43:286(2) delete finish at end

needs more work I suppose. good luck and star
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Hard]
Placement
00:26:922(3) change the direction of the slider like this, it would be more nice flow
SPOILER
01:11:286(5) NC here
Rhythm
00:16:013 unnecessary green line
and more
00:18:377(5) extend at 00:18:740 to follow the music
00:59:468 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
00:48:013(2) add finish at head
00:53:831(1)^
01:05:468(1)^
[Insane]
AR8 looks fine
Placement
00:30:195(1) useless NC I suppose
00:36:740(4) NC here
00:37:831(6) Ctrl+G
Rhythm
00:18:377 unnecessary green line
and more
00:03:649 I'll expect a note here because of the drum sound
00:34:013(6) to follow the vocal, maybe it would be better
SPOILER

01:10:558(5) stream better since the back drum sounds so.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:43:286(2) delete finish at end

needs more work I suppose. good luck and star
Fixed all :3 Modding yours ASAP
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS
hi~ /

[ReySHeL's Oni]
  1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
    00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう…
    その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
  2. 00:06:649 - add d
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K
  4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
  5. 00:30:468 - add d
  6. 00:36:286 - ^
  7. 00:45:649 - ^
  8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
  9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
  10. 01:03:286 - add k

[ReySHeL's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ?
  2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ?
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。
  4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ?
  5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^
  6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。
  7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
    00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で…
  8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて
  9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動
  10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ?
  11. 00:59:831 (2) - del
  12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^
叩きやすい良い譜面ですが、もう少し難易度の差別化をしても良い気がしました。
good luck!! 8-)
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL

TKSalt wrote:

hi~ /

[ReySHeL's Oni]
  1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
    00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう… nice! kを追加するところをdにしてfixed :)
    その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
  2. 00:06:649 - add d
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K ok
  4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
  5. 00:30:468 - add d
  6. 00:36:286 - ^
  7. 00:45:649 - ^ ok
  8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
  9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
  10. 01:03:286 - add k ok
一部のbig noteとadd noteについては保留で


[ReySHeL's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ? ok
  2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ? no
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。 ok
  4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ? ボーカルをフォローしているため
  5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^ 繋がりがほしいです
  6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。 保留で
  7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
    00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で… 盛り上がりがほしいので
  8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて 保留で
  9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動 d追加しました
  10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ? 保留で
  11. 00:59:831 (2) - del 音ほしいです
  12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^ ^
叩きやすい良い譜面ですが、もう少し難易度の差別化をしても良い気がしました。
good luck!! 8-)
良い指摘ありがとうございます！
変更するかすごい迷うところばかりでした。
とても参考になりました :)
thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/30ujZ.zip
S e e U
32 posts
Joined April 2013
S e e U
[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound :D
[Nomal]
00:08:740 (2,3) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781257
00:16:013 (1) - ^
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

S e e U wrote:

[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound :D
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272
All fix thanks for your mod :3
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music.
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3.

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3)
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier.
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end?
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early.

Normal:
00:21:831 (4) - Could you make this a bit more symmetric with (3)? Right now it looks really wrong D:
00:53:468 (3) - ew um like. Make this more appealing :3. Right now the second tick is WAY too high so it looks hunchbacked.
01:11:286 (1) - Make this tilde slider's curves larger.
01:21:104 (3) - I'd suggest not trying to use a tilde slider going up because it usually never looks good ;A;
01:23:649 (2) - Same as other tilde sliders like I can't tell what this is supposed to be

Easy:
00:23:286 (3) - Remove the clap like it's so unfitting ;a:

Cool stuff going on. Whee.
Aunxfb
205 posts
Joined September 2011
Aunxfb
Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[yanlu's Easy]
00:07:286 (1,2,3) - how about make it into: http://puu.sh/33AEx/721d52b542.png ? (rotating them 18 degree clockwise seems to almost do the job)

hitsounds
00:24:377 (4) - drum whistle? or a suitable custom hitsound
00:24:740 (1) - remove clap
00:25:831 (2) - add clap
00:26:195 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:27:286 (4) - add clap
00:27:649 (1) - remove clap
00:28:740 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:29:468 (3) - remove clap on second circle, add clap to first and last circle
00:30:558 (1) - remove clap
00:31:649 (2) - add clap
00:32:013 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:33:104 (4) - add clap
00:33:468 (1) - remove clap
00:34:558 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:39:286 (1) - add finish
00:42:195 (1) - ^
00:48:013 (1) - remove clap
00:49:831 (2) - add clap
00:50:195 (3) - remove clap on first circle, add clap to second circle
00:53:831 (1) - remove clap
00:55:649 (3) - add clap
00:56:013 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:56:740 (1) - remove clap
00:58:558 (3) - add clap
00:58:922 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:59:649 (1) - remove clap
01:01:468 (3) - add clap
01:01:831 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:04:740 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:05:468 (1) - remove clap
01:07:286 (3) - add clap
01:07:649 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:08:377 (1) - remove clap
01:09:831 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:11:286 (1) - remove clap
01:12:377 (2) - add clap
01:12:740 (3) - remove clap
01:13:831 (4) - add clap
Note:There's quite some 'claps' being 'in' the sliders, use custom slidertick perhaps?

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:09:468 (3) - add clap to first circle maybe?
00:18:922 (1) - add clap to last circle
00:21:104 (3) - add clap to first circle
00:22:558 (1) - add clap to first circle
00:42:195 (1) - remove NC?
01:09:649 (1) - how about splitting this into one circle and a 1/2 beat slider with 1 repeat?
01:28:740 (3) - add finish?
00:24:377 (1) -remove NC?


Note: Copy-pasted from above :P:
hitsounds
00:24:377 (4) - drum whistle? or a suitable custom hitsound
00:24:740 (1) - remove clap
00:25:831 (2) - add clap
00:26:195 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:27:286 (4) - add clap
00:27:649 (1) - remove clap
00:28:740 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:29:468 (3) - remove clap on second circle, add clap to first and last circle
00:30:558 (1) - remove clap
00:31:649 (2) - add clap
00:32:013 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:33:104 (4) - add clap
00:33:468 (1) - remove clap
00:34:558 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:39:286 (1) - add finish
00:42:195 (1) - ^
00:48:013 (1) - remove clap
00:49:831 (2) - add clap
00:50:195 (3) - remove clap on first circle, add clap to second circle
00:53:831 (1) - remove clap
00:55:649 (3) - add clap
00:56:013 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:56:740 (1) - remove clap
00:58:558 (3) - add clap
00:58:922 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:59:649 (1) - remove clap
01:01:468 (3) - add clap
01:01:831 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:04:740 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:05:468 (1) - remove clap
01:07:286 (3) - add clap
01:07:649 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:08:377 (1) - remove clap
01:09:831 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:11:286 (1) - remove clap
01:12:377 (2) - add clap
01:12:740 (3) - remove clap
01:13:831 (4) - add clap
^The postions of claps shold be the same

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196)
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286)

[Insane]
Nothing spotted :D


[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map. :)
Good luck for rank :)
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

CDFA wrote:

LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music. fixed I put in whistles instead
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown? well since I dont like the look of a ridiculous long slider >< I'll change if more people suggest ^^
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3. fixed

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3) Changed into something else :3
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo fixed

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier. fixed
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end? fixed
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early. fixed

Cool stuff going on. Whee.
Hehe thanks for your mod :3 !

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196) fixed
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286) fixed
fixed the hitsound at the previous mod already =w= Did put in your finishes :3
[Insane]
Nothing spotted :D
Glad to hear :3

[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map. :)
Good luck for rank :)
Thanks for your mod! :3
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Hi, recheck time

[Easy]
No problems, nice map ^^

[Normal]
00:32:558 (3) - Why not aligned ? It's at y:156 and the previous and next note are at y:152

[Hard & Insane]
Nothing to say, it's very good ^^

[Muzu]
00:19:286 (2,3,1) - A kdk would be better

That's not that much, it's well mapped and well modded, good job :)

Good luck for rank ^^
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
hi, M4M IRC mod,
chatlog
16:16 Oyatsu: hi chippy-chan ><
16:16 Oyatsu: sorry I forgot your map because my map bubbled but it is wrong bubble pop and need bubble again
16:16 Oyatsu: so
16:16 xChippy: Hihi Oyatsu chan :3
16:16 Oyatsu: Are you free?
16:17 Oyatsu: IRC now
16:17 xChippy: ok :3
16:17 Oyatsu: ^^
16:17 xChippy: Did you update my map ? :3
16:17 Oyatsu: I'm, updating
16:18 Oyatsu: ok
16:18 Oyatsu: Hard, go
16:18 xChippy: ok :3
16:19 Oyatsu: 00:13:104 (2) - 
16:19 Oyatsu: i think add finish better
16:19 xChippy: Fixed :3
16:20 Oyatsu: 00:26:740 (2) - Move to 132/280 to balance
16:21 Oyatsu: 00:26:922 (3,4,5) - Distance problem
16:22 xChippy: fixed
16:22 Oyatsu: 00:31:468 (3) -  I think remove repeat to better about vocal
16:23 xChippy: I'll keep it like this for now ><
16:25 Oyatsu: ah
16:25 Oyatsu: ok
16:26 Oyatsu: 00:49:104 (5) - ugly pattem
16:27 xChippy: fixed
16:27 xChippy: Copyed (3) and ctrl H
16:28 Oyatsu: 01:09:649 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/36wMQ
16:30 xChippy: Im sure the Ki-mi-no is red white red o_O
16:31 Oyatsu: Why don't you add sliderslide?
16:32 Oyatsu: 01:28:377 (5) - Add whistle
16:32 Oyatsu: at end
16:32 xChippy: fixed
16:34 Oyatsu: 01:21:468 (1) - ^
16:34 xChippy: fixed
16:35 Oyatsu: 00:24:377 (1) - I think should add clap?
16:36 xChippy: fix
16:36 Oyatsu: 01:04:013 - Add finish?
16:37 Oyatsu: 01:17:104 - ^
16:37 xChippy:  fixed
16:37 Oyatsu: 01:15:468 (1) - Add clap better
16:38 Oyatsu: 01:28:377 - Add whistle, Rthym is best
16:38 xChippy: I'll consider clap, fixed the whistle
16:38 Oyatsu: ok
16:39 Oyatsu: 00:18:195 (5) - Add whistle before finish, Great!
16:40 xChippy: fixed
16:40 Oyatsu: 00:28:740 (6) - 
16:40 Oyatsu: I think you should creat a slider start at 00:28:740 - 
16:40 Oyatsu: end at 00:28:922 - 
16:41 Oyatsu: ( make as vocal)
16:44 xChippy: fixed
16:45 Oyatsu: oh , i must go out. i will come back soon
16:45 Oyatsu: about 5 ms
16:45 xChippy: ok
16:48 Oyatsu: ok
16:48 Oyatsu: i comeback
16:48 xChippy: ok :3
16:48 Oyatsu: Isane-plz
16:48 xChippy:  :3
16:49 Oyatsu:  00:13:104 (3) - Finish
16:49 Oyatsu: 00:23:286 (1) - clap
16:49 xChippy: fixed
16:51 Oyatsu: 00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is a pattem
16:51 Oyatsu: but why (9) is out?
16:51 Oyatsu: Move (9) to (4)
16:51 Oyatsu: overlap good pattem
16:51 xChippy:  fixed :3
16:52 Oyatsu: 00:52:922 (1,2) - Add whistle complete
16:52 Oyatsu: let hear hitsound
16:52 Oyatsu: Great!!
16:52 xChippy: All whistle O_O?
16:53 Oyatsu: yes
16:53 Oyatsu: circle and slider
16:53 Oyatsu: all
16:53 Oyatsu: let hear hitsound
16:53 xChippy: hmm okay :3
16:54 Oyatsu: I think should NC:01:15:468 (1) - 
16:54 xChippy: fixed
16:54 Oyatsu: 01:15:649 (1) - Whistle
16:55 Oyatsu: 01:26:922 (2) - ^
16:55 xChippy: fixed
16:56 Oyatsu: 00:15:286 (3) - 240/224 to balance with (2)
16:56 Oyatsu: 204/224*
16:57 xChippy:  fixed
16:57 Oyatsu: 00:16:740 (3) - Ctrl+G will better
16:58 Oyatsu: 00:21:831 - Add finish
16:58 xChippy: Uuhm I'll consider ><
16:58 Oyatsu: ok
16:58 xChippy: fixed
16:59 Oyatsu: 00:29:468 - Why NC?
16:59 Oyatsu: 00:49:286 (2) - 124/144 to balance (3)
17:01 xChippy: The NC cuz other modders said it ><
17:01 xChippy: fixed the (2)
17:01 Oyatsu: ok
17:01 Oyatsu: --------------------Finish---------
17:01 Oyatsu: This is a good map
17:01 Oyatsu: Good ranked!!!
17:02 Oyatsu: ^^
17:02 xChippy: Hehe thanks :3
Good luck!!!
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.


[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.

[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.


[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -

Thats all and good luck
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Weez wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.
Okay :3

[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here. fixed
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

Up to yanlu :3

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.
fixed
[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.
all fix

[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -
all fix
Thats all and good luck
Thanks for your mod!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
  2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?
>yanlu's Easy
  1. 00:16:013 (1) - The pattern here would look neater if you make the slider look like this.
  2. 00:26:195 (3) - Move the red node to (148,240) so that the blanket-ish pattern of 00:25:831 (2,3) would look better?
  3. 00:30:558 - Finish? There's a heavy sound here.
  4. 00:51:649 (1) - ^
  5. 00:59:286 - Add whistle here...
  6. 00:59:649 - ...and finish here to emphasize the vocal?
  7. 01:05:104 - 01:05:468 - Same as the two suggestions above.
  8. 01:10:922 (3) - I don't think the clap is necessary here. Remove?
  9. 01:11:286 - Finish?
  10. 01:14:740 - ^
  11. 01:15:104 (2) - ^
  12. 01:15:468 - ^
  13. 01:22:195 - Add clap here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?
>Rainbow's Normal
  1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
  2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
  3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
  4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
  5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
  6. 00:29:468 - ^
  7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
  8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
  9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
  11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
  12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
  13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
  14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
  15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?
>Hard
  1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
  2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
  3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
  5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
  6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
  7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
  8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
  9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.
>Insane
  1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
  2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
  3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
  4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
  5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
  6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
  7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^
k that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
all fixed!!

thank you for modding >v</
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440,188,42195,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,116,42558,2,0,P|368:84|320:76,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,43649,2,0,P|334:225|252:178,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,44740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,45104,6,0,P|176:244|244:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,82,46922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,71,47286,2,0,B|256:60|256:60|304:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,48013,6,0,P|336:244|268:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,49831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,50195,2,0,P|164:196|176:244,2,100,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,51649,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,228,52377,1,4,0:0:0:0:
24,92,53831,6,0,L|24:192|72:280,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,55286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,55649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,56013,2,0,B|104:172|104:172|104:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,56740,6,0,L|256:44|344:92,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,24,58195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,58558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,58922,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|336:168|300:176,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,59649,6,0,P|396:268|464:336,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,61104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,61468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,220,61831,2,0,P|184:188|132:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,220,62558,6,0,P|132:288|232:300,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,144,64740,2,0,L|304:144,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,65468,6,0,P|396:112|328:44,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,66922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,67286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,67649,2,0,P|152:236|196:260,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,68377,6,0,P|252:324|148:328,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,208,69831,2,0,B|40:176|4:176|28:148|8:116,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,70922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,156,71286,6,0,P|292:192|292:288,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72740,2,0,P|134:286|134:190,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,73831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,74195,6,0,P|300:128|328:112,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,75104,1,4,0:0:0:0:
468,120,75468,2,0,P|504:240|440:340,1,250,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,77104,6,0,P|260:180|196:252,2,200,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,287,78922,2,0,P|372:291|408:263,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,79649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,80013,6,0,P|506:238|480:144,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,81104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,108,81468,2,0,P|294:194|320:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82922,12,0,88013,0:0:0:0:
xChippy
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xChippy

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
  2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?
it's the same BG but took a bigger one and resized it :3

>Rainbow's Normal
  1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
  2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
  3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
  4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
  5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
  6. 00:29:468 - ^
  7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
  8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
  9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
  11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
  12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
  13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
  14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
  15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?
>Hard
  1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
  2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
  3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
  5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
  6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
  7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
  8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
  9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.
>Insane
  1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
  2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
  3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
  4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
  5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
  6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
  7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^
k that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
fixed all =w=
Thanks for your mod!!~
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xChippy
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Updated~ =w=
Kinomi
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Kinomi
Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

general
a sliderslide ?

easy
00:41:377(3) um...imo its not pretty..and there are some same parts to this

01:11:468(1,2,3,4) avoid stack in easiest diff

01:19:649(3,1)^

01:23:492 spinner start at 01:24:740 end at 01:30:195 ,and add objects from 01:22:922 to 01:24:377

01:01:558(3,1)not good

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good

00:22:558

00:41:377(5) strange shape...

01:15:949(1)^

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558

01:28:013

hard

01:21:286(5)remove

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g

good luck!
xChippy
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xChippy

baldrace wrote:

Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good What is not good here?

00:22:558 I guess rainbow wanted to catch the piano so no change

00:41:377(5) strange shape... I'll leave this up to Rainbow

01:15:949(1)^ fixed this one put a spinner instead

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558 fixed

01:28:013 We'll consider

hard

01:21:286(5)remove This note indicates that a spinner is coming

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g fixed
good luck!
Thanks for your mod!~ :3
Kinomi
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Kinomi
the note or slider cover the arrowhead maybe it is not so good 0.0

about sliderslide 0.0,I think sliders' hitsound is noisy,especially at the end of the song,so a custom sliderslide is necessary imo.;w;
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BoWAct
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BoWAct
hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Easy]
01:20:013 (1,2,3) - Symmetrically slider
example

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle?
example

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!
xChippy
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xChippy

BoWAct wrote:

hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching fixed


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle? I'll consider, for now I'll use mine
example

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!
Thanks for your mod :3
Darksonic
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Darksonic
Hello, from my m4m queue.

yanlu's Easy:

01:05:468 (2,1): Why you increased spacing here?, this is not recommendable to do in an Easy diff, use 0,8x spacing like you did in the whole map.
01:09:831 (2): Shouldn't the middle tick be a red one instead white?, the slider seems ugly like this.

Rainbow's Normal:

00:02:922 (1,2,3,4): Something is wrong with this diamond pattern, you will notice it if you see spacing between 00:04:013 (4,1) which is 0,94x, and it should be 0,99x.
00:09:468 (3): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:18:922 (4,1): Is this spacing decrease intentional?, if it is I would recommend you to change it to the constant spacing. (1x)
00:26:558 (3,4): I know that you're following vocal with (4) but sounds like (3) is not following anything, you should change rhythm like this instead.
00:35:468 (3): CTRL+J will give this pattern a better flow.
00:43:649 (3): Bad overlap, it ruins the pattern a bit, this slider will look better in x:104 y:72 instead.
00:45:104 (5): NC should be here.
00:46:558 (1): And this NC is unnecessary, remove it.
00:59:649 (3): NC to keep consistency with 00:56:740 (1).
01:09:649 (1): This may be confusing for some players, I would recommend to remove a repeat and add a note in 01:10:195, fits better imo.
01:14:195 (4): Add NC?
01:19:286 (4): Again, this is not following anything, make it a 1/1 slider instead and will fit better.
01:23:649 (1,2): 1,99x spacing? lol are you kidding me?, I don't think this could be intentional, and if it is let me say that this is terrible for a Normal diff, use 1,0x spacing like you did in the whole diff please.
01:23:649 (2,3): Remove both Whistles from sliders, there aren't any music here, sounds bad.

Hard:

00:02:922 (5): I know you can improve this blanket.
00:17:195 (4): Remove this note, music doesn't sound like this could be necessary.
00:17:468 (6): Add NC?
00:18:922 (10,1): Little spacing issue?, use 1,1x instead.
00:25:831 (1): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:34:558 (1): Not well stacked with tail of the previous slider, move to x:415 y:268.

Insane:

00:06:377 (3,1,2): Seems really boring like you did, try to change rhythm like this.
00:16:740 (3): Try to move it to x:188 y:288 instead, it won't be a jump but the pattern seems really better like that. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:36:013 (3): Make this slider like this ?
00:40:377 (2,3): What's this?, you were using 1,4x spacing and suddenly increased to 2,6x.. just no, this seems really bad.
00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9): Same here, reduce spacing a bit.
00:58:558 (1): Unnecesary NC, remove it.
01:22:922 (5): NC should be here, and not in the next note.

I couldn't mod this diff very well because it doesn't look good for me, it has many things that can be improved, you have many weird patterns/spacing uses and stuff, and 1,4x spacing as the constant one is too much imo.

That's all for me, mapset still needs more work.

Good luck!
mingmichael
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Joined May 2012
mingmichael
hello xChippy :) here the taiko mods that you requested to me
almost perfect! @-@ i almost can't find any misses there @A@
but, here my suggestion >,<//

[Muzu]
  1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd
  2. 00:43:286 (2) - k?
  3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound
[Oni]
  1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k? :D
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