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akira - Mimpi pelik

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HeatKai
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HeatKai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 01, 2013 at 12:12:34 AM

Artist: akira
Title: Mimpi pelik
Tags: nichijou my ordinary life Zzz Sasaki Sayaka parody Malaydub bahasa melayu mintong89
BPM: 154.01
Filesize: 3819kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. mint's Biasa (4.23 stars, 148 notes)
  2. Senang (1.89 stars, 69 notes)
  3. Susah (5 stars, 266 notes)
Download: akira - Mimpi pelik
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Basuh Kaki Sebelum Tidur
Last edited by HeatKai , edited 11 times in total.
mintong89
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Joined July 2011
mintong89
why not HeatKai sing
HeatKai
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Topic Starter
HeatKai
I won't map my own voice hahaha you map it if you want hah
Leminine
242 posts
Joined August 2012
Leminine
finish liao bo
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello Kai! Modding as requested

Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested to be considered.
Others are normal suggestions.

[General]
  1. Mp3's bit rate is 256kps. Please have it adjusted to 192kbps.
  2. SB element 1.jpg's size is 1024x768 pixels which is larger than the maximum size for SB which is 800x600. Please resize.
  3. Thumbs.db is an unused file inside the SB folder, please delete.
  4. No kiai. okayface.

[Senang]
  1. 00:00:511 (1) - Use whistle on end instead, clap sounds unfitting for being loud.
  2. 00:02:069 (2) - ^
  3. 00:03:627 (3) - ^
  4. 00:14:536 (6,7) - Use this instead. If you do, add whistle on slider (6)'s end to emphasize the "ting" sound.
  5. 00:28:171 (5) - I think a circle would be nice here.
  6. 00:51:937 (6) - same as 00:14:536 (6), use whistle on the end to emphasize the sound.
  7. 01:23:104 (1,2,3) - I think this is better.
  8. 01:26:221 (1) - Maybe add a whistle here.

[mint's Biasa]
  1. 00:15:705 (3) - remove clap and add whistle to emphasize the "ting" sound.
  2. 00:19:211 (1,2) - Maybe use this rhythm? If you do, don't forget to fix spacings.
  3. 00:21:548 - I think a circle would be nice here.
  4. 00:25:444 (1,2) - same as 00:19:211 (1,2).
  5. 00:27:782 (3) - remove clap and add whistle on end to emphasize the sound.
  6. 00:40:638 (4) - I can hear a sound on 00:40:444, so it would be nive if you turn this into a slider like 00:40:054 (3), starting from 00:40:444.
  7. 00:44:339 (2,4,5) - replace claps with whistle, claps are too loud for this parts imo.
  8. 00:52:716 (2) - remove clap on end.
  9. 00:55:832 (4) - turn this into a circle on 00:56:222. Add clap on this circle.
  10. 01:11:416 (3) - whistle instead of clap on end.
  11. 01:14:533 (6) - same as 00:55:832 (4), turn this into a circle on 01:14:922 and add a clap.
  12. 01:19:208 (3) - ^ circle on 01:19:597.
  13. 01:24:662 (1) - maybe add a whistle?

[Susah]
  1. 00:15:412 (4,5) - Add clap on (4), remove on (5). Sounds better imo.
  2. 00:21:938 (10) - This note is confusing and is not necessary imo. Maybe delete this?
  3. 00:35:963 (4) - stack on 00:35:184 (2). XD
  4. 00:37:327 (1) - better if you remove clap here.
  5. 00:37:911 (4) - I can hear a cymbal sound on this downbeat, add finish.
  6. 00:39:470 (3) - ^
  7. 00:41:028 (1) - ^
  8. 00:59:826 (1) - add clap, I can hear a clap on end.
  9. 01:26:221 (1) - same as other diffs, add whistle?

That's all. Good luck Kai. =v=
EDIT: I put 198kbps instead of 192, fixed now
HeatKai
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HeatKai
fix'd most of it, thanks!
mintong89
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mintong89
fix some thanks

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TitleUnicode:Mimpi pelik
Artist:akira
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Creator:HeatKai
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Tags:nichijou my ordinary life Zzz Sasaki Sayaka parody Malaydub bahasa melayu mintong89
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HeatKai
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HeatKai
updated! :D
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Hi HeatKai, random mod~ Yes I stalk your profile

[General]

-> The notes sound early when the song is about to end, maybe current BPM is too fast? (not sure though)
-> I still see the thumbs.db inside the \sb folder and in the main folder, maybe it's just me though o.o
-> Because you used this line:

 S,0,0,88118,1

it's better to set the black.jpg to 640x480 also though (same as white.png) to avoid unnecessary SB load~

[Susah]

-> I HIGHLY recommend Tick Rate 2 here, really (:

  1. 00:05:036 (6,1,1) - imo would be much better if you moved the pink (1) lower and made this symmetry here:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:568 (6,7,8) - Umm, because of (4,5)'s fan shape, I think it's better to do a manual-stacked stream like this instead of a horizontal moving stream as you're currently doing:
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  3. 00:08:932 (4) - Use drum sampleset (instead of soft) to amplify that 'drrrrrr' effect?
  4. 00:15:944 (8) - Whistle here? The synth's sound is similar with (7)
  5. 00:20:814 (6,7,8,9,10) - Hmm, the spacing change on (9,10) is very much unexpected, I think an accelerated spacing with (9,10) stacked would do good here - for example:
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  6. 00:21:593 (9) - or you can just new combo this one (:
  7. 00:27:827 (1,2) - I HIGHLY recommend to add whistle somewhere here (feel free to experiment though) - it'll fit your idea here very much~
  8. 00:29:385 (4,5,6,7,1) - Err, definitely can be made better for sure - also don't be afraid to space this one a bit actually:
    482,109,29385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    360,140,29580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    440,41,29775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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  9. 00:33:281 (1) - CTRL + G? This looks weird currently ._.
  10. 00:37:761 (3) - I much prefer having the clap here removed, it'll emphasize the next finish imo >_<
  11. 00:43:605 (8,9) - Rather than directly copy-pasting this I prefer to have (9) moved upward a bit though, so (8,9) will look like a wave:
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  12. 00:44:384 (1,2) - Again, this direct copy-paste is evil >_< - Add a slider in the middle for transition like this perhaps:
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  13. 00:51:787 (6,7,8) - Made these three encircle 00:50:813 (3) from the outside perhaps?
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  14. 00:56:657 (1) - Finish on slider's start?
  15. 00:59:871 (1) - Considering this is the hardest diff, I recommend to split this into few consecutive spinners which ends on each downbeat~
  16. 01:14:383 (4,4) - Umm, is it possible to rearrange the shape so that
  17. 01:16:721 (5) - This will be placed in the center? Looks fabulous before the spinner though, really :3 (also you can try NC'ing this one if you do so)
[mint's Biasa]

  1. 00:08:153 (3) - Umm, I prefer if you can make a greater curve here (to make it look more natural), up to you though:
    248,125,8153,2,0,P|333:137|418:97,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:13:023 (1,2) - Use two straight lines instead? Looks more solid somehow imo:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:16:724 (2) - Hmm, I prefer to curve this downward instead so it'll carry the flow from your previous (2), up to you again btw:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:18:282 (2) - If you do above suggestion, you can continue with something like this:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:26:269 (2) - Umm, it's much better imo to keep following the vocal here rather than simplifying the rhythm (move this slider 1/2 backward and then add note at 00:26:658 - plus the strong vocal comes on 00:26:463 actually)
  6. 00:28:606 (1,2) - Copy-paste (2)'s shape from (1) instead? Looks much more solid imo:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:33:087 (4) - Minor stuff, this should be on ~x:230 y:31 for a straight line with (3) though (or you can just delete this and made (3) repeating, that would do good also :3)
  8. 00:37:372 (2) - Finish here? (I can hear a cymbal sound from the background)
  9. 00:43:606 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion, try to make symmetry here perhaps, to give better impression before the spinner?
    236,52,43606,2,0,L|309:52,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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  10. 00:48:086 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier to follow the vocal? Plays better this way though...
  11. 00:56:657 (1,2,3,4) - Upon doing encircle like this you could use a 'test circle' which you can delete afterwards for a better circle pattern, for example :
    SPOILER
  12. 00:58:020 (4) - New Combo (for the pentagon pattern/vocals)?
  13. 00:59:968 (1) - Same as Susah diff (consider splitting this into several spinners, up to you though~)
  14. 01:06:786 (2) - Same as the first chorus, try moving this 1/2 backwards to follow the vocals more?
  15. 01:15:357 (1) - Just a suggestion, try to get this encircle (6)'s end? Rearranging the next (2) won't be too hard though o.o
  16. 01:18:474 (1,2,3) - Hmm, doing a center-based symmetry would be better here imo (just move (2) to ~x:256 y:343 for example and rearrange the next (3))
  17. 01:24:707 (1) - Add whistle here (as HeatKai did on Susah diff)?
[Senang]

-> Umm, I doesn't really feel right with the 1/1 delay between spinner(s) and the next note on this easiest diff ._.

  1. 00:07:179 (5) - Because this appeared before a spinner try to make a center-oriented symmetrical slider perhaps?
  2. 00:16:139 (7) - Put new combo here instead? (downbeat)
  3. 00:18:087 (3) - Minor stuff, this can be made to encircle (1) better:
    56,184,18087,2,0,P|131:233|196:199,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:22:373 (1,2) - Umm, why don't you just make (1) parallel with (3) here >_< - the rearrangement would be easy though:
    444,111,22373,6,0,L|485:182,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    410,275,23347,2,0,L|390:327,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:27:827 (4,5) - Err, the volume decrease doesn't work well in this diff imo (due to the few amount of objects ._.)
  6. 00:31:333 (3,4,5) - Umm, rather than straight sliders I prefer to use some variation here, for example:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:45:748 - You might want to drag the break's end here (1/4 earlier - on downbeat)
  8. 00:53:540 (1,2) - Perhaps try this, (2) should be encircled much better with this (1)'s shape:
    288,316,53540,6,0,B|208:272|208:272|181:282|126:281|95:238|97:197,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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  9. 01:04:448 - Same as 00:45:748, drag the break's end to the downbeat?
  10. 01:07:565 (3) - Hmm, I prefer adding finish here as well (although no cymbal sound heard) because the previous and next (1) has finish on it, without a finish here it sounds kinda weird imo o.o
  11. 01:20:811 (1) - Would be nice imo if you can add note here and start spinner 1/2 after (because of the long vocals)~
  12. 01:24:707 (2) - Move the endpoint to ~x:267 y:356 here? Rather than forcing the slider's end in the center, this will make the slider looks more symmetrical instead:
    SPOILER
  13. 01:26:266 (1) - Whistle here (as you used on Susah diff)?
One other thing that comes to my mind is the last spinner's volume, try to add a gradual volume decrease there (decrescendo) there or simply make the spinner's end quieter maybe?

Good luck with this mapset :3
HeatKai
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HeatKai
updated for now :3 thanks Niva! all fixed!
don't stalk me Niva >w< hahaha
mintong89
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mintong89
almost fix thanks o.o

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Tags:nichijou my ordinary life Zzz Sasaki Sayaka parody Malaydub bahasa melayu mintong89
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updated!
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oh no its happen

why not your voice kai / bakaong89 ? D:

i think the title must be Mimpi Pelik
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nah :P I talked to the creator. XD thanks for the star! :3
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remove audio

mod done, kds plz
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Mystyk wrote:

remove audio

mod done, kds plz
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