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PSY - Oppan GentleMan (Speed Ver.)

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GugUCorn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 5월 16일 목요일 at 오후 7:48:27

Artist: PSY
Title: Oppan GentleMan (Speed Ver.)
Tags: MineC24 kpop
BPM: 144.6
Filesize: 3264kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. 24's Normal (3.39 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Easy (2.04 stars, 178 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 530 notes)
Download: PSY - Oppan GentleMan (Speed Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OPPAN GentleMan!
Enjoy~

GangNam Style + GentleMan Mix...and...more fast!!!
Insane - Done!
24's Normal - Done!
KoranPenguin's Hard - waiting GD!
Easy - Done!
[MOD History]
2013-05-07 : AnreFM mod
2013-05-08 : reigouan mod
2013-05-15 : Arrival mod
- Naoto -
...LOL. Nice Song xD.
Foreverends
...LOL. Nice Map xD.
AnreFM
Hello, I'll try to mod this map :)
These are just suggestion though, feel free to object :D

  • General
  1. Add kpop to tags
  2. Well, the mapset is already good, no wrong timing, and I like how you adjust hitsound and the volume :)
  • Esay
  1. 00:19:704 (5) - the NC should be here instead of the slider after it
  2. 00:35:471 (4) - NC, divide the combos here
  3. 00:49:994 (1) - I think it is more fit to add +1 repeat on this slider
  4. 01:31:488 (6) - NC
  5. 01:44:765 (1) - same as above, +1 more repeat on this slider
  6. 01:51:404 (5) - NC
  7. 02:06:758 (4) - NC should be here instead of the (1) slider after it, the vocal start here
  8. 02:16:301 (5) - NC here, divide the combos
  9. 02:35:803 - Add note here? Blankness maybe confusing for beginners
  10. overall, it's already good, just some too long combos for easy diff. that need to be divided :D
  • Insane
  1. 00:30:907 (5) - NC
  2. 01:12:193 (4) - NC too, different vocals and beats
  3. 01:31:903 (2) - I think the NC should be here instead of the slider before it, except it was intentional of you imo
    01:21:944 (2) - same as above
Well, I guess that's all I can find, hope it helps :)
Sorry if it doesn't though :o
Anyway, good luuck :)
reigouan
M4M. Here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/130310

[General]
You add that much Kiai times to get the fancy star burst? Well it's not that nice for old machines, and I think it's too much. Make some warnings in your description for people who wants to play this map.

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:160 - I'd halve the length of this slider, to make it end here 00:10:990 - at a strong beat
  2. 00:11:820 - Then make a new upward slider here, as the beat goes up.
  3. 00:54:558 - This one looks better at x:92 y:132
  4. 01:02:650 - This short slider may confuse beginners. I'd make it longer and let it finishes the line "Ah-Ah-I'm a", then remove the next one, and place a new circle afterward.
  5. 01:19:455 - Is this supposed to be a "check" shape? The second point of this slider should be at x:288 y:96, to make a straight line.
  6. 02:09:662 - I like the "mirror" sliders like these. Please make more. Most of sliders in this map were placed, like, randomly, well, they don't look nice for me.
  7. 02:32:899 - Like these 3 sliders, for example.
  8. 02:39:538 - But this one is nice.
  9. 02:43:687 - I'd like the "3" circle to be at x:208 y:280
  10. Oh and why not make a countdown, at least for the beginner :)
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:841 - This jump is HUGE!
  2. Even for Insane, breaktime is too short here.
  3. Try make some more interesting shape. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
  4. I'm not good at modding Insane, but the timing is nice in general, I love zigzag circle jumps too. Please considering sliders' places to make them look nicer.
MineC24
죄송해요.. 전에 겟난 하나가 밀려서 이제서야 겟난 완성하네요...

노말 난이도 겟난입니다~

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Gentleman(Fast Ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 106852
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23023,37142,53314,59953,74890,81529,88168
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Oppan GentleMan (Speed Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Oppan GentleMan (Speed Ver.)
Artist:PSY
ArtistUnicode:PSY
Creator:[Pisces]
Version:24's Normal
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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2,121563,126682
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2,160982,164857
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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128,172,121363,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,220,128002,6,0,P|416:188|424:136,2,90
308,128,129040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,164,129662,6,0,P|96:196|88:248,2,90
204,256,130699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,104,131322,6,0,L|388:84,2,90
180,92,132359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,132982,6,0,L|256:128,1,120
364,80,133811,2,0,B|356:120|356:120|372:164|372:164|364:204,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,134641,6,0,B|237:133|237:133|201:103|201:103|188:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,172,135471,2,0,B|105:145|105:145|59:136|59:136|34:115,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,136301,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,308,136716,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,288,137131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,196,137546,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137961,12,0,139206,0:0:0:0:
372,192,140036,6,0,P|372:280|360:268,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,141280,5,6,0:0:0:0:
140,268,141695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,164,142110,2,0,P|92:104|132:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,142940,6,0,L|316:204,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,92,143770,2,0,L|408:202,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,144600,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,280,145015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,316,145430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,212,145845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,140,146260,6,0,P|196:112|280:84,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,147089,2,0,L|324:252,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,147919,6,0,P|164:248|104:240,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,120,148749,2,0,P|160:101|197:53,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,104,149579,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,148,149994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,268,150409,2,0,L|300:312,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,151239,6,0,L|100:268,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,152068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,104,152483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,148,152899,6,0,P|340:176|324:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,212,153728,2,0,L|152:216,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,159538,6,0,B|104:128|104:128|176:176|172:76|172:76|240:144|328:72,1,360,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,264,166177,6,0,B|208:104|208:104|304:104|304:104|332:136|332:136|304:168|304:168|256:168,1,390

p.s : 이 겟난 넣으실때 모든 난이도의 tag 항목에 MineC24 넣어주세요~ :D
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!(Guest Diff)
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

AnreFM wrote:

Hello, I'll try to mod this map :)
These are just suggestion though, feel free to object :D

  • General
  1. Add kpop to tags
  2. Well, the mapset is already good, no wrong timing, and I like how you adjust hitsound and the volume :)
  • Esay
  1. 00:19:704 (5) - the NC should be here instead of the slider after it
  2. 00:35:471 (4) - NC, divide the combos here
  3. 00:49:994 (1) - I think it is more fit to add +1 repeat on this slider
  4. 01:31:488 (6) - NC
  5. 01:44:765 (1) - same as above, +1 more repeat on this slider
  6. 01:51:404 (5) - NC
  7. 02:06:758 (4) - NC should be here instead of the (1) slider after it, the vocal start here
  8. 02:16:301 (5) - NC here, divide the combos
  9. 02:35:803 - Add note here? Blankness maybe confusing for beginners
  10. overall, it's already good, just some too long combos for easy diff. that need to be divided :D
  • Insane
  1. 00:30:907 (5) - NC
  2. 01:12:193 (4) - NC too, different vocals and beats
  3. 01:31:903 (2) - I think the NC should be here instead of the slider before it, except it was intentional of you imo
    01:21:944 (2) - same as above
Well, I guess that's all I can find, hope it helps :)
Sorry if it doesn't though :o
Anyway, good luuck :)
thanks!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

reigouan wrote:

M4M. Here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/130310

[General]
You add that much Kiai times to get the fancy star burst? Well it's not that nice for old machines, and I think it's too much. Make some warnings in your description for people who wants to play this map.

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:160 - I'd halve the length of this slider, to make it end here 00:10:990 - at a strong beat
  2. 00:11:820 - Then make a new upward slider here, as the beat goes up.
  3. 00:54:558 - This one looks better at x:92 y:132
  4. 01:02:650 - This short slider may confuse beginners. I'd make it longer and let it finishes the line "Ah-Ah-I'm a", then remove the next one, and place a new circle afterward.
  5. 01:19:455 - Is this supposed to be a "check" shape? The second point of this slider should be at x:288 y:96, to make a straight line.
  6. 02:09:662 - I like the "mirror" sliders like these. Please make more. Most of sliders in this map were placed, like, randomly, well, they don't look nice for me.
  7. 02:32:899 - Like these 3 sliders, for example.
  8. 02:39:538 - But this one is nice.
  9. 02:43:687 - I'd like the "3" circle to be at x:208 y:280
  10. Oh and why not make a countdown, at least for the beginner :)
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:841 - This jump is HUGE!
  2. Even for Insane, breaktime is too short here.
  3. Try make some more interesting shape. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
  4. I'm not good at modding Insane, but the timing is nice in general, I love zigzag circle jumps too. Please considering sliders' places to make them look nicer.
i only fixed BLUE one
thanks~ :D
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!
Arrival
Let's go :

[Insane]
AR 8 please, the Bpm isn't high enough to use 9 imo
00:26:758 (1) - Why NC here ?
00:55:803 (3) - You forgot the clap here, if we look closely to the other parts of the song.
01:01:612 (1,2) - Ctrl+g on these two sliders ? Like this : (I use AR 5, so you can see the entire pattern) http://puu.sh/2U2bf.jpg
01:08:251 (1) - Nazi : One grid right (grid level 4)
01:11:571 (3) - ^ One grid LEFT on this one
01:26:923 (1,2,3) - Why this here ? It doesn't fit with the music imo
01:54:309 (7) - On this slider, why don't you a little acceleration (like x1.10) to fit with the music ?
01:57:629 (6,7,8) - Curvy like this ? http://puu.sh/2U2mp.jpg
02:40:782 (5) - Acceleration

[240568492's Normal]
01:06:592 (1) - Low the volume on the tail of the slider, like Soft-5%
01:46:841 (1) - Oh well.... all this part you just Ctrl+C and Ctrl+V the previous tune and put it there... What a waste.
02:34:558 - These two breaks are really useless. I mean, it's the end of the song, You map the entire last part, or you stop the song, so the player don't have to wait 15 seconds.
Nice diff anyway.

[Easy]
You got a looot of unsnapped object ! Be careful !
01:19:455 (1) - I don't like the shape of this slider, just personnal feeling.
02:12:982 (1) - Spacing problem !
02:46:384 - Spinner to the end of "gentleman" ? There are no spinner, you really should put one in the map, so i advise you to put it here. Plus it fits nice.

Good luck !
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Arrival wrote:

Let's go :

[Insane]
AR 8 please, the Bpm isn't high enough to use 9 imo
00:26:758 (1) - Why NC here ?
00:55:803 (3) - You forgot the clap here, if we look closely to the other parts of the song.
01:01:612 (1,2) - Ctrl+g on these two sliders ? Like this : (I use AR 5, so you can see the entire pattern) http://puu.sh/2U2bf.jpg
01:08:251 (1) - Nazi : One grid right (grid level 4)
01:11:571 (3) - ^ One grid LEFT on this one
01:26:923 (1,2,3) - Why this here ? It doesn't fit with the music imo
01:54:309 (7) - On this slider, why don't you a little acceleration (like x1.10) to fit with the music ?
01:57:629 (6,7,8) - Curvy like this ? http://puu.sh/2U2mp.jpg
02:40:782 (5) - Acceleration

[240568492's Normal]
01:06:592 (1) - Low the volume on the tail of the slider, like Soft-5%
01:46:841 (1) - Oh well.... all this part you just Ctrl+C and Ctrl+V the previous tune and put it there... What a waste.
02:34:558 - These two breaks are really useless. I mean, it's the end of the song, You map the entire last part, or you stop the song, so the player don't have to wait 15 seconds.
Nice diff anyway.

[Easy]
You got a looot of unsnapped object ! Be careful !
01:19:455 (1) - I don't like the shape of this slider, just personnal feeling.
02:12:982 (1) - Spacing problem !
02:46:384 - Spinner to the end of "gentleman" ? There are no spinner, you really should put one in the map, so i advise you to put it here. Plus it fits nice.

Good luck !
thanks~
Losertic
안녕하세요.
첫 한국인 모딩


Modding

General

  1. ready, 3,2,1 go!... 카운트 다운이 약간 어색하달까.. 없애는건 어떠세요?

Easy

  1. 00:22:608 (1,2) - 1번꺼는 뉴콤보. 2번은 제외.
  2. 00:24:683 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  3. 00:27:172 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거.
  4. 00:28:002 (2) - 뉴콤보.
  5. 00:34:641 (1) - ^
  6. 00:49:994 (1) - 이 슬라이더는 제가 생각하기에 초보자들은 처음에 꾹 누른다는 생각보단 왔다갔다 한번만 생각할듯. 결론은 너무 어려움.
  7. 00:56:633 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  8. 01:17:380 (1) - ^
  9. 01:44:766 (1) - 위에 적혀있는것 처럼 슬라이더 리버스가 너무 많아요.
  10. 02:02:193 (2) - x-100 y-260으로 이동.
  11. 02:11:322 (3) - 슬라이더 리버스 횟수가 많아요. 02:11:322 (3) -이걸 시작점을 02:11:737로 옮기고, 리버스 횟수 한번 줄이고 02:11:322 여기다가 노트 하나 추가하면 될지도?...
  12. 02:17:961 (3) - 슬라이더 리버스 횟수가 많아요.
  13. 02:23:355 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  14. 02:31:654 (1) - ^
  15. 02:32:899 (1) - ^
[quote][/quote]

24's Normal

  1. Object's end is not snapped! 에러.
  2. 00:57:463 (2,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858904 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858908
    대충 이렇게.... 2번은 슬라이더 나오는 방향 바꾸고, 1은 00:56:633 (1) -끝나는 지점에 나두고 나머지 2,3,4가 사각형이 되게하는건 어떠세요?
  3. 02:09:040 (2) , 02:10:699 (2) , 02:12:359 (2) - 노트 삭제.
  4. 02:08:832 부터 02:09:247 까지 슬라이더 추가. 02:10:492 부터 02:10:907 까지 슬라이더 추가. 02:12:152 부터 02:12:567 까지 슬라이더 추가.

Insane

  1. 00:46:260 (1,1) - 이부분 되게 어색하고 어렵고(...)뭐 그래요. 해봤는데 급 감속땜에 일단 슬라이더 미스나고, 바로 노트 생기는건 치기는 치지만. 슬라이더 감속을 알고 한다면 저 1노트 치기 되게 어려울듯 합니다.
  2. 00:49:994 (1,1,1) - 이부분은 맨처음 플레이 할때 싸이가 아아아 거리는 걸로 착각했는데.. ......그냥 그렇다는거에요. 바꾸지 않으셔도됩니다. 다시 보니까 뒤에 배경음따라서 가네요. :oops:
  3. 01:25:056 (9) - 뉴콤보 삭제. 01:25:264 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  4. 01:46:426 (1) - 클랩 대신 피니쉬...?
  5. 02:27:504 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제. 02:27:919 (1) - 뉴콤보.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Losertic wrote:

안녕하세요.
첫 한국인 모딩


Modding

General

  1. ready, 3,2,1 go!... 카운트 다운이 약간 어색하달까.. 없애는건 어떠세요?

Easy

  1. 00:22:608 (1,2) - 1번꺼는 뉴콤보. 2번은 제외.
  2. 00:24:683 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  3. 00:27:172 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거.
  4. 00:28:002 (2) - 뉴콤보.
  5. 00:34:641 (1) - ^
  6. 00:49:994 (1) - 이 슬라이더는 제가 생각하기에 초보자들은 처음에 꾹 누른다는 생각보단 왔다갔다 한번만 생각할듯. 결론은 너무 어려움.
  7. 00:56:633 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  8. 01:17:380 (1) - ^
  9. 01:44:766 (1) - 위에 적혀있는것 처럼 슬라이더 리버스가 너무 많아요.
  10. 02:02:193 (2) - x-100 y-260으로 이동.
  11. 02:11:322 (3) - 슬라이더 리버스 횟수가 많아요. 02:11:322 (3) -이걸 시작점을 02:11:737로 옮기고, 리버스 횟수 한번 줄이고 02:11:322 여기다가 노트 하나 추가하면 될지도?...
  12. 02:17:961 (3) - 슬라이더 리버스 횟수가 많아요.
  13. 02:23:355 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  14. 02:31:654 (1) - ^
  15. 02:32:899 (1) - ^

24's Normal

  1. Object's end is not snapped! 에러.
  2. 00:57:463 (2,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858904 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858908
    대충 이렇게.... 2번은 슬라이더 나오는 방향 바꾸고, 1은 00:56:633 (1) -끝나는 지점에 나두고 나머지 2,3,4가 사각형이 되게하는건 어떠세요?
  3. 02:09:040 (2) , 02:10:699 (2) , 02:12:359 (2) - 노트 삭제.
  4. 02:08:832 부터 02:09:247 까지 슬라이더 추가. 02:10:492 부터 02:10:907 까지 슬라이더 추가. 02:12:152 부터 02:12:567 까지 슬라이더 추가.

Insane

  1. 00:46:260 (1,1) - 이부분 되게 어색하고 어렵고(...)뭐 그래요. 해봤는데 급 감속땜에 일단 슬라이더 미스나고, 바로 노트 생기는건 치기는 치지만. 슬라이더 감속을 알고 한다면 저 1노트 치기 되게 어려울듯 합니다.
  2. 00:49:994 (1,1,1) - 이부분은 맨처음 플레이 할때 싸이가 아아아 거리는 걸로 착각했는데.. ......그냥 그렇다는거에요. 바꾸지 않으셔도됩니다. 다시 보니까 뒤에 배경음따라서 가네요. :oops:
  3. 01:25:056 (9) - 뉴콤보 삭제. 01:25:264 (1) - 뉴콤보.
  4. 01:46:426 (1) - 클랩 대신 피니쉬...?
  5. 02:27:504 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제. 02:27:919 (1) - 뉴콤보.
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