solfa feat. Chata - Colorful precious life (Short Ver.) · forum

popner

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popner 2013-04-28T17:25:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月10日 at 10:14:49

Artist: solfa feat. Chata
Title: Colorful precious life (Short Ver.)
Source: Koiimo SWEET*DAYS
Tags: opening rikka
BPM: 180
Filesize: 12281kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.19 stars, 80 notes)
Hard (5 stars, 319 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 377 notes)
Normal (4.24 stars, 168 notes)

Download: solfa feat. Chata - Colorful precious life (Short Ver.)
Download: solfa feat. Chata - Colorful precious life (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#21 恋妹SWEET☆DAYS
Original of Easy, Normal & Hard by Auto Map v1.03.

Last edited by popner 2013-07-10T02:15:36+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-06-13T07:41:45+00:00

节操呢……

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-06-13T08:53:59+00:00

好

Flask

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Flask 2013-06-15T01:02:04+00:00

早知道我就選這BG

Jycool

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Jycool 2013-06-15T09:57:43+00:00

[General]
hard难度节奏排的有点满啊，除了没有连打感觉和insane难度区别不大，感觉去一些note加一些跳会好玩一点，如果不改的话建议ar+1
[Easy]
音效有点单薄啊，至少把whitsle，clap加的满点。。
[Normal]
开头的那一小段就是鼓点还没加进来的地方节奏有点怪，那块的原创节奏感觉不是很合曲
但是我感觉不改也行，我第一次打的时候感觉这里不是很舒服而已
[Hard]
00:05:473 (1) - 我建议加clap，跟后面的鼓点，但是加了之后声音有点大，最好调一下
00:06:639 (5) - 同上
00:06:806 (1) - 同上
00:08:139 (1) - 同上
00:09:306 (6) - 同上
00:09:473 (1) - 同上
00:10:306 (4) - 加nc，音轨变了啊
00:12:806 (3) - 建议这里变成note00:12:973 - 这里到加一个折返滑条跟小提琴的音
00:14:806 (1,2) - 这个part同上
00:15:473 (3) - 这个改成一个1/4滑条再在00:15:806 - 加note
00:52:806 (2) - 这个改成单note，放跳比较好然后在这00:52:973 - 空一拍
01:30:306 (1) - 建议在这加NC，以为和后边的两个音是一组的
[Insane]
00:06:473 (2) - 改成两个note吧，和前面的那个组成一个repeat
其他没有了，insane打着挺舒服的

祝rank

popner

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popner 2013-06-18T06:07:52+00:00

Thanks for mod!

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2013-06-22T10:29:11+00:00

What's automap?

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-06-22T10:29:55+00:00

Raging Bull wrote:
What's automap?

Been wondering the same.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-06-23T03:34:21+00:00

OMG... Pro T.T

[Easy]

00:36:139 (6) - Ctrl + g

[Normal]

00:42:806 (5) - NC?

oK~ No pick!

[Hard]

00:03:139 (2) - Ctrl + g
00:04:473 (2) - ^
00:13:139 (4) - At the beginning of the clap?

[Insane]

00:26:473 (5) - Ctrl + g

Ok Good Map
For Ranked Popner!!!

GL~ Star +1

popner

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popner 2013-06-23T10:06:19+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Raging Bull wrote:
What's automap?
Been wondering the same.

A mapping program, wrote by me in C#.

eikkaleyd

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eikkaleyd 2013-06-28T13:00:01+00:00

说好的nazi

[Insane]
00:27:473 (3) - 可以考虑横向凹形，和前面的横向拖条更好看些，而且可以合后面的flow
00:49:973 (3) - 推荐反向，感觉和2和1的尾部连成一线比较顺，而且和4也是对称型

[Hard]
看不出东西……
~~神麻婆就是这样随便放1/2和歌曲一点没关系也可以打得很顺~~

[Normal]
00:24:139 (1) - 为什么不和5对称
00:42:806 (5) - 似乎是NC点

[Easy]
00:10:806 (1,3) - 为什么一个是弯的一个是拐角

真看不出啥……如果不怎么采纳的话kd也不必了

quantum-rose

quantum-rose 2013-06-30T14:57:19+00:00

Who's Automap?He should submit this mapset

kajiyatta

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kajiyatta 2013-07-04T08:51:50+00:00

from PM
[General]
Audio-Lead-In 1996　→　　2000?
Uncheck the Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
[Easy]
EDITAR5→3 or 4, current is Unrankble
Placement
00:09:473(4,1) without overlapped better for newbie.
Rhythm
01:04:139 unnecessary green line
01:14:806
01:30:639
00:49:473(2,3,4) to follow the cymbal sound, put a note on red line better. e.g)

SPOILER

01:02:639 you sould follow the cymbal.
01:12:139(4) end at 01:13:306 better to follow the finish
Hit Sonud
01:31:973 lower voleme better, current sounds loudly.
[Normal]
EDITHP, OD +1 current is same as Easy.
Placement
00:17:473(3) I suppose the bottom of slider is off-screen. some grid up better.
00:30:473(3) on HP bar, some grid down better.
00:34:806(1,2,3) looks not good I suppose. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:42:806(5) NC here
Rhythm
01:04:139 unnecessary green line
00:40:139(1,2,3,4) to follow the usic properly, maybe like this?

SPOILER

00:49:306 follow the symbal better.
00:50:806(1) start at 00:50:639 better.
Hit Sonud
01:31:973 same as Easy
[Hard]
Placement
00:34:806(1) liner slider doesn't fit this flow, make a curve?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:52:639(1) delete this note and long previous slider with reverse better

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:31:973 same as Easy
[Insane]
Placement
00:50:306(4) Ctrl+G looks better
01:12:139(1,2,3,4,5) looks bored for Insane, maybe put a jump here?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:32:639(2,3,4) swap these notes like this? maybe it sounds nicely.

SPOILER

00:44:806(3,4) prefer 4 notes than 2 slider since the vocal hears obviously e.g.)

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:31:973 same as Easy

Auto map program will be fine but some looks boring and weird for me because of some routine rhythm, placement. however, quite nice work. With some random function, it would be more nice. star.

Last edited by kajiyatta 2013-07-04T10:36:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

popner

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popner 2013-07-04T08:53:17+00:00

Thanks for your mod, will check later

Flower

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Flower 2013-07-07T14:21:03+00:00

1234567890

[Insane]
感觉高潮部分没加啥whistle不是很热情呀……
00:06:473 - whistle？感觉连贯性起来了
00:09:139 - ^
00:13:306 (1,2) - normal sample and reduce volume?
00:15:639 (4) - ^
00:20:639 (3) - ^, and remove finish. 感觉这里连续的几个finish不是很有段落感，这样搞稍微有些层次
00:34:556 (6,7) - change to drum set
00:51:973 (1) - remove NC? hard to read

[Hard]
HP-2 这是故意让人吐槽的么……
00:10:139 (3) - normal set, 另外没叠好
00:20:639 (4) - normal sample and reduce volume?
00:33:473 (1,2) - 躲在slider后面感觉太狡猾了，不好读
00:57:473 (5) - 折返箭头被遮盖

[Normal]
00:14:806 (3,4) - flow怪怪的，试试这个：

SPOILER

00:21:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

SPOILER

00:40:139 (1,2,3) - 节奏很怪，请修
00:42:806 (5) - NC
01:10:139 (2) - 提前1/2开始，结尾不变

[Easy]
如果你懒到要让自动作图机做个这种苟史，请去找三腰要个GD

结论：请不要用你打野的自动作图机了

izzydemon

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izzydemon 2013-07-07T14:32:58+00:00

from #modreqs

Easy

00:02:139 (2) - move to 00:01:973
00:04:806 (4) - move to 00:04:639
00:05:473 (1) - bad slider
00:07:473 (2) - move to 00:07:396
00:10:139 (4) - slight overlapping
00:12:806 (2) - move to 00:12:639
00:13:139 - add a note here?
00:15:473 (5) - move to 00:15:306
00:15:806 - add a note here and new combo
00:16:139 - remove new combo
01:31:973 (1) - move spinner to 01:32:139

Normal

00:00:806 (2) - move it to 00:01:139 and make it end at 00:01:639, then move the circle to 973

Hard
ok

Insane
ok

Snowy
it's not there
what is this

pretty good

[Seraphin]

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[Seraphin] 2013-07-07T20:39:57+00:00

From queue~

[Easy]
ok

[Normal]
00:26:473 (6,1) - this jump is kinda disconcerting, try adding a not at 00:27:139 to help keep rhythm even though it is not on rhythm- just something to consider
01:02:806 (3,4) - curve?

[Hard]
00:30:806 (1,2) - try non-repeating sliders

[Insane]
ok

Nice map

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2013-07-07T22:11:17+00:00

Oh how does program work? Seems interesting.

etc

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etc 2013-07-08T02:14:41+00:00

insane

00:15:223 (3) - remove 3,加在後面的00:16:056這裡
00:34:473 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡並沒有音?
00:35:973 (1) - 有點過於扭曲

感覺這樣就好和slider2比較貼近
00:54:389 (5) - remove
01:00:056 (7) - ^
=============

hard

00:04:139 (1,2) 00:10:806 (1,2) 00:31:473 (3,4) 00:53:473 (1,2) 01:05:473 (1,2) 01:11:473 (4,5) 01:14:139 (4,5) 重複太多次
=============
hard normal和easy都沒啥大問題就是排列有點機械化

good luck

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2013-07-08T04:12:38+00:00

……昨天不小心坑队友了:#
Insane
00:09:973 (1) - 叠在 00:10:139 (2) - 上面？……
00:39:306 (3,4) - exchange & move 00:39:806 (6,7,8) - to 104,276
00:57:473 (1) - move to 204,216
00:57:973 (2) - move to 400,344
00:51:973 (1) - Remove NC?
01:08:639 (3) - Ctrl+G?
01:12:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854596 请无视这条
Hard
00:20:806 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854625
00:54:139 (3,4,5,6) - 善良点放成两堆吧……
别的diff没什么问题

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-07-09T12:59:18+00:00

Hi~Hi~from my queue
。黑科技

General

泡泡你玩错难度了
为什么不多加点whistle
normal和hard最后不用加那么多finish吧

Easy
00:17:473 (2) - 头finish
00:45:473 (3) - 加个finish似乎好一点

Normal
00:07:806需要加一个note
00:15:806这边也是

Hard
00:57:473 (5) - 有点坑，怀疑unrankable?建议改成其他的。。

Insane
摸不出Q_Q

喵

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-07-09T13:44:33+00:00

[General]
你真要传这个video吗丧尸

[Hard]
00:32:473 (2,3) - 好好叠

[Normal]
00:17:473 (3) - 要出屏幕了

[Easy]
00:10:806 (5) - newcombo here.

EDIT: bubbled.

popner

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popner 2013-07-09T13:58:40+00:00