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Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)
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[General]
Offset -712, the current offset is really late.
[Insane]
00:10:464 (14) - Try a new combo here? To keep consistency with your previous combos. Another thing is bothering me with this note though. Due to the soft hitsounds and the way the drumming works on the song, it is really hard to tell when this repeat sliders ends. That can cause a lot of problems leading into the next slider, because the player will be focused on making sure they don't break the repeat, then totally forget to prepare for the quick jump out of the stream. What I suggest you do is take off the last repeat, and add a note. Like this: http://puu.sh/3fVCi.jpg This lets the player know that the repeat is over and the next repeat is just a simple jump away. Optionally, giving this note the kick hitsound will give it a better presence. After doing this you should remove the combo from 00:11:336 (1) - too, looks silly with the combo on 00:10:464 (14) - .
00:14:302 (8) - Missed a clap hitsound? Or was this intentional? Either way it is a better idea to add one to keep the rhythm.
00:19:883 (4) - ^
00:24:069 (4) - This slider is breaking the core consistency of your beat placement, and is also resembling the music wrong. You should do something like this: http://puu.sh/3fVQU.jpg (I just placed these randomly on the grid, do whatever you feel like but follow the same beat placement/combos. That stack is really nice though.) Every strum of the guitar gets resembled, and your combo/beat placement is adjusted properly.
00:25:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is really random and isn't hitting all the right beats like you did before. Adjust this to a similar beat placement like the same part before. The major disruption is the fact that 00:26:511 (3,4,5) - is a triplet, and not using that distinct double beat like 00:23:633 (2,3) - did. This slider 00:26:162 (2) - is really throwing off the rhythm too. Leaving that gap before the double beat had a real sense of rhythm to it.
01:03:488 (1) - Move this over to the right a little bit more? It might just be me, but the start of this slider is really close feels really bad and doesn't display too well for the sake of design. Right here: http://puu.sh/3fW5K.jpg feels like a better spot. This is optional though.
01:04:883 (9) - The same problem happens here just like in my first part of the mod. Example fix picture: http://puu.sh/3fW8Y.jpg or whatever looks nicer to you. Don't forget the kick hitsound on the new note. The same comboscan be used too, like before.
Really nice Insane. The combo structure and beat placement was excellent, except for those few silly spots I pointed out.
[Nich's Hard]
00:24:418 (4) - The combos and beat placement got really messed up here, let me help you fix them. Firstly here I would start the combo, too keep it on the downbeat and consistent with your other combos. Of course removing the combo from 00:24:941 (1) - .
00:25:464 (3) - This slider is conflicting with the combo structure and beat placement because it is ending on the downbeat. I tried to rework this the best I could: http://puu.sh/3fWoJ.jpg This beat placement is representing the beat a lot better, just listen to it. The grid placement is optional though, you can adjust it to personal preference.
00:27:208 (6) - Then put a combo here, this will finish off fixing this section and keeping it consistent. Don't forget to re-hitsound the new notes!
Other than that, really nice Hard.
[Normal]
The AR feels really fast, try 4 instead of 5.
00:10:290 (1) - There isn't enough time for the newer players to recover from this spinner and lead into the next notes. Try ending on 00:11:162.
01:03:488 (1) - ^ 01:04:883 is a much better spot to end the spinner. 01:05:581 as well.
[Easy]
AR 3 if you changed Normal's AR.
00:07:325 (2) - Irregular spacing.
00:25:813 (1) - This section's rhythm gets very confusing, and doesn't feel very structured. I changed it around to this: http://puu.sh/3fWQi.jpg - http://puu.sh/3fWQZ.jpg. (Look at the timeline as well, it's hard to screenshot every note one the grid ;_;.) You can use whatever grid placement you like, but this beat placement is much better. Optionally you could also add a note here: 00:28:953.
Really nice mapset. I highly advise you change everything. Call me back and I can rebubble.
Offset -712, the current offset is really late.
[Insane]
00:10:464 (14) - Try a new combo here? To keep consistency with your previous combos. Another thing is bothering me with this note though. Due to the soft hitsounds and the way the drumming works on the song, it is really hard to tell when this repeat sliders ends. That can cause a lot of problems leading into the next slider, because the player will be focused on making sure they don't break the repeat, then totally forget to prepare for the quick jump out of the stream. What I suggest you do is take off the last repeat, and add a note. Like this: http://puu.sh/3fVCi.jpg This lets the player know that the repeat is over and the next repeat is just a simple jump away. Optionally, giving this note the kick hitsound will give it a better presence. After doing this you should remove the combo from 00:11:336 (1) - too, looks silly with the combo on 00:10:464 (14) - .
00:14:302 (8) - Missed a clap hitsound? Or was this intentional? Either way it is a better idea to add one to keep the rhythm.
00:19:883 (4) - ^
00:24:069 (4) - This slider is breaking the core consistency of your beat placement, and is also resembling the music wrong. You should do something like this: http://puu.sh/3fVQU.jpg (I just placed these randomly on the grid, do whatever you feel like but follow the same beat placement/combos. That stack is really nice though.) Every strum of the guitar gets resembled, and your combo/beat placement is adjusted properly.
00:25:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is really random and isn't hitting all the right beats like you did before. Adjust this to a similar beat placement like the same part before. The major disruption is the fact that 00:26:511 (3,4,5) - is a triplet, and not using that distinct double beat like 00:23:633 (2,3) - did. This slider 00:26:162 (2) - is really throwing off the rhythm too. Leaving that gap before the double beat had a real sense of rhythm to it.
01:03:488 (1) - Move this over to the right a little bit more? It might just be me, but the start of this slider is really close feels really bad and doesn't display too well for the sake of design. Right here: http://puu.sh/3fW5K.jpg feels like a better spot. This is optional though.
01:04:883 (9) - The same problem happens here just like in my first part of the mod. Example fix picture: http://puu.sh/3fW8Y.jpg or whatever looks nicer to you. Don't forget the kick hitsound on the new note. The same comboscan be used too, like before.
Really nice Insane. The combo structure and beat placement was excellent, except for those few silly spots I pointed out.
[Nich's Hard]
00:24:418 (4) - The combos and beat placement got really messed up here, let me help you fix them. Firstly here I would start the combo, too keep it on the downbeat and consistent with your other combos. Of course removing the combo from 00:24:941 (1) - .
00:25:464 (3) - This slider is conflicting with the combo structure and beat placement because it is ending on the downbeat. I tried to rework this the best I could: http://puu.sh/3fWoJ.jpg This beat placement is representing the beat a lot better, just listen to it. The grid placement is optional though, you can adjust it to personal preference.
00:27:208 (6) - Then put a combo here, this will finish off fixing this section and keeping it consistent. Don't forget to re-hitsound the new notes!
Other than that, really nice Hard.
[Normal]
The AR feels really fast, try 4 instead of 5.
00:10:290 (1) - There isn't enough time for the newer players to recover from this spinner and lead into the next notes. Try ending on 00:11:162.
01:03:488 (1) - ^ 01:04:883 is a much better spot to end the spinner. 01:05:581 as well.
[Easy]
AR 3 if you changed Normal's AR.
00:07:325 (2) - Irregular spacing.
00:25:813 (1) - This section's rhythm gets very confusing, and doesn't feel very structured. I changed it around to this: http://puu.sh/3fWQi.jpg - http://puu.sh/3fWQZ.jpg. (Look at the timeline as well, it's hard to screenshot every note one the grid ;_;.) You can use whatever grid placement you like, but this beat placement is much better. Optionally you could also add a note here: 00:28:953.
Really nice mapset. I highly advise you change everything. Call me back and I can rebubble.
Topic Starter
Alright, all fixed owo.
Really helpful, thanks MMzz!
Waiting for nich.
Really helpful, thanks MMzz!
Waiting for nich.
Fixed everything about your suggestion & fixed offset in my diff
Thank you MMzz for your mod
http://puu.sh/3g8LO.osu
Thank you MMzz for your mod
http://puu.sh/3g8LO.osu
Topic Starter
Everything is fixed and updated~ \:D/
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks a bunch!
Rechecked in IRC~
Offset changed
so Rebubbled~ 
Good luck~ ><
SPOILER
2013-06-19 17:18 Konei: hey Miya owo/
2013-06-19 17:18 Miya: hey Konei :3
2013-06-19 17:18 Konei: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247251 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)]
2013-06-19 17:18 Konei: its bubbled now, mind taking a check with me? :3
2013-06-19 17:18 Miya:
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: you remember modding it right?
2013-06-19 17:19 Miya: yup :3
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: MMzz had to rebubble due to timing change orz
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: so he couldn't rank ;w;
2013-06-19 17:20 Miya: hmm, let me check it again
2013-06-19 17:20 Konei: cool
2013-06-19 17:22 Miya: are you sure with this offset? i got overal +20ms :/
2013-06-19 17:22 Konei: o.o
2013-06-19 17:22 Konei: MMzz gave that to me
2013-06-19 17:23 Konei: hmm, I get 4 late
2013-06-19 17:24 Konei: 4~6
2013-06-19 17:24 Konei: checking on Hard I get 2ms late
2013-06-19 17:25 Miya: idk :/
2013-06-19 17:26 Konei: can you SS Hard?
2013-06-19 17:27 Miya: 10ms late https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821101 ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: hmmm, but listening to it on 25% sounds pretty much on the beat
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: but if something, the offset should be later
2013-06-19 17:29 Miya: yup, with +10ms is much better ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: alright, let me fix that ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: so -702?
2013-06-19 17:30 Miya: yup
2013-06-19 17:30 Konei: yep, sounds a lot better
2013-06-19 17:31 Miya: on insane
2013-06-19 17:31 Miya: 00:37:234 (2) - this note is clearly overmapped
2013-06-19 17:31 Konei: yep :/ removed it
2013-06-19 17:34 Miya: you forgot a clap here at slider start? 00:16:391 (2) -
2013-06-19 17:34 Konei: meeep, right~
2013-06-19 17:34 Konei: added
2013-06-19 17:35 Miya: 00:58:949 (3) - also change finish to clap here for consistency
2013-06-19 17:36 Konei: hm, but it's not in the song
2013-06-19 17:36 Konei: is it ok to have finish and clap here?
2013-06-19 17:36 Miya: sounds good, why not?
2013-06-19 17:37 Konei: alright~
2013-06-19 17:42 Miya: okay, i think thats all for Insane ><
2013-06-19 17:42 Konei: cool ><
2013-06-19 17:44 Miya: its good to see Hard is more good now :3
2013-06-19 17:44 Konei: yep, fits much better in the spread :>
2013-06-19 17:44 Miya: no more ridicolous jump again xD
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: xDD Ikr
2013-06-19 17:45 Miya: i can't found anything on hard ><
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: 00:39:239 (3,4,5) - this bothers me a bit
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: but I guess it's ok
2013-06-19 17:46 Miya: i can read it well
2013-06-19 17:46 Konei: yep, but I dislike circle jumps on hard xD
2013-06-19 17:48 Miya: this kinda hard to read for normal 00:11:507 (1,1) -
2013-06-19 17:49 Miya: 00:11:507 (1,1,2,3,4) - ctrl + j this please
2013-06-19 17:49 Miya: then rearrange the pattern so it will fit for the next pattern
2013-06-19 17:49 Konei: removed that note
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: what note?
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: you meant its hard
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: for a Normal
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: so I removed 1
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: hard to read
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: Oh
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: I see
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: there 00:10:460 (3,1,1) -
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: you put very little distance in 3/1 note
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: ><
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: 00:15:344 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked, intentional?
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: this is more nice > http://puu.sh/3jcZ3.jpg
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: ><
2013-06-19 17:52 Konei: fixed~
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: 00:42:553 (1) - whistle at slider end?
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: 00:43:949 (2) - same here too?
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: eh
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: i mean
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: slider repeat
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: lol
2013-06-19 17:58 Miya: AR 5 please for better spread ><
2013-06-19 18:02 Konei: all fixed~
2013-06-19 18:03 Konei: Easy?
2013-06-19 18:03 Miya: yup, wait a sec ><
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: uh Miya?
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: for little glory
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: http://puu.sh/3jdm6.png <- this one shows all different releases
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: according to this, the PSP version should be + Meteor
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: yup, its right
2013-06-19 18:06 Konei: it's the same as this case https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58627 Koi to senkyo to chocolate portable
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: i haven't change anything
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: o/
2013-06-19 18:07 Konei: oh I see
2013-06-19 18:07 Konei: good :>
2013-06-19 18:14 Miya: easy is really good ><
2013-06-19 18:15 Konei: cool :3
2013-06-19 18:15 Miya: thats all i think
2013-06-19 18:16 Konei: updating~
2013-06-19 18:16 Konei: well yeah, updated
2013-06-19 17:18 Miya: hey Konei :3
2013-06-19 17:18 Konei: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247251 Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)]
2013-06-19 17:18 Konei: its bubbled now, mind taking a check with me? :3
2013-06-19 17:18 Miya:
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: you remember modding it right?
2013-06-19 17:19 Miya: yup :3
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: MMzz had to rebubble due to timing change orz
2013-06-19 17:19 Konei: so he couldn't rank ;w;
2013-06-19 17:20 Miya: hmm, let me check it again
2013-06-19 17:20 Konei: cool
2013-06-19 17:22 Miya: are you sure with this offset? i got overal +20ms :/
2013-06-19 17:22 Konei: o.o
2013-06-19 17:22 Konei: MMzz gave that to me
2013-06-19 17:23 Konei: hmm, I get 4 late
2013-06-19 17:24 Konei: 4~6
2013-06-19 17:24 Konei: checking on Hard I get 2ms late
2013-06-19 17:25 Miya: idk :/
2013-06-19 17:26 Konei: can you SS Hard?
2013-06-19 17:27 Miya: 10ms late https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821101 ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: hmmm, but listening to it on 25% sounds pretty much on the beat
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: but if something, the offset should be later
2013-06-19 17:29 Miya: yup, with +10ms is much better ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: alright, let me fix that ><
2013-06-19 17:29 Konei: so -702?
2013-06-19 17:30 Miya: yup
2013-06-19 17:30 Konei: yep, sounds a lot better
2013-06-19 17:31 Miya: on insane
2013-06-19 17:31 Miya: 00:37:234 (2) - this note is clearly overmapped
2013-06-19 17:31 Konei: yep :/ removed it
2013-06-19 17:34 Miya: you forgot a clap here at slider start? 00:16:391 (2) -
2013-06-19 17:34 Konei: meeep, right~
2013-06-19 17:34 Konei: added
2013-06-19 17:35 Miya: 00:58:949 (3) - also change finish to clap here for consistency
2013-06-19 17:36 Konei: hm, but it's not in the song
2013-06-19 17:36 Konei: is it ok to have finish and clap here?
2013-06-19 17:36 Miya: sounds good, why not?
2013-06-19 17:37 Konei: alright~
2013-06-19 17:42 Miya: okay, i think thats all for Insane ><
2013-06-19 17:42 Konei: cool ><
2013-06-19 17:44 Miya: its good to see Hard is more good now :3
2013-06-19 17:44 Konei: yep, fits much better in the spread :>
2013-06-19 17:44 Miya: no more ridicolous jump again xD
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: xDD Ikr
2013-06-19 17:45 Miya: i can't found anything on hard ><
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: 00:39:239 (3,4,5) - this bothers me a bit
2013-06-19 17:45 Konei: but I guess it's ok
2013-06-19 17:46 Miya: i can read it well
2013-06-19 17:46 Konei: yep, but I dislike circle jumps on hard xD
2013-06-19 17:48 Miya: this kinda hard to read for normal 00:11:507 (1,1) -
2013-06-19 17:49 Miya: 00:11:507 (1,1,2,3,4) - ctrl + j this please
2013-06-19 17:49 Miya: then rearrange the pattern so it will fit for the next pattern
2013-06-19 17:49 Konei: removed that note
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: what note?
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: you meant its hard
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: for a Normal
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: so I removed 1
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: hard to read
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: Oh
2013-06-19 17:50 Konei: I see
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: there 00:10:460 (3,1,1) -
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: you put very little distance in 3/1 note
2013-06-19 17:50 Miya: ><
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: 00:15:344 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked, intentional?
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: this is more nice > http://puu.sh/3jcZ3.jpg
2013-06-19 17:51 Miya: ><
2013-06-19 17:52 Konei: fixed~
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: 00:42:553 (1) - whistle at slider end?
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: 00:43:949 (2) - same here too?
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: eh
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: i mean
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: slider repeat
2013-06-19 17:55 Miya: lol
2013-06-19 17:58 Miya: AR 5 please for better spread ><
2013-06-19 18:02 Konei: all fixed~
2013-06-19 18:03 Konei: Easy?
2013-06-19 18:03 Miya: yup, wait a sec ><
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: uh Miya?
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: for little glory
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: http://puu.sh/3jdm6.png <- this one shows all different releases
2013-06-19 18:05 Konei: according to this, the PSP version should be + Meteor
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: yup, its right
2013-06-19 18:06 Konei: it's the same as this case https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58627 Koi to senkyo to chocolate portable
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: i haven't change anything
2013-06-19 18:06 Miya: o/
2013-06-19 18:07 Konei: oh I see
2013-06-19 18:07 Konei: good :>
2013-06-19 18:14 Miya: easy is really good ><
2013-06-19 18:15 Konei: cool :3
2013-06-19 18:15 Miya: thats all i think
2013-06-19 18:16 Konei: updating~
2013-06-19 18:16 Konei: well yeah, updated
Offset changed
so Rebubbled~ Good luck~ ><
Topic Starter
Thanks orz xD
moe moe song~ Congrats~
discuss the timing with some BATs and current one is fine enough. ranked.
=_=baka you even post grats before my rank post=_=
=_=baka you even post grats before my rank post=_=
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot Nymph :>
Yea I lol'd.Nymph wrote:
=_=baka you even post grats before my rank post=_=
grats~
gratz! \:D/
omedeto \o3o/
Topic Starter
Thanks guys ~
Glückwunsch c:
Congratulation ♥
i saw thooommy in big size D:
GZ KONEI <3~ *---*
GZ KONEI <3~ *---*
Topic Starter
Thanks again guys xD
congrats /'-')/
wow congrats Konei >w<
congratulations
Topic Starter
Thanks guys ~
Congratz
and maybe there needs to be heart icon in first post
lol wut, bubbled while it's ranked.....o.o
Ahahahahahahahah xDDDDDDDD
Topic Starter
I'm having a ranked bubble.
fail.
Wrong forum section?
I fixed it, should be fine now.