1. Easy (2,72 stars, 99 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 353 notes)
3. Nich's Hard (4,96 stars, 245 notes)
4. Normal (4,4 stars, 140 notes)

Dark_Ai wrote:

Dark_Ai wrote:

ikr :3 hab dir ein Stern gegeben

• - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC, no ?
  - 00:14:302 (3) - symmetry
  - 01:27:906 - add a circle

• - 00:03:488 (1) - reverse slider
  - 00:04:534 (2) - start the slider at - 00:04:185 -
  - 00:52:150 (3) - start at 00:52:325 -
  - 00:53:022 (4) - delete
  - 00:54:941 (3) - start at 00:55:115 -
  - 00:55:813 (4) - delete
  - 00:58:953 (5) - NC
  - 00:59:302 (1) - remove NC
  - 01:15:697 (2,3,4) - reverse slider instead of those circles

• - OD 6
  - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC
  - 00:19:883 (3,2) - stack
  - 00:50:929 - to 00:59:302 - (slow part) delete all the triplet
  - i didn't find others things, the rest is really good.

• - 00:00:697 (1) - remove NC
  - 00:09:505 (3,5) - delete*
  - 00:14:040 (5,7,9) - delete*
  - 00:20:232 (1) - remove NC
  - 00:20:929 (4) - NC
  - 00:21:017 (5,7) - delete*
  - 00:21:627 (1) - remove NC
  - 00:37:238 (2) - this note is not necessary
  - 00:53:197 - add a circle
  - 00:55:988 - same here, stack with 00:54:767 (3) -
  - 01:05:755 (1,2,3) - slider reverse better i think.

-Umi- wrote:

[Easy]

• - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC, no ? Nope, since the clap should stay on it's own as it plays before the downbeat.
  - 00:14:302 (3) - symmetry Uh, I don't understand what you mean o.o Slider and pattern are symmetrical.
  - 01:27:906 - add a circle yep, also added one on 01:27:557

[Normal]

• - 00:03:488 (1) - reverse slider I'll deny since only vocal plays here and I'm not following it in this part.
  - 00:04:534 (2) - start the slider at - 00:04:185 - Nope, follows bells and beat.
  - 00:52:150 (3) - start at 00:52:325 - Why? Follows beat and vocal on it's current position.
  - 00:53:022 (4) - delete Since upper was denied, nope.
  - 00:54:941 (3) - start at 00:55:115 - Same as above
  - 00:55:813 (4) - delete ^
  - 00:58:953 (5) - NC Would break consistency.
  - 00:59:302 (1) - remove NC ^
  - 01:15:697 (2,3,4) - reverse slider instead of those circles Would play weird, boring and would be irretating.

[Insane]

general: your streams are too long, it's an insane,ok. But you puts stream where there are no need (maybe i'm wrong)
*It's just suggestion to shorten stream Uhh, I don't think I overmapped somewhere lol.

• - 00:00:697 (1) - remove NC Same reason as in Easy.
  - 00:09:505 (3,5) - delete* Beats are there the whole time :< So nope.
  - 00:14:040 (5,7,9) - delete* High tones can be heard for sure lol, so I'm keeping them.
  - 00:20:232 (1) - remove NC Would be breaking consistency.
  - 00:20:929 (4) - NC ^
  - 00:21:017 (5,7) - delete* Beats are playing.
  - 00:21:627 (1) - remove NC Nope, since this is an emphasize to the vocals.
  - 00:37:238 (2) - this note is not necessary I'll keep it for now since it emphasizes the "Na" vocal in my opinion.
  - 00:53:197 - add a circle No sound here, so nope.
  - 00:55:988 - same here, stack with 00:54:767 (3) - Same as above.
  - 01:05:755 (1,2,3) - slider reverse better i think. Naah, plays cool to me c:

Hazuki Watora wrote:

Hi~ from your M4M queue but I'm novice for modding so this don't be helpful..

[Easy]

00:35:232 (2) - How about this ? nope, to keep rhythm steady.

00:45:348 (1,2) - like this Same ?

01:00:348 (2) - How about this Diff is currently not that easy, I dont want to make rhythm harder here. ?

01:05:929 - How about add a note and clap? Good idea, done.

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) - How about this Uhm, I don't see a problem with current rhythm, so I'm keeping it. ?


[Normal]

00:19:534 (4,5) - like this, 00:20:581 (1) - remove NC and 00:20:232 (5) - NC ? Looks a bit weird to me, I prefer mine.

01:16:046 (3,4,5) - How about slider,slider,slider,note like 01:21:627 (3,4,5,6) - ? Ah, ok, looks cool, but would make rhythm to complex in my opinion.

01:26:860 (1) - hmm...this isn't fit with rhythm I think. How about this Cool, changed rhythm.?


[Insane]

01:05:581 - 01:05:668 - How about add a note ? Awesome idea, added.

-Umi- wrote:

[Hard]

general : - Really good map, but too overmapped for a hard song, sound like an insane (just my opinion ^^), delete some triplet could be better :3 I think that it really hard for this diff xD but it certainly isn't harder than Insane diff. Anyway, I will fix only some note that overjump

• - OD 6 fixed
  - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC nope
  - 00:19:883 (3,2) - stack nope, if a note is hidden in slider end, it will be able to cause the players confuse to read.
  - 00:50:929 - to 00:59:302 - (slow part) delete all the triplet umm... I will consider again if anyone mention, since I have no idea lol
  - i didn't find others things, the rest is really good. Thank you >w<

Hazuki Watora wrote:

[Nich's Hard]

00:04:708 (5,6) - How about this ? eh... It isn't different from the original but I guess that do you want to switch these notes? but I no change

01:05:668 - add a note? nope, I just want to triplet, not stream, since it will be cause too hard for this diff.

RikiH_ wrote:

General

You should add a spinner somewhere in Hard and Insane I don't like to add it on this diff (I have no idea to add it, too.)

Nich's Hard

00:52:150 (4,5) - Too nazi, it's also unreadable because the player thinks that it's 1/1, reduce a bit the spacing fixed
01:10:813 (2,3,4,1) - Uhm, I don't know how to explain. Just try this code and tell me if you like it Okay, I like it owo

344,316,70813,2,0,P|384:320|427:310,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,204,71162,2,0,L|352:132,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,120,71511,2,0,L|248:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,71860,6,0,P|424:312|480:272,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue!

General

You should add a spinner somewhere in Hard and Insane It's really hard to find a fitting spot in the harder difficultys, therefore, I'll think about it.

Easy

00:17:441 (1,2,3) - The spacing is really strange, I'd also apply a ctrl+g on the second slider, like this: Changed spacing but ctrl + G flows really akward here in my honest opinion.

This is the code, I fixed the spacing and improved the blanket for you:

257,205,17441,6,0,P|290:274|414:283,1,200,4|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,18488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,108,18836,2,0,P|417:122|456:200,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:33:836 (4,1) - This balnket is meh, try this: Improved blanket a bit.

If you need the code contact me in-game, I'm lazy at the moment :V
00:47:092 (4) - Make something like this, or at least fix the second curve! Changed curve.

If you need the code blah blah blah

Nothing more

Normal

00:25:813 (1,2) - Try to rotate the slider 9° anticlockwise and then move the note to 256|112 to fix the spacing! Spacing is fine.

Insane

00:03:488 (1) - This shape is odd... nope, it gives a cool up going flow.
00:10:115 (10) - Move to 70|56. This way the stream will look better Sure why not.
01:01:395 (4,6) - The pattern in asymmetrical, 01:01:395 (4) should be in 412|48 and 01:01:743 (6) should be in 444|152 Fixed.
01:15:697 (4,5) - This is a bit ugly, you should re-arrange the pattern this way (with the NC on 5) Current angles flow much better in my opinion.

If you need the code blah blah blah. (Don't remember to fix the spacing of the following notes)

________________________________________

I tried to do my best, I posted my map in your queue.
Anyways, take a star. Good luck for ranking

Reikosaka wrote:

Making difficult

SPOILER

• Easy

1. Well, all symmetrical and all good, but manage to find this; 00:12:712 - move slider tail to x:176 y:120, not quite symmetrical

• Normal

1. 00:22:325 (6) - hmm, i suggest not to stack here but to make another pattern with the notes :v
2. 00:29:302 (1) - these two sliders aren't quite symmetrical lol move middle dot to x:320 y:208
3. 00:29:825 (2) - ^ move the middle dot to x:368 y:116

• Nich's Hard

1. 00:02:441 (5) - seems better to move this to x:436 y:256 then move the slider tail to x:340 y:196 to stack

• Insane

1. 00:20:232 (1) - seems better to move it to x:460 y276 and then 00:20:407 (2) - move to x:392 y:196 to stack
2. 00:46:220 (4) - make it more patternal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735092
3. 01:01:918 (7) - same as above, this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735093 maybe?

AnreFM wrote:

llo, mod here~
sorry if it doesn't help

• Easy

1. Well, all symmetrical and all good, but manage to find this; 00:12:712 - move slider tail to x:176 y:120, not quite symmetrical It's fine like it is now in my opinion.

• Normal

1. 00:22:325 (6) - hmm, i suggest not to stack here but to make another pattern with the notes :v Ehh, can't imagine anything, could you suggest something?
2. 00:29:302 (1) - these two sliders aren't quite symmetrical lol move middle dot to x:320 y:208 Looks fine to me, doesnt have to be perfectly symmetrical.
3. 00:29:825 (2) - ^ move the middle dot to x:368 y:116 Same.

• Insane

1. 00:20:232 (1) - seems better to move it to x:460 y276 and then 00:20:407 (2) - move to x:392 y:196 to stack Plays boring in my opinion.
2. 00:46:220 (4) - make it more patternal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735092 Pattern is made to go up and down for flow o3o.
3. 01:01:918 (7) - same as above, this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735093 maybe? Hm, moved the circle a bit, but pattern was already like that lol.

Guess that's all, sorry if my noob mod doesn't help
Well, good luck

Eggache0 wrote:

I modded yesterday but put off submitting until today. Sorry.

[Easy]
00:00:348 (1) - delete. naah, if more people say so I'll consider.
00:00:697 (1) - move the end to 00:01:395 - is better, I think. The shape is fine. nope, rhythm is more steady like this.
00:07:325 (2,3) - What about make a blanket? Sure, changed.

144,212,7674,2,0,P|160:292|332:252,1,300,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

You need to move 00:09:069 (1) - after that.
00:21:627 (3) - how about move the end to 00:22:325 - and remove the reverse? Cool.
00:25:813 (1,1) - hard for easy players. Err, I guess it's ok, but I'll consider.

[Normal]
00:04:185 - add a note here. naah, there is not really an audible sound.
00:09:767 (2,1) - spinner is a bit close. It's ok for a Normal I guess, as the spinner is quite long.
00:19:883 (5) - rhythm is not fit. you don't have to put rhythm after slider placement. Rhythm does fit, lol, it's the same as if I'd put two circles owo.

http://puu.sh/2LVMa.jpg
my advice is to delete 00:22:325 (6) - and move the stuffs, then add a note stack to head of 00:19:883 (5) -

00:31:918 (2) - I prefer not to follow the vocal here. like 00:36:976 (1,2,3) - 00:29:302 (1,2,3) - followed the vocal aswell, so I think it's fine.
01:06:278 (1,2,3) - blanket is not perfect. I'm not good at it so can't give codes. Hm, looks good to me, I'll consider if any more guys mention it but shape looks just good to me.
01:25:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems hard to play. Challenge for the end of the song \:3/

[Insane]
00:14:389 (9) - delete and move00:14:476 (9,10,1) - to x205 y318 Why? High tones still play here.
00:28:342 (6,7,8) - delete Beats are still playing u.u
00:40:639 (4,5) - x60 y164; x168 y180 yeah, moved.
00:40:813 (3,4) - delete ④ and stack ③ to ② Sounds meeh.
00:59:999 (3,4) - change to a slider. don't see why since transition works fine here.
01:01:220 (3,4,5,6,7) - use the polygon plz Looks fine to me, huh.
01:04:883 (9,1,2,3,4,5) -

just for a joke

01:11:511 (4) - move to x0 y324 Sure why not.

Hope could help.

TMAstraf wrote:

Hi!
Ich melde mich aufgrund deiner Modding Queue und melde mich hiermit für ein M4M!
Ich bin froh mal eine Map eines deutschen zu modden =)

Allgemein:
Ich würde vorschlagen die Lead-Seconds auf min. 2,5 zu stellen ^^ Das wäre zu lang, also nein.

Easy:
00:04:534 Setze hier ein Circle ein =) Hm, lieber nicht, da hier kein Sound ist.
00:42:557 Vielleicht stellst du diesen Slider ein kleines Stückchen nohc nach oben Sehe nicht, wieso.
01:05:929 Spinner sollte hier enden Es ist ok wie es ist, außerdem ihn dort enden zu lassen würde zu wenig Zeit nach dem Spinner geben.

Normal:
00:18:488 Versetze diesen Circle vielleicht etwas weil er sich mit dem Slider von 00:16:743 berührt, setze ihn vielleicht auf dieselbe stelle Yep, ok
00:21:278 dasselbe wie ^ Naah, stört hier nicht.

Insane:
00:48:836 Setze den Anfangspunkt noch etwsa nach oben über dem Circle der davor kommt Hm, sehe kein Problem.
LG Astraf =)

AnreFM wrote:

• Nich's Hard

1. 00:02:441 (5) - seems better to move this to x:436 y:256 then move the slider tail to x:340 y:196 to stack It's too hard to read.

Eggache0 wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:708 (5,6) - just use a slider on ⑤ is fine. hmm... I make these to follow rhythm and vocal. So it's fine.
00:22:674 (2) - reverse arrow is partly stacked. I'm not sure that it's unrankable or not, but I will consider again if it really unrankable.
00:25:988 (5) - delete and move 00:26:162 (6) - to x212 y300 It doesn't flow naturally. So no change.
00:53:633 (2) - delete I add to follow rhythm, although these are triplet.

TMAstraf wrote:

Nich's Hard:
00:19:534 Move this Slider up a bit It seems fine for me.
00:31:046 It seems to extreme because of the Slider on 00:31:918 maybe you should reconsider to position Fixed

Note: Thanks Konei for translation ><

TrigonometrY wrote:

[Nich's Hard]
Diff is better played with AR8. It's too hard for this diff, although I think that it may be have to use AR8
00:06:976 (2,3) - maybe this? no, I think that the original was fine because it's natural flow.

SPOILER

1. Slider tick 2 sounds much better on this song.

1. Reduce AR by 1. AR 4 is too much for easy diff, even this is for quite high bpm song.
2. 00:27:383 (1) - I feel this spinner will be too fast for easy diff. Consider the bpm of the song, this spinner will be spin too fast, and beginner will don't have enough time to reposition their hand to hit the next note. I suggest to just map this spinner. 2 Circle at 00:27:906 - and 00:28:604 - will be enough to map this.
3. 00:39:069 (3) - This is the only 1/2 slider in this diff. And i think this will be too much for a easy diff. Just change 1/2 slider to 1/1 slider.

1. 00:04:185 - Add a circle here. The gap doesn't feel good, and feels empty. Even if you follow vocal here, there is vocal "ko" at this time.
2. 00:19:883 (5) - Forgot a clap at this slider start?
3. 00:42:557 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here at both of this slider start? It wil match the strong piano sounds at that point.
4. 01:10:813 (4,5,6) - Same, whistle rhythm at this circle will be good to match the strong vocal at this time.
5. 01:16:220 (4,5,6) - Same, how about add a whistle rhythm at 4, 5, slider end, and circle 6? It will be consistant with the whistle rhythm here 01:21:627 (3,4,5,6) -

• 
  With a lot of *high* jump and flow breaker in this difficulty, i feel this hard is same as insane. :/

1. Use AR 8. AR 8 is perfect for jumpy map like this.
2. 00:03:488 (1,2) - Please dont stack this, it really break the flow since you spam a lot of 1/2 rhythm at previous but suddenly, it has gap of 1/1. I always read this as 1/2 when first playing this map.
   Nothing much to say about this diff. Very jumpy. If this is an insane diff, this will be a good insane. But meh, this is hard, too hard for a "hard" diff. Change some 1/4 slider into stream, and voila, it will be an insane.

1. 00:16:046 (1) - Touch the hp bar. Mind if you move this down a bit? ><
2. 00:27:208 (1,2,3,4) - Very dislike this part. Why 1/4 jump? :/ It doesn't synchronize well with the next stream too.
3. 01:26:511 (1,2,3,4) - I dislike this 1/4 jump too. But well, there is no stream this time. I can accept this.

Miya wrote:

Hello~ :3 hello >w<

Nich's Hard

• 
  With a lot of *high* jump and flow breaker in this difficulty, i feel this hard is same as insane. :/ yep. Then now I have remapped my diff to easier by reduce DS and triplets stream. Then I hope it is easier than previously mapping.

1. Use AR 8. AR 8 is perfect for jumpy map like this. Okay, Fixed
2. 00:03:488 (1,2) - Please dont stack this, it really break the flow since you spam a lot of 1/2 rhythm at previous but suddenly, it has gap of 1/1. I always read this as 1/2 when first playing this map. moved
   Nothing much to say about this diff. Very jumpy. If this is an insane diff, this will be a good insane. But meh, this is hard, too hard for a "hard" diff. Change some 1/4 slider into stream, and voila, it will be an insane. Thank you for comment Then I have remapped.

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:39:069 (3) - Your forgot your Clap at the end~ yep

Normal:

00:10:290 (1) - I saw your intention for following the lyrics, but rather following 1/1 would be more reasonable. I'm fine with that actually o.o

Insane:

00:10:464 (14,1) - I think this jump is toooo large, even considering those are sliders, reducing the distance will be much better. Also considering NC to (14).
reduced spacing a bit.

Sonnyc wrote:

Hard:

00:11:424 - Consider adding a note here, since there's a strong beat here,, I don't want to add it here, since it's too hard to play.

Nymph wrote:

=_=baka you even post grats before my rank post=_=