1. Another (4,8 stars, 318 notes)
2. Hyper (4,48 stars, 250 notes)
3. Normal (2,52 stars, 144 notes)

1. Consider adding more tags? Techno and OST tags will fit here!
2. Why don't you map a [Beginner] diff? first of all, this is your mapset, so we want to see more diffs from you! Secondly, only three diffs for such a short song? Looks like you're too lazy :< THink about mapping a [Beginner] diff!
3. Try to kieep tick rate consistent? I'd recommend you to keep Slider Tick Rate 2 for all diffs.
4. Disable letterboxes during breaks? Seems like those letterboxes hurt your cute BG :<

1. Looks like this diff is the easiest here. Consider reducing HP Drain by one tick to make this diff easier-playable for beginner players.
   Note: If Leader ill map a [Beginner] diff, you should think about reducing HP Drain here, anyway. Just to keep mapset more balanced.
2. 00:25:639 (3) - try to use circle+1/2 slider here instead? I feel like it will fith background music the way better. example
3. 00:35:344 - if you agree with the suggestion above, add circle here. The same sound should have the same rhythm
4. 00:46:521 (5) - consider removing that circle, because it doesn't really fits with your rhythm, try to remove it. Pattern sounds much better without it
5. 00:49:168 (3) - it sounds quite weird, that vocals start in the end of this slider. Try to Ctr+G - 00:49:168 (3,4) this pattern. Don't forget to fix hitsounds after swapping objects!
6. 00:55:639 (5) - this is the easiest diff, and double-reversed sliders are quite a bad idea here. Why? Because second reverse-arrow appears too son and beginners have no time to notice/read it properly. This is the easiest diff, so replacing your slider with something like this will be a good idea.
7. 01:34:756 - remove this green line. Seems like this one is not in use. Same for 01:36:227 - this one
8. 01:46:815 - you can use custom slidertick here to put a clap hitsound here. It will give you consistent clap-pattern.
9. 02:16:815 - I'd finish the spinner here. It will give you some consistency with other diffs, and it also sounds much better, imo.

1. Consider using AR6 and OD/HP:5 to keep mapset more balanced. You will have AR4 on Standard/ AR:6 on Hyper / AR8 on Another. Sounds like a giood idea, right?
2. 00:37:256 - 00:37:403 - I'd map one or both of those beats to keep consistent rhythm here. Personally, I'd recommend you to try something more creative. Probably this pattern will work here better.
3. 00:43:286 - you can map that 1/4 triplet that starts here. It will make your rhythm a bit mre interesting for players. You can do it in two ways: 1 and 2. Same rhythm, but second example is alittle bit harder.
4. 00:53:286 (3) - and 00:55:639 (1,2) - have some repeats and it's hard to guess how many repeats does each slider have. It makes this patten kinda hard to play. Consider using same number of reverses for each slider?
   Note: same as above for 01:13:286 (1,2,3,4). (4) will stress players a lot. Don't trust me? Test it by yourself!
5. 01:19:756 (6) - x2.5+ jump after 1/4 slider for a calm song may be too hard for plyers. Try to reduce jump distance if it is possible? feel like you don't need to place here tht hard jump
6. 02:07:403 (4) - 1 grid down for a perfect stack, please. /-Nazi- :3

1. 00:05:933 (4,5,6,7,8) - nazi - you can change direction of this stream, to make this 1/8 slider easier understandable for players. like this
2. 00:10:639 (4,5) - nazi - I'd prefer to see consistent jumps between those notes. Jump between (4) and (5) flows weird and sounds random :< You can be more creative, this is [Another] diff, after all!
   
   for example some more squares

   
3. 00:41:227 (8,3) - actually, I should say, that those claps sound pretty weird because there's no any claps in music :V
4. 00:49:756 (3) - no, really. Those calps don't fit here. Sounds pretty weird. Check the whole map, I bet you'll find out that a lot of claps should be removed.
5. 00:55:639 (1,2,3) - almost the same as above. But this time you can simply reduce volume of those claps.
6. 01:21:080 (2,3,4) - 1/4>1/8>1/4 how do you want players to play it? try to replace (2,3,4) with 1/8 slider to make that pattern easier playable.
7. 01:42:697 (5) - reverse arrow is overlapped with skin elements (scores) and it looks pretty messy here. Can you find a way to avoid that awkward overlap here? I bet you can fix it!
8. 02:14:462 (1) - can't say that I like your velocity changes here. It is qute hard to play, but it fits here with kiai end. It may confuse players, but as long as this is the hardest diff - it's ok.

-Bakari- wrote:

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/gives Baka some food :c

[Hyper]

1. 00:53:286 (3) - and 00:55:639 (1,2) - have some repeats and it's hard to guess how many repeats does each slider have. It makes this patten kinda hard to play. Consider using same number of reverses for each slider? I think most experienced players would pass this part with no problem. o3o So no change.
   Note: same as above for 01:13:286 (1,2,3,4). (4) will stress players a lot. Don't trust me? Test it by yourself! It's fine. :c

Good luck!

( I love nekomata )

• first 8 circles 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 (FC) (N) (N) (N) (C) (N) (N) (N)
  next 8 circles 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 (C) (N) (C) (N) (C) (N) (C) (N)
  next 4 sliders same
  the last 2 sliders <- keep that

Good Song with Good map! I hope to play this with ranked form

Kloyd wrote:

Hyper
01:01:227 (1) - IDK what others would say but I think this is awkward one. I think this one better works here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738110 Nope. >3<'
01:34:462 (1) - remove whistle? Nope.
01:49:756 (3,4,5,6) - spacing inconsistency (but I think its okay) I think it's okay too. o.o

1. The tags are not the same for every diff, make then the same for every difficult
   
   Standard: Leyko Nemis
   Hyper: Leyko Nemis Electro Pop OST
   Another: Leyko Nemis Electro Pop OST

1. 00:00:345 (1) - A whistle at the begin sounds good whit the instrumental
2. 00:23:286 (5) - Add a whistle there, it totally fits whit the high sound of the instrumental
3. 00:56:815 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental
4. 01:15:639 (1,2) - This partnern will confuse new players since there is no spacing between those notes they'll confuse when they're gonna hit, try something like this http://puu.sh/2Pm7T.jpg
5. 01:15:933 (2) - Add a whistle at the begin, it follows the instrumental
6. 01:18:286 (4) - I think you've missed a clap at the end there since you're following the instrumental, add it
7. 01:23:286 (4) - Same here, but add it on this note
8. 01:25:050 (1) - A finish there may sound good whit the song, try it
9. 01:25:344 (2) - Add a whistle at the begin, to follow the instrumental
10. 01:27:403 (3) - I think you've missed a clap at the end there since you're following the instrumental, add it
11. 01:29:756 (1) - Same here
12. 01:32:109 (4) - Same here
13. 01:46:227 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental
14. 01:53:286 (3) - Make this slider more focused in the shape http://puu.sh/2Pmja.jpg it really looks better
15. 02:05:050 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental, aslo i think that slider doesn´t flow very well try something more curve http://puu.sh/2Pmnb.jpg its just a suggestion

1. 00:00:345 (1,2,3) - When i played on the first time i really get confused about the spacing, imo make the space consistent at the begin of a song to get an idea of how the space between the notes should be, then you can add jumps,etc.
2. 00:09:756 (x) - The sound of this timeline its really low, 30~40 at volume should work better IMO
3. 00:55:639 (1,2) - I think that the jump between those slider may get confusing while you play, if you end (1) where it started it should play better
4. 02:14:609 (1) - I think that this slider sounds better if you end it on 02:16:668 (x), try it

1. 00:01:227 (3) - Make this slider more curve, the shape of it it's really boring and doesn't flow very well http://puu.sh/2PmHP.jpg
2. 00:03:580 (3) - Same here
3. 00:09:756 (x) - The sound of this timeline its really low, 30~40 at volume should work better
4. 00:10:933 (5) - This finish is really unnecessary, remove it
5. 00:19:168 (1) - To 01:10:639 (6) those finish sounds good at the begin but then you start to hate them, use the same hitsounds technic that the other diffs used it really sounds better, be carefull of how you use hitsounds
6. 00:25:933 (1,3) - Add a whistle in those notes, that sounds good whit the instrumental
7. 00:35:344 (1,3) - Same as above
8. 00:43:286 (4,6) - Same as above
9. 01:11:521 (1) - Add finish in that spinner and remove it from the begin of the next slider 01:15:933 (1) maybe add a whistle instead of finish
10. 01:46:227 (7) - Add a finish at the begin at the slider to follow the instrumental
11. 02:16:962 (1) - I think you should end like the other Diffs, so maybe just end mapping at 02:16:668 (8) i think that spinner at the end really kills the song end and doesn't fit too well there

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hyper

1. 00:00:345 (1,2,3) - When i played on the first time i really get confused about the spacing, imo make the space consistent at the begin of a song to get an idea of how the space between the notes should be, then you can add jumps,etc. Mmm, I don't wanna remove them ;~; I mean, you can always restart. It prepares you for what's coming next >:D
2. 00:55:639 (1,2) - I think that the jump between those slider may get confusing while you play, if you end (1) where it started it should play better Any experienced player would just press and hold still, untill the other slider appears. And I don't see no jumps here.
3. 02:14:609 (1) - I think that this slider sounds better if you end it on 02:16:668 (x), try it Nope. >3<

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1. 00:15:050 (2) - una cosa del genere imo è piu' carina
   
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2. 00:23:874 (1) - una cosa cosi per avere il flow un po' migliore
   
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3. 00:25:639 (3,4) - per semplificare un po' qui che ne dici di usare semplicemente uno slider con la reversearrow? secondo me è meglio, stessa cosa con 01:01:521 (1,2) - e anche 01:10:933 (1,2) - e 01:22:697 (3,4) - e 02:10:933 (2,3) -
4. 01:09:756 (5) - ctrl + g ci starebbe meglio imo
5. 01:17:403 (3,4) - questa pattern mi sembra un po' troppo complicata per essere della diff piu' semplice del mapset, ti consiglierei di unstackare gli slider
6. 01:25:344 (2,3) - stessa cosa riguardo agli stack, cerca di evitare queste pattern difficili per i poveri nabbi ; A ;
7. 01:28:580 (4,1) - non mi piace molto il flow qui è un po' strano che ne dici di fare una cosa del genere:
   
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8. 02:03:874 (5,1) - credo che qualcosa è andato storto qui
9. 02:08:580 (4,1) - io ti consiglierei di fare anche qui una blanket, cioè fare lo slider (1) curvo e farlo dablanket a (4) è un po' piu' carino cosi o3o

1. 00:09:756 - i would keep volume to 20% it sound a bit loud to me atm
2. 00:00:345 (1) - [nazi] second white point at x: 126 y: 96 and 3rd white point at x: 196 y: 105 = perfect blaket \o3o/[/nazi]
   
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3. 00:03:580 (2) - fixing a bit the line of the reversearrow for a better flow with prev slider
   
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4. 00:09:756 (1) - place it kinda like this for a better flow
   
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5. 00:51:521 (4) - something in this way looks better:
   
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6. 01:34:462 (1) - i would place this circle in the middle o3o
7. #offtopic: 01:46:080 (1) - this slider remember me: http://puu.sh/30btl.jpg

1. 01:15:930 - snappa questa green line a 01:15:933
2. 00:14:462 (1) - io lo avrei stackato con 00:13:286 (5) -
3. 00:20:050 (2) - piu' o meno cosi:
   
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4. 00:20:933 (4,1) - stacka correttamente questi 2
5. 00:26:227 (5,6) - cerca di farli un po' cosi,migliorando sopratutto il slider (5) - nello slider (6) è tutto apposto
   
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6. 00:28:580 (1) - portalo piu' in alto cosi:
   
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7. 00:30:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - cerca di fare un pattern piu' pulita tipo:
   
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8. 00:36:227 (6) - dovrebbe essere cosi:
   
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9. 00:51:227 (5,1) - aggiusta un po' lo slider 5 in questo modo,e poi porta di qualche grind in alto lo slider 1
   
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10. 01:05:933 (5) - cerca di formare un triangolo qui
    
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11. 01:39:756 (4,5,6) - cerca di farla un po' piu' cosi:
    
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12. 02:02:109 (5) - piazzalo cosi:
    
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