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Topic Starter
bokito
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月7日 at 13:00:50

Artist: u's
Title: Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size)
Source: Love Live! School Idol Project
Tags: Sunrise Opening JUDYDANNY ラブライブ vince0088
BPM: 196
Filesize: 19017kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.53 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 318 notes)
  4. JuDa's Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 391 notes)
  5. JuDa's Oni (4.83 stars, 535 notes)
  6. Normal (3.94 stars, 128 notes)
Download: u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size)
Download: u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) (no video)
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This is my first map. A bad map I need some advice>.<
Taiko by JUDYDANNY

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ZZHBOY
既然刚才打了就顺手骗kdmod下
[Hard]
00:17:802 (8) - 是不是手误了
00:17:802 (8) - 可以不空?
00:23:160 - 这个音可以体现出来
00:56:068 - 可以不空?
01:02:649 (1,2,3) - 有点乱
之后柑橘KIAI部分都有些乱 也有可能是窝读图能力智商问题? :?
其他难度有时间会去试试所以 加油 :)
Topic Starter
bokito

ZZHBOY wrote:

既然刚才打了就顺手骗kdmod下
[Hard]
00:17:802 (8) - 是不是手误了fixed
00:17:802 (8) - 可以不空?没看懂- -
00:23:160 - 这个音可以体现出来这里没点 音效弄不出来
00:56:068 - 可以不空fixed
01:02:649 (1,2,3) - 有点乱有时乱也是一种特色
之后柑橘KIAI部分都有些乱 也有可能是窝读图能力智商问题? :?
其他难度有时间会去试试所以 加油 :)
thanks
[-Google-]
As requested xD
我这种noob还能mod?骗KD还差不多

[General]
E和N的绿线没snap
SPOILER
00:05:253 - snap to 00:05:256
00:05:866 - snap to 00:05:869
00:05:942 - snap to 00:05:945
00:07:090 - snap to 00:07:093
00:07:167 - snap to 00:07:170
00:08:315 - snap to 00:08:318
00:08:391 - snap to 00:08:394
00:09:539 - snap to 00:09:542
00:09:616 - snap to 00:09:619
00:13:213 - snap to 00:13:216
00:13:289 - snap to 00:13:292
00:14:437 - snap to 00:14:440
00:14:514 - snap to 00:14:517
00:15:662 - snap to 00:15:665
00:15:738 - snap to 00:15:741
00:19:335 - snap to 00:19:338
00:19:412 - snap to 00:19:415
00:23:008 - snap to 00:23:011
00:23:085 - snap to 00:23:088
00:24:233 - snap to 00:24:236
00:24:309 - snap to 00:24:312
00:25:457 - snap to 00:25:460
00:25:534 - snap to 00:25:537
00:33:110 - snap to 00:33:113
00:36:784 - snap to 00:36:787
00:37:702 - snap to 00:37:705
00:48:110 - snap to 00:48:113
00:48:195 - snap to 00:48:190
00:52:396 - snap to 00:52:399
00:52:473 - snap to 00:52:476
01:00:355 - snap to 01:00:358
01:00:432 - snap to 01:00:435
01:04:641 - snap to 01:04:644
01:04:718 - snap to 01:04:721
01:05:253 - snap to 01:05:256
01:05:330 - snap to 01:05:333
01:06:478 - snap to 01:06:481
01:06:554 - snap to 01:06:557
01:08:315 - snap to 01:08:318
01:08:391 - snap to 01:08:394
01:13:213 - snap to 01:13:216
01:13:289 - snap to 01:13:292
01:15:662 - snap to 01:15:665
01:15:738 - snap to 01:15:741
01:19:335 - snap to 01:19:338
01:19:412 - snap to 01:19:415
01:20:559 - snap to 01:20:562
01:20:636 - snap to 01:20:639
01:21:172 - snap to 01:21:175
01:21:248 - snap to 01:21:251
Video Offset

右侧可以调(有个滑条)
Audio preview:01:11:073

[Easy]
E和N不建议有变速滑条(把所有0.5x绿线都撤了吧)
开着恒定DS把所有的间距确认下,我就不一一写了;w;如00:05:562 (1) -
00:00:665 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得这里节奏有点奇怪;w;E难度还是随着最简单的节奏好,实在不行也可以换spin
嗯,总体来说我个人倾向于E跟节奏,N开始跟人声,所以note可以再酝酿一下
00:10:154 (4,5) - 00:48:726 (1,2,3) - E的话重叠的最好都拉开来
00:15:358 (3,1,2,1,2) - 01:11:685 (1,2,3) - 01:16:583 (1,2,3) - 感觉太挤了
个人觉得00:32:501 (1,2,1,2) - 这段的间距最好,一方面是有的地方的排列问题,另一方面感觉还是Easy节奏挤得太满了;w;

[Normal]
SV和E之间可以拉开点差距,DS也是
感觉总体上N做的比E好一点/w\
00:00:665 (1,2,3,4) - 这开头感觉才对嘛>w<
00:28:522 (6) - 还是弧线吧,统一下,后边的都是直的
音效,NC都没看/w\
是因为下的有点挤么0.0?感觉没有听出来强调部分

[Hard]
我去这难度和Normal差的真远;w;
00:01:889 (2) - Finish改到00:01:736 (1) - 上去
00:34:644 (1,2,3,4) - 可以降一下音效
把滑条的哨子音去了,举例:00:36:787 (2) -
00:33:726 (3) - 换成repeat?
00:39:695 (1) - 长滑条可以加点创意嘛xD
最后一个长音01:26:685 (2) - 可以强调下OxO
感觉Hard排列做的有点难;w;

I因为没有作图经验就跳过啦,但是总体有三个感觉,第一个是很多地方重叠没有做好还可以细心点(例00:05:562 (1,4) - ),第二个就是像00:13:828 (8) - 这样的滑条可以拉的好看点,第三个就是感觉时间轴挤得好满OxO……恩,就这样
最后一个长音01:26:685 (2) - 可以强调下OxO

总的来说感觉下的节奏在我听起来还有点问题,尤其是E和N(你可以去看看mania,Hard是5K,N是6K,OTL)
GL~加油xD
Topic Starter
bokito

[-Google-] wrote:

As requested xD
我这种noob还能mod?骗KD还差不多

[General]
E和N的绿线没snapfixed
SPOILER
00:05:253 - snap to 00:05:256
00:05:866 - snap to 00:05:869
00:05:942 - snap to 00:05:945
00:07:090 - snap to 00:07:093
00:07:167 - snap to 00:07:170
00:08:315 - snap to 00:08:318
00:08:391 - snap to 00:08:394
00:09:539 - snap to 00:09:542
00:09:616 - snap to 00:09:619
00:13:213 - snap to 00:13:216
00:13:289 - snap to 00:13:292
00:14:437 - snap to 00:14:440
00:14:514 - snap to 00:14:517
00:15:662 - snap to 00:15:665
00:15:738 - snap to 00:15:741
00:19:335 - snap to 00:19:338
00:19:412 - snap to 00:19:415
00:23:008 - snap to 00:23:011
00:23:085 - snap to 00:23:088
00:24:233 - snap to 00:24:236
00:24:309 - snap to 00:24:312
00:25:457 - snap to 00:25:460
00:25:534 - snap to 00:25:537
00:33:110 - snap to 00:33:113
00:36:784 - snap to 00:36:787
00:37:702 - snap to 00:37:705
00:48:110 - snap to 00:48:113
00:48:195 - snap to 00:48:190
00:52:396 - snap to 00:52:399
00:52:473 - snap to 00:52:476
01:00:355 - snap to 01:00:358
01:00:432 - snap to 01:00:435
01:04:641 - snap to 01:04:644
01:04:718 - snap to 01:04:721
01:05:253 - snap to 01:05:256
01:05:330 - snap to 01:05:333
01:06:478 - snap to 01:06:481
01:06:554 - snap to 01:06:557
01:08:315 - snap to 01:08:318
01:08:391 - snap to 01:08:394
01:13:213 - snap to 01:13:216
01:13:289 - snap to 01:13:292
01:15:662 - snap to 01:15:665
01:15:738 - snap to 01:15:741
01:19:335 - snap to 01:19:338
01:19:412 - snap to 01:19:415
01:20:559 - snap to 01:20:562
01:20:636 - snap to 01:20:639
01:21:172 - snap to 01:21:175
01:21:248 - snap to 01:21:251
Video Offset

右侧可以调(有个滑条)
Audio preview:01:11:073
fixed

[Easy]
E和N不建议有变速滑条(把所有0.5x绿线都撤了吧)撤了我觉得slider的速度新手玩不起
开着恒定DS把所有的间距确认下,我就不一一写了;w;如00:05:562 (1) - OK
00:00:665 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得这里节奏有点奇怪;w;E难度还是随着最简单的节奏好,实在不行也可以换spinfixed
嗯,总体来说我个人倾向于E跟节奏,N开始跟人声,所以note可以再酝酿一下
00:10:154 (4,5) -这里我觉得没问题 00:48:726 (1,2,3)fixed - E的话重叠的最好都拉开来
00:15:358 (3,1,2,1,2) - 01:11:685 (1,2,3) - 01:16:583 (1,2,3) - 感觉太挤了Hard to correction
个人觉得00:32:501 (1,2,1,2) - 这段的间距最好,一方面是有的地方的排列问题,另一方面感觉还是Easy节奏挤得太满了;w;

[Normal]
SV和E之间可以拉开点差距,DS也是
感觉总体上N做的比E好一点/w\
00:00:665 (1,2,3,4) - 这开头感觉才对嘛>w<
00:28:522 (6) - 还是弧线吧,统一下,后边的都是直的fixed
音效,NC都没看/w\
是因为下的有点挤么0.0?感觉没有听出来强调部分

[Hard]
我去这难度和Normal差的真远;w;
00:01:889 (2) - Finish改到00:01:736 (1) - 上去fixed
00:34:644 (1,2,3,4) - 可以降一下音效fixed
把滑条的哨子音去了,举例:00:36:787 (2) - 蛮合适的
00:33:726 (3) - 换成repeat?fixed
00:39:695 (1) - 长滑条可以加点创意嘛xDfixed
最后一个长音01:26:685 (2) - 可以强调下OxOfixed
感觉Hard排列做的有点难;w;

I因为没有作图经验就跳过啦,但是总体有三个感觉,第一个是很多地方重叠没有做好还可以细心点(例00:05:562 (1,4) - ),第二个就是像00:13:828 (8) - 这样的滑条可以拉的好看点,第三个就是感觉时间轴挤得好满OxO……恩,就这样
最后一个长音01:26:685 (2) - 可以强调下OxO
fixed

总的来说感觉下的节奏在我听起来还有点问题,尤其是E和N(你可以去看看mania,Hard是5K,N是6K,OTL)
GL~加油xD
Melt
Mod as request :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:501(1)试试这个节奏呢
  2. 00:23:624(2)个人感觉放成这样比较好 这两个地方呢 我是感觉vocal一句话的开始放在滑条中间不是很好
  3. 00:41:379(1)还是节奏上的建议
  4. 00:57:297(1)
  5. 总感觉这diff节奏有点奇怪..
[Normal]
  1. 才发现combo colour 1和2太相似了 换一个比较好
  2. 00:27:603(4)nc然后00:29:440的nc删掉
  3. 00:31:583(4)nc
  4. 00:34:644(3)
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:358(1)红线前不要有物件
  2. 00:22:246(4)
  3. 00:43:522(5,1)稍微修一修 如果改了记得调整一下ds
  4. 00:50:869(4)
  5. 00:58:062不觉得这里应该有个note么orz
[Insane]
  1. Insane节奏为啥比其他diff好多了.-. 都快不像是同一个人下的节奏了
  2. 00:06:634(1,3)这是故意没叠好的么.-.
  3. 00:17:654(1)
  4. 01:01:583(6)改成4个circle排成连打吧
  5. 01:25:460(1,2,3,4,5,1,2)喂这故意放错的么0.0 都向后移 从01:25:613开始
感觉easy和normal节奏上还需要改进,insane排版再修改一些细节就很不错了
GL~
Topic Starter
bokito

Melt wrote:

Mod as request :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:501(1)试试这个节奏呢fixed
  2. 00:23:624(2)个人感觉放成这样比较好fixed 这两个地方呢 我是感觉vocal一句话的开始放在滑条中间不是很好
  3. 00:41:379(1)还是节奏上的建议fixed
  4. 00:57:297(1)fixed
  5. 总感觉这diff节奏有点奇怪..
[Normal]
  1. 才发现combo colour 1和2太相似了 换一个比较好我会考虑的
  2. 00:27:603(4)nc然后00:29:440的nc删掉fixed
  3. 00:31:583(4)ncfixed
  4. 00:34:644(3)fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:358(1)红线前不要有物件
  2. 00:22:246(4)fixed
  3. 00:43:522(5,1)稍微修一修 如果改了记得调整一下ds fixed
  4. 00:50:869(4)fixed
  5. 00:58:062不觉得这里应该有个note么orz
fixed

[Insane]
  1. Insane节奏为啥比其他diff好多了.-. 都快不像是同一个人下的节奏了 我敢保证全是我放的,这张是我做得最久的一张了
  2. 00:06:634(1,3)这是故意没叠好的么.-.> >
  3. 00:17:654(1)fixed
  4. 01:01:583(6)改成4个circle排成连打吧fixed
  5. 01:25:460(1,2,3,4,5,1,2)喂这故意放错的么0.0 都向后移 从01:25:613开始
咦 我还以为我改回来了

感觉easy和normal节奏上还需要改进,insane排版再修改一些细节就很不错了
GL~
JUDYDANNY
Very very thanks for making Taiko BG ! :)
SHOOT a Kudosu star!
Good Luck! 8-)
Topic Starter
bokito

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Very very thanks for making Taiko BG ! :)
SHOOT a Kudosu star!
Good Luck! 8-)
^ ^
Aunxfb
Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Insane]
00:03:879 (3) - move to x:200 y:72
00:32:654 (1,2,3,4) - change beat snap divisor to 1/2, and nudge Foward (Highlight and Press 'K') , so 00:32:654 (1) - is at 00:32:807 -
01:25:001 - end the spinner here? If follow add finish.

Note: Too hard for me!! But well done :)

[Hard]
00:02:807 (4) - add finish in second end
00:10:001 - add circle

Rhythm Change
00:13:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nudege these 1/2beats foward, delete 00:16:430 (1) -
00:13:981 - add circle here

00:21:022 (10) - change this into a 1/2 beat slider like the last one
00:22:399 - add circle
00:33:726 (3) - move to x:209 y:166

Rhythm Change
00:34:644 (1,2,3) - remove sliders
00:34:644 - add circle with whistle
00:34:797 - add circle
00:34:950 - add 1/1 beat slider
00:35:409 - add circle
00:35:562 - add 1/2 beat slider with one reverse

00:49:032 (4) - move to x:264 y:116
00:57:909 - add circle with clap

Rhythm Change
00:58:369 (2) - remove slider
00:58:062 (1) - change into 1/1 beat slider
00:58:522 - add a 1/2 beat slider here

Rhythm Change
00:59:134 (1) - remove slider
00:59:134 - add circle with clap
00:59:593 (5) - remove slider
00:59:287 - add a 1/1 beat slider here
00:59:746 - add a 1/2 beat slider here

Rhythm Change
01:00:971 (1,2) - remove sliders
01:01:124 - add a 1/4 beat slider with one reverse here + NC
01:01:430 - add a 1/4 beat slider with one reverse
01:01:583 (7) - remove slider
01:01:736 - add circle
01:01:889 - add circle

Rhythm Change
01:08:165 (2) - remove slider
01:07:705 (1) - start this at 01:07:858 -
01:07:705 - add circle
01:08:318 - add a 1/2 beat slider here


Rhythm Change
01:10:154 (6) - move to 01:10:307 - , shorten this into a 1/2 beat slider.
01:10:154 - add circle


Rhythm Change
01:13:216 (8) - move to 01:13:369 - , shorten this into a 1/2 beat slider.
01:13:216 - add circle
01:13:828 - add circle


Note:Boxes involve some rhythm change. Somehow I don't agree with your rhythm there. :oops:



[Normal]
00:22:399 (4,1) - swap NC?
00:40:767 - add circle?
00:45:665 - add circle

Note:Well done :)

[Easy]
00:10:767 (1) - end spinner at 00:12:144 -
00:56:379 - add circle
01:06:175 (3,1) - swap NC?





[Other Suggestions]
Good map already, maybe revise rhythm in Hard and Insane a little to follow vocal more?

That's all I can find,good map. :) Sorry if I give bad mod :oops:
Good luck for rank :)
Topic Starter
bokito

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Insane]
00:03:879 (3) - move to x:200 y:72
00:32:654 (1,2,3,4) - change beat snap divisor to 1/2, and nudge Foward (Highlight and Press 'K') , so 00:32:654 (1) - is at 00:32:807 -
01:25:001 - end the spinner here? If follow add finish.

Note: Too hard for me!! But well done :)

[Hard]
00:02:807 (4) - add finish in second end
00:10:001 - add circle

Rhythm Change
00:13:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nudege these 1/2beats foward, delete 00:16:430 (1) -
00:13:981 - add circle here

00:21:022 (10) - change this into a 1/2 beat slider like the last one
00:22:399 - add circle
00:33:726 (3) - move to x:209 y:166

Rhythm Change
00:34:644 (1,2,3) - remove sliders
00:34:644 - add circle with whistle
00:34:797 - add circle
00:34:950 - add 1/1 beat slider
00:35:409 - add circle
00:35:562 - add 1/2 beat slider with one reverse

00:49:032 (4) - move to x:264 y:116
00:57:909 - add circle with clap

Rhythm Change
00:58:369 (2) - remove slider
00:58:062 (1) - change into 1/1 beat slider
00:58:522 - add a 1/2 beat slider here

Rhythm Change
00:59:134 (1) - remove slider
00:59:134 - add circle with clap
00:59:593 (5) - remove slider
00:59:287 - add a 1/1 beat slider here
00:59:746 - add a 1/2 beat slider here

Rhythm Change
01:00:971 (1,2) - remove sliders
01:01:124 - add a 1/4 beat slider with one reverse here + NC
01:01:430 - add a 1/4 beat slider with one reverse
01:01:583 (7) - remove slider
01:01:736 - add circle
01:01:889 - add circle

Rhythm Change
01:08:165 (2) - remove slider
01:07:705 (1) - start this at 01:07:858 -
01:07:705 - add circle
01:08:318 - add a 1/2 beat slider here


Rhythm Change
01:10:154 (6) - move to 01:10:307 - , shorten this into a 1/2 beat slider.
01:10:154 - add circle


Rhythm Change
01:13:216 (8) - move to 01:13:369 - , shorten this into a 1/2 beat slider.
01:13:216 - add circle
01:13:828 - add circle


Note:Boxes involve some rhythm change. Somehow I don't agree with your rhythm there. :oops:



[Normal]
00:22:399 (4,1) - swap NC?
00:40:767 - add circle?
00:45:665 - add circle

Note:Well done :)

[Easy]
00:10:767 (1) - end spinner at 00:12:144 -
00:56:379 - add circle
01:06:175 (3,1) - swap NC?





[Other Suggestions]
Good map already, maybe revise rhythm in Hard and Insane a little to follow vocal more?

That's all I can find,good map. :) Sorry if I give bad mod :oops:
Good luck for rank :)
all fixed thank you very much ^ ^
EnakoRin
[General]
  1. offset - 14
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:736 (2,3) - 太近
  2. 00:02:960 (3,4) - 太近
  3. 00:04:185 (4,5) - 太近
  4. 00:10:767 (1) - 加finish
  5. 00:17:807 (1,2) - 分开,或者把尾巴重叠在一起
  6. 00:20:256 (1,2) - 太远
  7. 00:25:154 (4) - 移动到332,56
  8. 00:26:379 (5) - 移动到184,178
  9. 00:27:297 - 加一个circle
  10. 00:28:522 (2,3) - 太远
  11. 00:37:399 - 加个finish的circle
  12. 00:37:705 (1,2) - 太近
  13. 00:47:807 (3,1) - 太近
  14. 01:04:644 (1) - EZ中不建议用这种短slider
  15. 01:10:767 (3,1) - 太远
  16. 01:11:685 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
  17. 01:17:807 (3,1) - 太远
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:256 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 00:06:481 (3) - 移动到136,189
  3. 00:22:705 (1) - 去掉NC
  4. 00:58:062 (5) - 建议移动到00:57:909 -,然后在00:58:522 -加一个circle
  5. 距离有点问题,开着DS检查一下
[JuDa's Muzukashii]
  1. Kiai aren't same with other diffs.
  2. Some Kiai timepoints aren't snaped. Use AImod to find them.
  3. AudioLeadIn aren't same with other diffs.
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. AudioLeadIn aren't same with other diffs.
  2. Tags aren't same with other diffs.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:603 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 01:19:032 - 冗余的时间线
  3. AR - 1
  4. 00:06:022 (2) - 第一个圈去掉finish
  5. 00:32:807 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
  6. 00:33:726 (3,1) - 没有重叠好
  7. 00:34:950 (3,5) - 没有重叠好
  8. 00:36:787 (2,3) - 没有重叠好
  9. 01:26:379 (3,4) - 没有重叠好
  10. 柑橘这个难度对于NM来说有点太难了
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:807 (1,2) - 没有重叠好
  2. 00:36:787 (2,3) - 没有重叠好
  3. 没有什么问题了
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
JUDYDANNY

Weiren wrote:

[General]
  1. offset - 14
[JuDa's Muzukashii]
  1. Kiai aren't same with other diffs.
  2. Some Kiai timepoints aren't snaped. Use AImod to find them.
  3. AudioLeadIn aren't same with other diffs.
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. AudioLeadIn aren't same with other diffs.
  2. Tags aren't same with other diffs.
----------
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
almost fixed. thx for mod~ :)
Topic Starter
bokito

Weiren wrote:

[General]
  1. offset - 14
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:736 (2,3) - 太近
  2. 00:02:960 (3,4) - 太近
  3. 00:04:185 (4,5) - 太近
  4. 00:10:767 (1) - 加finish
  5. 00:17:807 (1,2) - 分开,或者把尾巴重叠在一起
  6. 00:20:256 (1,2) - 太远
  7. 00:25:154 (4) - 移动到332,56
  8. 00:26:379 (5) - 移动到184,178
  9. 00:27:297 - 加一个circle
  10. 00:28:522 (2,3) - 太远
  11. 00:37:399 - 加个finish的circle
  12. 00:37:705 (1,2) - 太近
  13. 00:47:807 (3,1) - 太近
  14. 01:04:644 (1) - EZ中不建议用这种短slider
  15. 01:10:767 (3,1) - 太远
  16. 01:11:685 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
  17. 01:17:807 (3,1) - 太远
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:256 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 00:06:481 (3) - 移动到136,189
  3. 00:22:705 (1) - 去掉NC
  4. 00:58:062 (5) - 建议移动到00:57:909 -,然后在00:58:522 -加一个circle
  5. 距离有点问题,开着DS检查一下
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:603 - 冗余的时间线
  2. 01:19:032 - 冗余的时间线
  3. AR - 1
  4. 00:06:022 (2) - 第一个圈去掉finish
  5. 00:32:807 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
  6. 00:33:726 (3,1) - 没有重叠好
  7. 00:34:950 (3,5) - 没有重叠好
  8. 00:36:787 (2,3) - 没有重叠好
  9. 01:26:379 (3,4) - 没有重叠好
  10. 柑橘这个难度对于NM来说有点太难了
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:807 (1,2) - 没有重叠好
  2. 00:36:787 (2,3) - 没有重叠好
  3. 没有什么问题了
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
all fix (除了easy其中一个 < < ) hard > ar7 I think inappropriate
thank you very much
Behon
General:

Long sections have no hitsounds at all. Add some to spice things up a bit.

Easy:

00:17:793 (1): Add a finish at the start?
00:30:651 (2): Consider getting rid of the 3 circle at 00:31:263, changing this one to a slider, and ending it at 00:31:875.

Normal:

00:23:916 (4): Move this down a little to put it on the same horizontal line as 3.
00:49:018 (5): Consider changing this to a circle and moving the spinner up to start at 00:49:477.

Hard:

00:22:538 (1): Move this forward to start at 00:22:691. It sounds off the way it is.
01:26:824 (4): Maybe change this to a slider to go along with the held-out last note?
Topic Starter
bokito

Behonkiss wrote:

General:

Long sections have no hitsounds at all. Add some to spice things up a bit.

Easy:

00:17:793 (1): Add a finish at the start?
00:30:651 (2): Consider getting rid of the 3 circle at 00:31:263, changing this one to a slider, and ending it at 00:31:875.

Normal:

00:23:916 (4): Move this down a little to put it on the same horizontal line as 3.
00:49:018 (5): Consider changing this to a circle and moving the spinner up to start at 00:49:477.

Hard:

00:22:538 (1): Move this forward to start at 00:22:691. It sounds off the way it is.
01:26:824 (4): Maybe change this to a slider to go along with the held-out last note?
all fixed thank you your mod :)
mintong89
hi from lazy queue

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
有很多unsnapped note, 检查下

[Insane]
AR+1

00:13:494 (7,8) - 不是很美
00:14:106 (9) - 该NC的
00:19:004 (5) - ^
00:29:718 (4) - 这个不是很好, 建议换个1/2的slider 然后 00:30:038 - 加一个note

其他都找不到了orz..
GL~
Topic Starter
bokito

mintong89 wrote:

hi from lazy queue

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
有很多unsnapped note, 检查下

[Insane]
AR+1i don't use this

00:13:494 (7,8) - 不是很美
00:14:106 (9) - 该NC的
00:19:004 (5) - ^
00:29:718 (4) - 这个不是很好, 建议换个1/2的slider 然后 00:30:038 - 加一个note
fixed
其他都找不到了orz..
GL~
thank you
jonathanlfj
m4m~
unfortunately i do not have any experience in modding taiko, only thing i can do is check rankability ><
...直接上中文吧

黑色是建议
蓝色推荐改
红色unrankable

[General]
统一一下letterbox in breaks, 太鼓跟standard的不一样
Audio-leadin改成2000ms整
01:11:671 - 这里可以加一个kiai fountain (瞬间关掉然后在开启kiai)

[Easy]
OD-1
00:00:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对Easy来说rhythm有一些困难,试一下这个: 00:15:344 (3) - 左移一格
00:16:875 (2,3) - 折返flow对Easy来说难度太大,改成repeat slider吧
00:25:140 (4) - NC
00:37:385 - 这里有个重音,放个note?
00:48:712 (1,2,3) - 间距
01:04:324 (3) - 在这NC,取消01:04:630 (1) 的NC
01:11:671 (1,2) - 这种遮挡应该避免在Easy使用,换成01:10:140 (2,3) 那样的
01:21:467 (1,1,2,3,4) - 这里跟音乐有些不搭,试试这个:
[Normal]
00:04:171 (4) - 延长到00:05:089
00:12:895 (1) - slider头上加finish
00:28:202 (3) - 缩短到00:28:661
00:34:936 (4) - 为什么在蓝线上?延长到00:35:242 (1)
00:44:732 (2) - 在这里NC,去掉00:44:426 (1) 的NC
00:52:079 (1) - slider头上加finish
01:04:324 (5) - NC
01:21:773 (1) - 缩短到01:24:987

[Hard]
00:12:742 (6,7) - 这里的rhythm和NC都有一些混乱,试一下这个:00:17:640 (6,7) - 和上面的相似: 00:33:712 (3) - 完整的跟00:32:793 (1) 重叠
00:51:620 (4) - 这里最好跟vocal: 01:01:110 (1,2,3) - 这里也有些奇怪,改成这样: 01:11:671 (3) - NC
01:21:467 (1) - 延长到01:24:987
这个难度的节奏有些微妙,最好也检查一下NC的规律

[Insane]
00:04:171 (5) - NC
00:17:181 (3) - 既然在00:16:722 (1) 上用了NC那这里也应该有一个
00:25:599 (4,5,6,7) - 这跳的有一些太大了,试试这个: 00:40:446 - 加个note?
00:53:151 (5) - 这里可以更美观一些,试着不要跟00:52:997 (4) 重叠
01:01:263 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个stream可以过渡的更圆滑一些
01:17:793 (1,2) - 这里用一下reverse selection的话flow会更好一些:
话说Insane的音效下的比Easy Normal要好很多,建议你使用grumd的音效复制器(t/131540)把Insane的音效复制到其他难度里,这样会更好听一些~

我实在是太鼓无力,所以就这些了,还有一些整体节奏的问题就需要你自己去解决了. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
bokito

jonathanlfj wrote:

m4m~
unfortunately i do not have any experience in modding taiko, only thing i can do is check rankability ><
...直接上中文吧

黑色是建议
蓝色推荐改
红色unrankable

[General]
统一一下letterbox in breaks, 太鼓跟standard的不一样
Audio-leadin改成2000ms整
01:11:671 - 这里可以加一个kiai fountain (瞬间关掉然后在开启kiai)

[Easy]
OD-1
00:00:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对Easy来说rhythm有一些困难,试一下这个: 还是这个节奏啊 我之前用过 感觉不太好所以换了 既然你这么说 我就试试吧
00:15:344 (3) - 左移一格
00:16:875 (2,3) - 折返flow对Easy来说难度太大,改成repeat slider吧
00:25:140 (4) - NC
00:37:385 - 这里有个重音,放个note?
00:48:712 (1,2,3) - 间距
01:04:324 (3) - 在这NC,取消01:04:630 (1) 的NC
01:11:671 (1,2) - 这种遮挡应该避免在Easy使用,换成01:10:140 (2,3) 那样的
01:21:467 (1,1,2,3,4) - 这里跟音乐有些不搭,试试这个:all fixed
[Normal]
00:04:171 (4) - 延长到00:05:089
00:12:895 (1) - slider头上加finish
00:28:202 (3) - 缩短到00:28:661
00:34:936 (4) - 为什么在蓝线上?延长到00:35:242 (1)
00:44:732 (2) - 在这里NC,去掉00:44:426 (1) 的NC
00:52:079 (1) - slider头上加finish
01:04:324 (5) - NC
01:21:773 (1) - 缩短到01:24:987
all fixed
[Hard]
00:12:742 (6,7) - 这里的rhythm和NC都有一些混乱,试一下这个:00:17:640 (6,7) - 和上面的相似: 00:33:712 (3) - 完整的跟00:32:793 (1) 重叠
00:51:620 (4) - 这里最好跟vocal: 01:01:110 (1,2,3) - 这里也有些奇怪,改成这样: 01:11:671 (3) - NC
01:21:467 (1) - 延长到01:24:987
这个难度的节奏有些微妙,最好也检查一下NC的规律
all fixed
[Insane]
00:04:171 (5) - NC
00:17:181 (3) - 既然在00:16:722 (1) 上用了NC那这里也应该有一个
00:25:599 (4,5,6,7) - 这跳的有一些太大了,试试这个: 00:40:446 - 加个note?
00:53:151 (5) - 这里可以更美观一些,试着不要跟00:52:997 (4) 重叠
01:01:263 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个stream可以过渡的更圆滑一些
01:17:793 (1,2) - 这里用一下reverse selection的话flow会更好一些: all fixed
话说Insane的音效下的比Easy Normal要好很多,建议你使用grumd的音效复制器(t/131540)把Insane的音效复制到其他难度里,这样会更好听一些~

我实在是太鼓无力,所以就这些了,还有一些整体节奏的问题就需要你自己去解决了. Good Luck~
thank you
原来会中文啊 强烈建议modding que 加上中文< <
Guy
Hi! from my m4m queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. fine.

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:181 (2,3) - like this rhythm and place?

  2. 00:10:446 (7) - i don't like this slider shape. because 00:10:140 (6,7) - both is not fit flow.
  3. 00:15:191 (1) - hm, I guess that you trying to fit the vocal. I thought this method is good.


    00:15:191 - remove slider and add circle.
    00:15:344 - add 1/1 slider
    00:15:804 - remove slider and add circle.
    00:15:957 - add circle

    this pattern is really fit to song. try it!
  4. 00:25:753 (5) - remove clap. sound weird for me.
  5. 00:26:059 (7) - same above. finish is not fit.instead add clap.
  6. 00:40:446 (8) - remove this note? i think that don't need sound here. but up to you.
  7. 00:45:804 (10) - add finish of slider start.
  8. 00:55:599 (7) - ^ same point 00:54:528 (4,5) -
  9. 00:58:048 (1) - add finish of slider start?
  10. 01:04:324 (1,3,5) - add finish of slider start? same point 00:54:528 (4,5) -
  11. 01:19:936 (4) - 1 grid down.
  12. 01:25:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - this star placement is little ugly. try this code.

    254,78,85599,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    190,285,85753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    322,285,85906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    147,158,86059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    365,158,86212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  13. 01:26:824 (2) - remove whstle and clap.

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:793 (4,5) - oh, really not fit this rhythm ;_; try my suggestion!


    00:02:793 - remove slider and add note
    00:02:946 - add 1/1 slider
    00:03:406 - add 1/1 slider
  2. 00:07:079 (4,5) - not fit rhythm to song. like this?

  3. 00:18:099 (2,3) - little overlapping.
  4. 00:22:232 - add note on the 00:22:385 (5) -
  5. 00:25:753 (5) - remove clap?
  6. 00:30:957 (3) - bule line is weird. changed 1/2 slider and add note 00:31:416 - here.
  7. 00:37:691 (1) - please 1.2x distance.
  8. 00:54:375 (4) - strong sound is 00:54:528 - you should here add some object.
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
bokito

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my m4m queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. fine.

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:181 (2,3) - like this rhythm and place?

  2. 00:10:446 (7) - i don't like this slider shape. because 00:10:140 (6,7) - both is not fit flow.
  3. 00:15:191 (1) - hm, I guess that you trying to fit the vocal. I thought this method is good.


    00:15:191 - remove slider and add circle.
    00:15:344 - add 1/1 slider
    00:15:804 - remove slider and add circle.
    00:15:957 - add circle

    this pattern is really fit to song. try it!
  4. 00:25:753 (5) - remove clap. sound weird for me.
  5. 00:26:059 (7) - same above. finish is not fit.instead add clap.
  6. 00:40:446 (8) - remove this note? i think that don't need sound here. but up to you.
  7. 00:45:804 (10) - add finish of slider start.
  8. 00:55:599 (7) - ^ same point 00:54:528 (4,5) -
  9. 00:58:048 (1) - add finish of slider start?
  10. 01:04:324 (1,3,5) - add finish of slider start? same point 00:54:528 (4,5) -
  11. 01:19:936 (4) - 1 grid down.
  12. 01:25:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - this star placement is little ugly. try this code.

    254,78,85599,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    190,285,85753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    322,285,85906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    147,158,86059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    365,158,86212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  13. 01:26:824 (2) - remove whstle and clap.
Insane all fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:793 (4,5) - oh, really not fit this rhythm ;_; try my suggestion!


    00:02:793 - remove slider and add note
    00:02:946 - add 1/1 slider
    00:03:406 - add 1/1 slider
  2. 00:07:079 (4,5) - not fit rhythm to song. like this?

  3. 00:18:099 (2,3) - little overlapping.
  4. 00:22:232 - add note on the 00:22:385 (5) -
  5. 00:25:753 (5) - remove clap?
  6. 00:30:957 (3) - bule line is weird. changed 1/2 slider and add note 00:31:416 - here.
  7. 00:37:691 (1) - please 1.2x distance.
  8. 00:54:375 (4) - strong sound is 00:54:528 - you should here add some object.
I don't know how to add object (I add a 1/2 slider and circle}
Hard fixed
Good luck :)
Thank you
Coro
M4M~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[JuDa's Muzukashii]
delete unnecessary timing points (flat 80% hitsound volume should be fine)
00:35:702 - d
01:01:416 (271,272) - add finish
01:11:365 - d

[JuDa's Oni]
delete unnecessary timing points (flat 80% hitsound volume should be fine)
no problems~

Very good map~
Good luck for rank~
JUDYDANNY

CoroQuetz wrote:

M4M~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[JuDa's Muzukashii]
delete unnecessary timing points (flat 80% hitsound volume should be fine)
00:35:702 - d fixed~
01:01:416 (271,272) - add finish fixed~, and 00:51:773 (222) - add finish
01:11:365 - d nope

[JuDa's Oni]
delete unnecessary timing points (flat 80% hitsound volume should be fine)
no problems~

Very good map~
Good luck for rank~
OK~. Volume is all same 80%.
thanks for mod~ ・ω・/
Banana
大概是from in-game PM

[Insane]

空拍使用
00:17:487 - 这里的后面跟了一个空拍 然后我就感觉 00:22:385 - 这边附近也应该有一个空拍 至于空拍怎么用自行体会吧反正各个mapper之间风格也不一样找两个自己打着舒服的mapper看看怎么空舒服 潜意识里面一连到底估计是空拍姿势不对
00:34:171 (5) - 不想空拍其实有一个方法 那就是多用1/1,而且这边又是慢速part 考虑删了后面两个圈然后加折返 排列可能会需要大手术 不过现在节奏有点1/2放满的感觉 建议打图的时候顺便学习一下慢速段的姿势
整体排列
00:16:569 (7) - 这边这个梗我还是比较喜欢的 不过现在这样左下角就完全是空的 给我的感觉是这个梗还有提升空间(虽然这一条不是所有人都关系但是我有强迫症所以..)
00:04:477 (2,3) - 基于同样理由这两个滑条我推荐排到右下角 如果有想法还可以顺便和(1)一道弄一个三角形pattern什么的 整体排列你做的还行就是感觉做的时候没这方面的意识所以有必要自行check一遍 我也就举这两个例子好了
技巧
00:02:946 (1) - 有对称迹象的滑条尽量用快捷键 ctrl+cvhg按一遍什么的 注意改音效
00:07:079 (2,3,4) - 现在的状况是(2,3)中心对称(4)多余 要不ctrl+cvhj 00:06:314 (5) 或者这边三个滑条排个转120°的风扇pattern (也许应该归类到整体排列.. 嘛算了)
00:17:181 (1,2) - 这个是一个元件吧 可以考虑每复制一次edit->rotate一下
过渡
00:32:793 (1) - 这边有速度变化 嗯 然后间距这么小是在考验读图吗 不能指望combocolor的提示作用的..
00:36:620 (1) - 这边的间距..

好了 以上是整体吐槽

00:19:018 (1) - 虽然我个人不太讨厌直的pattern 不过可能会给人偷懒的感觉 建议是这样 然后和后面00:20:702 - 同方向会显得有水平一点(咦
00:21:314 - 个人推荐这边こころ用圈 因为vocal时间比较短滑条显得..粘?(没词了
00:30:344 - 这边有新的音轨 如果1/2放满 圈和滑条的变化、stack的使用应该跟另一条音轨 比如00:30:344 - 这个地方的(某乐器不过我不知道叫什么)音你用的是滑条开头 而00:31:110 - 这个变成了滑条结尾 所以个人建议是00:30:651 (1,2) - 这个stack应该移到(3)的滑条头上 然后用滑条头和stack的圈来跟某乐器 后面还有两个音自己跟吧我懒得码更多字了..(没看懂尽管问..
00:32:793 (1) - 建议是尾巴另起一个1/1的滑条 这边是跟vocal的对吧 长音作为滑条结尾略违和
慢速段这一段问题其实还能挑但是我不太清楚是风格问题还是确实不合适所以不敢挑 个人感觉违和感比较强 可能还是用了kiai之类部分的做图理念什么的.. 空拍那一条里面建议过说要学习姿势..嗯
01:12:895 (1,2) - 这两个滑条建议换一下顺序
01:21:161 (1,2) - 前面两个三连stack了这边就是四个圈 反正可以排一个这样的pattern什么的 (纵向对称什么的也好

[Hard]
00:03:865 (1) - 绕圈圈又overlap回来是闹咋样嘛 建议像这样跳大一点
00:07:691 (5) - 间距
00:26:365 (7) - 三角形排出来啦..overlap不好看 (hard没啥大问题我就挑细节好了
00:28:048 (6) - 一图流
00:31:110 - 吐槽对象同I难度 这个时间点有个音 这边可能需要改一会儿 不想动的话这个节奏也行 于是我就改为吐槽(5,6)和(7)stack好了(slap
00:33:559 (2,4) - 对称的话 这边两个圈得往左下移一点
00:37:997 (2) - 这一段的ds请与00:34:630附近保持一致
00:51:008 - 这个鼓不跟吗,这里一个1/2滑条什么的..而且起手就是折返跳有点难了
00:53:457 (1) - 这边几个红线起手滑条其实效果不好 vocal在白线开始的来的 kiai里面也有一些类似这种原因的违和...一般不是vocal在红线或者接空拍都少用红线起手1/2滑条
01:11:059 (1) - 间距
01:25:599 - 都最后几个note了 包好看点 然后最后一个clap删了

[Normal]
节奏整体过关 排列略不工整 在Normal和Easy, 00:07:691 (1) - 这样的overlap都应该避免 00:08:916 (3) - 这样用的比较正常的会被挑不过可以留着
00:49:324 - 加note
01:04:324 (1) - 没理由向下弯这么多
01:19:018 (1) - 关grid snap修blanket 反正就是和前一个滑条之间间距保持一致吧
01:25:753 (1) - 就两个滑条stack啥...

[Easy]
整体偏难
0:02:946 (3) - 这样的overlap肯定没权限会放你过...理由估计是太难了
00:05:242 (5) - 节奏就难了间距还不一致
嘛 个人感觉这个难度从节奏开始就已经不是easy的路子了..节奏再简化一下排列关grid snap开ds无脑绕圈到底就行我就不看了(从来都不看低难度的咱码了两行字 才不是偷懒呢

好嘛 个人感觉Easy还缺点功夫 多找几个人看一下 自己修一下Insane的慢速段和Normal的排列这两个难度就差不多了 Hard自行check 嗯 总之加油
blissfulyoshi
Easy: (In general you should never have your distance snap such that notes are touching. It is aesthetically unpleasing)
00:00:651 (1,3) - Why are you putting 3 in the same location as one, and not even a direct overlap. This is both ugly and boring
00:10:140 (4,5) - place upward a bit so that 3's slider curve points directly at the notes
00:12:895 (1,3) - same as 00:00:651 (1,3)
00:19:018 (2,1) - please avoid overlaps like this they are aesthetically unpleasing (for examples, 00:12:895 (1,2,3)
00:28:508 (3) - probably will look better if it was vertically aligned with 00:27:589 (2)
00:44:426 (1) - why did you not align it with 00:44:120 (4)?
00:46:875 (2,3) - another bad overlap, don't let the edge of the next slider overlap with the edge of previous slider unless you are doing a full crossover
I think you get the general trend of aligning and fixing overlaps, so I am just going to skip similar errors
01:10:140 (2,3) - don't do patterns like this unless the notes all start at the same place or there is a bunch of small patterns to form a fan/arch patterns
01:19:018 (1,2) - weak curves and unbalanced S shapes are terrible looking sliders, please remake these sliders

Combo modding:
00:02:946 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 2 tall white tick pattern
00:15:344 (3,1) - new combo to be consistent with 00:25:140 (1) and 2 tall white tick pattern
00:42:283 (2) - new combo to follow lyrics
00:47:793 (3,1) - remove 3s new combo and add a new combo to 1 to follow lyrics
In general, you combo patterns seem sort of random, and you should try to make them consistent

At this point, I want to just remap Easy since the diff is fairly bad imo. Aesthetically, this map looks terrible, and should be fixed soon, not to mention ideas of flow that I did not really mention in my mod.

Normal:
Pretty much the same issues as Easy, but to a lesser degree
00:06:467 (3,1) - overlap
00:08:916 (3,4) - ^
00:12:895 (1) - make slider look nicer, weak curves are aesthetically unpleasing
00:18:099 (2) - it doesn't look that great for a straight line to point toward a slider that doesn't transition off the slider's direction/flow
00:36:161 (3,5) - the slider whistles don't sound that great
00:56:671 (4) - weak curve + overlap with 00:57:895 (5)...

The middle of the map was not bad, but the rest of it suffers the same problems as easy, so please try to learn from what I said in Easy.

Hard: (Since this map is better than the previous 2, I am going to mod it with a slightly higher standard)
00:16:263 (6,1) - why is there a jump here?
00:17:487 (5,1) - why is there an antijump here?
00:28:967 (2,3) - more random jumps
00:34:477 (4,1) - transitioning to even softer sections with a jump... + hard to read behind the repeat
00:51:926 (5) - back and forth jumps of sorts followed by an antijump, pls don't do this
00:56:212 (1,2) - make parallel/ put them in a nicer arrangement
01:02:640 (1,2) - overlap T_T
01:03:253 (3,4) - have 4 blanket 3 better pls
01:03:253 (3,1) - move overlaps
01:04:630 (2,3) - have 2 blanket 3
01:05:702 (5,1) - overlap
Okay I'm to stop pointing out these aesthetics. You really just need to comb your map and fix all of them pls :?:

Insane:
To be honest, I don't even want to do a real mod of this diff. Random jumps + random antijumps + plenty of hidden notes + more (just look at 00:27:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ). Did you ever try playing this diff? I would never recommend anyone to play this.

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It shows pretty obviously that this is your first map. There are enough mistakes and annoyances in the map to make most people unhappy while playing. I would seriously recommend looking at cleaning up the appearance of your maps and play some maps you like. You have some interesting patterns, but your execution leaves much to be desired. Remake parts of your map, get a few more good mods, and lets you see how far you progress. You have potential, but you be willing to put in the effort to make that potential sprout.
Topic Starter
bokito

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy: (In general you should never have your distance snap such that notes are touching. It is aesthetically unpleasing)
00:00:651 (1,3) - Why are you putting 3 in the same location as one, and not even a direct overlap. This is both ugly and boringfixed
00:10:140 (4,5) - place upward a bit so that 3's slider curve points directly at the notesfixed
00:12:895 (1,3) - same as 00:00:651 (1,3)fixed
00:19:018 (2,1) - please avoid overlaps like this they are aesthetically unpleasing (for examples, 00:12:895 (1,2,3)fixed
00:28:508 (3) - probably will look better if it was vertically aligned with 00:27:589 (2)fixed
00:44:426 (1) - why did you not align it with 00:44:120 (4)?
00:46:875 (2,3) - another bad overlap, don't let the edge of the next slider overlap with the edge of previous slider unless you are doing a full crossoverfixed
I think you get the general trend of aligning and fixing overlaps, so I am just going to skip similar errors
01:10:140 (2,3) - don't do patterns like this unless the notes all start at the same place or there is a bunch of small patterns to form a fan/arch patternsfixed
01:19:018 (1,2) - weak curves and unbalanced S shapes are terrible looking sliders, please remake these sliders
fixed
Combo modding:
00:02:946 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 2 tall white tick patternfixed
00:15:344 (3,1) - new combo to be consistent with 00:25:140 (1) and 2 tall white tick patternfixed
00:42:283 (2) - new combo to follow lyricsfixed
00:47:793 (3,1) - remove 3s new combo and add a new combo to 1 to follow lyricsfixed
In general, you combo patterns seem sort of random, and you should try to make them consistent

At this point, I want to just remap Easy since the diff is fairly bad imo. Aesthetically, this map looks terrible, and should be fixed soon, not to mention ideas of flow that I did not really mention in my mod.

Normal:
Pretty much the same issues as Easy, but to a lesser degree
00:06:467 (3,1) - overlapfixed
00:08:916 (3,4) - ^fixed
00:12:895 (1) - make slider look nicer, weak curves are aesthetically unpleasingfixed
00:18:099 (2) - it doesn't look that great for a straight line to point toward a slider that doesn't transition off the slider's direction/flowfixed
00:36:161 (3,5) - the slider whistles don't sound that greatfixed
00:56:671 (4) - weak curve + overlap with 00:57:895 (5)...fixed

The middle of the map was not bad, but the rest of it suffers the same problems as easy, so please try to learn from what I said in Easy.

Hard: (Since this map is better than the previous 2, I am going to mod it with a slightly higher standard)
00:16:263 (6,1) - why is there a jump here?< < ok I remove the jump
00:17:487 (5,1) - why is there an antijump here?ok remove antijump
00:28:967 (2,3) - more random jumps
00:34:477 (4,1) - transitioning to even softer sections with a jump... + hard to read behind the repeatfixed
00:51:926 (5) - back and forth jumps of sorts followed by an antijump, pls don't do thisfixed
00:56:212 (1,2) - make parallel/ put them in a nicer arrangementfixed
01:02:640 (1,2) - overlap T_Tfixed
01:03:253 (3,4) - have 4 blanket 3 better plsfixed
01:03:253 (3,1) - move overlapsfixed
01:04:630 (2,3) - have 2 blanket 3fixed
01:05:702 (5,1) - overlapfixed
Okay I'm to stop pointing out these aesthetics. You really just need to comb your map and fix all of them pls :?:

Insane:
To be honest, I don't even want to do a real mod of this diff. Random jumps + random antijumps + plenty of hidden notes + more (just look at 00:27:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ). Did you ever try playing this diff? I would never recommend anyone to play this.
But I think this 196BMP song it have some jump is
ordinary

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It shows pretty obviously that this is your first map. There are enough mistakes and annoyances in the map to make most people unhappy while playing. I would seriously recommend looking at cleaning up the appearance of your maps and play some maps you like. You have some interesting patterns, but your execution leaves much to be desired. Remake parts of your map, get a few more good mods, and lets you see how far you progress. You have potential, but you be willing to put in the effort to make that potential sprout.

Thank you your mod
Topic Starter
bokito

Banana wrote:

大概是from in-game PM

[Insane]

空拍使用
00:17:487 - 这里的后面跟了一个空拍 然后我就感觉 00:22:385 - 这边附近也应该有一个空拍 至于空拍怎么用自行体会吧反正各个mapper之间风格也不一样找两个自己打着舒服的mapper看看怎么空舒服 潜意识里面一连到底估计是空拍姿势不对
00:34:171 (5) - 不想空拍其实有一个方法 那就是多用1/1,而且这边又是慢速part 考虑删了后面两个圈然后加折返 排列可能会需要大手术 不过现在节奏有点1/2放满的感觉 建议打图的时候顺便学习一下慢速段的姿势
整体排列
00:16:569 (7) - 这边这个梗我还是比较喜欢的 不过现在这样左下角就完全是空的 给我的感觉是这个梗还有提升空间(虽然这一条不是所有人都关系但是我有强迫症所以..)
00:04:477 (2,3) - 基于同样理由这两个滑条我推荐排到右下角 如果有想法还可以顺便和(1)一道弄一个三角形pattern什么的 整体排列你做的还行就是感觉做的时候没这方面的意识所以有必要自行check一遍 我也就举这两个例子好了
技巧
00:02:946 (1) - 有对称迹象的滑条尽量用快捷键 ctrl+cvhg按一遍什么的 注意改音效
00:07:079 (2,3,4) - 现在的状况是(2,3)中心对称(4)多余 要不ctrl+cvhj 00:06:314 (5) 或者这边三个滑条排个转120°的风扇pattern (也许应该归类到整体排列.. 嘛算了)
00:17:181 (1,2) - 这个是一个元件吧 可以考虑每复制一次edit->rotate一下
过渡
00:32:793 (1) - 这边有速度变化 嗯 然后间距这么小是在考验读图吗 不能指望combocolor的提示作用的..
00:36:620 (1) - 这边的间距..

好了 以上是整体吐槽

00:19:018 (1) - 虽然我个人不太讨厌直的pattern 不过可能会给人偷懒的感觉 建议是这样 然后和后面00:20:702 - 同方向会显得有水平一点(咦
00:21:314 - 个人推荐这边こころ用圈 因为vocal时间比较短滑条显得..粘?(没词了
00:30:344 - 这边有新的音轨 如果1/2放满 圈和滑条的变化、stack的使用应该跟另一条音轨 比如00:30:344 - 这个地方的(某乐器不过我不知道叫什么)音你用的是滑条开头 而00:31:110 - 这个变成了滑条结尾 所以个人建议是00:30:651 (1,2) - 这个stack应该移到(3)的滑条头上 然后用滑条头和stack的圈来跟某乐器 后面还有两个音自己跟吧我懒得码更多字了..(没看懂尽管问..
00:32:793 (1) - 建议是尾巴另起一个1/1的滑条 这边是跟vocal的对吧 长音作为滑条结尾略违和
慢速段这一段问题其实还能挑但是我不太清楚是风格问题还是确实不合适所以不敢挑 个人感觉违和感比较强 可能还是用了kiai之类部分的做图理念什么的.. 空拍那一条里面建议过说要学习姿势..嗯
01:12:895 (1,2) - 这两个滑条建议换一下顺序
01:21:161 (1,2) - 前面两个三连stack了这边就是四个圈 反正可以排一个这样的pattern什么的 (纵向对称什么的也好

[Hard]
00:03:865 (1) - 绕圈圈又overlap回来是闹咋样嘛 建议像这样跳大一点
00:07:691 (5) - 间距
00:26:365 (7) - 三角形排出来啦..overlap不好看 (hard没啥大问题我就挑细节好了
00:28:048 (6) - 一图流
00:31:110 - 吐槽对象同I难度 这个时间点有个音 这边可能需要改一会儿 不想动的话这个节奏也行 于是我就改为吐槽(5,6)和(7)stack好了(slap
00:33:559 (2,4) - 对称的话 这边两个圈得往左下移一点
00:37:997 (2) - 这一段的ds请与00:34:630附近保持一致
00:51:008 - 这个鼓不跟吗,这里一个1/2滑条什么的..而且起手就是折返跳有点难了
00:53:457 (1) - 这边几个红线起手滑条其实效果不好 vocal在白线开始的来的 kiai里面也有一些类似这种原因的违和...一般不是vocal在红线或者接空拍都少用红线起手1/2滑条
01:11:059 (1) - 间距
01:25:599 - 都最后几个note了 包好看点 然后最后一个clap删了

[Normal]
节奏整体过关 排列略不工整 在Normal和Easy, 00:07:691 (1) - 这样的overlap都应该避免 00:08:916 (3) - 这样用的比较正常的会被挑不过可以留着
00:49:324 - 加note
01:04:324 (1) - 没理由向下弯这么多
01:19:018 (1) - 关grid snap修blanket 反正就是和前一个滑条之间间距保持一致吧
01:25:753 (1) - 就两个滑条stack啥...

[Easy]
整体偏难
0:02:946 (3) - 这样的overlap肯定没权限会放你过...理由估计是太难了
00:05:242 (5) - 节奏就难了间距还不一致
嘛 个人感觉这个难度从节奏开始就已经不是easy的路子了..节奏再简化一下排列关grid snap开ds无脑绕圈到底就行我就不看了(从来都不看低难度的咱码了两行字 才不是偷懒呢

好嘛 个人感觉Easy还缺点功夫 多找几个人看一下 自己修一下Insane的慢速段和Normal的排列这两个难度就差不多了 Hard自行check 嗯 总之加油
都看完了 能改的都改了 有些地方还是没改
ins开头4点和hard开头几点都是没改< <
总之谢谢额 :)
Gloria Guard
Hi bokito (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m :)


[Easy]

00:01:722 (1,2,1,2) hmm.. i think this pattern shape blanket is better
00:06:161 (1,2,3) This is pattern is bad flow shape.. i suggest this pattern shape flow
00:10:446 (5,1) i don't this beat note and spinner.. why spinner start point 00:10:753 ?
i think (5) note remove and spinner move 00:10:446 is better
00:16:875 (3) hmm.. i think this slider (1) slider head hidden.. i think this slider Ctrl+G is better
flow and shape
00:54:222 ^ add note
01:11:365 ^
01:11:671 (1,2) why this slider overlap... This is pattern really difficult
i recommend this
01:16:263 add note
01:16:569 (1,2) it's too really bad overlap pattern.. and difficult.
i recommend this
01:26:671 (1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern beat.. awkward imo so (4) note remove and (3) slider remove and add note
so 01:26:824 add spinner


[Normal]

00:00:651 (1,2,3) i suggest this pattern shape
00:08:916 (3) why this note is stack here.. it's not beginner pattern and read is hard imo.
00:12:895 (1) hmm.. this is slider unbalance point i think gird level 4 and move x:364 y:56
is better
00:19:936 (4) This is slider beat really awkward you change this beat 00:19:936 add note and 00:20:242 add 1/4 slider
is better beat imo
00:23:916 (4) spacing error move x:372 y:208
00:26:059 (7) This is too spacing error move x:76 y:332
00:29:426 (3,1,2,3) i don't understand.. this pattern beat.. i recommend change this beat
00:42:283 (2,3,4) i think this pattern not very good overlap.. i suggest this pattern blanket is better imo
00:49:477 (1) This is spinner end why 00:51:314 ? i think this spinner end 00:51:008 imo
00:57:895 (5) please.. this is slider not stack.. really confused.. this slider
01:02:487 (1,2,3,4) This is pattern beat really awkward.. you change this beat recommend


[Hard]

There are many that are not suited for the beat and you use this beat, people read is difficult and confusing
so some parts are recommended for remapping

00:02:946 (4,5) hmm.. You intended? i don't understand this pattern spacing.. i recommend this pattern
spacing is constant please.
00:06:543 (3,2) Overlap. (2) note move x:184 y:284
00:12:895 (1,2,3) This is pattern.. really bad flow.. and beat i suggest this pattenr beat and flow
Beat : flow :


[Insane]

Fine






You more time to look for patterns and it is necessary to improve, and you once again to view and modify their own difficulty level is recommended.
because you're still on the beat and the flow is very bad, and practice is required, i hope to have good results.^^



Good luck~
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