Hey!
[General:]
Romanised Title: Piano cencerto NO.1 Scream -> Piano Concerto No.1 "Scream"
Offset: 337
The crash sample are too loud at 100% volume. They are really standing out to much.
If the BG image is related to this song add Code Geass to tags.
[LV.9:]
Looks harder than level 9 to me honestly. Since the timing of the notes is a bit difficult in this song too maybe lower the OD for this diff even more?
There are many hard places in this diff for beginners and i will point them out and give my opinion to it so you can think about chaning it maybe.
00:05:791 - This part right at the beginning doesnt look very noob friendly to me. The change from (5) to (46) allready seems a bit hard and shortly after in only a 16th interval the note on the first column. I think most beginners will trip here the first time on (1). Alternatively skip the stream and convert (5) to a hold.
00:20:337 - Since the release requires exact timing aswell you shouldnt use such short sliders in the easiest diff atleast i think. But generally i think they are fine. I tried it and 300max them all the first attempt.
00:25:246 - This note should be deleted. The way it is now it looks like an ascending piano pattern but this note does not sound like that it's more of a ghost note. Removing this note will also strengthen the connotation of the following notes you put.
00:34:518 - For playability i suggest to maintain the stream like it would continue normally and move the next hold note to 5th column. It plays very nice and intuitive and is beginner friendly. It goes well with the next part aswell. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775905
00:48:246 - Better reorder this. It felt a bit awkward/out of place while testing. I really suggest to turn those notes into a minijack! It is fitting and goes very well with 00:54:064 - and 00:55:518 - . Also it is fun and should not be hard since it is on even keys on 2 hands. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775909
01:21:427 - Remove this hold? Looks a bit out of place.
01:29:791 - Hold should start here. Same as 01:28:337 -. 01:30:155 - Replace this hold with a note.
01:38:518 - Suggest to map something different.
[LV.16:]
00:53:783 - Add crash
00:56:692 - This sound sample is too loud here. Better change it to 60% volume.
01:35:601 (95601|6) - This note is better at column 5 instead
01:54:783 (114783|5) - Move this one to column 7?
[LV.23:]
00:27:055 - Such a wide progression is not hinted by the music in my opinion. Do you like this more? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775934
00:37:055 - The trills on column 6 and 7 are going for too long. 00:37:419 (37419|6,37783|6) - Better move those 2 notes to column 5, has a nice feel to it.
00:42:328 (42328|0) - This note belongs at column 5. It's the same piano note as the previous there.
00:42:601 - Move those 4 notes here more to the right side? To give it a bit of a change.
00:44:828 (44828|0) - Delete this one.
00:54:055 - This is too hard.
01:13:783 (73783|1) - This note feels weird to play. It kind of goes against the motion.
01:28:874 - Suggesting to order this part like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775947
01:48:692 - Suggesting to keep the holds in same columns for 2 beats and then change it up so its not too much random, to make it a bit easier.
[LV.31:]
00:11:601 - Move one of those notes to first column?
00:37:055 (37055|6,37419|6,37601|6) - Move those 3 to 5th column?
00:42:965 - Need to add a not here
00:53:783 - The music is really suggesting a jackhammer here
01:04:328 (64328|3) - This note is better on column 6?
01:41:783 (101783|4) - ^ on column 7?
Good luck! Nice map again
[General:]
Romanised Title: Piano cencerto NO.1 Scream -> Piano Concerto No.1 "Scream"
Offset: 337
The crash sample are too loud at 100% volume. They are really standing out to much.
If the BG image is related to this song add Code Geass to tags.
[LV.9:]
Looks harder than level 9 to me honestly. Since the timing of the notes is a bit difficult in this song too maybe lower the OD for this diff even more?
There are many hard places in this diff for beginners and i will point them out and give my opinion to it so you can think about chaning it maybe.
00:05:791 - This part right at the beginning doesnt look very noob friendly to me. The change from (5) to (46) allready seems a bit hard and shortly after in only a 16th interval the note on the first column. I think most beginners will trip here the first time on (1). Alternatively skip the stream and convert (5) to a hold.
00:20:337 - Since the release requires exact timing aswell you shouldnt use such short sliders in the easiest diff atleast i think. But generally i think they are fine. I tried it and 300max them all the first attempt.
00:25:246 - This note should be deleted. The way it is now it looks like an ascending piano pattern but this note does not sound like that it's more of a ghost note. Removing this note will also strengthen the connotation of the following notes you put.
00:34:518 - For playability i suggest to maintain the stream like it would continue normally and move the next hold note to 5th column. It plays very nice and intuitive and is beginner friendly. It goes well with the next part aswell. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775905
00:48:246 - Better reorder this. It felt a bit awkward/out of place while testing. I really suggest to turn those notes into a minijack! It is fitting and goes very well with 00:54:064 - and 00:55:518 - . Also it is fun and should not be hard since it is on even keys on 2 hands. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775909
01:21:427 - Remove this hold? Looks a bit out of place.
01:29:791 - Hold should start here. Same as 01:28:337 -. 01:30:155 - Replace this hold with a note.
01:38:518 - Suggest to map something different.
[LV.16:]
00:53:783 - Add crash
00:56:692 - This sound sample is too loud here. Better change it to 60% volume.
01:35:601 (95601|6) - This note is better at column 5 instead
01:54:783 (114783|5) - Move this one to column 7?
[LV.23:]
00:27:055 - Such a wide progression is not hinted by the music in my opinion. Do you like this more? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775934
00:37:055 - The trills on column 6 and 7 are going for too long. 00:37:419 (37419|6,37783|6) - Better move those 2 notes to column 5, has a nice feel to it.
00:42:328 (42328|0) - This note belongs at column 5. It's the same piano note as the previous there.
00:42:601 - Move those 4 notes here more to the right side? To give it a bit of a change.
00:44:828 (44828|0) - Delete this one.
00:54:055 - This is too hard.
01:13:783 (73783|1) - This note feels weird to play. It kind of goes against the motion.
01:28:874 - Suggesting to order this part like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/775947
01:48:692 - Suggesting to keep the holds in same columns for 2 beats and then change it up so its not too much random, to make it a bit easier.
[LV.31:]
00:11:601 - Move one of those notes to first column?
00:37:055 (37055|6,37419|6,37601|6) - Move those 3 to 5th column?
00:42:965 - Need to add a not here
00:53:783 - The music is really suggesting a jackhammer here
01:04:328 (64328|3) - This note is better on column 6?
01:41:783 (101783|4) - ^ on column 7?
Good luck! Nice map again