Shizuku- wrote:

Wow, congrats!

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Congratulation on your first rank Danny ~ \:D/

DarkVortex wrote:

NICE!!! you finally made it

Damn, i remember when you first submitted that

Angelo wrote:

Finally rank ! Congratulations for your first qualified map !

Lanturn wrote:

wow wow Congrats Danny! <3

I'm really glad to see all your effort is finally paying off! Congrats on your first!

MoodyRPG wrote:

One of the best songs from Foo Fighters !

Thanks for mapping this song, congratz

-[Koinuri] wrote:

Coongratz Danny!

Tari wrote:

Greetings Danny~

After some internal discussion your map has been taken away from the qualified section for the following reason(s) :


[Easy]

1. You have some unsnapped notes that appear in this difficulty. Please take a careful look through this difficulty as well as others and resnap the notes correctly and properly./list]

[General]

1. The frequent strobing that comes from the Storyboard combined with the white combo colour makes the notes very unpleasant to look at and also difficult on the eyes. Consider toning down the white color to something more greyish or changing the color completely

Sorry for any inconveniences this has caused you.


The map will be handled by BNs from now on, Good Luck on Requalification!

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Andrea wrote:

Why is it still on Ranked Beatmaps section? Probably you forgot to move it back to WIP, Tari.

Anyway, good luck on getting this qualified again!

appleeaterx wrote:

Polished the diffs over IRC, looking good!
Let's hope for a safe rank
Rebubbled!

IRC Log

21:46 appleeaterx: all diffs 01:31:860 (4,5) - clap
21:46 *appleeaterx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/430615 Foo Fighters - Monkey Wrench [Easy]]
21:47 appleeaterx: 01:57:699 (1,2) - pretty sure this is a spacing problem c:
21:47 Danny: fixed
21:53 *appleeaterx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/425363 Foo Fighters - Monkey Wrench [Normal]]
21:53 appleeaterx: 00:19:680 (4,1) - spacing
21:55 appleeaterx: 00:26:054 (1) - well i personally think http://puu.sh/idJgm/718f324a60.jpg plays better here, but its up to you
21:55 appleeaterx: 00:36:390 (5,6) - spacing
21:56 appleeaterx: 00:39:146 (5,6) - 
21:57 Danny: that does pla ynice
21:57 appleeaterx: 00:50:688 (4) - not sure about this note here. the vocal sound isnt that strong compared to the white tick after that, which has vocal + clap. something like [http://puu.sh/idJtu/acfecbffd3.jpg this]
21:59 appleeaterx: 01:03:953 (1) - only diff with a spinner here... bit weird, might want to map this out? also up to you
21:59 appleeaterx: 01:05:331 (1) - this line doesnt really have a function here, as there are no object in break time
21:59 appleeaterx: oh wait nvm that line is fine
22:02 appleeaterx: 01:19:801 (3,4) - spacing
22:02 Danny: could i leave those spinners in or should i make them slidrs/
22:02 Danny: sliders
22:03 appleeaterx: well i just found it weird that its the only diff that has a spinner there. you can map it out with a slider like the easy diff, but if you want to keep it, then thats fine.
22:04 Danny: yeah ill make slidedr art i suppose
22:04 appleeaterx: 01:30:481 (1,2) - mind swapping this rhythm-wise? would make the clap clickable, instead of just having it on the slider end  (like so http://puu.sh/idK1R/ff4c093386.jpg)
22:04 appleeaterx: oh okay cool ^^
22:05 appleeaterx: 01:33:582 (7,8) - spacing, nazi i know ._.
22:05 appleeaterx: 01:34:960 (1,2) - this one too
22:06 Danny: for the space where there was a spinner i put 1 1/1 slider and 2 circles
22:06 appleeaterx: oh okay good
22:07 appleeaterx: 01:42:023 (3) - i personally dont really think the repeat fits well here. i dont really here a repeat in the vocals if that makes sense lol? also, the clap wont have any emphasis at all. you could take advantage of that sound and end up with something like http://puu.sh/idKgw/7d9112b6d8.jpg
22:08 Danny: did that for the other section too
22:08 Danny: oknow to catch up with the rest
22:09 appleeaterx: sorry for saying everything all at once w
22:09 appleeaterx: 01:54:081 (4) - similar to what i said earlier, depends what you do there
22:10 Danny: haha dont worry :)
22:10 appleeaterx: 02:00:799 (2,3) - s p a c i n g
22:10 appleeaterx: 02:13:892 (1,2) - 
22:14 appleeaterx: 02:16:476 (1,1) - not sure about QAT's point of view, but recovery time is ~690ms instead of 750ms. since they didnt mention this, i'd say it's fine - but when Lanturn checks it, ask this again
22:21 Danny: wiill do!
22:21 Danny: applied them all
22:23 *appleeaterx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/426375 Foo Fighters - Monkey Wrench [Noya's Hard]]
22:23 appleeaterx: dunno if you want to apply anything in a gd
22:23 appleeaterx: so ill keep things minor
22:23 appleeaterx: 01:37:027 (10) - so i'd put the nc here, putting the nc on the second note seems random to me o_o
22:24 Danny: got it
22:25 Danny: can it be applied on the 6
22:25 Danny: thatd keep everything consistent
22:25 appleeaterx: oh yea even better
22:26 Danny: got it
22:26 appleeaterx: 03:24:866 (10) - same here then
22:26 Danny: done
22:26 Danny: also can you do something for me while we do this
22:26 Danny: can you pay attention to the colors andd the SB
22:27 Danny: and see if the colors arent too bright?
22:27 Danny: thats a reason it got UQ so i changed them
22:27 appleeaterx: the strobe?
22:27 Danny: ye
22:27 Danny: compared to the combo colors
22:32 Danny: oh should i change the combo colors to a red during the part with the reb SB haha
22:32 Danny: thatd be interesting.
22:33 appleeaterx: lol sounds cool actually, but also sounds like a lot of work
22:33 Danny: it does
22:33 Danny: because theres many difficulties and so long of a song
22:33 Danny: that i have to go to every part and make it start the loop at the default again
22:34 appleeaterx: well i think its fine now
22:34 Danny: ill just leave it i dont want any more SB problems, i know like 5% of users even have it enabled haha
22:34 Danny: like the red is too similar etc
22:34 appleeaterx: true
22:34 appleeaterx: well i watched the sb + auto replay
22:34 appleeaterx: the gray colour does tone it down
22:35 appleeaterx: looks fine on my end
22:35 Danny: awesome because it was a lighter gray/white earlier
22:35 Danny: and i could see what the QAT meant
22:38 *appleeaterx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257742 Foo Fighters - Monkey Wrench [Insane]]
22:39 appleeaterx: 01:10:154 (6) - totally optional, but i just thought that the blue tick could be mapped here. since the clap on the blue tick really stands out here. if you want to keep 3/4 slider, try this? http://puu.sh/idMR4/a6a3cd3ca8.jpg
22:39 appleeaterx: current rhythm is fine too, wont force you to change
22:40 Danny: oh yeah that should be mapped
22:41 appleeaterx: 01:28:414 (4,5,6) - any reason for inconsistent spacing=
22:41 appleeaterx: ?
22:43 Danny: looks like i wanted a jump i suppose i cant recall now
22:44 appleeaterx: also, 02:34:564 (1) - this part is really cool
22:44 Danny: :D
22:44 Danny: thank you
22:45 appleeaterx: all diffs - 01:47:019 (2) - remove clap (bass here, not clap, keeping consistent with first KIAI), same at 03:04:194 (2) - 
22:46 appleeaterx: and add clap 03:04:538 (4) - 
22:46 Danny: i fixed the spacing i believe
22:47 appleeaterx: 03:08:586 - map this out, like 03:19:611 (11) - ?
22:47 Danny: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3216231 -->http://puu.sh/idNzl/9d8378ba85.jpg does this look too bad
22:48 appleeaterx: am i interpreting it right? i see a circular motion here
22:48 Danny: yeah
22:48 appleeaterx: looks alright 
22:49 Danny: also the three kiais are consistent in the third cycle of the chorus being a triple
22:49 Danny: and the other two without triple
22:49 appleeaterx: oh didnt notice that, good
22:50 appleeaterx: so all diffs look fine to me now, checking general stuffs 
22:52 Danny: great!
22:53 appleeaterx: tags Alernative , prehaps it should be Alternative ?
22:53 appleeaterx: dunno lol
22:54 Danny: thats very silly on my part
22:54 Danny: 0fixed
22:54 Danny: fixed it
22:56 appleeaterx: k good work, update c:
22:56 Danny: there
22:58 Danny: thank you very much
22:59 appleeaterx: lol 01:34:616 (3) - in easy diff
22:59 appleeaterx: update again xd
22:59 Danny: spacing ye
23:00 Danny: is 1.13 acceptable
23:01 appleeaterx: yes
23:01 Danny: nevermind
23:01 Danny: i got it
23:01 appleeaterx: it says 1.2 tho o_o
23:01 Danny: yeah its better now
23:01 Danny: i fixed it
23:02 Danny: updating
23:03 appleeaterx: all ready and satisfied?
23:03 Danny: i think
23:03 Danny: yeah im good!

Lanturn wrote:

Fixed a couple more spacing errors in normal, did some tampering with settings.
Oh and COLORS. lots and lots of COLORS

Let's try this one more time

Requalified

appleeaterx wrote:

Congrats

Hiyori wrote:

Congrats! I had this while still pending now its qualified. WOW!