[> General <]
- - I think the offset should be on 205, because the beat starts there.
- - You've repeated "The" on tags, I know it's the album name, but repeating the word on tags would make more pressure on it.
- - How about adding Hardrock on tags?
- 00:12:962 (1,2,3) - Arrange them for a triangle formation. And a bit of blanket on circle (1) with the slider (3).
- 00:14:685 (4) - Needs a bit more curving on this slider for a better flow, Do the same on 00:16:752 (6) - for smoother symmetry as well > http://puu.sh/b8U8i/3672444134.png
- 00:23:298 (5) - Unsharp this slider and curve like 00:22:264 (3) - , For symmetry and flow. Since this is the only sharp slider on the song track.
- 00:29:499 (1) - Add finish? I hear a strong beat or a guitat here.
- 00:36:390 (4,5,1) - Check the spacing here, it looks different between slider (5).
- 00:37:424 (1) - You should not ignore a strong beat here, try making a downbeat by shortening this slider and add a circle next to it. And check the spacing for the next slider
- 00:40:180 (1) - ^
- 00:43:281 (1,4) - Stack here, and check the spacing.
- 00:48:449 (3,1) - You should've made a little blanket here, Move slider (1) on x:380|y:68.
- 01:20:835 (4,2) - Try to stack these two sliders, the flow on slider (4) broke a bit.
- 01:28:759 (2,3,4,5) - You almost make a Square formation here, just move circle (5) on x:444|y:284, And watch the spacing.
- 01:40:817 (1) - Same as 00:37:424 (1) -
- 01:43:574 (1) - ^
- 01:44:607 (2,1) - Stack these circles, to avoid overlapping.
- 01:46:330 (3) - Same as 00:29:499 (1) -
- 02:14:409 (2,3) - Make a blanket here, it'd be a smoother flow between these two sliders.
- 02:33:875 (3,4) - This slider is too short to see it's beauty, just try making a blanket here.
- 02:35:253 (5,1,2,3,4) - Try a Polygon or a Star formation here, it fits this part.
- 02:42:144 (5,6) - Make a symmetry, or a parallel here.
- 02:44:211 (8,1) - Swap NC, new track.
- 02:46:967 (5,6) - Make a blanket here, since you've made one on the next track.
- 02:55:236 (5,1) - Same as 02:44:211 (8,1) -
- 02:56:959 (2,3) - Same as 02:46:967 (5,6) -
- 03:21:420 (2,1) - Much like an overlap on these two sliders. Split them up, It should be clear to newbie players so it won't confuse them.
- - There are some Inherited points that aren't used, which you need to remove them, I'll point them out for you > 00:18:302 - / 00:29:327 - / 00:34:840 - / 00:48:276 - / 00:53:789 - / 01:21:696 - / 01:27:208 - / 01:32:721 - / 01:38:233 - / 01:51:670 - / 01:57:183 - / 02:33:014 - / 03:08:845 - / 03:19:870 - / 03:25:727 - .
- - Great kind of Easy diff there ~ GJ, Danny!
- - Same reason as for the Unused Inherited points, but some are used here, try finding them yourself.
- 00:12:962 (1,4) - Curve or uncurve for symmetry, and for better flow.
- 00:15:718 (3,4) - Make a better Claw formation by making the slider (4) blanket slider (3)'s tail.
- 00:18:302 (1,2) - Swap the hitsound Finish here, adding finish on a 1/2 beat doesn't make sense imo.
- 00:19:336 (4,5,1) - Make a better triangle formation here, and a bit of blanket on circle (1) with slider (5).
- 00:22:953 (6) - Try moving this slider on x:92|y:100 for better blanket, And watch the spacing.
- 00:39:491 (6,1) - Improve the S formation here by making these sliders the same position, but one of them is flipped vertic.
- 00:44:659 (4) - Curve this slider like the previous slider? it'd be a smoother flow to players for a fresh kiai start.
- 00:48:793 (1,2,3) - Truly an overlap, stack slider (1)'s tail on slider (3)'s head, OR make a Reversed Cycle Formation with a bit of triangle, if so, watch the spacing > http://puu.sh/b9jf3/11d28235cc.png
- 00:51:894 (1,2) - Make a perfect blanket here on slider (1)'s tail.
- 00:59:818 (1,3) - Try to make these two slider blanket each other, that'll improve the flow.
- 01:17:217 (3,4) - You've almost made an overlap here, make a blanket instead.
- 01:20:835 (1) - Mind you move this downgrid? at least on x:64|y:188 or lower.
- 01:24:452 (2) - Move the second point on this slider to x:163|y:251 for smoother flow.
- 01:25:486 (4) - Same way as above, second point on x:191|y:107
- 01:27:725 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect a blanket on the circle (2) and move the slider (3)'s placement for another blanket, and to avoid overlap.
- 01:43:229 (5,6) - Check your spacing here, you didn't use a good distance snap here.
- 01:48:052 (4) - Same as 00:44:659 (4) -, inb4 I've found out that you copy-pasted the rhythm here. So you might not be a creative mapper when that came off. So to avoid making a big mod here, remap the part you copy-pasted. You can keep the rhythm you want, but the patterns, flows, etc... must be remapped.
- 02:33:186 (1,2) - Blanket slider (1) on circle (2), you've did it on the next notes, if you did this, You've formed a symmetry.
- 02:50:068 (2,3) - The flow broke much here, try making a parallel here.
- 02:52:824 (2,3) - Blanket?
- 02:55:925 (2,3) - ^, slider's tail on slider (3).
- 03:14:530 (1,2,3) - Check your spacing here, jumps aren't rankable for Easy/Normal diffs.
- 03:22:282 (5,1) - Same as 02:52:824 (2,3) -
- 03:25:899 (1) - Curve? it'd be a smoother flow when it move downgrid to slider (3).
- 03:29:689 (2,3) - Perfect the blanket here on slider (3).
- 03:40:714 (2,3) - Same as 00:59:818 (1,3) -
- - Pretty much a greater diff than the previous one, but you mostly followed the vocals here, which you've focused on mapping it. I might not tell you to remap, but still... GJ!
I really hate making a big mod, so i've just modded two diffs. As this is a M4M, You can mod two diffs on my map too, for fairness.
Haha, great song you have there! Good Luck! :3