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Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)

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P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
thanks for mod :D

update: http://puu.sh/30UXj.rar
Reat
204 posts
Joined May 2011
Reat
From 1:1 Chat.

[P A N's Easy]

00:38:604 (5) - Slider's Tail add Clap.
01:01:545 (3) - Slider's tail remove Clap.
01:02:604 (4) - add Clap.
01:05:428 (4) - how about add whistle?
[Normal]

00:12:134 (1) - 슬라이더 마지막 포인트를 왼쪽으로 두칸 옮기는게 어떨까요? 전 노트와 더 blanket 이 될것 같습니다.
00:22:369 (3) - ^ 오른쪽으로 한칸
01:04:369 (3) - 중앙 슬라이더 포인트와 마지막 포인트를 오른쪽으로 한칸 이동해주세요.
[Norman's Hard]

00:05:075 (6) - 마지막 슬라이더 포인트를 한칸 위로 올리는건 어떨까요?
00:12:134 (1) - ^ 왼쪽으로 한칸
00:51:663 (1) - 두번째 포인트 (484,260) 세번쨰 (464,340) 이렇게 하는게 어떨까요?
01:20:604 (3) - (124,127)
[Insane]

00:08:428 (7) - (233,358) 스택을 위한 좌표들.
00:09:839 (5) - (414,122)
00:20:075 (4) - (159,158)
00:24:487 (4) - (220,77)


Good luck!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

Reat wrote:

From 1:1 Chat.

[Normal]

00:12:134 (1) - 슬라이더 마지막 포인트를 왼쪽으로 두칸 옮기는게 어떨까요? 전 노트와 더 blanket 이 될것 같습니다. - fix
00:22:369 (3) - ^ 오른쪽으로 한칸 - um... 안옴기는게 better
01:04:369 (3) - 중앙 슬라이더 포인트와 마지막 포인트를 오른쪽으로 한칸 이동해주세요.
- fix

[Insane]

00:08:428 (7) - (233,358) 스택을 위한 좌표들.
00:09:839 (5) - (414,122)
00:20:075 (4) - (159,158)
00:24:487 (4) - (220,77)

All fixed


Good luck!
Thanks MOD :)
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
IRC mod
11:24 CrystilonZ: do you need mod ?
11:24 CrystilonZ: for this map
11:24 *CrystilonZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/244453 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size) [P A N's Easy]]
11:24 koreapenguin: XD
11:24 koreapenguin: yes ><
11:25 CrystilonZ: I will mod easy later = =
11:25 CrystilonZ: pan's diff is hard to mod
11:25 koreapenguin: \o/
11:26 CrystilonZ: 00:39:663 (4) -
11:26 CrystilonZ: normal diff
11:26 CrystilonZ: centerlize the red slider control
11:27 CrystilonZ: it's a bit too up
11:28 CrystilonZ: 01:12:663 (4) -
11:28 CrystilonZ: here too
11:28 CrystilonZ: and
11:29 CrystilonZ: 00:44:604 (1) -
11:29 CrystilonZ: isn't this spinner too short ?
11:30 koreapenguin: hum.
11:30 CrystilonZ: i think it's too short for normal
11:30 CrystilonZ: in my opinion
11:30 koreapenguin: ok fixed
11:31 CrystilonZ: about kiai time . .
11:31 CrystilonZ: first part should end at
11:31 CrystilonZ: 01:10:898
11:31 CrystilonZ: or may be at
11:31 CrystilonZ: 01:10:722
11:33 CrystilonZ: and
11:33 CrystilonZ: you should add "cat" to tag too >,<
11:34 koreapenguin: added
11:34 CrystilonZ: that should be all
11:34 CrystilonZ: [insane]
11:36 CrystilonZ: 00:19:722 (3) -
11:36 CrystilonZ: change this to slider should be better
11:37 koreapenguin: XD
11:37 CrystilonZ: at this spinner 00:44:604 (1)
11:37 CrystilonZ: you can follow the drum
11:38 CrystilonZ: in this section 01:22:722
11:39 CrystilonZ: you should lower the volume to fit the song's emotion
11:40 CrystilonZ: 00:33:310 (1) - stack this with 00:32:251 (2) should be better
11:41 CrystilonZ: 01:02:781
11:41 CrystilonZ: lower the volume by 5 or 10
11:41 CrystilonZ: increase it back at 01:05:781
11:42 CrystilonZ: 01:14:075
11:42 CrystilonZ: here too
11:42 CrystilonZ: increase back at 01:17:075
11:43 koreapenguin: \o/
11:43 CrystilonZ: that should be all :D
11:43 koreapenguin: wait a min
11:45 CrystilonZ: yes ?
11:46 koreapenguin: ok Thanks MOD :)
11:46 koreapenguin: post plz :)

GL for rank ;D
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin
Thanks :) MOD ><
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
랭크 잘띄워라ㅋ
Norman
Norman
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Title:Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Norman's Hard
Source:Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags:ending Norman P_A_N cat
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P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Insane
00:09:134 (1,2,3) - maybe try this? I think this pattern is better
SPOILER
00:23:428 (1) - try move left 1 grid
00:27:310 (3) - make it stack with 00:25:545 (8)
00:55:545 (4) - try to make it stack :/

Normal
01:22:722 (1) - what about make this slide velocity multi from (4) to 1.0 first? I think distance a bit confuse and make the slide velocity multi after this to 0.8

P A N's Easy
00:36:134 (2) - add green line at 00:36:487 and make it normal custom 1 and add green line at tail to soft custom 1
00:44:251 (2) - add clap?
00:54:134 (4) - remove finish?

Norman's Hard
00:15:134 (1) - right 1 grid
00:20:251 (6,1) - left 1 grid for perfect stack

good map :3 good luck for rank
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N

P A N wrote:

P A N's Easy
00:36:134 (2) - add green line at 00:36:487 and make it normal custom 1 and add green line at tail to soft custom 1 ok
00:44:251 (2) - add clap? will concider
00:54:134 (4) - remove finish? ok let's try

good map :3 good luck for rank
thanks P A N for modding

updated:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 59424
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags:ending Norman P_A_N cat
BeatmapID:244453
BeatmapSetID:89831

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

P A N wrote:

Insane
00:09:134 (1,2,3) - maybe try this? I think this pattern is better - fixed
SPOILER
00:23:428 (1) - try move left 1 grid - fixed
00:27:310 (3) - make it stack with 00:25:545 (8) - hum I think so.. it not!
00:55:545 (4) - try to make it stack :/ - whwhwhwhat stack?

Normal
01:22:722 (1) - what about make this slide velocity multi from (4) to 1.0 first? I think distance a bit confuse and make the slide velocity multi after this to 0.8

ㄴfixed
good map :3 good luck for rank
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
Lol
pan's style

P A N mods, P A N fix, and Pan thanks Pan LOL

star~
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

CrystilonZ wrote:

Lol
pan's style

P A N mods, P A N fix, and Pan thanks Pan LOL

star~
Star thanks :)
Norman
Norman
P A N's mod : all fixed

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:koreapenguin
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Source:Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
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408,292,72663,2,0,B|388:216|448:212|408:136,1,160
444,48,73192,2,0,P|408:36|368:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,73545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,48,73722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,73898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,74075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,120,74251,6,0,P|28:196|48:276,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,348,74781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,276,74957,2,0,L|256:276,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,75310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,212,75487,2,0,P|464:276|424:344,1,160
352,276,76016,2,0,P|332:240|332:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,124,76369,2,0,L|396:80,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,76722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,56,76898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,116,77075,6,0,B|116:176|64:176|64:176|48:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,312,77604,2,0,P|36:328|76:320,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,77957,2,0,P|164:284|168:328,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,78310,2,0,B|320:352|340:308|340:308|368:316|396:300,1,160
492,308,78839,2,0,P|492:268|468:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,79192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,144,79369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,79545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,16,79722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,79898,6,0,P|304:108|220:104,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,36,80428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,127,80604,2,0,L|84:199,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,128,80957,2,0,L|85:197,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,281,81310,2,0,P|84:332|36:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,197,81839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,198,82016,2,0,P|217:218|229:254,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,316,82369,2,0,L|380:316,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,272,82722,5,2,0:0:0:0:
500,172,83075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,72,83428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,32,83781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,32,83957,6,0,P|328:92|252:104,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,84,84487,2,0,L|156:164,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,320,85016,2,0,P|156:328|196:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,85369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,85545,6,0,B|376:272|344:208|344:208|408:216|436:152,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,86251,2,0,P|256:44|168:112,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,86957,6,0,L|256:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,320,87310,2,0,P|256:332|296:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,87663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,300,87839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,88016,1,4,0:0:0:0:
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
gpffhdn~~~~

[EaSy]
00:00:310 (1) - how about remove clap sound by last point?
00:12:134 (1) - add clap sound to last point
00:13:545 (2) - ^
00:14:957 (1,2,3) - ^
00:18:134 (2) - ^
00:20:428 (1) - ^
00:22:016 (4) - ^
00:21:663 (3) - add clap sound
01:02:957 (1) - add clap sound to last point
01:03:663 (2) - ^
01:05:428 (4) - add clap sound
01:06:839 (2) - add clap sound to start, and last point
01:08:251 (3) - add clap sound
01:10:369 (2) - add clap sound to start, and last point
01:14:251 (1,2) - add clap sound to last point
01:15:663 (3) - add clap sound to center point
01:18:839 (2) - add clap sound
01:21:663 (2,4) - ^

nothing problem of pattern

[shajf]
00:03:663 (1) - 좀 더 둥글둥글하게 만들어보시는건 어떤가염
01:18:487 (4) - 좀 더 각지게 만들어보시는건 어떤가염

[gkem]
00:03:487 (9) - 디스턴스를 1.5정도로 일정하게 유지해주는게 좋을 것 같아염
00:12:134 (1) - 마지막 포인트에 클랩
00:13:722 (5) - ^
00:15:134 (1) - ^
00:16:016 (4) - 시작 포인트에 클랩
00:16:722 (3) - 클랩
00:17:428 (6) - 시작 포인트에 클랩
00:24:487 (3) - 커스텀2클랩 사용해보세요~
00:25:898 (7) - ^
00:27:310 (3) - ^
00:28:722 (6) - ^
00:30:134 (4) - ^
00:31:545 (8,4) - ^
00:52:016 - 부분에 노트 추가 -> 클랩 -> 00:51:663 (1) - 슬라이더의 끝 부분에 겹침

[dlstpdls]
00:00:663 (2) - 디스턴스 1.2~1.3으로 유지하는게 좋을 것 같아염
00:03:487 (1) - 디스턴스 1로 유지하는게 좋을 것 같아염
00:40:369 (1) - 이 노트를 00:39:663 (3) - 슬라이더의 시작 부분과 겹치게 해보는건 어떤가요?(just suggestion)



하아하아 츠키코..츠키코쨩!!!

츠키코쨔응을 볼 수 있다는건 삶에 행복이 존재한다는 것을 알려주는 것입니다 :)
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

K i A i wrote:

gpffhdn~~~~

[shajf]
00:03:663 (1) - 좀 더 둥글둥글하게 만들어보시는건 어떤가염 - Fixed
01:18:487 (4) - 좀 더 각지게 만들어보시는건 어떤가염 - Fixed

[dlstpdls]
00:00:663 (2) - 디스턴스 1.2~1.3으로 유지하는게 좋을 것 같아염 - XD
00:03:487 (1) - 디스턴스 1로 유지하는게 좋을 것 같아염 - XD
00:40:369 (1) - 이 노트를 00:39:663 (3) - 슬라이더의 시작 부분과 겹치게 해보는건 어떤가요?(just suggestion) - Fixed



하아하아 츠키코..츠키코쨩!!!

츠키코쨔응을 볼 수 있다는건 삶에 행복이 존재한다는 것을 알려주는 것입니다 :)
Thanks MOD :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hi

[General]
  1. First of all, I should say that this vodeo is kinda NSFW. Consider placing a warning, that this video is not suitable for players under 16 years old. (because of some NSFW elements.
  2. You're missing some tags, such as: ost (short from original soundtracks) and J.C. Staff (name of the studio, you use THEIR animation, so you could give some respect to them :<) and maybe HenNeko. (short name oth anime) + The Hentai Prince and the Stony Cat. (english title of the amnime. + Shunryuu 俊龍 (composer)
    Note: some tags like hentai aren't needed because source already contains word 'hentai'. So, just copy this code to tags :3
    J.C. Staff HenNeko. The Prince and the Stony Cat Shunryuu 俊龍
  3. Your colours are TOO similar. It makes thm look boring with suck a colourful and energetic song! Be bright, make more cute colours!
    colours are here

    Combo1 : 238,153,83
    Combo2 : 251,142,235
    Combo3 : 249,51,56
    Combo4 : 98,222,95
    Combo5 : 97,146,248
    Combo6 : 226,240,104
  4. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 for every diff. It'll fit with backgrund music and vocals much better.
[Insane]
  1. BPM and Sliders are quite fast here, what's more you've got plenty of jumps. Consider using AR9 here, it will make jumps more readable and diff more challenging for players!
    Note: if you increase AR you should increase OD by one tick as well, to keep diff settings balanced.
    Note2: seems like AR7 is TOO low for [Hard] diff, so if [Hard] diff will use AR8 you will have to use AR9 to keep diff spread balanced.
  2. 00:00:840 (3) - i'd separate it into two 1/2 sliders.first slider goes for 'ba-by' and second slider for 'ba-by'. So, it will look like this
    Note: 01:11:428 (2,3) - 01:12:663 (5,6) - same happens here. Change both of these patterns to be consistent or don't change both of them.
  3. 00:02:075 (5) - the same as above happens here. (ber-ry). So, sliders will look like this.
    Note: you should also place a jump between 00:01:545 (4,5) - to keep your patterns consistent. You did this jump at 00:00:840 - and you should place it here, as well.
  4. 00:02:781 (7) - I'm not exactly sure, but I feel like you should finish this slider at 00:03:310 - to follow vocals better. It will fit here better, butyou should ask someone else for confirmation before changing it, I think.
  5. 00:08:428 (7) - this slider doesn't really fit with vocals, because you've ignored one loooooong beat in th end. How about circle at 00:08:428 - and 1/1 slidr from 00:08:604 -
    Note: i should say, that your rhythm is quite weird, imo. You use easy patterns and mix them with streams. It can confuse players, that's why I want you to use more 1/2s. I want you to make rhythm harder!
  6. 00:11:957 - you don't really have to place a circle here, bu it really feels kinda awkward without it. As I said earlier, let's make this diff harder! Now it looks like [Hard] with some streams and it is boring for skilled players :<
  7. 00:13:104 - oh well.. You've ignored vocals at 00:13:104 - nd it feels pretty awkward here because vocals appear in the middle of this slider. Maybe, just maybe, we can use reversed 1/4 slider here
    Note: same happens to 00:14:428 (5) - because vocals here are kinda repetitive.
  8. 00:21:839 (5) - I'd stack it with (1) to keep jumps consistent. You had similar jump at 00:20:075 (4,5) - and it was amazing. So, do the same with 00:21:663 (4,5) , please! :)
  9. 00:22:634 (4) - please, consider removing this circle because it follows nothing in music. Do not overmap, because overmapping is pure evil in 99,9% of maps.
  10. 00:24:134 (2,3,4,5) - jumps in the calm art are quite confusing and don't really fit here, imo. What's more clap sound at 00:24:487 (4) - is just weird. Consider replacing it with whistle.
  11. 00:29:075 (1) - try to replace i with 1/2 slider, so it will fit with vcals better, i guess.
  12. 00:38:957 (1,3) - nazi - normally, you avoid overlaps like this one, so consider changing this pattern t avoid overlaps. It will look better, imo.example
  13. 01:00:134 (4) - consider placing a new combo here, it wll fit with your pattern, vocals and start of kiai section here.
[Norman's Hard]
  1. I like this diff, but AR7 is kinda ruining it. Too many objects on playfield at hte same time confuse players and they lose control. Try to use AR8, so you will make your flow much more readable and you will have an awesome [Hard]!
  2. 00:02:075 (4,5,6) - this is a [Hard] diff and BPM is quite fast hee, for non-kiai parts, I'd replace it with 1/4 sliders. So, this diff will be more playable, and kiai will become even more interesting.
    Note: if you agree, replace all these triplets with sliders. You won't have to relace A LOT of them, just the one that was mentioned above and 00:04:898 (4,5,6)
  3. 00:29:428 (1,2) - I guess you've missed a jump between 00:29:428 (1,2) - these notes. It will fit with music and will help you to keep your patterns consistent. You have something like jump between 00:31:192 (7,8), do the same here!

    Good job!
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:781 - previously, you had awesome and consistent rhythm, don't break it with this weird gap. Place a circle at 00:20:604 - it will fit with background music and your pattern much better!
  2. 00:30:487 (1) - 00:33:310 (1) - these NCs kinda ruin your pattern and don't really fit with vocals. I'm sure that you'd better remove them, so you will get more consistent and easier understandable comboing.
  3. 01:22:722 - velocity changes are too sudden in the end. I'd recommend you to avoid slowdowns here, they may stress average-skilled player. :<
[P A N's Easy]
  1. Well.. I should say that AR4 is too hard for an [Easy] diff. I'd recommend you to reduce AR and OD by one tick, so players will be able to relax and focus on playing!
  2. 00:40:369 (1,2) - even here, you still can make thythm easier for beginners. easier means more consistent. How? Replace (2) with repeat at (1).
    Note: add reverse to 00:41:781 (3) - so, you'll keep 1/1 rhythm here and beginners will be able to pass this part without any problems.

    Diff is neat and well constructed, but AR here makes it TOO hard for the easiest diff. :<
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

-Bakari- wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. First of all, I should say that this vodeo is kinda NSFW. Consider placing a warning, that this video is not suitable for players under 16 years old. (because of some NSFW elements.
  2. You're missing some tags, such as: ost (short from original soundtracks) and J.C. Staff (name of the studio, you use THEIR animation, so you could give some respect to them :<) and maybe HenNeko. (short name oth anime) + The Hentai Prince and the Stony Cat. (english title of the amnime. + Shunryuu 俊龍 (composer)
    Note: some tags like hentai aren't needed because source already contains word 'hentai'. So, just copy this code to tags :3
    J.C. Staff HenNeko. The Prince and the Stony Cat Shunryuu 俊龍
  3. Your colours are TOO similar. It makes thm look boring with suck a colourful and energetic song! Be bright, make more cute colours!
    colours are here

    Combo1 : 238,153,83
    Combo2 : 251,142,235
    Combo3 : 249,51,56
    Combo4 : 98,222,95
    Combo5 : 97,146,248
    Combo6 : 226,240,104
  4. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 for every diff. It'll fit with backgrund music and vocals much better.
[Insane]
  1. BPM and Sliders are quite fast here, what's more you've got plenty of jumps. Consider using AR9 here, it will make jumps more readable and diff more challenging for players!
    Note: if you increase AR you should increase OD by one tick as well, to keep diff settings balanced.
    Note2: seems like AR7 is TOO low for [Hard] diff, so if [Hard] diff will use AR8 you will have to use AR9 to keep diff spread balanced.
  2. 00:00:840 (3) - i'd separate it into two 1/2 sliders.first slider goes for 'ba-by' and second slider for 'ba-by'. So, it will look like this
    Note: 01:11:428 (2,3) - 01:12:663 (5,6) - same happens here. Change both of these patterns to be consistent or don't change both of them.
  3. 00:02:075 (5) - the same as above happens here. (ber-ry). So, sliders will look like this.
    Note: you should also place a jump between 00:01:545 (4,5) - to keep your patterns consistent. You did this jump at 00:00:840 - and you should place it here, as well.
  4. 00:02:781 (7) - I'm not exactly sure, but I feel like you should finish this slider at 00:03:310 - to follow vocals better. It will fit here better, butyou should ask someone else for confirmation before changing it, I think.
  5. 00:08:428 (7) - this slider doesn't really fit with vocals, because you've ignored one loooooong beat in th end. How about circle at 00:08:428 - and 1/1 slidr from 00:08:604 -
    Note: i should say, that your rhythm is quite weird, imo. You use easy patterns and mix them with streams. It can confuse players, that's why I want you to use more 1/2s. I want you to make rhythm harder!
  6. 00:11:957 - you don't really have to place a circle here, bu it really feels kinda awkward without it. As I said earlier, let's make this diff harder! Now it looks like [Hard] with some streams and it is boring for skilled players :<
  7. 00:13:104 - oh well.. You've ignored vocals at 00:13:104 - nd it feels pretty awkward here because vocals appear in the middle of this slider. Maybe, just maybe, we can use reversed 1/4 slider here
    Note: same happens to 00:14:428 (5) - because vocals here are kinda repetitive.
  8. 00:21:839 (5) - I'd stack it with (1) to keep jumps consistent. You had similar jump at 00:20:075 (4,5) - and it was amazing. So, do the same with 00:21:663 (4,5) , please! :)
  9. 00:22:634 (4) - please, consider removing this circle because it follows nothing in music. Do not overmap, because overmapping is pure evil in 99,9% of maps.
  10. 00:24:134 (2,3,4,5) - jumps in the calm art are quite confusing and don't really fit here, imo. What's more clap sound at 00:24:487 (4) - is just weird. Consider replacing it with whistle.
  11. 00:29:075 (1) - try to replace i with 1/2 slider, so it will fit with vcals better, i guess.
  12. 00:38:957 (1,3) - nazi - normally, you avoid overlaps like this one, so consider changing this pattern t avoid overlaps. It will look better, imo.example
  13. 01:00:134 (4) - consider placing a new combo here, it wll fit with your pattern, vocals and start of kiai section here.
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:781 - previously, you had awesome and consistent rhythm, don't break it with this weird gap. Place a circle at 00:20:604 - it will fit with background music and your pattern much better!
  2. 00:30:487 (1) - 00:33:310 (1) - these NCs kinda ruin your pattern and don't really fit with vocals. I'm sure that you'd better remove them, so you will get more consistent and easier understandable comboing.
  3. 01:22:722 - velocity changes are too sudden in the end. I'd recommend you to avoid slowdowns here, they may stress average-skilled player. :<
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
MOD thanks :)
Verlaren
Verlaren
From Aincrad's queue

[General]
Audio Lead-In -
There is only 1810 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it in Insane and P A N's easy
deselect Letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard. But you have a video, lol (P A N's easy)
deselect countdown too (P A N's easy)
Resolution your video - 800x600. Use 16:9 video - 852x480(HD for OSU!), fix it!
and remove audio from video file. + i recommend change video.

[Easy]
00:19:192 (3) - change on this shape --> http://puu.sh/35FOR.jpg
00:38:251 (4) - missed NC.
01:10:016 (1) - move NC on 01:08:604(4)

[Normal]
00:10:722 (3) - missed NC.
00:32:251 (2) - hidden notes isn't recommended in normal diffs
01:25:545 (1) - make 1/1 slider(better variant); redice slider on 2 ticks(1/4 snap)
01:27:663 (5) - NC

[Norman's hard]
00:19:722 (5) - make a perfect slider. IMO is not beautiful
00:41:428 (4) - ctrl+G
01:04:192 (7) - missed NC.

[Insane]
01:16:369 (10,11) - why silince?


Good map, but I do not much like it when the maps do under vocal part...GL
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

Verlaren wrote:

From Aincrad's queue

[General]
Audio Lead-In -
There is only 1810 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it in Insane and P A N's easy
deselect Letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard. But you have a video, lol (P A N's easy)
deselect countdown too (P A N's easy)
Resolution your video - 800x600. Use 16:9 video - 852x480(HD for OSU!), fix it!
and remove audio from video file. + i recommend change video.

[Normal]
00:10:722 (3) - missed NC.
00:32:251 (2) - hidden notes isn't recommended in normal diffs
01:25:545 (1) - make 1/1 slider(better variant); redice slider on 2 ticks(1/4 snap)
01:27:663 (5) - NC

[Insane]
01:16:369 (10,11) - why silince?


Good map, but I do not much like it when the maps do under vocal part...GL
Thanks MOD :)
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N

Verlaren wrote:

From Aincrad's queue

[Easy]
00:19:192 (3) - change on this shape --> http://puu.sh/35FOR.jpg
00:38:251 (4) - missed NC.
01:10:016 (1) - move NC on 01:08:604(4)

Good map, but I do not much like it when the maps do under vocal part...GL
thanks mod :D
MerryGate
101 posts
Joined May 2012
MerryGate
Hi~

[Insane]
00:00:230 (1,2) - remove whistle.
00:00:760 (3) - hmm...add whistle to start?
00:01:995 (2,3) - add whistle to start of both.
00:03:407 (1,3,4) - remove whistle
00:04:818 (7,1) - I dont like this stack due to difference of the starting point of the background music and vocal.
How about change to this?
SPOILER
380,100,4642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,184,4818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,4995,6,0,L|265:334,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,5348,2,0,L|175:238,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,5701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,5877,5,2,0:0:0:0:
00:05:701 (3) - add whistle
00:05:877 (1) - remove whistle
00:07:818 (5) - Problems of the distance between 00:06:407 (3,4) - . In addition, for consistency with - 00:08:524 (7).
SPOILER
216,200,7818,2,0,P|172:200|132:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,8171,2,0,P|297:221|297:175,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,316,8524,2,0,P|376:240|376:148,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
If you change to this. I recommend that add clap to both of start of 00:07:818 (5,6) - .
00:10:995 (1,2) - I think kinda bad flow since triple of 1.0x after big jump.
Also, you didnt add note to 00:11:436 - is intended?
00:11:524 (5) - Why did you add clap to start? If I were you, I would add clap to end.
SPOILER
128,328,10642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,10818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,10995,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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01:00:054 - Maybe you have deleted green line in the wrong.
01:04:818 (9,1,2,3) - Problem of flow and visibility.
SPOILER
196,360,64642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,308,64818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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01:12:583 (5) - remove whistle from reverse.
01:13:112 (6) - remove whistle.
01:26:701 (7) - ^


[Norman's Hard]
00:57:936 (2,3) - I highly recommend change to single slider.
01:02:171 (6,7,8) - This triple is really weird.

If you want to add more triple, you can add note to 01:14:083 -, 01:19:730 - .
01:16:995 (1,2,3) - How about change to this?



[Normal]
00:03:230 (4) - remove whistle.
00:04:995 (3) - add clap.
00:07:818 (3) - remove finish and add clap to both.


[P A N's Easy]
OD-1
00:24:759 (3) - symmetry.
00:47:348 (2,2) - remove clap...?

Good luck~
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

MerryGate wrote:

Hi~

[Insane]
00:00:230 (1,2) - remove whistle.
00:00:760 (3) - hmm...add whistle to start?
00:01:995 (2,3) - add whistle to start of both.
00:03:407 (1,3,4) - remove whistle
00:04:818 (7,1) - I dont like this stack due to difference of the starting point of the background music and vocal.
How about change to this?
SPOILER
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00:05:701 (3) - add whistle
00:05:877 (1) - remove whistle
00:07:818 (5) - Problems of the distance between 00:06:407 (3,4) - . In addition, for consistency with - 00:08:524 (7).
SPOILER
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If you change to this. I recommend that add clap to both of start of 00:07:818 (5,6) - .
00:10:995 (1,2) - I think kinda bad flow since triple of 1.0x after big jump.
Also, you didnt add note to 00:11:436 - is intended?
00:11:524 (5) - Why did you add clap to start? If I were you, I would add clap to end.
SPOILER
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01:00:054 - Maybe you have deleted green line in the wrong.
01:04:818 (9,1,2,3) - Problem of flow and visibility.
SPOILER
196,360,64642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,308,64818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,64995,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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364,168,65171,2,0,P|386:131|382:70,2,90,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:12:583 (5) - remove whistle from reverse.
01:13:112 (6) - remove whistle.
01:26:701 (7) - ^

ㄴAll fix

[Normal]
00:03:230 (4) - remove whistle. - fixed
00:04:995 (3) - add clap. - fixed
00:07:818 (3) - remove finish and add clap to both. - nope

Good luck~
Thanks MOD ><
Leper
77 posts
Joined September 2012
Leper
Take one

스탈 (Is this ok?)
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

Dat Leper wrote:

Take one

스탈 (Is this ok?)
\o/ Thanks Star ><
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
Rechecking ~

[Norman's Hard]
Slider tick rate 1 to be same to other diffs
00:38:877 (5,6) - Change to like this ?

00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - It's overmapped, delete note at blueticks
01:10:995 (4) - ^
00:38:877 (5) - Clap end
00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - Try to avoid this in hard(?) diff
01:09:936 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:07:818 (7) - This is a bit off screen


[Insane]
OMG the jump :shock:
00:12:759 (4) - make it same as 00:14:171 (3,4,5)

Edit :

[P A N's Easy]
00:40:289 (1,2) - Change to

with whistle on end of 2 and 4

00:54:407 (1) - Change to

[Normal]
00:58:642




GL :)
Last edited by CrystilonZ , edited 1 time in total.
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N

MerryGate wrote:

Hi~

[P A N's Easy]
OD-1
00:24:759 (3) - symmetry.
00:47:348 (2,2) - remove clap...?

Good luck~
thanks mod :D
i will look for another mod about clap

updated: http://puu.sh/36wrL.rar

mod my diff please CrystilonZ
Norman
Norman
thx for modding! many mods..

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Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
sigh.. 멘붕..


[General]

Fine


[P A N's Easy]

00:07:024 (1,2,3) I suggest this pattern shape
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00:38:524 (3,4,5,6) This is pattern beat really awkward.. i think lryics beat recommend this part
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01:07:465 ((1,2,3) hmm.. i think confusing beat this. i suggest this beat
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01:19:465 why not add note this part. i'm hear this part drum sound.
01:26:524 (3) hmm.. i think this beat 1/2 slider is better imo


[Normal]

00:31:818 (1,2,3,4,5) 음.. 내 개인적인 제안이지만.. 이게 더 좋은 패턴 모양같음, 넓어지다가 갑자기 간격이 줄어드는건 안좋음. 되도록이면 넓게 퍼트리는게 플레이 하기 더좋음
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01:02:877 (6,1) 노트를 덮으려면 확실하게 덮어야지.. 애매하게 덮는건 모양이 이상해짐.
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01:07:465 (3,4) ^
01:09:230 (1,2,3) 너무 드럼만 따라가는거 아닌가 싶은데.. 이 파트는 가사를 따라가는게 어떰?
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[Norman's Hard]

00:01:995 (4,5,6,7,8,9) 박자가 어색하네요.. 드럼을 따라가신것 같은데.. 드럼박자라고 생각하기엔
플레이할때 박자읽을때 지장이 있을것같네요.. 저는 이 박자를 추천합니다
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00:04:289 (3,4,5,6) 이것도 마찬가지로.. 가사를 따라간건지 드럼을 따라간건지 애매합니다..
특히 (4,5,6) 이 3연타가 어색하네요.. 그래서 제가 제안하는 박자입니다
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00:16:995 (5,6) 이것을.. 00:14:171 (7,8) 과 같게하는게 더좋다고 생각합니다..
박자도 눈에띄게 티가나구요.. 갑자기 1/4로 바꾸시는건 제가보기엔 플레이에 혼란만 준다고 생각합니다
00:31:818 (1,2,3,4) 이것은.. 점프로 했으면 어땟을까 생각이 드네요.. 00:43:112 (1,2,3,4) 이것처럼,
가사를 들어봐도 딱딱 끊어지는 느낌이 있는데.. 이렇게 이어가는 식으로는 헷갈릴수가 있을것같아요..
01:19:730 노트 추가 왜냐하면 가사를 들어보면 3연타가 잘어울리는 부분이기 때문입니다. 박자도 그렇구요
01:22:642 (1,2,3,4) 잘가다가.. 왜 이런식으로 뚝뚝 끊는식으로 배치하셨는지 모르겠네요..
이것도 마지막 후반부분인데 조금 지루한감이 있는것같아요.. 제 생각에는 점프로 넣는것을 추천합니다


[Insane]

00:12:759 (4) 굉장히 밋밋한 1/4 슬라이더 박자인것 같아.. 왜냐하면.. 하드박자에서도 1/6을 사용했는데..
왜 인세인에는 1/4로 때려박았는지 이해를 못하겠네.. 연타로 하거나.. 반복슬라이더로 하는게 좋을것 같아
게다가 인세인이라는 뜻은 미친이라는 뜻이기때문에.. 연타를넣어도 오버매핑은 아니니까.
00:14:171 (1,2,3) ^
00:27:054 (1,2) 디스턴스 체크 앞에 보이는 디스턴스보다 거리 사이가 작음.
01:06:407 (6,1) 내생각에는 점프로 했으면 더 재미있는 패턴이 됬을것 같은데.
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쩝... 군럭
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

Gloria Guard wrote:

sigh.. 멘붕..


[General]

Fine


[Normal]

00:31:818 (1,2,3,4,5) 음.. 내 개인적인 제안이지만.. 이게 더 좋은 패턴 모양같음, 넓어지다가 갑자기 간격이 줄어드는건 안좋음. 되도록이면 넓게 퍼트리는게 플레이 하기 더좋음 - 고쳤지롱 :)
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01:02:877 (6,1) 노트를 덮으려면 확실하게 덮어야지.. 애매하게 덮는건 모양이 이상해짐. - 고쳤떠요 ><
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01:07:465 (3,4) ^ - 이건 뭔지....
01:09:230 (1,2,3) 너무 드럼만 따라가는거 아닌가 싶은데.. 이 파트는 가사를 따라가는게 어떰? - 안댐
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[Insane]

00:12:759 (4) 굉장히 밋밋한 1/4 슬라이더 박자인것 같아.. 왜냐하면.. 하드박자에서도 1/6을 사용했는데..
왜 인세인에는 1/4로 때려박았는지 이해를 못하겠네.. 연타로 하거나.. 반복슬라이더로 하는게 좋을것 같아
게다가 인세인이라는 뜻은 미친이라는 뜻이기때문에.. 연타를넣어도 오버매핑은 아니니까.
00:14:171 (1,2,3) ^
00:27:054 (1,2) 디스턴스 체크 앞에 보이는 디스턴스보다 거리 사이가 작음.
01:06:407 (6,1) 내생각에는 점프로 했으면 더 재미있는 패턴이 됬을것 같은데.
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ㄴAll fixed




쩝... 군럭
Thanks MOD :)
Norman
Norman
베이비 스윗↗트↓ 베↗리↘ 러→브

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192,276,11701,2,0,L|272:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,12054,6,0,P|360:320|332:352,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,188,12583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,12759,2,0,L|464:72,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,108,13024,2,0,P|284:100|204:52,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,56,13642,2,0,P|72:60|40:84,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,148,13995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,236,14171,2,0,L|40:260,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,14436,2,0,P|220:232|300:280,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,372,15054,6,0,P|356:360|380:328,1,80
380,236,15407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,15583,2,0,L|380:60,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,152,15936,2,0,L|492:232,1,80
380,236,16289,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,140,16465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,152,16642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,56,16818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,16995,2,0,L|168:144,2,40
132,72,17259,2,0,P|60:128|28:232,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,324,17877,6,0,P|76:316|104:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,248,18230,2,0,P|256:212|324:248,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,18759,2,0,L|256:156,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,68,19289,2,0,P|256:56|296:68,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,116,19642,2,0,B|404:180|464:172|464:172|492:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,260,20171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,260,20348,6,0,B|332:268|328:312|252:316,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,316,20877,2,0,L|80:316,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,21230,2,0,L|124:228,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,21583,2,0,L|80:140,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,52,21936,6,0,L|204:52,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,22465,2,0,P|312:124|348:136,1,80
380,44,22818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,22995,2,0,L|448:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,260,23348,6,0,P|452:288|392:264,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,248,24054,2,0,P|184:260|164:284,1,64
92,336,24407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,284,24583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,284,24759,2,0,P|4:192|20:96,1,192,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,44,25465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,25818,2,0,P|240:176|260:116,1,128,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,44,26524,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,44,26877,2,0,L|440:108,1,64
407,246,27230,2,0,L|392:184,1,64
352,104,27583,2,0,B|256:127|256:80|161:104,1,192,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,28289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,272,28642,2,0,P|68:296|128:272,1,128,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,29348,6,0,L|308:236,1,64
344,316,29701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,300,29877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,236,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,148,30230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,92,30407,2,0,P|376:80|332:36,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,44,31112,2,0,L|84:64,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,152,31465,2,0,L|24:172,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,260,31818,5,2,0:0:0:0:
128,368,32171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,380,32524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,332,32877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33230,12,8,34289,0:0:0:0:
328,92,34642,6,0,P|256:60|184:92,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,35171,2,0,L|256:236,1,80
216,324,35524,2,0,P|256:332|296:324,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,36054,2,0,B|116:232|104:176|104:176|76:204|44:196,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,36759,2,0,B|396:232|408:176|408:176|436:204|468:196,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,100,37289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,28,37465,6,0,P|384:60|380:96,1,80
308,160,37818,2,0,P|240:196|172:160,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,38348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,64,38524,2,0,P|120:48|72:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,144,38877,2,0,P|76:208|44:252,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,284,39230,2,0,L|64:352,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,372,39583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,320,39759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,336,39936,2,0,L|352:376,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,280,40289,6,0,P|460:208|456:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,52,40818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,40995,2,0,L|324:52,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,41348,2,0,L|168:112,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,41701,6,0,P|52:132|20:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,244,42054,2,0,L|32:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,372,42407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,320,42583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,372,42759,1,10,0:0:0:0:
348,320,42936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,372,43112,5,4,0:0:0:0:
492,192,43465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,60,43818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,60,44171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44524,12,0,45583,0:0:0:0:
84,304,45936,5,4,0:0:0:0:
244,140,46465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,72,46995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,240,47524,2,0,L|228:284,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,47877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,284,48054,2,0,L|372:216,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,40,48759,6,0,P|288:36|248:116,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,24,49818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,252,50348,2,0,L|76:316,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,364,50701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,316,50877,2,0,P|256:296|284:292,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,51583,6,0,P|484:256|468:340,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,280,52112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,196,52289,2,0,P|348:156|376:128,1,80
348,36,52642,2,0,B|292:16|248:36|248:36|232:72|208:72,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,53171,6,0,L|76:104,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,164,53524,2,0,P|56:216|72:296,1,160
152,352,54054,2,0,P|188:344|216:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,264,54407,6,0,L|336:236,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,244,54759,2,0,L|396:204,3,40,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,55112,2,0,L|436:160,3,40,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,128,55465,2,0,L|452:88,3,40,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,56,55818,6,0,P|360:24|284:40,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,68,56524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,192,56877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,320,57230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,192,57936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,58465,1,4,0:0:0:0:
504,156,59524,6,0,P|516:192|504:232,1,80
416,192,59877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,60054,6,0,P|276:108|240:72,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,52,60407,2,0,P|160:64|136:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,60759,2,0,B|44:164|84:176|84:176|60:204|80:252,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,340,61289,2,0,P|120:344|164:280,1,160
212,196,61818,2,0,P|244:216|260:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,316,62171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,316,62259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,316,62348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,260,62524,2,0,L|408:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,116,62877,5,2,0:0:0:0:
408,52,63054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,63230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,52,63407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,116,63583,2,0,P|176:152|144:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,76,63936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,116,64112,2,0,B|24:180|12:196|12:196|24:216|24:272,1,160
56,364,64642,2,0,P|88:348|112:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,252,64995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,252,65083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,252,65171,2,0,L|268:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,65524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,248,65701,6,0,P|444:324|372:348,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,66230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,168,66407,2,0,B|412:136|412:136|412:112|392:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,66759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,92,66936,2,0,P|184:140|104:156,1,160
8,152,67465,2,0,L|8:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,324,67818,2,0,L|8:352,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,68171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,324,68348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,68524,6,0,P|324:212|352:136,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,69054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,69230,2,0,L|488:212,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,332,69583,2,0,L|384:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,172,69936,6,0,L|304:144,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,70289,2,0,L|252:104,3,40,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,72,70642,2,0,L|184:72,3,40,10|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,70995,2,0,L|116:72,3,40,8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,104,71348,6,0,P|80:156|52:216,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,236,71701,2,0,P|48:268|64:308,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,72054,2,0,L|224:340,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,332,72407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,292,72583,2,0,B|388:216|448:212|408:136,1,160
444,48,73112,2,0,P|408:36|368:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,73465,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,48,73642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,73818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,48,73995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,120,74171,6,0,P|28:196|48:276,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,348,74701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,276,74877,2,0,L|256:276,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,75230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,212,75407,2,0,P|464:276|424:344,1,160
352,276,75936,2,0,P|332:240|332:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,124,76289,2,0,L|396:80,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,76642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,56,76818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,116,76995,6,0,B|116:176|64:176|64:176|48:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,312,77524,2,0,P|36:328|76:320,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,77877,2,0,P|164:284|168:328,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,78230,2,0,B|320:352|340:308|340:308|368:316|396:300,1,160
492,308,78759,2,0,P|492:268|468:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,79112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,144,79289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,79465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,16,79642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,79818,6,0,P|304:108|220:104,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,36,80348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,127,80524,2,0,L|84:199,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,128,80877,2,0,L|85:197,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,281,81230,2,0,P|84:332|36:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,197,81759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,198,81936,2,0,P|217:218|229:254,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,316,82289,2,0,L|380:316,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,272,82642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,120,82995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,24,83348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,40,83701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,40,83877,6,0,P|184:96|104:112,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,96,84407,2,0,L|12:176,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,336,84936,2,0,P|156:332|196:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,85289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,85465,6,0,B|376:272|344:208|344:208|408:216|436:152,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,86171,2,0,P|256:44|168:112,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,86877,6,0,L|256:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,320,87230,2,0,P|256:332|296:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,87583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,300,87759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,87936,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~P A N's Easy~
  1. 00:54:407 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
  2. 01:26:701 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
~Normal~
  1. 01:23:877 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
~Norman's Hard~
  1. 00:52:642 (4) - Add a finish at the end of this slider to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
~Insane~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:40:465 - It feels like you're missing a circle here.
  2. 01:21:759 (6) - New combo should go there and not on the next note.
Really nice map, though Normal and Hard could use some spinners to prevent same score!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~
  1. 01:23:877 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
~Insane~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:40:465 - It feels like you're missing a circle here.
  2. 01:21:759 (6) - New combo should go there and not on the next note.
Really nice map, though Normal and Hard could use some spinners to prevent same score!
All fixed :) Thanks MOD ><
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
thanks all mod :D

updated: http://puu.sh/3b0Nu.rar
Edd
57 posts
Joined February 2012
Edd
Not much to report on the map itself but I suggest a few changes to the hit sound placements so that it better follows what the drums are doing in the actual song which it seems you want to try to achieve anyways.

Insane

00:09:759 (5) - Remove clap
00:10:024 (2,3) - Remove claps
00:10:289 (4) - Add clap 1st tick
00:10:642 (5) - Add clap
00:11:347 (4) - Remove clap
00:12:936 (6) - Add clap last tick
00:19:465 (2) - Add clap
00:21:936 (1) - Add clap last tick
00:52:642 (6) - Add clap
00:54:230 (5,6) - Add claps
01:08:877 (5) - Add finish 1st tick
01:09:230 (1) - Add finish
01:10:995 (1) - Add finish 1st tick
01:11:348 (2) - Remove finish 1st tick
01:21:759 (1) - Add clap last slider tick


Hard

00:07:112 (3) - Remove clap, add finish
00:07:818 (5) - Change to/add clap
00:08:524 (9) - Add finish
00:08:877 (10) - Remove clap
00:09:407 (2) - Add clap
00:21:583 (4) - Remove clap both ticks
00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - Remove claps in the middle of the sliders
01:27:583 (3) - Add clap
01:27:936 (5) - Add clap


Normal

01:08:524 (1) - Add finish last tick
01:09:230 (2) - Add finish last tick
01:09:936 (3) - Remove claps all ticks
01:10:995 (1) - Add finish first tick, remove finish last tick
01:16:642 (1) - Add clap


Easy

Not much to say apart from possibly making the slider ticks in the chorus sound like claps but otherwise completely fine.
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
ㅎㅇㅎㅇ

General

  1. 비디오 크기 열라크네요 12메가 이하로 줄이시는걸 추천드림
  2. 태그에 P_A_N 이거 좀 이상한데 괜찮은건가요?
  3. 무음처리된 soft-sliderslide 추가하시는것도 나쁘지 않아요 슬라 지나가는 소리가 약간 거슬릴 수가 있기때문에. 틱 2에서는 바꿔주는 걸 추천드립니다만 틱 1에서는 쓰는게 도움은 되요

P A N's Easy

  1. 00:00:230 (1) - The offset must be in front of the note at all times. I recommend just put 1 circle 00:00:230 (1) here
  2. 00:08:524 - why suddenly turned down volume? it looks a little strange.

Normal

  1. 각 슬라이더 틱에 들어간 힛사 소리 너무 줄이신거같아요 55%로 놓으시면 좋을듯
  2. 00:03:583 - 박수소리 ㄴㄴ 아직 음이 안 올라갔어요 휘슬로 첸지
  3. 00:04:995 (3) - 마찬가지

Norman's Hard

  1. 00:12:054 - 피니시
  2. 00:31:465 (8) - 좀 더 역동적인걸 원하시면 Ctrl + G
  3. 00:40:289 - 피니시
  4. 00:41:701 - ^
  5. 00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - 오버매핑이네요 음이 없는곳이 너무 많음 박자 제안입니다
    SPOILER


    코드입니다
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  6. 01:00:759 (3) - 제대로 감싸는게 좋겠음
    SPOILER
  7. 01:09:936 (1,2,3,4) - 박자제안입니다 이유는 아실꺼라 믿음
    SPOILER


    코드입니다
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Insane

  1. 00:19:465 (2) - 박수 빠짐
  2. 00:22:818 (5) - 차라리 6번에 겹치세요 4번에 겹치는건 소리가 워낙 틀려서 상당히 어색함
  3. 00:29:701 (4) - 뒤집는게 좋아요 소리 바꼈는데 점프를 안치다니 ㅇ.ㅇ.
  4. 00:30:054 (5) - 마찬가지
  5. 00:40:289 (1,2) - 3/4 슬라이더로 따라가는게 더 좋을듯 00:40:465 이쪽에 드럼소리는 아무것도 안들리걸랑요? 보컬소리만 늘어지니까 추천드림
    SPOILER
  6. 00:52:642 (6) - 박수 빠짐
  7. 00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - 소리는 강조되는데 재미가 없는패턴임 00:54:759 (2,3) 이거 Ctrl + G 추천
  8. 01:07:465 (3) - 겹치기 안 어울려요 x:204, y:136 정도로 움직여 주시면 좀 치기 편할듯
    SPOILER
  9. 01:24:230 - 박수
  10. 01:24:407 (2) - 박수
That's all ;) GL :)
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
thanks scanter :3
i will consider all of them
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

scanter wrote:

ㅎㅇㅎㅇ

General

  1. 비디오 크기 열라크네요 12메가 이하로 줄이시는걸 추천드림 - 리카님 맵에서 훔쳐온거니 괜찮을듯 싶네요.
  2. 태그에 P_A_N 이거 좀 이상한데 괜찮은건가요? - 혹시나그래서 PAN 겟난맵 태그봤는데 저리됬 ><
  3. 무음처리된 soft-sliderslide 추가하시는것도 나쁘지 않아요 슬라 지나가는 소리가 약간 거슬릴 수가 있기때문에. 틱 2에서는 바꿔주는 걸 추천드립니다만 틱 1에서는 쓰는게 도움은 되요
- 감사합니다 :)

Normal

  1. 각 슬라이더 틱에 들어간 힛사 소리 너무 줄이신거같아요 55%로 놓으시면 좋을듯 - 일반 클랩하고 소리를 맞추기위해서 ><
  2. 00:03:583 - 박수소리 ㄴㄴ 아직 음이 안 올라갔어요 휘슬로 첸지 - 고쳤어요!
  3. 00:04:995 (3) - 마찬가지
- 고쳤지롱 ><

Insane

  1. 00:19:465 (2) - 박수 빠짐 - ㅇㅇ
  2. 00:22:818 (5) - 차라리 6번에 겹치세요 4번에 겹치는건 소리가 워낙 틀려서 상당히 어색함 - 그대로 둬도 괜찮을꺼같아요.
  3. 00:29:701 (4) - 뒤집는게 좋아요 소리 바꼈는데 점프를 안치다니 ㅇ.ㅇ. - 바꿔봤는데 어떻게든되겠죠 :)
  4. 00:30:054 (5) - 마찬가지 - 이건괜찮을듯싶네요.
  5. 00:40:289 (1,2) - 3/4 슬라이더로 따라가는게 더 좋을듯 00:40:465 이쪽에 드럼소리는 아무것도 안들리걸랑요? 보컬소리만 늘어지니까 추천드림
    SPOILER
    - @)(&%(*@(#*_)%@%@#!@
  6. 00:52:642 (6) - 박수 빠짐 - ㅇㅇ
  7. 00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - 소리는 강조되는데 재미가 없는패턴임 00:54:759 (2,3) 이거 Ctrl + G 추천 - ^
  8. 01:07:465 (3) - 겹치기 안 어울려요 x:204, y:136 정도로 움직여 주시면 좀 치기 편할듯 - 다르게 바꿔봤어용.
    SPOILER
  9. 01:24:230 - 박수 - ㅇㅇ
  10. 01:24:407 (2) - 박수 - ^
That's all ;) GL :)
Thanks :) MOD
Norman
Norman
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