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Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai

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Citrus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月22日 at 15:42:58

Artist: Hikasa Yoko
Title: Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai
Source: 進撃の巨人
Tags: Attack on Titan Shingeki no Kyojin ending
BPM: 85
Filesize: 9021kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.45 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (3.17 stars, 210 notes)
  3. Normal (2.06 stars, 135 notes)
Download: Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai
Download: Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (no video)
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由于我国暂时没有实行电影电视分级制度,片中的血腥暴力画面引发不少观众的热议,有的家长认为该影片不适合儿童观看。据了解,在日本,《进击的巨人》播出时段属于深夜档,按日本现行电影电视分级制度该片属于R-15,即不适合十五岁以下的儿童观看,因此中国的网络视频播放方爱奇艺为此删除了剧中大量血腥暴力画面。
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房顶小天使
wantuole
for m4m
[General]
hard 难度有几个unsnap的地方
[Normal]
fine
01:08:787 (2) - 蓝线结束会好点
[Hard]
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 一起移动到对跳形式的位子
00:11:611 (2) - 直接用1转180°更好 突然的ds下降了
00:16:375 +1 note
00:17:787 (2) - 放开点没事的x:392 y:152
00:31:375 (4,5,6) - 这里跳显得突兀了
00:42:669 (1,2,3) - ^ 跳的突兀 虽然ds小点了
00:52:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - 和前面00:51:846 (3) - 距离太近了 过于追求美观了 拉到正常的距离
01:24:140 (2) - 头上加finish

感觉hard难度没彻底放开做啊
good luck and star :)
Topic Starter
Citrus

wantuole wrote:

for m4m
[General]
hard 难度有几个unsnap的地方 已修改
[Normal]
fine
01:08:787 (2) - 蓝线结束会好点 已修改
[Hard]
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 一起移动到对跳形式的位子 这里和00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - 相对应,暂时先不改
00:11:611 (2) - 直接用1转180°更好 突然的ds下降了 已修改
00:16:375 +1 note 感觉有点别扭
00:17:787 (2) - 放开点没事的x:392 y:152 这么摆放不太好看啊
00:31:375 (4,5,6) - 这里跳显得突兀了 增加一点紧张感
00:42:669 (1,2,3) - ^ 跳的突兀 虽然ds小点了 ^
00:52:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - 和前面00:51:846 (3) - 距离太近了 过于追求美观了 拉到正常的距离 暂时不想改 :(
01:24:140 (2) - 头上加finish 已修改

感觉hard难度没彻底放开做啊
good luck and star :)
非常感谢~
ts8zs
迟到的M4M
Hard
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 建议是移到 00:02:434 (3) - 末尾往前
00:26:434 (2,3) - 左右互换
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束?
Normal
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束?
蛮规矩的
Topic Starter
Citrus

ts8zs wrote:

迟到的M4M
Hard
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 建议是移到 00:02:434 (3) - 末尾往前 这里和00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - 相对应,暂时先不改
00:26:434 (2,3) - 左右互换 已修改
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束?不太合适吧
Normal
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束?不太合适吧
蛮规矩的
非常感谢~
No_Gu
from my queue

我觉得normal的hitnormal当clap挺适合的。。

[Normal]
00:30:669 (3) - whistle
01:22:199 (1,1) - 结尾finish,顺带后面的NC有意义吗

[Hard]
00:03:669 (4) - whistle
00:18:669 (4) - ^.这段whistle下的不好啊。。一点感觉都没有
00:24:316 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这边一个whistle都没有真心难听,建议1,2,4和5的2.4repeat加whis
00:26:964 (3) - 意义不明
00:32:787 (7) - 加个NC呗
00:41:787 (6) - 这节奏理解不了
00:58:905 (1,2) - 1-whistle 2-normal hitnormal
01:01:199 (5) - clap
01:02:611 和后面那1/4拍都可以加note我觉得。。
01:04:905 (7) - 尾clap.这段不是单纯24鼓点你自己仔细听听再加
01:06:669 (1,2) - 建议每个的24都加上whis
排列倒还可以但是音效略挫你自己再斟酌下
Topic Starter
Citrus

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

我觉得normal的hitnormal当clap挺适合的。。

[Normal] 全都改了
00:30:669 (3) - whistle
01:22:199 (1,1) - 结尾finish,顺带后面的NC有意义吗

[Hard]
00:03:669 (4) - whistle
00:18:669 (4) - ^.这段whistle下的不好啊。。一点感觉都没有 又加了点whistle
00:24:316 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这边一个whistle都没有真心难听,建议1,2,4和5的2.4repeat加whis 已修改
00:26:964 (3) - 意义不明
00:32:787 (7) - 加个NC呗 已修改
00:41:787 (6) - 这节奏理解不了
00:58:905 (1,2) - 1-whistle 2-normal hitnormal 已修改
01:01:199 (5) - clap 已修改
01:02:611 和后面那1/4拍都可以加note我觉得。。
01:04:905 (7) - 尾clap.这段不是单纯24鼓点你自己仔细听听再加 已修改
01:06:669 (1,2) - 建议每个的24都加上whis 已修改
排列倒还可以但是音效略挫你自己再斟酌下
非常感谢~
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

Normal
00:15:493 (2) - Add whistle
00:16:905 (4) - Add finish
00:19:375 (2) - ^
00:21:140 (2) - At the end, add finish
00:25:022 (4) - Add finish
00:27:846 (4) - At the end, add finish
00:30:669 (3) - Add finish
00:36:316 (2) - Add whistle

Hard
00:00:669 (2) - Add finish
00:01:375 (4) - ^
00:01:728 (1) - ^
00:02:434 (3) - ^
00:03:493 (3) - ^

Sorry if I can't find problems but just the hitsounds. Good Luck and star!
Topic Starter
Citrus

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Normal
00:15:493 (2) - Add whistle
00:16:905 (4) - Add finish
00:19:375 (2) - ^
00:21:140 (2) - At the end, add finish
00:25:022 (4) - Add finish
00:27:846 (4) - At the end, add finish
00:30:669 (3) - Add finish
00:36:316 (2) - Add whistle
add some whistle
Sorry if I can't find problems but just the hitsounds. Good Luck and star!
Thank you very much~
10crystalmask01
Normal mode:
Try decreasing the Approach rate by 1 or 2. Either one seems to work pretty well!

Hard mode:
Hit circle 3 at 00:08:434 is unsnapped. Please snap it, and the next upcoming hit circle, preferably like this:


The one at 00:09:493 also appears unsnapped.

Hit circle at 00:20:589 is overlapping the next slider, it looks weird. Try moving it to this spot instead:


Try adding in 2 hit circles at 01:02:611 and 01:02:787, it'll help get rid of that awkward gap. You can arrange them something like this:


Hope this helps~! :)
Topic Starter
Citrus

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Normal mode:
Try decreasing the Approach rate by 1 or 2. Either one seems to work pretty well! I think AR5 is better

Hard mode:
Hit circle 3 at 00:08:434 is unsnapped. Please snap it, and the next upcoming hit circle, preferably like this:

Fixed
The one at 00:09:493 also appears unsnapped. Fixed

Hit circle at 00:20:589 is overlapping the next slider, it looks weird. Try moving it to this spot instead:


Try adding in 2 hit circles at 01:02:611 and 01:02:787, it'll help get rid of that awkward gap. You can arrange them something like this:


Hope this helps~! :)
Thank you very much~
thzz
Hi! from my queue~

[General]
  1. ×Hisaka Yoko ○Hikasa Yoko
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:964 - add finish
  2. 01:20:787 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:257 (1,2) - following vocal is better imo. I can't find what sounds you follow.
  2. 00:28:375 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:26:964 (3) - Resisting flow is interesting, but it can be a suddenly trap. I suggest like this easier arrangement.
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - rhythm suggestion. Following piano exactly is better I think.
  5. 01:02:611 - & 01:02:787 - add note. It makes keeping to follow vocal, and it'll be better.
  6. 01:13:905 - & 01:14:081 - ^
  7. 01:17:964 - add finish
  8. 01:20:787 - ^
Interesting map.
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Citrus

Cah-m wrote:

Hi! from my queue~

[General]
  1. ×Hisaka Yoko ○Hikasa Yoko Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:964 - add finish
  2. 01:20:787 - ^ Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:257 (1,2) - following vocal is better imo. I can't find what sounds you follow. Fixed
  2. 00:28:375 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  3. 00:26:964 (3) - Resisting flow is interesting, but it can be a suddenly trap. I suggest like this easier arrangement. Fixed
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - rhythm suggestion. Following piano exactly is better I think. I want to keep this
  5. 01:02:611 - & 01:02:787 - add note. It makes keeping to follow vocal, and it'll be better. I don't like this idea :(
  6. 01:13:905 - & 01:14:081 - ^ ^
  7. 01:17:964 - add finish
  8. 01:20:787 - ^ Fixed
Interesting map.
Good Luck~
Thank you very much~
Flower
Hi~ 123456789

[Hard]
其实开头可以用1/4折返滑条按3/4下来着 现在挺舒服就不说了
00:08:434 (3,4) - 即使是为了flow也是ctrl+G舒服些
00:09:493 (2) - 前移1/4
00:11:611 (2) - 我其实建议在这里放一个note+转盘,长音拖得比较长
00:15:846 - +whistle
00:20:787 (5) - 让红点正好落在00:20:611 (4) - 的中心
00:28:904 (3) - 间距拉大一些
00:43:199 (2,3) - 拉近一些距离 感觉不太好读
00:46:022 - +note?节奏似乎这样比较容易把握
00:58:022 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉跳的有点蛋碎 这是hard……
01:06:669 (1,2) - 我的感觉是改成折返一次的滑条比较舒服 参考LKs花舞

[Normal]
00:09:669 - whistle?
00:11:611 - 可以加spinner
后面没啥问题

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Citrus

Flower wrote:

Hi~ 123456789

[Hard]
其实开头可以用1/4折返滑条按3/4下来着 现在挺舒服就不说了
00:08:434 (3,4) - 即使是为了flow也是ctrl+G舒服些
00:09:493 (2) - 前移1/4 这样感觉有点奇怪
00:11:611 (2) - 我其实建议在这里放一个note+转盘,长音拖得比较长 暂时想保持原样
00:15:846 - +whistle
00:20:787 (5) - 让红点正好落在00:20:611 (4) - 的中心
00:28:904 (3) - 间距拉大一些
00:43:199 (2,3) - 拉近一些距离 感觉不太好读
00:46:022 - +note?节奏似乎这样比较容易把握
00:58:022 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉跳的有点蛋碎 这是hard……并不算很难吧
01:06:669 (1,2) - 我的感觉是改成折返一次的滑条比较舒服 参考LKs花舞 暂时想保持原样

[Normal]
00:09:669 - whistle?
00:11:611 - 可以加spinner
后面没啥问题

Good luck~
非常感谢~
Autumn
喵喵喵~
[General]
NC配色不错 Star~
这么短的歌不做个Easy? 比我还懒了啊 233

[Hard]
Mapflow
00:12:493 - 00:14:081 加个转盘试试
00:51:846 (3) - 折返一次试试
01:02:787 - Add?考虑叠在滑条头
01:14:081 -^ 和上面一样,这两处节奏有点空,甚至可以摆满4/4

Hitsounds
00:14:434 - 这条绿线音量控制在35-40%比较好
00:19:375 (1) - Whistle?
00:30:669 (1) - ^
00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么柑橘whistle应该放在1,3而不是2,4 你听听看
00:42:316 (8) - Whistle?
00:47:964 - ^
总体感觉这段SC2(kiai前)whistle可以多用一些,甚至当成24clap下都没问题
01:10:022 - Clap?
01:24:316 - 这个clap可以不要

[Normal]
00:11:964 - 00:13:728 这么大一片空不塞个转盘?(思考
00:35:611 - Whistle?
01:21:493 (3) - 试试Finish换掉clap

喵喵 喵喵~DT的都去吃电视(思考
Topic Starter
Citrus

Autumn wrote:

喵喵喵~
[General]
NC配色不错 Star~
这么短的歌不做个Easy? 比我还懒了啊 233 Normal和Hard应该足够了

[Hard]
Mapflow
00:12:493 - 00:14:081 加个转盘试试 我比较倾向于这里空着什么也不放
00:51:846 (3) - 折返一次试试 感觉不太合适啊
01:02:787 - Add?考虑叠在滑条头
01:14:081 -^ 和上面一样,这两处节奏有点空,甚至可以摆满4/4

Hitsounds
00:14:434 - 这条绿线音量控制在35-40%比较好 改到了40%
00:19:375 (1) - Whistle? 感觉两个Whistle连在一起不太合适,看看别人怎么说
00:30:669 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么柑橘whistle应该放在1,3而不是2,4 你听听看
00:42:316 (8) - Whistle? 有点别扭
00:47:964 - ^
总体感觉这段SC2(kiai前)whistle可以多用一些,甚至当成24clap下都没问题
01:10:022 - Clap? 感觉不太合适
01:24:316 - 这个clap可以不要 这里的Clap特意改变了音量是为了贴合音乐本身,不加Clap感觉有点空

[Normal]
00:11:964 - 00:13:728 这么大一片空不塞个转盘?(思考 同Hard
00:35:611 - Whistle?
01:21:493 (3) - 试试Finish换掉clap 有点别扭

喵喵 喵喵~DT的都去吃电视(思考
非常感谢~
Megurine Luka
0.0先占位

From PM request and 撒西不理

[General]
  1. add 進撃の巨人 in tags
  2. You can disable the letterbox in breaks

[N]
  1. 00:11:611 (4) - add a break behind would be more friendly to new babies imo.

[H]
  1. 00:14:964 (x) - add a note at here would be great:
  2. 00:17:610 (2) - leave 00:17:081 (1) - ? Cuz I feel too restricted when these two overlaps. x=512 y=192 would be a good choice so that the distance btw the end to 00:18:316 (3) - and 00:18:316 (3) - to 00:16:552 (5) - will be equal
  3. 00:21:316 (x) - same as before, this time maybe
    So that 00:22:199 (7,8) - and this note can make a triangle
  4. 00:28:904 (3) - same as before
  5. 00:46:728 (x) - add a note on the head of 00:46:905 (5) - , otherwise the rhythm sounds missing something
  6. 00:49:552 (x) - ^
  7. 00:52:375 (x) - ^
  8. 01:06:669 (1,2) - no better choices? Cuz it really feel too sudden and awkward for me

That's all~

Good Luck =3=
Topic Starter
Citrus

Megurine Luka wrote:

0.0先占位

From PM request and 撒西不理

[General] All fixed
  1. add 進撃の巨人 in tags
  2. You can disable the letterbox in breaks

[N]
  1. 00:11:611 (4) - add a break behind would be more friendly to new babies imo. Fixed

[H]All fixed
  1. 00:14:964 (x) - add a note at here would be great:
  2. 00:17:610 (2) - leave 00:17:081 (1) - ? Cuz I feel too restricted when these two overlaps. x=512 y=192 would be a good choice so that the distance btw the end to 00:18:316 (3) - and 00:18:316 (3) - to 00:16:552 (5) - will be equal
  3. 00:21:316 (x) - same as before, this time maybe
    So that 00:22:199 (7,8) - and this note can make a triangle
  4. 00:28:904 (3) - same as before
  5. 00:46:728 (x) - add a note on the head of 00:46:905 (5) - , otherwise the rhythm sounds missing something
  6. 00:49:552 (x) - ^
  7. 00:52:375 (x) - ^
  8. 01:06:669 (1,2) - no better choices? Cuz it really feel too sudden and awkward for me I want to keep this

That's all~

Good Luck =3=
非常感谢大哥~
HabiHolic
IRC Mod~

log
18:06 HabiHolic: From #modreqs
18:07 HabiHolic: hi
18:07 thou bad: hi~
18:07 HabiHolic: ><
18:07 thou bad: XD
18:08 HabiHolic: IRC Mod Possible?
18:08 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247192 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (TV Size) [Normal]]
18:09 thou bad: of course~
18:09 HabiHolic: Nice Map!!!
18:09 thou bad: Thank you
18:09 HabiHolic: 00:02:434 (4) - This is my suggestion
18:10 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) -
18:10 HabiHolic: Similarly with the slider that looks like above
18:14 thou bad: you mean use the same angle?
18:14 HabiHolic: what?
18:14 HabiHolic: hmm not understand?
18:14 thou bad: yes
18:14 HabiHolic: ah ha
18:15 thou bad: lol
18:15 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) - Copy and 00:01:728 (3) - This section paste
18:15 HabiHolic: This~
18:16 thou bad: like this?
18:16 thou bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/974719
18:16 HabiHolic: Oh Good Yes~
18:17 thou bad: wow looks fine! nice idea~
18:17 HabiHolic: Thanks~
18:17 thou bad: Thank you very much~
18:18 HabiHolic: oh..
18:18 HabiHolic: No Pick T.T
18:18 HabiHolic: nice MAP T.T
18:18 *HabiHolic run
18:19 HabiHolic: Hard open please~
18:21 HabiHolic: 00:42:140 (7) - NC?
18:21 thou bad: OK~
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:09:846 (2) - Ctrl + g
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:10:552 (4) - ^
18:25 HabiHolic: Ok
18:25 HabiHolic: No Pick
18:26 HabiHolic: T.T Nice Map T.T
18:26 thou bad: Good idea ~I'll fix all of them
18:26 HabiHolic: Oh
18:26 HabiHolic: ><
Topic Starter
Citrus

HabiHolic wrote:

IRC Mod~

log
18:06 HabiHolic: From #modreqs
18:07 HabiHolic: hi
18:07 thou bad: hi~
18:07 HabiHolic: ><
18:07 thou bad: XD
18:08 HabiHolic: IRC Mod Possible?
18:08 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247192 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (TV Size) [Normal]]
18:09 thou bad: of course~
18:09 HabiHolic: Nice Map!!!
18:09 thou bad: Thank you
18:09 HabiHolic: 00:02:434 (4) - This is my suggestion
18:10 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) -
18:10 HabiHolic: Similarly with the slider that looks like above
18:14 thou bad: you mean use the same angle?
18:14 HabiHolic: what?
18:14 HabiHolic: hmm not understand?
18:14 thou bad: yes
18:14 HabiHolic: ah ha
18:15 thou bad: lol
18:15 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) - Copy and 00:01:728 (3) - This section paste
18:15 HabiHolic: This~
18:16 thou bad: like this?
18:16 thou bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/974719
18:16 HabiHolic: Oh Good Yes~
18:17 thou bad: wow looks fine! nice idea~
18:17 HabiHolic: Thanks~
18:17 thou bad: Thank you very much~
18:18 HabiHolic: oh..
18:18 HabiHolic: No Pick T.T
18:18 HabiHolic: nice MAP T.T
18:18 *HabiHolic run
18:19 HabiHolic: Hard open please~
18:21 HabiHolic: 00:42:140 (7) - NC?
18:21 thou bad: OK~
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:09:846 (2) - Ctrl + g
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:10:552 (4) - ^
18:25 HabiHolic: Ok
18:25 HabiHolic: No Pick
18:26 HabiHolic: T.T Nice Map T.T
18:26 thou bad: Good idea ~I'll fix all of them
18:26 HabiHolic: Oh
18:26 HabiHolic: ><
All fixed~
Thank you very much~
popner
irc mod

SPOILER
2013-09-19 11:22 popner: 00:20:081 (3,4,5,6,7) -
2013-09-19 11:22 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPy0.jpg 我觉得这节奏更符合vocal啊
2013-09-19 11:23 thou bad: 我试试
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 好 就这么愉快的决定了
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 我看看怎么排列比较好
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 因为我看你前面跟的是vocal
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 所以这里不跟vocal感觉不好
2013-09-19 11:26 thou bad: 嗯
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 00:22:905 (1,2,3) - 这个也是http://puu.sh/4uPFZ.jpg
2013-09-19 11:28 thou bad: 好
2013-09-19 11:29 popner: 01:05:964 (5,6,1) - 这里的spacing..
2013-09-19 11:31 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPOv.jpg 我随便摆了一下
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 让01:06:669 (1) - 离01:06:493 (6) - 近一点么?
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 哇
2013-09-19 11:33 popner: 01:14:964 (3,4) - 这里不放三连吗
2013-09-19 11:34 thou bad: 好

Call me back after you update.
Topic Starter
Citrus

popner wrote:

irc mod

SPOILER
2013-09-19 11:22 popner: 00:20:081 (3,4,5,6,7) -
2013-09-19 11:22 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPy0.jpg 我觉得这节奏更符合vocal啊
2013-09-19 11:23 thou bad: 我试试
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 好 就这么愉快的决定了
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 我看看怎么排列比较好
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 因为我看你前面跟的是vocal
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 所以这里不跟vocal感觉不好
2013-09-19 11:26 thou bad: 嗯
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 00:22:905 (1,2,3) - 这个也是http://puu.sh/4uPFZ.jpg
2013-09-19 11:28 thou bad: 好
2013-09-19 11:29 popner: 01:05:964 (5,6,1) - 这里的spacing..
2013-09-19 11:31 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPOv.jpg 我随便摆了一下
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 让01:06:669 (1) - 离01:06:493 (6) - 近一点么?
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 哇
2013-09-19 11:33 popner: 01:14:964 (3,4) - 这里不放三连吗
2013-09-19 11:34 thou bad: 好

Call me back after you update.
全都修改了 非常感谢~
popner
Bubbled
Topic Starter
Citrus

popner wrote:

Bubbled
Thank you very much~
HabiHolic
Go go thou bad!
mancuso_JM_
Hiya! Random bubble check!

[General:]

  1. Video: The video file still has audio, and it is ocupying extra space, this is not recommended. Remove the audio from the video file please!
  2. Difficulty Spread: The spread is really bad, the gap between the difficulties is big, because Hard has a lot of jumpy patterns and Normal is really simple in general. I highly recommend you to map other difficulty , it is a Tv Size after all.
  3. Background: The BG is rankable actually, but I recommend a better quality. I think you can try using a 1024x768 instead, here you have one if you want to use it :P
  4. Combo Colours: The grey colour (combo colour 1) produce a bad blend with the video, I think is a better idea if you can replace it for other one.
  5. Tags: Add ending here (? I have seen that in a lot of tv size ranked maps and it could be good to add it here too.
[Normal:]

  1. Settings:
    --> The AR is way too fast comparing with the BPM, music and Slider Velocity, I recommend you to reduce it by 1 tick (AR-1)
  1. 00:03:140 (1) - Add a Whistle at the slider end to emphasize the piano
  2. 00:10:199 (3,4) - This sounds just bad, because there is no sound where you placed the end of (3) (it is a simple solo in the piano). I recommend you to delete (4) and extend the end of the slider to this position, try to reduce the volume in the slider end too.
  3. 00:19:375 (2) - Add a Whistle here to emphasize the piano too.
  4. 01:01:022 (3) - This 3/4 is unnecesary (I know that there is a hit over the 1/4 tick but it is not high in the music and this pattern plays bad actually), reduce this slider length in 1/4 please.
  5. 01:02:434 (1) - Add a finisher (?
  6. 01:10:199 (1) - Remove this New Combo, this combo spam looks just useless.
  7. 01:13:728 (1) - Add a finisher (?
- I didn't like some 3/4 in the chorus section, but at least I can understand the usage of them

[Hard:]

  1. 00:10:199 (1,2) - This sounds pretty bad as I told you in Normal, because this is only a solo in the piano. Just use a long slider, starting in 00:10:199 - and ending in 00:11:611 - the rest is just useless. You can add a break after the Slider as you did in Normal
  2. 00:21:140 (5,1) - I can't understand this jump at all, it is not representing the music. Reduce the length of it considerably please!
  3. 00:31:375 (4,5) - (^)
  4. 00:34:199 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern plays/flow awkwardly I have to say, at the same time sounds bad :/. A simpler rhythm and notes placement like the following one will work definetly.
  5. 00:37:022 (1,2) - Random jump, and it doesn't represent the music at all again :/. Change that for the sake of the flow please.
  6. 00:38:434 (4,5) - (^)
  7. 00:58:905 (1,2) - This jump is a bit exaggerated I think, I couldn't complete it in a comfortable way in addition the music doesn't represent that. Moving (1) to x:144 y:200 and (2) to x:368 y:184 you'll be fixing this issue.
  8. 01:08:434 (2,3,4) - You can use something like this here, it plays and looks much better imo.. (if you use it here, use it in similar patterns too)
  9. 01:10:905 (1,2,3,4) - You used a jump between (2,3,4) but not between (1,2) which is a really bad thing because the pitch in the music doesn't change at all. I recommend you to reduce the jump between (2,3,4) is the best option so far in my opinion.
  10. 01:18:669 (5,1,2) - This jump is bad placed, if you want a jump you should place it between (1,2) and not between (5,1) because it is where the music change notably..
  11. 01:20:434 (4,5,6) - After the constant 1/8 patterns, this 1/4 stack confuse me, really. Try using other variety and unstacking this pattern.
  12. 01:23:258 (3,1) - If I were you, I'd reduce this jump a bit too, but this is not a must.
- Sorry, but this Hard is not ready for rank still, it needs more imporvements, especially on spacing (I think I still missed some jumps in your diff. to mention, but they are the most notable). It looks like you only added jump to make the map more ''enjoyable'' but you didn't achieve that especially for the slow song.
I highly recommend you to consider every point on my mod to make the diff. more constant and consistent. I hope this can helps you!


Well, I recommend you to find some more mods before to calling me back..
I think you can work more in this mapset, and it's still not ready.
That's all from me.. Popping over red thing in ''General''
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Citrus

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Hiya! Random bubble check!

[General:]

  1. Video: The video file still has audio, and it is ocupying extra space, this is not recommended. Remove the audio from the video file please! no audio in the video file
  2. Difficulty Spread: The spread is really bad, the gap between the difficulties is big, because Hard has a lot of jumpy patterns and Normal is really simple in general. I highly recommend you to map other difficulty , it is a Tv Size after all. I will not add other difficulty,but I will make hard diff easier
  3. Background: The BG is rankable actually, but I recommend a better quality. I think you can try using a 1024x768 instead, here you have one if you want to use it :P changed another BG
  4. Combo Colours: The grey colour (combo colour 1) produce a bad blend with the video, I think is a better idea if you can replace it for other one. Fixed
  5. Tags: Add ending here (? I have seen that in a lot of tv size ranked maps and it could be good to add it here too. Fixed
[Normal:]
All fixed
  1. Settings:
    --> The AR is way too fast comparing with the BPM, music and Slider Velocity, I recommend you to reduce it by 1 tick (AR-1)
  1. 00:03:140 (1) - Add a Whistle at the slider end to emphasize the piano
  2. 00:10:199 (3,4) - This sounds just bad, because there is no sound where you placed the end of (3) (it is a simple solo in the piano). I recommend you to delete (4) and extend the end of the slider to this position, try to reduce the volume in the slider end too.
  3. 00:19:375 (2) - Add a Whistle here to emphasize the piano too.
  4. 01:01:022 (3) - This 3/4 is unnecesary (I know that there is a hit over the 1/4 tick but it is not high in the music and this pattern plays bad actually), reduce this slider length in 1/4 please.
  5. 01:02:434 (1) - Add a finisher (?
  6. 01:10:199 (1) - Remove this New Combo, this combo spam looks just useless.
  7. 01:13:728 (1) - Add a finisher (?
- I didn't like some 3/4 in the chorus section, but at least I can understand the usage of them

[Hard:]
All fixed
  1. 00:10:199 (1,2) - This sounds pretty bad as I told you in Normal, because this is only a solo in the piano. Just use a long slider, starting in 00:10:199 - and ending in 00:11:611 - the rest is just useless. You can add a break after the Slider as you did in Normal
  2. 00:21:140 (5,1) - I can't understand this jump at all, it is not representing the music. Reduce the length of it considerably please!
  3. 00:31:375 (4,5) - (^)
  4. 00:34:199 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern plays/flow awkwardly I have to say, at the same time sounds bad :/. A simpler rhythm and notes placement like the following one will work definetly.
  5. 00:37:022 (1,2) - Random jump, and it doesn't represent the music at all again :/. Change that for the sake of the flow please.
  6. 00:38:434 (4,5) - (^)
  7. 00:58:905 (1,2) - This jump is a bit exaggerated I think, I couldn't complete it in a comfortable way in addition the music doesn't represent that. Moving (1) to x:144 y:200 and (2) to x:368 y:184 you'll be fixing this issue.
  8. 01:08:434 (2,3,4) - You can use something like this here, it plays and looks much better imo.. (if you use it here, use it in similar patterns too)
  9. 01:10:905 (1,2,3,4) - You used a jump between (2,3,4) but not between (1,2) which is a really bad thing because the pitch in the music doesn't change at all. I recommend you to reduce the jump between (2,3,4) is the best option so far in my opinion.
  10. 01:18:669 (5,1,2) - This jump is bad placed, if you want a jump you should place it between (1,2) and not between (5,1) because it is where the music change notably..
  11. 01:20:434 (4,5,6) - After the constant 1/8 patterns, this 1/4 stack confuse me, really. Try using other variety and unstacking this pattern.
  12. 01:23:258 (3,1) - If I were you, I'd reduce this jump a bit too, but this is not a must.
- Sorry, but this Hard is not ready for rank still, it needs more imporvements, especially on spacing (I think I still missed some jumps in your diff. to mention, but they are the most notable). It looks like you only added jump to make the map more ''enjoyable'' but you didn't achieve that especially for the slow song.
I highly recommend you to consider every point on my mod to make the diff. more constant and consistent. I hope this can helps you!


Well, I recommend you to find some more mods before to calling me back..
I think you can work more in this mapset, and it's still not ready.
That's all from me.. Popping over red thing in ''General''
Good Luck!
Thank you very much~
Chloe
irc with mapper, good luck.

Chatlog
17:07 Chloe: 00:08:787 (1) -
17:07 Chloe: 这个 我觉得不太平滑
17:07 Chloe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1027389 你可以试试这样
17:07 Chloe: 他的尾巴和00:10:199 (1) -的中间是在一起
17:08 thou bad: 好 我试试
17:08 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4Lvkm.jpg然后你看现在这个球没有完全凹进去
17:09 Chloe: 我建议如果做这种扭曲的NOTE 最好是这样http://puu.sh/4Lvl7.jpg
17:10 Chloe: 00:09:493 (2,3,4) -
17:10 thou bad: 改好了
17:10 Chloe: 这3距离有点近
17:10 Chloe: 00:08:081 (1,2,3,4) - 这边都放开了 没必要还是像之前那样一直1.34DS了
17:11 Chloe: 也放开比较好打
17:11 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4Lvow.jpg
17:12 Chloe: 类似于这样比较好吧 形状或者梗可以随意但是间距最好大一点
17:13 thou bad: QAQ 这里我想先保留 那里间距大了我觉得有点别扭
17:13 Chloe: 好 不过我觉得不太好就是了
17:13 Chloe: 00:17:081 (1) -
17:13 Chloe: 尾巴也可以加whistle
17:14 Chloe: 00:19:375 (1) -
17:14 Chloe: finish
17:14 thou bad: 这里加finish不会太突兀么?
17:15 Chloe: 我觉得不会
17:15 thou bad: 不用减小点音量么?
17:16 Chloe: 不需要吧
17:16 Chloe: 00:20:611 (4,1) - 这俩开头都可以加whistle
17:16 Chloe: 00:21:846 (2) - ^
17:17 thou bad: 好
17:18 Chloe: 00:28:375 (2) - 尾巴^
17:18 thou bad: 好
17:18 Chloe: 00:30:669 (1) - finish
17:19 thou bad: 好
17:20 Chloe: 00:37:022 (1) - 这边开始节奏有些空洞
17:20 Chloe: 我的建议是补一些1/4单点
17:21 Chloe: 00:38:258 (3) - 比如这可以ADD一个单点 放在00:37:022 (1) - 的尾巴上
17:22 Chloe: 00:40:375 (3) - add
17:22 Chloe: 00:41:258 (6,7) - 这边这样自创节奏不太好 因为前面是在跟鼓点 所以我建议这里也跟
17:23 thou bad: 这里原来有的.....BAT的说嫌太跳了 我又想不到更好的 就删了
17:24 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4LvHu.jpg
17:24 Chloe: 我建议还是放常规节奏比较好
17:26 thou bad: 把00:41:787 (6) - 后移1/4 然后删掉00:42:493 (3) - 怎么样?
17:27 thou bad: 啊 不对 删掉00:42:140 (1) - 这个
17:27 Chloe: 也行
17:27 thou bad: 好
17:29 Chloe: 00:55:022 (3) - 我觉得你应该是在跟鼓点 那么其实这边放个单点更好
17:31 Chloe: 你现在这里的下法有点跟vocal 不太合适
17:31 thou bad: 放个单点是什么? 直接在00:55:022放?
17:31 Chloe: 01:05:258 (1,2,3,4) - 还有KIAI开始类似这种单点间距就该变大了
17:31 Chloe: 对 滑条不要了
17:32 thou bad: 要把00:54:669 (2) - 也换成单点么?
17:32 Chloe: 那个不用
17:32 Chloe: 01:21:405 (2) -
17:32 Chloe: 这个 可以删了
17:33 Chloe: 因为01:17:787 (1,2,3) - 对应的是01:20:611 (5,6,7) -
17:33 Chloe: 01:21:316 (1,2) - 应该对应01:18:316 (4,5) - 4的尾巴和5
17:34 thou bad: 01:21:405 这里有个音哎 不要紧么?
17:36 Chloe: 没事吧应该。
17:36 thou bad: 好
17:36 Chloe: 就像01:22:375 这里也有个而没用
17:40 Chloe: 01:24:669 (3) -
17:41 Chloe: 建议ADD spinner可以减短1/4
17:42 thou bad: 01:28:375
17:42 thou bad: 这里结束?
17:42 Chloe: 不 老地方结束 只是开头减少1/4而已
17:43 Chloe: 、
17:43 Chloe: 。
17:43 Chloe: 上面没说清楚 01:24:669 - 我指这边可以做个单点
17:44 thou bad: 懂了
17:45 thou bad: QAQ 前辈我还有个问题 我的video里有audio么
17:45 Chloe: eh
17:46 Chloe: 我下了NV版 等等
17:51 Chloe: 没有
Topic Starter
Citrus

Chloe wrote:

irc with mapper, good luck.

Chatlog
17:07 Chloe: 00:08:787 (1) -
17:07 Chloe: 这个 我觉得不太平滑
17:07 Chloe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1027389 你可以试试这样
17:07 Chloe: 他的尾巴和00:10:199 (1) -的中间是在一起
17:08 thou bad: 好 我试试
17:08 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4Lvkm.jpg然后你看现在这个球没有完全凹进去
17:09 Chloe: 我建议如果做这种扭曲的NOTE 最好是这样http://puu.sh/4Lvl7.jpg
17:10 Chloe: 00:09:493 (2,3,4) -
17:10 thou bad: 改好了
17:10 Chloe: 这3距离有点近
17:10 Chloe: 00:08:081 (1,2,3,4) - 这边都放开了 没必要还是像之前那样一直1.34DS了
17:11 Chloe: 也放开比较好打
17:11 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4Lvow.jpg
17:12 Chloe: 类似于这样比较好吧 形状或者梗可以随意但是间距最好大一点
17:13 thou bad: QAQ 这里我想先保留 那里间距大了我觉得有点别扭
17:13 Chloe: 好 不过我觉得不太好就是了
17:13 Chloe: 00:17:081 (1) -
17:13 Chloe: 尾巴也可以加whistle
17:14 Chloe: 00:19:375 (1) -
17:14 Chloe: finish
17:14 thou bad: 这里加finish不会太突兀么?
17:15 Chloe: 我觉得不会
17:15 thou bad: 不用减小点音量么?
17:16 Chloe: 不需要吧
17:16 Chloe: 00:20:611 (4,1) - 这俩开头都可以加whistle
17:16 Chloe: 00:21:846 (2) - ^
17:17 thou bad: 好
17:18 Chloe: 00:28:375 (2) - 尾巴^
17:18 thou bad: 好
17:18 Chloe: 00:30:669 (1) - finish
17:19 thou bad: 好
17:20 Chloe: 00:37:022 (1) - 这边开始节奏有些空洞
17:20 Chloe: 我的建议是补一些1/4单点
17:21 Chloe: 00:38:258 (3) - 比如这可以ADD一个单点 放在00:37:022 (1) - 的尾巴上
17:22 Chloe: 00:40:375 (3) - add
17:22 Chloe: 00:41:258 (6,7) - 这边这样自创节奏不太好 因为前面是在跟鼓点 所以我建议这里也跟
17:23 thou bad: 这里原来有的.....BAT的说嫌太跳了 我又想不到更好的 就删了
17:24 Chloe: http://puu.sh/4LvHu.jpg
17:24 Chloe: 我建议还是放常规节奏比较好
17:26 thou bad: 把00:41:787 (6) - 后移1/4 然后删掉00:42:493 (3) - 怎么样?
17:27 thou bad: 啊 不对 删掉00:42:140 (1) - 这个
17:27 Chloe: 也行
17:27 thou bad: 好
17:29 Chloe: 00:55:022 (3) - 我觉得你应该是在跟鼓点 那么其实这边放个单点更好
17:31 Chloe: 你现在这里的下法有点跟vocal 不太合适
17:31 thou bad: 放个单点是什么? 直接在00:55:022放?
17:31 Chloe: 01:05:258 (1,2,3,4) - 还有KIAI开始类似这种单点间距就该变大了这里先保留一下,我还是挺喜欢这么排列的
17:31 Chloe: 对 滑条不要了
17:32 thou bad: 要把00:54:669 (2) - 也换成单点么?
17:32 Chloe: 那个不用
17:32 Chloe: 01:21:405 (2) -
17:32 Chloe: 这个 可以删了
17:33 Chloe: 因为01:17:787 (1,2,3) - 对应的是01:20:611 (5,6,7) -
17:33 Chloe: 01:21:316 (1,2) - 应该对应01:18:316 (4,5) - 4的尾巴和5
17:34 thou bad: 01:21:405 这里有个音哎 不要紧么?
17:36 Chloe: 没事吧应该。
17:36 thou bad: 好
17:36 Chloe: 就像01:22:375 这里也有个而没用
17:40 Chloe: 01:24:669 (3) -
17:41 Chloe: 建议ADD spinner可以减短1/4
17:42 thou bad: 01:28:375
17:42 thou bad: 这里结束?
17:42 Chloe: 不 老地方结束 只是开头减少1/4而已
17:43 Chloe: 、
17:43 Chloe: 。
17:43 Chloe: 上面没说清楚 01:24:669 - 我指这边可以做个单点
17:44 thou bad: 懂了
17:45 thou bad: QAQ 前辈我还有个问题 我的video里有audio么
17:45 Chloe: eh
17:46 Chloe: 我下了NV版 等等
17:51 Chloe: 没有
非常感谢~
Melophobia
Some video players will take an mp3 in the same folder and use that as the audio if it has the same name as the video file.
mancuso_JM_

Melophobia wrote:

Some video players will take an mp3 in the same folder and use that as the audio if it has the same name as the video file.
I see.. thanks for clarifying :P
Atrue
hello~
来自我的modding queue
这里是我的建议 这里是我觉得出现了问题的地方
General
好图。hard 略难了一点
Normal
高潮部分可以试试1.2*sv
Hard
01:06:669 (1,2) - 这个地方要么把音效减小,或者取消口哨,要么就弄得简单点,听着会感觉违和。
这几个地方可以考虑控制间距弄得小一点:
1:00:01:728 (1,2,3,4) 缩小1和2,3和4之间的距离
2:00:07:022 (2,3) - 缩小一点2、3之间的距离
3:00:37:022 (1,2,3,4) - 缩小四个滑条之间的距离会好一点
4:00:46:905 (4) - 我觉得这里不适合跳太大,你用了1.5倍的距离有点大了
5:00:51:140 (1,2) - 缩短距离,没有必要用太大的跳
00:51:846 (3) - 跟上一条一样
6:00:54:669 (2,3) - 这里也是跳的太大
高潮部分怎么跳我觉得都有凭据,因为歌还是挺适合跳的,不过前边就少用一点跳吧。。
祝rank~
感谢参加我的modding queue。
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