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Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai

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Citrus
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Citrus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月22日 at 15:42:58

Artist: Hikasa Yoko
Title: Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai
Source: 進撃の巨人
Tags: Attack on Titan Shingeki no Kyojin ending
BPM: 85
Filesize: 9021kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.45 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (3.17 stars, 210 notes)
  3. Normal (2.06 stars, 135 notes)
Download: Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai
Download: Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (no video)
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由于我国暂时没有实行电影电视分级制度，片中的血腥暴力画面引发不少观众的热议，有的家长认为该影片不适合儿童观看。据了解，在日本，《进击的巨人》播出时段属于深夜档，按日本现行电影电视分级制度该片属于R-15，即不适合十五岁以下的儿童观看，因此中国的网络视频播放方爱奇艺为此删除了剧中大量血腥暴力画面。
Last edited by Citrus , edited 54 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
房顶小天使
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
for m4m
[General]
hard 难度有几个unsnap的地方
[Normal]
fine
01:08:787 (2) - 蓝线结束会好点
[Hard]
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 一起移动到对跳形式的位子
00:11:611 (2) - 直接用1转180°更好 突然的ds下降了
00:16:375 +1 note
00:17:787 (2) - 放开点没事的x:392 y:152
00:31:375 (4,5,6) - 这里跳显得突兀了
00:42:669 (1,2,3) - ^ 跳的突兀 虽然ds小点了
00:52:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - 和前面00:51:846 (3) - 距离太近了 过于追求美观了 拉到正常的距离
01:24:140 (2) - 头上加finish

感觉hard难度没彻底放开做啊
good luck and star :)
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

wantuole wrote:

for m4m
[General]
hard 难度有几个unsnap的地方 已修改
[Normal]
fine
01:08:787 (2) - 蓝线结束会好点 已修改
[Hard]
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 一起移动到对跳形式的位子 这里和00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - 相对应，暂时先不改
00:11:611 (2) - 直接用1转180°更好 突然的ds下降了 已修改
00:16:375 +1 note 感觉有点别扭
00:17:787 (2) - 放开点没事的x:392 y:152 这么摆放不太好看啊
00:31:375 (4,5,6) - 这里跳显得突兀了 增加一点紧张感
00:42:669 (1,2,3) - ^ 跳的突兀 虽然ds小点了 ^
00:52:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - 和前面00:51:846 (3) - 距离太近了 过于追求美观了 拉到正常的距离 暂时不想改 :(
01:24:140 (2) - 头上加finish 已修改

感觉hard难度没彻底放开做啊
good luck and star :)
非常感谢～
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
迟到的M4M
Hard
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 建议是移到 00:02:434 (3) - 末尾往前
00:26:434 (2,3) - 左右互换
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束？
Normal
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束？
蛮规矩的
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

ts8zs wrote:

迟到的M4M
Hard
00:03:140 (1,2,3,4) - 建议是移到 00:02:434 (3) - 末尾往前 这里和00:05:964 (1,2,3,4) - 相对应，暂时先不改
00:26:434 (2,3) - 左右互换 已修改
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束？不太合适吧
Normal
01:24:669 (1) - 尝试在01:28:199 - 结束？不太合适吧
蛮规矩的
非常感谢～
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
from my queue

我觉得normal的hitnormal当clap挺适合的。。

[Normal]
00:30:669 (3) - whistle
01:22:199 (1,1) - 结尾finish，顺带后面的NC有意义吗

[Hard]
00:03:669 (4) - whistle
00:18:669 (4) - ^.这段whistle下的不好啊。。一点感觉都没有
00:24:316 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这边一个whistle都没有真心难听，建议1,2,4和5的2.4repeat加whis
00:26:964 (3) - 意义不明
00:32:787 (7) - 加个NC呗
00:41:787 (6) - 这节奏理解不了
00:58:905 (1,2) - 1-whistle 2-normal hitnormal
01:01:199 (5) - clap
01:02:611 和后面那1/4拍都可以加note我觉得。。
01:04:905 (7) - 尾clap.这段不是单纯24鼓点你自己仔细听听再加
01:06:669 (1,2) - 建议每个的24都加上whis
排列倒还可以但是音效略挫你自己再斟酌下
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

我觉得normal的hitnormal当clap挺适合的。。

[Normal] 全都改了
00:30:669 (3) - whistle
01:22:199 (1,1) - 结尾finish，顺带后面的NC有意义吗

[Hard]
00:03:669 (4) - whistle 好
00:18:669 (4) - ^.这段whistle下的不好啊。。一点感觉都没有 又加了点whistle
00:24:316 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这边一个whistle都没有真心难听，建议1,2,4和5的2.4repeat加whis 已修改
00:26:964 (3) - 意义不明
00:32:787 (7) - 加个NC呗 已修改
00:41:787 (6) - 这节奏理解不了
00:58:905 (1,2) - 1-whistle 2-normal hitnormal 已修改
01:01:199 (5) - clap 已修改
01:02:611 和后面那1/4拍都可以加note我觉得。。
01:04:905 (7) - 尾clap.这段不是单纯24鼓点你自己仔细听听再加 已修改
01:06:669 (1,2) - 建议每个的24都加上whis 已修改
排列倒还可以但是音效略挫你自己再斟酌下
非常感谢～
Last edited by Citrus , edited 1 time in total.
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

Normal
00:15:493 (2) - Add whistle
00:16:905 (4) - Add finish
00:19:375 (2) - ^
00:21:140 (2) - At the end, add finish
00:25:022 (4) - Add finish
00:27:846 (4) - At the end, add finish
00:30:669 (3) - Add finish
00:36:316 (2) - Add whistle

Hard
00:00:669 (2) - Add finish
00:01:375 (4) - ^
00:01:728 (1) - ^
00:02:434 (3) - ^
00:03:493 (3) - ^

Sorry if I can't find problems but just the hitsounds. Good Luck and star!
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

Normal
00:15:493 (2) - Add whistle
00:16:905 (4) - Add finish
00:19:375 (2) - ^
00:21:140 (2) - At the end, add finish
00:25:022 (4) - Add finish
00:27:846 (4) - At the end, add finish
00:30:669 (3) - Add finish
00:36:316 (2) - Add whistle
add some whistle
Sorry if I can't find problems but just the hitsounds. Good Luck and star!
Thank you very much～
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Normal mode:
Try decreasing the Approach rate by 1 or 2. Either one seems to work pretty well!

Hard mode:
Hit circle 3 at 00:08:434 is unsnapped. Please snap it, and the next upcoming hit circle, preferably like this:


The one at 00:09:493 also appears unsnapped.

Hit circle at 00:20:589 is overlapping the next slider, it looks weird. Try moving it to this spot instead:


Try adding in 2 hit circles at 01:02:611 and 01:02:787, it'll help get rid of that awkward gap. You can arrange them something like this:


Hope this helps~! :)
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Normal mode:
Try decreasing the Approach rate by 1 or 2. Either one seems to work pretty well! I think AR5 is better

Hard mode:
Hit circle 3 at 00:08:434 is unsnapped. Please snap it, and the next upcoming hit circle, preferably like this:

Fixed
The one at 00:09:493 also appears unsnapped. Fixed

Hit circle at 00:20:589 is overlapping the next slider, it looks weird. Try moving it to this spot instead:


Try adding in 2 hit circles at 01:02:611 and 01:02:787, it'll help get rid of that awkward gap. You can arrange them something like this:


Hope this helps~! :)
Thank you very much~
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz
Hi! from my queue~

[General]
  1. ×Hisaka Yoko　○Hikasa Yoko
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:964 - add finish
  2. 01:20:787 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:257 (1,2) - following vocal is better imo. I can't find what sounds you follow.
    image
  2. 00:28:375 (2,3,4) - ^
    image
  3. 00:26:964 (3) - Resisting flow is interesting, but it can be a suddenly trap. I suggest like this easier arrangement.
    image
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - rhythm suggestion. Following piano exactly is better I think.
    image
  5. 01:02:611 - & 01:02:787 - add note. It makes keeping to follow vocal, and it'll be better.
  6. 01:13:905 - & 01:14:081 - ^
  7. 01:17:964 - add finish
  8. 01:20:787 - ^
Interesting map.
Good Luck~
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Cah-m wrote:

Hi! from my queue~

[General]
  1. ×Hisaka Yoko　○Hikasa Yoko Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:964 - add finish
  2. 01:20:787 - ^ Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:257 (1,2) - following vocal is better imo. I can't find what sounds you follow. Fixed
    image
  2. 00:28:375 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
    image
  3. 00:26:964 (3) - Resisting flow is interesting, but it can be a suddenly trap. I suggest like this easier arrangement. Fixed
    image
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - rhythm suggestion. Following piano exactly is better I think. I want to keep this
    image
  5. 01:02:611 - & 01:02:787 - add note. It makes keeping to follow vocal, and it'll be better. I don't like this idea :(
  6. 01:13:905 - & 01:14:081 - ^ ^
  7. 01:17:964 - add finish
  8. 01:20:787 - ^ Fixed
Interesting map.
Good Luck~
Thank you very much~
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ 123456789

[Hard]
其实开头可以用1/4折返滑条按3/4下来着 现在挺舒服就不说了
00:08:434 (3,4) - 即使是为了flow也是ctrl+G舒服些
00:09:493 (2) - 前移1/4
00:11:611 (2) - 我其实建议在这里放一个note+转盘，长音拖得比较长
00:15:846 - +whistle
00:20:787 (5) - 让红点正好落在00:20:611 (4) - 的中心
00:28:904 (3) - 间距拉大一些
00:43:199 (2,3) - 拉近一些距离 感觉不太好读
00:46:022 - +note？节奏似乎这样比较容易把握
00:58:022 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉跳的有点蛋碎 这是hard……
01:06:669 (1,2) - 我的感觉是改成折返一次的滑条比较舒服 参考LKs花舞

[Normal]
00:09:669 - whistle？
00:11:611 - 可以加spinner
后面没啥问题

Good luck~
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Flower wrote:

Hi~ 123456789

[Hard]
其实开头可以用1/4折返滑条按3/4下来着 现在挺舒服就不说了
00:08:434 (3,4) - 即使是为了flow也是ctrl+G舒服些 好
00:09:493 (2) - 前移1/4 这样感觉有点奇怪
00:11:611 (2) - 我其实建议在这里放一个note+转盘，长音拖得比较长 暂时想保持原样
00:15:846 - +whistle 好
00:20:787 (5) - 让红点正好落在00:20:611 (4) - 的中心 好
00:28:904 (3) - 间距拉大一些
00:43:199 (2,3) - 拉近一些距离 感觉不太好读
00:46:022 - +note？节奏似乎这样比较容易把握
00:58:022 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉跳的有点蛋碎 这是hard……并不算很难吧
01:06:669 (1,2) - 我的感觉是改成折返一次的滑条比较舒服 参考LKs花舞 暂时想保持原样

[Normal]
00:09:669 - whistle？好
00:11:611 - 可以加spinner
后面没啥问题

Good luck~
非常感谢～
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
喵喵喵~
[General]
NC配色不错 Star~
这么短的歌不做个Easy? 比我还懒了啊 233

[Hard]
Mapflow
00:12:493 - 00:14:081 加个转盘试试
00:51:846 (3) - 折返一次试试
01:02:787 - Add?考虑叠在滑条头
01:14:081 -^ 和上面一样,这两处节奏有点空,甚至可以摆满4/4

Hitsounds
00:14:434 - 这条绿线音量控制在35-40%比较好
00:19:375 (1) - Whistle?
00:30:669 (1) - ^
00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么柑橘whistle应该放在1,3而不是2,4 你听听看
00:42:316 (8) - Whistle?
00:47:964 - ^
总体感觉这段SC2(kiai前)whistle可以多用一些,甚至当成24clap下都没问题
01:10:022 - Clap?
01:24:316 - 这个clap可以不要

[Normal]
00:11:964 - 00:13:728 这么大一片空不塞个转盘?(思考
00:35:611 - Whistle?
01:21:493 (3) - 试试Finish换掉clap

喵喵 喵喵~DT的都去吃电视(思考
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Autumn wrote:

喵喵喵~
[General]
NC配色不错 Star~
这么短的歌不做个Easy? 比我还懒了啊 233 Normal和Hard应该足够了

[Hard]
Mapflow
00:12:493 - 00:14:081 加个转盘试试 我比较倾向于这里空着什么也不放
00:51:846 (3) - 折返一次试试 感觉不太合适啊
01:02:787 - Add?考虑叠在滑条头 好
01:14:081 -^ 和上面一样,这两处节奏有点空,甚至可以摆满4/4 好

Hitsounds
00:14:434 - 这条绿线音量控制在35-40%比较好 改到了40%
00:19:375 (1) - Whistle? 感觉两个Whistle连在一起不太合适，看看别人怎么说
00:30:669 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - 我怎么柑橘whistle应该放在1,3而不是2,4 你听听看 好
00:42:316 (8) - Whistle? 有点别扭
00:47:964 - ^ 好
总体感觉这段SC2(kiai前)whistle可以多用一些,甚至当成24clap下都没问题
01:10:022 - Clap? 感觉不太合适
01:24:316 - 这个clap可以不要 这里的Clap特意改变了音量是为了贴合音乐本身，不加Clap感觉有点空

[Normal]
00:11:964 - 00:13:728 这么大一片空不塞个转盘?(思考 同Hard
00:35:611 - Whistle? 好
01:21:493 (3) - 试试Finish换掉clap 有点别扭

喵喵 喵喵~DT的都去吃电视(思考
非常感谢～
Last edited by Citrus , edited 1 time in total.
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
0.0先占位

From PM request and 撒西不理

[General]
  1. add 進撃の巨人 in tags
  2. You can disable the letterbox in breaks

[N]
  1. 00:11:611 (4) - add a break behind would be more friendly to new babies imo.

[H]
  1. 00:14:964 (x) - add a note at here would be great:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:610 (2) - leave 00:17:081 (1) - ? Cuz I feel too restricted when these two overlaps. x=512 y=192 would be a good choice so that the distance btw the end to 00:18:316 (3) - and 00:18:316 (3) - to 00:16:552 (5) - will be equal
  3. 00:21:316 (x) - same as before, this time maybe
    SPOILER
    So that 00:22:199 (7,8) - and this note can make a triangle
  4. 00:28:904 (3) - same as before
  5. 00:46:728 (x) - add a note on the head of 00:46:905 (5) - , otherwise the rhythm sounds missing something
  6. 00:49:552 (x) - ^
  7. 00:52:375 (x) - ^
  8. 01:06:669 (1,2) - no better choices? Cuz it really feel too sudden and awkward for me

That's all~

Good Luck =3=
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

Megurine Luka wrote:

0.0先占位

From PM request and 撒西不理

[General] All fixed
  1. add 進撃の巨人 in tags
  2. You can disable the letterbox in breaks

[N]
  1. 00:11:611 (4) - add a break behind would be more friendly to new babies imo. Fixed

[H]All fixed
  1. 00:14:964 (x) - add a note at here would be great:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:610 (2) - leave 00:17:081 (1) - ? Cuz I feel too restricted when these two overlaps. x=512 y=192 would be a good choice so that the distance btw the end to 00:18:316 (3) - and 00:18:316 (3) - to 00:16:552 (5) - will be equal
  3. 00:21:316 (x) - same as before, this time maybe
    SPOILER
    So that 00:22:199 (7,8) - and this note can make a triangle
  4. 00:28:904 (3) - same as before
  5. 00:46:728 (x) - add a note on the head of 00:46:905 (5) - , otherwise the rhythm sounds missing something
  6. 00:49:552 (x) - ^
  7. 00:52:375 (x) - ^
  8. 01:06:669 (1,2) - no better choices? Cuz it really feel too sudden and awkward for me I want to keep this

That's all~

Good Luck =3=
非常感谢大哥～
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
IRC Mod~

log
18:06 HabiHolic: From #modreqs
18:07 HabiHolic: hi
18:07 thou bad: hi~
18:07 HabiHolic: ><
18:07 thou bad: XD
18:08 HabiHolic: IRC Mod Possible?
18:08 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247192 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (TV Size) [Normal]]
18:09 thou bad: of course～
18:09 HabiHolic: Nice Map!!!
18:09 thou bad: Thank you
18:09 HabiHolic: 00:02:434 (4) - This is my suggestion
18:10 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) -
18:10 HabiHolic: Similarly with the slider that looks like above
18:14 thou bad: you mean use the same angle?
18:14 HabiHolic: what?
18:14 HabiHolic: hmm not understand?
18:14 thou bad: yes
18:14 HabiHolic: ah ha
18:15 thou bad: lol
18:15 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) - Copy and 00:01:728 (3) - This section paste
18:15 HabiHolic: This~
18:16 thou bad: like this?
18:16 thou bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/974719
18:16 HabiHolic: Oh Good Yes~
18:17 thou bad: wow looks fine! nice idea~
18:17 HabiHolic: Thanks~
18:17 thou bad: Thank you very much~
18:18 HabiHolic: oh..
18:18 HabiHolic: No Pick T.T
18:18 HabiHolic: nice MAP T.T
18:18 *HabiHolic run
18:19 HabiHolic: Hard open please~
18:21 HabiHolic: 00:42:140 (7) - NC?
18:21 thou bad: OK~
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:09:846 (2) - Ctrl + g
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:10:552 (4) - ^
18:25 HabiHolic: Ok
18:25 HabiHolic: No Pick
18:26 HabiHolic: T.T Nice Map T.T
18:26 thou bad: Good idea ~I'll fix all of them
18:26 HabiHolic: Oh
18:26 HabiHolic: ><
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Citrus

HabiHolic wrote:

IRC Mod~

log
18:06 HabiHolic: From #modreqs
18:07 HabiHolic: hi
18:07 thou bad: hi~
18:07 HabiHolic: ><
18:07 thou bad: XD
18:08 HabiHolic: IRC Mod Possible?
18:08 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247192 Hikasa Yoko - Utsukushiki Zankoku na Sekai (TV Size) [Normal]]
18:09 thou bad: of course～
18:09 HabiHolic: Nice Map!!!
18:09 thou bad: Thank you
18:09 HabiHolic: 00:02:434 (4) - This is my suggestion
18:10 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) -
18:10 HabiHolic: Similarly with the slider that looks like above
18:14 thou bad: you mean use the same angle?
18:14 HabiHolic: what?
18:14 HabiHolic: hmm not understand?
18:14 thou bad: yes
18:14 HabiHolic: ah ha
18:15 thou bad: lol
18:15 HabiHolic: 00:01:728 (3) - Copy and 00:01:728 (3) - This section paste
18:15 HabiHolic: This~
18:16 thou bad: like this?
18:16 thou bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/974719
18:16 HabiHolic: Oh Good Yes~
18:17 thou bad: wow looks fine! nice idea~
18:17 HabiHolic: Thanks~
18:17 thou bad: Thank you very much~
18:18 HabiHolic: oh..
18:18 HabiHolic: No Pick T.T
18:18 HabiHolic: nice MAP T.T
18:18 *HabiHolic run
18:19 HabiHolic: Hard open please~
18:21 HabiHolic: 00:42:140 (7) - NC?
18:21 thou bad: OK~
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:09:846 (2) - Ctrl + g
18:24 HabiHolic: 01:10:552 (4) - ^
18:25 HabiHolic: Ok
18:25 HabiHolic: No Pick
18:26 HabiHolic: T.T Nice Map T.T
18:26 thou bad: Good idea ~I'll fix all of them
18:26 HabiHolic: Oh
18:26 HabiHolic: ><
All fixed~
Thank you very much~
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2013-09-19 11:22 popner: 00:20:081 (3,4,5,6,7) -
2013-09-19 11:22 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPy0.jpg 我觉得这节奏更符合vocal啊
2013-09-19 11:23 thou bad: 我试试
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 好 就这么愉快的决定了
2013-09-19 11:25 thou bad: 我看看怎么排列比较好
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 因为我看你前面跟的是vocal
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 所以这里不跟vocal感觉不好
2013-09-19 11:26 thou bad: 嗯
2013-09-19 11:26 popner: 00:22:905 (1,2,3) - 这个也是http://puu.sh/4uPFZ.jpg
2013-09-19 11:28 thou bad: 好
2013-09-19 11:29 popner: 01:05:964 (5,6,1) - 这里的spacing..
2013-09-19 11:31 popner: http://puu.sh/4uPOv.jpg 我随便摆了一下
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 让01:06:669 (1) - 离01:06:493 (6) - 近一点么？
2013-09-19 11:31 thou bad: 哇
2013-09-19 11:33 popner: 01:14:964 (3,4) - 这里不放三连吗
2013-09-19 11:34 thou bad: 好

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