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Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月30日 at 17:58:07

Artist: Ogura Yui
Title: Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
Source: Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags: 変態王子と笑わない猫。 変猫。 へんねこ とわない ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
BPM: 170
Filesize: 16018kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.8 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hard (4.96 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 315 notes)
  4. Normal (4.11 stars, 129 notes)
Download: Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size)
Download: Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished mapset
Plz redownload if you got it before 5.12 23:00 (GMT+8), mp3 file changed
Thanks Midas for mkv providing, thanks Noah my classmate for video compressing. And thanks every modders here.
変態王子と笑わない猫。』 Ending
月子随便你们抢好了 把小仓唯给我留下 才不是因为不笑猫所以才map的呢 哼 人家还要开小仓唯的萝球社第二季 不许抢
都说了小仓唯是咱的了(警察叔叔 就是这个人



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SPOILER
made in 16 hours, using more time to find and do mod4mods for this mapset
Erylex
Mod via my queue.

General

Change offset = 1380
http://puu.sh/2EVTN.jpg - why?

Easy Diff

00:01:380 (1) - Align this slider please.
00:02:791 (2) - Move to x=472 y=192
00:04:203 (4) - Remove NC
00:04:909 (5) - Add NC
00:11:262 (3) - Move to x=216 y=72
00:15:497 (1) - Move to x=176 y=304
00:16:203 (2) - Move to x=48 y=192
00:37:379 (3) - Move to x=56 y=192
01:11:262 (3) - Add NC
01:11:968 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:379 (1) - Add NC

Resnap Kiai time please

Normal Diff

Normal have 4 star,it`s hard for beginners :С use many sliders

00:08:092 (4) - Add NC
00:08:445 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:857 (2) - Move to x=320 y=56
00:16:563 (4) - Move to x=72 y=56
00:16:916 (1) - Move to x=56 y=184
00:35:269 (1,2) - not the same
01:22:210 (1) - Move to x=176 y=152
01:23:269 (2) - Move to x=256 y=56

Hard Diff

It feels good :D

Insane is not my division

Good Luck. Nice song :Р
Ayesha Altugle
star only
a32
From PM M4M req ww
捏捏香蕉





[General]
video找个生肉截吧233 有字幕不太好啊




[Easy]
  1. 00:01:387 (1) - 左右略不对称...



[Normal]
  1. 00:20:975 - 做成这样?
    节奏稍微好点 slider开头对于normal也更好打XD
  2. 00:33:857 (4) - 可以做成包围3的head?
  3. 00:38:092 (1,2) - 这两个slider形状不太一样略违和233
  4. 00:45:151 (4) - 包围3的tail?
  5. 01:22:210 (1,2) - 没包好



[Hard]
  • 确定这种难度需要AR8吗...感觉还是AR7好哦
  1. 00:09:151 (5) - 这个note略多余啊...这附近的节奏大概要重新安排下
  2. 00:28:916 (5) - 加个reverse?
  3. 01:08:622 01:08:798 - 加note?听起来太空了




[Insane]
  • AR还是略高...嘛不过鉴于最近player水平也还说得过去?
  1. 00:18:504 (1,2,3) - 排版安排得不够好...这里遮不太适合?
  2. 00:28:828 (8) - 这个note摆这不仅不好听而且巨难打orz
  3. 01:20:798 (4,1) - (nazi)略没包好



大概就这么多233 整体不错但是细节需要多加强ww Good luck with ranking!
qunow
tv02 released in mkv
Topic Starter
Banana
"Erylex"
Mod via my queue.

General

Change offset = 1380
http://puu.sh/2EVTN.jpg - why?

Easy Diff

00:01:380 (1) - Align this slider please.
00:02:791 (2) - Move to x=472 y=192
00:04:203 (4) - Remove NC
00:04:909 (5) - Add NC
00:11:262 (3) - Move to x=216 y=72
00:15:497 (1) - Move to x=176 y=304
00:16:203 (2) - Move to x=48 y=192
00:37:379 (3) - Move to x=56 y=192
01:11:262 (3) - Add NC
01:11:968 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:379 (1) - Add NC

Resnap Kiai time please

Normal Diff

Normal have 4 star,it`s hard for beginners :С use many sliders

00:08:092 (4) - Add NC
00:08:445 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:857 (2) - Move to x=320 y=56
00:16:563 (4) - Move to x=72 y=56
00:16:916 (1) - Move to x=56 y=184
00:35:269 (1,2) - not the same
01:22:210 (1) - Move to x=176 y=152
01:23:269 (2) - Move to x=256 y=56

Hard Diff

It feels good :D

Insane is not my division

Good Luck. Nice song :Р thanks~ fix something on NC

vahn10 wrote:

star only
thanks~


"a3272509123"
From PM M4M req ww
捏捏香蕉 捏烂了怎么办(捂





[General]
video找个生肉截吧233 有字幕不太好啊 正在等mkv换音源 这么一说确实顺便把video也改了好了




[Easy]
  1. 00:01:387 (1) - 左右略不对称...
done




[Normal]
  1. 00:20:975 - 做成这样?
    节奏稍微好点 slider开头对于normal也更好打XD done wang
  2. 00:33:857 (4) - 可以做成包围3的head? 才不要blanket 那样就平行了
  3. 00:38:092 (1,2) - 这两个slider形状不太一样略违和233 done
  4. 00:45:151 (4) - 包围3的tail? blanket什么的最讨厌了(误)
  5. 01:22:210 (1,2) - 没包好 总之注意了一下和周围滑条弯曲程度一样 blanket还是不喜欢



[Hard]
  • 确定这种难度需要AR8吗...感觉还是AR7好哦 done
  1. 00:09:151 (5) - 这个note略多余啊...这附近的节奏大概要重新安排下 emm. 似乎还得考虑 不过暂时先这样 有梗再说
  2. 00:28:916 (5) - 加个reverse? 不要
  3. 01:08:622 01:08:798 - 加note?听起来太空了 hard什么的放个小break个人觉得很重要 不然自己dt不动会很伤心(误




[Insane]
  • AR还是略高...嘛不过鉴于最近player水平也还说得过去? 主流ar9啦 主流主流
  1. 00:18:504 (1,2,3) - 排版安排得不够好...这里遮不太适合? 因为是圈遮滑条所以难度方面没什么问题 美观什么的就233过去好了
  2. 00:28:828 (8) - 这个note摆这不仅不好听而且巨难打orz (难打什么的这是I我就当作没看见了) 不好听什么的..加了个绿线 上了音效
  3. 01:20:798 (4,1) - (nazi)略没包好 done



大概就这么多233 整体不错但是细节需要多加强ww Good luck with ranking!

thanks~for 喵(?

qunow wrote:

tv02 released in mkv
i think mp3 is not good enough now :?
Azer
Hi, from my queue.

Insane
  1. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - Doesn't match the audio.
  2. 00:13:386 (2) - End this slider at 00:13:475 , start this slider 00:13:739 (3) at 00:13:651 , move them appropriately. Same thing for 00:14:798 (2,3)
  3. 00:34:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance
  4. 00:35:622 (1) - Fix shape
  5. 00:36:151 (2,3,4) - Distance
  6. 00:37:739 (7,8,1) - ^
  7. 00:41:799 (3,4,5) - Distance/position
  8. 00:43:211 (3,4,5,1) - ^
  9. 00:48:681 (4,5) - Distance
  10. 00:51:328 (2) - Move this to somewhere like x:244 y:224 to make distance consistant
  11. 01:03:328 (1,2,3,4) - Distance.. again.
  12. 01:02:975 (4) - Fix shape to 'connect' 01:02:622 (3,1)
  13. 01:04:916 (1,2,3) - Distance
  14. 01:05:622 (4,5,6) - ^
  15. 01:06:681 (2,4) - Overlap looks bad
  16. 01:21:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks bad. Give this proper distance of move the three note stack to x:512 y:146
Topic Starter
Banana

Azer wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

Insane
  1. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - Doesn't match the audio.
  2. 00:13:386 (2) - End this slider at 00:13:475 , start this slider 00:13:739 (3) at 00:13:651 , move them appropriately. Same thing for 00:14:798 (2,3)
  3. 00:34:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance
  4. 00:35:622 (1) - Fix shape
  5. 00:36:151 (2,3,4) - Distance
  6. 00:37:739 (7,8,1) - ^
  7. 00:41:799 (3,4,5) - Distance/position
  8. 00:43:211 (3,4,5,1) - ^
  9. 00:48:681 (4,5) - Distance
  10. 00:51:328 (2) - Move this to somewhere like x:244 y:224 to make distance consistant
  11. 01:03:328 (1,2,3,4) - Distance.. again.
  12. 01:02:975 (4) - Fix shape to 'connect' 01:02:622 (3,1)
  13. 01:04:916 (1,2,3) - Distance
  14. 01:05:622 (4,5,6) - ^
  15. 01:06:681 (2,4) - Overlap looks bad
  16. 01:21:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks bad. Give this proper distance of move the three note stack to x:512 y:146
thanks mod, balanced the spacing
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from Weibo comment request (what?) _(:з」∠)_

[General]
  1. set offset to -24, due to the few notes before red tick in N/H/I
  2. tags: add blank into "変態王子と笑わない猫。変猫。" and I doubt whether "とわない" and "towanai" make sense
  3. unused file: drum-hitclap.wav ?
[Easy/Normal]
  1. nothing found
[Hard]
  1. Ball ball you ar+1, if not I'll kick your ass after clicking 01:16:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these notes
  2. 00:04:916 (4) - a little confusing, so no overlap, x344 y208
    nice diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:328 (2) - a little unexpected. how about stacking it with ③
  2. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - beautiful pattern but not so good flow...I suggest to rotate them and make ⑦ point kind of upwards
  3. 00:47:092 (2) - why not use consistent spacing ? eg. x176 y224
  4. 00:48:857 (5) - x504 y232 seems better
  5. 01:05:622 (4,5,6) - I think these notes can be placed with farther spacing, match with music better. eg. 1.3x of pre-⑥
    ummm, not your style in my mind...
ED比OP顺耳得多啊,大概是OP歌词太蠢了
好懒啊颜色也不高兴标了算了以后把版头也删了吧写代码真是复杂
Topic Starter
Banana

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from Weibo comment request (what?) _(:з」∠)_ 微博被翻译成这样...真是四暗刻..

[General]
  1. set offset to -24, due to the few notes before red tick in N/H/I will do it after change mp3 and flv file, waiting for better resource
  2. tags: add blank into "変態王子と笑わない猫。変猫。" and I doubt whether "とわない" and "towanai" make sense fixed
  3. unused file: drum-hitclap.wav ? used in the section between 00:23:975 and 00:33:857
[Easy/Normal]
  1. nothing found
[Hard]
  1. Ball ball you ar+1, if not I'll kick your ass after clicking 01:16:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these notes done
  2. 00:04:916 (4) - a little confusing, so no overlap, x344 y208 overlap is my way you know
    nice diff thx
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:328 (2) - a little unexpected. how about stacking it with ③ no that will be easy
  2. 00:10:386 (5,6,7) - beautiful pattern but not so good flow...I suggest to rotate them and make ⑦ point kind of upwards actually i'm not quite get the point, maybe a pic would be better, anyway, did something to make it better (slightly)
  3. 00:47:092 (2) - why not use consistent spacing ? eg. x176 y224 for fun
  4. 00:48:857 (5) - x504 y232 seems better emm, keep the original one but did some slightly change
  5. 01:05:622 (4,5,6) - I think these notes can be placed with farther spacing, match with music better. eg. 1.3x of pre-⑥ ->1.23*
    ummm, not your style in my mind... this map is BPM over 160, i want it plays fun, not comfortable
ED比OP顺耳得多啊,大概是OP歌词太蠢了 小仓唯很萌的(槽点错了
好懒啊颜色也不高兴标了算了以后把版头也删了吧写代码真是复杂 快删(误
谢mod 比我mod的好多了lol
Jycool
[General]
音效很软,声音有点小,建议配合normal hitsound使用,风味更佳 :)
[Easy]
00:08:445 (2) - whistle change to finish
[normal]
00:57:857 (2) - change to finish sound is better
[hard]
00:04:916 - 既然这里要跟歌词的话建议这么下节奏
当然摆放你可以自己调整
00:29:269 - add note
[insane]
00:12:681 - 这一段建议还是和hard一样跟歌词的节奏
00:14:092 - 同上
00:29:092 - 建议加note
00:36:151 (2,3) - 间距比3,4之间的大,调整一下
别的没有了,我摆放不能给出更好的建议了,祝rank :)
Topic Starter
Banana

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[General]
音效很软,声音有点小,建议配合normal hitsound使用,风味更佳 :) 好(但是懒了
[Easy]
00:08:445 (2) - whistle change to finish
[normal]
00:57:857 (2) - change to finish sound is better 这边和clap一起用了 一共加了四个 貌似
[hard]
00:04:916 - 既然这里要跟歌词的话建议这么下节奏 嗯 改了第一个 后面那个改3/4+圈还是感觉不舒服
当然摆放你可以自己调整
00:29:269 - add note 都这么说..加了
[insane]
00:12:681 - 这一段建议还是和hard一样跟歌词的节奏 话说I难度本来是想全跟鼓点的 kiai懒了才跟的vocal
00:14:092 - 同上
00:29:092 - 建议加note 前面三连改接滑条了
00:36:151 (2,3) - 间距比3,4之间的大,调整一下 (3,4)->2.0, 虽然还是略小不过稍微平衡点了 这边为了stack效果先这样
别的没有了,我摆放不能给出更好的建议了,祝rank :)
谢摸
Yuki-kun
It's just me or what...
I can't import map to mod. Always fail @@
Topic Starter
Banana

Yuki-kun wrote:

It's just me or what...
I can't import map to mod. Always fail @@
thanks tell me that, will upload soon
edit: may be tomorrow upload system seems not open
Yuki-kun
Ok i found out the reason.
t/130257
Seem like it's fixed so i will mod your map soon. :)
Topic Starter
Banana

Yuki-kun wrote:

Ok i found out the reason.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/130257
Seem like it's fixed so i will mod your map soon. :)
yeah, updated, should be fine now
[Mahua]
;w; 视频帧数好低 一会来mod
ZZHBOY
变猫厨真多

[easy]
np
[normal]
np
[hard]
柑橘比常规hard难 没什么大问题 提点小建议
00:41:228 (2) - 后面这样可能会好些00:41:228 (2) - 可以拆 同↑
00:47:934 (3) - 后面可以拆成这样01:27:640 (3) - 是不是可以拆开
因为柑橘拆开那些会符合总体难度窝zz别被误导了
[Insane]
00:02:934 - 加一个note
00:07:169 - 加一个note
00:10:434 (6) - 不舒服 是不是可以改下
00:14:052 - 加一个note
00:17:758 (7) - 在上一个红线结束就可以了
00:24:111 - 总觉得这一小段不自然 改成这样会不会好些00:58:699 (6) - 是不是可以删掉


以上只是一些个人见解其实窝也是才会骗kdmod所以(
Topic Starter
Banana

ZZHBOY wrote:

变猫厨真多

[easy]
np
[normal]
np
[hard]
柑橘比常规hard难 没什么大问题 提点小建议
00:41:228 (2) - 后面这样可能会好些00:41:228 (2) - 可以拆 同↑
00:47:934 (3) - 后面可以拆成这样01:27:640 (3) - 是不是可以拆开
因为柑橘拆开那些会符合总体难度窝zz别被误导了于是就懒改了
[Insane]
00:02:934 - 加一个note 不要
00:07:169 - 加一个note 加了
00:10:434 (6) - 不舒服 是不是可以改下 其实节奏是有点问题..第二个滑条尾巴加了个绿线调了音量
00:14:052 - 加一个note 这个就算了
00:17:758 (7) - 在上一个红线结束就可以了 四暗刻
00:24:111 - 总觉得这一小段不自然 改成这样会不会好些 嘛 这边倒是没怎么考虑 不过暂时先这样放着 有点懒改00:58:699 (6) - 是不是可以删掉 节奏上可以 排列上为了对称就keep了


以上只是一些个人见解其实窝也是才会骗kdmod所以(
改了一些 总之谢mod 我也是各种意义上的求被骗kd中
lkx_Shore
RangWoShaoWeiTuiChiJiTianZaiLaiMod
Topic Starter
Banana

lkx_Shore wrote:

RangWoShaoWeiTuiChiJiTianZaiLaiMod
MeiGuanXiBuJi
JauiPlaY
[General]
平胸穷三代 萝莉毁一生 为什么不明白
BG质量真是球球 监督有那么多好图不用偏用崩坏的动画图 柑橘米酒

[Easy]
00:20:758 (1) - 倒不如延长到00:21:993
00:59:228 (2) - 没声音了都我觉得这个没必要加
最好还是加个spinner以免一堆撞分...真的

[Normal]
01:21:993 (1,2) - NC应该给(2)
然后spinner你懂的

[Hard]
AR8太高了
00:04:699 (4,5) - 奇葩节奏
00:21:993 (7,8,9) - 应该是个长slider的啊
00:54:640 - 觉得加个note比较好
01:08:052 (7,1) - 这个大gap是个什么情况
01:27:640 (3) - 没必要吧这么个slider 能做的有很多干嘛要这样做

[Insane]
00:07:522 (1) - 去NC
00:10:169 (5,6,7) - 为难而难么
00:29:052 (1) - 去NC
01:10:875 (6) - NC
01:25:522 (2,3,4) - 我倒觉得应该先slider再3连
只能说专业点 别一会2个combo一会十几个...
另外我也觉得没必要AR9

哎...加油吧
Topic Starter
Banana

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
平胸穷三代 萝莉毁一生 为什么不明白 不是勇士不喜欢巨乳有什么错!
BG质量真是球球 监督有那么多好图不用偏用崩坏的动画图 柑橘米酒 切的原图4000乘6000多的分辨率 哭哭哦

[Easy]
00:20:758 (1) - 倒不如延长到00:21:993 嘛 跟的finish 差别不大就这样了
00:59:228 (2) - 没声音了都我觉得这个没必要加 军鼓啊军鼓
最好还是加个spinner以免一堆撞分...真的 撞去吧(误

[Normal]
01:21:993 (1,2) - NC应该给(2)
然后spinner你懂的

[Hard]
AR8太高了 改了ar7被吐槽改回来的
00:04:699 (4,5) - 奇葩节奏 改了
00:21:993 (7,8,9) - 应该是个长slider的啊 嘛 跟的鼓 应该问题不大
00:54:640 - 觉得加个note比较好 节奏不想动了
01:08:052 (7,1) - 这个大gap是个什么情况 kiai之间的短break 可以休息一下
01:27:640 (3) - 没必要吧这么个slider 能做的有很多干嘛要这样做 哦 好嘛

[Insane]
00:07:522 (1) - 去NC 不要
00:10:169 (5,6,7) - 为难而难么 第二个slider的开头是有鼓的 所以就这么放了
00:29:052 (1) - 去NC 不要
01:10:875 (6) - NC 加了
01:25:522 (2,3,4) - 我倒觉得应该先slider再3连 跟的原曲 三连位置没错 然后滑条接连打少一个打击感其实个人不喜欢
只能说专业点 别一会2个combo一会十几个... .-.
另外我也觉得没必要AR9 .-.

哎...加油吧.-.
.-.
Yuki-kun
Finally.
M4M from my queue~

General

Tags

You don't have to add the non-latin character to tags. Also it's inconsistency
- [Easy] : Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Hard] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Insane] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Normal] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.

My Mod

[Insane]
From 00:12:817 (1) - to 00:14:934 (3) - , you can make it more interest by following vocal instead of music like you did in [Hard]. Also, can you add note at 00:14:052 ? I feel so empty.
The rest seem good.

[Hard]
00:21:111 (3) - Ctrl + G for a better flow.

[Normal]
00:35:052 (1) - Finish + Clap
01:28:346 (3) - Move to x:88, y:272

[Easy]
Seem fine~

Good map and good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
Banana

Yuki-kun wrote:

Finally.
M4M from my queue~

General

Tags

You don't have to add the non-latin character to tags. non-latin character tag can work well, not sure about it in ranking criteria, though, keep them for now Also it's inconsistency fixed
- [Easy] : Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Hard] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Insane] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.
- [Normal] : ending Henneko Towanai The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat.

My Mod

[Insane]
From 00:12:817 (1) - to 00:14:934 (3) - , you can make it more interest by following vocal instead of music like you did in [Hard]. Also, can you add note at 00:14:052 ? I feel so empty. add the missing note, about the section you mentioned, to make the straight sliders not only show up once in this diff at the end, anyway, too lazy to remap when it finished.-.
The rest seem good.

[Hard]
00:21:111 (3) - Ctrl + G for a better flow. will consider, i prefer sliders to the same direction, keep it for now

[Normal]
00:35:052 (1) - Finish + Clap fixed
01:28:346 (3) - Move to x:88, y:272 fixed (without gs so not exactly the place

[Easy]
Seem fine~

Good map and good luck~ <3 thanks~
._.
Flask
說好的M4M~

[General]
  1. 看到記事本[events]的第二行 把1,1改成0,0 (1,1會造成開始後偏移1pixel)
    0,0,"bg.jpg",1,1
  2. Artist: 小倉唯 (中間沒有空白 只是在英文要把姓跟明區隔而以)
  3. 01:24:287 - 可以噴泉一下
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:228 (5,1) - 如果是我來擺我就跳一下 還能跟00:02:052 (4,5) - 做個三角圍住(3)
  2. 00:09:993 (4,5) - 不用跳
  3. 00:12:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 感覺跟vocal會比自己1/2瞎點好 善用兩連啊
  4. 00:18:464 (2,3) - / 00:19:522 (5,6) - / 00:20:581 (2,3) - 跳 跟音樂起伏
  5. 00:21:287 (4,5,6,7) - 這兒有點複雜 分開來說好了
    首先是(4,5)的方向 跟著音樂的話應該是(4)在上(5)在下 現在反而整個顛倒了...建議ctrl+G
    然後(4,5)ctrl+g後(6)疊在(4)的下面 (或者可以偏個1~2gird) (7)去包(5) 最後就會變成圖這樣..
  6. 00:28:699 - 應該是這兒whistle吧 00:28:611 (8) - 去掉whistle
  7. 00:49:169 (5) - NC 覺的不美觀就下在(6)
  8. 00:51:993 (5) - ^
  9. 01:26:052 (5) - finish有點吵
  10. 01:27:640 (4) - 感覺可以NC
    排板有點水...給我一種不干淨的感覺 flow也沒有很到位..不過總體來說打起來滿爽的
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:993 (2,3) - 這裡有跳 00:04:346 (3,4) - 卻沒有跳 明明是相同的vocal...我覺得有必要改一下 要不都跳要不都不跳
  2. 00:06:817 - finish
  3. 00:21:111 (3,4) - 如果是我我就(3)直接折返刪掉(4) 再把花pattern移近一點做個跳
  4. 00:24:640 (2) - 1/2就夠了 這裡跟clap會比跟vocal好聽多
  5. 00:36:993 - note放(5)的頭 (跟00:39:287 (5,6,7) - 一樣)
  6. 00:44:934 - finish可能好聽點
  7. 00:53:405 (1) - ^
  8. 00:54:817 (1) - ^
  9. 00:58:699 (6,7) - 與其(7)露出來不如直接合成一個1/2slider還來的好看些 現在的看起來就像是為了follow音樂才弄出來的不成熟排版..
  10. 01:00:464 - finish
  11. 01:08:052 (7,1) - 這兩個之間空著很奇怪 就算沒有vocal我覺得都不應該空著 只會毀了打擊上的節奏..上點什麼1/2梗1/1梗都好
  12. 01:17:405 (1) - finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:464 (1,2) - 節奏有點散啊
  2. 00:18:111 - ~ 00:22:346 - 多放點finish
  3. 00:33:640 (4) - 停在00:34:699 - 才不至於空空的 (音樂還在走啊)
  4. 00:51:993 (1) - finish
  5. 01:08:758 (1,2) - 同前面
  6. 01:14:405 (1,2) - ^
[Easy]
  1. OD+1
  2. 00:22:346 (2) - finish
  3. 00:35:052 - ^
  4. 00:51:993 - ^
總体來說finish能在多點 才不至於這麼安靜..
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Banana

Flask wrote:

說好的M4M~

[General]
  1. 看到記事本[events]的第二行 把1,1改成0,0 (1,1會造成開始後偏移1pixel) fixed
    0,0,"bg.jpg",1,1
  2. Artist: 小倉唯 (中間沒有空白 只是在英文要把姓跟明區隔而以) fixed
  3. 01:24:287 - 可以噴泉一下 hao
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:228 (5,1) - 如果是我來擺我就跳一下 還能跟00:02:052 (4,5) - 做個三角圍住(3) 嘛 跳完一个原间距其实很带感._.
  2. 00:09:993 (4,5) - 不用跳 于是动了一下
  3. 00:12:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 感覺跟vocal會比自己1/2瞎點好 善用兩連啊 所有人都会这么做所以那样会很一般(咦 什么心态) 其实是kiai之前决定跟鼓了于是就这样做过来了 结尾也有一堆呼应的直滑条于是虽然都挑这里但是不想改
  4. 00:18:464 (2,3) - / 00:19:522 (5,6) - / 00:20:581 (2,3) - 跳 跟音樂起伏 跳完一个原间距其实很带感(话说一个难度的主打梗被广泛的吐槽了
  5. 00:21:287 (4,5,6,7) - 這兒有點複雜 分開來說好了
    首先是(4,5)的方向 跟著音樂的話應該是(4)在上(5)在下 現在反而整個顛倒了...建議ctrl+G ctrl+g了
    然後(4,5)ctrl+g後(6)疊在(4)的下面 (或者可以偏個1~2gird) (7)去包(5) 最後就會變成圖這樣.. 这一条没动 因为图这样摆的话间距略小然后test了下感觉最后kiai的跳太乱来了所以间距不太好动 然后梗..嘛 ctrl+g了以后test了几遍觉得打着还可以就这样了
  6. 00:28:699 - 應該是這兒whistle吧 00:28:611 (8) - 去掉whistle done
  7. 00:49:169 (5) - NC 覺的不美觀就下在(6) nc都加了
  8. 00:51:993 (5) - ^
  9. 01:26:052 (5) - finish有點吵 vol->27%
  10. 01:27:640 (4) - 感覺可以NC hao
    排板有點水...給我一種不干淨的感覺 flow也沒有很到位..不過總體來說打起來滿爽的 打起来爽就好._. 目标就是那个
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:993 (2,3) - 這裡有跳 00:04:346 (3,4) - 卻沒有跳 明明是相同的vocal...我覺得有必要改一下 要不都跳要不都不跳 于是又一个主打梗被吐槽了(喂喂喂...)好吧其实这种滑条之间的anti-jump对我来说不作为jump看的...因为尾巴那边没必要划过去就可以拿到300的判定 之前天空之城四星难度就这么开头来着
  2. 00:06:817 - finish done
  3. 00:21:111 (3,4) - 如果是我我就(3)直接折返刪掉(4) 再把花pattern移近一點做個跳 喵?(pia
  4. 00:24:640 (2) - 1/2就夠了 這裡跟clap會比跟vocal好聽多 clap的话..这边转盘结束第一个其实不跟着影响也比较小 等到第二个出来的时候早忘了第一个有没有了..这边不想放break所以就这样了
  5. 00:36:993 - note放(5)的頭 (跟00:39:287 (5,6,7) - 一樣) 嘛 因为后面一段的音调稍微升上去了所以并不想用相同的节奏来表示
  6. 00:44:934 - finish可能好聽點 hao*3
  7. 00:53:405 (1) - ^
  8. 00:54:817 (1) - ^
  9. 00:58:699 (6,7) - 與其(7)露出來不如直接合成一個1/2slider還來的好看些 現在的看起來就像是為了follow音樂才弄出來的不成熟排版.. 半年的梗都用在这里了!(pia
  10. 01:00:464 - finish hao
  11. 01:08:052 (7,1) - 這兩個之間空著很奇怪 就算沒有vocal我覺得都不應該空著 只會毀了打擊上的節奏..上點什麼1/2梗1/1梗都好 加了自己节奏抓不准所以不敢加 中间节奏比较模糊干脆空着了 vocal开始反而容易满判定..
  12. 01:17:405 (1) - finishhao
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:464 (1,2) - 節奏有點散啊 咱normal常年这么做的...(喂喂喂你做过几个normal
  2. 00:18:111 - ~ 00:22:346 - 多放點finish 全跟了
  3. 00:33:640 (4) - 停在00:34:699 - 才不至於空空的 (音樂還在走啊) 加了个圈 3/2的滑条还是拉不动
  4. 00:51:993 (1) - finish hao
  5. 01:08:758 (1,2) - 同前面 .(pia
  6. 01:14:405 (1,2) - ^
[Easy]
  1. OD+1 hao*4
  2. 00:22:346 (2) - finish
  3. 00:35:052 - ^
  4. 00:51:993 - ^
總体來說finish能在多點 才不至於這麼安靜.. 好 我再去check一遍
Good luck! 喵~
thanks~

edit: 哦啦啦 666th post
lkx_Shore
[Insane]
00:18:640 (3,4) - 这里接上去有点绕
01:07:346 (1,2) - 有点牵强

[Hard]
00:04:699 (4) - 为啥要下2连
01:27:640 (3) - 换成连个滑条一个note?

[Other]
mod不出啥...
Goodluck
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