( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
Hi~
[よしらぶ >w< 's Normal]
00:26:611 (1) - Remove this and map something there
00:31:754 (1) - Don't like sliders with many reverse
00:55:111 - Remove whistle
01:00:897 (2,3,1) - Nice style but hard to read
01:22:754 (3) - Try not to touch 01:21:468 (1) -
01:56:611 (5) - Move down a little, make perfect blanket
02:02:611 (1) - Many reverse >o<
02:09:039 (4) - NC (New combo)
02:09:468 (1) - Remove NC
02:52:325 - Put circle here and add Finish
03:06:039 (1) - DS too close
04:08:611 (1) - Spinner too long, there's no more sound behind, suggest to remove
[litoluna's Hard]
00:45:039 (6) - Remove "Drum" additions
00:54:897 (8) - NC
03:00:682 - Remove Clap
04:01:003 (1) - Make the spinner ends here 04:07:754 - and remove 04:08:611 (1) -
[Alternative]
Too many "Finish", decrease some and maintain other Finish at same Sampleset / Additions
00:02:182 (5,6) - Don't stack
00:02:611 (1) - Strange shape, make it like 00:01:539 (4) -
00:03:897 (3,4,5,1) - Hard to read
00:09:682 (2,3) - Swap place, small jump
00:15:468 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:22:325 (3) - ^
00:33:254 (4,5) - Remove hitsounds, extra hit
00:34:754 (5,6,7) - Not suitable for triple hits, use 1/2
00:39:897 (5,6,7) - ^
00:44:182 - Remove Clap
00:45:039 (3) - Remove Drum Additions
00:48:468 (3) - Clap here, not finish
00:57:147 (6) - Extra beat
01:00:682 (1) - Extra hitsound
01:04:004 (4) - Extra beat
01:10:861 (6) - ^
01:14:397 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:22:754 (6) - NC (New combo)
01:26:611 - Make spinner ends here
01:34:968 (6,7) - Remove hitsounds
01:37:754 (3,4,5) - Flow stopped here
01:40:325 (1,2,3) - ^
01:41:611 (5) - Flow break and not good arrangement T_T
01:50:397 (4,5) - Remove hitsounds
01:56:932 - Add circle here
02:04:968 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to read, not suggested for Insane, prefer good flow
02:06:682 (3) - Bad flow here
02:10:325 (5) - Start stream here by adding circles at 02:10:432 - and 02:10:647 -
02:23:397 - Add circle due to combo is still on going
02:29:611 (3) - Big jump compared to previous part of the song
02:40:968 (3) - This one makes easy combo break and overmapped
02:47:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - A little overmapped here
03:02:182 (5,6,7,8) - Arrange the stream a little to make a nice curve
03:04:004 (8,9,10) - Remove these and NC at 03:04:325 -
03:06:039 - Prefer a rest here
03:21:254 (6,7) - Remove hitsounds
03:22:861 (7) - Extra beat
03:24:682 (1) - Since the tail of this slider is hidden, I dont suggest stacks at tail for 03:25:218 (2,3) -
03:40:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Arrange the DS (Distance snap) here, use at least 1.0x
03:44:397 (2) - Don't stick together
03:45:682 - Add circle
04:01:003 (1) - Make the spinner ends here 04:07:754 - and remove 04:08:611 (1) -
Nice diffs
Insane need to improve some T_T
Hope it helps.
Hi~
[よしらぶ >w< 's Normal]
00:26:611 (1) - Remove this and map something there
00:31:754 (1) - Don't like sliders with many reverse
00:55:111 - Remove whistle
01:00:897 (2,3,1) - Nice style but hard to read
01:22:754 (3) - Try not to touch 01:21:468 (1) -
01:56:611 (5) - Move down a little, make perfect blanket
02:02:611 (1) - Many reverse >o<
02:09:039 (4) - NC (New combo)
02:09:468 (1) - Remove NC
02:52:325 - Put circle here and add Finish
03:06:039 (1) - DS too close
04:08:611 (1) - Spinner too long, there's no more sound behind, suggest to remove
[litoluna's Hard]
00:45:039 (6) - Remove "Drum" additions
00:54:897 (8) - NC
03:00:682 - Remove Clap
04:01:003 (1) - Make the spinner ends here 04:07:754 - and remove 04:08:611 (1) -
[Alternative]
Too many "Finish", decrease some and maintain other Finish at same Sampleset / Additions
00:02:182 (5,6) - Don't stack
00:02:611 (1) - Strange shape, make it like 00:01:539 (4) -
00:03:897 (3,4,5,1) - Hard to read
00:09:682 (2,3) - Swap place, small jump
00:15:468 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:22:325 (3) - ^
00:33:254 (4,5) - Remove hitsounds, extra hit
00:34:754 (5,6,7) - Not suitable for triple hits, use 1/2
00:39:897 (5,6,7) - ^
00:44:182 - Remove Clap
00:45:039 (3) - Remove Drum Additions
00:48:468 (3) - Clap here, not finish
00:57:147 (6) - Extra beat
01:00:682 (1) - Extra hitsound
01:04:004 (4) - Extra beat
01:10:861 (6) - ^
01:14:397 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:22:754 (6) - NC (New combo)
01:26:611 - Make spinner ends here
01:34:968 (6,7) - Remove hitsounds
01:37:754 (3,4,5) - Flow stopped here
01:40:325 (1,2,3) - ^
01:41:611 (5) - Flow break and not good arrangement T_T
01:50:397 (4,5) - Remove hitsounds
01:56:932 - Add circle here
02:04:968 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to read, not suggested for Insane, prefer good flow
02:06:682 (3) - Bad flow here
02:10:325 (5) - Start stream here by adding circles at 02:10:432 - and 02:10:647 -
02:23:397 - Add circle due to combo is still on going
02:29:611 (3) - Big jump compared to previous part of the song
02:40:968 (3) - This one makes easy combo break and overmapped
02:47:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - A little overmapped here
03:02:182 (5,6,7,8) - Arrange the stream a little to make a nice curve
03:04:004 (8,9,10) - Remove these and NC at 03:04:325 -
03:06:039 - Prefer a rest here
03:21:254 (6,7) - Remove hitsounds
03:22:861 (7) - Extra beat
03:24:682 (1) - Since the tail of this slider is hidden, I dont suggest stacks at tail for 03:25:218 (2,3) -
03:40:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Arrange the DS (Distance snap) here, use at least 1.0x
03:44:397 (2) - Don't stick together
03:45:682 - Add circle
04:01:003 (1) - Make the spinner ends here 04:07:754 - and remove 04:08:611 (1) -
Nice diffs
Insane need to improve some T_T
Hope it helps.