wcx19911123 wrote:

Kiiwa diff有unsnap，顺带timing我看了看，前面还行，后面减速的那一段感觉有些线早了点，总体需要+4~8的样子（特别是刚开始减速的时候，01:16:152 - 附近）

1. fix kiiwa's audio lean-in to 2000ms (as goodbye diff
2. 00:29:214 - need some extra red sections here imo, sound quite off in kiiwa/goodbye diff. did some try but better get a double check.
   
   1. 29192 - 200bpm <--1/6 snap here.
   2. 29352 - 200bpm
   3. 29964 - 200bpm
3. over 1000kbps video as 720x576 is odd, as the video should be 16:9. try: http://puu.sh/3j5R0.flv
4. is there really a site link on your BG o_o?

1. 00:18:714 (3,1) - prevent them from overlapping?
2. 01:17:384 (1) - unsnapped note.
3. 01:19:351 (3) - wrongly snapped?
4. 01:19:749 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:514 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wrongly snapped?

1. 01:24:992 (1) - consider add a note here and start spinner later, to keep consistence with 01:22:592 (5,1). and provide a better experience with hitsound.
2. 00:54:560 (1,2,1,2,3) - this sound more like a OXXOXXOO. it can be much better if you arrange your pattern in this way.
3. the long empty is a bit evil, but as it's only 1/4 HP drain won't hurt much though.

1. 00:27:564 (1) - how about increase the volume from 10 to 35 little by little from 00:28:314 till the end? of course change the initial volume to 10. (same in hard

1. 01:17:358 (4) - new combo

Colin Hou wrote:

/me cheapshot.

[General]

1. fix kiiwa's audio lean-in to 2000ms (as goodbye diff
2. 00:29:214 - need some extra red sections here imo, sound quite off in kiiwa/goodbye diff. did some try but better get a double check.Just like what I've talked with you and NatsumeRin, I decided to remove this part from all my mapset since they're really hard to timing/mapping, well, I'm lazy you know.
   
   1. 29192 - 200bpm <--1/6 snap here.
   2. 29352 - 200bpm
   3. 29964 - 200bpm
3. over 1000kbps video as 720x576 is odd, as the video should be 16:9. try: http://puu.sh/3j5R0.flv
4. is there really a site link on your BG o_o?o_o?

[kiiwa]

1. 00:18:714 (3,1) - prevent them from overlapping?
2. 01:17:384 (1) - unsnapped note.
3. 01:19:351 (3) - wrongly snapped?
4. 01:19:749 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:514 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wrongly snapped?

[goodbye]

1. 01:24:992 (1) - consider add a note here and start spinner later, to keep consistence with 01:22:592 (5,1). and provide a better experience with hitsound.
2. 00:54:560 (1,2,1,2,3) - this sound more like a OXXOXXOO. it can be much better if you arrange your pattern in this way.as what i've said before(just check the post which i answered to wcx), I'd like to keep them.
3. the long empty is a bit evil, but as it's only 1/4 HP drain won't hurt much though.I think they're ok

[Normal]

1. 00:27:564 (1) - how about increase the volume from 10 to 35 little by little from 00:28:314 till the end? of course change the initial volume to 10. (same in hard

[Hard]

1. 01:17:358 (4) - new combo

/me vanished.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:764 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/3ozTx.jpg maybe, stack in easiest diff is usually not the best way
01:08:810 (1,2) - personally i think a slider here should be enough..just keep pace with other bar in this part so i think they're ok

[Hard]
00:29:964 (1,2) - sounds strange, any better way?
00:58:460 - add a note?
01:00:860 - ^