Fr33z3R wrote:
Diff finished. I already sent my diff to Mira-san to be added in the mapset. yay~
looks very good, i hope this will get ranked soon
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wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [Osu|Taiko]
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looks very good, i hope this will get ranked soonfreezer rly takes my suggestions into account \o/
1.99 > 1.54 omg so pro
dem symmetry instarank pls o3o
good luck!!!
1.99 > 1.54 omg so pro
dem symmetry instarank pls o3o
good luck!!!
Holding my urge to mod this
Topic Starter
oooooooo birthday wish: get this map ranked 12th of October RIP
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no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._.
general stuff
・seems like normal-hitwhistle2.wav is unused?
・the preview point is unsnapped
fr33z3r's
AR -0.5? i thought you agreed with AR3
・00:04:998 (1) - not sure if the nc there is necessary. either delete this one, or add there 00:08:858 (4) - . but i'd suggest deleting the nc
・00:11:314 (3) - on tail, 00:23:244 (1) - on head, 01:41:840 (1) - on head, 01:51:665 (1) - , 02:15:524 (3) - , 03:11:665 (2) - on head, 03:21:490 (1) - , 04:02:191 (1) - on head, 04:07:805 (1) - on head add finishers, other diffs have them all btw
・00:28:507 (3) - would be better if you had a clickable object on the downbeat, placing there 2 circles would make that transfer from one music part to another more comfortable and make that downbeat emphasized, yeah (i know that i said to simplify the diff as much as you can but in this case it is pretty much acceptable and fitting!)
・00:31:665 (4) - i suppose there 00:33:068 (6) - and there should be nc?
・00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern like this looks good if it is placed in the middle of the screen, the way you placed it there gives a kind of not neat thing. so could you move it in the middle?
・00:48:858 (2) - if there 00:47:454 (4,1,2) - would be a visual triangle pattern i would be ok with it but for smoother flow its better to move this slider a bit down so (1) stands by the arc of (2) and provides more natural flow
・01:43:244 (3,4,1) - at least move them so triangle looks neater please
03:13:069 (4,5,1) -
・02:04:296 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, its kinda visible during the gameplay
03:56:577 (1,3) -
・02:45:349 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi but you could round those sliders less and make the blanket be perfect there
・02:52:016 (5) - nc, 02:53:419 (1) - remove? to make the ncing be consistent
・02:54:823 (1,2) - fix the spacing and that symmetry misplacing by changing the placement of the previous pattern and replacing this pattern like: (1) 83|183; (2) 302|334
・04:13:419 (1) - spacing issue
the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
also one thing more from me, as the hitsounding is raw a bit, i think adding a normal sampleset on each object 1/1 before the clap would sound better. like 01:44:647 (1) - 01:46:051 (3) - 01:47:454 (1) - 01:48:858 (3) - on heads of these sliders etc, i guess you got the principle
neonat's
・the clap hitsounding in the ending of the beginning part (lol) sound kind of random. the clap fits on a sound like this 00:06:752 - , so i'd suggest to remove the claps from the heads of these sliders: 00:07:805 (4) - , 00:09:209 (1) - 00:10:612 (3) - .
・00:54:121 (1) - spacing issue
・01:19:384 (1,2,3,4) - could you choose one shape for these sliders and make them neat? the current placing/several curve shapes makes this part a bit messy imo
・01:36:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - again about neat placement
・01:39:735 (2,3,4,5) - the pattern is damn really clamped, could you widen it a bit?
・02:58:858 - not sure if there should be a note since you went full nonsto in this part before?
・03:01:665 (4,5,6,7) - a thing like this could be pretty hard to control imo, with 2 1/1 slider like you did there 03:07:279 (4,5,6) - would be a kind of easier
hard
・01:22:191 (1,3) - mm can you take (3) out of the (1)'s end?
03:10:612 (2,3) - this one as well, also the flow would be better if this slider was placed more to the right
・01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about 1.40 there? this part could be a bit hard to control, since you also have 1.15sv, ugh
・02:09:735 (8) - idk if this is intentional or not, either make it 1.30 or vise versa, so it will be 1.30 prev 1.40 next. minor stuff though
・02:49:910 (4,5,1) - such thing is really confusing, during the testplay i barely saw that (1) has a reverse, i dont want to say that this thing is unrankable but it may be pretty questionable, a also asked some more bats about this so its not only my imo. so would really like you to aviod this stack
・03:17:279 (1,2,3) - sudden 1.0? o.o you could make them 1.3 so (3)'s end would be stacked, m?
・03:22:893 (1) - finish there fits pretty good
・04:18:331 (1,2) - to make obvious that (2) is longer than (1) i'd place a note at the end cause really, there was just one reverse and there are 3, might be unpredictable from one sight, coulld be just my imo but that's what i think about this part, if you ask me
insane
・00:34:472 (1) - um, if you had 0.70x stream would be nice to make this slider be 0.70x too
・00:37:454 (2) - not sure if the note for triplet fits there, there is nothing in music for this and before, you have 00:36:138 (2,3) - 00:38:682 (1,2) - 00:41:489 (1,2) - 00:42:893 (1,2) - such rhythm mostly
・01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - even extra doesnt have anything there D: ugh, well, overall i consider this part lound and would really like you to either delete the whistles from the blue ticks or delete this
・02:12:717 (1) - dont silence the beat by the head of spinner, please, move it 1/4 later and add a note here
・02:42:191 (1,2,3) - unstack (3) please, this polarity thing is a pain in this part and hardly readable, making it flow like there02:40:787 (1,2,3) - would be great
・02:52:542 (5) - ummmmmmmmm i'd place this circle upper, it would flow better imo, somewhere there
・03:07:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is reeeeeeally low spaced, incriease the spacing for this pattern, its a kiai part with 1.25x after all
・03:59:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - making this rhombus flow to right would feel really cooler, by just swapping (3) (6)
general stuff
・seems like normal-hitwhistle2.wav is unused?
・the preview point is unsnapped
fr33z3r's
AR -0.5? i thought you agreed with AR3
・00:04:998 (1) - not sure if the nc there is necessary. either delete this one, or add there 00:08:858 (4) - . but i'd suggest deleting the nc
・00:11:314 (3) - on tail, 00:23:244 (1) - on head, 01:41:840 (1) - on head, 01:51:665 (1) - , 02:15:524 (3) - , 03:11:665 (2) - on head, 03:21:490 (1) - , 04:02:191 (1) - on head, 04:07:805 (1) - on head add finishers, other diffs have them all btw
・00:28:507 (3) - would be better if you had a clickable object on the downbeat, placing there 2 circles would make that transfer from one music part to another more comfortable and make that downbeat emphasized, yeah (i know that i said to simplify the diff as much as you can but in this case it is pretty much acceptable and fitting!)
・00:31:665 (4) - i suppose there 00:33:068 (6) - and there should be nc?
・00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern like this looks good if it is placed in the middle of the screen, the way you placed it there gives a kind of not neat thing. so could you move it in the middle?
・00:48:858 (2) - if there 00:47:454 (4,1,2) - would be a visual triangle pattern i would be ok with it but for smoother flow its better to move this slider a bit down so (1) stands by the arc of (2) and provides more natural flow
・01:43:244 (3,4,1) - at least move them so triangle looks neater please
03:13:069 (4,5,1) -
・02:04:296 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, its kinda visible during the gameplay
03:56:577 (1,3) -
・02:45:349 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi but you could round those sliders less and make the blanket be perfect there
・02:52:016 (5) - nc, 02:53:419 (1) - remove? to make the ncing be consistent
・02:54:823 (1,2) - fix the spacing and that symmetry misplacing by changing the placement of the previous pattern and replacing this pattern like: (1) 83|183; (2) 302|334
・04:13:419 (1) - spacing issue
the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
also one thing more from me, as the hitsounding is raw a bit, i think adding a normal sampleset on each object 1/1 before the clap would sound better. like 01:44:647 (1) - 01:46:051 (3) - 01:47:454 (1) - 01:48:858 (3) - on heads of these sliders etc, i guess you got the principle
neonat's
・the clap hitsounding in the ending of the beginning part (lol) sound kind of random. the clap fits on a sound like this 00:06:752 - , so i'd suggest to remove the claps from the heads of these sliders: 00:07:805 (4) - , 00:09:209 (1) - 00:10:612 (3) - .
・00:54:121 (1) - spacing issue
・01:19:384 (1,2,3,4) - could you choose one shape for these sliders and make them neat? the current placing/several curve shapes makes this part a bit messy imo
・01:36:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - again about neat placement
・01:39:735 (2,3,4,5) - the pattern is damn really clamped, could you widen it a bit?
・02:58:858 - not sure if there should be a note since you went full nonsto in this part before?
・03:01:665 (4,5,6,7) - a thing like this could be pretty hard to control imo, with 2 1/1 slider like you did there 03:07:279 (4,5,6) - would be a kind of easier
hard
・01:22:191 (1,3) - mm can you take (3) out of the (1)'s end?
03:10:612 (2,3) - this one as well, also the flow would be better if this slider was placed more to the right
・01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about 1.40 there? this part could be a bit hard to control, since you also have 1.15sv, ugh
・02:09:735 (8) - idk if this is intentional or not, either make it 1.30 or vise versa, so it will be 1.30 prev 1.40 next. minor stuff though
・02:49:910 (4,5,1) - such thing is really confusing, during the testplay i barely saw that (1) has a reverse, i dont want to say that this thing is unrankable but it may be pretty questionable, a also asked some more bats about this so its not only my imo. so would really like you to aviod this stack
・03:17:279 (1,2,3) - sudden 1.0? o.o you could make them 1.3 so (3)'s end would be stacked, m?
・03:22:893 (1) - finish there fits pretty good
・04:18:331 (1,2) - to make obvious that (2) is longer than (1) i'd place a note at the end cause really, there was just one reverse and there are 3, might be unpredictable from one sight, coulld be just my imo but that's what i think about this part, if you ask me
insane
・00:34:472 (1) - um, if you had 0.70x stream would be nice to make this slider be 0.70x too
・00:37:454 (2) - not sure if the note for triplet fits there, there is nothing in music for this and before, you have 00:36:138 (2,3) - 00:38:682 (1,2) - 00:41:489 (1,2) - 00:42:893 (1,2) - such rhythm mostly
・01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - even extra doesnt have anything there D: ugh, well, overall i consider this part lound and would really like you to either delete the whistles from the blue ticks or delete this
・02:12:717 (1) - dont silence the beat by the head of spinner, please, move it 1/4 later and add a note here
・02:42:191 (1,2,3) - unstack (3) please, this polarity thing is a pain in this part and hardly readable, making it flow like there02:40:787 (1,2,3) - would be great
・02:52:542 (5) - ummmmmmmmm i'd place this circle upper, it would flow better imo, somewhere there
・03:07:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is reeeeeeally low spaced, incriease the spacing for this pattern, its a kiai part with 1.25x after all
・03:59:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - making this rhombus flow to right would feel really cooler, by just swapping (3) (6)
Aka wrote:
neonat's
・the clap hitsounding in the ending of the beginning part (lol) sound kind of random. the clap fits on a sound like this 00:06:752 - , so i'd suggest to remove the claps from the heads of these sliders: 00:07:805 (4) - , 00:09:209 (1) - 00:10:612 (3) - . k
・00:54:121 (1) - spacing issue fixed
・01:19:384 (1,2,3,4) - could you choose one shape for these sliders and make them neat? the current placing/several curve shapes makes this part a bit messy imo adjusted
・01:36:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - again about neat placement changed it my way
・01:39:735 (2,3,4,5) - the pattern is damn really clamped, could you widen it a bit? widened then
・02:58:858 - not sure if there should be a note since you went full nonsto in this part before? it was part of the change I made to split things up to make it easier to handle it all
・03:01:665 (4,5,6,7) - a thing like this could be pretty hard to control imo, with 2 1/1 slider like you did there 03:07:279 (4,5,6) - would be a kind of easier adjust the pattern here
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124,60,199384,2,0,P|192:76|244:56,1,120.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,180,200612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,200787,2,0,P|500:172|508:236,1,120.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,201314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,296,201489,2,0,B|404:324|368:304|324:324,1,120.000000596046
236,292,202191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,356,202542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,202893,21,4,0:0:0:0:
36,224,203244,2,0,P|40:188|52:164,2,45.0000019401311,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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204,192,204296,2,0,L|268:188,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,204647,2,0,L|340:192,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,156,204998,2,0,P|408:140|448:152,2,90.0000038802622,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,84,206226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,84,206402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,28,206928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,28,207103,2,0,P|72:36|52:84,1,90.0000038802622,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,112,207805,2,0,P|99:142|44:152,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,236,208507,86,0,L|100:316,1,90.0000038802622,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,340,209033,2,0,L|184:356,1,45.0000019401311,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,209559,2,0,L|280:280,1,45.0000019401311,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,209910,2,0,L|360:300,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,210261,2,0,L|424:280,2,45.0000019401311,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,210963,2,0,L|216:168,1,90.0000038802622,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,211840,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,212016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,84,212542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,212717,2,0,P|344:100|384:72,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,16,213419,2,0,P|464:12|508:60,1,90.0000038802622
480,132,214121,86,0,L|480:240,1,90.0000038802622,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,268,214647,1,4,0:0:0:0:
484,312,214823,2,0,P|460:344|412:348,1,90.0000038802622,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,332,215349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,304,215524,2,0,P|284:292|236:308,2,90.0000038802622,4|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,236,216577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,236,216928,6,0,P|404:192|368:104,1,135.000005820393,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,217630,2,0,P|280:120|232:104,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,20,218331,2,0,P|268:12|316:24,2,90.0000038802622,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,219384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,156,219735,86,0,L|164:244,1,90.0000038802622,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,220437,2,0,L|156:348,1,90.0000038802622,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,340,221138,2,0,L|40:288,1,45.0000019401311,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,260,221489,2,0,L|36:200,2,45.0000019401311,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
124,252,222191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,172,222542,21,4,0:0:0:0:
280,36,223244,1,4,0:0:0:0:
164,172,223945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
252,156,224296,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,192,224647,2,0,B|404:180|452:216|516:192,1,180.000007760524,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,188,236577,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,116,236928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,144,239384,2,0,P|505:188|505:256,1,240.000001192092,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,356,240787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,241489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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136,240,243068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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188,32,246402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,32,247103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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400,124,252016,2,0,P|352:136|304:204,2,120.000000596046,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,253068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,192,254472,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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104,308,256928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,257279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,316,257630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,257980,12,4,259033,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
thenck. C:Aka wrote:
no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._. | ok
hard
・01:22:191 (1,3) - mm can you take (3) out of the (1)'s end?
03:10:612 (2,3) - this one as well, also the flow would be better if this slider was placed more to the right
・01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about 1.40 there? this part could be a bit hard to control, since you also have 1.15sv, ugh
・02:09:735 (8) - idk if this is intentional or not, either make it 1.30 or vise versa, so it will be 1.30 prev 1.40 next. minor stuff though
・02:49:910 (4,5,1) - such thing is really confusing, during the testplay i barely saw that (1) has a reverse, i dont want to say that this thing is unrankable but it may be pretty questionable, a also asked some more bats about this so its not only my imo. so would really like you to aviod this stack
・03:17:279 (1,2,3) - sudden 1.0? o.o you could make them 1.3 so (3)'s end would be stacked, m?
・03:22:893 (1) - finish there fits pretty good
・04:18:331 (1,2) - to make obvious that (2) is longer than (1) i'd place a note at the end cause really, there was just one reverse and there are 3, might be unpredictable from one sight, coulld be just my imo but that's what i think about this part, if you ask me
Applied everything. Remapped some parts.
insane
・00:34:472 (1) - um, if you had 0.70x stream would be nice to make this slider be 0.70x too
・00:37:454 (2) - not sure if the note for triplet fits there, there is nothing in music for this and before, you have 00:36:138 (2,3) - 00:38:682 (1,2) - 00:41:489 (1,2) - 00:42:893 (1,2) - such rhythm mostly
・01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - even extra doesnt have anything there D: ugh, well, overall i consider this part lound and would really like you to either delete the whistles from the blue ticks or delete this | i didn't delete this one, i just removed the hitsounds.
・02:12:717 (1) - dont silence the beat by the head of spinner, please, move it 1/4 later and add a note here
・02:42:191 (1,2,3) - unstack (3) please, this polarity thing is a pain in this part and hardly readable, making it flow like there02:40:787 (1,2,3) - would be great
・02:52:542 (5) - ummmmmmmmm i'd place this circle upper, it would flow better imo, somewhere there
・03:07:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is reeeeeeally low spaced, incriease the spacing for this pattern, its a kiai part with 1.25x after all
・03:59:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - making this rhombus flow to right would feel really cooler, by just swapping (3) (6)
all applied
Thanks a lot. owo)bAka wrote:
no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._.
general stuff
・seems like normal-hitwhistle2.wav is unused?
・the preview point is unsnapped
fr33z3r's
AR -0.5? i thought you agreed with AR3 -Sorry, kinda slipped that one. Fixed
・00:04:998 (1) - not sure if the nc there is necessary. either delete this one, or add there 00:08:858 (4) - . but i'd suggest deleting the nc -Fixed, deleted nc.
・00:11:314 (3) - on tail, 00:23:244 (1) - on head, 01:41:840 (1) - on head, 01:51:665 (1) - , 02:15:524 (3) - , 03:11:665 (2) - on head, 03:21:490 (1) - , 04:02:191 (1) - on head, 04:07:805 (1) - on head add finishers, other diffs have them all btw -I'm horrible with hitsounds sorry. Thanks, added.
・00:28:507 (3) - would be better if you had a clickable object on the downbeat, placing there 2 circles would make that transfer from one music part to another more comfortable and make that downbeat emphasized, yeah (i know that i said to simplify the diff as much as you can but in this case it is pretty much acceptable and fitting!) -Changed slider to 2 circles
・00:31:665 (4) - i suppose there 00:33:068 (6) - and there should be nc? -Fixed
・00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern like this looks good if it is placed in the middle of the screen, the way you placed it there gives a kind of not neat thing. so could you move it in the middle? -Moved
・00:48:858 (2) - if there 00:47:454 (4,1,2) - would be a visual triangle pattern i would be ok with it but for smoother flow its better to move this slider a bit down so (1) stands by the arc of (2) and provides more natural flow -Moved
・01:43:244 (3,4,1) - at least move them so triangle looks neater please -Moved
03:13:069 (4,5,1) - Moved
・02:04:296 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, its kinda visible during the gameplay -Fixed
03:56:577 (1,3) - Fixed
・02:45:349 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi but you could round those sliders less and make the blanket be perfect there -lol, Fixed
・02:52:016 (5) - nc, 02:53:419 (1) - remove? to make the ncing be consistent -Fixed
・02:54:823 (1,2) - fix the spacing and that symmetry misplacing by changing the placement of the previous pattern and replacing this pattern like: (1) 83|183; (2) 302|334 -Fixed, sort of. Can't get those numbers accurately :/
・04:13:419 (1) - spacing issue -Fixed
the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
also one thing more from me, as the hitsounding is raw a bit, i think adding a normal sampleset on each object 1/1 before the clap would sound better. like 01:44:647 (1) - 01:46:051 (3) - 01:47:454 (1) - 01:48:858 (3) - on heads of these sliders etc, i guess you got the principle -Added
#pending420ever </3
Topic Starter
Hype.
400th post (OP inclusive)
400th post (OP inclusive)
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked
will taking forever to get ranked
I think it won't.Frim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked
You and your avatar. :IFrim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked
when
*shots kudos
*shots kudos
le shooting starsFr33z3R wrote:
You and your avatar. :IFrim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked
Topic Starter
theramdans wrote:
when
*shots kudos
Pls shoot 100000 stars pls.SkyBearer245 wrote:
le shooting stars
Don't forget the 500 kds earned deadline Mira lol
Topic Starter
okay, recheck or something like that
fr33z3r's
・00:39:033 (4,1,2) - turn off the grid snap thing and move 00:40:086 (1) - to x:256 y:93
; 00:40:437 (2) - to x:205 y:170 to make this pattenr be perfectly symmetrical
・00:28:507 (3,4) - meh, could you make their placement be more like walking? i mean, some of newbie guys could think that they need to click on (4) cause it goes almost like by the arc of (2), so would be better to make something like this
・00:55:524 (1) - either remove the nc there or add here 00:34:823 (3) -
・02:06:402 (3,1) - spacing thing. you could move (3)'s end a bit down to fix it
・02:54:823 (1,2) - told you about these, the numbers are those yellow ones in the upper right corner, click one first slider, click on these numbers, use which i gave you ( (1) x:83 y:183; (2) x:302 y334)
update the rest of diffs please LOL neonat's is not updated
fr33z3r's
・00:39:033 (4,1,2) - turn off the grid snap thing and move 00:40:086 (1) - to x:256 y:93
・00:28:507 (3,4) - meh, could you make their placement be more like walking? i mean, some of newbie guys could think that they need to click on (4) cause it goes almost like by the arc of (2), so would be better to make something like this
SPOILER
and maybe a bit changing the placement of next one
・00:45:700 (1) - 01:19:384 (1) - 03:56:577 (1) - finisher?and maybe a bit changing the placement of next one
・00:55:524 (1) - either remove the nc there or add here 00:34:823 (3) -
・02:06:402 (3,1) - spacing thing. you could move (3)'s end a bit down to fix it
・02:54:823 (1,2) - told you about these, the numbers are those yellow ones in the upper right corner, click one first slider, click on these numbers, use which i gave you ( (1) x:83 y:183; (2) x:302 y334)
update the rest of diffs please LOL neonat's is not updated
Topic Starter
Updated everything including this diff.Aka wrote:
okay, recheck or something like that
fr33z3r's
・00:39:033 (4,1,2) - turn off the grid snap thing and move 00:40:086 (1) - to x:256 y:93
・00:28:507 (3,4) - meh, could you make their placement be more like walking? i mean, some of newbie guys could think that they need to click on (4) cause it goes almost like by the arc of (2), so would be better to make something like thisSPOILER・00:45:700 (1) - 01:19:384 (1) - 03:56:577 (1) - finisher?
and maybe a bit changing the placement of next one
・00:55:524 (1) - either remove the nc there or add here 00:34:823 (3) -
・02:06:402 (3,1) - spacing thing. you could move (3)'s end a bit down to fix it
・02:54:823 (1,2) - told you about these, the numbers are those yellow ones in the upper right corner, click one first slider, click on these numbers, use which i gave you ( (1) x:83 y:183; (2) x:302 y334)
update the rest of diffs please LOL neonat's is not updated
Fr33z3R's
00:54:296 (1,2) - wait this is weird , plz check this this is fatal error am i right or it was intended?
no kds duh
le shoots stars again just joking XD
00:54:296 (1,2) - wait this is weird , plz check this this is fatal error am i right or it was intended?
no kds duh
le shoots stars again just joking XD
Topic Starter
Not intentional. Fixed.SkyBearer245 wrote:
Fr33z3R's
00:54:296 (1,2) - wait this is weird , plz check this this is fatal error am i right or it was intended?
no kds duh
le shoots stars again just joking XD
Topic Starter
I wonder as well.Moo-Chan wrote:
why is this not ranked yet
because i am dumb and cant get my ass there finally to finish the recheck and bubble it. slap me hard next time you see me online and if im not modding this set
I am watching you O.OAka wrote:
because i am dumb and cant get my ass there finally to finish the recheck and bubble it. slap me hard next time you see me online and if im not modding this set
Topic Starter
Here's an invisible qualify icon: /o/ \o\
Congrats myself. I've been waiting for this day.
Congrats myself. I've been waiting for this day.
bubble pop bubble pop bubble QUALIFIED unqualified bubble pop bubble pop
rinse and repeat
rinse and repeat
actually i have no idea why you all are complaining about "why is it not qualifiyed back yet" instead of trying to do what i asked to
anyway im rechecking atm, so this post will be edited
neonat's
・01:15:173 (3,4) - this rhythm does feel weird cause before and after youve been using another rhythm for such parts: 00:35:875 (3) - 00:41:489 (3) - 01:09:559 (3) - 02:33:770 (3) - or 00:47:103 (3,4) - 00:52:717 (3,4) - 01:12:366 (3,4) - 02:44:998 (3,4,5) - . i'd really you to use one of those since they play more comfortable and follows the long sound 01:15:700 -
・01:24:296 (4) - minor but touches the hp bar a bit lol
insane
・04:15:875 (5) - barely touches the hp bar but still.
ai's
・00:12:016 (1,2,3) - any reason for a note on the blue tick? tbh i hear nothing there and 1/2 rhythm feels better, since you have 00:13:419 (1) - 00:14:823 (1) - 00:16:051 (9,1) - 00:17:630 (1) - 00:19:033 (1) - 00:20:437 (1) - 1/2. i understand this 00:23:068 (1,2,3) - but dont the first one
・00:56:226 (1,2,3) - the 1.80x is pretty much unexpectable, i do disagree with such pattern without marking the sv change :\ i'd recommend to place nc on 00:56:577 (2) -
・01:36:226 (1) - 03:06:051 (1) - i guess finisher would fit there well? D:
・03:21:489 (1) - some naziminor stuff about circle barely touching the hp bar, just to make it neat
so, poke me when ez applied more mods
talking about Easy diff.Aka wrote:
the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
neonat's
・01:15:173 (3,4) - this rhythm does feel weird cause before and after youve been using another rhythm for such parts: 00:35:875 (3) - 00:41:489 (3) - 01:09:559 (3) - 02:33:770 (3) - or 00:47:103 (3,4) - 00:52:717 (3,4) - 01:12:366 (3,4) - 02:44:998 (3,4,5) - . i'd really you to use one of those since they play more comfortable and follows the long sound 01:15:700 -
・01:24:296 (4) - minor but touches the hp bar a bit lol
insane
・04:15:875 (5) - barely touches the hp bar but still.
ai's
・00:12:016 (1,2,3) - any reason for a note on the blue tick? tbh i hear nothing there and 1/2 rhythm feels better, since you have 00:13:419 (1) - 00:14:823 (1) - 00:16:051 (9,1) - 00:17:630 (1) - 00:19:033 (1) - 00:20:437 (1) - 1/2. i understand this 00:23:068 (1,2,3) - but dont the first one
・00:56:226 (1,2,3) - the 1.80x is pretty much unexpectable, i do disagree with such pattern without marking the sv change :\ i'd recommend to place nc on 00:56:577 (2) -
・01:36:226 (1) - 03:06:051 (1) - i guess finisher would fit there well? D:
・03:21:489 (1) - some naziminor stuff about circle barely touching the hp bar, just to make it neat
so, poke me when ez applied more mods
Errrrrr I guess if there is no other actual mods by others for easy by Saturday I could give my take on it too
Hi Mira! As I promised on my queue.
[General]
*It’s Been a Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zpfihjNhyI #dedication
*I only scanned through the hitsounds, seeing that other modders have modded it before, several times. They all were consistent and sounded good in all difficulties.
*It’s Been a Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zpfihjNhyI #dedication
*I only scanned through the hitsounds, seeing that other modders have modded it before, several times. They all were consistent and sounded good in all difficulties.
[insane]
* HP drain rate is the same as Al’s Extra. Maybe cut it down to 6.5?
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:23:068 (8) – move this to 117, 320 for better flow
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 01:47:805 (2) –02:30:612 (5) - 04:11:314 (4) – (Just my opinion. I’m a very paranoid person lol) These are VERY close to the HP bar, that rather or not the note touches the HP bar could become subjective. I suggest moving these down a bit so that it’s CLEARLY not touching the HP bar.
* 02:02:893 (1) - 02:27:805 (5) - 03:20:612 (5) - 03:46:051 (4) - 04:15:875 (5) - these do touch the HP bar. You must change this.
* HP drain rate is the same as Al’s Extra. Maybe cut it down to 6.5?
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:23:068 (8) – move this to 117, 320 for better flow
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 01:47:805 (2) –02:30:612 (5) - 04:11:314 (4) – (Just my opinion. I’m a very paranoid person lol) These are VERY close to the HP bar, that rather or not the note touches the HP bar could become subjective. I suggest moving these down a bit so that it’s CLEARLY not touching the HP bar.
* 02:02:893 (1) - 02:27:805 (5) - 03:20:612 (5) - 03:46:051 (4) - 04:15:875 (5) - these do touch the HP bar. You must change this.
[Al’s Extra]
I can’t testplay this b/c I’m noob. Just one suggestion:
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*03:21:489 (1) – 03:32:366 (6) - touches HP bar
I can’t testplay this b/c I’m noob. Just one suggestion:
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*03:21:489 (1) – 03:32:366 (6) - touches HP bar
Topic Starter
Changed everything except the HPDR. noep.mangocurry wrote:
Hi Mira! As I promised on my queue.[General]
*It’s Been a Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zpfihjNhyI #dedication
*I only scanned through the hitsounds, seeing that other modders have modded it before, several times. They all were consistent and sounded good in all difficulties.[insane]
* HP drain rate is the same as Al’s Extra. Maybe cut it down to 6.5?
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:23:068 (8) – move this to 117, 320 for better flow
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 01:47:805 (2) –02:30:612 (5) - 04:11:314 (4) – (Just my opinion. I’m a very paranoid person lol) These are VERY close to the HP bar, that rather or not the note touches the HP bar could become subjective. I suggest moving these down a bit so that it’s CLEARLY not touching the HP bar.
* 02:02:893 (1) - 02:27:805 (5) - 03:20:612 (5) - 03:46:051 (4) - 04:15:875 (5) - these do touch the HP bar. You must change this.[Al’s Extra]
I can’t testplay this b/c I’m noob. Just one suggestion:
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*03:21:489 (1) – 03:32:366 (6) - touches HP bar
I also did the mod for AI (I have his permission). Thanks!
No longer touches the HP bar and rhythm changed
SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
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Topic Starter
Everything is updated. 
Go-Go, Ranked! lol
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
00:41:840 (4) - I think symmetry with (2) slider better.
01:37:279 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Add Clap
01:49:910 (4) - Remove slider-whistle
01:51:665 (1) - I can't understand your intention. If I were you, will not be used the spinner.
03:01:490 (2,5) - same as 01:37:279
03:21:490 (1) - same as 01:51:665
03:23:244 - 03:45:349 - I think break time is a bad idea. add patterns.
00:41:840 (4) - I think symmetry with (2) slider better.
01:37:279 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Add Clap
01:49:910 (4) - Remove slider-whistle
01:51:665 (1) - I can't understand your intention. If I were you, will not be used the spinner.
03:01:490 (2,5) - same as 01:37:279
03:21:490 (1) - same as 01:51:665
03:23:244 - 03:45:349 - I think break time is a bad idea. add patterns.
as your request:
[easy]
00:07:805 (3,5,3) - need some slider art in here
00:40:086 (1,2) - i like this http://puu.sh/csAIq/b356fc4c36.jpg
00:51:665 (2,4) - just little curve like this, i think straight slider is boring http://puu.sh/csALQ/9d7c271800.jpg
00:54:121 (1,2) - then fix overlap in circle 1, and just do the same for slider 2
01:27:805 (1,2,3) - add whistle in head (for slider 3, add whistle to all notes, including slider tick)
01:47:454 (1,2,3,4) - since its nice vocal song, im suggest to make interesting slider in here: ex -> http://puu.sh/csB8f/a17816aba4.jpg
03:17:279 (1,2,3,4) - ^ do the same since this is Copy paste
02:57:630 (1,2,3) - im just listening hitsound in this notes, same like 01:27:805 (1,2,3) . i think use whistle is better
03:22:893 - 03:42:542 - i think i like to add pattern in here, cause Slow part is the best in easy diff. but is up to you
i conclude this map is good, but some pattern too repetitive, ah but its okay for beginner players
[extra]
00:40:612 (3,4) - why i didnt like this??
01:07:454 (5,6,7) - this is so plain slider pattern, hard to read, and i think better this pattern like this http://puu.sh/csBHk/070ac05bde.jpg
01:09:823 (2,3) - i dont understand this, you just overmapping this map before and you undermapping this part?
01:14:033 (2,3) - ^
^im just suggest try some slider pattern who related to that circle pattern, so some player will be understand
01:24:296 (6,7) - maybe try this pattern, is up to you http://puu.sh/csBSB/f20588c810.jpg (same like 01:26:226 (1) - pattern)
01:44:296 (6) - better make two sliders that make this
01:45:524 (7,8) - strong triplet in here
01:58:068 (5,6,7) - lol
02:39:647 (2,3) - still dont understand
02:40:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - better this pattern than 02:39:647 (2,3) pattern
02:46:665 (2,3) - ^
03:01:138 - circle here (fucking nazi)
im just tell some suggestion, just eat my mod and spew it if you dont like it xD
just rank this map, people is boring see this map at top page on pending maplist. /me runs
[easy]
00:07:805 (3,5,3) - need some slider art in here
00:40:086 (1,2) - i like this http://puu.sh/csAIq/b356fc4c36.jpg
00:51:665 (2,4) - just little curve like this, i think straight slider is boring http://puu.sh/csALQ/9d7c271800.jpg
00:54:121 (1,2) - then fix overlap in circle 1, and just do the same for slider 2
01:27:805 (1,2,3) - add whistle in head (for slider 3, add whistle to all notes, including slider tick)
01:47:454 (1,2,3,4) - since its nice vocal song, im suggest to make interesting slider in here: ex -> http://puu.sh/csB8f/a17816aba4.jpg
03:17:279 (1,2,3,4) - ^ do the same since this is Copy paste
02:57:630 (1,2,3) - im just listening hitsound in this notes, same like 01:27:805 (1,2,3) . i think use whistle is better
03:22:893 - 03:42:542 - i think i like to add pattern in here, cause Slow part is the best in easy diff. but is up to you
i conclude this map is good, but some pattern too repetitive, ah but its okay for beginner players
[extra]
00:40:612 (3,4) - why i didnt like this??
01:07:454 (5,6,7) - this is so plain slider pattern, hard to read, and i think better this pattern like this http://puu.sh/csBHk/070ac05bde.jpg
01:09:823 (2,3) - i dont understand this, you just overmapping this map before and you undermapping this part?
01:14:033 (2,3) - ^
^im just suggest try some slider pattern who related to that circle pattern, so some player will be understand
01:24:296 (6,7) - maybe try this pattern, is up to you http://puu.sh/csBSB/f20588c810.jpg (same like 01:26:226 (1) - pattern)
01:44:296 (6) - better make two sliders that make this
01:45:524 (7,8) - strong triplet in here
01:58:068 (5,6,7) - lol
02:39:647 (2,3) - still dont understand
02:40:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - better this pattern than 02:39:647 (2,3) pattern
02:46:665 (2,3) - ^
03:01:138 - circle here (fucking nazi)
im just tell some suggestion, just eat my mod and spew it if you dont like it xD
just rank this map, people is boring see this map at top page on pending maplist. /me runs
Why did you post that on my thread lol. You know we're pals for life >.< I won't leave you :c