Hi~
[General]
Try to work on making Hard a bit easier in those sections and you can call me back for a recheck.
[General]
- Inconsistency in tags. The L in leon should not be capitalized. Change it in Easy, Hard and Shinging please.
- The video dimensions are too large. The maximum for 16:9 format is 854x480, yours is 856. Also the video is quite large, maybe you could re-encode it and lower the size a bit. ><
- I think you should remove the kiai bursts at 00:39:647 and 00:49:261 because some would argue that it's an abuse of kiai time, which is unrankable. There is really nothing special in the song that they are following.
- 00:19:668 (4) - Try a clap on the end.
- 00:21:621 (6) - NC is nice.
- 00:22:522 (1,2) - Switch these NC is more fitting imo and consistent with 00:25:226 (6,1).
- 00:24:776 (4) - Imo this pattern would be nicer if you moved this slider left 1/4 on the timeline.Example
This way it's consistent in rhythm with 00:23:724 (4,5,1) in that we have two notes and then the slider. It also fits vocals better this way, try it.
Or maybe you can try something more intuitive like this: - 00:27:630 (1,2) - I think you should switch these NC's to follow vocals like you do at other places.
- 00:30:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is not correct, you need to move these 1/4 sliders forward 1/4 to match vocals. Like 00:32:737 (2,3,4,5).
- 00:33:939 (6) - Move it 1 grid to the left to make a more even spacing in the blanket.
- 00:40:849 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 00:50:463 (6).
- 00:51:665 (1) - Imo remove finish fits better in your hitsound pattern.
- 00:57:073 (2,3) - Since each slider has a different velocity, maybe you can add a NC to each. It will make the speedups easier to catch. If you do, add one at 00:58:274 (4) also for consistency.
- 00:58:875 (1) - Maybe you can make the end of the spinner soft sample set if you think it's too loud.
- 01:08:189 (5) - How about add a repeat to this slider? I think it fills out the rhythm here nicely.
- 00:17:715 - How about add a note to fill the gap before the spinner?
- 00:20:870 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should make this section easier. When you place 1/4 sliders on the blue tick, it makes it very difficult to read the rhythm with this AR. It would be more intuitive to play if you used a rhythm with sliders placed on the white or red ticks. Just look at the pattern in the Shining diff. Try to work on this rhythm, here is a sample one:
- 00:23:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same concern as above.
- 00:29:733 (5) - Finish missing from the end.
- 00:30:184 (1) - Same concern as the Insane diff. This slider should be at 00:30:334 to follow vocals properly. Also try to avoid having 1/4 sliders starting on the blue tick.
- 00:46:858 (6,7) - I think it would fit the music better if you delete these, place a circle at 00:46:858, and have the spinner start at 00:47:158 when the vocals hold.
- 00:58:875 (1) - Same as Insane, you can make the end soft sample if you'd like.
- 01:00:528 (1) - I suggest shorten this by 1/4 and start it at 01:00:678 like in the Insane.
- 00:20:419 (1) - Replace clap with finish?
- 00:21:020 (2) - Replace finish with clap?
- 00:32:136 (5) - I suggest remove finish from the end because it breaks your pattern since you don't use one at 00:34:840 (6) or 00:37:244.
Try to work on making Hard a bit easier in those sections and you can call me back for a recheck.