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Monkey Majik - Sunshine (TV Size)

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UnitedWeSin
Hi~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. The L in leon should not be capitalized. Change it in Easy, Hard and Shinging please.
  2. The video dimensions are too large. The maximum for 16:9 format is 854x480, yours is 856. Also the video is quite large, maybe you could re-encode it and lower the size a bit. ><
  3. I think you should remove the kiai bursts at 00:39:647 and 00:49:261 because some would argue that it's an abuse of kiai time, which is unrankable. There is really nothing special in the song that they are following.
[Shining]
  1. 00:19:668 (4) - Try a clap on the end.
  2. 00:21:621 (6) - NC is nice.
  3. 00:22:522 (1,2) - Switch these NC is more fitting imo and consistent with 00:25:226 (6,1).
  4. 00:24:776 (4) - Imo this pattern would be nicer if you moved this slider left 1/4 on the timeline.
    Example

    This way it's consistent in rhythm with 00:23:724 (4,5,1) in that we have two notes and then the slider. It also fits vocals better this way, try it.
    Or maybe you can try something more intuitive like this:
  5. 00:27:630 (1,2) - I think you should switch these NC's to follow vocals like you do at other places.
  6. 00:30:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is not correct, you need to move these 1/4 sliders forward 1/4 to match vocals. Like 00:32:737 (2,3,4,5).
  7. 00:33:939 (6) - Move it 1 grid to the left to make a more even spacing in the blanket.
  8. 00:40:849 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 00:50:463 (6).
  9. 00:51:665 (1) - Imo remove finish fits better in your hitsound pattern.
  10. 00:57:073 (2,3) - Since each slider has a different velocity, maybe you can add a NC to each. It will make the speedups easier to catch. If you do, add one at 00:58:274 (4) also for consistency.
  11. 00:58:875 (1) - Maybe you can make the end of the spinner soft sample set if you think it's too loud.
  12. 01:08:189 (5) - How about add a repeat to this slider? I think it fills out the rhythm here nicely.
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:715 - How about add a note to fill the gap before the spinner?
  2. 00:20:870 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should make this section easier. When you place 1/4 sliders on the blue tick, it makes it very difficult to read the rhythm with this AR. It would be more intuitive to play if you used a rhythm with sliders placed on the white or red ticks. Just look at the pattern in the Shining diff. Try to work on this rhythm, here is a sample one:
  3. 00:23:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same concern as above.
  4. 00:29:733 (5) - Finish missing from the end.
  5. 00:30:184 (1) - Same concern as the Insane diff. This slider should be at 00:30:334 to follow vocals properly. Also try to avoid having 1/4 sliders starting on the blue tick.
  6. 00:46:858 (6,7) - I think it would fit the music better if you delete these, place a circle at 00:46:858, and have the spinner start at 00:47:158 when the vocals hold.
  7. 00:58:875 (1) - Same as Insane, you can make the end soft sample if you'd like.
  8. 01:00:528 (1) - I suggest shorten this by 1/4 and start it at 01:00:678 like in the Insane.
[leon's Normal]
  1. 00:20:419 (1) - Replace clap with finish?
  2. 00:21:020 (2) - Replace finish with clap?
  3. 00:32:136 (5) - I suggest remove finish from the end because it breaks your pattern since you don't use one at 00:34:840 (6) or 00:37:244.
Easy is fine.

Try to work on making Hard a bit easier in those sections and you can call me back for a recheck. :)
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. The L in leon should not be capitalized. Change it in Easy, Hard and Shinging please. :O Fixed~~
  2. The video dimensions are too large. The maximum for 16:9 format is 854x480, yours is 856. Also the video is quite large, maybe you could re-encode it and lower the size a bit. >< wow ok~ its 7mb now~ i converted it for a afternoon xD
  3. I think you should remove the kiai bursts at 00:39:647 and 00:49:261 because some would argue that it's an abuse of kiai time, which is unrankable. There is really nothing special in the song that they are following. Oh removed :P i like Fountain
[Shining]
  1. 00:19:668 (4) - Try a clap on the end. added
  2. 00:21:621 (6) - NC is nice.added
  3. 00:22:522 (1,2) - Switch these NC is more fitting imo and consistent with 00:25:226 (6,1). changed~
  4. 00:24:776 (4) - Imo this pattern would be nicer if you moved this slider left 1/4 on the timeline. wow great pattern~ choosed the second version~
    Example

    This way it's consistent in rhythm with 00:23:724 (4,5,1) in that we have two notes and then the slider. It also fits vocals better this way, try it.
    Or maybe you can try something more intuitive like this:
  5. 00:27:630 (1,2) - I think you should switch these NC's to follow vocals like you do at other places. changed~
  6. 00:30:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is not correct, you need to move these 1/4 sliders forward 1/4 to match vocals. Like 00:32:737 (2,3,4,5). ok~ fixed~ after seriously(? listening sure its started at red line.. ww
  7. 00:33:939 (6) - Move it 1 grid to the left to make a more even spacing in the blanket.Moved
  8. 00:40:849 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 00:50:463 (6). Removed~
  9. 00:51:665 (1) - Imo remove finish fits better in your hitsound pattern. Removed~
  10. 00:57:073 (2,3) - Since each slider has a different velocity, maybe you can add a NC to each. It will make the speedups easier to catch. If you do, add one at 00:58:274 (4) also for consistency. ok~ added
  11. 00:58:875 (1) - Maybe you can make the end of the spinner soft sample set if you think it's too loud. xD i forgot something called soft ww
  12. 01:08:189 (5) - How about add a repeat to this slider? I think it fills out the rhythm here nicely. :O great~ added
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:715 - How about add a note to fill the gap before the spinner? wow added
  2. 00:20:870 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should make this section easier. When you place 1/4 sliders on the blue tick, it makes it very difficult to read the rhythm with this AR. It would be more intuitive to play if you used a rhythm with sliders placed on the white or red ticks. Just look at the pattern in the Shining diff. Try to work on this rhythm, here is a sample one: oh oh~~ i got it... ww and changed like your suggestion~~
  3. 00:23:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same concern as above. changed also~
  4. 00:29:733 (5) - Finish missing from the end.added
  5. 00:30:184 (1) - Same concern as the Insane diff. This slider should be at 00:30:334 to follow vocals properly. Also try to avoid having 1/4 sliders starting on the blue tick. oh~~ same fixed as Insane~ thx for the information :3
  6. 00:46:858 (6,7) - I think it would fit the music better if you delete these, place a circle at 00:46:858, and have the spinner start at 00:47:158 when the vocals hold. :D surely better when changing~
  7. 00:58:875 (1) - Same as Insane, you can make the end soft sample if you'd like. changed also
  8. 01:00:528 (1) - I suggest shorten this by 1/4 and start it at 01:00:678 like in the Insane. w forgot to changed when applying previous mod fixed~

Easy is fine.

Try to work on making Hard a bit easier in those sections and you can call me back for a recheck. :)
ok decrease DS of some 3 hit in hard by 1.2x >w<~
And waiting leon san online for reply ww~
Xinchii
音效就直接幫我改一下吧www
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku
好www

Fixed all for leon and

Updated
UnitedWeSin
Alright then. Good luck with your first rank. :3
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku
:D
thanks UWS san~~
Azails
恭喜泡!
Xinchii
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Breeze
Happy to see other mapper map monkey majik song in osu, this is the 2nd monkey majik map, we need more monkey majik!
Annnnnnnnnnnnndm congratulations to your 1st rank
RANKED!
smallboat
Grats!
Koiyuki
gratz~
Unsfamiliar
Hey gratz :3
Asagi
Gratz :3
Kinomi
恭喜
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Tsumetaku and leon1341414!!^^ for first Ranked Maps!!^^
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku

Breeze wrote:

Happy to see other mapper map monkey majik song in osu, this is the 2nd monkey majik map, we need more monkey majik!
Annnnnnnnnnnnndm congratulations to your 1st rank
RANKED!
Thanksssssss Breeze大 ;w;~~
Osu needs more Monkey majik!!~

and leon san for giving me such much advice w

超級感謝~ thank you everybody >w<~~
mintong89
omg this song
一直很想做但是不会做 =A=
恭喜啦
Xinchii
好快

嚇死我惹

恭喜尼\:D/
Zero__wind
decent mapset as a 1st rank
congratz
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku
wow 來了好多神麻婆

thx you guys~~
- Miomio Chii -
恭喜啊~~
可惡都不跟我說聲的QAQ
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

恭喜啊~~
可惡都不跟我說聲的QAQ
對ㄅ起;w;~
happy623
GRATZ XD
Alarido
RAAAAANKEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUU^^

CONGRATZ, TSUMETAKU :D Nice Song and Nice Background Images too (specially the one at Hard/Insane ;) )

Att.
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

THANKSSSSS 623 and Alarido!!!!!!!

>3< do anyone discover that ''Sunshine'' with BG in night?ww
yurunneram
OHMIGOSH \(@.@\) OHMIGOSH!!! IT FINALLY GOT RANKED!!~~ OHMIGOSH~~~

Congratz congratz :DDDD I've been waiting for this rank for so long~~
Topic Starter
Tsumetaku
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOLOOOOヽ(@∀@)ノ
Sorry for let you wait so long ;w;~

and thx everyone again~~
waxman
\(≧∇≦)/☆★Congratulations!☆★\(≧∇≦)/

and thanks to giving me 2 kudosu! https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/127979/start=60

I'm so happy cuz this map is ranked and I got famous right now.

Nice map 4 ever!
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