Nemis wrote:

[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:

SPOILER

00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:

SPOILER

01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:

SPOILER

01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else I thought again and again but I found no way to replace these.....
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume

I hope this map will get ranked I like it!

litoluna wrote:

こんにちは~
ModRequestありがとうございます
[General]

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  fine

全て提案です！

[EZ]

1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。

[NM]

1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
   Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
   00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
   00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
   Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。

HDとMXは自分の技量では指摘できなかったです

short mod sorry (ﾉω･､)
Good Luck~ヾ(o･д･)ﾉ

いえいえ＾＾　ありがとうございました！！

1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314 1312) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes

00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing

Pokie wrote:

[General]

1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes

[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed

00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing

[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・｀)