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DeletedUser_1574070

neonat wrote:

Nice song, all I can suggest right now is that for [Hard]
00:44:089 (10) - use 1/8 beat snap divisor and replace this note with a repeat slider, repeat 5 times until 00:44:247 to fully get that ringing sound in the music

I hoped you to catch more points.... but anyway thanks for your mod
Sylith
IRC mod
00:38 sKZy: 음
00:38 *sKZy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241431 M2U - Nightmare]
00:39 sKZy: 귀가없고
00:39 sKZy: 눈이없어서
00:39 sKZy: 지적할게 아주 주관적인 배치밖에없음
00:40 *Kloyd is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/187639 Skrillex - First Of The Year (Equinox) [ND1]]
00:40 Kloyd: 미쳤다
00:40 sKZy: 놀드 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:41 sKZy: 엥
00:42 Kloyd: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/241429&m=0 다 kloyd로 나와있셈
00:42 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:42 sKZy: 01:01:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:42 sKZy: 나 이거 솔직히
00:42 sKZy: 바꿨으면좋겠는데
00:43 sKZy: 01:08:563 (4) -
00:43 sKZy: 이거 4를
00:43 sKZy: 슬라랑 좀 간격 비슷하게 하면
00:43 sKZy: 더 이쁠거같음
00:43 Kloyd: 그런거 포스팅 하셈 쿠도스 퍼드림
00:44 sKZy: 아얄로할거
00:44 sKZy: 귀찮
00:44 Kloyd: 어차피 포스팅 해야됨
00:44 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:44 sKZy: 그게더편함
00:45 sKZy: 진짜못잡겠다 mx는
00:45 Kloyd: 걍 여러맵 조금씩 조금씩 완성해야지
00:45 *Kloyd is editing M2U X ESTi - Obelisque [Dedicated to jieusieu]
00:46 sKZy: 하드리맵함?
00:46 Kloyd: ?어떤거
00:46 *sKZy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241430 M2U - Nightmare [HD]]
00:46 sKZy: 디스턴스 많이바뀐거같은데
00:47 Kloyd: ? ㄱㄷ
00:47 sKZy: 아니
00:47 sKZy: 많이좋아진거같다는말임
00:47 Kloyd: 스페이싱은 1.2가 기본인데 여전히
00:47 sKZy: 뭐지
00:47 sKZy: 더깔끔해진거같은데
00:48 sKZy: 나
00:48 sKZy: 01:36:668 (8) -
00:48 sKZy: 여기빼고못찾겠음
00:48 Kloyd: 다들 어려워하던데 솔직히 나 이거 히하 첫카풀콤함
00:48 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/730893
00:48 Kloyd: 일직선으로 나열한거라 치기 되게시움
00:48 sKZy: 이런식으로해봐요
00:48 sKZy: 스택하지말고
00:48 sKZy: 형은쉬울거같은데
00:49 sKZy: 전까지 디스턴스 변화 거의 없다가
00:49 sKZy: 갑자기 아래로 확내려갔다가 슬라가위로 올라감
00:49 sKZy: 나라면 바꿀듯
00:49 Kloyd: 저거 원래
00:49 Kloyd: 2번반복하는슬라였는데 지적와서 고친거임
00:50 sKZy: 디스턴스 솔직히
00:50 sKZy: 갑자기 너무 벙뜨는 느낌인거같은데
00:50 sKZy: 개인의견임
00:50 sKZy: 무시해도댐
00:50 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K84U.jpg
00:51 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 나는 그렇게할거같음
00:52 sKZy: ㅈㅅ
00:52 Kloyd: 슬라를 두개로 해버릴까 서클을지우고
00:52 sKZy: sp못올려드릴듯
00:52 sKZy: 못찾겠다
00:53 Kloyd: 이런건 어떰? http://puu.sh/2K896.jpg
00:54 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 괜찮을듯
00:54 sKZy: 근데 솔직히
00:54 sKZy: 리버스쓰는게 더 깔끔해보이기는함
00:55 sKZy: 못하겠다
00:55 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8dW.jpg
00:56 sKZy: 음;
00:56 sKZy: 이건잘모르겠음
00:57 sKZy: 8을 좀 덜굽혀봐도될듯
00:58 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8ix.jpg
00:58 sKZy: 모양은이쁜데
00:58 sKZy: 치기 편하려나
00:59 sKZy: 그래도 아까거보다는
01:00 sKZy: 훨씬나은거같은데
01:00 Kloyd: 에라이 http://puu.sh/2K8mh.jpg
01:00 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:00 Kloyd: 됫다
01:00 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
01:01 Kloyd: 가장 간단한 해결책을놔두고
01:01 Kloyd: 너무 비비꼬아생각했네
01:01 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

poor mod D: sorry

By the way, nice map :D have a star
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

sKZy wrote:

IRC mod
00:38 sKZy: 음
00:38 *sKZy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241431 M2U - Nightmare]
00:39 sKZy: 귀가없고
00:39 sKZy: 눈이없어서
00:39 sKZy: 지적할게 아주 주관적인 배치밖에없음
00:40 *Kloyd is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/187639 Skrillex - First Of The Year (Equinox) [ND1]]
00:40 Kloyd: 미쳤다
00:40 sKZy: 놀드 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:41 sKZy: 엥
00:42 Kloyd: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/241429&m=0 다 kloyd로 나와있셈
00:42 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:42 sKZy: 01:01:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:42 sKZy: 나 이거 솔직히
00:42 sKZy: 바꿨으면좋겠는데
00:43 sKZy: 01:08:563 (4) -
00:43 sKZy: 이거 4를
00:43 sKZy: 슬라랑 좀 간격 비슷하게 하면
00:43 sKZy: 더 이쁠거같음
00:43 Kloyd: 그런거 포스팅 하셈 쿠도스 퍼드림
00:44 sKZy: 아얄로할거
00:44 sKZy: 귀찮
00:44 Kloyd: 어차피 포스팅 해야됨
00:44 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:44 sKZy: 그게더편함
00:45 sKZy: 진짜못잡겠다 mx는
00:45 Kloyd: 걍 여러맵 조금씩 조금씩 완성해야지
00:45 *Kloyd is editing M2U X ESTi - Obelisque [Dedicated to jieusieu]
00:46 sKZy: 하드리맵함?
00:46 Kloyd: ?어떤거
00:46 *sKZy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241430 M2U - Nightmare [HD]]
00:46 sKZy: 디스턴스 많이바뀐거같은데
00:47 Kloyd: ? ㄱㄷ
00:47 sKZy: 아니
00:47 sKZy: 많이좋아진거같다는말임
00:47 Kloyd: 스페이싱은 1.2가 기본인데 여전히
00:47 sKZy: 뭐지
00:47 sKZy: 더깔끔해진거같은데
00:48 sKZy: 나
00:48 sKZy: 01:36:668 (8) -
00:48 sKZy: 여기빼고못찾겠음
00:48 Kloyd: 다들 어려워하던데 솔직히 나 이거 히하 첫카풀콤함
00:48 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/730893
00:48 Kloyd: 일직선으로 나열한거라 치기 되게시움
00:48 sKZy: 이런식으로해봐요
00:48 sKZy: 스택하지말고
00:48 sKZy: 형은쉬울거같은데
00:49 sKZy: 전까지 디스턴스 변화 거의 없다가
00:49 sKZy: 갑자기 아래로 확내려갔다가 슬라가위로 올라감
00:49 sKZy: 나라면 바꿀듯
00:49 Kloyd: 저거 원래
00:49 Kloyd: 2번반복하는슬라였는데 지적와서 고친거임
00:50 sKZy: 디스턴스 솔직히
00:50 sKZy: 갑자기 너무 벙뜨는 느낌인거같은데
00:50 sKZy: 개인의견임
00:50 sKZy: 무시해도댐
00:50 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K84U.jpg
00:51 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 나는 그렇게할거같음
00:52 sKZy: ㅈㅅ
00:52 Kloyd: 슬라를 두개로 해버릴까 서클을지우고
00:52 sKZy: sp못올려드릴듯
00:52 sKZy: 못찾겠다
00:53 Kloyd: 이런건 어떰? http://puu.sh/2K896.jpg
00:54 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 괜찮을듯
00:54 sKZy: 근데 솔직히
00:54 sKZy: 리버스쓰는게 더 깔끔해보이기는함
00:55 sKZy: 못하겠다
00:55 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8dW.jpg
00:56 sKZy: 음;
00:56 sKZy: 이건잘모르겠음
00:57 sKZy: 8을 좀 덜굽혀봐도될듯
00:58 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8ix.jpg
00:58 sKZy: 모양은이쁜데
00:58 sKZy: 치기 편하려나
00:59 sKZy: 그래도 아까거보다는
01:00 sKZy: 훨씬나은거같은데
01:00 Kloyd: 에라이 http://puu.sh/2K8mh.jpg
01:00 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:00 Kloyd: 됫다
01:00 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
01:01 Kloyd: 가장 간단한 해결책을놔두고
01:01 Kloyd: 너무 비비꼬아생각했네
01:01 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

poor mod D: sorry

By the way, nice map :D have a star
TX :)
litoluna
こんにちは~
ModRequestありがとうございます
[General]

  • fine
全て提案です!

[EZ]
  1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。 :)
[NM]
  1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
    Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
  2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
    00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
    00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
    Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。
HDとMXは自分の技量では指摘できなかったです :(

short mod sorry (ノω・、)
Good Luck~ヾ(o・д・)ノ
happy623
Hello :) thanks for mod requesting from PM ~

Let's start~

[General]
nothing :D

[EZ]
- please correct it to SliderMultiplier: 0.8 in your .osu file

- Add some spinner to this diff, it can increase the competitive in this diff

01:41:089 (3) - remove clap?

[NM]
- Add a spinner to this diff too
00:44:247 (1) - increase the volume by 10%?
01:47:089 (5) - change the finish to a clap at the slider's end? seems better :D

[HD]
OD+1?
01:01:931 (1,2,3) - add a normal sampleset whistle at the head of the sliders?
01:17:089 (1) - put it at x:24 y:188 could be a nice blanket to 01:16:773 (8)
01:44:878 - missing a drum hit here, add a note looks better

[MX]
HP-1?
..........
Nice map I suppose XD
Sorry for my poor modding :?
Keep going ヽ(゚ω゚)ノ star ~ ✧
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
thanks y'all
gonna change this tonight
Leader
Hello, m4m :3

[EZ]
  1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
  2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
  3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
  4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
  5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
  6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)
[NM]
  1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
  2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
  3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
  4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220
[HD]

  • Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one
  1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
  2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
  3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
  4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?
[MX]
  1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV
  2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread
    Great diff, good job!
Nemis
[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:
00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:
01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:
01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume
I hope this map will get ranked :) I like it!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Leader wrote:

Hello, m4m :3

[EZ]
  1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
  2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
  3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
  4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
  5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
  6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)
[NM]
  1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
  2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
  3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
  4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220
[HD]

  • Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one
  1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
  2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
  3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
  4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?
[MX]
  1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV for shape and for its tempo, I think I should keep this.
  2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread I didnt fix this cuz I wanted to express the sound there
    Great diff, good job!

Thanks for a mod!! :)
Arrival
Hi ! From my queue.

[HD]
00:36:352 (9) - Offscreen a bit, put it just a bit up.
01:36:668 (8) - Clap here ? (Suggestion)

[MX]
00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why your sliders slow down here, first i thought you were playing with the clours of your beats, but no, so i don't agree with your choice of reducing the speed here.
00:16:457 (1) - Better blanket here ?
00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, or at least, put the red combo here (?)
00:51:510 (7) - Clap here ?
00:57:510 (3,4) - Why not use two 1/2 sliders ? To fit better with the second part of your combo
01:06:984 (1) - Just a question : Why did you choose 0.84 ? :D
01:29:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put this stream up a bit
01:44:721 (8,1) - i think you have to place an other circle on 01:44:878 -, you miss a note of the music here, and i think this is'nt the moment to place an anti jump. This part of the music goes crazy a bit, i really find this sad to not place a beat here.

[NM]
00:30:668 (2) - Clap ?
00:37:300 (2,3) - Please put them up a bit
01:37:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why did you stop use whistle sample ?

[EZ]
01:23:405 (2) - Blanket here
01:27:194 (1) - Blanket the 01:25:931 (3) -


Your mapset is really good ! Starred !
DakeDekaane
Hi o/
Summoned here because M4M
Sorry for late, here I go~

Placement is good, I'll just point some things that bothered me about rhythm.

[EZ]
00:12:352 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 beat, making the reverse arrow be in 00:12:826, sounds a lot better to me.
00:19:773 (2) - Move this to 00:20:089, it'd sound better imo.
Remember fix placement if you do what I pointed above.

[NM]
00:08:089 (3) - Begin this in 00:08:247, I know you make this to follow the piano, but as you're following guitar in previous notes, this is quite ankward while playing, most of my suggestions in this diff will be related to this.
00:08:878 (1) - Remove the reverse and make 00:10:142 (2) begin in 00:09:984, as an additional option, you can add a circle in 00:09:668, like this

00:13:142 (3) - Begin in 00:13:300.
00:18:194 (3) - Begin in 00:18:352.
00:18:984 - Something like I said in 00:08:878.
00:23:247 (3) - Begin in 00:23:405.
00:51:826 (1) - This stack may be a bit confusing for beginners after that 1/2 circles before this, I recommend unstack and move it elsewhere.
01:01:931 (1) - As above.

[HD]
Some changes in beat placement, I felt it a bit weird while playing, this is just my opinion, feel free to follow or ignore.
00:07:615 (5) - Do this instead, I felt the guitar should be hit instead begin in a slider.

00:09:826 (4) - Maybe split this in two circles.
00:14:878 (4) - Do this, reason explained a bit above

00:19:931 (4) - Maybe split in two circles.

[MX]
Same as HD, some suggestions in beat placement.
00:09:826 (4) - Maybe plit in two circles
00:14:878 (4) - ^
00:19:931 (4) - ^
01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - I felt this is a bit weird, maybe make this stream equally spaced?

I felt this mapset so nice, take a star, good luck o/
Pokie
A quick check before both of us having an afk trip ;_; 文章にわかりづらいところがあったら遠慮なく私に聞かせてくださいね!

[General]
  1. The repeat arrow is now performing as white color on the light grey combo, which may cause a sight-reading problem on repeat sliders. I would suggest to adjust a lighter color here, please apply this code to every difficulty:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 128,0,128
    Combo2 : 255,0,0
    Combo3 : 202,202,202
    SPOILER
    ======>
[NM]
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
00:51:352 (3,4,1) - Ahaha, I suppose normal players will receive a miss here apparently, I'd say this combination isn't friendly to rookie players. Please replace two circles (3,4) to a single 1/2 slider, then unstack (1)

00:53:089 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - And yup, these stuffs may need an adjustment on spacing. It would be better to leave a screenshot and code here instead of wording the changes
Code from 00:50:563 (2) - to 00:55:615 (3) -
292,320,50563,2,0,L|403:348,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,51352,2,0,L|224:232,1,55
292,144,51826,6,0,B|232:152|192:100|192:100|124:120,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,53089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,53405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,56,53721,2,0,P|280:24|292:0,2,55
216,152,54352,6,0,P|196:204|152:236,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,54984,2,0,P|83:322|136:352,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,344,55615,2,0,B|304:344|304:344|352:360|352:360|420:360,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:01:457 (3,4,1) - ^, same process. I would leave this part for you this time xD

[EZ]
00:01:615 (1) - Seems it's the only spinner which used from the beginning through all difficulties, is there any reason for using a Easy-specific spinner? Of course I'm not saying it's a bad idea for adding a spinner on current position, it could also avoid the "same score conflict" on score board. In a short word, add a spinner to all difficulties, or remove it from Easy

Please call me back asap orz!
BeatofIke
I remember playing this song in stepmania back in the day. Anyways, good luck with your map. :3

Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
waitwait gimme time to fix omg

anyway thanks everybody!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Nemis wrote:

[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:
00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:
01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:
01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else I thought again and again but I found no way to replace these.....
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume
I hope this map will get ranked :) I like it!
Fixed most of your suggestions except the red colored quotations. thanks so much!! :)
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

litoluna wrote:

こんにちは~
ModRequestありがとうございます
[General]

  • fine
全て提案です!

[EZ]
  1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。 :)
[NM]
  1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
    Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
  2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
    00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
    00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
    Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。
HDとMXは自分の技量では指摘できなかったです :(

short mod sorry (ノω・、)
Good Luck~ヾ(o・д・)ノ

いえいえ^^ ありがとうございました!! :)
Pokie
[General]
  1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314 1312) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes
[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・`)
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Pokie wrote:

[General]
  1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes
[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・`)

え。。。直したのに。。
とにかくフィックスしました!
Pokie
(`・ω・´)シャキーン
NatsumeRin
Interesting.
Apricot
おめでとう!
LQA20Ans
첫랭 축하드려요. Gratz!

그리고 님이 트롤 맵퍼라니 전 나가죽어야할듯.
Muya
modできなくてごめんなさい :o
good mapです :)
Beige
Goooooooooood!!! congratz
MineC24
첫 랭맵 축하해요~~
happy623
congratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :) :) :)
y u c a
おめでとございます(・∀・)!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
Thanks y'all :)
Arrival
Nice :D
Sonnyc
ㅊㅋ
lkx_Shore
So fuuny map :D
Metro
great map
xsrsbsns
this is already ranked... late grats, and wow great map!
(honestly my loss for not remembering this sooner)
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