This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月14日 at 20:02:03

Artist: nao
Title: Komorebi Fresnel
Source: 1/2 summer
Tags: ALcot Honey Comb
BPM: 202
Filesize: 6594kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.8 stars, 253 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 523 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 745 notes)
4. Normal (4.09 stars, 330 notes)

Download: nao - Komorebi Fresnel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From #modreqs

Because I'm novice modder... I not sure that my mod will help you.


[Easy]

-01:00:037 (4,1) - add a NC on first one and delete NC on other one.

-01:30:334 (1) - this spinner is too short for easy diff?
better making empty space instead of insert spinner imo.

-02:28:849 (3) - NC


[Normal]

-00:53:206 (5,6) - How about using one repeat slider?

-01:38:651 (2) - rotate this slider about -20?(origin - selection centre)

-01:49:938 (4,1) - add NC on circle and delete NC on slider

-01:50:532 (1,2) - how about this one?


-02:24:691 - Add circle?(+clap)

-02:34:196 - ^

-03:04:196 (2) - Add NC

-03:22:315 (2) - ^


[Hard]

-00:27:364 (1,2,3) - some suggestion.


-00:29:592 (1) - NC

-00:32:711 (6) - Ctrl + g

-00:33:008 (7) - ^

-00:33:750 (2,3) - change to one slider would be better imo.

-01:05:087 (3) - NC

-01:05:829 (5) - ^

-02:22:018 (2) - ^

-03:03:008 (1) - clap sound on slidertick looks weird... Did you forgot to use S:C1 or use S:C2 deliberately?

-03:23:206 (3) - NC


[Insane]

Everything is perfect!


Plz rank this. I can't wait it!

Laurier, You're so PRO!!! Take my star.

thanks !! accept some

I don't have anything to say... Everything is perfect.
Rank this, please.

skyzoderp wrote:

I don't have anything to say... Everything is perfect.
Rank this, please.

wow thanks!!
I will rank this map !!

hi~ Laurier

Easy

03:13:404 (3) - Delete

02:51:721 (4) - http://puu.sh/2KrjY.jpg

03:39:839 (3) - http://puu.sh/2Krp4.jpg Can you try (Beat)

Normal

03:19:641 (3) - The tail of the slider Clap

03:20:829 (1) - http://puu.sh/2KrK9.jpg At the halfway point Clap

Hard

01:51:424 (7) - The tail of the slider Clap

02:19:938 (5) - ^

02:20:829 (1) - ^

Insane

01:10:730 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Kse5.jpg Slider +1

Good Map~

thanks ^^

Insaneの音付けの提案

00:10:136 (3) - こっちはシンバルなってるしFinish合うと思う
00:10:730 (1,2) - ここのsliderendにデフォのWhistle音量抑え目入れるとアクセントついて面白いかも
00:11:325 (3,4) - 3→４で音量ちょっと上げてく感じでFinish
00:26:176 (1) - finish抜け
00:30:334 (2) - 頭Whistleの00:30:631 (3) - 頭Clap
00:49:641 (5) - Whistle
00:59:295 (6) - Clap欲しい
01:03:899 (4) - 頭Whistleでfinish前に貯めつくる
01:06:275 (5) - Whistle
01:25:211 (3) - 終わりもClap　微妙かなぁ
02:36:572 (4) - 頭Whistle　上と同じ
02:57:661 (3) - 真ん中Whistle
03:02:414 (3,4,5,6) - めんどいけどちょっとづつ音量上げて盛り上がらせたい　一番いいとこやし

配置と音取りは言うことなし　gl

I wish I could find any mistakes in the mapset. But dayum, it's flawless!
I wish I have kd to give it to you, but I don't.
Go for the rank!

Ps. sry for not keeping in touch, I just came back from a trip

Aww Laurier
I can't mod this It's too perfect !!
I will give you a ticket instead, kay ?

CrystilonZ wrote:

Aww Laurier
I can't mod this It's too perfect !!
I will give you a ticket instead, kay ?

don't worry
thanks for chacked my map

awesome map.. i should practice your map

Please make more maps!!

!?
pro!!

This is a good map
I love it XD

InabaTewi wrote:

This is a good map
I love it XD

thanks >w<

Laurier wrote:

InabaTewi wrote:

This is a good map
I love it XD

thanks >w<

I will support you forever >///<

Hi~ mod 4 mod as promised~

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags: Hard and Normal have one more space after "ALcot". please check.

[Insane]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:11:917 - snap to 00:11:919
(it's ok but if you snap it it will be the best)

00:08:800 - you can add a note with whistle to implement the rising tension
00:16:226 (5) - I think it's better if you put it at 00:16:003 - , and furthermore you can try adding clap on this note an on 00:15:928 -
00:21:275 (6,7,1) - increase the spacing cause the small spacing does not fit with the slider shape.
01:05:829 (3) - add NC
01:09:988 (5) - ^
01:10:730 (1) - use four 1/2 notes stacking on it seems to be better, like you did at the very beginning.
01:27:216 (3) - add NC
01:41:622 (3,4,5) - sounds somewhat strange. 01:41:696 (4) - should be at 01:41:547 - imo.
02:20:161 (3,4) - slightly increase spacing? looks a bit hard to read.
02:42:661 (5) - NC
03:03:008 (1,2) - both extend by 1/2 beats and silence the tick plays somewhat fits the music.
03:08:651 (3,1) - change back to P slider shape, if you are not intended to make them straight.
03:28:849 (5,6,7,8) - add clap or change to normal sample?
03:33:379 (4) - same as above. I think it should be at 03:33:230 -

[Hard]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:11:917 - snap to 00:11:919
(it's ok but if you snap it it will be the best)

00:15:037 (2,3) - blanket better if you like
00:19:790 (2) - ^
00:20:829 (5) - either rotate it a bit clockwise or anti-clockwise, to make it flow better with 00:20:235 (3) -
00:27:364 (1,2) - separate them a bit. spacing in Hard is not a problem.
00:31:226 (1,2) - I recommend exchange them in time, regarding to the music.
01:10:730 (1) - 0.5x seems to me somewhat to abrupt. 0.75x recommended.
01:27:810 (6,1) - reduce the spacing
01:45:037 (5,6) - exchange them in time
01:49:938 (2,3) - blanket better if you like
02:33:156 (7,8) - the 3-plet is too abrupt imo. maybe you can add clap on them, or delete 8.
02:35:681 (1) - reverse arrow overlapped
03:35:681 (5) - move upwards a bit to make a better flow

[Normal]
00:41:027 (2,4) - make better blanket
00:58:255 (3,4) - ^
02:32:117 (1,2) - ^
02:46:077 (4,1) - ^
02:47:859 (4,5) - ^
03:31:226 (4,3) - ^

[Easy]
Fine.

Good map and hardly find any obvious problems. Good luck~

thanks!

hi

General
- Not sure if it matters, but there's a space after "ALcot " in Normal's tags xD Just delete it in case

Easy
00:23:800 (1) - Delete finish on head, i used 00:13:701 (3) - and 00:19:047 (3) - as reference
01:05:978 (4) - Clap
01:24:691 (1) - Clap on head for hitsound consistency?
nice

Normal
00:53:206 (5) - Clap
01:06:572 (2) - Clap on tail
01:25:582 (1,2) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/784899 The head of (3) starts on the vocal so makes sense if (2) does the same thing imo
02:57:364 (3) - clap on head

Hard
00:38:651 (2,3) - Any reason why this is kinda far compared to other similar rhythms? I'd bring them closer http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/784915 or something
01:48:750 (5) - Move this up to be safe, this note is touching the bottom edge during play! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/784920
02:05:978 (5) - NC, similar to 02:15:483 (1) -
02:33:230 (8) - Delete note. this is the only triple stack I saw which makes it kinda random. You can save these for the Insane anyway
01:24:988 (2,3) - make a single slider like 02:57:661 (2) - and 03:16:671 (6) - for some pattern consistency =v=

Insane
00:59:443 (1) - Finish on head
01:09:542 (3) - NC, the spacing between 01:09:245 (2,3,4) - to too similar
02:20:235 (4) - try a 1/4 slider starting from here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/784941 (or just add a note?) If you slow down the music, you can hear the extra beat it has
02:42:216 (3) - NC

Neat map!
feel free to call me back after 1 or 2 more mods!

thanks!!!

all fixed ^-^

Hello. M4M~

hitsoundが曲と違っているように感じた箇所が多かったので、ちょっと長いです、すみません。
osu!において必ずしも曲とhitsoundを一致させる必要はないのかとも思って、modに含めるかどうか迷ったのですが……。

[General]

1. soft-hitwhistle2の音が"ド"の音で、そのhitsoundが使われている場所の曲の音は"シ"の音なので、ちょっとぶつかって聞こえます……すごく個人的な感覚ですが。
   ピッチ変更して音を合わせたのを作ってみたので、もし問題なければ使ってみてください。
   http://puu.sh/357mp.wav

[Easy]

1. 03:36:275 (3) - add NC?
2. 02:13:998 (2) - (206,257)に移動して02:13:107 (1) - と対象に

Hitsound

1. 1. 00:09:542 (1) - 終点にClap
   2. 00:10:433 (2) - whistleをremoveしてadd clap
2. 00:28:552 (1) - 終点にClap
3. 01:10:285 (3) - 終点にClap
4. 01:12:513 (3) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd finish（01:22:018 - のことを考えて）
5. 01:26:770 (3) - 終点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
6. 01:33:602 (2) - whistleをremoveしてadd clap
7. 03:21:424 (3) - 始点にclap

[Normal]

1. 1. 01:04:493 (3) - add NC
   2. 01:05:681 (1) - remove NC
   3. 01:06:572 (2) - add NC
2. 02:49:344 (6,1) - ちょっとした配置の提案です。
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:10:730 (2) - 面白い配置だとは思うのですが、Normalであることを考えると1度折り返させて03:11:325 - を埋めた方が無難だと思います。

Hitsound

1. 01:28:849 (2) - add Whistle?
2. 01:51:424 (3) - 終点にClap
3. 03:20:829 (1) - 03:21:424 - にClap
4. 03:41:622 (2) - 始点にClap

[Hard]

1. 00:27:810 (2) - ここだけ00:27:364 (1) - との距離が近すぎるような気がしたので、もう少し距離を取っても良いと思いました。
2. 00:52:909 (1) - (327,183)辺りに移動した方が正三角形に近くなって綺麗かなと。
3. 01:43:404 (1,2,3) - spacingがここだけ急に広くなったように感じたので、狭くするか、01:44:146 (2) - をremove？

Hitsound

1. 00:10:136 (3) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd finish
2. 00:49:641 (5) - 始点にclap
3. 01:03:899 (4) - 01:03:899 - と01:04:196 - にfinish
4. 01:05:978 (2) - "なし-whistle-なし"よりも"clap-clap-whistle"の方が曲に近い気がします。
5. 1. 01:06:572 (1) - 01:07:166 - のwhistleをclapにして、
   2. 01:07:315 (2) - にadd whistle
6. 01:10:730 (1) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
7. 01:24:988 (2) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
8. 01:51:424 (7) - "whistle-なし-whistle"よりも"clap-whistle-clap"の方が？
9. 02:39:839 (3) - add clap
10. 02:43:404 (1) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
11. 03:21:424 (5) - add clap
12. 03:22:612 (2) - 始点にclap

[Insane]

1. 00:08:354 (3) - add NC. ずっと2拍単位でNCなので。
2. 01:10:730 (1) - 01:11:176 - も埋めてあった方が、ボーカルに忠実で自分は好きです。
   もう一度折り返すか、02:43:404 (1,2) - を意識してこういうのはどうでしょうか。
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:42:364 (6,7) - (420,168)に移動して正三角形に？

Hitsound

1. 1. 00:49:344 (4) - 始点にclap
   2. 00:49:641 (5) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
2. 01:05:978 (4) - 終点にclap
3. 01:10:730 (1) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
4. 01:24:988 (2) - 始点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap
5. 01:28:552 (3) - 始点にclap
6. 02:43:404 (1) - 始点にclap
7. 03:20:829 (1) - 終点にclap
8. 03:22:018 (1) - 終点のwhistleをremoveしてadd clap

以上です、マップ自体は凄く好きでした
Good luck for rank~

ありがとうございます
配置は変更しませんでしたが、音付はちょいちょい参考にさせてもらいました

Insane
00:35:681 (1,2) - 00:35:681からのボーカルの声が00:35:978まで伸びてるから (1)を1/1 sldier そしてそのあとにnoteにしてみては？

00:42:958 (2) - これ消して一回貯めてみるとか？

01:13:404 (5) - ちょっと叩きづらく感じたので　01:13:998 (2) - これコピーして貼り付け？

02:46:968 (4,5) - ボーカル伸びてるからsliderに？


that's all!!!!!

00:42:958 (2) - これ消して一回貯めてみるとか？

いい提案

sry for delay
no kds

Normal
00:53:354 (6) - Delete clap on end, put it on the next note
01:25:582 (1) - ^ , put on head of next note
01:26:770 (3) - Clap on tail instead of whistle?

Hard
00:13:404 (4,5) - Consider moving these closer, the spacing is really similar to (3,4)
01:44:889 (4) - NC, like 01:35:384 (1) -
02:39:839 (3) - Clap

Insane
00:08:948 (4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds too loud, lower volume (or you could make a crescendo with green lines)
02:39:839 (3) - Clap on head instead of whistle
02:58:849 (3) - ^

LunarSakuya wrote:

sry for delay
no kds

Normal
00:53:354 (6) - Delete clap on end, put it on the next note
01:25:582 (1) - ^ , put on head of next note
01:26:770 (3) - Clap on tail instead of whistle?

Hard
00:13:404 (4,5) - Consider moving these closer, the spacing is really similar to (3,4) fixed!! but i keep little jump
01:44:889 (4) - NC, like 01:35:384 (1) -
02:39:839 (3) - Clap

Insane
00:08:948 (4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds too loud, lower volume (or you could make a crescendo with green lines)
02:39:839 (3) - Clap on head instead of whistle
02:58:849 (3) - ^

all fixed~
thanks ><

good good

yeey

Hi ~ Laurier ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions





Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~

all fixed!!!
thanks Rika-chan >w<

:O nice mapset & song. I love it

yey
thanks!!!

Congrats <3

Yeeeaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulation Laurier!