[General]
- The first kiai from 00:13:459 feels kind of off. The music isn't that strong to warrant kiai there IMO.
[Easy]
- With that amount of 1/2 sliders. This difficulty feels more like a Normal.
- 00:03:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Pretty confusing for an Easy. I suggest you change them to sliders like the previous combo.
- 00:20:126 (1,2,3) - Blanketing here isn't perfect.
- 00:30:126 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern as is looks not that good aesthetically. I also would recommend changing those 3/4 repeat sliders into 3/2 sliders instead like those in 00:33:459 (1).
- 00:37:834 () - You're missing a hitobject here. Your previous combos had a slider from the red tick to the white tick.
I highly suggest you keep that consistency as this is an Easy diff. Add a slider from here to the next white tick. Don't forget to remove the note on the white tick.
- 00:39:501 () -
Same as above.- 00:43:459 (1) - Blanket this properly with the previous slider.
- 00:46:792 (1,2,3,4) -
Current patterns looks not that good. I suggest changing it to
this.
- 00:50:959 (2,4) - Not too sure about the overlap of these two sliders. They look not so good IMO.
- 00:54:084 (2) - The polarity here is off. I suggest you move this 1/2 back then extend by 1/2. Like
this.
[Normal]
- Patterns here don't look that aesthetically good. They look really rushed ;_;
- 00:00:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) -
I find it awkward that the less complex pattern (sliders) are after the more complex ones. I recommend switching the order of the patterns - make sliders start first.
- 00:03:042 (6,7) - If you don't change your pattern above, then consider this mod:
The stack here plays very awkwardly since the previous combo used a slider (00:01:376 (3)) in the part similar to this. Change pattern to slider.
- 00:15:126 (3) - Align the center of this such that the previous slider points to it. Looks better IMO. Like
this- 00:21:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern really looks ugly IMO. Consider using
this pattern instead.
Code here- 00:33:459 (1) - Move this below a bit for better flow. Like
this.
- 00:39:709 (4,1,2) - Change pattern to something like
this? Looks better IMO.
- 00:46:792 (1,2,3,4) - The (4) is placed really oddly. Place it like
thisso it will be consistent with (1,2,3).
- 00:51:792 (2,3,1) - Can you curve (1) properly? Like
this.
- 01:02:209 (2,3) -
Please don't curve really short sliders like this. They look very compressed and ugly IMO.
- 01:24:501 (4,5) -
Too repetitive. You already used the same slider at 01:23:876 (3). I suggest something like
this.
- 01:25:751 (1,2) - I recommend using
this pattern.
[Hard]
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Use Tick Rate 2. So that the speedups and slowdown will be read more easily.
- 00:13:875 (2,3,4) - The stack here looks really ugly... Please rework it. I suggest something like
this- 00:52:625 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
http://puu.sh/2Uvp5.jpg- 01:09:500 (4,1) - Bad looking overlap.
[Insane]
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What's with the VERY INCONSISTENT 1/4 spacing? The compressed streams and streams are fine. The patternmapping is fair enough, but notes like 00:58:459 (1,2) - ; 01:00:438 (2,3) - ; 01:02:209 (2,3)- ; 01:05:855 (5,6); 01:07:209 (2,3,4) - ; all in the same chorus really should be consistent.
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Use Tick Rate 2. So that the speedups and slowdown will be read more easily.
- 00:10:959 (6,7,1) -
Incorrect snapping. This should be in 1/6. - 00:20:542 (4) - Center this on the slider end? Like
this? It's offcenter at the moment.
- 00:46:271 (4) -
Please don't curve really short sliders like this. They look very compressed and ugly IMO.
- 00:56:688 (11,1,2) -
Really surprising jump. Even the music is not enough to justify such a large 1/4 spacing coming from a compressed stream. At the very least make the slider touch the previous note.
I'm a bit pressed for time right now, so I won't mod the Taiko diffs as in-depth, but the standard diff mods still stand.
[Yia's Taiko Oni]
- 00:09:292 (33,34,35,36,37) - dk kd k fits better, and the dk kd plays better.
- 00:10:959 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) -
Incorrect snapping. This should be in 1/6. [zx's Taiko Oni]
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This diff feels very overmapped. The finishes added here don't quite fit with the song.- 00:10:646 () - Add d here. You can hear the music here.
- 00:10:959 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49) -
Incorrect snapping. This should be in 1/6. - 00:23:667 (116) - d? The D doesn't fit the music at all.
- 00:27:521 (136) - Why use D here? The big note doesn't fit IMO.
- 00:29:084 (142,143) - The finishes don't match at all. Remove them.
Please get a couple more Taiko mods as well.
Popped for incorrect snapping in Insane, and Taikop Onis