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T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses (TV Size)

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aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月5日 at 21:49:16

Artist: T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana
Title: Preserved Roses (TV Size)
Source: kakumeiki valvrave
BPM: 167
Filesize: 14779kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.32 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard (4.9 stars, 272 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 442 notes)
  4. Normal (3.74 stars, 134 notes)
Download: T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses (TV Size)
Download: T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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T.M.Revolution×水樹奈々☆これぞ神と神のコラボレーション！！
Last edited by aesopl19193 , edited 12 times in total.
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
hi, From my modding queue
Easyl
00:59:160 (3) - New combo (NC)
01:19:280 (1) - Add finish
00:14:609 (1) - Spin ends in 00:14:609 (1) -
00:47:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe Don't I think they are bored. Change last 2 circke into sliders
Normal
00:04:190 (2) - Change into 1 slider. the end in 00:04:369 -
01:04:549 (5) - Clap into finish
01:14:789 (3) - Can you change in to 1 slider has repeat
01:21:435 (1) - New combo into 01:22:154 (2) -
Hard
01:09:938 (4,5,6) - Make a stream between 2 circle together
00:59:160 (3) - NC
01:04:369 (7,8) - Make a slier has many repeat. It will be more interesting

Nice map, so I mod too afew :D
Good ranked~
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
[General]
bg用jpg格式的比较省空间http://puu.sh/2Aytj
没有tags?
00:21:795 - 在这里放个kiai喷泉比较好

[Easy]
00:13:531 - 可以加个circle
00:44:789 (1,2,3,4) - 这排列太简单粗暴了吧...
01:26:465 - 我觉得这里再开始spinner比较好 前面完全可以做点别的

[Normal]
00:57:004 (3,1) - 这个spacing对于新人来说不太好控制 slider比较好哦
别的没什么了 还有就是combo有点混乱 尽量控制在3-5比较好

[Hard]
00:28:980 (6,7,8) - 不美观的spacing
01:04:369 (7,8) - 都加clap
01:10:118 (5,6,7,8) - 节奏上应该是 把(7)移到(5)和(6)的中间
01:15:687 (4,5) - (4)的尾和(6)加clap

[Insane]
00:11:016 (10) - 折返加clap
00:33:112 - 我觉得应该加个note
combo还是控制在一个范围内比较好 像最后就挺乱的

加油吧
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Loki-san wrote:

hi, From my modding queue
Easyl
00:59:160 (3) - New combo (NC)
-No, combo start with vocal
01:19:280 (1) - Add finish
-Fixed
00:14:609 (1) - Spin ends in 00:14:609 (1) -
- ...?
00:47:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe Don't I think they are bored. Change last 2 circke into sliders
- Considering changes here
Normal
00:04:190 (2) - Change into 1 slider. the end in 00:04:369 -
- Fixed
01:04:549 (5) - Clap into finish
- Fixed
01:14:789 (3) - Can you change in to 1 slider has repeat
- Cant
01:21:435 (1) - New combo into 01:22:154 (2) -
- No, New combo following vocal
Hard
01:09:938 (4,5,6) - Make a stream between 2 circle together
- Fixed
00:59:160 (3) - NC
- Fixed
01:04:369 (7,8) - Make a slier has many repeat. It will be more interesting
- Fixed

Nice map, so I mod too afew :D
Good ranked~
Thanks :D
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
bg用jpg格式的比较省空间http://puu.sh/2Aytj
没有tags?
00:21:795 - 在这里放个kiai喷泉比较好

[Easy]
00:13:531 - 可以加个circle
- 加了
00:44:789 (1,2,3,4) - 这排列太简单粗暴了吧...
- 在想如果改..
01:26:465 - 我觉得这里再开始spinner比较好 前面完全可以做点别的
- 改了

[Normal]
00:57:004 (3,1) - 这个spacing对于新人来说不太好控制 slider比较好哦
别的没什么了 还有就是combo有点混乱 尽量控制在3-5比较好
- 改了

[Hard]
00:28:980 (6,7,8) - 不美观的spacing
- 我spacing真的很差T_T
01:04:369 (7,8) - 都加clap
- 加了
01:10:118 (5,6,7,8) - 节奏上应该是 把(7)移到(5)和(6)的中间
- 改了
01:15:687 (4,5) - (4)的尾和(6)加clap
- 加了

[Insane]
00:11:016 (10) - 折返加clap
- 加了
00:33:112 - 我觉得应该加个note
- 加了
combo还是控制在一个范围内比较好 像最后就挺乱的
- 其實我還是不太明白...
加油吧
感謝! :)
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Kuria
revive this and make it rank pls Q_____Q
aaaaaaaaaaaaa
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Kuria wrote:

revive this and make it rank pls Q_____Q
aaaaaaaaaaaaa
Q_Q
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Just did alittle modding! :) Here's some suggestions!

Easy mode:
Try removing the hit circle at 00:17:483, and instead stretch the previous spinner to this point. It sounds better with the long note Mizuki Nana sang there.

Normal mode:
Decrease the Approach rate by 1?

Hard mode:
I know this sounds picky, but maybe try to bring that hit circle at 00:15:866 lower a bit, so it helps finish that zig-zag formation forming from point 00:15:327.

The slider at 00:48:022 sounds weird. You should try breaking it down into smaller objects and hit circles.

into this:
This sounds more in-tune
Also, move the hit circle at 00:49:100 to 00:48:920 instead.
Your objects may appear like this:

Please, do that at 00:50:896 and 00:53:771 too if you can.

Remove hit circle at 00:53:052.

Hope this helps~! :D
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Just did alittle modding! :) Here's some suggestions!

Easy mode:
Try removing the hit circle at 00:17:483, and instead stretch the previous spinner to this point. It sounds better with the long note Mizuki Nana sang there.

Normal mode:
Decrease the Approach rate by 1?

Hard mode:
I know this sounds picky, but maybe try to bring that hit circle at 00:15:866 lower a bit, so it helps finish that zig-zag formation forming from point 00:15:327.

The slider at 00:48:022 sounds weird. You should try breaking it down into smaller objects and hit circles.

into this:
This sounds more in-tune
Also, move the hit circle at 00:49:100 to 00:48:920 instead.
Your objects may appear like this:

Please, do that at 00:50:896 and 00:53:771 too if you can.

Remove hit circle at 00:53:052.

Hope this helps~! :D
Reaaaaaally thanks for your mod :(
I got your point, you found parts which is feeling odd. :D
I changed the part that you have mentioned in my style, and increased the difficulty in Hard to suit the changes.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,526 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Suggestions and opinions

Hard

00:18:202 (6) - slider ends at 00:18:471
00:46:765 (4,5) - swap positions? slider before circle
00:49:818 (5) - shorten slider to 00:49:998 and repeat till 00:50:178

Insane

00:03:022 - add a note
00:22:783 (6) - shift to 00:22:423
00:28:621 (6) - shorten to end at 00:28:800
00:29:789 (4) - shift to 00:29:878
00:30:956 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - I don't really see how this rhythm came about from the song, the song doesn't song complicated here to have such a rhythm. circle-slider-circle-circle-slider-circle pattern doesnt suit the song.
00:34:908 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ if not add a note at 00:35:268
00:36:345 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:33:651 (4) - shorten to 00:33:830 add a note at 00:34:010
00:54:848 (1) - repeat slider, repeat at 00:55:028 end 00:55:208
01:19:908 (4,5) - swap positions circle before slider
01:22:423 (3,4) - ^
01:23:142 (7,8) - ^
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod

[General]
In the source, put the K and the V in capital
In "Artist", put "Mizuki Nana" in japanese (水樹 奈々) and in "Title", put "Preserved Roses" in japanese (プリザーブドのバラ)
In the tags, put anime opening TV show. I don't know

[Easy]
00:23:232 (2) - Why don't you copy 00:795 (1) and flip? If so, 00:24:669 (1) - make something like that.
SPOILER

[Normal]
CS+2?
00:39:759 (3) - Try to align this to 00:39:040 (1)

[Hard]
00:13:172 (6) - Curve it in the other way?

[Insane]
00:12:633 (4) - prev: 0.53x like 00:12:094 (2)

Sorry if it isn't enough. Good Luck and star!
le oni
12 posts
Joined June 2012
le oni
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmap_Approval
For Ranked this beatmaps
they say you must have 12 star .. and 1 kudosu = 1 star ..

and conditions
a MAT or BAT can bubble it if they feel it meets two conditions:
1. The beatmap meets the Ranking Criteria. Basically, this must mean that the map has the correct timing, has at least 2 difficulties (one of which is an Easy or a Normal), and is overall both mapped to the music and playable.

2. The beatmap meets overall quality standards that aren't part of the Ranking Criteria. For example, if a slider isn't very pretty, then a MAT or BAT would likely request for it to be made prettier before bubbling it.

i just wanted this beatmaps get ranked
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

le oni wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmap_Approval
For Ranked this beatmaps
they say you must have 12 star .. and 1 kudosu = 1 star ..

and conditions
a MAT or BAT can bubble it if they feel it meets two conditions:
1. The beatmap meets the Ranking Criteria. Basically, this must mean that the map has the correct timing, has at least 2 difficulties (one of which is an Easy or a Normal), and is overall both mapped to the music and playable.

2. The beatmap meets overall quality standards that aren't part of the Ranking Criteria. For example, if a slider isn't very pretty, then a MAT or BAT would likely request for it to be made prettier before bubbling it.

i just wanted this beatmaps get ranked
Its hard to get mods and star, and I am busy with school works atm :(
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