Kodora wrote:

dat sb is awesome

Kodora wrote:

dat sb is awesome

1. The file sb\pl_28_detail_1.png seems to be unused, remove it from the folder.
2. The file sb\2012-05-22-07-59-21-mouse-cursor-icon-180x180.png seems to be a codeless SB element, do something to fix it.

1. 01:27:960 (3,1) - Try to avoid this overlap is possible, it might be confusing for beginners to read and play.

1. 00:14:304 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
2. 00:24:235 (3,4,5) - Why such random jump here? I think they would look better if spaced normally.
3. 00:32:098 (7) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern and due to the new stanza and music change.
4. 00:41:615 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
5. 00:58:167 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern and due to the new stanza and music change.
6. 01:12:649 (7,1) - New combo should go on (7) and not on (1), because the new section actually begins there.
7. 01:22:994 (1) - I'm pretty sure you forgot to add your custom hitsound at the end of this slider.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The file sb\pl_28_detail_1.png seems to be unused, remove it from the folder. removed
2. The file sb\2012-05-22-07-59-21-mouse-cursor-icon-180x180.png seems to be a codeless SB element, do something to fix it. It has code! Needs some SB-modding, tho

~Easy~

1. 01:27:960 (3,1) - Try to avoid this overlap is possible, it might be confusing for beginners to read and play. It's perfectly readable and slider appears in time. So I guess wee can let this overlap to be.

~Hard~

1. 00:14:304 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. ~
2. 00:24:235 (3,4,5) - Why such random jump here? I think they would look better if spaced normally. ~
3. 00:32:098 (7) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern and due to the new stanza and music change. ~
4. 00:41:615 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. It makes pattern look better and also it is here to point out end of the kiai!
5. 00:58:167 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern and due to the new stanza and music change. ~
6. 01:12:649 (7,1) - New combo should go on (7) and not on (1), because the new section actually begins there. ~
7. 01:22:994 (1) - I'm pretty sure you forgot to add your custom hitsound at the end of this slider. OH GOD YES ;_;

I'll mod Normal once it's finished.

Kodora wrote:

dat sb is awesome

1. Add some hitsounds at KIA ? it really feels empty while you play

1. 00:01:891 (4) - A whistle at the begin sounds good to me, i think that its quiet over there
2. 00:11:822 (3) - Add whistle at the begin to keep the consistency at hitsound
3. 01:32:511 (5) - Make this note and 01:32:925 (1) this note too a reflect from 01:31:684 (3,4) i think it looks better, imo looks like if you random placed those notes
4. 01:40:373 (4) - Place this slider at x:364 y:260 so 01:38:304 (3) will make a blanket for the slider

1. 00:11:822 (5) - Add a whistle to keep the consistency at hitsounds
2. 00:20:098 (1) - to 00:39:546 (6) i think its sounds too quiet, whistle fits well as a clap in that part its just an opinion
3. 00:50:098 (2) - I think this note shouldn't be there since there is no vocals or instrumental to follow, so i recomend you to put it here 00:50:511 (x) it really sounds better

1. 00:11:822 (6) - Add a whistle at the begin to keep the consistency at hitsounds
2. 00:18:442 (5) - Same as above
3. 01:22:994 (1) - Add a whistle/finish at the begin, i think it needs something its quite empty
4. 01:29:408 (x) - I think that a note there may sound good according to the instrumental, try it

Gero wrote:

Hi ♥ Here my mod huehuehuehue \:3/

[General]

(*)SB: 00:48:442 - in this part of the map shows this line , and playing looks a little bad Might fix this please :3 that black things appears for a second and I've tested this part like 3 times and I can't see anything. I'm pretty sure that this thing is invisble during test
(*)00:36:236 (3,1) - on easy difficulty, the color combo looks a little bad check green colors that look very similar, try swap colors Position for this does not happen: 2nd and 4th colours are green ones. 1st and 3rd are blue. It fixes the problem

SPOILER

Try this combo colors:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 207,245,160
Combo2 : 166,214,122
Combo3 : 155,232,251
Combo4 : 94,168,251

[Easy]
(*)00:36:236 (3) - Nazi* Move this circle to X:255 Y: 21 and move this slider 00:36:649 (1) To X:178 Y: 80 to make a nice triangle :3 heeey! current pattern isn't that bad :< It looks cute too! And triangle here is totally ok, imo D:
[/spoilerbox]


[Normal]

(*)01:20:098 (1) - CTRL + H This slider is not symmetrical, is that you can make it perfect Gabe, it's up to you!


[Hard]

(*)00:12:442 (8,9) - Bakari :c this slider is ugly please make it prettier :c something like this: no it isn't ugly at all! :<
Woow is a good map :3 this is all Good luck ♥
I hope you serve my mod

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
аимод говорит у тебя конфликт в леттербоксах и лид-инах а он есть? по осу файлам все норм D:

Easy:
00:10:167 (1) - двинем его подальше от 1, лучше же http://puu.sh/2UzJZ.jpg ~
00:32:098 (4,1) - бланкет где http://puu.sh/2UzLa.jpg ~
00:51:546 (3) - давай его в другую сторону http://puu.sh/2UzND.jpg как-то не течет, мне кажется. После предыдущего слайдера, там надо именно что-то такое ;_;/
01:01:477 (2,3,4) - флоу? http://puu.sh/2UzOI.jpg oh you, I'll change this to something like "creative-flow-pattern"

Normal:
00:17:201 (2,3,4) - уверен что такой ломаный флоу сойдет? там же две дуги, просто искаженные
00:38:718 (5,6) - я бы сделал что-нибудь такое http://puu.sh/2UzUy.jpg чтоб не забивать все в угол ♥

Hard:
00:37:891 (5,6) - этот джамп не очнь, в музыке ничего же нет uguuu
01:34:373 (4,1) - фикс бланкет da
01:34:580 (1,2) - может как-то симметрично относительно y расположить? они симметричны D:

фикс зис анд колл ме фор речек \w/ /jk

1. Why you no continue your pineapple sb effect until the last spinner? ><
2. I think it will be nice if you fade out the sb\night completely at 00:49:477 - or around it.

1. 00:23:408 (1) - How about adding a whistle here at the slider start? The music is right on transition here, so i think it's a nice idea to put a whistle.
2. 00:30:029 (1) - ^
3. 00:33:339 (1) - And you forget a whistle here at the silder start ><
4. 00:36:649 (1) - ^
5. Why u no continue your whistle at 2nd kiai? :<
6. 01:29:615 (1) - Err, please don't overlap slider like this on easy. It can confuse some beginner :<

1. 00:39:960 (1) - A whistle on this spinner sounds good to hear imo.
2. 00:50:098 (2) - This note is kinda overmapped. I suggest to delete it. I can't hear any vocal, notes, beat that support this circle. :<
3. 01:25:477 (3,4,1) - I think you forgot to put a whistle pattern here that following vocal like you did on 01:12:649 (1,2) - and 01:18:856 (3) -
4. 01:42:649 (5) - Please don't break your vocal consistencies here. It sound's weird. So i suggest to delete this circle. :<

1. 00:34:994 (5) - I think you forgot to put a whistle on this slider start.
2. 00:39:960 (1) - Same, here too.
3. Same as easy, why u no continue your whistle at 2nd kiai? Feels missing something :<
4. 01:39:132 (4) - Woops, you also miss a whistle with drum sampleset at this slider repeat.

Miya wrote:

General

1. Why you no continue your pineapple sb effect until the last spinner? >< Uh.. because kiai ends and that pineapple thing is for kiai only >3<
2. I think it will be nice if you fade out the sb\night completely at 00:49:477 - or around it.uguu

Easy

• 
  Applied every hitsounding suggestion.

1. 01:29:615 (1) - Err, please don't overlap slider like this on easy. It can confuse some beginner :< Oh, c'mon! It's perfectly readable and ooks pretty cute. there's no way people can't read it!

Normal

• 
  Applied everything for my part.

1. 01:25:477 (3,4,1) - I think you forgot to put a whistle pattern here that following vocal like you did on 01:12:649 (1,2) - and 01:18:856 (3) - not sure if it fits here good enough. I won't change it for now
2. 01:42:649 (5) - Please don't break your vocal consistencies here. It sound's weird. So i suggest to delete this circle. :< isn't it following "you" in vocals?

Hard

• 
  Simply copied hitsounds from [Easy] diff. So it's kinda fixed. :3

Wow, very nice, neat, clean, and simple mapset. I like it <3
Star ~

1. Fixed some rhythm, and mostly just hitsound mod.

Elly-chan wrote:

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