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Archie - Christmas In Equestria (Avicii Style)

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Mercusheigan
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Joined December 2012
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Mercusheigan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 9 de agosto de 2015 at 20:14:39

Artist: Archie
Title: Christmas In Equestria (Avicii Style)
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4003kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3,22 stars, 476 notes)
  2. Insane (4,54 stars, 559 notes)
Download: Archie - Christmas In Equestria (Avicii Style)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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lets see what happens afterall

Insane - 100% (hitsounds and modding would be nice)
Hard - 100% (same as above)


04/15 - fixed bpm thx Vee-tyan
04/16 - thanks to - estelle - and xformi for giving me some modding (<3)
04/22 - fixed a awkward glitch in the sliders velocity - nvm still working on it wtf
05/16 - fixed the glitch, thanks a lot to xformi!
05/16 - thanks to xformi for modding!
06/01 - thanks to lythryn for modding the easy diff
06/13 - thanks to TheVileOne for modding (still need to change most of his feedback)
06/22 - finished TVO's modding
07/03 - Started Hard diff, plus some changes on insane
08/10 - changes on insane, started mapping normal as well
08/12 - normal done (i guess 1:30 should be fine for a normal)
08/19 - finished sheela901 modding
08/26 - finished Apex modding
10/27 - thinking about mapping easy again... and mapping other stuff slowly as always
07/06/2014 - almost done with hard
01/21/2015 !!! - some changes on insane

-Insane and hard are pretty much done. (just need some feedback on normal cuz you know...awful patterns and stuff)
Now doing:
-minor improvements/mapping (after a year hard is almost done!! hype!)
Last edited by Mercusheigan , edited 127 times in total.
veeowo
51 posts
Joined May 2011
veeowo
BPM: 128
Offset: 234
And use
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
You should fix the timing before I mod this.
formi
88 posts
Joined November 2012
formi 
2013-05-17 15:45 xformi: hey Heigan!
2013-05-17 15:45 Mercusheigan: heyo
2013-05-17 15:45 xformi: was our action worth a mod? so i could give u a star?
2013-05-17 15:46 Mercusheigan:  i think so
2013-05-17 15:46 Mercusheigan: but kudosus can only be given by forum posts i think
2013-05-17 15:46 xformi: shall i post it?
2013-05-17 15:47 Mercusheigan: it would be awesome!

So here we go:
SPOILER
2013-05-16 09:41 xformi: heyho Heigan
2013-05-16 09:41 xformi: i just tried to fix ur beatmap
2013-05-16 09:41 xformi: all u have to do is to delete the 1st timing point
2013-05-16 09:41 xformi: with the bpm x2
2013-05-16 09:41 xformi: cuz there is not bpm set before
2013-05-16 09:42 Mercusheigan: oh my
2013-05-16 09:43 xformi: ^^
2013-05-16 09:43 Mercusheigan: S2 u
2013-05-16 09:43 xformi: S2 ?
2013-05-16 09:43 Mercusheigan: <3 w/e
2013-05-16 09:43 xformi: :D
2013-05-16 09:43 xformi: okay
2013-05-16 09:44 xformi: shall i try to mod it?
2013-05-16 09:44 Mercusheigan: not yet
2013-05-16 09:44 xformi: k
2013-05-16 09:44 xformi: just noticed that the 3rd note needs to be one snap later
2013-05-16 09:45 Mercusheigan: well noticed LOL
2013-05-16 09:48 Mercusheigan: some parts are different from what i remember
2013-05-16 09:50 Mercusheigan: cuz i did so many things trying to backup it
2013-05-16 09:58 Mercusheigan: k updated
2013-05-16 10:10 xformi: 00:10:495 to 00:11:423 feels strange - maybe add some notes or a slider like u did around 00:06:777 ?
2013-05-16 10:11 Mercusheigan: maybe a 1 tap slider?
2013-05-16 10:11 xformi: y
2013-05-16 10:12 xformi: or a triple
2013-05-16 10:12 xformi: but i pers. dont like triples that so... :D
2013-05-16 10:12 Mercusheigan: i dont like it either
2013-05-16 10:13 xformi: 00:14:283 same
2013-05-16 10:14 xformi: 00:16:160 add a note or slider end here?
2013-05-16 10:15 xformi: 00:29:671 i would only go with the first 3notes of this stream
2013-05-16 10:15 xformi: and remove the 4th
2013-05-16 10:15 xformi: especially moving the 6th note to a different place
2013-05-16 10:16 Mercusheigan: ok but i feel like it has 4 notes
2013-05-16 10:17 xformi: maybe add an additional note on 00:30:001, but i rly dont feel the 4th :D
2013-05-16 10:18 xformi: the jump part starting ~00:34:067 is off
2013-05-16 10:18 xformi: the one at 00:37:731 is fine
2013-05-16 10:18 Mercusheigan: what do you mean? i should move it closer?
2013-05-16 10:18 xformi: it s not timed well
2013-05-16 10:18 Mercusheigan: oh
2013-05-16 10:20 Mercusheigan: what do u think i should do?
2013-05-16 10:20 xformi: i would juste move em so they fit
2013-05-16 10:20 Mercusheigan: hm i see now
2013-05-16 10:21 Mercusheigan: i'll reduce the reverse before the jump part
2013-05-16 10:21 xformi: 00:38:893 same, i would move the first note and add a slider for the 2nd one cuz there is an additional beat
2013-05-16 10:22 xformi: 00:39:597 again is fine
2013-05-16 10:22 xformi: 00:41:927 maybe end this slider one snap earlier?
2013-05-16 10:23 xformi: and if u want the same thing with the next one, but i am not sure how those sliders are supposed to end :D
2013-05-16 10:24 Mercusheigan: i speeded up  the slider at 41s and added an additional note betwhen the next slider
2013-05-16 10:25 xformi: sounds good
2013-05-16 10:25 Mercusheigan: i feel like i should change the bigger slider
2013-05-16 10:25 xformi: about the following streams, i would remove the first 2 of em, and add some notes or sliders instead, and start with the 3rd stream at 00:47:563
2013-05-16 10:26 xformi: with a harder getting pattern with the stream and the following kiai time as an highlight ^_^
2013-05-16 10:28 xformi: 00:49:032 this slider starts one snap too early
2013-05-16 10:28 Mercusheigan: and what should i put betwhen the 2nd and 3rd stream?
2013-05-16 10:28 xformi: dunno, something cool :P
2013-05-16 10:29 Mercusheigan: :P i'll think about it 
2013-05-16 10:29 xformi: ^_^
2013-05-16 10:29 xformi: 00:50:398 4th note here?
2013-05-16 10:30 xformi: the whole part feels a bit off
2013-05-16 10:30 Mercusheigan: i reduced the length of the slider #5
2013-05-16 10:30 xformi: including this note 00:51:749
2013-05-16 10:30 xformi: the following notes are fine
2013-05-16 10:32 xformi: looks like the note at 01:04:019 is a tick too late
2013-05-16 10:33 Mercusheigan: true, fixed
2013-05-16 10:33 xformi: yea this part isnt snaped correctly
2013-05-16 10:33 xformi: the 1st slider is
2013-05-16 10:34 Mercusheigan: give me a minute, brb
2013-05-16 10:34 xformi: 01:08:221 this slider too
2013-05-16 10:35 xformi: maybe make this 01:17:110 to something like a square pattern?
2013-05-16 10:36 xformi: the 7th note feels wrong, maybe a slider? 01:18:504
2013-05-16 10:36 xformi: or a short spinner? not sure about it :/
2013-05-16 10:37 xformi: 01:19:014 shall this be an end of the slider?
2013-05-16 10:37 xformi: cuz it sounds like the start of the next part
2013-05-16 10:37 xformi: 3rd note here? 01:19:473
2013-05-16 10:38 xformi: 01:19:473
2013-05-16 10:38 xformi: cmon work... 01:19:457
2013-05-16 10:38 xformi: doesnt want to link... this editor things make me crazy!
2013-05-16 10:39 xformi: and snap the 5th note to 01:20:379
2013-05-16 10:39 xformi: add something around here? 01:20:658
2013-05-16 10:40 xformi: 01:21:801 i would change this slider to start here, and make maybe make it faster
2013-05-16 10:40 xformi: maybe and additional slider next
2013-05-16 10:41 xformi: and the actual 2nd note, maybe as a new combo, here 01:22:717
2013-05-16 10:41 xformi: hmm maybe not a new combo, no need :D
2013-05-16 10:41 xformi: btw.. this song is long oO
2013-05-16 10:41 xformi: just 33%
2013-05-16 10:42 xformi: 01:22:720 would change the notes to sliders
2013-05-16 10:43 xformi: (removing the 3rd and moving the 4th / 5th to start earlier
2013-05-16 10:43 xformi: 01:24:616 resnap these notes
2013-05-16 10:44 xformi: 01:25:537 slider starts too early
2013-05-16 10:45 xformi: maybe the bpm is a very bit off around 01:26:503?
2013-05-16 10:45 xformi: and the following notes arent snapped correctly
2013-05-16 10:46 xformi: 01:28:363 is fine
2013-05-16 10:46 Mercusheigan: i'm not sure about this slider at 1:25
2013-05-16 10:46 xformi: 01:30:657 off?
2013-05-16 10:46 Mercusheigan: i think i should rework it
2013-05-16 10:47 xformi: hmm thats ur decision :PO
2013-05-16 10:47 xformi: :P
2013-05-16 10:48 Mercusheigan: and yeah this song is very long l0l
2013-05-16 10:48 xformi: i would start with this spinner later 01:32:034
2013-05-16 10:48 xformi: 37.7% \o/
2013-05-16 10:49 Mercusheigan: haha 
2013-05-16 10:49 xformi: thank goodness, a break :D
2013-05-16 10:50 xformi: ...
2013-05-16 10:50 xformi: a long break
2013-05-16 10:50 xformi: ...
2013-05-16 10:50 Mercusheigan: lol
2013-05-16 10:50 xformi: go and map it lol
2013-05-16 10:51 xformi: maybe just go from 02:19:347
2013-05-16 10:51 Mercusheigan: i'll map it 
2013-05-16 10:51 xformi: 02:33:197 as a break
2013-05-16 10:51 xformi: ^to
2013-05-16 10:52 xformi: it ll still be a 10sec+ break, around 50% of the song
2013-05-16 10:52 xformi: btw the slider part it fun to play :D
2013-05-16 10:52 Mercusheigan: tbh i didnt made this break to be a big break, i just jumped this part lol
2013-05-16 10:52 Mercusheigan: thx :B
2013-05-16 10:52 xformi: but u might want to remove this note 02:37:610
2013-05-16 10:53 xformi: lol, u lazy mother f***** :D
2013-05-16 10:53 xformi: map it, dont let us have less fun! :P
2013-05-16 10:53 Mercusheigan: :(
2013-05-16 10:54 Mercusheigan: resnaping a lot of sliders
2013-05-16 10:54 xformi: 02:40:064 2nd slider starts off?
2013-05-16 10:54 Mercusheigan: just fixed it
2013-05-16 10:54 xformi: 3rd too, okay go for it! :D
2013-05-16 10:55 Mercusheigan: but i'm not sure about the reverse
2013-05-16 10:55 xformi: and dont forget the 4th one (the big one) the following sliders are good
2013-05-16 10:55 Mercusheigan: should i put it more to the left or to the right?
2013-05-16 10:55 xformi: the reverse is nice, it just starts wrong
2013-05-16 10:55 xformi: 1 right
2013-05-16 10:56 Mercusheigan: oka
2013-05-16 10:56 xformi:  02:47:135 this note is wrong! -> 1 to the left
2013-05-16 10:57 Mercusheigan: true true
2013-05-16 10:57 xformi: same with this slider
2013-05-16 10:57 xformi: 02:49:066
2013-05-16 10:57 xformi: and i am not sure about the one before
2013-05-16 10:57 xformi: but it's not bad too play
2013-05-16 10:57 xformi: so i would stick with it
2013-05-16 10:59 xformi: pls remap from 02:49:566 to 02:50:749
2013-05-16 10:59 xformi: 02:51:364 -> one to the right
2013-05-16 10:59 xformi: same with the next one (the big slider)
2013-05-16 11:00 xformi: i would add something here 02:53:192
2013-05-16 11:00 xformi: and here 02:54:133
2013-05-16 11:00 xformi: and start with the 2nd slider around 02:55:096
2013-05-16 11:01 Mercusheigan: yes the red sliders were very close
2013-05-16 11:01 xformi: shouldnt 02:55:547 be the start of this repeating slider?
2013-05-16 11:01 xformi: (add a new one before)
2013-05-16 11:01 Mercusheigan: now it is
2013-05-16 11:01 Mercusheigan: and i reduced one return
2013-05-16 11:01 xformi: sounds good
2013-05-16 11:02 xformi: i would have done the same so, thats all i can say :D
2013-05-16 11:02 Mercusheigan: ^^
2013-05-16 11:02 xformi: and here we go again
2013-05-16 11:02 xformi: add something here 02:56:957
2013-05-16 11:02 xformi: and here 02:57:900
2013-05-16 11:02 xformi: 02:57:451 these 2 notes are off
2013-05-16 11:03 Mercusheigan: when you say me to put something
2013-05-16 11:03 Mercusheigan: i dont feel like it has a sound there so i'm not sure what to do
2013-05-16 11:03 xformi: 02:58:736 have u copied and pasted the part before? 
2013-05-16 11:03 xformi: cuz it's the same thing here again :D
2013-05-16 11:04 xformi: u could try to add a short (slow) slider
2013-05-16 11:04 Mercusheigan: i dont copy :P it's all because of my attempts to fix the timing :(
2013-05-16 11:04 xformi: so it ll be like go and stop and go and stop and next part :D
2013-05-16 11:04 xformi: okay^^
2013-05-16 11:05 Mercusheigan: seens good
2013-05-16 11:05 xformi: evil attempts!
2013-05-16 11:05 Mercusheigan: LOL
2013-05-16 11:05 Mercusheigan: 3:00:228 what about this reverse?
2013-05-16 11:06 Mercusheigan: i dont like how it is now
2013-05-16 11:06 xformi: just thought about it
2013-05-16 11:06 xformi: it think it's a bit lame
2013-05-16 11:07 Mercusheigan: yep
2013-05-16 11:07 Mercusheigan: and the 2 circles after it are off
2013-05-16 11:07 xformi: maybe a square jump pattern with the following notes?
2013-05-16 11:08 xformi: like a small tornado (who doesnt love these patterns :D )
2013-05-16 11:08 Mercusheigan: a small tornado?:o
2013-05-16 11:08 xformi: yea!
2013-05-16 11:08 Mercusheigan: i'm not sure how this pattern looks like
2013-05-16 11:09 xformi: something like this: http://puu.sh/2Uvom.jpg
2013-05-16 11:10 xformi: ^ op uber pro paint-skillz Kappa
2013-05-16 11:10 Mercusheigan: i'm jelly of your paint skillz
2013-05-16 11:10 xformi: lol :D
2013-05-16 11:11 Mercusheigan: i did something here that its something like it
2013-05-16 11:11 xformi: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48512
2013-05-16 11:11 xformi: this explains it better
2013-05-16 11:11 Mercusheigan: would you like me to update to you see it?
2013-05-16 11:12 xformi: no need, ll play it later
2013-05-16 11:12 Mercusheigan: oka
2013-05-16 11:12 Mercusheigan: lets move on then
2013-05-16 11:12 Mercusheigan: stream now starts at 3:02
2013-05-16 11:12 Mercusheigan: :103
2013-05-16 11:13 xformi: thats better
2013-05-16 11:14 xformi: hmm this stream... this stream it feels too fast
2013-05-16 11:14 xformi: but then again i think it just has to be :D
2013-05-16 11:14 xformi: i am not good with this, ll skip it :P
2013-05-16 11:14 Mercusheigan: ok lol
2013-05-16 11:15 xformi: 03:03:507 change this 3rd note to be a super slow slider
2013-05-16 11:15 xformi: that would be cool!
2013-05-16 11:15 Mercusheigan: woot
2013-05-16 11:15 xformi: and it would be a combo breaker cuz it wont be long
2013-05-16 11:15 xformi: wouldnt
2013-05-16 11:15 Mercusheigan: yes!!
2013-05-16 11:16 Mercusheigan: its perfect within the music
2013-05-16 11:16 Mercusheigan: i didnt taught about it
2013-05-16 11:16 xformi: see! cool!! :D
2013-05-16 11:16 xformi: 03:08:211 4th slider -> 1 to the right
2013-05-16 11:17 xformi: same with the following notes
2013-05-16 11:17 xformi: next combo is fine
2013-05-16 11:18 xformi: u may want to change some sliders to look like... epic paint skillz incoming!
2013-05-16 11:19 Mercusheigan: LOL
2013-05-16 11:20 xformi: http://puu.sh/2Uvz8.jpg <- this looks bad oO
2013-05-16 11:21 Mercusheigan: at 3:12:415 i think it should work
2013-05-16 11:21 xformi: there s a name for this style but i cant remember it :D
2013-05-16 11:21 xformi: yea
2013-05-16 11:22 xformi: i would keep the next repeating slider, just cause!
2013-05-16 11:22 xformi: but i am not sure about this break 03:17:096
2013-05-16 11:22 xformi: maybe a spinner?
2013-05-16 11:23 Mercusheigan: hm maybe
2013-05-16 11:23 Mercusheigan: but i'm not a big fan of spins in the middle of the music
2013-05-16 11:23 xformi: yea
2013-05-16 11:23 xformi: 03:21:331 remove notes no. 6 and 8
2013-05-16 11:25 xformi: 03:29:064 i would change the pattern of these note to something like... a star maybe? ^_^
2013-05-16 11:25 xformi: 5 note = sexy star
2013-05-16 11:25 Mercusheigan: lol yeah
2013-05-16 11:25 Mercusheigan: at 3:21:555
2013-05-16 11:26 Mercusheigan: should i remove the circle?
2013-05-16 11:26 Mercusheigan: cuz i think he's the problem here
2013-05-16 11:26 xformi: make it so, that the peak is on the bottom of the map for all conspiracy theorists
2013-05-16 11:26 xformi: haha
2013-05-16 11:26 Mercusheigan: lol
2013-05-16 11:27 xformi: hmm no
2013-05-16 11:27 xformi: i like that circle
2013-05-16 11:27 xformi: y it s fun
2013-05-16 11:28 xformi: pls keep it! :D
2013-05-16 11:28 Mercusheigan: hm i'm not sure
2013-05-16 11:28 xformi: u want kill it!
2013-05-16 11:28 xformi: u are an evil person!
2013-05-16 11:28 Mercusheigan: D:
2013-05-16 11:29 xformi: 03:33:436 this slider -> 1 to the left?
2013-05-16 11:30 xformi: and same with the 1st note of the next combo
2013-05-16 11:30 xformi: hmm this combo..
2013-05-16 11:30 Mercusheigan: isn't it too fast?
2013-05-16 11:30 Mercusheigan: the 6 to 7 move at 3:33
2013-05-16 11:30 xformi: move the 2nd and 3rd notes (the sliders) 1 to the right?
2013-05-16 11:31 xformi: yea i would say it is
2013-05-16 11:31 xformi: same with the jump from 5 to 6
2013-05-16 11:31 xformi: it's kinda airman like :D
2013-05-16 11:32 Mercusheigan: blue dragon style
2013-05-16 11:32 Mercusheigan: lmao
2013-05-16 11:32 Mercusheigan: i think i should put a new pattern here
2013-05-16 11:33 xformi: 03:37:581 this note (no. 10) i to the right?
2013-05-16 11:33 Mercusheigan: for sure
2013-05-16 11:35 Mercusheigan: updated
2013-05-16 11:35 xformi: 11 and 12 one to the left
2013-05-16 11:35 Mercusheigan: i'm going to school now
2013-05-16 11:35 xformi: 13 too
2013-05-16 11:35 Mercusheigan: thanks a lot :D
2013-05-16 11:35 xformi: oh and i dont like the break!
2013-05-16 11:35 Mercusheigan: see ya later!
2013-05-16 11:35 xformi: alright, see ya later!
2013-05-16 11:36 Mercusheigan: the break is the same as the big one
2013-05-16 11:36 Mercusheigan: xD
Lythryn
28 posts
Joined October 2011
Lythryn
Hi, this is my first mod so sorry if it's bad ;w;

General

Try to avoid putting notes on the blue ticks, it usually sounds off beat and doesn't fit the music very well.
Use distance snap as often as you can!
Offset 206


ez pz

00:03:984 (1,3) - These two sliders don't really make sense and the music doesn't match it. I would shorten them by 1/8 to match the beat.
00:05:859 (2) - Lower a little to keep it the same distance between 00:03:984 (1,3)
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - Use distance snap
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - For an easy difficulty level, I would avoid offbeat notes
00:22:850 (1,5,7) - Not on beat
00:26:600 (1) - ^ I would move it back like this: http://puu.sh/362Nf.jpg
00:27:655 (3) - If you want to use this note, I would move it closer so it slightly overlaps 00:26:952 (2) - to maintain spacing
00:28:358 (4) - ^
00:31:639 (7) - Shorten
00:33:045 (1) - ^
00:34:452 (2) - Move back one tick to the red tick
00:36:326 (4,5) - Move 4 forward one tick and 5 two ticks: http://puu.sh/362ZD.jpg. Delete the 6 after.
00:48:982 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/36360.jpg

Good luck c:
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

Lythryn wrote:

Hi, this is my first mod so sorry if it's bad ;w;

General

Try to avoid putting notes on the blue ticks, it usually sounds off beat and doesn't fit the music very well.
Use distance snap as often as you can!
Offset 206


ez pz

00:03:984 (1,3) - These two sliders don't really make sense and the music doesn't match it. I would shorten them by 1/8 to match the beat.
00:05:859 (2) - Lower a little to keep it the same distance between 00:03:984 (1,3)
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - Use distance snap
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:08:202 (4,5,6,7) - For an easy difficulty level, I would avoid offbeat notes
00:22:850 (1,5,7) - Not on beat
00:26:600 (1) - ^ I would move it back like this: http://puu.sh/362Nf.jpg
00:27:655 (3) - If you want to use this note, I would move it closer so it slightly overlaps 00:26:952 (2) - to maintain spacing
00:28:358 (4) - ^
00:31:639 (7) - Shorten
00:33:045 (1) - ^
00:34:452 (2) - Move back one tick to the red tick
00:36:326 (4,5) - Move 4 forward one tick and 5 two ticks: http://puu.sh/362ZD.jpg. Delete the 6 after.
00:48:982 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/36360.jpg

Good luck c:
changed most of it, thanks!
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
General

00:00:000 - Don't have a green line here. It will mess up your maps when you fix the timing.
Use offset 3984 to start the beat on measure.
Kiai should start here 00:48:982 -
End kiai here 01:03:982 -
Kiai should start here 03:03:978 -
Maybe end kiai here 03:31:868 -

ez pz

Bad difficulty name

You change spacing very often in this difficulty and there are many objects that aren't the right ticks. Please take some time to add some consistency. Also missing hitsounds.

00:03:867 (1) - Don't start the rhythm on a blue tick with no sound.
00:06:796 (4) - Should end on the red tick.
00:15:351 (5) - Wrong tick.
00:15:351 (5,6,7) - This kind of flow shift shouldn't happen in an easy
00:16:874 (6,7,8) - I'm really not sure about this. Your inconsistent spacing makes it hard for me to test alternate patterns.
00:19:100 (1) - Wrong tick
00:19:452 (2) - End is snapped to 1/8th
00:24:022 (5) - 1/4th forward
00:25:663 (7) - 1/4th back
00:26:600 (1,2) - 1 is on the wrong tick and this plays very badly.
00:26:952 (2,3,4,5) - What happened? Please remap this.
00:31:639 (7) - Shouldn't end on blue tick
00:33:045 (1) - End here 00:33:983 -
00:34:569 (2) - Not on blue tick
00:34:920 (3) - end is snapped to 1/8th
00:36:795 (5) - ^
00:36:795 (5,6) - Gap is large for such a slow SV
00:45:232 (5,6) - I don't like this transition being so uneven.

I hope you're planning on mapping the rest of the song for this difficulty.

Insane
Drain -1 would be better.

Lots of unsnapped ends. Check AiMod.

00:02:226 (1) - Why not start the spinner in the same place as Ez?
00:12:421 (3,4,5) - Increase spacing?
00:15:351 (9,10,11) - Wrong ticks and that whistle came out of nowhere. You had similar sounds before this that didn't have whistles. This isn't a significant change to warrant starting the hitsounds here.
00:18:046 (4,5,6) - Holy! Can you comfortably play this?
00:29:881 (4) - Wrong tick
00:29:999 - add note
00:32:459 (4,5,6) - Another one of these patterns.
00:44:998 - Why skip over this?
00:45:232 - stream should start here IMO
Too many new combos.
00:56:951 (3) - End on wrong tick
01:00:701 (3) - Curve isn't smooth.
01:03:044 (1) - end 01:03:747 -
01:18:747 (2) - Use symmetry.
01:29:645 (5) - End here 01:29:997 -
01:30:348 (6) - Not blue tick
01:31:051 (8) - ^
01:31:520 (1) - end 1/2th later.
01:49:098 (1,2,3) - Wrong ticks
01:52:379 (6,1) - ^
01:57:300 (3) - ^
01:59:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Spacing is also bad.
02:18:979 - check sliders ends through here. Patterns could also be tidied up a bit.
02:25:073 (6,7,8) - Bad flow.
02:26:010 (8,9,10) - Ugh.
02:27:417 (1) - slider end
02:32:456 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds bad, off beat
02:49:799 (2,3) - Wrong ticks
03:02:103 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Something happened
03:03:509 (3) - It would look better if this curve was flatter. It will fit better around the next slider.
03:34:094 (1) - Wrong tick
03:49:035 (1) - Silence this spinner.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

TheVileOne wrote:

General

00:00:000 - Don't have a green line here. It will mess up your maps when you fix the timing.
Use offset 3984 to start the beat on measure. - I dont know how to change the offset properly, if someone could help me explaining it, would <3 K
Kiai should start here 00:48:982 - K
End kiai here 01:03:982 - K
Kiai should start here 03:03:978 - K
Maybe end kiai here 03:31:868 - K

ez pz

Bad difficulty name

You change spacing very often in this difficulty and there are many objects that aren't the right ticks. Please take some time to add some consistency. Also missing hitsounds.

00:03:867 (1) - Don't start the rhythm on a blue tick with no sound.
00:06:796 (4) - Should end on the red tick.
00:15:351 (5) - Wrong tick.
00:15:351 (5,6,7) - This kind of flow shift shouldn't happen in an easy
00:16:874 (6,7,8) - I'm really not sure about this. Your inconsistent spacing makes it hard for me to test alternate patterns.
00:19:100 (1) - Wrong tick
00:19:452 (2) - End is snapped to 1/8th
00:24:022 (5) - 1/4th forward
00:25:663 (7) - 1/4th back
00:26:600 (1,2) - 1 is on the wrong tick and this plays very badly.
00:26:952 (2,3,4,5) - What happened? Please remap this.
00:31:639 (7) - Shouldn't end on blue tick
00:33:045 (1) - End here 00:33:983 -
00:34:569 (2) - Not on blue tick
00:34:920 (3) - end is snapped to 1/8th
00:36:795 (5) - ^
00:36:795 (5,6) - Gap is large for such a slow SV
00:45:232 (5,6) - I don't like this transition being so uneven.

I hope you're planning on mapping the rest of the song for this difficulty.- Not mapping anymore this diff, i suck at it, but i'll leave it there for a while

Insane
Drain -1 would be better.

Lots of unsnapped ends. Check AiMod.

00:02:226 (1) - Why not start the spinner in the same place as Ez?K
00:12:421 (3,4,5) - Increase spacing?K
00:15:351 (9,10,11) - Wrong ticks and that whistle came out of nowhere. You had similar sounds before this that didn't have whistles. This isn't a significant change to warrant starting the hitsounds here. K
00:18:046 (4,5,6) - Holy! Can you comfortably play this? K (think i'll change the pattern again lol)
00:29:881 (4) - Wrong tick K
00:29:999 - add note K
00:32:459 (4,5,6) - Another one of these patterns.K(?)
00:44:998 - Why skip over this? K
00:45:232 - stream should start here IMO K
Too many new combos. K
00:56:951 (3) - End on wrong tick K
01:00:701 (3) - Curve isn't smooth. holy
01:03:044 (1) - end 01:03:747 - agree
01:18:747 (2) - Use symmetry. K
01:29:645 (5) - End here 01:29:997 - K
01:30:348 (6) - Not blue tick - Not sure yet
01:31:051 (8) - ^
01:31:520 (1) - end 1/2th later. K
01:49:098 (1,2,3) - Wrong ticks
01:52:379 (6,1) - ^ K fixed 6, removed 1
01:57:300 (3) - ^
01:59:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Spacing is also bad. K but whats up with the spacing? - NVM LOL
02:18:979 - check sliders ends through here. Patterns could also be tidied up a bit.K
02:25:073 (6,7,8) - Bad flow.K
02:26:010 (8,9,10) - Ugh.K
02:27:417 (1) - slider end K
02:32:456 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds bad, off beat - removed, a spinner is now here
02:49:799 (2,3) - Wrong ticks K (?)
03:02:103 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Something happened - cant really get what you want to say
03:03:509 (3) - It would look better if this curve was flatter. It will fit better around the next slider. - changed a bit
03:34:094 (1) - Wrong tick K
03:49:035 (1) - Silence this spinner. K
the others with no "K" I'll keep changing, thanks :D
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TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
F6 is the hotkey for the Timing Setup Panel. Go to the line with the BPM displayed and select it. Use the offset textbox to choose a different offset. Keep in mind that once you do this that no green lines appear before the first red line or bad things will happen to your difficulty.
Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Papysh
No kudosu for this~
Remove archie from source, since he is artist
But im not sure about putting "my little pony FiM" as Source for this song
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani


Relevant video

As a note, it might be a good idea to rename the normal diff to just "Normal". Normalz seems kind of silly and will turn people away from the map

Moe moe nyan.

Don't kudosu or I will like cry forever.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan
check, ty both of you
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
[General]
I think the offset should be somewhere at: 3.954
00:48:982 - The first kiai time should start here.
Check the AiMod for problems.

[Normal]
Recheck all the notes to where you put new combos. Put a new combo to notes that fits the music like: 01:21:794 (1) - Remove this new combo and it'll fit better with 01:22:731 (2) .
Use the distance snap often because you have distance problems. You can check in the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and check "Check distance snap" to check where it is the problem.
00:05:859 (3) - Distance problem. Maybe put it at x:320 y:312?
00:07:734 (5) - New combo?
00:10:546 (1) - Remove the new combo and put new combo to 00:11:484 (2) ?
00:12:421 (4) - Move to one grid on the right so it could be align with 00:11:484 (2,3) .
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6) - Change these patterns. It can be confusing for a normal.
01:01:638 (7,8) - Don't overlap them. 01:01:873 (8) - Put it more closer the 01:02:107 (9) .
01:21:091 (4,5) - ^
01:26:920 (4) - Don't overlap it or it'll be ugly.

[Hard]
Recheck this difficulty.

[Insane]
00:10:546 (7) - New combo?
00:14:296 (5) - ^
00:15:468 (10) - Don't put the repeat in the blue tick. It doesn't fit.
00:18:983 (7,8) - At the end of these sliders, they aren't snap.
00:37:029 (6) - It isn't snap.
00:47:459 (1,2,4,3,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,5,4,6) - In this section, why is there two notes at the same time?
01:05:739 (5) - Put it at the long white tick.
01:22:497 (2,3) - It doesn't fit with the music. Change them.
01:31:520 (1) - It should end at 01:33:512 .
01:41:012 (7,8) - Put them more closer to 01:40:777 (6) .
01:51:910 (3) - Remove it because it's at the same time 01:51:910 (2) .
01:55:660 (13,14,15,17,16) - In this section, ^
01:59:409 (11) - ^

Please recheck all of your difficulties. I think your need to remap, sorry.
Good Luck!
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
I think the offset should be somewhere at: 3.954
00:48:982 - The first kiai time should start here. but it does start here
Check the AiMod for problems.

[Normal]
Recheck all the notes to where you put new combos. Put a new combo to notes that fits the music like: 01:21:794 (1) - Remove this new combo and it'll fit better with 01:22:731 (2) .
Use the distance snap often because you have distance problems. You can check in the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and check "Check distance snap" to check where it is the problem.
00:05:859 (3) - Distance problem. Maybe put it at x:320 y:312?
00:07:734 (5) - New combo?
00:10:546 (1) - Remove the new combo and put new combo to 00:11:484 (2) ?
00:12:421 (4) - Move to one grid on the right so it could be align with 00:11:484 (2,3) .
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6) - Change these patterns. It can be confusing for a normal.
01:01:638 (7,8) - Don't overlap them. 01:01:873 (8) - Put it more closer the 01:02:107 (9) .
01:21:091 (4,5) - ^
01:26:920 (4) - Don't overlap it or it'll be ugly.

fixed all

[Hard]
Recheck this difficulty.

[Insane]
00:10:546 (7) - New combo? k
00:14:296 (5) - ^ k
00:15:468 (10) - Don't put the repeat in the blue tick. It doesn't fit. k
00:18:983 (7,8) - At the end of these sliders, they aren't snap. k
00:37:029 (6) - It isn't snap. k
00:47:459 (1,2,4,3,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,5,4,6) - In this section, why is there two notes at the same time? i did the streams on 1/6 because i don't think that 1/4 streams would be good to play at 128 bpm. I dunno if this is a real problem though
01:05:739 (5) - Put it at the long white tick. k
01:22:497 (2,3) - It doesn't fit with the music. Change them. i'll
01:31:520 (1) - It should end at 01:33:512 . k
01:41:012 (7,8) - Put them more closer to 01:40:777 (6) . somewhat fixed, probably changing this pattern
01:51:910 (3) - Remove it because it's at the same time 01:51:910 (2) . 1/6 stream
01:55:660 (13,14,15,17,16) - In this section, ^ 1/6 stream
01:59:409 (11) - ^

Please recheck all of your difficulties. I think your need to remap, sorry.
Good Luck!
Apex_old
736 posts
Joined May 2010
Apex_old
This map was incredibly rushed. First of all, you have to finish 4 difficulties before you submit it as to save trouble for the modders/mappers, and it is wise to submit a finished product as modders/players patience deteriorate over time and at this rate, when you are completed with the maps they would have been gone.

You should start with an Easy difficulty first. Then when you are done, you create another difficulty with the same Hit Object/Timing elements and you add more to it, and make it the Normal difficulty; then you change the Normal in to Hard; Hard into Insane; Insane into Another...vice versa. Making 4 maps like this will only take the power to make 3 maps.

Also your sliders are atrocious. Since you are new, please visit this thread about sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

Normal:
00:03:773: Slider is unbalanced:
better
00:14:296: ^

00:18:046: ^
[imghttp://puu.sh/49Ilb.jpg][/img]
00:08:202: I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but the second half of the slider is too striaght if you compare it to the second half. Except you want it to be straight that way.
Solution 1
Solution 2
00:10:546: Bad sliders
OCD
00:25:546: ^
00:15:234: 3 circles are not on the same line.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

Apex wrote:

This map was incredibly rushed. First of all, you have to finish 4 difficulties before you submit it as to save trouble for the modders/mappers, and it is wise to submit a finished product as modders/players patience deteriorate over time and at this rate, when you are completed with the maps they would have been gone.

You should start with an Easy difficulty first. Then when you are done, you create another difficulty with the same Hit Object/Timing elements and you add more to it, and make it the Normal difficulty; then you change the Normal in to Hard; Hard into Insane; Insane into Another...vice versa. Making 4 maps like this will only take the power to make 3 maps.

Also your sliders are atrocious. Since you are new, please visit this thread about sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

Normal:
00:03:773: Slider is unbalanced: fixed
better
00:14:296: ^ fixed

00:18:046: ^ fixed
[imghttp://puu.sh/49Ilb.jpg][/img]
00:08:202: I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but the second half of the slider is too striaght if you compare it to the second half. Except you want it to be straight that way. intended
Solution 1
Solution 2
00:10:546: Bad sliders fixed
OCD
00:25:546: ^ fixed
00:15:234: 3 circles are not on the same line. fixed
i hoped to see more mods on insane :(

but thanks, it helped alot!
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
Many Objects are not snapped.
Many Kiai time are not snapped.
Do not overuse Kiai time.
Use Timming->Resnap all notes to snapp notes.
Use File->AIMod to check these things.

[Easy]
00:08:202 (2) - It is better not use 2-return slider in a Easy beatmap. Spilt it and use 2 sliders instead (or a 1-return slider and a circle).
00:14:296 (1) - Do not put slider end with red line in a Easy beatmap.
00:15:234 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many circles.
00:17:577 (8,1) - (wtf) Too close.
00:18:046 (1,2,3) - Too close.
00:22:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too close.
Always mind the distance snap at the right above corner, they should be always same.
00:30:234 (6) - nc(new combo)?
00:33:749 (1,2) - wtf.
00:45:234 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Do not abuse hit-sound.
00:46:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mind the distance snap.
The timming is not right.

[Hard]
Close CountdownOffset: 3
[TimingPoints]
3984,468.75,4,1,0,100,1,0
and resnap all notes.

Finish all the beatmaps and post it again and I will recheck it again later.

Good luck.
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
Many Objects are not snapped.
Many Kiai time are not snapped.
Do not overuse Kiai time.
Use Timming->Resnap all notes to snapp notes.
Use File->AIMod to check these things.

[Easy]
00:08:202 (2) - It is better not use 2-return slider in a Easy beatmap. Spilt it and use 2 sliders instead (or a 1-return slider and a circle).
00:14:296 (1) - Do not put slider end with red line in a Easy beatmap.
00:15:234 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many circles.
00:17:577 (8,1) - (wtf) Too close.
00:18:046 (1,2,3) - Too close.
00:22:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too close.
Always mind the distance snap at the right above corner, they should be always same.
00:30:234 (6) - nc(new combo)?
00:33:749 (1,2) - wtf.
00:45:234 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Do not abuse hit-sound.
00:46:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mind the distance snap.
The timming is not right.

[Hard]
Close CountdownOffset: 3
[TimingPoints]
3984,468.75,4,1,0,100,1,0
and resnap all notes.

Finish all the beatmaps and post it again and I will recheck it again later.

Good luck.
TYVM! I'll fix your modding soon.
oempa
23 posts
Joined May 2013
oempa
Hi, just a random mod, not sure if actually of any use :3

Insane:

At 00:07:265 there's a hitsound missing. I'd either make that slider start at 00:07:265 or make it a double slider.
00:10:663 (2) - seems to be missing a tripple where at 00:06:796 you do use a tripple, same with 00:14:413. (it's a very obvious sound, i think it should be a tripple all the time)
00:18:398 doesn't work well and 00:18:632 ends 1 too early. These sliders sound odd to me. I would consider rearranging them entirely, same for the others like this.
00:38:905 missing hitsound
01:03:749 Maybe you could try to make this spinner's end at 5% volume since the ending hitsound doesn't sound well but the spinner itself does.
01:18:515 Make the slider start here and move the note to 01:18:984?
01:22:499-01:23:202 tripples don't work very well here.
01:26:249 seems to be missing a circle
01:51:796 Should just be a normal tripple, not a 5 stream. same 01:55:678, same 01:59:296.

I like the offset better at 00:03:960, everything sounds like it's hitting slightly too late for me.

You seem to want to add a lot of notes that aren't really there. There's a very clear tone/rythm in this song, which sadly as a mapper you have to follow. Just some advice, not sure if it's of any use ^-^'
Mercusheigan
281 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mercusheigan

oempa wrote:

Hi, just a random mod, not sure if actually of any use :3

Insane:

At 00:07:265 there's a hitsound missing. I'd either make that slider start at 00:07:265 or make it a double slider.
00:10:663 (2) - seems to be missing a tripple where at 00:06:796 you do use a tripple, same with 00:14:413. (it's a very obvious sound, i think it should be a tripple all the time)
00:18:398 doesn't work well and 00:18:632 ends 1 too early. These sliders sound odd to me. I would consider rearranging them entirely, same for the others like this.
00:38:905 missing hitsound
01:03:749 Maybe you could try to make this spinner's end at 5% volume since the ending hitsound doesn't sound well but the spinner itself does.
01:18:515 Make the slider start here and move the note to 01:18:984?
01:22:499-01:23:202 tripples don't work very well here.
01:26:249 seems to be missing a circle
01:51:796 Should just be a normal tripple, not a 5 stream. same 01:55:678, same 01:59:296.

I like the offset better at 00:03:960, everything sounds like it's hitting slightly too late for me.

You seem to want to add a lot of notes that aren't really there. There's a very clear tone/rythm in this song, which sadly as a mapper you have to follow. Just some advice, not sure if it's of any use ^-^'


thanks for your time, but I kinda quit mapping... realized that i'm really bad at it and I dont try to improve it.
Blitzcrieg
19 posts
Joined January 2014
Blitzcrieg
Normal

00:45:702 (7) - snap the object

Hard
Timing > Resnap current section

Insane
00:18:046 (4) - make the duration 1/2 instead of 1/4
00:25:546 (7) - same
02:03:046 (11) - same
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