wmtokok wrote:

hi~
M4M

Amateur

00:54:514 (4,1) - You can change this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698425 .Remember change the whistle,finish,clap . hmm okay
01:22:402 (2) - note? theres already one there ._.

Average

01:21:557 (4,1) - You can change this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698447 ok
01:34:655 (2) - use 01:33:810 (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698442 ok
01:46:698 - note? where would it goooo

Advanced

00:24:937 (2) - this note can delete why? ._.

I can't find more.Sorry
This diff is very well

Good luck

Irreversible wrote:

Hey, from ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~



Let's begin with the mod

[General]

Why
is
there
no
insane
for
this
song
plz
i
cant
map
insanes
asdfghj

[Amateur]

00:27:472 (4) - Remove this by a single circle. okay
00:28:529 (1) - This spinner should start 00:27:895 (1) - here okay
00:51:557 (1,5) - This could be a bit hard for newbies, since it's an Amateur only diff. Do you mean 1 and 2? There's no 5. changed to a slider
01:30:430 (2) - This slider looks really cool! thanks, i like how the sliderball waves so smooth
01:50:712 (3) - Why isn't this slider straight? Well i mean, it's a bit prone. i think its fine

The rest is kinda okayish, but there could still be improvement, just wait for more mods! thanks for an honest opinion! i always like hearing those

[Average]

Since Amateur has a kinda low SV, this one is pretty high o.o my bad ._.

00:31:909 (2) - You should avoid things like this :c i like it though D: i think it looks cool and sounds nice.
01:36:768 (4) - I don't understand why you never put a finish here (for all diffs) added

This is the best diff in this mapspread yet! But i hope i could help you with my bigger mod in Advanced thanks

[Advanced]

First impression: It's a kinda awesome song, where you could put in very many mini-streams, and SV changes. So many main question is: Why is there no insane xD


Hitsounds:

00:17:754 (1) - Add a quiet finish on the Slider-Start? okay
00:49:022 (9) - Add a finish, instead of a clap uhhh wat. i think you pointed out the wrong time - it makes no sense to me and there is no (9)
01:21:979 (1) - Why are here two finishes missing? It's very important to keep consistent with hitsounding. finishes happen when it happens in the music, and nothing happens here
01:36:345 (3) - Add a finish on the end. okay
02:03:388 (3) - This clap isn't necessary. you can hear the music "clap" twice in a row here though, i guess i'll remove it though

Placing:

00:19:444 (1) - Make this slider a bit rounder, so everything looks a bit better.
My suggestion: http://puu.sh/2xHfV ooo okay
Btw: You have to move the next slider as well.
00:21:979 (3) - Same as above, rounder would be better. okay
00:22:824 (4) - This one needs another placing. I suggest following the placing before, which means you kinda half-stack it with the Slider-End of (3). ive changed this whole part a lot, not sure if i did a good job lol
00:31:275 - I think a kiai-fountain would be nice here. ehh idk. i'll see what other people say. this song isnt really strong enough for much kiai time, so i only use it at the end for emphasis.
00:35:289 (2,3) - The stack here doesn't really work well. Try replacing it. okay
00:35:500 (3) - If you wanna make a slider like this, make it look nice. Means: Put the second white tick to x: 176 y: 64 sorraaaay
00:41:838 (2,3,4) - Make a little triangle here, stacking in this case also, is pretty boring. good idea
00:46:486 (4,5,6,1) - Let me tell you what rhythm i think is better, and more varying

00:46:486 (4,5,6,1) -

00:46:486 - Add a slider from here to 00:46:909 - okay
00:47:120 - Add a slider from here to 00:47:543 - the song claps during the slider though, doesnt sound good to me D:
00:47:754 - Add a circle ok
00:47:965 - Add a circle ok
00:48:176 - Add a slider from here to 00:48:599 - ok

00:49:867 (13) - Shorten this slider by one tick, while moving 00:50:712 (14) - one tick back remapped this whole section basically
In this case:
Add a circle 00:51:134 - and 00:51:134 - ^ same time xD wat, also, ^ ^ ^
00:58:106 (8,9) - If you wanna make a nice circle, don't leave them out, why do they get suddenly straight? fixed
01:13:529 (3) - Move it a bit downwards. mmmk
01:43:106 (3) - Bad flow with the other things around it, try make something rounder. fixed i think?


Good luck! I hope i could help you a bit, and if you don't understand something, feel free to contact me every time ~

AzerFrost wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Hard

1. 00:20:289 (2) - End Slider at 00:20:712 ok
2. 00:23:247 (2) - Replace by Slider ending at 00:23:458 ok
3. 00:23:669 (3) - Move to 00:23:881 and change position accordingly ok
4. 01:10:148 (4) - Slider deign not symmetrical it is but i changed it anyway remapped this whole section
5. 01:11:416 (5,6) - Replace by 1/4 Slider, Reversing twice ^
6. 01:17:543 - Add note, remove this slider 01:17:754 (3) , move this slider 01:18:176 (4) to 01:17:965 ^
7. 02:05:923 - Remove this kiai time. nah

Clique wrote:

lol try to make your own Insane even if you don't submit yours.

from my queue

let's go

General

cool but actually I think you don't need to put audio lead-in cuz it is for a beginning notes that comes suddenly. good point

Ameteur

00:21:134 (1) - lets try to keep distance 0.95x ~ 1.05x ok

00:21:557 (2) - ^ ok

00:27:895 (1) - hard for easy players. make this spinner shorter ok

00:51:557 (1) - as I mentioned before, spacing (only a grid but important in easy/normal diff) cuz your slider has symmetry on y-axis, moving 00:50:712 (4) - this note a grid can be okay I think. moved the previous note

01:22:824 (3) - overlapping is not good on easy but I think it is well-shaped so okay~

01:34:655 (2) - meh 1.12x try to make this pattern more symmetrical 01:33:810 (1,2,3,4) - ok

Average

cuz I did explained on easy diff, there are some notes that do not keep spacing. should be fine

00:58:529 (1) - I don't know hitsound very well but remove finish? you are right


Advanced

00:48:176 (1,2) - make these sliders same they are the same?

cuz I'm not a good modder I could not find out some awkward points of your map.

hope your map ranked thx

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ from my queue :3/

[Overall]

1. if you add some SB for this song will be great! If only I could! I might try and learn about storyboarding. It would be cool.

about Kiai time:

1. 01:48:176 - why you close kiai? you should keep kiai here~ because the song pauses - i think it looks cool. i'll see what others say.
2. 02:05:923 - to 02:09:303 - hmm..i perfer remove this kiai time? cuz it's the end os the map and short.... short, choppy, fast ending. again, i'll see what others say

__so my opinion is from 01:38:881 - to 02:05:923 -

[Advanced]

1. 00:21:557 (2) - why finish here...it's strange o_o i perfer remove it. removed on all diffs
2. 00:24:514 (5) - NC here to notice the snap changed. oh yeah
3. 00:35:500 (3) - you can coated 00:36:345 (4) - 's head better~ good point
4. 00:41:838 (2,3,4) - this flow isn't good imo.try this http://puu.sh/2CK7L.jpg good idea, i didnt like that either
5. 01:05:078 - remove finish removed on all diffs
6. 01:15:219 (1) - x216/y252? or somewhere don't stack this note better.. tried something else
7. 01:19:022 (2) - remove finish done on all diffs
8. 01:45:007 (2,4) - ^ i know you want to highlight this.but 2 finish is enough imo sounds better actually, thanks
9. 01:55:148 (2,3,4) - i feel strange you stack here...it's suddenly.. fixed

[Average]

1. 00:21:557 (2) - same as Advanced.
2. 00:47:120 (2) - move to 00:47:331 - start the slider better~ okay
3. 00:57:895 - remove clap alrighty
4. 01:05:078 - same as Advanced.
5. 01:19:021 (5) - remove finish
6. 01:21:979 (1,2) - very sudden and strange rhythm..try this http://puu.sh/2CKTK.jpg fixed
7. 02:03:388 (4) - remove clap and add whistle okay
8. 02:05:923 - add finish mhm

[Amateur]

1. 00:21:557 (2) - same as Advanced. (again)
2. 01:05:078 - ^
3. 01:22:824 (3) - this overlap is hard for newbie >.< nahhhh i think it will be okay
4. 01:35:500 (3,4) - why just keep Normal soundset? will better them you add finish.. changed on all diffs.

you should make the Insane yourself(hardest diff for the first rank)~
if you don't want.and still need GD you can ask me about it...I can try~if you want =A= yippeeeee

nice map,anyway
GL~ thanks!

Marcooo wrote:

Hi, doing this because why not!
All of these are suggestions, as I have never done anything and I am just doing this as a regular player
Advanced:
I'd definetly go for AR 7, I think it suits it way more, especially since it's a Hard map. mmmkay

00:17:120 - Add circle nah ._.
00:58:529 - I think that long spinner is a pain while playing, maybe reduce it and add break time? good idea, added on all diffs
01:16:698 - Add circle okay


Amateur:
00:58:529 - Maybe put the spinner a bit further back, it doesn't look that good when you play it really especially with the slow playstyle of the map well its gone already

Average:
00:52:613 - I dunno, doesn't sound good to me, maybe something like this: http://puu.sh/2DTXO.jpg okay
00:58:529 - Same as Amateur
01:16:698 - Add circle nah
01:31:909 - Maybe add circle aswell nah, i only want 1/1 at this part
02:01:698 - For the love of the flashlight users, please flip this horizontally i flipped it, but keep in mind dont judge maps on how they look/play with score mods. Never.
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Drianel wrote:

hello from my mod queue let's start with the mod:

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

1) Great song, nice timming and note placement
2) Need some extra circles in advanced
3) We need Insane dif!!! thanks! the insane diff is in progress.


>>>> ADVANCED <<<<

--> I think the map is ok, but i added some rhytm with some extra-circles, i hope you like it (it does not affect to the map's difficulty at all)

00:24:303 - Add circle okay
00:23:881 (3,4) - Move correctly to the new pattern:

SPOILER

okay
00:26:838 - how about circle here? okay
00:27:683 - Another circle here okay
00:27:895 (5) - Add finish nah, but i added whistle
00:50:500 - Add circle here to change the pattern okay
00:58:317 (9) - add finish okay, added on all diffs
01:18:388 - Add circle okay
01:18:599 (1) - Move down to follow the pattern yup

SPOILER

01:28:529 - Add circle here (you will understand with the next change why i did this)
01:31:909 - Add circle. After this point, go back and test the map from 01:25:360 to 01:37:191 (i specially love this change) i like it
02:09:514 (1) - end this spinner at 02:12:261
02:12:683 - Add circle i dont like this, sorry


>>>> AVERAGE <<<<

01:14:796 - Add circle nah
01:45:219 (3) - Remove finish? okay
01:52:613 (1) - Remove finish on the 1st part it sounds cool ;_;
02:12:261 - Same suggestion that i tell you in advanced dif. nue

>>>> AMATEUR <<<<

00:40:993 - Add circle done
01:38:458 - you can add circle here and add NC (if you do this, remove NC from 01:38:881 (1) ) nah, id rather start at 01:38:881



_____

That's all good luck with your map, i want to play this ranked

- Drianel -

1. Your hitsounds seem too quite imo. I suggest raising the volume by 10-20% for all timing sections.
   
   
2. From 00:31:275 to 00:58:317 and during your kiai times, I suggest using the normal default finish instead of the soft finish. I think it fits much nicer with the music during those sections where it's louder and the bass is more active.
   
   
3. I don't think the default soft cap fits very well...You could try to use a custom clap that might fit better with the song. Try this one: http://puu.sh/2F7Vs.wav
   All you have to do is put that in the song folder, and then change all of your timing sections to soft sample set custom 1, or SC:1.
   Also remember you can find lots of hitsounds here: t/15407
   If you feel adventurous in the future, you can try and find some custom hitsounds that fit your song really nicely.
   
   
4. Lots of your combo patterns in the two easier diffs feel strange. Try to make the patterns in each diff the same. Check the hard diff and see where you are placing new combos, and then check the other diffs and see if they coincide for the most part. It would be nice to have new combos starting when the music has a strong downbeat.

1. 00:19:444 (1,2) - The blanket really doesn't look very nice. Try to make the 1 more curved so that the 2 can rest perfectly inside of it while maintaining distance snap.
   
   
   
   
2. 00:27:050 (3) - Try using CTRL+G on this slider. I think it makes a little nicer flow than what you have.
   
   
3. 00:28:106 (1) - I really suggest ending this spinner at 00:30:430 and starting the section with a slider there like you do in the Average diff. When you have this powerful downbeat that starts the section at 00:31:275 be on the end of the spinner, it takes a lot of power away from your beatmap and the player cannot appreciate how it's representing the song. It feels much more powerful to smash a slider with a finish on the head at that point to start the phrase off.
   
   
4. 00:44:796 (1) - This slider is really unfitting. I suggest trying a more defined shape, like the ones you used in the other diffs. The one used in the Average diff is quite nice, try to make a similar shape here instead of this slider.
   
   
5. 00:58:105 (8) - This feels overmapped because the hits in the music stop right here. For that reason it would be better to have a slider at 00:57:895. Try having a 1/2 slider there and then a jump to the 00:58:317 (1). So this rhythm:
   
   
   Keep in mind that you don't have to stick strictly with your 1.1 distance snap here. This would be the perfect spot to add some nice jumps.
   Just a sample placement that I found to be pretty nice:
   
   It's just an example, please create a placement that fits with your own style and intentions.
   
   
6. 00:58:529 - This timing section isn't doing anything because there is a break, you might as well remove it.
   
   
7. 01:19:444 (4,5) - To me it feels a bit nicer if you extend the 4 to end at 01:20:078. That fits nicely with the melody in the song and is a similar rhythm that you've used thus far like at 01:16:910 (4,5).
   
   
8. 01:32:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - Honestly you can do something much more exciting in this section. Add some jumps. Consider increasing spacing at intervals throughout the section leading up to the finish at 01:37:191. Maybe have an increase at 01:33:810 and 01:35:500 and then a jump to the 01:36:345 (3). Also I suggest having all sliders until 01:35:500 because that's actually what the music is calling for. So here's a sample rhythm and simple placement idea to get you started.
   
   
   
   Please don't just copy that example. It's just to show you what might work well here. As you can see the 01:36:345 (1) is right in the center of the grid and we have these jumping patterns around it before we hit it. That makes for a much more intense transition, just like what's happening in the song.
   
   
9. 01:36:345 (1) - To me it sounds much nicer if you remove the finishes from the head and from the middle repeat and to just have them be normal hits. Then add a soft finish on the very end of the slider. That means we have all normal hits in the section leading up to this epic lone finish at the end. Try it, it sounds very nice. If you do so here, then do so in the rest of the diffs also.
   
   
10. 01:52:402 (1,2,3) - Try to make a rhythm that follows what the music is doing more closely. The music calls for a repeating slider here. Try to use one like this:
    
    
    
    
11. 02:05:923 (1,2,3,4) - A bit dull for the hardest difficulty. Try using a larger spacing here.

1. 00:23:247 (2) - Imo, it seems that a simple curve would be better than the sharp jointed slider. It would match the 00:21:979 (3) better. Try it:
   
   
   
   
2. 00:40:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make a more smooth curve that leads into the 5. Right now we come into the 4 at a sharper angle and it breaks flow imo.
   
   
   
   
3. 00:44:796 (1) - It might be nice to have this centered on the grid. Try having the 00:43:106 (1,2,3) curve into it and have it centered:
   
   
   
   
4. 00:58:529 - Useless timing section, go ahead and remove it.
   
   
5. 01:19:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just a minor flow/placement suggestion:
   
   
   Have a slightly more interesting flow between the 01:19:444 (1,2,3). Also it flows nicer to have the 01:21:979 (5) pointed downwards as shown because you continue the downward flow from the 01:21:557 (4) and have it reset with the repeat on the 5 so that the player can then move to the right.
   
   
6. 01:49:867 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - The rhythm was kind of hard to follow. The reason is because you have a lot of upbeat sliders here with their ends landing on downbeats. I suggest trying to avoid that for the most part. When you repeat it like this, you can end up with a confusing rhythm. Here's my suggestion for a different rhythm:
   
   
   01:49:444 (2) to 01:54:514 (4)
   This way you have objects to hit on the downbeats where important new ideas are starting in the music.
   
   
7. 02:06:768 (1,2,3,1) - I suggest placing them in a nice triangle pattern that's centered on the grid instead like you do in the hard diff:
   
   
   With the 02:09:303 (1) stacked on the head of the 02:06:768 (1).

1. 00:44:796 (4) - Try to make this slider stand out a bit more like it does in the other diffs. Maybe add another red anchor on the right side.
   
   
2. 00:58:529 - This timing section here isn't doing anything because you have a break there, so you might as well remove it.
   
   
3. 01:06:768 (1) - I suggest remove the NC from the 1 here and add it to the 01:08:458 (2) instead to even out the combo pattern here. The 01:05:078 (1,2) is too short of a combo imo.
   
   
4. 01:19:022 (4,5,1) - The rhythm isn't fitting the song very well imo. Try moving the 5 to 01:20:289. Also I suggest a NC on the 01:19:022 (4) and to remove the NC from 01:21:134 (1) and add it to the 01:22:824 (3).
   
   
   01:19:022 (1) to 01:24:514 (3)

1. HP and OD seems too low, at least put 2 or 3 or something.

1. 02:05:923 - End the spinner earlier and add the repeat slider back? Feels like lacking

1. I think you should generally follow the bass notes when mapping, that's probably the right thing to emphasize in such a genre.
2. 00:44:796 (1) - Actually expecting a larger slowdown here, like half the SV and 2.0x everything but that's too much work anyway...
3. 00:46:486 (4) - Better end here 00:46:698 and add circles at 00:46:803 00:46:909
4. 00:48:071 - Circle here?
5. 00:49:022 (2) - End 00:49:233 and repeat sliders at 00:49:444 ?
6. 00:50:712 (6) - ^
7. 01:13:529 (4) - I can't get what you're following. I would use the guitar sound here.
8. 01:37:191 (1) - Maybe put a really slow slider here?
9. 01:48:176 (1) - The slider ticks don't really go with the music, maybe just use plain repeat sliders.
10. That looks like a normal btw orz. I don't think one DS all the time in a typical Hard

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, for M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions

[Advanced]
00:27:895 - remove the circle here, and let spinner starts here. good idea, i like this.
00:27:895 - add circle here? (*Suggestion: stack with 00:31:275 (1) - ) you just told me to remove it though ;_;
01:37:191 (1) - why not stack this with 01:36:979 (4) - ? , or stack it with 01:37:191 (1) - yeah fixed this up
01:42:050 - add a circle here? nah
02:09:303 (1) - remove circle and let spinner start here okay


[Average]
00:27:472 (4) - change this into a circle and let the spinner start at 00:27:895 - okay
02:03:810 - add circle here yup
02:03:810 (1) - start this spinner at 02:04:233 - , end at 02:05:500 - (Note: might make the next note come too soon, maybe you should ignore this ><) i've removed the spinner on advanced and average.
02:09:303 (1) - remove circle, let spinner start here okay

[Amature]
02:09:303 (3) - once again, remove circle and let spinner start here yep

[Other Suggestions]
About the 'remove the circle and let spinner start here' parts, maybe you can keep the circle and remove the spinners?

That's all I can find, Nice placement and sliders, and good luck for rank

P.S: Sorry for short mod

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[Amateur]
00:38:036 (1) - one grid down uhhh okay

[Average]
00:19:444 (3,4) - change to 1/1+3/2 im not really familiar with music terms like this, but i did change the pattern lol
00:52:613 (4) - delete the reverse i think its okay for now
01:12:683 (2) - x:224 y:384 and move 01:13:529 (3,4,5) did something like this
01:34:655 (2) - Ctrl+J and move done

[Advanced]
00:26:205 (1) - why slowdown? wat
00:35:500 (3) - change to two short sliders
00:37:191 (5) - ^
00:54:092 (6) - ^ all done
01:09:726 - add a note done
01:13:951 - miss a note
01:14:585 - ^ dont quite understand what you mean, these times are in the middle of sliders
01:16:910 (4,5) - change to 1/1+3/2 same statement in average but no change
01:19:867 - put the tail here okay
01:24:303 - 01:24:726 - miss notes ok im just assuming you mean "add notes", i dont know though
01:34:021 (2) - too hard not really
01:38:881 (1,1,3) - change to two short sliders nah i like it the way it is
01:46:064 - put the tail here nah
01:54:303 - add a note okay
02:03:599 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard fixed

good map. GL

• - 00:24:514 (1,2,1) - align
  - 02:02:543 (5) - move to x=68 y=80
  nothing else to say on this diff :3

• - 00:26:205 (1,2,3,4) - better like that ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/737262
  - 02:04:655 (2) - too much downward, move to x=384 y=316, then make blanket with 02:05:500 (3) -
  The rest is perfect >3<

• - 00:21:979 (3,1) - what about a second blanket ? you did one shortly before
  - 01:18:388 (6) - delete this circle and extend the precedent slider of 1/2
  - 01:24:092 (3,4,5,6,7) - not funny to play try to find another pattern

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi~ From your M4M queue!

These are all suggestions.

EDIT: I just realized I wasn't clear on what "back" and "forward" meant with relation to moving sliders/notes back and forth on the timeline (and I dont think I was consistent at all when I used those terms), so instead I've edited everything to just be "right" or "left" on the timeline

Amateur

00:16:064 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:17:754 (1) - Finish okay
00:19:444 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:21:979 (3) - Clap on the repeat arrow sounds good
00:54:937 (1) - Move this slider so it's more spaced from the previous combo, right now it looks like it's all part of the same combo (even just turning the slider end away would be fine - and doesn't mess with the overall spacing here) fixed

Average

00:15:219 (2,3) - This 1/2 pattern is neat, but I think should be consistent throughout the section - when I was playing it, I was expecting the 1/2 notes after this, but didn't get any - throwing me off in this entire section. The following suggestions will try to make it consistent. If you don't want to add all the 1/2 patterns, then you can ignore the following ~ but in that case, I'd suggest taking the pattern out altogether, again, for consistency.
00:16:486 (4) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead.
00:18:599 (2) - ^
00:20:289 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it.
00:23:247 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead. most done

00:50:078 (1) - This feels better as 2 circles instead of a slider okay
01:12:683 (2) - This feels out of place. I suggest just removing this and extending the slider to here. done
01:14:374 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it did something like this
01:15:219 (7) - Shorten this slider 1/2 i think its fine, did this in the beginning
01:17:965 (3) - Add note okay
01:20:712 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead okay
01:46:698 (2) - Add note nah

Advanced

00:56:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not sure a star is the best pattern here - It doesn't split into 5 nicely and the slider feels awkward. There are 8 beats here with the emphasis on the 1st and 5th, so 2x4beat patterns (like 2 squares or something) would probably work best. 4x2beat patterns could work as well. removed the slider and last note, i think the star is fine now.
01:06:345 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section is hard to read, The circles seem to be following the bass synth thing in the BG, but the circles end before the synth ends. I suggest a pattern like the following:
http://puu.sh/2MVEh.png did something like this
Be sure you space notes out appropriately and add hit sounds so it's easy to discern the musical lines from eachother (otherwise it will just be a long jumble of notes that will probably just be even harder to read and understand).
01:13:529 (4) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:14:374 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider
01:16:910 (5) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:24:726 (5) - Add note all above done

Nice mapset- though I think it would be nice to have an Insane difficulty for this song - there's a lot in the music that wasn't touched on by the Advanced diff, so there's still a lot of potential to exploit in here. thank you - someone is working on an insane guest diff atm

DJNightmare wrote:

Hi, im from the queue :X

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Amateur
In my opinion, it is great already so i will move on to the other difficulties :3

Average
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts ok
01:36:557 (3) - Change the sampleset of this note to Normal ok
01:50:500 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done
01:54:514 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done

Advanced
00:33:388 (6) - New Combo added on previous slider
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts yup
02:01:909 (2) - Move up and left by 1 grid done
02:02:331 (4) - Move to the left by 1 grid done
02:05:923 (1,2,3,4) - You should remove the crash cymbals in the 3rd and 5th beat of the slider removed on 3rd

This song has the potential to have a harder difficulty, but good luck on your ranking :3