Black Sun Empire - Dawn Of A Dark Day (Receptor Remix) · forum

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-04-07T21:54:05+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on December-17-13 at 06:43:44

Artist: Black Sun Empire
Title: Dawn Of A Dark Day (Receptor Remix)
Tags: drum and bass dnb
BPM: 172
Filesize: 10309kb
Play Time: 06:34
Difficulties Available:

Marathon (5 stars, 1203 notes)

Download: Black Sun Empire - Dawn Of A Dark Day (Receptor Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
we emerge
as they fade away
STORYBOARD BY THE GREAT DAMNAE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Last edited by Natteke 2013-12-17T06:44:31+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

Ulysses

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Ulysses 2013-04-08T01:40:49+00:00

:> First

Pump_old_1

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Pump_old_1 2013-04-08T12:16:14+00:00

nold_1702 wrote:
:> First

Not

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-04-11T21:07:31+00:00

nold_1702 wrote:
:> First

map the part man D:

Damnae

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Damnae 2013-12-11T12:03:21+00:00

I finished the storyboard: http://puu.sh/5Jc3s.zip.
Just add this to what I already gave you.

While making it I noticed a few things, so...

04:04:085 - sound like a circle is missing here?
04:50:218 - you should add kiai to this part like you did for 04:05:567 -
05:28:242 (2) - since the storyboard use the claps hitsounds to do something, I noticed some where missing from this point to the end

sgl source code

var beat_duration = 22312 - 21963;

var time_sb_zero = -13;
var time_intro = 1381;
var time_part1 = 22312;
var time_part2 = 44637;
var time_part3 = 66963;
var time_part3_end = 108823;
var time_part4 = 111614;
var time_part4_spin1_start = 122777;
var time_part4_spin1_end = 124521;
var time_part4_spin2_start = 133939;
var time_part4_spin2_end = 135684;
var time_part4_spin3_start = 139521;
var time_part4_spin3_end = 140916;
var time_part4_spin4_start = 145102;
var time_part4_spin4_end = 146846;
var time_part4_spin5_start = 147893;
var time_part4_spin5_end = 148416;
var time_part4_spin6_start = 156265;
var time_part4_spin6_end = 157486;
var time_part4_spin7_start = 159056;
var time_part4_spin7_end = 160277;
var time_part4_spin8_start = 161846;
var time_part4_spin8_end = 163067;
var time_part4_spin9_start = 164637;
var time_part4_spin9_end = 165858;
var time_part5 = 167428;
var time_part6 = 178591;
var time_part7 = 223242;
var time_part7b = 228823;
var time_part7c = 234405;
var time_part7d = 239986;
var time_part7e = 242777;
var time_part7f = 244085;
var time_kiai1 = 245567;
var time_kiai1_end = 267195;
var time_part_8 = 267893;
var time_kiai2 = 290218;
var time_kiai2_end = 311149;
var time_part_9 = 312544;
var time_part_10 = 357195;
var time_end = 379521;
var time_scoreboard = 396265;

// --- BACKGROUND

var bg_height = 768.0;
var widescreen_scale =  1024.0 / 1366.0;
var sb_scale = 480.0 / bg_height;

var bg = new Sprite("bg.png", Background, Centre);
bg.scale(sb_scale);
bg.fade(time_sb_zero, 0);

// --- BLACK SUN

var bs1 = new Sprite("bs1.png", Foreground, Centre);
var bs2 = new Sprite("bs2.png", Foreground, Centre);
var bs3 = new Sprite("bs3.png", Foreground, Centre);

bs1.scale(sb_scale);
bs2.scale(sb_scale);
bs3.scale(sb_scale * 2);

bs1.fade(0);
bs2.fade(0);
bs3.fade(0);

bs1.moveX(320);
bs2.moveX(320);
bs3.moveX(320);
bs1.moveY(240);
bs2.moveY(240);
bs3.moveY(240);

bs1.rotate(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard, 0, 200);
bs2.rotate(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard, 0, -250);
bs3.rotate(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard, 0, -50);

bs1.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);
bs2.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);
bs3.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);

// --- CIRCLES

var a = new Sprite("a.png", Foreground, Centre);
var b = new Sprite("b.png", Foreground, Centre);
var c = new Sprite("c.png", Foreground, Centre);

a.scale(sb_scale);
b.scale(sb_scale);
c.scale(sb_scale);

a.fade(0);
b.fade(0);
c.fade(0);

a.moveX(320);
b.moveX(320);
c.moveX(320);
a.moveY(240);
b.moveY(240);
c.moveY(240);

a.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);
b.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);
c.additive(time_sb_zero, time_scoreboard);

function make_bump(a,b,c, time, duration, opacity0, opacity1, instant) {
	var blue = 22312 - 22224;

	var ta =  time;
	var tb =  time;
	var tc =  time;

	if (instant) {
		tb =  tb + blue / 2;
		tc =  tc + blue;
		duration = duration - blue;
		
	} else {
		ta =  ta - blue * 2;
		tb =  tb - blue;
	}
	

	a.fade(1, ta, ta + duration, opacity0, opacity1);
	b.fade(1, tb, tb + duration, opacity0, opacity1);
	c.fade(1, tc, tc + duration, opacity0, opacity1);
}

function make_bumps(a,b,c, time_start, time_end, duration, opacity0, opacity1, instant) {
	var t = time_start;
	while (t < time_end) {
		var d = duration;
		if (t + d > time_end) {
			d = t - time_end;
		}

		make_bump(a,b,c, t, duration, opacity0, opacity1, instant);
		t = t + duration;
	}
}

function spin(a,b,c, time_start, time_end, type, from, to) {
	var deg_to_rad = 3.14 / 180;
	var angle = 90 * deg_to_rad;
	a.rotate(type, time_start, time_end, angle * from, angle * to);
	b.rotate(type, time_start, time_end, - angle * from, - angle * to);
	c.rotate(type, time_start, time_end, angle * from, angle * to);
}

function spinbump(a,b,c, time_start, time_end, type, from, to, opacity0, opacity1, instant) {
	make_bump(a,b,c, time_start, time_end - time_start, opacity0, opacity1, instant);
	spin(a,b,c, time_start, time_end, type, from, to);
}

function shake(a,b,c, time, duration, amplitude, times) {
	var x = 320;
	var y = 240;

	var i = 0;
	while (i < times) {
		var t = time + duration * i;
		
		a.moveY(t, t + duration, y + amplitude, y - amplitude);
		a.moveY(t + duration, y);
		
		b.moveY(t, t + duration, y - amplitude, y + amplitude);
		b.moveY(t + duration, y);
		
		c.moveY(t, t + duration, y + amplitude, y - amplitude);
		c.moveY(t + duration, y);
		
		i = i + 1;
	}
}

function wave(a,b,c, time, duration, amplitude, times) {
	var x = 320;
	var y = 240;

	var i = 0;
	while (i < times) {
		var t = time + duration * i;

		a.moveX(t, t + duration / 2, x - amplitude * 0.5, x + amplitude * 0.5);
		a.moveX(t + duration / 2, t + duration, x + amplitude * 0.5, x);
		
		b.moveX(t, t + duration / 2, x - amplitude, x + amplitude);
		b.moveX(t + duration / 2, t + duration, x + amplitude, x);
		
		c.moveX(t, t + duration / 2, x + amplitude, x - amplitude);
		c.moveX(t + duration / 2, t + duration, x - amplitude, x);

		i = i + 1;
	}
}

function glow(a,b,c, time_start, time_end) {
	var blue = 22312 - 22224;

	a.color(1, time_start, time_end, 255, 255, 255, 200, 200, 255);
	a.color(time_end, time_end + blue * 4, 200, 200, 255, 255, 255, 255);
	b.color(1, time_start, time_end, 255, 255, 255, 200, 200, 255);
	b.color(time_end, time_end + blue * 4, 200, 200, 255, 255, 255, 255);
	c.color(1, time_start, time_end, 255, 255, 255, 200, 200, 255);
	c.color(time_end, time_end + blue * 4, 200, 200, 255, 255, 255, 255);
}

function scalebump(a, b, c, trigger_name, start_time, end_time, duration, base_scale) {
	a.startTriggerLoop(trigger_name, start_time, end_time);
	a.scale(1, 0, duration, base_scale * 0.90, base_scale);
	a.endLoop();
	b.startTriggerLoop(trigger_name, start_time, end_time);
	b.scale(1, 0, duration, base_scale * 1.10, base_scale);
	b.endLoop();
	c.startTriggerLoop(trigger_name, start_time, end_time);
	c.scale(1, 0, duration, base_scale * 2 * 1.05, base_scale * 2);
	c.endLoop();
}

var bump_offset = - beat_duration * 4;
var bump_duration = beat_duration * 8;

// intro / part 1 / 2 / 3

make_bumps(a,b,c, time_intro, time_part1 + bump_offset, bump_duration, 0.3, 0.1, false);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part1 + bump_offset, time_part2 + bump_offset, bump_duration, 0.5, 0.2, false);

spin(a,b,c, time_part2, time_part3, 2, 0, 1);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part2 + bump_offset, time_part3 + bump_offset, bump_duration, 0.5, 0.3, false);

spin(a,b,c, time_part3, time_part4, 0, 1, 10);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part3 + bump_offset, time_part4 + bump_offset * 3, bump_duration, 1, 0.6, false);

make_bump(a,b,c, time_part3_end, time_part4 - time_part3_end, 0.6, 0, false);

// part 4

var shake_amplitude = 8;

spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin1_start, time_part4_spin1_end, 0, 0, 1, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin2_start, time_part4_spin2_end, 0, 1, 2, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin3_start, time_part4_spin3_end, 0, 2, 3, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin4_start, time_part4_spin4_end, 0, 3, 4, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin5_start, time_part4_spin5_end, 0, 4, 5, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin6_start, time_part4_spin6_end, 0, 5, 6, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin7_start, time_part4_spin7_end, 0, 6, 7, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin8_start, time_part4_spin8_end, 0, 7, 8, 0.8, 0.2, true);
spinbump(a,b,c, time_part4_spin9_start, time_part4_spin9_end, 0, 8, 9, 0.8, 0.2, true);

shake(a,b,c, 128358, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude, 2);
shake(a,b,c, 128881, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 2, 2);
shake(a,b,c, 129405, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 4, 2);

// part 5 / 6

spin(a,b,c, time_part5, time_part6, 2, 9, 10);
spin(a,b,c, time_part6, time_part7, 0, 10, 20);

shake(a,b,c, 180684, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(a,b,c, 183474, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 3);
shake(a,b,c, 186265, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(a,b,c, 189056, beat_duration, shake_amplitude / 4, 2);
shake(a,b,c, 191846, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(a,b,c, 194637, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 3);
shake(a,b,c, 197428, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(a,b,c, 197428, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(a,b,c, 200218, beat_duration, shake_amplitude / 4, 2);
shake(a,b,c, 206323, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 1);
shake(a,b,c, 211381, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 3);
shake(a,b,c, 217486, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 1);

// part 7

spin(a,b,c, time_part7c, time_part7f, 2, 20, 29);

make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part7, time_part7b, beat_duration * 4, 0.8, 0, true);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part7b, time_part7c, beat_duration * 2, 0.5, 0.1, true);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part7c, time_part7d, beat_duration, 0.4, 0.2, true);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part7d, time_part7e, beat_duration / 2, 0.4, 0.3, true);
make_bumps(a,b,c, time_part7e, time_part7f, beat_duration / 4, 0.5, 0.4, true);
make_bump(a,b,c, time_part7f, beat_duration / 4, 0.4, 0, true);

shake(a,b,c, 230916, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 4, 14);
shake(a,b,c, 231614, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 6, 14);
shake(a,b,c, 232312, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 8, 14);
shake(a,b,c, 233707, beat_duration / 8, shake_amplitude / 6, 14);
shake(a,b,c, 242777, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 8, 17);

// kiai 1

function kiai(a,b,c, bs1,bs2,bs3, start_time, end_time) {
	var beat_duration = 22312 - 21963;
	var offset = start_time - 245567;

	var time_kiai1_start = 245567 + offset;
	var time_kiai1_end = 250102 + offset;
	var time_kiai2_start = 251149 + offset;
	var time_kiai2_end = 256381 + offset;
	var time_kiai3_start = 256730 + offset;
	var time_kiai3_end = 261439 + offset;
	var time_kiai4_start = 262312 + offset;
	var time_kiai4_end = 267195 + offset;
	
	if (time_kiai4_end > end_time) {
		time_kiai4_end = end_time;
	}
	
	// black sun
	
	make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai1_start, time_kiai1_end - time_kiai1_start, 0, 1, true);
	make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai1_end, time_kiai2_start - time_kiai1_end, 0.2, 0, true);
	make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai2_start, time_kiai2_end - time_kiai2_start, 0, 1, true);
	make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai2_end, time_kiai3_start - time_kiai2_end, 0.2, 0, true);
	make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai3_start, time_kiai3_end - time_kiai3_start, 0, 1, true);

	bs1.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundClap, start_time, end_time);
	bs2.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundClap, start_time, end_time);
	bs3.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundClap, start_time, end_time);
	shake(bs1,bs2,bs3, 0, beat_duration / 4, 4, 2);
	bs1.endLoop();
	bs2.endLoop();
	bs3.endLoop();

	// circles

	make_bump(a,b,c, time_kiai1_start, time_kiai1_end - time_kiai1_start, 0.3, 0.4, false);
	make_bump(a,b,c, time_kiai2_start, time_kiai2_end - time_kiai2_start, 0.3, 0.4, false);
	make_bump(a,b,c, time_kiai3_start, time_kiai3_end - time_kiai3_start, 0.3, 0.4, false);
	
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai1_start, time_kiai1_end, 2, 29, 50);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai1_end, time_kiai2_start, 0, 50, 49);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai2_start, time_kiai2_end, 2, 49, 70);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai2_end, time_kiai3_start, 0, 70, 69);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai3_start, time_kiai3_end, 2, 69, 90);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai3_end, time_kiai4_start, 0, 90, 89);
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai4_start, time_kiai4_end, 2, 89, 120);
	
	spin(a,b,c, time_kiai4_end, time_kiai4_end + beat_duration / 4, 1, 120, 29);
	
	glow(a,b,c, time_kiai1_start, time_kiai1_end);
	glow(a,b,c, time_kiai2_start, time_kiai2_end);
	glow(a,b,c, time_kiai3_start, time_kiai3_end);
	glow(a,b,c, time_kiai4_start, time_kiai4_end);

	make_bump(a,b,c, time_kiai4_end, beat_duration / 4, 0.4, 0, true);
	
	a.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundFinish, start_time, end_time);
	b.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundFinish, start_time, end_time);
	c.startTriggerLoop(HitSoundFinish, start_time, end_time);
	wave(a,b,c, 0, beat_duration * 8, 16, 1);
	a.endLoop();
	b.endLoop();
	c.endLoop();
}

kiai(a,b,c, bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai1, time_kiai1_end);

// part 8

scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_8, time_kiai2, beat_duration, sb_scale);

make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, 288823, time_kiai2 - 288823, 1, 0, true);

// kiai 2

kiai(a,b,c, bs1,bs2,bs3, time_kiai2, time_kiai2_end);

// part 9

scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_9, time_part_10, beat_duration, sb_scale);

// part 10

var part10_eigth = (time_end - time_part_10) / 8.0;
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10, time_part_10 + part10_eigth, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.90);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 2, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.85);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 2, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 3, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.80);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 3, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 4, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.75);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 4, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 5, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.70);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 5, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 6, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.65);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 6, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 7, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.60);
scalebump(bs1,bs2,bs3, HitSoundClap, time_part_10 + part10_eigth * 7, time_end, beat_duration, sb_scale * 0.55);

shake(bs1,bs2,bs3, 364870, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(bs1,bs2,bs3, 365567, beat_duration / 4, shake_amplitude / 4, 7);
shake(bs1,bs2,bs3, 365567, beat_duration / 2, shake_amplitude / 4, 5);

// end

make_bump(bs1,bs2,bs3, time_end, time_scoreboard - time_end, 1, 0, true);

Last edited by Damnae 2013-12-12T13:25:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2013-12-11T20:55:27+00:00

Damnae, you are god.

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2013-12-11T20:59:48+00:00

have my babies, Damnae
хере ви гоу.
предложения, офк.
00:22:486 (1,3) - нравится как тут звучат драм клэпы
01:46:730 (4) - нормал финиш
01:48:823 (1) - ну ты понял
01:49:521 (4) - и тут нормал финиш
^все на белые тики, офк
02:30:335 (3) - на конец слайдера софтовый вистл очень круто звучит
02:48:649 (4) - эта секция звучит очень тихо, знаю почему, но лучше сделать немного громче
02:56:149 (2) - замени вистл на белом тике на нормалвистл и тут 02:56:498 (3) - тут оба
03:31:381 (3) - финиш бы на белый тик
03:42:544 (3,4) - а тут на красных два софтовых финиша
04:22:137 (7) - софтовый финиш тут тоже можно влепить
04:33:300 (7) - и тут
тут кстати можно сделать как ты сделал позже, а именно, клэпами
04:47:428 (1) - а тут финиш как по мне лучше заменить на драмфиниш
05:19:433 (1) - может лучше заменить это на триплет и серкл? Мне не очень нравится что тут пропущен ббт
05:37:312 (2,3,1) - этот стак выглядит страшно, кинь слайдер на x: 184 y: 232 или что-то вроде этого
05:38:009 (2) - софт финиш на белый тик
вроде все что зацепилось, удачи с картой

Last edited by Natteke desu 2013-12-12T16:26:42+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Damnae

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Damnae 2013-12-11T21:08:06+00:00

EvilElvisV2 wrote:
have my babies, Damnae

sorry

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2013-12-11T21:10:24+00:00

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2013-12-13T14:41:10+00:00

Hello hello hello ! You requested a mod

General thoughts:

No tags? :---(
Check your AiMod, it says that you have unsnapped things
04:16:730 - Has 2 timing points, make sure to remove one of them.

These are suggestions, feel free to ignore them

Nsane:

00:29:114 (8,1) - Ugly overlap, it even showed while playing. I recommend to make a blanket between them
01:14:288 (2) - Consider unstacking this, feels kinda weird because you don't normally use stacked notes and last time you did was 01:08:358 (1) - here so players can confuse that the note will be 1/4 late
01:13:416 (5) - Ups forgot this ^
02:50:044 (9) - Maybe stack it with 02:50:218 (1) - ? It plays better for me :p
03:02:079 (2) - Distance pls
03:50:218 (3) - A finish here sounds nice, what do you think?
04:10:277 (1) - Might be my personal preference but what do you think lowering the velo to 1.0x because the music does a bit down also (?) and it would be fun to play imo
04:18:474 (2,3) - Ughhh I was so sure this started 1/4 later, maybe CTRL + G and then 04:19:172 (4) - CTRL + G this too?
04:49:870 (19) - Kinda long combo here, maybe NC 04:48:823 (7) - here?
04:51:527 (1) - Maybe do a correct blanket?
06:19:695 (1) - Maybe start this 1/4 earlier?

GL and have my star :3

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-13T21:35:31+00:00

fixed most of the stuff from Elvis and Asphyxia's mods, thanks a lot!

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-12-13T22:40:19+00:00

My mod: This must be approved quickly.

Damnae x Natteke xoxoxoxoxox

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-13T22:43:20+00:00

I'm trying as hard as I can

Saoji

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Saoji 2013-12-15T01:13:04+00:00

Really good map. *_*
Awesome storyboard. *_*

03:32:602 (3) - I would put this at x:148 y:237 (to keep the coming up of the triangle more constant). It doesnt really change the gameplay.
04:27:893 (1) - I would add a kiai time just on this note for the cheer up haha
03:54:579 - I would add a note like this http://puu.sh/5MTfq.jpg or something.
03:58:591 (1,2) - The blanket between those notes is a bit awkward.. Maybe a slider instead of a single note for (1).
05:10:189 (3) - http://puu.sh/5MTIR.jpg ?

Good job

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-15T02:52:56+00:00

fixed first 2, thanks Yales!

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happy30 2013-12-16T06:57:46+00:00

02:02:777 (1) - 02:13:939 (1) - Can you change this into a regular slow slider? ._. This is not allowed anymore.
03:08:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase distance snap on these strong beats?

05:19:434 (7) - make prev/next equal
05:30:596 (1) - feel unsure about the rhythm here, I think this slider should start 1/4 later and make a triplet here or so.

edit: BUBBLE #1

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-16T19:29:26+00:00

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-12-16T23:03:16+00:00

Hi there~~mod for request

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Nsane]

00:34:172 - i'd like to add a note here with finish to make the transition more smooth.
05:57:893 (3,4,5,6,7) - around here, i'd like to reduce the volume gradually, eg, 5% or 8% each combo until 06:04:870 (6) - .
06:04:870 (6) - NC?

Incredible excellent!

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Natteke 2013-12-16T23:11:21+00:00

done!

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Scorpiour 2013-12-16T23:17:59+00:00

Bubble #2~~!!

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Garven 2013-12-17T01:45:09+00:00

Not much to pick at here.

You're going to have to rename the difficulty to Marathon, sorry.

04:58:591 (12) - Maybe add the whistle to the slider body?
05:22:835 (6,7,8) - For some reason these didn't really read as 1/4 sliders to me. I'm used to you going to .5x speed during subdued parts like this, so I'd expect 1/4 sliders like this to be a lot closer together. Also after a lot of spacing like with 05:21:265 (2,3) - doesn't help either.
05:39:056 (1,2,3) - Move these down and right 2-3 grids to adjust for stacking. Looks odd after your manual stack at 05:37:312 (2,3,1) - otherwise

Amazing work as always.

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-17T06:43:56+00:00

done and done and done!

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Garven 2013-12-18T03:35:18+00:00

ZOMFG THIS FUKIN TRACK IS SO SICK FUAAARRRKKKK.mp3

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Lust 2013-12-18T03:36:03+00:00

CONGRATULATIONS

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2013-12-18T03:36:56+00:00

now it's closer, huh?
congrats

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Scorpiour 2013-12-18T03:37:02+00:00

Best of 2013 !!

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2013-12-18T06:03:55+00:00

Best approved map 2013

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2013-12-18T08:23:39+00:00

Gratzz!! Damne and Natteke!!^^

Natteke

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Natteke 2013-12-18T10:22:21+00:00

dayum, thanks garven!

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Aqo 2013-12-18T10:56:37+00:00

Garven wrote:
You're going to have to rename the difficulty to Marathon

Never got the point of this

You can already tell how long a map is from the time which already displayed on your screen a million times

grats Natteke

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Asphyxia 2013-12-18T11:25:15+00:00

Graz!

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happy30 2013-12-18T12:10:51+00:00

GZ