Hey, you requested a mod from me, so here you have it :3
[General]
01:04:911 - add a second kiai fountain?
[Devil]
It says it has audio lead-in conflict with kinda every diff XD
First impression: This map played pretty well, but sometimes it was weird because some sliders were buggy or something o,o
Placing & issues:
00:17:672 (7) - o,o shouldn't this be a circle only?
00:28:642 (1) - i think this would be better at.. x: 144 y: 216 xD
00:40:060 (3) - place the second white point to: x: 240 y: 280
00:40:956 (5) - rotate this one by 50° the full combo should look like http://puu.sh/2x4C6 this then.
00:57:971 (3) - place it to x: 380 y: 36
00:57:971 (3) - the second white tick should be at x: 340 y: 136
00:58:754 (5,6) - move a bit to the left
01:01:105 (1) - this slider looks like a weirdo o_o straight or .. straight ok xD
01:05:583 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2x4Iv i suggest something like this.
01:09:165 (4,5) - same here~
01:13:642 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this really threw me out of my rhythm. i dunno, it's nice, but i'm not a big fan of it.
Overall: I really loev this beatmap! Sometimes i would have added some more beats, but that's up to you. nice :3
[eveless]
First impression: o.o'
Placing & issues:
00:08:045 (3) - unsnapped slider (or w/e THIS is called: http://puu.sh/2x4UN
00:10:956 (1) - i don't like the touching of this (how 1 touches number 7)
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - well it looks nice.. but it plays weird :c it's too slow.. and .. yeah ><
00:22:821 (3,4) - add a slider instead of 2 circles? i think it fits better than the current situation. .
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks terribru nice! :3
00:31:329 (4) - Nc because .. the lyrics? o:
00:46:105 (4,5) - this is another part which plays pretty weird. i don't suggest this blue tick-combo here, just make it normal
00:53:493 (6) - why is this ending on a blue tick? D:
00:54:948 (5) - please, please shorten this slider by 1 tick. it just sounds wrong.
Overall: This is really interesting beatmapped, but it just not my type of map. (if you want, ignore all my suggestions, if you feel it would destroy your map) It's very confusing >< but you did a nice job, i guess. Also, the hitsounds sound really interesting!
[Insane]
First impression: i wanna fc this on hidden! NOW! xD
Placing:
00:07:710 (2) - move to x: 312 y: 88
00:13:083 (2) - move to x: 200 y: 320
00:16:665 (2) - move to x: 80 y: 188
00:20:135 (2,3,4) - I kinda want this a bit more to the left.
00:42:299 (6) - move it a bit to the bottom
00:49:463 (3) - i want a hitsound here, but i dunno which one .. clap? finish? xD
00:53:941 (1) - rotate by -11°? it looks like a nicer bow then
01:15:769 (2) - move to x: 112 y: 188
01:17:001 (7) - move to x: 260 y: 252
01:19:799 (3) - move to: x: 388 y: 176
Overall: good job :3 I WANNA FC THIS ON HIDDEN NOW!
[Kiiwa]
First impression: ok.. interesting xD very slow though
Placing and issues:
00:07:710 (1,2) - , 00:11:292 (2,3) - 00:12:187 (4,5) - and 00:16:665 (2,3) - feels really weird to play. think about adding some rhythm changes
00:48:568 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - i really like the placing of these circles
Overall: Well, it looks nice, but same as eveless - it's not my type of map. that's why i didn't really point many things, it would destroy the overall.
i need to take a break, i'll mod easy normal and hard irc if i find some issues if that is ok ^^
[General]
01:04:911 - add a second kiai fountain?
[Devil]
It says it has audio lead-in conflict with kinda every diff XD
First impression: This map played pretty well, but sometimes it was weird because some sliders were buggy or something o,o
Placing & issues:
00:17:672 (7) - o,o shouldn't this be a circle only?
00:28:642 (1) - i think this would be better at.. x: 144 y: 216 xD
00:40:060 (3) - place the second white point to: x: 240 y: 280
00:40:956 (5) - rotate this one by 50° the full combo should look like http://puu.sh/2x4C6 this then.
00:57:971 (3) - place it to x: 380 y: 36
00:57:971 (3) - the second white tick should be at x: 340 y: 136
00:58:754 (5,6) - move a bit to the left
01:01:105 (1) - this slider looks like a weirdo o_o straight or .. straight ok xD
01:05:583 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2x4Iv i suggest something like this.
01:09:165 (4,5) - same here~
01:13:642 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this really threw me out of my rhythm. i dunno, it's nice, but i'm not a big fan of it.
Overall: I really loev this beatmap! Sometimes i would have added some more beats, but that's up to you. nice :3
[eveless]
First impression: o.o'
Placing & issues:
00:08:045 (3) - unsnapped slider (or w/e THIS is called: http://puu.sh/2x4UN
00:10:956 (1) - i don't like the touching of this (how 1 touches number 7)
00:13:195 (3,4,5) - well it looks nice.. but it plays weird :c it's too slow.. and .. yeah ><
00:22:821 (3,4) - add a slider instead of 2 circles? i think it fits better than the current situation. .
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this looks terribru nice! :3
00:31:329 (4) - Nc because .. the lyrics? o:
00:46:105 (4,5) - this is another part which plays pretty weird. i don't suggest this blue tick-combo here, just make it normal
00:53:493 (6) - why is this ending on a blue tick? D:
00:54:948 (5) - please, please shorten this slider by 1 tick. it just sounds wrong.
Overall: This is really interesting beatmapped, but it just not my type of map. (if you want, ignore all my suggestions, if you feel it would destroy your map) It's very confusing >< but you did a nice job, i guess. Also, the hitsounds sound really interesting!
[Insane]
First impression: i wanna fc this on hidden! NOW! xD
Placing:
00:07:710 (2) - move to x: 312 y: 88
00:13:083 (2) - move to x: 200 y: 320
00:16:665 (2) - move to x: 80 y: 188
00:20:135 (2,3,4) - I kinda want this a bit more to the left.
00:42:299 (6) - move it a bit to the bottom
00:49:463 (3) - i want a hitsound here, but i dunno which one .. clap? finish? xD
00:53:941 (1) - rotate by -11°? it looks like a nicer bow then
01:15:769 (2) - move to x: 112 y: 188
01:17:001 (7) - move to x: 260 y: 252
01:19:799 (3) - move to: x: 388 y: 176
Overall: good job :3 I WANNA FC THIS ON HIDDEN NOW!
[Kiiwa]
First impression: ok.. interesting xD very slow though
Placing and issues:
00:07:710 (1,2) - , 00:11:292 (2,3) - 00:12:187 (4,5) - and 00:16:665 (2,3) - feels really weird to play. think about adding some rhythm changes
00:48:568 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - i really like the placing of these circles
Overall: Well, it looks nice, but same as eveless - it's not my type of map. that's why i didn't really point many things, it would destroy the overall.
i need to take a break, i'll mod easy normal and hard irc if i find some issues if that is ok ^^