Hi SCV :3 from my queue
I love Owl City~
Hard
00:07:096 (4) - maybe NC to make it more readable, after all this is only a Hard diff
00:09:458 (4) - add whistle ?
00:15:600 (1) - maye finish on head
00:26:938 (1) - finish
00:30:718 (1) - ^
00:34:025 (4) - finish at end
00:42:056 (1) - finish on head
00:45:836 (1) - ^
00:49:615 (1) - finish
00:52:922 (6,7,1) - the flow here is no so good, especially when with DT, maybe make #1 lower, to like (472,212) or so; or maybe move #7 and #1 together further to the right, to (428,156) or so
00:57:174 (1) - switch to normal sample with finish, replacing the clap ?
01:00:954 (1) - ^
01:01:899 - without a slider starting from here, the rhythm feels blank, replace 01:01:663 (3) - with a circle and start a 1/2 slider from 01:01:899 - ?
01:02:608 (5) - of course same here
01:04:497 (4) - simply adding a soft finish here would sound really nice
01:06:623 (1) - the clap on head seems not needed
01:06:623 (1,2) - forming a tripple with 1/5 slider at this point makes less sense than doing so at 01:07:096 - , as there is actually a tripple snare in the background
01:26:938 (4) - finish at end
01:31:190 (1) - finish on head
01:34:497 (5) - finish at end
01:42:529 (1) - finish
01:46:308 (1) - finish on head
01:49:615 (4) - finish at end
01:57:647 (1) - finish
02:04:970 (5) - finish at end
02:23:513 (4,5,6,1) - similar flow issue appears here, just remember players only play half of a slider, especially at a high speed, so please try to make the note #4 in the path from the mid of #3 to the head of #5, also making #5's head to #6's head and to #1's head a more smooth route. Actually it won't be so hard. because the 02:22:686 (1,2,3) - these note's placement is kinda free to adjust
02:27:647 (6) - finish at end
02:35:442 (1) - finish
02:46:190 (5) - maybe make this a 3/4 slider and remove the circle after it
02:47:489 (4,6) - similar opinion with the ones in the previous chorus
02:57:647 (4) - finish at end
03:01:663 (4) - ^
03:05:206 (4) - ^
03:07:804 - use drum clap and finish here just like 02:38:749 (4) -
Normal
02:22:686 (1) - this is too far
add more finish according to what I mentioned above
others are really nice
Easy
I noticed that you added finish at the fast part of the song in this diff. So maybe make it consistent in the other two diffs. It sounds quite nice
hmm. there are more finish sounds throughout this diff, do the same to N and H. It would be really nice
Please make the kiai time in this diff consistent with the other two. End it at 02:38:749 - , instead of 02:39:104 -
02:38:749 (4) - drum clap and finish just like the one in Hard
nothing more, nice map
Good luck
I love Owl City~
Hard
00:07:096 (4) - maybe NC to make it more readable, after all this is only a Hard diff
00:09:458 (4) - add whistle ?
00:15:600 (1) - maye finish on head
00:26:938 (1) - finish
00:30:718 (1) - ^
00:34:025 (4) - finish at end
00:42:056 (1) - finish on head
00:45:836 (1) - ^
00:49:615 (1) - finish
00:52:922 (6,7,1) - the flow here is no so good, especially when with DT, maybe make #1 lower, to like (472,212) or so; or maybe move #7 and #1 together further to the right, to (428,156) or so
00:57:174 (1) - switch to normal sample with finish, replacing the clap ?
01:00:954 (1) - ^
01:01:899 - without a slider starting from here, the rhythm feels blank, replace 01:01:663 (3) - with a circle and start a 1/2 slider from 01:01:899 - ?
01:02:608 (5) - of course same here
01:04:497 (4) - simply adding a soft finish here would sound really nice
01:06:623 (1) - the clap on head seems not needed
01:06:623 (1,2) - forming a tripple with 1/5 slider at this point makes less sense than doing so at 01:07:096 - , as there is actually a tripple snare in the background
01:26:938 (4) - finish at end
01:31:190 (1) - finish on head
01:34:497 (5) - finish at end
01:42:529 (1) - finish
01:46:308 (1) - finish on head
01:49:615 (4) - finish at end
01:57:647 (1) - finish
02:04:970 (5) - finish at end
02:23:513 (4,5,6,1) - similar flow issue appears here, just remember players only play half of a slider, especially at a high speed, so please try to make the note #4 in the path from the mid of #3 to the head of #5, also making #5's head to #6's head and to #1's head a more smooth route. Actually it won't be so hard. because the 02:22:686 (1,2,3) - these note's placement is kinda free to adjust
02:27:647 (6) - finish at end
02:35:442 (1) - finish
02:46:190 (5) - maybe make this a 3/4 slider and remove the circle after it
02:47:489 (4,6) - similar opinion with the ones in the previous chorus
02:57:647 (4) - finish at end
03:01:663 (4) - ^
03:05:206 (4) - ^
03:07:804 - use drum clap and finish here just like 02:38:749 (4) -
Normal
02:22:686 (1) - this is too far
add more finish according to what I mentioned above
others are really nice
Easy
I noticed that you added finish at the fast part of the song in this diff. So maybe make it consistent in the other two diffs. It sounds quite nice
hmm. there are more finish sounds throughout this diff, do the same to N and H. It would be really nice
Please make the kiai time in this diff consistent with the other two. End it at 02:38:749 - , instead of 02:39:104 -
02:38:749 (4) - drum clap and finish just like the one in Hard
nothing more, nice map
Good luck