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Gil Mantera's Party Dream - Chalklit Pyke II

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EEeee
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EEeee
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fufe
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fufe
Hard

01:22:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move to the right a bit done
01:24:48 (8) - New combo eh. new combo in the middle of a word? i dun like [ Chalk - lit]
01:25:84 (1) - Remove New combo

Insane
I really like this Insane, so I'm just doing some stuff that u don't need to fix, except fix ur breaks dude
00:47:71 (2) - new combo i dun see why.
00:48:73 (6) - new combo


k.. my breaks are dying every single submit.. even tho that was the only thing i fixed last time... something is up here..

Thanks a lot =)
Andrea
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Andrea
[Timing]

Offset and BPM fine.

[Normal]

00:32:56 (1,2,3) - Maybe normal hitsounds on this three notes?
01:43:88 (4) - New combo.
01:45:07 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:32:56 (1,2,3) - See normal.
01:25:84 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

01:20:31 (1,2) - I don't like this sound...
02:33:25 (1,2) - This it's hard to read and sounds bad imo.

Good job, Star.
Shinxyn
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Metroid
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Metroid
Normal
2:10:292(1) - make it start on the red tick.
03:16:49 (1) - It's slightly out of spacing to the 7.

Hard
Please make sure 1/2 beats are either not touching or slightly touching.
01:25:84 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
02:32:91 (1) - Do not leave this as a single combo.
02:35:63 (1) - Same as ^.
02:38:36 (1) - Same as ^.
02:43:80 (1) - Same as ^.
02:46:53 (1) - Same as ^.
02:49:25 (1) - Same as ^.
02:54:78 (1) - Make this start on a red tick.
03:08:32 (1) - Not spaced to the combo beforehand.
03:13:76 (1) - Same as ^.
03:16:49 (1) - Move this 1 lvl 2 grid unit up so it centers in game.

Insane
01:25:84 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
02:32:91 (1) - Same spots in normal, Do NOT have them be single combos.
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
fufe

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

[Normal]
00:32:56 (1,2,3) - Maybe normal hitsounds on this three notes? seems wierd to have 3 normal sound notes for the whole song.. o well couldnt hurt i guess

01:43:88 (4) - New combo. why?
01:45:07 (1) - Remove new combo. ^

[Hard]
01:25:84 (1) - Remove new combo. k

[Insane]
01:20:31 (1,2) - I don't like this sound... adjusted
02:33:25 (1,2) - This it's hard to read and sounds bad imo. mmm..leaving alone


Shinxyn wrote:

Audio is quiet... hitsounds too loud >_<~ take volume down 2 or 3 ticks k
Preferred if you got rid of all sliderslide-whistles ;;

Normal-
00:37:15 (5) - don't like claps on all sides of this i do
00:51:79 (3) - get rid of finish on first part at least fine :(
01:48:99 (3) - get rid of finish? :( moved hitsounds around a little
02:22:01 (1,1) - I don't think the finishes are needed much.. k
02:46:53 (6) - remove clap?
02:49:25 (6) - ^ and maybe finish instead ^naw
Normal doesn't need so many triples imo, but oh well Stacked triples are easy imo

Hard-
02:24:40 (1) - finish in the mist of the no-hitsound section annoyed me, remove plz wuups

Metroid wrote:

Normal
2:10:292(1) - make it start on the red tick. eh? no
03:16:49 (1) - It's slightly out of spacing to the 7. that doesnt matter =z


Hard
Please make sure 1/2 beats are either not touching or slightly touching. naw, it plays fine =x
01:25:84 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand. fixed above
02:32:91 (1) - Do not leave this as a single combo. keeping it unless you can give a good reason, its fine imo.
02:35:63 (1) - Same as ^.
02:38:36 (1) - Same as ^.
02:43:80 (1) - Same as ^.
02:46:53 (1) - Same as ^.
02:49:25 (1) - Same as ^.
02:54:78 (1) - Make this start on a red tick. hm. not that it matters but meh ok.
03:08:32 (1) - Not spaced to the combo beforehand. blah fine
03:13:76 (1) - Same as ^.
03:16:49 (1) - Move this 1 lvl 2 grid unit up so it centers in game. sure

Insane
01:25:84 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
02:32:91 (1) - Same spots in normal, Do NOT have them be single combos.
Thanks everyone. So fast at answering requests X.X <3sauses
anonymous_old
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Came across this when doing Random so I thought I'd play and see if there are any new things I've noticed.

Insane
00:51:79 (9) - Poor positioning.
02:22:01 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Notice the timing here. There's a beat 1/2 after the first spinner but there's one 1/1 after the second. This confused me. Make it consistent so you don't trip players up so much!
02:34:02 (2) - Eh, seems wrong. Maybe you meant to put it 1/4 later?
02:36:74 (2) - Same. Now it looks intentional but I don't think it matches the music.
02:38:53 (2) - New combo?
02:49:42 (2) - New combo?
02:57:08 (1,2,1,2) - Wat? Move (2) 1/4 later?

For the bell dings you could storyboard something fancy, like a flash. Or maybe kiai.
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
fufe

strager wrote:

Came across this when doing Random so I thought I'd play and see if there are any new things I've noticed.

Insane
00:51:79 (9) - Poor positioning. ? follows snaps
02:22:01 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Notice the timing here- added hit
02:34:02 (2) - Eh, seems wrong. Maybe you meant to put it 1/4 later?
02:36:74 (2) - Same. Now it looks intentional but I don't think it matches the music. -removed all doubletaps,
02:38:53 (2) - New combo?
02:49:42 (2) - New combo? k
02:57:08 (1,2,1,2) - Wat? Move (2) 1/4 later? part of doubletap removal

For the bell dings you could storyboard something fancy, like a flash. Or maybe kiai.
i havnt tried storyboard at all =x Thanx for the revisit tho
Nakata Yuji
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foulcoon
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foulcoon
The timing seems to get a bit late at the ending, I got pretty good results (4 100s) with this timing:
BPM: 176.235
Offset: 22,179

[Insane]
Some of the stacks of 2 seem a bit out of place if theres a gap before them, but thats just my opinion. Do what you want with it.

That's basically it, this is pretty rankable as is, but I'd rather not see any timing go un-tweaked ;P
fufe
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fufe
Timing fixed, got rid of one more doubletap in insane. Thanks for checking!
Someday i wish to master perfect timing like you ; ;
foulcoon
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foulcoon
Great job with everything really. I'm not super confident in that timing, but it gives me some good results. Deserves this bubble!
RemmyX25
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fufe
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fufe
meh do what you gotta do.

So i increased the volumes a bit. Now using custom soundset stuff. I think that was what you were suggesting, I've never dealt with custom sound sets before. I agree that normal and hard sound nicer but insane slider ticks are mainly drowned out still if thats ok =z


-fullsubmit updated
RemmyX25
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fufe
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fufe
This nazi mod is upsets me a bit. I find it quite unecessary. Might as well get on it tho . . .

i moved 3,4 one PIXEL down. and now its within 1 pixel of the 2. If you say this still isnt aligned then you have an insane eagle eye for less than 1/4th grid lvl 3 alignment at insanelvl speed. Also it means you arent checking 'play' mode for nazi alignments as both sides of this have stacked notes. =p
foulcoon
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foulcoon
Remmy's bubble pop was completely unnecessary, as were the custom hitsounds. They're amplified to the point of obnoxiousness. The alignment issue if you can even call it an issue still "stands" but there's nothing wrong as can be cleared by actually playing the damn map. Take your bubble back, and the next mod should note not to be ridiculous.
fufe
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fufe
hm..custom hitsounds.. so should i turn them back down? or get rid of them again? obnoxious isnt a fun word =x
foulcoon
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Zerostarry
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Just as a note, in normal:

01:01:49 (5) - This is pretty gay for normal difficulty, with the slider tick rate you set, this could have done a much better job being 1 long slider, instead of a short one with 5 or so repeats. No way to fix it now without redoing alot of shit, so i'm lettin' remmy take this rank.
fufe
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fufe
I agree to a degree but its kinda sorta minor imo. I dont care enough to change it at this point.
Zerostarry
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fufe wrote:

I agree to a degree but its kinda sorta minor imo. I dont care enough to change it at this point.
The thing is, you can't change it. You would have to change everything after it - the whole map :p

Just keep it in mind for next time
RemmyX25
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Well, with that said, and working stuff out with fufe, I think this is good to rank.

I also want to apologize for what was, i'll admit, a bit of a nazi mod. It was something that I noticed when watching |auto|, and I thought it looked a little sloppy, as minor as it was.
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