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Famishin - Mecha Koi Ranman* (Piano Ver.) [OsuMania]

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TOKI
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月1日 水曜日 at 20:32:15 午後

Artist: Famishin
Title: Mecha Koi Ranman* (Piano Ver.)
Source: Tenshin Ranman
Tags: happy go lucky!? yuzu soft opening
BPM: 80
Filesize: 7446kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K NM - 4Key (3.12 stars, 323 notes)
  2. 7K NM - 7Key (3.27 stars, 526 notes)
Download: Famishin - Mecha Koi Ranman* (Piano Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My fifth beatmap :D and first ranked beatmap
Thanks everyone :D
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Famishin - メチャ恋らんまん☆ (Piano Ver.)
7K NM - completed
4K NM - completed
retadidas
小七来帮唾弃哥MOD啦,前排支持!

7K
00:32:199 (32199|5,32199|0,32574|4,32574|1,32949|0,32949|5) - 这里可以考虑改成4,6 3,5 4,6双键和前面对应
00:38:199 (38199|5,38199|0,38574|2,38574|4,38949|5,38949|0) - 同上

00:44:199 (44199|5,44199|0) - 这里改成4,6轨道比较合适

01:27:699 (87699|1) - 这里第四轨道最好也放一个note和后面两组对应
01:30:699 (90699|0) - 同上
01:33:699 (93699|1) - 同上
01:36:699 (96699|1) - 同上
01:39:699 (99699|1) - 同上
01:45:699 (105699|1) - 同上
01:51:699 (111699|1) - 同上
01:54:699 (114699|0) - 同上
01:57:699 (117699|1) - 同上
01:59:574 (119574|2) - 同上
后面还有就不一一列出了,当然你若是考虑没有重音问题,可以无视

02:02:199 (122199|4,122199|1,122199|2) - 这里放3个note重音感觉有点多,个人感觉2个比较合适

8K
01:07:824 (67824|1,67824|7,67824|3,67824|5) - 这里应该也放一个SP,和前面对应
01:10:449 (70449|3,70449|4,70449|2) - 同上
01:21:324 (81324|2,81324|6,81324|5,81324|4) - 同上
01:22:449 (82449|4,82449|5,82449|2) - 同上
01:23:574 (83574|2,83574|5,83574|4) - 同上
01:24:324 (84324|5,84324|2,84324|1) - 同上

01:38:574 (98574|0) - SP移动到轨道1较为合适
02:02:574 (122574|0) - 同上,感觉较为突兀

有些和7K相同的地方我就不再罗列,8K有个问题就是前半部分SP放的很多,后半部分虽然听感基本相同但是基本没放SP,感觉很奇怪
Topic Starter
TOKI

retadidas wrote:

小七来帮唾弃哥MOD啦,前排支持!thx:D

这图是一键一音而且高低音分开排列,小七姐可以从这点出发再看一遍
7K
00:32:199 (32199|5,32199|0,32574|4,32574|1,32949|0,32949|5) - 这里可以考虑改成4,6 3,5 4,6双键和前面对应-^
00:38:199 (38199|5,38199|0,38574|2,38574|4,38949|5,38949|0) - 同上-^

00:44:199 (44199|5,44199|0) - 这里改成4,6轨道比较合适-^

01:27:699 (87699|1) - 这里第四轨道最好也放一个note和后面两组对应-^
01:30:699 (90699|0) - 同上
01:33:699 (93699|1) - 同上
01:36:699 (96699|1) - 同上
01:39:699 (99699|1) - 同上
01:45:699 (105699|1) - 同上
01:51:699 (111699|1) - 同上
01:54:699 (114699|0) - 同上
01:57:699 (117699|1) - 同上
01:59:574 (119574|2) - 同上
后面还有就不一一列出了,当然你若是考虑没有重音问题,可以无视- ._.

02:02:199 (122199|4,122199|1,122199|2) - 这里放3个note重音感觉有点多,个人感觉2个比较合适-^

8K
01:07:824 (67824|1,67824|7,67824|3,67824|5) - 这里应该也放一个SP,和前面对应-这个我有必要解释一下,这图我是决定吧低于B3的低音放在sp,(中间那段放了好多sp是因为排列难排一时脑残放在sp上了,不过现在想了想还是挪进去了)
01:10:449 (70449|3,70449|4,70449|2) - 同上
01:21:324 (81324|2,81324|6,81324|5,81324|4) - 同上
01:22:449 (82449|4,82449|5,82449|2) - 同上
01:23:574 (83574|2,83574|5,83574|4) - 同上
01:24:324 (84324|5,84324|2,84324|1) - 同上

01:38:574 (98574|0) - SP移动到轨道1较为合适-^^
02:02:574 (122574|0) - 同上,感觉较为突兀-^

有些和7K相同的地方我就不再罗列,8K有个问题就是前半部分SP放的很多,后半部分虽然听感基本相同但是基本没放SP,感觉很奇怪-我犯傻了,原因见上
主要针对8K的sp改了一下,小七再看一遍吧 :(
Wallet_old
赞一个!

好听且安静。。
Topic Starter
TOKI

Wallet wrote:

赞一个!

好听且安静。。
:D
Hanyuu
I like this map and i dont really found anything i would liked to change when playing~ great effort on the keysounds!
Just a few things you should change:

The source should be corrected from "Tenshinranman" to "Tenshin Ranman"
And i think you should change the difficult names to a standard and accurate description like 4K Normal 7K Normal or something. I think it would be better that way.


Also about the difficulty spread i think it is justified. I don't see any reason to make a easier/harder difficulty to the song. The difficulty you chose seemed fitting enough and if it was an easier toned down map or something harder just for the sake of making it harder it would seem off to me. A thing you might want to do if you feel like it is add a third keymode to the map. Like a 6k or even a 8k beatmap.

Good luck~ starred :)

Edit: I forgot something :? .. The Overall Difficulty of your maps should be raised to atleast 9!
Topic Starter
TOKI

Hanyuu wrote:

I like this map and i dont really found anything i would liked to change when playing~ great effort on the keysounds!
Just a few things you should change:

The source should be corrected from "Tenshinranman" to "Tenshin Ranman"
And i think you should change the difficult names to a standard and accurate description like 4K Normal 7K Normal or something. I think it would be better that way.


Also about the difficulty spread i think it is justified. I don't see any reason to make a easier/harder difficulty to the song. The difficulty you chose seemed fitting enough and if it was an easier toned down map or something harder just for the sake of making it harder it would seem off to me. A thing you might want to do if you feel like it is add a third keymode to the map. Like a 6k or even a 8k beatmap.

Good luck~ starred :)

Edit: I forgot something :? .. The Overall Difficulty of your maps should be raised to atleast 9!
THX :D
Mare_old_1
good map, star~
玛德为啥我连4K都没法fc说好的良心图呢
Topic Starter
TOKI

MareSpringEphemeral wrote:

good map, star~
玛德为啥我连4K都没法fc说好的良心图呢
你只是不会玩吧啊喂!
alacat
Hi :3

Tenshin Ranman is my favorite game ;)

Then, the Artist and Title is wrong imo :o "Yuzu Soft" is a company making this game.

Please look at this picture.


作曲 = Artist

so I think "Famishin" is a person of Artist ;)

Try this suggestion.
  1. Artist : Famishin
  2. Romanised Artist : Famishin
  3. Title : メチャ恋らんまん (Piano Ver.)
  4. Romanised Title : Mecha Koi Ranman* (Piano Ver.)
  5. Tags : happy go lucky!? yuzu soft opening
Good luck ^_^ I hope this can help you.
Topic Starter
TOKI

alacat wrote:

Hi :3

Tenshin Ranman is my favorite game ;)

Then, the Artist and Title is wrong imo :o "Yuzu Soft" is a company making this game.

Please look at this picture.


作曲 = Artist

so I think "Famishin" is a person of Artist ;)

Try this suggestion.
  1. Artist : Famishin
  2. Romanised Artist : Famishin
  3. Title : メチャ恋らんまん (Piano Ver.)
  4. Romanised Title : Mecha Koi Ranman* (Piano Ver.)
  5. Tags : happy go lucky!? yuzu soft opening
Good luck ^_^ I hope this can help you.
anyway, i think using company to stand for the Artist doesn't matter.
and i'll correct the title and tags :D
thx
sunshy_old
放下最后一颗星星 哭哭哦
Topic Starter
TOKI

sunshy wrote:

放下最后一颗星星 哭哭哦
=3=
Entozer
Bubbled. Good luck!
chonicle
Nice piano map! Ranked :D
mintong89
Toki 神麻婆!
Lolicakey
this was really fast...
congratz o3o/
alacat
:)
Flanster
Why is the company name set as an artist?
If its an instrumental version, instead of the vocal artist it should be the composer's name, which in this case is Famishin.

Stefan
Artist: Yuzu Soft
Tags: happy go lucky!? yuzu soft opening

Hmm maybe something wrong and missunderstood went here.
Mare_old_1
cong~!
神mapper巨臂夫妻
sunshy_old
suge eee :P
10nya
Yuzu Soft should be at the tags and artist should be Fumishin _(:3rz
rank grats btw~
Pokie

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Why is the company name set as an artist?
If its an instrumental version, instead of the vocal artist it should be the composer's name, which in this case is Famishin.

According to LoliFlan's post, sorry but I've to unrank this ;_;

Please fix the Artist ONLY, or it'll require a score wiping ;P

kanpakyin edit:
@Frostmourne broken heart icon for unrank. Therefore you are fixing a wrong icon = =
Topic Starter
TOKI
fixed the aritist :D
Pokie
Flanster
Strawberry
gratz for re-rank~!

osu need more such relax song!
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