Owl City - How Deep the Father's Love for Us · forum

RikiH_

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2013-06-09T09:57:11+00:00

M4M

Normal

00:21:912 (2,3) - I suggest you to unstack these, they are hard to read by newbie players. Apply this to all stacks like this
02:01:383 (3) - Ctrl+g?

D

01:03:626 (1) - 475|66 and it will enter perfectly in the end of the other slider
01:49:041 (3,4) - I'd arrange these notes this way in order to make the pattern symmetric to the center

01:57:927 (4,5) - Move (4) to 116|192 and (5) to 76|312 for perfect symmetry
02:06:566 (5,1) - This is a bit odd

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Nothing else, really. Good map!

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

1,642 posts

Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2013-06-13T15:44:07+00:00

Haelo

inv wants the D

00:13:026 (2) - I clearly hear some sort of whistle like sound on the repeat, why not add a whistle on it?
00:16:235 (2) - Same for this start
00:35:981 (1) - I suggest you use a normal sampleset finish here, I can't even hear the custom hitsound
Why did you skip 00:48:569 - till 00:51:778 - it sounds pretty mappable to me, feels a bit empty too
01:03:626 (1) - Turn off gridsnap and cover the slider track perfectly underneath the end of the previous one ~~hurr durr nazi ocd~~
01:21:398 (3) - Reduce the slider length till 01:22:385 - and add a note at 01:22:879 -
02:06:566 (5,1) - why did you make a custom stack here, and not here 02:10:516 (5,1) - I suggest you make custom stacks for all patterns like this, or simply stack them completely

Normal

00:19:690 (3) - I'm not really a fan of notes like these in a normal diff, but yeah since there'll be an easy diff it might be okay, I'd still suggest you to unstack it though. you'll probably deny anyway lolol
00:22:652 (3) - ^
00:30:798 (2) - ^ Etc.
00:35:981 (6) - Same as D
01:05:600 (3) - More fun if you CTRL+G this one imo
01:52:497 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit weird imo, you could place (3) a bit lower: http://puu.sh/3ePdm.jpg
02:32:484 (4) - Spacing? >:
02:34:458 - I think it'd be cool to add another note here for the finish sound

pls inv pls

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

69653863 2013-06-13T16:01:05+00:00

KSHOR

Kyshiro wrote:
Haelo

inv wants the D
00:13:026 (2) - I clearly hear some sort of whistle like sound on the repeat, why not add a whistle on it? Nop. I tend not to use the whistles on these repeats because i feel it sounds too much.
00:16:235 (2) - Same for this start ^
00:35:981 (1) - I suggest you use a normal sampleset finish here, I can't even hear the custom hitsound I prefer current one. Raised the volume tho.
Why did you skip 00:48:569 - till 00:51:778 - it sounds pretty mappable to me, feels a bit empty too I didn't like to map the bridge, plus because the break is only one on this map
01:03:626 (1) - Turn off gridsnap and cover the slider track perfectly underneath the end of the previous one ~~hurr durr nazi ocd~~ 卐
01:21:398 (3) - Reduce the slider length till 01:22:385 - and add a note at 01:22:879 - Nah :< i like how this slider is long and flowwy
02:06:566 (5,1) - why did you make a custom stack here, and not here 02:10:516 (5,1) - I suggest you make custom stacks for all patterns like this, or simply stack them completely
what that must be bug when i accidentally move it lolol

Normal
00:19:690 (3) - I'm not really a fan of notes like these in a normal diff, but yeah since there'll be an easy diff it might be okay, I'd still suggest you to unstack it though. you'll probably deny anyway lolol lol yaep, i personally feel stacking it just plays better
00:22:652 (3) - ^
00:30:798 (2) - ^ Etc. Saem for both.
00:35:981 (6) - Same as D Ok.
01:05:600 (3) - More fun if you CTRL+G this one imo Not my style :>
01:52:497 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit weird imo, you could place (3) a bit lower: http://puu.sh/3ePdm.jpg Yeah :< but mine flows better
02:32:484 (4) - Spacing? >: oho k
02:34:458 - I think it'd be cool to add another note here for the finish sound Nope, it'll be hard to play on osu!mania.
pls inv pls

pls kshro pls

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-06-13T20:45:30+00:00

this D pun is mine
fuck you ksh0r
hi gato

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

1,642 posts

Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2013-06-13T20:48:42+00:00

[Luanny] wrote:
this D pun is mine
fuck you ksh0r
hi gato

it's mine now :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3 :-3

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-06-13T20:49:13+00:00

fuck you òwó stop using ":3"

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

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Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2013-06-13T20:49:44+00:00

[Luanny] wrote:
hello i suck dicks

:-3

Last edited by Kyshiro 2013-06-13T20:50:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-06-13T20:50:31+00:00

Kyshito wrote:
i love dicks

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

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Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2013-06-13T20:53:47+00:00

add ''Luanny suk deek'' to tags

kd pls

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-06-13T20:54:35+00:00

Kyshiro wrote:
add ''Luanny suk deek'' to tags

kd pls

also add kyshito emo gay kankeraids
kd pls

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-06-18T08:13:22+00:00

Normal:

00:32:279 (5,6) - This rhythm feels strange. Delete then and rather put one in 00:32:526.
01:53:978 (3) - Delete Whistle as 01:57:433 (3).
02:02:370 (4) - Add whistle for lyrics?
02:08:294 (2) - Distance?
02:12:243 (2) - ^
02:32:484 (4) - ^ maybe rotate a little..

D:

00:34:500 (3) - Clap at the reverse to follow the music.
01:27:321 (3,5) - This symmetry isn't perfect. For this kind of ctrl+g pattern, you have to set the last slider dot where it actually ends for (3).
01:49:041 (3) - 1 Grid right
02:16:686 (3) - Since distance gets lower, NC.
02:20:883 (4) - I think this is a weird Whistle. Shouldn't this be at 02:20:636?
02:28:781 (4) - ^
02:32:484 (4) - NC

kd pls

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

69653863 2013-06-18T08:51:32+00:00

Sonnyc's mod

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal:

00:32:279 (5,6) - This rhythm feels strange. Delete then and rather put one in 00:32:526. Not so strange imo, also it was intended for pattern improvisations
01:53:978 (3) - Delete Whistle as 01:57:433 (3). No, it fits in somewhat another way.
02:02:370 (4) - Add whistle for lyrics? Nope :/
02:08:294 (2) - Distance? Ah, fixed a little bit.
02:12:243 (2) - ^ Fixed.
02:32:484 (4) - ^ maybe rotate a little.. No, it'll be weird o.o

D:

00:34:500 (3) - Clap at the reverse to follow the music. I missed that one 0.0 anyway fixed!
01:27:321 (3,5) - This symmetry isn't perfect. For this kind of ctrl+g pattern, you have to set the last slider dot where it actually ends for (3). Yeah but it was intended and I don't wanna change it :3c
01:49:041 (3) - 1 Grid right 0.0b
02:16:686 (3) - Since distance gets lower, NC. i wanna but 2 combos are just... )-:
02:20:883 (4) - I think this is a weird Whistle. Shouldn't this be at 02:20:636? OK!
02:28:781 (4) - ^ OK.
02:32:484 (4) - NC No, it's weird.

kd pls

Thanks Sonnyc for the mod!

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ksh0r & lu star pls

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-06-19T00:27:27+00:00

no |:3|
also, why "D"?

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2013-06-20T17:12:01+00:00

Heya
From my Modding queue.

Just some suggestions~

[Normal]
01:03:626 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider start?
01:10:537 (5) - ^
01:41:143 (1) - Why don't you make this one curvy?
02:14:712 (1) - Whistle on the slider start~

[D]
00:14:507 (4) - How about adding a whistle here?
00:17:469 (4) - Whistle on the slider start~
00:20:431 (4) - ^
00:26:355 (4) - ^
00:29:317 (4) - ^
00:32:279 (4) - Whistle?

Sorry for the poor mod ._.
Your map is just perfect!

Good luck!

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

69653863 2013-06-22T08:18:07+00:00

Smoothie's mod

Smoothie wrote:
Heya
From my Modding queue.

Just some suggestions~

[Normal]
01:03:626 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider start? Umm no, sounds weird.
01:10:537 (5) - ^ Nah.
01:41:143 (1) - Why don't you make this one curvy? I prefer it like that :3c
02:14:712 (1) - Whistle on the slider start~ Sounds fine.

[D]
00:14:507 (4) - How about adding a whistle here?
00:17:469 (4) - Whistle on the slider start~
00:20:431 (4) - ^
00:26:355 (4) - ^
00:29:317 (4) - ^
00:32:279 (4) - Whistle? Applied all (-:

Sorry for the poor mod ._.
Your map is just perfect!

Good luck!

Thanks Smoothie for the mod!

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-06-22T08:32:11+00:00

:O how deep the inverness's love for us

dkun

osu! Alumni

4,486 posts

Joined August 2009

dkun 2013-07-09T05:40:59+00:00

this map. ♥

call me when the set's finished!

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-07-16T12:35:20+00:00

Hey Mod from my Queues.
well I dont really have something to say because I think the map is fine c: here's only some suggestions. You can ignore this if you want ^^

General

• seem fine

[Normal]

• 01:49:535 (3) - it missing hitsounds at begin. may you can add something there? since you can hear something like a drum here?
• 01:49:535 (3) - same here and also there is many parts like this
• 02:34:705 (1) - why this long spinner here? You can map this part as well

[D]

• 01:26:580 (1,2) - move 1 grid left to fix spacing
• 02:34:582 (1) - same as Normal

Good luck with rank ~

69653863

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Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

69653863 2013-07-22T03:06:10+00:00

Dark Ai's mod

Dark_Ai wrote:
General
• seem fine

[Normal]
• 01:49:535 (3) - it missing hitsounds at begin. may you can add something there? since you can hear something like a drum here? I'm not planning to specifically hitsound the kick sounds
• 01:49:535 (3) - same here and also there is many parts like this lol same link ?w?
• 02:34:705 (1) - why this long spinner here? You can map this part as well
Nah, this part meant to had spinner on it.

[D]
• 01:26:580 (1,2) - move 1 grid left to fix spacing ah ok :3
• 02:34:582 (1) - same as Normal
;~;

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks Dark Ai for mod!

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

Joined October 2010

mancuso_JM_ 2013-07-23T04:46:23+00:00

Oh.. Sorry for the huge delay!

. I couldn't fnish it before due to some thing irl, but anyway here is my diff.
Hope you like it!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: familyz.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 83372
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
StoryFireInFront: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:How Deep the Father's Love for Us
TitleUnicode:How Deep the Father's Love for Us
Artist:Owl City
ArtistUnicode:Owl City
Creator:inverness
Version:Mancuso's Easy
Source:
Tags:adam young cover stuart townsend
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"family is.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,36181,49844
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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35981,493.664637156492,4,2,1,45,1,0
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138661,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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Combo3 : 123,134,164
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Btw, don't forget to add mancusojuanmattos and mancuso_JM_ in tags if you add the diff.

69653863

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69653863 2013-07-23T06:00:16+00:00

Thanks for the diff, mancuso! Added!

Please redownload!

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2013-07-26T04:14:52+00:00

|General|

I'm curious, what does "D" mean? I guess you can keep the custom name as long as it makes some sense.
Great map, I don't see major problems. Call me back when you're done.

|Mancuso's Easy|

01:26:333 (3) - The combo is too long (length), add a NC here.
01:32:257 (3) - Gotta add another one here as well
01:39:169 (4) - ^
01:45:093 (4) - This one is kinda..., due to the way this one is mapped. I guess this one could stay or you could re-arrange the pattern so you can split it.

|Normal|

01:28:061 (4) - Is a repeat missing here or is this intentional? Hm, either way, I believe you should add a repeat here, (4) -> (5) doesn't flow very well and the repeat would fit perfectly.

|D|

00:17:963 (5,1) - Flow is a bit awkward here. Perhaps you could try reversing (5) but you would need to move (4) & (5) a little further from (1). You could try that or something else.
00:34:500 (3,4,5) - This pattern is a little iffy, mostly because it seems like you're using the sliders with repeat for the "drums" but (4) is also mapping a part of the vocals. I'd suggest to split the pattern so that these "special" drums aren't mixed with the vocals. It seems like you're doing this to keep the symmetry, which you can do with a different pattern, let me suggest something like this, in this kind of pattern you can clearly recognize how the first 2 kick slider (3) & (4) are mapping the drums, I hope you get what I mean.
01:21:398 (3) - This slider is a bit too long, I believe. You can clearly hear that a new "hold" starts here 01:22:385 - . You could try shortening this one until 01:22:138 - and then add a new slider here 01:22:385 -

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69653863 2013-07-26T04:51:01+00:00

Gonzvlo's mod

Gonzvlo wrote:
|General|
I'm curious, what does "D" mean? I guess you can keep the custom name as long as it makes some sense. Ah, I think I should add why I named it like that on the Creator's words. D stands for "Dad", I think it's pretty obvious why now (:
Great map, I don't see major problems. Call me back when you're done. Roger.
|Normal|
01:28:061 (4) - Is a repeat missing here or is this intentional? Hm, either way, I believe you should add a repeat here, (4) -> (5) doesn't flow very well and the repeat would fit perfectly. Nice idea! Also tweaked the next patterns
|D|
00:17:963 (5,1) - Flow is a bit awkward here. Perhaps you could try reversing (5) but you would need to move (4) & (5) a little further from (1). You could try that or something else. Nah, I think it's okay.
00:34:500 (3,4,5) - This pattern is a little iffy, mostly because it seems like you're using the sliders with repeat for the "drums" but (4) is also mapping a part of the vocals. I'd suggest to split the pattern so that these "special" drums aren't mixed with the vocals. It seems like you're doing this to keep the symmetry, which you can do with a different pattern, let me suggest something like this, in this kind of pattern you can clearly recognize how the first 2 kick slider (3) & (4) are mapping the drums, I hope you get what I mean. Changed into something similar, and thanks for pointing out!
01:21:398 (3) - This slider is a bit too long, I believe. You can clearly hear that a new "hold" starts here 01:22:385 - . You could try shortening this one until 01:22:138 - and then add a new slider here 01:22:385 - But I love it ;~;

Thanks Gonzvlo for the mod! Will call you back after mancuso's update!

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-07-26T05:07:29+00:00

Gonzvlo wrote:
|Mancuso's Easy|
01:26:333 (3) - The combo is too long (length), add a NC here.
01:32:257 (3) - Gotta add another one here as well
01:39:169 (4) - ^ Fixed these
01:45:093 (4) - This one is kinda..., due to the way this one is mapped. I guess this one could stay or you could re-arrange the pattern so you can split it. I tried other thing, but still kept a stack with the previous (1,1).

Thanks Gonz

Here is the Update, inverness :3

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69653863

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69653863 2013-07-26T05:38:06+00:00

Thanks, mancuso! Updated now!

Last edited by mancuso_JM_ 2013-07-26T05:41:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2013-07-27T22:23:45+00:00

Okay, go.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2013-07-28T09:31:06+00:00

Sorry dkun, this ones mine

*ninja*

everything looks spot on, cant find anything wrong, timing seems right and the maps are all smooth, good job and enjoy having a rank from me

riffy

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riffy 2013-07-28T09:52:46+00:00

<3 awesome

wendao

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Joined August 2012

wendao 2013-07-28T10:18:05+00:00

inverness wrote:
Gonzvlo's mod
Gonzvlo wrote:
|General|
I'm curious, what does "D" mean? I guess you can keep the custom name as long as it makes some sense. Ah, I think I should add why I named it like that on the Creator's words. D stands for "Dad", I think it's pretty obvious why now (:

lalala~ i think you didn't add reason what "D" stand for