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Hallo.Bin wegen m4m hier. Ich werde den Muzu-Mod auf Deutsch und die anderen beiden auf Englisch schreiben.

Höchstwahrscheinlich wird der Mod sowohl qualitativ als auch von der Länge her nicht an deinen herankommen. Tut mir leid. Jedoch werde ich mein bestes geben :D .


Muzukashii

  • 00:07:066 (16) - Hier würde ich ein d hinsetzen. Hört sich imo so leer an.

    00:44:387 - d für vocals (hast dich vorher auch an den vocals orientiert)

    01:13:137 - dasselbe wie bei 00:07:066 (16) -

    02:40:102 (10) - k (ddkkd) damit nicht 2mal dasselbe pattern kommt. Hört sich in der Kombination imo auch cool an.



Light Oni

Sorry for my bad english :/

  • 00:37:602 - Delete this note. There is nothing at this point. And the vocals are more pronounced.

    00:39:923 - Fill this (snare) with k or d. Or you could make a ddkkd pattern starting here: 00:39:744 (185) -
    This happens several times but i think it isn't necessary to fill all of it. At this point it is because you can hear it better (louder snare).

    00:49:030 (220) - Fill this (vocals)

    Found nothing else here. Nice diff.


Crystal's Oni

  • 00:37:601 - Delete. Nothing there and vocals get pronounced better.

    02:08:851 (1) - k (le weird instrument plays)

    That's all i could find. Nice Diff, too.


I hope there is at least one thing that helps. If not i'll shoot a star. Even though i don't like..erm hate the song.
Onicorn runs
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I feel there are someone behind me when i listen to the song
*goosebumps*
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woof for m4m :3

You might want to add something like "explicit language" in the first post

[Muzukashii]

get that taiko out of the name pls :>

00:28:852 (8) - Delete this note to keep the breaks friendly across this part :3
~kiai~
00:49:566 (41) - Not sure if you missed it or did this on purpose, but maybe add a finisher here for the "hop" like on the previous and next one?
00:48:494 (38,6) - Might be easier to follow the rhythm if the note was on the next blue tick
00:52:959 - Missing note here?
~repeat for second half of kiai~
01:18:137 (27) - wow so burai nerf pls ;w;
01:30:280 (55,56) - 55 to don and delete 56, two non monocolor triplets in muzu is evil
~apply stuff from last kiai~
02:23:137 (29) - Same as (8)
02:32:066 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mainly the 5-plet in here is very evil for this diff, might remove 1~2 notes here?
02:37:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,1) - ^
02:47:244 - Missing note from kiai?
~kiai stuff for final kiai~
03:03:852 (6) - Big note pls it is good end :3

[Gesho's Light Oni]

00:12:334 (55,56) - Delete 55 and change 56 to big don for da emphasis (see 00:23:852 (113) - )
00:14:209 (63) - Delete this note too because 00:17:066 - rip 00:19:923 - rip 00:22:780 - rip
00:29:209 (140) - Change to kat to keep the kat rhythm consistent :3 (also fits that... instrument)
00:46:619 (211,212) - Same as 55/56
00:49:030 (220) - Move that note to 00:49:030 (220) - for the vocals, you seem to follow it a bit (especially in the next bar)
01:00:458 (270) - ^
01:46:173 (440) - ^
01:57:601 (490) - ^
02:18:494 (545) - Same as 63
02:37:780 (618) - Think for the "hey" a Kat would be nice again


good luck :3
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M4M in-game pm with Stefan (?)
[Taiko Muzukashii]

03:03:852 (6) - add finish : consider from
  1. 02:52:423 (6) - finish
  2. 02:55:280 (15) - no finish
  3. 02:58:137 (1) - finish
  4. 03:00:994 (1) - no finish
00:45:637 (29) - d bass


[Gezo's Light Oni]

fine imo

[Crystal's Taiko Oni]

00:08:940 (1,3) - Ctrl+G : dkk look really weird at here

00:23:136 (1,2,3) - kdd : the pitch are going down

03:02:064 (55) - add finish : consider from 03:02:422 (56,1,1) -

00:14:654 (3,4) - Ctrl+G : This patter look combines to your style well and also keep some of this for more variety pattern
00:17:511 (2,3) - Ctrl+G : ^
00:20:368 (4,1) - Ctrl+G : ^
00:25:725 (2,3) - Ctrl+G : ^
00:28:939 (2,3) - Ctrl+G : ^
00:31:797 (4,1) - Ctrl+G : ^
00:48:225 (2,3) -
01:45:368 (2,3) -
01:48:226 (3,4) -
01:51:083 (2,3) -
01:56:796 (3,4) -
01:59:653 (3,4) -
02:02:510 (2,3) -
02:42:510 (5,6) -
02:45:368 (22,23) -
02:48:225 (39,40) -
02:53:940 (10,11) -
All in this box suggestion are move 2/8 -> or remove it
  1. because i think dkd on the front is not better
  2. move 2/8 for fit to his voice and it better
  3. dkd on here are so annoy imo


00:50:011 (2) -
00:58:582 (2) -
01:01:439 (2) -
01:47:155 (2) -
01:55:724 (2) -
01:58:581 (2) -
02:44:296 (15) -
02:52:868 (3) -
02:55:725 (20) -


sorry for short mod :(

Good Luck ~ :)
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I got the permission by Crystalloid to edit and change his Difficulty. Of course I will keep as much as possible into his difficulty:



bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Muzu
00:07:066 (16) - d Seems fine.
00:28:673 - Add a note, d or k No. The reason behind is that I don't purposed to set 1/4 circles at these hits like on this time. The Triplets (?) here should only be for the sounds like 00:24:566 (3,4,5).
00:49:566 (41) - D I don't want to use for every "Hop!" a D. v:
01:00:994 (15) - ^ <- Like this, how about adding a finisher on 'Hop!' part? (on where you want to add finisher) ^
02:22:959 - Add a note, d
Overall, it's too easy for Muzu.. I can rename it Futsuu Don't forget it's 84 BPM, it unfortunately doesn't sounds like 84 BPM but well.. however, it's mapped related to 84 BPM.


Crystal's Taiko Oni
00:53:315 (2) - k Needs to change a huge part of the map then.
01:20:993 (4) - K Doesn't really sounds significant tbh.
01:28:851 (1,3) - k Changed.
02:18:135 (1) - D Seems fine to do this.


Lolwut, it's Azis.. www

Onicorn wrote:

Hallo.Bin wegen m4m hier. Ich werde den Muzu-Mod auf Deutsch und die anderen beiden auf Englisch schreiben.

Höchstwahrscheinlich wird der Mod sowohl qualitativ als auch von der Länge her nicht an deinen herankommen. Tut mir leid. Jedoch werde ich mein bestes geben :D .


Muzukashii

  • 00:07:066 (16) - Hier würde ich ein d hinsetzen. Hört sich imo so leer an. Changed.

    00:44:387 - d für vocals (hast dich vorher auch an den vocals orientiert) Yes

    01:13:137 - dasselbe wie bei 00:07:066 (16) - Done.

    02:40:102 (10) - k (ddkkd) damit nicht 2mal dasselbe pattern kommt. Hört sich in der Kombination imo auch cool an. Okay.



Crystal's Oni

  • 00:37:601 - Delete. Nothing there and vocals get pronounced better. removed.

    02:08:851 (1) - k (le weird instrument plays) Added k to the circle before

    That's all i could find. Nice Diff, too.


I hope there is at least one thing that helps. If not i'll shoot a star. Even though i don't like..erm hate the song.
Onicorn runs
Some fixes through the set (Preview Point and Tags fixed, Diff Name changes and Video added to Hard Diff) and I will reply on the other mods later, pm'd _Gezo_ to check for his Diff.
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aleileilei pa~
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Onicorn wrote:

Sorry for my bad english :/ it's okay

  • 00:37:602 - Delete this note. There is nothing at this point. And the vocals are more pronounced. actually it's to emphasize the [sh] sound, as well as transition mapping as I always do.

    00:39:923 - Fill this (snare) with k or d. Or you could make a ddkkd pattern starting here: 00:39:744 (185) -
    This happens several times but i think it isn't necessary to fill all of it. At this point it is because you can hear it better (louder snare). I'd rather have omissions, despite all the snare, so it grooves more than the song actually can permit. The song's drum pattern is really simple, I just want to make due of that to add in my "own beats". And I think it doesn't play that bad, because you can still play that note while it isn't here :D

    00:49:030 (220) - Fill this (vocals) I don't really see why

    Found nothing else here. Nice diff.

Nwolf wrote:

[Gesho's Light Oni]

00:12:334 (55,56) - Delete 55 and change 56 to big don for da emphasis (see 00:23:852 (113) - ) as i said in another mod reply, the big notes are almost only for "hop"
00:14:209 (63) - Delete this note too because 00:17:066 - rip 00:19:923 - rip 00:22:780 - rip k (slap 1)
00:29:209 (140) - Change to kat to keep the kat rhythm consistent :3 (also fits that... instrument) changed, incidentally changed 138 because consistencylol
00:46:619 (211,212) - Same as 55/56 moved it to have k ddd kkk D
00:49:030 (220) - Move that note to 00:49:030 (220) - for the vocals, you seem to follow it a bit (especially in the next bar) yes and no, I'm having mixed mapping here, following basically everything at the same time, and want something which doesn't stick to the song perfectly but be different
01:00:458 (270) - ^
01:46:173 (440) - ^
01:57:601 (490) - ^ you will notice all end up with 0
02:18:494 (545) - Same as 63 slap 2
02:37:780 (618) - Think for the "hey" a Kat would be nice again yes


good luck :3
https://www.dropbox.com/s/v1rv5oat0k35wpi/a.zip?dl=0

lkx_Shore wrote:

aleileilei pa~
wrong song
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_Gezo_ wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

aleileilei pa~
wrong song
Yes,I just the reaction come over :?
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Back from the grave :^)
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Helloo

Stefan asked me to mod something so here goes

[Inner Oni]

00:04:387 (1,1,2,3) - 00:07:244 (1,2,1,1) - and 00:10:101 (1,2,3,1) - are kinda repetitive and not very exciting to look at. I suggest changing them to ddkk, kkdd and ddkd respectively. The ddkd on 00:10:101 (1,2,3,1) - fits well because of the kkdk you put 00:10:994 (2,1,2,3) - here, I think.

00:12:423 (4) - to 00:35:280 (4) - is fairly repetitive aswell. I would settle for variety pattern-wise rather than musical accuracy. The kkd and kdkdk fits the music, but repeating it over and over makes this part lose its appeal. Same applies to the kiais, basically.

01:09:566 (1,2) - noticed that one late, but see below for my suggestion.

01:12:423 (1,2) - feels awkward, since there's no sound on 01:12:601 (2) - .
I suggest changing it to something like

without any finisher, since merely moving 01:12:601 (2) - to 01:12:780 (2) - would introduce a weird gap.

01:15:459 (2) - same as above

01:16:887 (2) - again.

Other than that, I think it's well done!
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Hi!

[General]

[Futsuu]

In the kiais, id suggest you emphasize every "Hop" with a finisher evenly; Right now only every 2 Phrase is emphasized by a don finisher, leaving 00:49:566 (23) - these notes without a finish. Imo itd give a more regular emphasis to it than right now and itd fit well considering the current finisher structure.

02:40:994 - This has very similar musical structure to the kiais, but has accents on the red ticks where they dont fit very much with the vocals (which have been prioritized before). I suggest you move 02:42:780 (2,3) - around that they do not interfere with the vocals that should be in focus here.
If im wrong, correct me!

Otherwise its clean afaic!

[Muzukashii]

Looks pretty clean to me, and in line with spread to futsuu!

Please do call me back, im interested in nominating this if top 2 diffs are good!
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gonna take over the mod for Crystal's difficulty since he lacks of time.

guro wrote:

Helloo

Stefan asked me to mod something so here goes

[Inner Oni]

00:04:387 (1,1,2,3) - 00:07:244 (1,2,1,1) - and 00:10:101 (1,2,3,1) - are kinda repetitive and not very exciting to look at. I suggest changing them to ddkk, kkdd and ddkd respectively. The ddkd on 00:10:101 (1,2,3,1) - fits well because of the kkdk you put 00:10:994 (2,1,2,3) - here, I think. You have a good point, however I decided to change it alternatively for first and third to dkdk. I think it's good to have them similar but NOT the same pattern.

00:12:423 (4) - to 00:35:280 (4) - is fairly repetitive aswell. I would settle for variety pattern-wise rather than musical accuracy. The kkd and kdkdk fits the music, but repeating it over and over makes this part lose its appeal. Same applies to the kiais, basically. I don't think he made much wrong with staying on a repeating pattern structure but I understand your point. I added some notes here and there so it doesn't feel THAT repetitive but doesn't alter his concept too much.

01:09:566 (1,2) - noticed that one late, but see below for my suggestion. That one is fine..?

01:12:423 (1,2) - feels awkward, since there's no sound on 01:12:601 (2) - .
I suggest changing it to something like

without any finisher, since merely moving 01:12:601 (2) - to 01:12:780 (2) - would introduce a weird gap. went with dkd instead.

01:15:459 (2) - same as above ~

01:16:887 (2) - again. ~

Other than that, I think it's well done!

Nepuri wrote:

Hi!

[General]

[Futsuu]

In the kiais, id suggest you emphasize every "Hop" with a finisher evenly; Right now only every 2 Phrase is emphasized by a don finisher, leaving 00:49:566 (23) - these notes without a finish. Imo itd give a more regular emphasis to it than right now and itd fit well considering the current finisher structure. Done.

02:40:994 - This has very similar musical structure to the kiais, but has accents on the red ticks where they dont fit very much with the vocals (which have been prioritized before). I suggest you move 02:42:780 (2,3) - around that they do not interfere with the vocals that should be in focus here.
If im wrong, correct me! The only reason I went with these pattern is the pretty long break, but I changed the pattern accordingly to the vocals.

Otherwise its clean afaic!

[Muzukashii]

Looks pretty clean to me, and in line with spread to futsuu!

Please do call me back, im interested in nominating this if top 2 diffs are good!
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Back!

[Muzukashii]

I forgot to mention the same finisher issue with Futsuu here, you might wanna change it here aswell!

[Oni]

01:26:709 (368) - Could make it a kat to create similarity in color to 01:27:423 (371,372,373) - as the triplet relates to the vocals, which also sound on this note.

[Crystal's Inner Oni]

From 00:00:994 - 00:12:423 - Imho you could focus on the ting drum sounds that you can hear at 00:02:066 - ; 00:02:423 - etc very clearly. Currently they have been overheard or ignored for another rhythm that sounds way less fitting to what the drums provide.

00:34:209 (2) - change to kat to differentiate it from all the dons surrounding it? A clear clap is audible here and not using it to vary from the lots of dons around it makes it sound stale.

00:36:530 (1) - change to don as the music actually takes a rest here for a moment and a kat would not be necessary to emphasize this? Sounds kind of oversaturated if theres 3 kats in a row.

01:18:851 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - for this id suggest a kkdkkdkkdk to reflect the pitch better

Similar goes to 02:30:280 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - making it a kddkddk for pitch relevance.



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Nepuri wrote:

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[Muzukashii]

I forgot to mention the same finisher issue with Futsuu here, you might wanna change it here aswell! fair

[Crystal's Inner Oni]

From 00:00:994 - 00:12:423 - Imho you could focus on the ting drum sounds that you can hear at 00:02:066 - ; 00:02:423 - etc very clearly. Currently they have been overheard or ignored for another rhythm that sounds way less fitting to what the drums provide. made some slight changes for kat notes and tried to keep Crystal's stuff as untouched as possible. hope that works.

00:34:209 (2) - change to kat to differentiate it from all the dons surrounding it? A clear clap is audible here and not using it to vary from the lots of dons around it makes it sound stale. Yeah, overlooked that note.

00:36:530 (1) - change to don as the music actually takes a rest here for a moment and a kat would not be necessary to emphasize this? Sounds kind of oversaturated if theres 3 kats in a row. done, applied for similar stuff yadda

01:18:851 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - for this id suggest a kkdkkdkkdk to reflect the pitch better went with kkdkkdk, Crystal used this pattern before.

Similar goes to 02:30:280 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - making it a kddkddk for pitch relevance. Also stood with kkdkkdk and made 02:35:994 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit different.



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Nepuri wrote:

[Oni]
01:26:709 (368) - Could make it a kat to create similarity in color to 01:27:423 (371,372,373) - as the triplet relates to the vocals, which also sound on this note.
rejecting, 01:20:994 (349,358,368,380,394) - are all starting the measure, which was what i was doing. every measure on this part starts with a don, changing 368 to k would just throw everything off and break the consistency.




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