1. Uh, why are the bookmarks unsnapped... Not an important thing, though.

1. 00:11:737 (1) - To be honest, the shape looks pretty random. Move the last anchor point to (28,168) so it will form a blanket-ish pattern with 00:10:433 (4)?
2. 01:32:606 (2) - Uhm, move to (360,176)? Looks neater, IMO.

1. 02:05:215 (1) - Move the red node to (284,144)? It will make 02:03:584 (2,1) look nicer.

1. 00:14:835 - Add a circle? idk why, but it feels so empty... o.o
2. 00:21:846 (4) - Add NC to denote that the spacing changes here? It might throw off players, you know...
3. 00:45:650 (1,2,3) - Just wanna say that making these notes spaced differently compared to the other 1/4-beats spaced notes might make them confusing (since it looks like they're spaced by 1/2), and I don't think they're necessary anyway. (Applies to similar patterns.)
4. 01:37:497 (3,4) - Spaced like 01:38:476 (5,1), but the first is spaced by 1/4 beats while the second is spaced by 1/2. Basically the same case as above, but I just want to emphasize that problem (that they can be tricky and deceptive) here.
5. 01:46:954 (1,2,3) - I prefer this rhythm to emphasize the vocals. 01:47:443 feels empty without any note, anyway.
6. 01:47:932 (4,5) - This follows the vocal better for me.
7. 02:08:476 (2) - Uh, move this to 02:08:313 and add a circle at 02:08:802? Goes better with the vocal.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. Uh, why are the bookmarks unsnapped... Not an important thing, though.

>Easy

1. 00:11:737 (1) - To be honest, the shape looks pretty random. Move the last anchor point to (28,168) so it will form a blanket-ish pattern with 00:10:433 (4)?
2. 01:32:606 (2) - Uhm, move to (360,176)? Looks neater, IMO.

fix all

>Normal

1. 02:05:215 (1) - Move the red node to (284,144)? It will make 02:03:584 (2,1) look nicer.

fix all

>Hard

1. 00:14:835 - Add a circle? idk why, but it feels so empty... o.o
2. 00:21:846 (4) - Add NC to denote that the spacing changes here? It might throw off players, you know...
3. 00:45:650 (1,2,3) - Just wanna say that making these notes spaced differently compared to the other 1/4-beats spaced notes might make them confusing (since it looks like they're spaced by 1/2), and I don't think they're necessary anyway. (Applies to similar patterns.) fixed, but can't fix in some other patterns with some reason
4. 01:37:497 (3,4) - Spaced like 01:38:476 (5,1), but the first is spaced by 1/4 beats while the second is spaced by 1/2. Basically the same case as above, but I just want to emphasize that problem (that they can be tricky and deceptive) here. fixed
5. 01:46:954 (1,2,3) - I prefer this rhythm to emphasize the vocals. 01:47:443 feels empty without any note, anyway. copypaste pattern, so no fix(and it's still good)
6. 01:47:932 (4,5) - This follows the vocal better for me. ^
7. 02:08:476 (2) - Uh, move this to 02:08:313 and add a circle at 02:08:802? Goes better with the vocal. I follow music here

The main problem that I see in this map is the spacing of those notes that are spaced by 1/4 beats on the timeline. Sometimes, the notes are touching each other (which is okay btw), and at the other times it's not touching (and thus looks as if they were spaced by 1/2 beats). This is confusing, seriously. sorry ==" can't fix some, but just make it reachable

Well, other than that, this is a great map (: I'm feeling like Niva for using that emoticon.

Good luck on the way

Once you're done with this mod... Maybe a surprise will ensue?whoa, what is it :3

DEAncientNaga wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]
Good
00:42:389 (3) - KIAI time ends (optional) ._.?
02:26:736 - Spinner ends here sounds better song still ongoing

[Easy]
00:40:433 (1,2,3,4) - Too far from each note, edit or try replace 00:42:389 (3) - with slider on purpose

[Normal]
>.o)b

[Hard]
00:55:433 (6,1) - Make just a little more further between each note I want (1) blanket with slider (6)

All looks quite nice to be ranked, good luck >.o /

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

00:03:904 (3) - Pause the song at 00:02:763 and adjust the points on this slider so that it wraps around 00:01:296 (1) nicer. Then you can readjust 00:05:861 (4) k

00:48:252 (1) - Move to x236 y236? not only will it go around 00:47:600 (4) , but it also falls on the same place as the end of 00:50:861 (1) and you don't have to reposition anything k

01:33:908 (1) - Don't really approve of this spinner as the next note comes too quickly afterwards. (this is an easy map) If you insist on leaving it then I'm fine with that leave it like that as shorter spinner not work well and slider doesn't fit here

NORMAL

00:03:252 (4,5,1) - Doesn't feel like a suitable place to stack notes imo it's still good :/

I loved this diff Your sliders are nice and sexy btw <3

HARD

00:14:339 (1) - It doesn't really fit as a repeat slider k

Loved this diff as well but the distance spacing is rather inconsistent. I'm talking about the times where your quarter beats have a half beat spacing. It's not very good even though it looks good.

Star

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Tari wrote:

I'm not sure, but is having 2 notes before a timing point good? how will it be possible to click accurately to the 2nd note before the red line?

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