• General

1. Are you sure the VS is capitalized like that? isn't it "vs."/"Vs."/"VS."? Versus in short usually has a dot after the S.
   
2. Could you edit the OP of the thread? The spoilerbox specifying the difficulties names. Replace the spoilerbox code with it a [box=] code with "difficulty spread" as the title or something so people know you clarified that.
   
3. Not sure if AIBAT is serious or what lmao. Look at what it points out. Maybe a bug?:
   Inconsistency in Title: - [Daydreaming] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [BakaCI's Dreaming] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [BD's Smiling] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [Waking Up] : WANDERLUST Reprise.

• [Daydreaming]

1. 00:24:029 (3) - If you listen carefully, this note doesn't follow anything. My idea was replacing it with a slider, so you don't ignore the piano at 00:24:113 but it might result confusing for beginners so.. I don't know. I guess you can leave the note this way? I can't think of other way.
2. 00:21:363 - Please add a note here. I agree with Snepif on this:
   
   

   Snepif wrote:

   Add a note here, it's a big white tick and kinda super necessary, and I see no reason to leave it unmapped.

   Also, if you do it you should remove whistle at the end of 00:20:029 (2) and then add whistle to 00:21:363 (3). Btw I saw your reply to his suggestion but that's not what he meant. That note you shown him in that screenshot is 00:22:696 (1).
3. 00:46:696 (5) - This slider shape flows bad with 00:45:363 (1,2,3,4). Consider trying something else here, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

• [BakaCI's Dreaming]
  
  *Oh man I hate modding collabs lol. Let's try anyways..
  
  Bakari

1. 00:08:029 (1) - How about making this slider curved like this? I think you used too many straight sliders (which is not bad) but it would be good if you give it some variety:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:696 (1) - The repeat doesn't follow anything and that makes it sound weird, out of place. Consider trying something else. I personally prefer this way, rather than notes/repeat at red tick. Sounds better imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:363 (1,2,3,4) - Is this pattern still from your mapped part? It's really odd. Come to think about it, BCI should have mapped all the whole kiai by her own. A single combo by you is just .. meh. Also the SB made me think it was off-timed, but it seems like this was mapped by you. This should have been 1/2 of the map by you and the other half by BCI (aka the whole kiai). I know It may be bothersome, but I suggest you to give the whole kiai to BCI. Or change the storyboard and mark your part as BCI's. When the kiai starts it gives an opportunity for BCI to let the player know it's her part. I know it's not an unrankable issue, it's a matter of consistency.
   
   BCI
   
4. 00:39:029 - Please add a note here, you're ignoring a white tick and that feels awkward to play. I tested your part and I failed there :<
5. 00:44:029 (3) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it like this for a better flow with 00:43:363 (2).
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:44:363 - Same thing about ignoring white ticks. White ticks are importants beat (at least in most of cases) so please consider adding note~

• [Waking Up]

1. 00:21:363 (6) - A slider here clearly don't fit imo. Better replace it with a circle or expand the current slider to 00:22:363.
2. 00:39:363 (1,2,3,4) - You could add to these sliders some whistles to follow the 8bits sound they follow imo.
3. 00:50:363 (8) - Add a whistle here to follow the piano?

• [BD's Smiling]

1. 00:05:363 (1) - I think this shape fits more the vocals than the current:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:363 (2) - Whistle to follow the piano?
3. 00:26:696 (4) - ^ at the start.
4. 00:28:029 (5) - ^ at the end.
5. 00:50:196 (4) - Soft whistle at the start again to follow piano^?
   ________________________

Kei wrote:

Hello again Sieg~ mod from Snep's queue.
Hey~

• General

1. Are you sure the VS is capitalized like that? isn't it "vs."/"Vs."/"VS."? Versus in short usually has a dot after the S.
   Yep http://lapfox.bandcamp.com/album/on-trax-vol-5 track 24
   
2. Could you edit the OP of the thread? The spoilerbox specifying the difficulties names. Replace the spoilerbox code with it a [box=] code with "difficulty spread" as the title or something so people know you clarified that.
   done
   
3. Not sure if AIBAT is serious or what lmao. Look at what it points out. Maybe a bug?:
   Inconsistency in Title: - [Daydreaming] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [BakaCI's Dreaming] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [BD's Smiling] : WANDERLUST Reprise - [Waking Up] : WANDERLUST Reprise.
   lol, idk... retyped all titles

• [Daydreaming]

1. 00:24:029 (3) - If you listen carefully, this note doesn't follow anything. My idea was replacing it with a slider, so you don't ignore the piano at 00:24:113 but it might result confusing for beginners so.. I don't know. I guess you can leave the note this way? I can't think of other way.
   replaced by slider, I think this was not so horrible to hit but anyway
2. 00:21:363 - Please add a note here. I agree with Snepif on this:
   
   

   Snepif wrote:

   Add a note here, it's a big white tick and kinda super necessary, and I see no reason to leave it unmapped.

   Also, if you do it you should remove whistle at the end of 00:20:029 (2) and then add whistle to 00:21:363 (3). Btw I saw your reply to his suggestion but that's not what he meant. That note you shown him in that screenshot is 00:22:696 (1).
   now I see, that's really strange
   added, whistle left on end of 00:20:029 (2) - and added 00:21:363 (3) - still all of this follows piano and sounds nice
   
3. 00:46:696 (5) - This slider shape flows bad with 00:45:363 (1,2,3,4). Consider trying something else here, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

fixed and changed form of slider

• [BakaCI's Dreaming]
  
  *Oh man I hate modding collabs lol. Let's try anyways..
  I'll fix something for Bakari here
  
  Bakari

1. 00:08:029 (1) - How about making this slider curved like this? I think you used too many straight sliders (which is not bad) but it would be good if you give it some variety:
   
   SPOILER

   
   changed
2. 00:26:696 (1) - The repeat doesn't follow anything and that makes it sound weird, out of place. Consider trying something else. I personally prefer this way, rather than notes/repeat at red tick. Sounds better imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
   changed
3. 00:29:363 (1,2,3,4) - Is this pattern still from your mapped part? It's really odd. Come to think about it, BCI should have mapped all the whole kiai by her own. A single combo by you is just .. meh. Also the SB made me think it was off-timed, but it seems like this was mapped by you. This should have been 1/2 of the map by you and the other half by BCI (aka the whole kiai). I know It may be bothersome, but I suggest you to give the whole kiai to BCI. Or change the storyboard and mark your part as BCI's. When the kiai starts it gives an opportunity for BCI to let the player know it's her part. I know it's not an unrankable issue, it's a matter of consistency.
   changed
   
   
   • [Waking Up]
   1. 00:21:363 (6) - A slider here clearly don't fit imo. Better replace it with a circle or expand the current slider to 00:22:363.
      00:21:363 (6) - to circle
   2. 00:39:363 (1,2,3,4) - You could add to these sliders some whistles to follow the 8bits sound they follow imo.
      uguu
   3. 00:50:363 (8) - Add a whistle here to follow the piano?
      yep missed

Call me back and don't be so shy this time please :3 /runs

Kei wrote:

• [BakaCI's Dreaming]
  
  BCI

1. 00:39:029 - Please add a note here, you're ignoring a white tick and that feels awkward to play. I tested your part and I failed there :< firstly I don't think ignoring white ticks is that big fault o3o secondly, I'm following a strong not-so-whistle sound here, and this sound isn't exist at this place.
   I tested it by myself and it feels ok while playing (52 lvl pls) and + I checked it using 25% playback rate and didn't hear anything important here, so I decided not to put this note here
2. 00:44:029 (3) - This slider flows bad imo. Please consider moving it like this for a better flow with 00:43:363 (2). remaked into a circle for consistency
3. 00:44:363 - Same thing about ignoring white ticks. White ticks are importants beat (at least in most of cases) so please consider adding note~ hue it's not that important case. same as above :<

BCI wrote:

Kei wrote:

• [BakaCI's Dreaming]
  
  BCI

1. 00:39:029 - Please add a note here, you're ignoring a white tick and that feels awkward to play. I tested your part and I failed there :< firstly I don't think ignoring white ticks is that big fault o3o secondly, I'm following a strong not-so-whistle sound here, and this sound isn't exist at this place.
   I tested it by myself and it feels ok while playing (52 lvl pls) and + I checked it using 25% playback rate and didn't hear anything important here, so I decided not to put this note here

Sieg wrote:

Discussed with Bakari about that situation and we decided to replace collab diff with my old hard version. Sorry about that BCI.