GeneralYou need two taikos.Offset is different in the taiko.UWS's NormalFun map. Only small things to consider.
00:58:470 (1,2,3) - Personally I feel the angle could be better.
http://puu.sh/2WZ00.jpg Very minor change.
01:41:670 (1) - I'm not entirely sure about this. I don't really like the shape, but that's just me. I think you could improve the shape by bringing the curve part slightly lower.
http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg The current angle just seems slightly too high.
01:41:670 (1,2,3,4) - You have hitsounds here, but they sound like blank hitsounds to me. The hitsounds lack depth here.
02:11:670 (3,1) - It would look better if the first curve of 1 matched the curve at 3 as a mirror. I think it has a better affect than the blanket with the second curve. I'm not sure if it's feasible for the next part though.
02:43:470 (3,1) - Such a weird crossover. I came up with this
http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg It goes into the note curve perfectly.
02:46:470 (1,2,3) - Those claps >.<
02:47:670 (3) - Maybe a finish.
02:57:270 (3,4,1) - If you can get the spacing equal here it would look better.
03:00:870 (1) - Curve is too sharp. Use a softer curve.
HardThere were multiple things I didn't agree with in this difficulty. It was largely personal opinion so I didn't mention much of what I didn't like. I had problems playing the song when the spacing increased to 1.3 and some stacks just felt awkward to play. I don't expect you to change any of these things on my behalf.
00:38:970 (5,1) - Please line up.
00:54:570 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Transition is uneven. I don't care for the 5,6 stack, but that's just personal opinion.
01:10:470 (1) - Bad angle. I suggest curving like this instead.
http://puu.sh/2XPbn.jpg (Make similar to 01:11:520 (5) - )
01:36:570 (6,1) - Alignment could be better.
01:56:970 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I have to say this looks better upside down, because of the way the approach circles change. 01:58:170 (9,1) - Not really a fan that 9 doesn't point towards the next object though. Not sure what you can do about it though.
02:12:870 (1) - Same comment as the mirror.
02:44:070 (1,4) - Use a normal curve? These look out of place.
03:08:070 (1) - Looks slightly too low to line up perfectly with previous slider. Move to y 334
03:24:870 (1,2) - Improve how these interlock?
InsaneI'm pretty sure this song is unsightreadable. I'm not sure if that is a bad thing though. I'll leave that to be answered by someone else.
00:22:320 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing keeps change here. Keep it consistent!
00:56:670 (3,4,5,6) - Unusual transition. It doesn't seem to reflect the song very well, but I could be wrong.
02:17:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wild changes in jump spacing. The vocals weren't there to back up the wild spacing changes as in previous parts of the song. I can't play it so feel free to get a second opinion.
02:59:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So confusing to follow ><
Good luck