vahn10 wrote:

[Easy]
00:00:140 (1,2) - these sliders can be more symmetrical with this code OK

112,80,140,2,0,P|41:192|112:304,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,1949,2,0,P|471:192|400:80,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:14:619 (1) - this slider can be improved with this code OK

368,96,14619,6,0,P|256:25|144:96,1,280,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:17:334 (3) - remove finish at the start of the slider and replace it with clap OK
00:30:909 (3,4) - remove whistle OK
00:31:814 (5) - remove finish at the start of the slider and replace it with whistle OK
00:39:959 (1,3) - remove clap OK
00:42:221 (2) - ^ OK
01:07:108 (2) - ^ OK

RatedNC17 wrote:

Sorry if my mod is the suck.

[Easy]
00:17:334 (3) - I think it would sound better with this being a clap slider OK
00:25:479 (1) - Put another finish(?)
00:29:099 (1) - ^
00:34:549 (3,4) - ^
01:13:443 (1) - ^
01:15:253 (2) - ^
01:17:968 (3) - ^
02:09:099 (3) - remove the whistle

Alarido wrote:

M4M from your queue (:

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[Lover's Insane]
♥ No true complaint, just a note:
02:28:782 ~ 02:37:606 feels empty >< would place some sliders/notes going with the voice and add a spinner from 02:31:723 to 02:35:796 or a bit more (:　　OK

That's it ^^ Hope you rank the map as soon as possible! Let's bring more challenge to our osu! Pros!!!!

Att.

Alarido wrote:

M4M from your queue (:

:!: Unrankable ─ Doubtful ─ Tips & tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments

Lines with no marks are mods.

[Easy]
♥ No complaints here, although the slider forms are a bit uncommon for their placements that don't form a clear path to follow, but it's OK since spacing is 100%

[code_white03's Normal]
* The spacing is a bit regular, with some changes around 1.1x ~ 1.2x. In general, placements don't form clear paths to flow, while others present different forms. Some flow pieces are very interesting, like the "fishhook flow" among 00:19:597 (3,1) - it's called "Fishhook" because player have go forth to catch and then bring the cursor while playing the slider, making a bit more effort to achieve it.
00:02:402 (2) - it's too near from 00:01:497 (3) in a way the player could hit 00:02:402 (2) before 00:01:949 (1) and break combos >< The solution in the next line, if applied, will help on this too. ▼
00:02:402 (2,3) - JUMP! Not allowed at Normal diffs. For fixing this problem, select and move 00:01:949 (1,2) together to x:132 y:240.
00:04:212 (2) - Overlap its head with 00:05:569 (1)'s head for better appearance.
00:05:117 (3) - Move by 1 grid to left for slight spacing.
00:06:927 (3) - Move to x:128 y:284 for fixing some spacing.
♥ 00:20:049 (1,2,3) - Loved the flow here, could be good if try doing more of these (:
00:47:198 (1,2) - why not do like this? → http://puu.sh/5e73x.jpg
* From 01:52:583 to 01:59:483 - there is speed change, what usually not allowed at Normal and Easy diffs. But... I feel we need look for some BAT sayings on this for this song, specially, since this is OK for me due to song calmness and also for slider ticks telling us how SV goes here too.

* This diff is very well hitsounded and rhythmed just need some work on placements imho

[-RIKKA- Throat]
* WHOA!!! Auto'ed because I'm not thelewa but this diff feels AMAZING ♥ Only may some complaint on some 1/4 parts (not all), I'm very doubtful if song needs them >< specially 00:34:529 (1,2,3,4) where there's only 4 strong beats (BASH BASH BASH BASH), very suitable for BIG KATs on Taiko diff (Oni). on osu!standard, simple notes with higher spacing feels very fiting (:

[BluO's Hard]
♥ No complaints here.

[J-yan Throat]
♥ No complaints here too.

[LdN Throat]
♥ Very good placements ^^ I've no complaints here.

[Lover's Insane]
♥ No true complaint, just a note:
02:28:782 ~ 02:37:606 feels empty >< would place some sliders/notes going with the voice and add a spinner from 02:31:723 to 02:35:796 or a bit more (:

That's it ^^ Hope you rank the map as soon as possible! Let's bring more challenge to our osu! Pros!!!!

Att.

Marcooo wrote:

Yo. Please keep in mind that I am not a mapper. I only point out what felt weird to me while playing.
(is this even a nightcore mix? no other maps have nightcore mix in them, neither have youtube videos)

[Lover's Insane]
00:45:275 Add circle? Seems like you just skipped an obvious vocal　OK
01:03:375 Add circle? ^　OK
01:06:995 ^　OK
01:10:615 ^　OK
01:11:067 ^　OK
01:36:746 (1) sounds really out of place. remove?　OK
01:43:646 Add circle　OK
01:45:682 Add circle　OK
02:07:289 ^　OK
02:15:773 ^ These sound so extremely awkward without circles, you just skip parts which you have previously (in the song) mapped　OK
02:23:805 (1) sounds really weird if you ask me.　OK
02:24:823 (2) move like this? http://puu.sh/5zhVd.jpg　OK
I probably just don't get your style of mapping, if so, please ignore ^_^


Didn't look at hard and normal because i don't know shit about mapping and how they're supposed to be, same with hitsounds.
Hope this helped at least a tiny bit ^_^

Marcooo wrote:

[LdN Throat]
00:22:198 Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/5zkEo.jpg Doesn't really make it much better imo, but well, changed it.
01:52:017 Why not start here? ( I mean I can hear why but if you move the green section to 01:52:017 then it would sound good IMO) Nope, doesn't really fit imo.
02:28:556 slower slider? doesn't really matter but whatever Changed it.
Probably my favorite map out of the set

Marcooo wrote:

Yo. Please keep in mind that I am not a mapper. I only point out what felt weird to me while playing.
(is this even a nightcore mix? no other maps have nightcore mix in them, neither have youtube videos)

[-Rikka- Throat]
00:37:470 Sounds reaaaallly weird and out of place.　OK
01:45:343 Make this a stream instead of slider, slider + 1 circle looks and feels weird. OK
good map!

Didn't look at hard and normal because i don't know shit about mapping and how they're supposed to be, same with hitsounds.
Hope this helped at least a tiny bit ^_^

Marcooo wrote:

[J-yan Throat]
00:25:931 NC? no, useless, sorry
00:49:008 (1,2,3,4,5) feels really weird that you made the begging and parts that are mapped in other diffs easy by only putting full notes and then you do a 5 note long jumpy thing.. maybe it's just me i thought the same, but it's not, i respected the snap for that it doesn't give any problem for the players
01:01:565 Add circle with NC? i didn't wanted to do it in this part of the timeline, so no
01:08:692 I suggest you space this out. felt weird when playing changed to snap x1.0
01:45:541 Why? sounds really out of place.. just followed the music the best i could, and it's fit, so no

P o M u T a wrote:

putigame's request (BluO's Hard)
00:14:619 (1) - 始点のclap消してfinish追加。
00:50:592 (4) - 終点finish
00:51:044 (1) - このスピナーのスタートを00:50:931 - ここに移動するとよりボーカルにフィットします。終点は同じなので移動する際終点伸ばし忘れることのないように。また、このスピナーにfinishをつけてもいいかなと思いました。
00:58:058 (1) - ここclapじゃなくて音聴く限りfinishだと思いました。clap削除してfinishに変更。
00:59:868 (1) - 音聴く限り始点finish付けたほうが味でるかと思いました。
01:01:678 (1) - ^
01:03:488 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:05:298 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:07:108 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:08:918 (1) - 終点にfinish追加。
01:10:728 (1) - 始点にfinish追加。
01:11:633 (1) - 始点にfinish追加。
01:19:778 (2) - サビはいるとこだし、ここで区切りとしてNCつけたい。あとclapじゃなくてfinish.
01:21:587 (1) - 始点のclap削除してfinish追加。
01:23:397 (1) - clap削除してfinish追加。
01:25:207 (1) - ^ whistleはそのまま。
01:27:017 (1) - 始点clap消してfinish追加。
01:28:827 (1) - 始点finish
01:30:637 (3) - 始点clap消してfinish追加。
01:32:447 (1) - 始点finish追加。
01:34:031 (4) - 終点finish追加。
01:37:651 (5) - ^
01:37:990 (1) - finish追加
01:47:719 - 無駄な緑線
01:59:597 (2) - 始点にsoftのfinish, finishつけて左上のAdditonsをsoftに変更してあげるとできます。
02:01:406 (2) - ^
02:03:216 (1) - ^
02:04:121 (1) - ^
02:05:479 (3) - ^
02:06:836 (1) - 始点clap消して終点finish.
02:15:886 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
02:17:696 (4) - 始点にfinish
02:19:506 (1) - ^ clap削除
02:21:090 (7) - 終点finish
02:24:710 (5) - ^
見落とし部分は一杯あると思いますが、シンバル鳴ってる場所はfinish加えるとよりfitするんで試してみてください。

1. 00:06:022 (2,3) - 2~3の間が不自然に感じました。00:06:474 - には大きなピアノの音があるのでこの音をとって繋いだほうが自然につながると思います。
   ex:
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:954 (3) - 1grid left
3. 00:20:954 (3) - move x:128 y:304
   00:20:049 (1,2) - とDSが1.20なのでここだけ1.06なのはおかしいかなと思います。
4. 00:35:999 - 不要な緑線。消して大丈夫だと思います。
5. 01:12:538 (4) - 歌の始まり部分だと思うのでここでNC and 01:12:990 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:19:438 - 不要な緑線
7. 01:23:850 (2) - 1grid up and 01:24:755 (4) - 1grid down
   01:23:850 (2,4) - が重なっているのが気になりました。
8. 02:28:556 (1,3) - 配置が見難く感じたのでこんな配置どうでしょうか。
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   spacingのバラ付きが目立つので少なくともイントロ,Aメロ,サビなど部分部分でのDSは揃えたほうがいいと思います。
   できれば全て統一したほうがいいかなと思います。

AJeyB wrote:

You should change diff names, so it can be ranked, i don't think they will accept "x`s throat ".

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

Neta wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue

[BluO's Hard]

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

GOOD LUCK~

Neta wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue

[BluO's Hard]

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

GOOD LUCK~

-Nanaka- wrote:

hihihi
げすとのみなさんもこんにちは！

[じぇねらる]
オフセット+15～20ほどずれてます
ソースが入ってないので追加し全Diff統一しましょう
Ex追加されたしラバーズExtraでもいいかもね！

[のーまる]
HP3AR4OD3でいいと思いまふ！
00:00:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 音取り難しいかと
00:32:719 (3,4) - 見栄えも流れも悪いので横に並べるかblanketつくってあげまそ
00:34:529 (1,2,3) - 素直に三角でいいと思います。
00:45:388 (1,2,3) - ここは切るならにこの音取りが合うと思います　http://puu.sh/7JNc0.jpg
00:49:800 (2,3) - 合ってないと思うので　http://puu.sh/7JNk1.jpg
01:33:239 (2,3) - ^
01:03:488 (1) - 流れ切れてる感があるので曲げてあげましょう
01:12:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - いきなり単発地獄なので一番みたいにスライダー混ぜてやったほうが違和感ないとおもいます。
01:20:682 (1,2,1) - NCいりません(複数あるので全てカット)
01:52:357 (1,1) - 違和感しかない！ｗ
02:05:026 (1,2,3,4) - 単発でくるくるするよりもスライダーやリバースでくるくるさせたほうがかわいいと思います！( ,,Ծ ‸ Ծ,,)

DS変わるので流れや配置などはスキップしてまーす
こういうの伸ばしてあげたり連続リバース減らして後に余裕持たせるとレート下がると思うので頑張って！

ノーマルだけ頼まれた？感じなので終わります！
りっかちゃんがんば！