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retadidas
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月9日 at 21:40:20

Artist: M2U
Title: mozart
Tags: mozart M2U retadidas
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5369kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (2 stars, 340 notes)
  2. Hard - 7Key (3.61 stars, 981 notes)
  3. Insane - 7Key (4.46 stars, 1376 notes)
  4. Normal - 5Key (2.94 stars, 547 notes)
  5. SHD - 7Key (5 stars, 2339 notes)
Download: M2U - mozart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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update 20130509
Little change for SHD diff and Insane diff(thanks for luyuja mod)
update 20130508
Little change for Hard diff and Insane diff
More change for SHD diff
update 20130507
More change for SHD diff(Thank you for Lieselotte's advise)
update 20130428
SHD diff fix an Unrankable problem
update 20130411
Little change for Easy diff and Normal diff(Very thanks for PROGUY Mod)
update 20130410
Add beatmap background(Very thanks for my friend Wendy)
update 20130409
Little change for Normal diff and fix an Unrankable problem(thanks for Sakuya Lv9 mod)
Little change for SHD diff(thanks for luyuja mod)
update 20130408
Little change for Hard diff(thanks for woc2006 mod)
Change something SHD diff
Very thanks for xxbidiao mod
update 20130328
All diff have little change except SHD diff
Change hitsound normal to soft
Very thanks for Chonicle mod
update 20130327
All diff have more change
Very thanks for Entozer mod,He put a lot of very useful advice
update 20130326
Normal diff little change(thanks for Roxas mod)
Hard diff little change(thanks for Roxas mod)
SHD diff little change
It's my 2nd beatmap,
Upload have something problems before, now upload again.
Topic Starter
retadidas
This is original upload link
p/2142705
Because upload have something problems before.I have to upload again.
Now All the difficulties have been significantly revised.
Please MOD again,very thanks!
Roxas
Ok dunno where I have to mod so I mod here

[General]

Remove the tags because they're artist and title lol

[Easy]

Maybe too low HP drain and OD?

00:00:227 (227|1) - add finish
00:03:427 (3427|0) - ^
00:05:027 (5027|3,5827|3) - ^

Don't care 'bout hitsounding lol

01:41:227 - Circle on 3rd and 4th column
01:41:627 - ^
01:42:027 - ^
01:43:427 (103427|2) - , 01:45:027 (105027|0) - , 01:49:827 (109827|2) - , 01:51:427 (111427|1) - Remove :(

[Normal]

00:45:627 (45627|0,45627|1,45827|4,45827|3,46027|1,46027|0,46227|3,46227|4,46427|1,46427|0,46627|3,46627|4) - I think it's better to remove pink circles it's a normal :/
00:47:227 (47227|1,47227|0,47427|3,47427|4,47627|0,47627|1,47827|4,47827|3,48027|1,48027|0,48227|3,48227|4) - ^
00:51:427 (51427|3,51427|1) - Remove and put circles on 1 and 5
01:41:027 (101027|0,101127|1,101427|1,101527|2,101827|2,101927|3) - Too difficult imo..

[Hard]
01:42:627 - Too difficult for an hard? :/

[Insane]

00:29:027 (29027|4) - Move the circle on 5th column in 4th column
00:47:227 (47227|2,47227|1,47427|4,47427|5,47627|2,47627|1,47827|4,47827|5,48027|1,48027|2,48227|5,48227|4) - Add center circle for every beat? o:

Can't properly mod SHD is okay for me :DDD Lol good luck \o\
Topic Starter
retadidas

Roxas wrote:

Ok dunno where I have to mod so I mod here

[Easy]

Maybe too low HP drain and OD?

00:00:227 (227|1) - add finish
00:03:427 (3427|0) - ^
00:05:027 (5027|3,5827|3) - ^

Don't care 'bout hitsounding lol

01:41:227 - Circle on 3rd and 4th column
01:41:627 - ^
01:42:027 - ^
01:43:427 (103427|2) - , 01:45:027 (105027|0) - , 01:49:827 (109827|2) - , 01:51:427 (111427|1) - Remove :(

[Normal]

00:45:627 (45627|0,45627|1,45827|4,45827|3,46027|1,46027|0,46227|3,46227|4,46427|1,46427|0,46627|3,46627|4) - I think it's better to remove pink circles it's a normal :/
00:47:227 (47227|1,47227|0,47427|3,47427|4,47627|0,47627|1,47827|4,47827|3,48027|1,48027|0,48227|3,48227|4) - ^
00:51:427 (51427|3,51427|1) - Remove and put circles on 1 and 5
01:41:027 (101027|0,101127|1,101427|1,101527|2,101827|2,101927|3) - Too difficult imo..

[Hard]
01:42:627 - Too difficult for an hard? :/

[Insane]

00:29:027 (29027|4) - Move the circle on 5th column in 4th column
00:47:227 (47227|2,47227|1,47427|4,47427|5,47627|2,47627|1,47827|4,47827|5,48027|1,48027|2,48227|5,48227|4) - Add center circle for every beat? o:

Can't properly modSHD is okay for me :DDD Lol good luck \o\
Very thanks for your MOD
But i'm not quite understand your advise for Easy,i find that is no circle on the timeline you say...
Normal is good idea,i already changed
Hard i change to hold,just feel better than before...
insane i just feel that is keep queue,so no change...

Last thank you for your MOD again :)
Entozer
Mostly modding pattern for now. Since this is pattern modding, you don't have to follow if you don't want to, but I feel it plays better this way

General: Try to put OD for all diffs at 7 (or 8)
Some parts looks a bit messy, hopefully try to be consistent and balance the note distrubtion (Easy diff looks good though)
Try to add some sounds to the note (osu default hitsound works), Decrease volume%

Lane count will start from left \o/
Easy
Hp=4?

01:03:827 (63827|1) - Move to 3rd lane? (Just so the note distribution for this part/pattern will be balanced)

01:14:627 (74627|3) - Add note?
01:15:827 (75827|0) - ^

01:31:827 (91827|2) - Move to 2nd lane
01:32:227 (92227|2) - 3rd lane (A mirror of previous pattern) Again, for balance

01:56:227 (116227|2) - move to 2nd lane
01:56:627 (116627|3) - move to 3rd lane (For balance)

02:03:427 (123427|3,123827|3,124227|2,124627|1) - You can put this as a stair (like these 02:01:827 (121827|0,122227|1,122627|2,123027|3) - ) for variance (and balance. It looks more neat)

02:09:027 (129027|2) - Move to 2nd lane

02:39:027 (159027|2) - Move to 1st lane

02:42:627 (162627|2) - Move to 2nd lane (Starting from this part, the 3rd lane have too much notes)
02:45:827 (165827|2) - ^

02:48:627 (168627|3) - Move to 2nd lane?
02:55:027 (175027|3) - ^

02:58:227 (178227|3) - This is a bit too hard. Move to 1st lane

I'm not sure about this one, but maybe you can delete 03:12:227 (192227|1) -

Normal
Try to keep the patterns same for one measure/beat

This 00:01:827 (1827|4,1827|1) - http://puu.sh/2oH9Y This feels weird for me >< Maybe you can change it to this: http://puu.sh/2oHbM

Also in this screenshot http://puu.sh/2oHbM 00:03:427 (3427|3) - Change to 5th lane.

00:13:827 (13827|2) - Move to 4th lane (I think it's better if you reserve the middle for the hold)
00:14:627 (14627|1) - Maybe you can put this in the middle lane?

00:17:027 (17027|2) - Put to 2nd lane
00:18:227 (18227|4) - Put to 1st lane

00:45:027 to00:51:427 - I like what you did here xD


From 01:29:827 (89827|1) - to 01:32:627 (92627|3) - It looks like this http://puu.sh/2oHqJ I think it's better if the pattern is like this http://puu.sh/2oHrM (variety)

01:41:027 (101027|0,101127|1) - plays weird for the song ><
From this: http://puu.sh/2oHuI Maybe you can change it to this: http://puu.sh/2oHvr


01:46:227 (106227|3,106427|3,106627|3) - I think you should delete these because your previous pattern did not have double notes for this. (Though If you want you don't have to delete it)
01:47:827 (107827|3,108027|3,108227|3) - Same for these
01:52:627 (112627|3,112827|3,113027|3) - ^
01:54:227 (114227|3,114427|3,114627|3) - ^

02:23:427 (143427|3) - Add note?

02:27:027 - Add a note

02:47:427 (167427|2) - Move to 1st lane?
02:51:827 (171827|4) - Move to 4th lane?

02:53:827 (173827|2) - Move to 1st lane?

03:12:227 (192227|1) - (Not sure again, but delete?)

Hard
00:41:027 (41027|2) - Move to 1st lane

http://puu.sh/2oHV8 @ 01:41:027 (101027|3) - Feels weird >< The song does not call for it (according to what I hear) Change it to this? http://puu.sh/2oHWE

01:57:027 (117027|4) - Add note?

02:14:627 (134627|3) - Add note?

02:20:627 (140627|2) - Add note?
02:25:027 (145027|0) - Add note?

03:12:227 (192227|2,192227|0) - (Not sure, remove?)

Insane
00:04:427 (4427|4,4827|4) - Move to 6th lane
00:04:427 (4427|2,4827|2) - Move to 2nd lane
00:04:627 (4627|3,4627|1) - Move one lane to the right

00:15:027 (15027|5,15027|6) - Delete one note? (Consistency)

00:42:227 (42227|0) - Delete
00:42:627 (42627|0) - Add

00:54:427 (54427|4) - Add
00:54:527 (54527|3) - ^

http://puu.sh/2oI7G 00:55:427 (55427|0) - Some part have no piano sounds. Change it to this? http://puu.sh/2oIbp

01:07:427 (67427|6,67427|5,67527|3,67527|4,67627|2,67627|1) - Do it like what you did in the previous pattern (no double notes ><)
01:09:027 (69027|5,69027|6,69127|3,69127|4,69227|2,69227|1) - ^

01:15:427 (75427|6) - Delete?
01:16:227 (76227|0) - ^

01:22:427 - Try to delete some notes (Make it two notes per line)
01:28:827 - ^

01:41:027 - This part, same as in other diff

01:57:027 (117027|4) - Add note

03:12:227 (192227|2,192227|4,192227|0) - (not sure, delete?)

SHD
SHD looks messy to me x_x But I'll try to mod it soon. Try to be consistent with the notes and noteplacement.
Topic Starter
retadidas

Entozer wrote:

Mostly modding pattern for now. Since this is pattern modding, you don't have to follow if you don't want to, but I feel it plays better this way

General: Try to put OD for all diffs at 7 (or 8)
Some parts looks a bit messy, hopefully try to be consistent and balance the note distrubtion (Easy diff looks good though)
Try to add some sounds to the note (osu default hitsound works), Decrease volume%

Lane count will start from left \o/
Easy
Hp=4?

01:03:827 (63827|1) - Move to 3rd lane? (Just so the note distribution for this part/pattern will be balanced)

01:14:627 (74627|3) - Add note?
01:15:827 (75827|0) - ^

01:31:827 (91827|2) - Move to 2nd lane
01:32:227 (92227|2) - 3rd lane (A mirror of previous pattern) Again, for balance

01:56:227 (116227|2) - move to 2nd lane
01:56:627 (116627|3) - move to 3rd lane (For balance)

02:03:427 (123427|3,123827|3,124227|2,124627|1) - You can put this as a stair (like these 02:01:827 (121827|0,122227|1,122627|2,123027|3) - ) for variance (and balance. It looks more neat)

02:09:027 (129027|2) - Move to 2nd lane

02:39:027 (159027|2) - Move to 1st lane

02:42:627 (162627|2) - Move to 2nd lane (Starting from this part, the 3rd lane have too much notes)
02:45:827 (165827|2) - ^

02:48:627 (168627|3) - Move to 2nd lane?
02:55:027 (175027|3) - ^

02:58:227 (178227|3) - This is a bit too hard. Move to 1st lane

I'm not sure about this one, but maybe you can delete 03:12:227 (192227|1) -

Normal
Try to keep the patterns same for one measure/beat

This 00:01:827 (1827|4,1827|1) - http://puu.sh/2oH9Y This feels weird for me >< Maybe you can change it to this: http://puu.sh/2oHbM

Also in this screenshot http://puu.sh/2oHbM 00:03:427 (3427|3) - Change to 5th lane.

00:13:827 (13827|2) - Move to 4th lane (I think it's better if you reserve the middle for the hold)
00:14:627 (14627|1) - Maybe you can put this in the middle lane?

00:17:027 (17027|2) - Put to 2nd lane
00:18:227 (18227|4) - Put to 1st lane

00:45:027 to00:51:427 - I like what you did here xD


From 01:29:827 (89827|1) - to 01:32:627 (92627|3) - It looks like this http://puu.sh/2oHqJ I think it's better if the pattern is like this http://puu.sh/2oHrM (variety)

01:41:027 (101027|0,101127|1) - plays weird for the song ><
From this: http://puu.sh/2oHuI Maybe you can change it to this: http://puu.sh/2oHvr


01:46:227 (106227|3,106427|3,106627|3) - I think you should delete these because your previous pattern did not have double notes for this. (Though If you want you don't have to delete it)
01:47:827 (107827|3,108027|3,108227|3) - Same for these
01:52:627 (112627|3,112827|3,113027|3) - ^
01:54:227 (114227|3,114427|3,114627|3) - ^

02:23:427 (143427|3) - Add note?

02:27:027 - Add a note

02:47:427 (167427|2) - Move to 1st lane?
02:51:827 (171827|4) - Move to 4th lane?

02:53:827 (173827|2) - Move to 1st lane?

03:12:227 (192227|1) - (Not sure again, but delete?)

Hard
00:41:027 (41027|2) - Move to 1st lane

http://puu.sh/2oHV8 @ 01:41:027 (101027|3) - Feels weird >< The song does not call for it (according to what I hear) Change it to this? http://puu.sh/2oHWE

01:57:027 (117027|4) - Add note?

02:14:627 (134627|3) - Add note?

02:20:627 (140627|2) - Add note?
02:25:027 (145027|0) - Add note?

03:12:227 (192227|2,192227|0) - (Not sure, remove?)

Insane
00:04:427 (4427|4,4827|4) - Move to 6th lane
00:04:427 (4427|2,4827|2) - Move to 2nd lane
00:04:627 (4627|3,4627|1) - Move one lane to the right

00:15:027 (15027|5,15027|6) - Delete one note? (Consistency)

00:42:227 (42227|0) - Delete
00:42:627 (42627|0) - Add

00:54:427 (54427|4) - Add
00:54:527 (54527|3) - ^

http://puu.sh/2oI7G 00:55:427 (55427|0) - Some part have no piano sounds. Change it to this? http://puu.sh/2oIbp

01:07:427 (67427|6,67427|5,67527|3,67527|4,67627|2,67627|1) - Do it like what you did in the previous pattern (no double notes ><)
01:09:027 (69027|5,69027|6,69127|3,69127|4,69227|2,69227|1) - ^

01:15:427 (75427|6) - Delete?
01:16:227 (76227|0) - ^

01:22:427 - Try to delete some notes (Make it two notes per line)
01:28:827 - ^

01:41:027 - This part, same as in other diff

01:57:027 (117027|4) - Add note

03:12:227 (192227|2,192227|4,192227|0) - (not sure, delete?)

SHD
SHD looks messy to me x_x But I'll try to mod it soon. Try to be consistent with the notes and noteplacement.
Very thanks for your MOD,Very detailed and very seriously, put a lot of very useful advice.
Although some places did not modify, but most of them refer to your proposal.

P.S :I think you should try SHD difficulty is very easy, although it’s look a bit messy
chonicle
Hi~ 小七姐 /.\

[Easy]
01:57:827 (117827|2,118227|1) - Move 1 column left?
02:37:027 (157027|3,157027|0) - 2nd and 3nd column. Consistant with later notes.
03:12:227 (192227|1) - hit finish

[Normal]
00:01:827 (1827|4,1827|1,2227|3,2227|1,2627|0,2627|3,3027|1,3027|3) - 这里前面都是重复段 对于这种要变pattern4小节一变比较好
00:15:127 (15127|0) - move to 00:15:027 (15027|0) -
00:37:027 (37027|2,37027|0,37827|0,37827|2) - 1st and 2nd column. #5音比较特殊 这么放更有感觉...也可以试试看其他pattern
00:43:427 (43427|2,43427|0,44227|0,44227|2) - 2nd and 3rd column. ^
00:56:227 (56227|1,56227|3,56627|3,56627|1,57027|3,57027|1,57427|1,57427|3) - #2 #2, 3, 3 double note其中一个可以变 如果是想map鼓就不要动
01:41:027 (101027|0,101127|1,101427|1,101527|2,101827|2,101927|3) - 这里重音都在红线上..
02:35:427 (155427|3,155427|1,156227|0,156227|3,157027|0,157027|3,157827|3,157827|1) - 前两个一样 后两个一样
03:12:227 - hit finish

[Hard]
02:32:227 (152227|5,152227|1) - 再跟一下234323432?前面跟了...
02:37:027 (157027|0,157027|5) - ^

[Insane]
00:24:827 (24827|6) - add note on 6th column
03:09:827 (189827|4) - remove

[General]
You need bg.
还有别都用hit normal啊.. soft系列比较好 normal略吵了 特别是那种小钢琴声 直接就盖过去了
woc2006
General
no preview point, set it to 19427
Turn off countdown and letterbox


Eazy
00:03:427 (3427|0,5027|3,5827|3) - finish volume 20%
00:29:427 (29427|2,30227|1) - ^
00:31:027 (31027|3,31427|3) - ^, and all notes that fit the same music behind.
01:40:727 - to 01:42:427 - there has strong beat, try adding a hold from 01:41:027 - to 01:42:627 - at column 3

Normal
00:05:027 (5027|0,5027|4,5827|4,5827|0) - finish volume 15%,and all same music behind

Hard
The same finish issue as above
00:20:027 (20027|5,20227|1,20427|3,20627|3) - I think this pattern can be replaced by the one you used in normal,like 00:20:027 (20027|5,20227|2,20327|1,20427|0,20527|1,20627|2) -
Luyuja
[SHD]
00:05:027 (5027|0) - 00:06:627 (6627|0) 之间调整下note SHD就要难点嘛 跟着节奏变 建议双键对点 17 35那种

00:57:827 (57827|5) - 这里开始钢琴有变化 建议不要做成这种楼梯的形式 因为音高和旋律变化很明显 我理想中是做成双乱 然后右手比较注重最高点的音和钢琴主旋律
01:01:027 (61027|2) - 这里建议做成双楼梯 隔一个键的那种最好 排列可以自己发挥 但要做成从左向右的形式
01:10:627 (70627|4) - 这里是上将说的建议remap段。。我感觉还好吧 就是连点有点讨厌,但并不是不好。另外感觉这一段是整首歌最难的地方。

01:36:227 (96227|4) - 老马哥说不够难吧 那就这里开始增加难度 面条松松按按的长面条加上1/2的小米
01:41:027 (101027|3) - 这里就别乱了 跟着节奏加几个拍砖休息下 01:42:227 (102227|6) - 这里改双阶或者裤衩都可以
01:45:827 (105827|3) - 这一段要乱弄的话,01:45:827 (105827|3) - 01:45:827 (105827|3) - 01:46:027 (106027|1) - 这3个位置的音最好加难下 其他部分可以适当减少note 后面同理
01:58:627 (118627|1) - 这里开始 01:58:627 (118627|1) - 01:58:827 (118827|2) - 01:59:227 (119227|0) - 01:59:427 (119427|0) - 01:59:427 (119427|0) - 这里关键音的note 最好在同一轨上 后面同理
02:30:627 (150627|6) - 这一部分建议双阶或者双乱
02:35:427 (155427|5) - 同样建议双阶或者双乱
02:36:227 (156227|0) - 02:37:027 (157027|4) 这中间建议简单点 和主旋律要有主次之分好点
02:37:027 (157027|4) - 这里就是主旋律喽 还是建议双阶或者双乱
02:38:627 (158627|6) - 建议多玩点花样 而且弄成8分音 就是1/2的note好点
03:11:827 (191827|3) - 面条结束之后的note可以不需要了吧。。
xxbidiao
an IRC mod on SHD difficulty:
21:55 xxbidiao: =w=
21:56 xxbidiao: 能看到嘛?
21:58 retadidas: 当然
21:58 xxbidiao: 还在嘛?
21:58 xxbidiao: 我刚好像掉了
21:59 xxbidiao: 进editor了吼一声._.
21:59 retadidas: 嗯
21:59 retadidas: 马上好
22:01 retadidas: OK
22:02 xxbidiao: 又红又专,233
22:02 xxbidiao: 00:05:027 (5027|0) -
22:02 retadidas: 这啥意思
22:02 xxbidiao: 这里可以来一发1/4加快鼓点?
22:02 retadidas: 去掉一个么
22:02 retadidas: 开始不想太难
22:03 xxbidiao: 哦,那就算了,纯建议=w=
22:03 retadidas: 你没发现我作图的风格都是一开始很简单,然后难度慢慢加大。。。
22:03 retadidas: 因为我打图一开始都会卡
22:03 xxbidiao: 0.0
22:04 xxbidiao: 00:29:427 (29427|3) - 加个音符?
22:04 xxbidiao: 或者上面的减个音符?
22:04 xxbidiao: 可以突出鼓点重音的样子
22:05 retadidas: 这边我也觉得没啥大改特改的必要
22:05 retadidas: 01:04:227 (64227|6,64227|2,64227|5,64227|4,64227|0) - 你是觉得从这开始不和谐么
22:05 xxbidiao: 其实我的感觉是01:10:627 (70627|4) -
22:06 retadidas: 对
22:06 retadidas: 这里很突兀
22:06 retadidas: 就是突然变难的感觉
22:06 xxbidiao: 这里你基本无视了音高纯粹摆好看了。。
22:07 xxbidiao: 而且双楼梯道理很牵强?
22:08 retadidas: 不算好看吧
22:08 retadidas: 是老马哥和菜馆都说这里太简单
22:08 retadidas: 我才改难的
22:08 retadidas: 菜馆说整体的难度起伏太大,要改平均一些
22:08 retadidas: 也不算特别牵强吧,那你觉得怎么改好?
22:08 xxbidiao: 没有鼓点的地方按照音高单乱,然后加上鼓点
22:09 xxbidiao: 这歌鼓点挺值得抓的说
22:12 xxbidiao: 01:17:027 (77027|0) - 从这里可以考虑增加点难度
22:12 xxbidiao: 既然准备后面做难了,加些难点也是可以的,把前面去掉的数量不回来._.
22:12 retadidas: 改了你没法看到啊
22:12 retadidas: 我Q截图给你
22:14 xxbidiao: 我先走查一遍好了~
22:16 xxbidiao: 01:26:627 (86627|2) - 01:36:027 (96027|0) -
22:17 xxbidiao: 这里也是建议按照音高和鼓点等等重排一下。难度不会降低很多的,抓出来你可能发现note数丝毫不会少。。
22:18 xxbidiao: 然后是这里01:41:127 (101127|2) - 实在没道理了吧。。。仔细听了下没音。。
22:18 retadidas: 本来有些就自由发挥的
22:18 retadidas: 不一定一定要有K音
22:18 retadidas: 菜馆还是谁给的意见
22:19 xxbidiao: 这里没丁点音,放了一堆键。。自由发挥过了也不行啊。。
22:19 xxbidiao: 比如OOO_自由发挥成OOOO还是可以的
22:19 xxbidiao: 把____自由发挥成OOOO就有点那啥了。。
22:19 retadidas: 哦,你说这里啊,我觉得一点都不过分啊
22:19 xxbidiao: 可以考虑搞成拍砖,效果也许不错
22:19 retadidas: 就单键改成双架而已
22:20 retadidas: 没有,主要HD和IN已经是拍砖了
22:20 xxbidiao: 这组2221-2221-2221
22:20 retadidas: 开源哥说过,不同难度铺面不能太雷同
22:20 xxbidiao: 没丁点道理,不如就搞成5拍也没事,反正搞出差别
22:20 retadidas: 我是花心思改排列
22:20 xxbidiao: 你这个没可能雷同了。。。
22:20 xxbidiao: 已经没可能了,和insane两重天
22:21 retadidas: 就是要这效果啊
22:21 xxbidiao: 而且要是真改完和insane能天差地别
22:21 xxbidiao: 只是现在改的有点像没跟音乐一样。。
22:21 xxbidiao: 刚那个地方改成条拍砖如何?也搞出差别了
22:22 retadidas: 这里的折音我没觉得有问题啊
22:22 retadidas: 确实有音啊
22:22 retadidas: 我先把前面改好
22:23 xxbidiao: 很牵强的说你把一个条拆成了一堆单点。。
22:24 xxbidiao: 01:45:827 (105827|3) - 这里的双点好很多了,不过如果按照音高来也会好很多。指右手部分
22:24 xxbidiao: 左手看出来音高了
22:24 xxbidiao: 应该说是后面全部可以考虑下音高。。音高就不谈了,说点别的
22:28 xxbidiao: 02:36:427 (156427|2) - 这里是个重灾区
22:29 xxbidiao: 02:59:427 (179427|1) - 这里也是个重灾区,不过到了终曲可以留点花样卡卡人。。
22:30 xxbidiao: 另外最后,03:11:827 (191827|1) - 这里建议改一下,现在这个样子的话这个音太突兀,可以考虑加些音突出这个音或者干脆砍掉这两个。
22:31 xxbidiao: 03:12:227 (192227|0) - 这个finish也觉得没有再来一个拍砖的必要,不过是小问题了
22:33 retadidas: 这是习惯性动作
22:33 retadidas: 每个难度最后都这样
22:33 retadidas: 倒数第二个突兀?
22:33 retadidas: 我还是故意配合节奏加的
22:33 retadidas: 除了EZ每个难度都有加
22:33 retadidas: 两个重灾区,第二个我觉得OK
22:33 retadidas: 第一个确实无视音高堆难度了
22:33 retadidas: 不过还是大体上遵从每个小节的开头音节的
22:33 retadidas: 就是把折音做成了楼梯
22:34 xxbidiao: 第二个还可以些,而且到了曲尾,问题不大了
22:34 xxbidiao: 前面还有个问题,刚一下到了后面没注意
22:35 xxbidiao: 00:57:827 (57827|5) - 这个楼梯有偷懒的嫌疑啊._.
22:35 xxbidiao: 该是左右左右左右这样的吧。。?手感也会好些
22:35 xxbidiao: 到01:01:027 (61027|2) - 为止,后面的没问题
22:36 retadidas: 楼梯从左边开始是吧
22:36 xxbidiao: 这个应该是161514242526这类的样子
22:37 xxbidiao: 音高上做成楼梯不太适合了
22:37 xxbidiao: 另外既然是SHD了,可以直接考虑加上鼓音,手感也会不错的
22:38 retadidas: 我觉得这里还是不改了,有点要面目全非
22:38 retadidas: 我在想后面的重灾区1怎么弄
22:39 xxbidiao: 嗯。。。不过你全曲没出现12131415这样的梗,统一一点也罢
22:39 retadidas: 是的
22:40 retadidas: 就是考虑到这点
Sakuya Lv9
小七姐加油~
綠色:資訊
藍色:建議
紅色:嚴重

[Easy]
My score (1PC): 977428 (99.30%)
01:26:627 (89827|0,90227|2,90627|1,91027|3,91427|3,91827|1,92227|2,92627|0) - I love the changes you made so that the pattern isn't plain "12344321" anymore.
02:47:427 (167427|2,168627|1,170627|0,171827|3,173827|2,175027|1,177027|1,178227|0) - Love how you put these notes in there.

I think this is a very good map for beginners, and the music make it almost like a tutorial stage.

[Normal]
My score (1PC): 978468 (99.41%)
00:07:427 (7427|0,8627|4,10627|0,11827|4,13827|2,15027|0,17027|2,18227|4) - These notes is placed like in the ending part of Easy, making it feel like a continuation from the Easy difficulty. I feel very warm when I went from Easy to Normal.
00:26:927 (26927|3,26927|3) - 2 notes at the same time in the same column. (Unrankable problem!)
00:31:427 (31427|3) - Maybe you should remove this note, because in the music this beat is softer than the one before it. Maybe you can try these too (from 00:29:027):
01:52:627 (112627|3,112827|3,113027|3,114227|3,114427|3,114627|3) - Since in this part, the music is softer, maybe you should remove all these notes, making it like this:

This one is really fun for me, it's not hard (for me), and interesting patterns keep coming, I am almost curious and dying because I want to know what comes next.

[Hard]
My score (5PC): 811547 (95.07%)
00:17:827 (19427|0,19627|2,19827|3,20027|5,20227|1,20427|3,20627|3) - Love this.
00:26:627 (26627|6,26827|4,27027|2,27427|5,27627|3,27827|1,28227|4,28427|2,28627|0) - Love this.
00:54:127 (54127|6,54227|5,54927|5,55027|4,55727|2,55827|1) - Love this too.
00:57:027 (57027|4,57027|2,57227|2,57227|4) - Love this too.
01:10:627 (70627|0,71027|1,71427|2,71827|3,72227|1) - This is hard, but fun to play, and once I get the point that this is simply the combination of the following, I can easily do this.
01:13:827 (73827|1) - I cannot do this. This is out of my ability range. Sorry, no comment.
01:29:827 (89827|4) - I cannot do this. This is out of my ability range. Sorry, no comment.
01:39:027 (99427|4) - This is still ok for me, all I did is to treat it like this:
01:55:427 (115427|2) - From this onwards, I can keep the combo by doing the same trick for above, but it is harder because there are more notes, and the notes actually stick together, which means I have to release and press the same button at the same time.

Again, I am really interested by the map, and constantly want to know what falls next.

[Insane]
My score (1PC): 634033 (88.82%)
02:16:227 (136227|0,136627|1,137027|2,137427|3,137827|6,138227|5,138627|4,139027|3) - With a little practice, I can do this! It's not too hard, it's an interesting pattern! Maybe you can use this kind of thing in Hard later.

I like most of the stairs, but I just can't do it yet. I need improvement. :P

[SHD]
My score (1PC): Failed near the 1:00 time.
I like to watch auto play it, but I don't want to touch this anymore. D:



以上是小弟一點愚見,請斟酌參考 :D
PROGUY
Hi there! :)

[General]
- Y U NO PUT PREVIEW POINT?
- Adjust audio lead-in to 2 seconds.

[Easy]
00:13:827 (13827|2) Move to 1st column.
00:17:027 (17027|2) Move to 1st or 2nd column.
00:17:827 (17827|2) Move to 2nd column.
00:29:827 (29827|2) ^
00:30:227 (30227|1) Move to 1st column.
00:30:627 (30627|0) Move to 2nd column.
00:32:227 Add a note in the 1st column with Finish keysound.
00:58:627 (58627|2) Move to 1st column.
01:06:227 (66227|0) Move to 2nd column.
01:41:227 Add a note in 1st column with Finish keysound.
01:41:627 Add a note in 2nd column with Finish keysound.
01:42:027 Add a note in 3rd column with Finish keysound.
01:42:427 Add a note in 4th column with Finish keysound.
02:10:627 (130627|2) Move to 2nd column.
02:11:027 (131027|1) Move to 1st column.
02:29:027 (149027|3) Delete this note.
02:30:627 Add note in 2nd column.
02:31:427 (151427|3,151427|0) Remove one of these notes.
02:33:027 (153027|0,153027|3) ^
02:33:827 Add note in 1st column.
03:03:427 (183427|2) Move to 2nd column.
03:04:227 (184227|3) Move to 3rd column.
03:12:227 (192227|1) Delete this note.

[Normal]
HP Drain +1
01:26:627 (86627|1,86827|1,87227|1,87627|1,88027|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:31:427 (91427|3,92227|3) Move to 5th column.
01:31:827 (91827|1,92627|1) Move to 1st column.
02:11:427 (131427|1,131627|1,132027|1,132427|1,132827|1,133227|1,133627|1,134027|1,134427|1) Move to 3rd column.
03:12:227 (192227|1) Delete this note.

[Hard]
HP Drain +1
*facepalm* I do not know how to mod this properly since the difficulty is very inconsistent throughout the chart and the notes are all over the place.

[Insane]
HP Drain +1
This looks more like a Hard. Again like above, I can't mod this as well. The patterns don't match the song most of the time.

[SHD]
HP Drain +1
OD +1
This... isn't SHD at all. I refuse to mod this any longer. Sorry.
Luyuja
00:57:828 - 01:04:238 - 应该是这里一段没有抓住主音
01:33:027 - 这一段应该也是没抓住主音
01:52:227 - 这一段也是
01:58:627 - 这一段也是 给个我认为能突出主旋律又有乱的键型吧http://puu.sh/2Pdsn.jpg
02:05:027 - 这一段同上
02:11:427 - 同上
02:30:627 - 这一段 楼梯方向摆对才能突出主旋律 建议跟着主旋律走 双楼梯三乱最好
02:31:427 - 02:32:227 这一段别加note了吧 后面同理
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