Moway wrote:

Hi there kajiyatta, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]

01:54:425 (1) - maybe begin this spinner a bit later, either 01:54:513 or 01:54:689. I think it might be a bit jarring for a beginner to see the spinner so soon after an object. The finish is 01:54:336, so I keep current way.

Nice diff.

[Normal]

00:07:046 (1,2,3,4) - very nazi, but maybe make this formation symmetrical across the y axis. You can just copy paste 00:07:046 (1,2), then ctrl h+g.
00:15:517 (1) - maybe make this a repeating 1/1 slider instead to match the vocals a bit better. I don't like to use kick slider many times in this section, so keep 2/1 slider.
00:58:576 (2) - add a clap to the slider end to match the drums
01:35:277 (4) - move this so that it blankets the slider end of 01:34:572 (3). I think it would be nice to match the way you have 01:33:160 (1,2) arranged. The flow from (3) to (4) is not easy to play for newbie I suppose.
01:38:101 (4) - have this slider start at 01:37:924 and end at 01:38:454. I think this matches the music better and isn't too hard for this difficulty. Consider now.
01:47:983 (3) - remove a repeat and add a 1/1 slider at 01:48:689 and delete 01:49:042 (1). This way the player can play the slider on the strong finish instead of having the slider end. I don't care about this since we can hear drum sound clearly.

[Hard]

00:10:399 (2,3) - stack these to be consistent with 00:07:576 (2,3,4,5) and other parts in this section. I suppose same placement would be bored, aren't you?
00:27:517 (4) - make this into a 1/2 slider and a circle instead to match the vocals better.
01:23:101 (4,5) - maybe fix these up into a blanket formation
01:31:572 (4) - maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/5jo4M.jpg. The way you have it now feels kind of empty and not so fitting to your Hard difficulty. Another fixed.
01:53:983 (7) - add a repeat and move 01:54:336 (1) to start one tick later to match your other difficulties.

[Insane]

00:07:399 (2) - make this less curved so that it blankets 00:07:399 (2) better.
00:20:458 (8,1) - seems like this stack might be a little bit off
00:40:399 (7,8) - I think it would be better to unstack these. The spacing would make the transition back to the normal SV feel better.
00:56:811 (6) - I don't really like this slider for your Insane difficulty since there is a lot of vocals here. Do something like this instead http://puu.sh/5jon9.jpg Consider.
01:14:983 (6) - i like a triplet here instead of the slider, I think it would feel nice to match that drum part instead of the vocal for this one, and would be really exciting leading into the kiai flash. I suppose it wounds a bit overmapped here.
01:41:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - manually stack these, right now they look a bit off because the approach circles start to the left and up. Manually stack these leading downward I think for the best effect.

That's all, good luck!

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ Good luck.
[Easy]
General
Found nothing worth to say..No issues found here.
[Normal]
General
Hmm.. Hard to find something to say..
Beats
01:03:837 (1) - No reverse and a long slider will more fit here? Or a spinner is also ok. I think the the reverse arrow is not on vocal. Current fits to vocal and it's better way.

[Hard]
General
Really good diff. Some suggestions.
Placement
00:13:576 (3,4) - I know maybe you made this pattern on purpose. But why not ctrl+g to make the flow smoother? I can see no reason here to change flow.
01:31:572 (4,5) - I can't see the reason to change flow.
NCs
01:32:807 (5) - NC Keep my pattern.
[Insane]
General
Really good diff. Some suggestions.
Placement
00:08:811 (7,8) - Now that here at 00:07:399 (2,3) - you didn't change the flow,why change it here ,especially with a large jump. It's boring if same pattern would be fine.
00:18:340 (1) - Just suggestion. Here is a good chance to change flow to emphasize the vocal. You did well on 00:21:164 (1) . Kepp my pattern.
01:13:042 (8) - The reason of changing flow is not enough even you want to use this pattern. From (8) to (1) looks fine for me.
01:49:572 (3,4,5) - ^, you can change the position of 4,5 and the following slider.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

cirnocon wrote:

Hi~
Overall
01:02:790 - , 01:03:485 - , 01:04:925 - so you made these same BPM timing point for timing correction? Music has changed so I put another timing points here.

Normal
01:31:572 (2) - this note not so important, remove?(if this slider rymth is following the vocal, adjust it) Another fixed

Good luck.

Cancel wrote:

Soo only these things need to be fixed imo.

Remove (short ver) from title, since its not allowed. No, it's original name not alter one.
Remove the dot after 5pb in the tags. ^

Otherwise, good luck!

(btw no kudos)

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kajiyatta wrote:

Cancel wrote:

Soo only these things need to be fixed imo.

Remove (short ver) from title, since its not allowed. No, it's original name not alter one.
Remove the dot after 5pb in the tags. ^

Otherwise, good luck!

(btw no kudos)

tellertheworld wrote:

[General]

open

Well in the rhythm.
Nothing important problem.
Thank you map~

[Insane]

open

strange in flow.You can keep it because it is Insane.
00:59:635 (7) - lack of space?

try this↑
01:00:693 (1) - balance of 01:00:340 (9) - as well? (X:255 Y:340)
01:13:395 (1) - move to X:243 Y:336 Current looks fine.
01:27:513 (1) - move to X:216 Y:328 or X:212 Y:328

not balance of distance^ (my wrong?)

jonathanlfj wrote:

Alright here comes my mod, srry for the delay

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
good

[Easy]
00:29:987 (1) - forgot a clap on end
01:24:689 (1,2,3) - since you followed vocals at 01:21:866 (1,2,3), its better to also do it here for consistency
01:27:513 (1) - finish on start?
01:46:572 (1) - the timing here is a bit hard to grasp since it starts on the 3rd bar of a measure, i would use a slider here so the hitwindow is more lenient for newbies
All fixed.

[Normal]
00:28:929 (5) - i know you are trying to keep the rhythm spacing consistent here, but removing the repeat so slider end lands on the finish at 00:29:105 will give much more impact imo
01:26:101 (4) - start this at 01:25:924, the music there is much more dominant
01:31:572 (2,3) - you can try this setup here, plays much better imo:

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01:40:925 (5) - start this at 01:40:748, for similar reasons as 01:26:101 (4)
01:53:983 (4,5) - since there is some drum rolls here, maybe use a 1/2 repeat slider instead?
All fixed and some remapped.

[Hard]
00:11:454 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:11:458
00:55:929 (3) - hmm you covered all the claps previously but suddenly one gets skipped here, might want to cover it by rearranging the rhythm here:

SPOILER

01:42:336 (1,2,3,4) - i think doing a cross-square flow here will flow a lot cooler:

SPOILER

01:54:424 (1) - i think you meant to end it at 01:58:572
All fixed.

[Insane]
00:21:164 (1,2) - the spacing here felt a bit anti-climatic when i first testlayed it, would be better if you can enlarge it a bit
01:02:790 (5) - consider adding a NC here, both for the slight change in timing and change in rhythm (kind of like how you put NC on start of long streams)
01:04:925 (2) - need a NC here since its after a spinner
01:08:454 (3) - to keep consistency sake i would map this part like 01:19:748 (3,4,5), or the other way around
In this part, I just put another pattern before but some say current would be fine. Now, I changed this placement as prvious pattern.
01:32:101 (8) - clap?
01:38:454 (9) - ^
All fixed.
reminds me of the good old days mapping with beizer sliders :3 call me back once you are done with this Since I like old slider algorithm,
I just mapped as you see.

Satellite wrote:

おめでとうございます！

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