As requested
[
General]
Nothing, note Easy = BASIC, Normal = MEDIUM Insane = EXTRA
[
Easy]
00:00:953 (1,2) - I think it's better not to have clap at end, there's no real sound for it. Instead. put whistle at end of both sliders.
00:04:304 (2,3) - I feel current placement is a bit uncomfortable to play, how about this
http://puu.sh/2Qcgx.jpg00:06:059 (1,2) - Same as 00:00:953
00:10:048 (2) - Normal sampleset seems more fitting. Remove clap from begin, repeat and end (keep finish at end) and do normal sampleset.
00:12:123 (2,3) - Really prefer this rhythm
http://puu.sh/2QcoX.jpg. The sound 00:13:240 is literally screaming to me to be followed so feel weird not to hit anything there.
00:14:676 (2,3) - ^ For this one, you need to make 00:16:272 (1) - into a slider or else rhythm is too hard to catch
http://puu.sh/2QcvW.jpg00:22:655 (2) - Don't really think finish fits, I prefer if finish is remove from begin (keep whistle, it sounds nice)
00:32:548 (2) - This rhythm seems nicer to me
http://puu.sh/2QcBk.jpg Be sure to put clap at begin and repeat!
00:35:421 (2) - ^
00:37:974 (3) - ^
00:50:580 (2) - Put at x:264 y:352? I feel it's too close to 00:52:016 (1) -
00:52:655 (2,3) - I think it's better to add repeat to (2), it's difficult to catch (3) since rhythm here has more of a focus on red ticks.
00:55:846 (3) - This instead seems nicer
http://puu.sh/2QcPy.jpg00:58:240 (2) - ^
01:11:325 (1) - Same as 00:10:048.
01:13:399 (2,3,2,3) - Prefer if you do rhythm I gave at 00:12:123 (2,3) -
Just some tweaks to rhythm, this song is definitely quite difficult to map an Easy for, but I think you did a good job.
[
Normal]
00:00:953 (1,3,4) - Same as Easy about removing clap. You are not keeping a consistent pattern here, clap on red tick, then on white tick, etc. so it sounds off. I like how it sounds on 00:03:506 (1,3) - as it goes right with the accent in the music here.
00:06:059 (1,3,4) - ^
00:08:612 (1,2) - I think 1/2 slider (shorten both slider by1/2) is better, but I'm unsure about how you feel in using 1/2 slider in Normal. I definitely think this fits music better.
00:10:048 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy and if same rhythm in Hard/Insane, same thing for those diffs too, wont' remention anymore.
00:34:144 (1,2,3) - Prefer ctrl+H of this to variate map direction a bit as you are already going to the left with 00:31:591 (1,2,3) - so I prefer if you go to the right side this time, you may have to adjust the notes after this depending on whether you care about keeping distant snap on note more then 2 white ticks away in timeline.
00:52:016 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer this rhythm to be honest
http://puu.sh/2QdbL.jpg. It feel off holding a slider when I can hear sound on 00:52:335, 00:52:814 etc. so like this seems better to me.
00:54:570 (1,2,3) - ^
http://puu.sh/2QdeN.jpg01:10:527 - This is Normal so I expected a note here, and it's far enough from spinner for recovery time so I think you should add it.
01:21:218 (3) - Sure you want to do this? Seems counter-intuitive to flow. I would ctrl+h and put at same spot.
01:24:091 (4,5) - I expect repeating slider first then hit circle listening to sound at 01:24:250.
01:25:208 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/2Qdoc.jpg01:29:197 (4,5) - Same as 01:24:091.
Don't worry about length of my mod, this diff is good.
[
Hard]
00:19:304 (2) - Expected a finish at begin
00:35:740 (7) - Hmm, I think it gives a nicer effect if you stack at end of (6) for a jump to (7).
01:13:878 (6,7) - Jump pattern here?
http://puu.sh/2QdAB.jpg Just a quick idea if you don't have one.
01:16:112 (5) - Finish at begin maybe?
01:20:580 (2) - Once again, I think Ctrl+J and same spot is better. Fine if you want to keep here through, but flow feel broken to me when you do this.
01:23:772 (4) - Try to have a jump on (4). maybe move (3) up if you don't have an idea
http://puu.sh/2QdKc.jpg01:30:314 (1,2) - Prefer finish at begin of both slider. Seems like I forgot to mention for Easy and Normal. Also if you do this, be sure to do for Insane as well.
Not much to mention at all
[
Insane]
- Od 8 maybe? A bit too easy to get 100% for me.
00:00:953 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm played this several time, I feel it should be place like this
http://puu.sh/2QeeY.jpg00:18:825 (1,2,3,4) - Prefer more like this
http://puu.sh/2Qeu2.jpg00:19:304 (2) - Prefer finish at begin over whistle.
01:14:995 (1) - Place at x:84 y:164 Jump on this note seems nicer to me.
01:28:878 (6) - Kind of prefer if you follow piano sound at 01:29:197- , 01:29:357-, and 01:29:516 with hit circle, but it's fine.
Consider raising od so it takes a bit more effort to SS this. Fun diff overall.
Hmm, you only star one map out of 15 mods. Well, I'll give you a star, I really like this song and mapset is good, but if you see some good beatmaps, be sure to star them!
Good luck!