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mercury2004
M&M oops M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
you dont need to put another source name into the tag. remove Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!


Easy
HP drain - 1 . beat is pretty dense for easy difficult. if any newbie miss a part . he / she will fail the mapให้คนที่บ้านเล่นแล้วเฟล พลาดสไลตัวเดียวหายทั้งแถบ
AR-1
00:10:424 (1,2) - use 1 long slider
00:24:024 (4) - slightly unsymetrical
00:55:224 (1) - remove this and start spinner from there. end at 00:58:424


Normal
00:54:624 (6) - better nc here
00:54:824 (1) - and remove nc here


AsprikaQ's Hard
sliders shapes can still be improve, i'm not going to point it out. you should know it well
the first part note arrangement is kinda random, would be great of you arrange it in a symetrical way
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - good to avoid this pattern in hard dif
00:45:624 (1) - remove nc
01:11:224 (5,1,2,3) - pretty cunfusing jump. nc ing would fix
01:22:424 (5) - nc


SSS's Hard+
better like this. old one disrupt the flow

Insane
00:04:624 (2) - point this head to the another slider head
00:15:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - form star shape jump? like this ?
00:32:324 (6) - add note here. flow better
00:53:624 (9) - remove nc
00:53:824 (1) - nc


nothing much to say. this map were modded many time and most error are fixed. a bat attention would rank this soon\
แปะคุโด้ตามมารยาท

edited : spelling check
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for modding :D

Easy Normal and Insane Updated
KokoroStudiox3
hi P A N :P
General
add SSS in tags

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
- [Easy] : asprikaq meensss
- [Insane] : asprikaq meensss
- [Normal] : asprikaq meensss
- [SSS's Hard+] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [AsprikaQ's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [SSS's Hard+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:014, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

[easy]
00:03:624 (4) - Move to x:132 y:160
00:04:024 (1) - Move node to x:64 y:160
00:05:224 (2) - Move node to x:124 y:316 , move node #2 to {x:192 y:328}.

[normal]
00:05:624 (3) - Move node #2 to x:440 y:132, move node #3 to x:428 y:172, move node #9 to x:324 y:316
00:22:824 (5) - is out of the screen

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:20:424 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:424 (4) - Add NC.
01:14:424 (5) - Add NC.
01:15:224 (1) - remove NC.
01:16:024 (3) - Add NC.

[Insane]

01:00:024 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[SSS's Hard+]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:06:814 - snap to 00:06:824
00:20:214 - snap to 00:20:224
00:25:014 - snap to 00:25:024
00:26:614 - snap to 00:26:624
01:00:014 - snap to 01:00:024

nice mapset *.*
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for modding eLtigreXXx :D

my diff Update
Edit: Update SSS's Hard+
CrystilonZ
ดีครับ
จาก #thai นะ

General
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - พี่น่าจะทำเสียงให้เบาลงหน่อย ให้เข้ากับอารมณ์เพลงนิสนึง แล้วค่อยๆ ดังขึ้น

Easy
แค่แนะนำนะๆ
00:29:624 (1) - ทำเป็นครึ่งนึง แล้วย้อนเอา มันเข้ากับเนื้อร้องฝ่านะ

Normal
00:53:824 (5) - เอ้ะ ? จงใจให้เบี้ยว หรือยังไง
00:37:224 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้น ช่องนึง จะได้ดูดีขึ้นหน่อย มั้ง ?
พอจบแต่ละท่อน ใส่ Finish เข้าไปหน่อย น่าจะดูดีนะ(ทุกดิฟเลยแหล่ะ )

Asprika's Hard
00:20:224 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ตัวนึงไหม ? เนื้อร้องมามาตรงนี้ (หรือติ้กสีฟ้าก็ได้)

SSS's Hard
01:26:224 (2,2) - Finish หน่อย น่าจะดูดี

Insane
ดูดีแล้วแหล่ะ

เด่วลองเล่นก่อง เด่วมาแปะ Test Play ให้ดูนะพี่ปัง :D

Edit :
ทำไมเล่นไม่ผ่านฟระะะะ
wmtokok
Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :)

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:23:224 (4) - stack on 00:22:424 (3) tail

00:23:624 (1) - y:288

00:31:224 (5) - y:340

00:31:424 (6) - y:356

01:11:224 (5) - y:28

SSS's Hard+
00:33:624 (2) - too down can do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726370

01:15:224 (2) - y:232

Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
Topic Starter
P A N

wmtokok wrote:

Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :) thanks :D

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525 I make a star there, so not fix >_>


Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332 that's on my purpose

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
thanks for modding and checking >_>
Topic Starter
P A N
Update HS and SSS

Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!
Sorarei
[Insane]
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that
Topic Starter
P A N
omg.. that is not press at the same time 0.0

anyway thanks for check ><
Xinchii
Hello , from M4M

General

suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.

It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.


Easy

Seems great.


Normal

00:47:624 - Try this?
01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


AsprikaQ's Hard

This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.

01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


SSS's Hard+

Seems great.


Insane

00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?

00:53:024 - Add NC here.

00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.

01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024
Nice map.

Good lock~
captin1
Hey! From my queue~
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit

Easy

Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things

00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?
00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing ;))
00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right

Normal

Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;

00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency

AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great

00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part
00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024

SSS's Hard+

Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either

00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note

Insane

Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams

00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)
00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3
SPOILER
224,320,28024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,352,28224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,269,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,186,28624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,218,28824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,55,29224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,83,29424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:52:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
SPOILER
254,104,52224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,80,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,139,52624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,52824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,178,53024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,239,53224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,301,53424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,279,53624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:55:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you gradually increase the spacing here, like the first set one 1.2 like it is and maybe the second at 1.4? would work with the buildup in music
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha

All I got. Good luck!
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks leon1341414

fix 75% of your mod

and thanks captin1 for test play and mod :D

change most of your mod

Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)

and SSS diff
Arrival
Ok let's go,
From my queue.

[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !

[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?

[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !

[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here

[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/

Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks Arrival for modding :D

fix 78% of your mod

tags fixed

Update : Easy Normal SSS Insane
buhei
from my queue

[Hard]
don't you think it too difficult?
00:00:824 (2) - NC
00:07:824 (3,4) - change into slider
00:16:424 (5) - delete
00:28:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:124 (3,4,5) - make them closer
00:46:424 (3) - delete finish and add clap at 00:46:824
00:55:224 (1) - move the head of this slider to 00:55:124
01:12:224 (5,1) - it's not fun
01:01:524 and01:03:124 and01:04:724 - add notes
01:14:324 and01:15:924 and01:17:524 - add notes
01:26:824 (3,4) - don't use too many reverses

[SSS]
hard+ --> insane
SV up
00:13:524 - miss a note
00:31:424 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:31:924 - ^
00:32:224 - ^
00:32:424 - ^
01:05:924 - ^
01:22:424 (3,4) - offbeat
need more work

GL
captin1
>.< forgot to mention a couple things, no kd

AsprikaQ's Hard

00:20:424 (2) - nc bug cause it's after a spinner, Q on it (even though it's already there lol)

Insane

01:00:024 (2) - same thing as ^
Topic Starter
P A N
ok fixed ><
kuronotsubasa
Hi! From my queue.
I'm a new modder so you can choose if follow my advice. It's ok.
General
Pls fix the tags the same as different difficult.
http://puu.sh/2MFUy.jpg
Pls reference about AIMOD(you don't need to fix some special promblems be shown on it)

actually I even can't come up with any problem. An excellent map!
Sorry :X
Hope your map can be ranked soon! :3
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for checking :3
indyinyou
xD

[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)

[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)

[Insane]

00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^

ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ :D :lol:
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks indyinyou for modding ><
orioncomet
[Generel]
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.

[Easy]
Neat ~

[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?

[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.

[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.


Overall looks good, good luck!
Topic Starter
P A N
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod
Frostmourne

P A N wrote:

thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod
แล้ว 0.1 คือตรงไหน - -*
Topic Starter
P A N
anti-jump งับไม่รู้เปลี่ยนดีไหมเพราะ mod ที่ผ่านมาเขาก็บอกให้วาง 6 ไว้ตรงกลางดาว
Niko-nyan
m4m

Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^

SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)

you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it
Topic Starter
P A N
sorry not fix ><

thanks for checking !
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]

No Errors IMO
P.S: No Kudosu Plz
Topic Starter
P A N
LOLLLLL

thanks for checking
Umi
hi hi from #Friends :3

Easy

- Well, really good diff, just 2-3 suggestion
- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else :)

Normal

- 00:05:624 (3) - move to 408,88
- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180

Hard

- 00:07:824 (3,4) - little slider ?
- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack

Insane

Fiuu - my favorite diff, just nothing to say >.< good job :3

That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')> go go ranked
Kanari



Haii ~
You requested via queue ~


[Normal]
- This difficulty should at least have one spinner to have some differences in score.
00:24:024 (2) - Line with (5) (x:68) 2nd point on x:372 y:148 and 3rd point on x:300 y:240
00:28:024 (3) - Make it the same as (1)


[Hard]
00:24:824 (1) - Remove new combo to keep the same pattern as the previous one.
00:25:224 (5) - New combo.


[Insane]
00:10:024 (5) - Place at the same place 00:11:624 (5) is? owo
00:24:024 (3) - New combo to follow your pattern.
00:27:024 (5) - ^
00:31:924 (5) - Place where 00:30:424 (3) was and move the last point up one grid.
00:35:024 (3) - Make this a staight slider and mvoe two grids to the right.
00:35:424 (4) - Move to x:312 y:204
00:35:624 (5) - One grid down.
01:05:824 (5) - New combo? owo


Nicely mapped!
Good luck and star! >w<
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks -Umi- and xXCrystalMoonAnimXx for modding ><

-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%
BeatofIke
Caught this map at #modreqs! I only test played the map! Some unique patterns you got there!
NO kudosu please!



/me runs
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for play BeatofIke ><
[LikeSmile]
Good map :3
Give star ~
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for starrrrrr ><
kajiyatta
M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears.
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.)
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music.
[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely
01:05:424(2,3)^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this?

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
Topic Starter
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kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height fixed
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line fixed
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears. no, it will break the pattern after this
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this no, the current one maybe easier for FL player
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.) fixed
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music. no, I want to have break after spinner
[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely no, I don't want it more hard D:
01:05:424(2,3)^ ^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this? sure

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
thanks for modding :D and star!!
Kodora
[General]

How nice bg! /me saves

*Anyway, i strongly recommend ask some BATs how much NSFW is it (and video too, it might be a problem).
*Audio Lead-In in all diffs - 2000, fix it manually using notepad
*Add to tags: noto arisa ogura yui ishihara kaori matsunaga maho
*adding to tags meensss just because he found offset for you is not nesessary, remove it
*also offset is slighty late for me, i'd use 822. if you will use id dont forget resnap all notes, green lines etc.

[Easy]

*HP Drain +1 for better ballance between diffs

00:12:824 (2) - NC since new part of song
00:14:024 - add a note, you missing strong beat here, sounds empty for me
00:14:424 (1) - if you will add note remove nc here then
01:26:824 (2) - remove clap

[Normal]

00:12:824 (1) - remove clap from reverse
00:20:024 (1,2) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:24:024 (2) - default slidertick sounds here better for me
00:25:224 (3,4) - really dont like how claps sounds here nvm i cant imagine better way
00:28:824 (4,1) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:30:024 (2,3) - spacing issue, close to 1.20
00:31:424 (2,3) - ^
00:32:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
00:39:624 (1,2) - ^
00:48:424 (4) - missed clap
00:48:424 (4,1) - stacked notes is always bad thing in relax diffs, try to avoid it
00:54:624 (1,2) - spacing issue, 1.20
00:58:424 (2,1) - spacing issue, 1.06
01:19:624 (2) - same about stacked note
01:21:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
01:25:024 (4) - nc should begins here, not at 01:25:624 (1) -
01:26:824 (2,3) - remove all claps from those sliders, thaey sounds just weird

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:00:224 (1) - slider should begins at 00:00:224 -
00:03:024 (3) - remove clap. really bad idea to create two rhytms with one clap, it sounds just bad.
00:03:124 (4) - ^
00:06:224 (4,1) - ^
00:08:224 (5) - ^,also nc should begins here, not at 00:08:624 (1) - follow your pattern and new part in music
00:09:424 (4,7) - ^
00:10:224 (7) - ^

imho it will be much better if you will replace all claps what i mentiored with default normal whistle

00:10:424 (1,2,3) - i'd add default whistles at the beginning of those sliders too
00:12:024 (1) - too suddenly spinner what really not fit here as well. just remove it and add short break
00:17:224 - add note here + clap for better rhytm
00:17:624 (4) - clap to the end of slider
00:20:224 - add note. vocals on this part is much stronger, so i suggest you focused on it
00:21:824 - ^
00:23:424 - ^
00:27:624 - add note + clap for better rhytm
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is just called for normal default whistles, why you dont use it here? :\
00:45:024 - note for better rhytm
00:50:624 (3) - nc since you ended slowdown part here
00:53:624 - rhytm suggestion:


00:56:424 (4) - strongly recommend delete repeat and add note at 00:56:824 - for better rhytm
01:06:324 - delete note here, it unneeded
01:12:224 (5) - nc since new part of music and for better readability
01:16:024 (1,3) - with such low ar it looks like pretty bad overlap, try to avoid it
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - delete all claps from here. also whistles fits more instead as for me

placement is pretty nice, i like it. just need some hitsounds & rhytm work :p

[Insane]

*Decrease AR and OD by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
*Tickrate 1 sounds much better for me

00:45:024 (2) - rhytm suggestion:


00:48:024 (2) - forgot clap at the end?
00:51:424 (4) - remove clap
00:57:224 (2,3,4,5) - just suggestion:


01:19:824 (6,2) - bad overlap, please try to avoid it
01:21:224 (5,2) - ^
01:26:024 (3) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - ^
01:28:424 (3) - ^

probably all. pretty solid mapset, good luck with rank
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