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Normal, Insane, SSS all fixed !

คนทำ hard คนไทยคับ 55

thanks!
AsprikaQ

nattap wrote:

[Hard]
00:24:990 (5) - make the red waypoint centered to the slider or make it parallel with 00:25:990 (6,7) but If it's just visual aid that 4 is longer than 3 It's okay
I don't really get what you mean but it's okay the it looks now.
00:57:190 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion : can you make a square with 00:56:390 (3) tail as a starting point and make it like this http://puu.sh/2pZG1 Fixed.
01:26:790 (3,4) - a circle stack on 3 beat repeat slider may be better. It's okay the way it's now

Thx for modding!

http://puu.sh/2q1Vb Fixed diff
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Updated !
Mikkuri
~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน
  1. 00:25:190 (2) - add clap head
  2. 00:25:790 (3) - add clap tail
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix
  1. 00:06:790 (2) - add clap
  2. 00:08:590 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
  4. 00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
  5. 00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
  6. 00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
  7. 00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
  8. 01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse
[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้
  1. 00:07:190 (1) - add finish head
  2. 00:08:390 (3) - add clap
  3. 00:45:590 (2) - add finish head
โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา
  1. 00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง
    256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
    352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:17:990 (2) - add clap
  3. 00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail
  4. 00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน
  5. 00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail
  6. 00:31:990 (5) - add finish head
  7. 00:42:390 (1) - ^
  8. 00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail
  9. 00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ
  10. 01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail
  11. 01:22:190 (5) - ^
  12. 01:25:190 (9) - add clap head
  13. 01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head
  14. 01:25:790 (2) - remove whistle
That's all
Topic Starter
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0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย เท่ากันอยู่เเล้วหนิ -0-
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time fixed
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ fixed

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง fixed

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย fixed
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน
  1. 00:25:190 (2) - add clap head fixed
  2. 00:25:790 (3) - add clap tai fixed
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix
  1. 00:06:790 (2) - add clap
  2. 00:08:590 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
  4. 00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
  5. 00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
  6. 00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
  7. 00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
  8. 01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse
[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้
  1. 00:07:190 (1) - add finish head fixed
  2. 00:08:390 (3) - add clap fixed
  3. 00:45:590 (2) - add finish headfixed
โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา fixed
  1. 00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง fixed
    256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
    352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:17:990 (2) - add clap fixed
  3. 00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail fixed
  4. 00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน fixed
  5. 00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail fixed
  6. 00:31:990 (5) - add finish head fixed
  7. 00:42:390 (1) - ^ fixed
  8. 00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail fixed
  9. 00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ D:
  10. 01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail fixed
  11. 01:22:190 (5) - ^ fixed
  12. 01:25:190 (9) - add clap head fixed
  13. 01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head fixed
  14. 01:25:790 (2) - remove whistlefixed
That's all
Thank you Mickey ><
moonlightleaf
From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General
if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy
00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this

01:17:624(1) ^

01:20:824 add note

00:02:039 ^ ?

00:08:024 ^

00:26:824 ^

00:34:424 ^

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3)

Normal
AR-1

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2)

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093

Insane
00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G)

00:05:424(5) ^

00:14:624(3) ^

00:35:424(8) ^

01:12:424(2) ^

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D)

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5)

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better

00:44:024 ^

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?

SSS
00:45:424(1) 2notes replace

01:05:924(9)delete http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681257

01:20:024to01:21:424 maybe better → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681269

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:424(2)(4) delete

00:03:124(4) move to 00:03:224 end at00:03:424

00:04:624(2)(3) http://puu.sh/2qHIL

00:05:424(5)(6)(7)(1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681289

00:08:124(5) delete

00:33:624(1) end at 00:33:824

00:35:224(4) end at 00:35:424

00:40:024(4) end at 00:40:224

00:41:624(1) end at 00:41:824

don't hide slider's head and end
Topic Starter
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moonlightleaf wrote:

From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General
if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy
00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024 the rhymth a bit weird

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this fixed

01:17:624(1) ^ fixed

01:20:824 add note fixed

00:02:039 ^ ? fixed

00:08:024 ^ fixed

00:26:824 ^ fixed

00:34:424 ^ fixed

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3) I like the old one

Normal
AR-1 fixed

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006 fixed

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024 fixed

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑ I like the old one ><

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023 fixed

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2) the rhymth a bit weird

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824 hmm I try the new rhymth

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093fixed

Insane
00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G) fixed

00:05:424(5) ^ fixed

00:14:624(3) ^ fixed

00:35:424(8) ^ fixed

01:12:424(2) ^ fixed

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320 fixed but a bit left

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return fixed

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D) fixed

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5) fixed

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172 fixed

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better fixed

00:44:024 ^ fixed

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^ fixed

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?fixed
ok thanks for your mod ><
xHappy-
Easy
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Normal
01:10:824- 01:11:424- มือใหม่กดไม่ทันแน่ๆ =__=
AsprikaQ's Hard
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
SSS
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Insane
01:23:024- add note
Good luck อาจ mod ได้แค่นี้ =w=
Foxxer_old
SSS

00:08:624 (4,5,6) - These notes are strange, change this.
00:14:824 (3,4,5) - Approach these notes a little bit.
00:16:424 (8,9,1) - ^
00:44:624 (2,3,4) - ^
00:50:624 (3) - Its far on the time line, so, its confused if it is on the slider. Move this.
01:02:824 (9,1) - I think its very far.
01:21:624 (1,2,3) - A slider with reverse arrow will be better.

Good Luck~
787B
Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that.

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns?
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume.
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ?

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .
00:52:824 - Add a note here?
00:53:624 - ^

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even though this is an Hard, I wouldn't recommed doing this in the very beginning of the map. As far as I know, on 00:00:224 - is the first beat I can hear, so this is actually confusing to read.
00:16:324 (6,7) - I wouldn't stack those notes, they kinda ruin the flow here, consider doing a triplet: http://puu.sh/2vQBn
00:20:224 (1,2,3) - Try placing them on a different line, feels kinda weird to play them after the spin.

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here.

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo.
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
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ok, I will come to fix it >< thanks
Topic Starter
P A N

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that. fixed

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns? fixed
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume. fixed
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ? no, the rhymth a bit weird and the note will approach while it spin

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .fixed to another thing
00:52:824 - Add a note here? fixed
00:53:624 - ^ fixed

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here. fixed

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo. fixed
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo fixed
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo fixed
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo fixed
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good. fixed

Good luck!
thanks ><
niceplayer
from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.
00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.


[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.

00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.

[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
Topic Starter
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niceplayer wrote:

from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help. thanks but i'm afraid the postion of note will bad (lazy to remap D:)

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good. m-maybe u not update normal yet? D:
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same. fixed


[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset? fixed
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume. fixed
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound. fixed
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4. no its look a bit weird

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns. fixed


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
thank you niceplayer
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Easy Normal SSS and Insane Updated
Sieg
Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH

AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -

SSS:
seems fine

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
P A N

Sieg wrote:

Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder ok delete

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm ok
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better ok

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2 ok
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH ok

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1 ok
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) - fixed

Good Luck!
thank for modding Sieg ><
Topic Starter
P A N
All Update!
Topic Starter
P A N
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83699

ah fail wating someone to delete it
Topic Starter
P A N
:)
Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?

00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC

00:32:824 (3) - NC

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better

00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket

00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better

00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo

01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC

01:12:824 (3) - NC

01:18:824 (1) - remove NC

01:19:224 (3) - NC

[SSS]

00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g

00:54:024 (2) - ^

00:54:424 (3) - ^

00:54:824 (4) - ^

01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape

[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical

nice diff
Azer
Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders.
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section.
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong.
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency.
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider.

AsprikaQ's Hard
  1. 01:12:024 (1) - Remove this note
  2. There's honestly nothing else I can see that could be improved, good job all around.
Topic Starter
P A N
sorry for delay but I will come to fix it and give u kds, please wait ><
Topic Starter
P A N

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

thank you

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x? I want 1.0x because it look basic? I think..
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error fixed

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^ fixed

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^ fixed

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance the (2) is flip horizontally from 00:25:624 (3) - already

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error fixed

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape ok I will wait for another one talk about this the i will fix

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell ok

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error no

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC ok

00:32:824 (3) - NC ok

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error no

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^ no

I dont want to fix the distance of Normal because I have Easy already and thank you :3


[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered ok

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical how to symmetrical D:

nice diff
thank you for mod ><

AzerFrost wrote:

Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders. b-but I love this :(
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little :(
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack ok
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924 ok
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion ok
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section. ok
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong. :/
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^ ok
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to ok
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency. ok
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider. hmm.. I think it's ok :/
thanks both for modding ><
AsprikaQ
http://puu.sh/2BQ5F Everything from -iCo- and AzerFrost's mod fixed. :)
Topic Starter
P A N
All Updated!!
Xinely
Hi P A N (:
from m4m in game

[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)

[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this

[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat

[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff

[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff :oops:

Well, i love this song.. Star for it
Good Luck All!! >3<
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks Xinely for modding ><

Update my diffs!
Gloria Guard
Hi P A N (:3 」_)=3

From my m4m queue :)


[General]

Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss

Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit


[Easy]

00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here


[Normal]

00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN


[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics


[SSS's Hard]

00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^


[Insane]

00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U



Good luck
Mythiax
Hi P A N

mafia here

[General]
Why different bg for all diffs? Just curios.

[Easy]
00:25:624 (6) - Male this slider straight? dunno, that shape looks ugly imo.
00:30:824 - Add note w/ clap

Hitounds:
It's really empty without these claps imo. At least you can add a few of them.
00:18:824 - Add clap in slider tick.
00:24:424 - ^
00:26:024 -
00:27:625 - ^
00:30:024 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:38:024 - ^
00:38:824 - ^
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:024 - ^
00:47:624 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:51:624 - ^
00:55:624 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:11:624 - ^
01:13:224 - ^
01:18:024 - ^
01:26:024 - ^
01:28:424 - ^

[Normal]
00:11:624 (3) - Add clap here.
00:12:824 (1) - Add clap at slider's arrow.
00:15:624 (2) - Move to x:320 y:140
00:16:024 (3) - Move to x:364 y:240
00:16:824 (4) - Move to x:160 y:248
Whit those 3 you make a better triangle there.
00:50:824 (3) - Add clap at slider's head.
01:06:024 (1) - Ctrl + J? Better flow.
01:18:424 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - How about this pattern? The current one looks akward imo

The code:
132,96,78424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,78824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,79224,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,120,79624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80024,2,0,L|344:296,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,80824,2,0,L|208:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,81624,2,0,L|128:288,2,99.9999999999999,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:



Hitsounds:
Same as easy diff.
00:24:424 - Add clap in slider's tick.
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:824 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:57:224 - ^
00:58:824 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:05:224 - ^
01:12:424 - ^
01:24:424 - ^
01:25:224 -

Nice map o.o Good luck with it, Bye~
Topic Starter
P A N
thank GG and Zero hentai for modding ><

Update my Diff ! (again)

Edit: Update SSS's Hard diff
Drianel
Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator ;) this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2)
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too
01:15:724 Add circle?

>>>> SSS's Hard+ <<<<

01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you separate them a bit? hmm... dunno... something like this?

>>>> AsprikaQ's Hard <<<<

00:23:624 (1) - Move down y=288
01:07:224 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
01:25:624 (1,2) - hmmm this is ok but you can follow the other pattern like 01:26:824 (3,4) - (1 slider only)

That's all i think, i can't mod more cause it's almost done :P

Good luck with your map P A N^^

Topic Starter
P A N

Drianel wrote:

Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator ;) this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall thanks ><

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? ok
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell ok
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid I think this one is ok :/
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2) ok
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too ok
01:15:724 Add circle? ok

thanks for modding Drianel :D
by the way thanks for the Shana pic :D

Update Insane!
GugUCorn
m4m~

[General]
  1. Kiai 1 start on 01:00:024 ~ 01:11:224
    Kiai 2 start on 01:12:824 ~ 01:25:624
[AsprikaQ's Hard]

  1. 00:20:024 ~ 00:29:424 - nothing hitsound?! add some hitsound like whistle..like here whistle00:20:024,00:21:624,00:23:224,00:24:024....
  2. 00:53:224 (2) - move to (388,268)
  3. 01:15:224 (1) - overlap on 01:14:024 (3)
[SSS's Hard+]

  1. 00:24:024 (4) - Clap on start of slider
i can't find any problem!

[Insane]

  1. 00:21:624 (1) - Perfectly Overlap on 00:20:024 (1)
  2. 00:26:424 (3) - finish
  3. 00:29:624 (1,2,3,4) - add finish on start slider
  4. 01:02:824 (5) - add whistle start slider
  5. 01:05:624 (4) - add whistle
  6. 01:06:424 (11) - finish
  7. 01:09:424 (5) - NC
  8. 01:22:224 (5) - add whistle body slider
Easy and Normal Diff is good
Good luck for Rank :D
Topic Starter
P A N
thank for modding Pisces ><
Insane and SSS update
Easy Normal update for kial time
Erylex
Hi.

Mod via my queue.

I think offset=820
Resnap kiai.

Easy Diff
00:25:220 (5) - NC
00:29:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:820 (4) - Add NC
01:02:820 (4) - ^
01:03:220 (1) - Remove NC

Normal
00:19:624 (7) - Move to x=408 y=228
00:30:024 (2) - Move to x=312 y=216
00:32:424 (4) - NC
00:32:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:624 (4) - NC
00:54:624 (6) - NC
00:54:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:224 (3) - Move to x=160 y=168 (For symmetric)

AsprikaQ's Hard

Change circle stack to http://puu.sh/2G5FF.png
00:42:824 (5) - NC
00:45:624 (1) - Remove NC

01:21:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:424 (7) - Add NC


SSS`Hard

Many hard spacing.

Good luck. :3
DeletedUser_1574070
okay lets go

from my queue

kinda good map so I found few points sorry..

MAKE YOUR AUDIO LEAD-IN SAME BY OPENING YOUR OSU FILE IN NOTEPAD
http://puu.sh/2G60O.png MATCH ALL OF YOUR DIFFS 1000


Easy

00:14:424 (1) - spacing
00:15:624 (2) - ^
00:36:424 (2,3) - ^
00:50:824 (3,1) - ^

Normal

00:09:224 (4,5) - spacing

omg good diff

Hard

00:23:624 (1,2,3) - make this more smooth-ly.. a bit too straight
01:14:024 (3,1) - stack you can move circle 3
01:16:624 (4,1) - make these same?
01:26:824 (3,4) - to give more fun, consistency, why don't you put same rhythm with the former one? 01:25:624 (1,2) - here

Hard+

00:12:024 (1) - just giving time for players to rest is better idea. remove
00:54:824 (4) - ctrl G? im not sure

Insane

00:10:024 (5,5) - stack you can move former slider
00:49:424 (2,1,3) - stack



kinda good job hope your map ranked :)
Topic Starter
P A N
thank Clique and Erylex for modding ><

Easy Normal SSS Insane Updated
mercury2004
M&M oops M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
you dont need to put another source name into the tag. remove Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!


Easy
HP drain - 1 . beat is pretty dense for easy difficult. if any newbie miss a part . he / she will fail the mapให้คนที่บ้านเล่นแล้วเฟล พลาดสไลตัวเดียวหายทั้งแถบ
AR-1
00:10:424 (1,2) - use 1 long slider
00:24:024 (4) - slightly unsymetrical
00:55:224 (1) - remove this and start spinner from there. end at 00:58:424


Normal
00:54:624 (6) - better nc here
00:54:824 (1) - and remove nc here


AsprikaQ's Hard
sliders shapes can still be improve, i'm not going to point it out. you should know it well
the first part note arrangement is kinda random, would be great of you arrange it in a symetrical way
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - good to avoid this pattern in hard dif
00:45:624 (1) - remove nc
01:11:224 (5,1,2,3) - pretty cunfusing jump. nc ing would fix
01:22:424 (5) - nc


SSS's Hard+
better like this. old one disrupt the flow

Insane
00:04:624 (2) - point this head to the another slider head
00:15:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - form star shape jump? like this ?
00:32:324 (6) - add note here. flow better
00:53:624 (9) - remove nc
00:53:824 (1) - nc


nothing much to say. this map were modded many time and most error are fixed. a bat attention would rank this soon\
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thanks for modding :D

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