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Offset: 30.018

Insane:
00:31:02 (5) - Repeat hard to see
00:36:24 (7) - ^


I liked this map. Good stuff.
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The timing is kinda iffy..might want to double check.

Clean up some of the slider patterns on easy! Other than that, i dont have any other problems with this.

Starred.
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Starred.
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[Easy]
Around 00:39 Break, delete the break, then readd. It should fix when the break comes.
02:07:191 (2) Suggested move down just a tad.
02:09:800 (2) Same thing, but move up.

[Normal]
Again with the break at 39.

[Hard]
01:29:697 (1) (2) I have issues with where this is. Possibly move off to the side, unless you intended it to be a trick.
02:35:235 (1) - (8) Don't like the overlaps in this either.

[Insane]
Nothing to say about it.

I be starring this.
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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02:37:51 (1,2,3,4 (5,6,7,8)) - This is a period of the song in which it slows down. You put them on 1/2 (or 1/4 I don't remember) and stuck to that. It doesn't sound right. At all. But I can understand why you'd do this since BPM slowdown is hard to time.
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I see some unsnapped notes. Resnap then check over.
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I went over the map again. Found no problems.
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song is so beautiful & your map is so cool.
i like it! :)

+star
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[Easy]
00:40:77 - I dunno this break seems kinda unnecessary. Perhaps map some notes here?
01:35:56 - I would remove this small break, it also feels pointless.

[Normal]
Same thing with breaks. I mean you have a long intro, then 10 seconds of play time, then an almost 20 second break. :/

[Hard]
Same thing with breaks...

01:12:08 (1) - Why is this so far away from the last slider?
01:24:14 (2) - Move closer to (1).

I know that you have the distance spacing a lot larger at the end, but at least keep the spacing consistent at the beginning. :)

[Insane]
Blah blah breaks.

Distance spacing is a little wacky, but it's because of all of the jumps, I suppose. :T


That's all that really STUCK OUT to me. It's a beautiful song and deserves another star~

EDIT: I forgot to mention how lovely the custom hit sounds are~ <3
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Derekku Chan wrote:

[Easy]
00:40:77 - I dunno this break seems kinda unnecessary. Perhaps map some notes here? The song acts so calm there, so it didn't feel like any nice opportunity to map. I originally started this off with a [Hard], so mapping somewhere might have made it too easy.
01:35:56 - I would remove this small break, it also feels pointless. The whole letter-box thing is awesome though. T_T Unless there's a big objection, it stays.

[Normal]
Same thing with breaks. I mean you have a long intro, then 10 seconds of play time, then an almost 20 second break. :/

[Hard]
Same thing with breaks...

01:12:08 (1) - Why is this so far away from the last slider? Look at where the note is. It's for design reasons. In other words, it's like a jump.
01:24:14 (2) - Move closer to (1). Done.

I know that you have the distance spacing a lot larger at the end, but at least keep the spacing consistent at the beginning. :):T

[Insane]
Blah blah breaks.

Distance spacing is a little wacky, but it's because of all of the jumps, I suppose. :T Rape :U


That's all that really STUCK OUT to me. It's a beautiful song and deserves another star~

EDIT: I forgot to mention how lovely the custom hit sounds are~ <3 Love you <3
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Like seriously. Beautiful song. Lovely hit sounds. etc etc etc

Fuck points. :3
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[Easy]
00:39:14 (1) - delete and replace break
01:56:75 (1) - kinda hidden
kiai time is bad
02:37:86 (1,2,3,4,1) - generally unless you want to time every note these notes are going to be timed WAY OFF in a slowdown


[Normal]
00:39:14 (1) - fix break
01:09:88 (1,2) - incorrectly snapped
kiai is wrong
02:37:86 (1,2,3,4,1) - slowdown


[Hard]
00:40:45 (5) - fix break
01:19:58 (1,2) - finish the third hit of each
01:41:75 (2) - finish
all of your breaks are off btw
01:48:93 (2,3) - stack endpoints
02:37:86 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - slowdown
kiai bad


[Insane]
breaks are off
02:37:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - slowdown


fix and call me back plz
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Double post intentional?

I did everything except the slowdown part...Which I really have no clue what to do at the moment. :|
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Delete countdown? Becouse it doesn't fit the song.
And I unsure about timing... It look right, but... Huh, nevermind, it's only me.

[Easy]
01:07:84 (1) - Hmm... Not sure about this, but... This note shound be here 01:07:924 (Yellow tick?)
01:08:49 (2) - Should be here, I think. 01:08:57.
01:09:14 (3) - 01:09:22?
01:09:79 (1) - Vocal start here 01:09:88. I think.
01:11:10 (2) - 01:11:18.

[Normal]
01:07:92 (1,2,3,1,2) - Same as normal.
02:11:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe a bit cofusing for normal, but I'm ok with it.

[Hard]
01:03:76 (x) - Add a note?
01:46:81 (x) - ^
01:47:78 (x) - ^

[Insane]
All cool.

Alredy starred. =( But I give you kudosu star.
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Star for you. <3
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Brilliant, brilliant maps. I love them all, especially Insane difficulty, the hitsounds really make it!

(All)
The first break is a bit long here. Perhaps add some beats in a bit before it ends?

Normal
02:11:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - agree with tieff, it's a bit harsh with the previous combo covering it up. Though I'm guessing it would only throw players the first few times before they learnt it.

SUPER STAR!
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Goodness... how many hours spent in that room across five games... I haven't heard this song in a while and just remembered how beautiful it is.. when you're not in there. ^w^

[Normal]

01:12:40 (1) - should you repeat this 2 more times? o.o
02:11:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - another agreement!



:D

I like everything else.
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Woo, Decarabia. Lovely.

I would've used the Star Arcanum card, but whatever~

I'll make these edits sometime soon after I finish modding other maps. I'll edit this post in accordance and give the proper kudosu.
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