1. Easy (1,22 stars, 150 notes)
2. Goddess (4,79 stars, 447 notes)
3. Hard (4,46 stars, 392 notes)
4. Normal (3,33 stars, 254 notes)

BounceBabe wrote:

@Revy: no changes ;w;

• HP +1 to low for the hardest diff
  
  00:06:188 (1,2) - Distance is differen form previous pattern maybe this is nazi but i want to point this o3o
  00:08:300 move this a lttle down almost tocuh hp bar
  00:15:061 this slider really look wierd imo can you try another shape? gonna be nice if you do
  00:21:821 (4) - this have to finish here 00:22:455 with vocals
  00:28:582 also in this point the repeat dont fit with music maybe add a spinner or a long slider?
  00:31:117 (1,2,3) - use the same distance here? this is nazi orz
  00:46:751 this touch hp bar
  00:55:413 you should map the vocal in this part and make the triplet also do the same in other symilar places gonna be better
  00:59:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel weird in this part is exactly the same sound in music maybe add whisltes in all the beats gonna be nice
  01:22:244 why you ignore the strong sound here? this should be mapped...
  01:23:934 smae as above seriously so strngo for be ignored imo
  01:57:314 you was mapping vocals why you ignore the vocal in this point?
  01:57:948 ^
  02:00:695 ^
  02:04:075 alot of vocals ignores well i stop pointing they here o3o
  02:16:962 also this circle is not following nothing here maybe remove it?
  03:19:392 spinner look nazi here can you map that part? since is annoying so long also i thing can be a problem when you play with hr
  03:26:680 check here to the end of your map you ignore alot of important sound in music

• Hp 6 AR 7 OD 6? all your stats are so low for a hard orz
  
  00:14:216 this touch hp bar
  00:48:652 like goddes you are ignoring some vocals and importtant sounds imo
  01:15:906 remove clap dont fit maybe you add it for error cuz you dont add it on the other diffs..
  01:17:596 ^
  02:34:075 move this to x:157 y:194 to keep the flow of the pattern actually look very off and random
  02:35:765 do some like the previous suggetion here
  02:59:850 add circle feel so weird also the music is so strong in this point
  03:01:540 ^
  03:19:392 same as godness
  03:26:680 ^

• AR 5 OD 4? Ar 4 to low for a normal orz
  
  00:31:962 remove whistle form body sound weird also you dont add it in the other diffs
  00:45:483 add whistle and clap for consistency with the other diffs

• 00:45:483 add clap like insane
  01:07:244 add a circle here for consistency with the others diffs

I stop here orz so long song T-T GL

Natsu wrote:

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Goddess:

• HP +1 to low for the hardest diff Changed
  
  00:06:188 (1,2) - Distance is differen form previous pattern maybe this is nazi but i want to point this o3o I used 1,2x distance, that cant be
  00:08:300 move this a lttle down almost tocuh hp bar Due to the new skin its fine
  00:15:061 this slider really look wierd imo can you try another shape? gonna be nice if you do I followed the previous slidershape
  00:21:821 (4) - this have to finish here 00:22:455 with vocals It have a pattern which i followed
  00:28:582 also in this point the repeat dont fit with music maybe add a spinner or a long slider? ^
  00:31:117 (1,2,3) - use the same distance here? this is nazi orz It is
  00:46:751 this touch hp bar Like above
  00:55:413 you should map the vocal in this part and make the triplet also do the same in other symilar places gonna be better But i mapped to the beat there
  00:59:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel weird in this part is exactly the same sound in music maybe add whisltes in all the beats gonna be nice I dont see the problem here ;w;
  01:22:244 why you ignore the strong sound here? this should be mapped... I try to always create another rythm too, its boring to always play the same
  01:23:934 smae as above seriously so strngo for be ignored imo ^
  01:57:314 you was mapping vocals why you ignore the vocal in this point? ^
  01:57:948 ^ ^
  02:00:695 ^ ^
  02:04:075 alot of vocals ignores well i stop pointing they here o3o ^
  02:16:962 also this circle is not following nothing here maybe remove it? It is a bridge otherwise it wouldnt work with the pattern i wanted
  03:19:392 spinner look nazi here can you map that part? since is annoying so long also i thing can be a problem when you play with hr Long spinner is on purpose
  03:26:680 check here to the end of your map you ignore alot of important sound in music I created a ending rythm which means like the song fades the map fades too

Hard:

• Hp 6 AR 7 OD 6? all your stats are so low for a hard orz Spread is perfect
  
  00:14:216 this touch hp bar Like in Hardest diff
  00:48:652 like goddes you are ignoring some vocals and importtant sounds imo ^
  01:15:906 remove clap dont fit maybe you add it for error cuz you dont add it on the other diffs..I did
  01:17:596 ^ ^
  02:34:075 move this to x:157 y:194 to keep the flow of the pattern actually look very off and random It isn't random, it is a pattern and this pattern flows right
  02:35:765 do some like the previous suggetion here As above
  02:59:850 add circle feel so weird also the music is so strong in this point ^
  03:01:540 ^ ^
  03:19:392 same as godness ^
  03:26:680 ^ ^

Normal:

• AR 5 OD 4? Ar 4 to low for a normal orz Spread is perfect again
  
  00:31:962 remove whistle form body sound weird also you dont add it in the other diffs I did do it on other diffs
  00:45:483 add whistle and clap for consistency with the other diffs It is consistent

Easy:

• 00:45:483 add clap like insane There is no clap
  01:07:244 add a circle here for consistency with the others diffs Its an Easy diff, so i focus on simple things and not too much 1/2

I stop here orz so long song T-T GL

1. Your title is incorrect. According to iTunes it is "God Is a Girl (Radio Edit)"
2. What a nice map! But it's quite hard to find it! Add some tags: techno axel konrad dj novus melanie munch covergirl
3. Try to fail any map in multi. You will have gray combo colour. It looks exactly like your combo-colour. It may confuse players.

1. No way, I've already seen that problem. Playing maps with huge circles is boring for pro pkayers. Consider using CS4! Huge CS kills all the fun from plaing this map.
2. 00:49:497 (2) - this slider sounds kinda confusing because "caaaan" starts in the middle of this slider and it confuses me alot.
   Note: 00:51:293 - similar pattern here. same thing
3. 00:55:202 (4,5,1) - after 1/4 here comes 3/4 gap and 1/1 slider starts. I bet no one is able to read it from this stack. Try to unstack (1) to make pattern readable?
4. 01:21:821 (3,3) - in music we can hear claps at 01:22:244 - 01:23:934 - and it's quite awkward that we can't click those beats. consider ending 01:21:821 (3,3) - 1/2 earlier, so it will fit with music much better.
5. 01:57:314 - almost the same as above. Consider placing here a circle to ollow vocals closer. It feels like you've missed that beat and it makes me sad :< It feels empty and I think you must place here something!
   Note: 02:00:695 - 02:04:075 - 02:07:455 - same here :<
6. 02:22:643 - consider adding a break here? At least for easier diffs. I think this part is too tiring for players.
7. 03:19:392 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really need those beats? It seems like you can end actual mapping at 03:19:286. same for all diffs.

1. 00:48:441 (3) - consider adding repeat to this slider. It will fit with background music better. It'll also make your rhythm more consistent.
   Note:00:51:821 (6) -00:55:202 (3) - 01:57:737 (2) - 02:01:117 (3) - same here
2. 01:23:723 (3) - try to remove this circle? It will make your rhythm a bit more enjoyable and consistent, just try it!
3. 01:55:413 (2,3) - try to replace it with a slider? It'll fit with "foreveeeeer" in vocals much better.
4. 01:59:216 (4) - I'd remove this circle to make rhythm a bit more consistent. It makes quite a nice effect here, also it sounds good with vocals somehow. o3o
5. 02:41:258 (5) - according to your pattern, you've missed a NC here. Check it out!
   Note: 02:44:427 (5,4) - same here and here.

1. Your HP Drain is almost the same as on [Hard] diff. Consider reducing it by one tick.
2. 00:46:328 - consider adding a circle here? That 3/2 gap doesn't plays good, anyway.
   Note: 00:49:709 - 00:53:089 - 01:12:103 - same
3. 01:28:582 (2) - nazi - players might mistakenly read it as 2x=reversed slider. Try to move its tail somewhere else? Same for 01:30:272 (2) - 03:06:610 (2,2) - example
4. 01:35:342 (2,3,4,1) - no-no-no there's no way for middle-skilled player to read that pattern properly. It's just impossible to read it! Consider using something without stacks :< (01:37:033 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - 03:13:371 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - same)
5. 02:13:371 - I'd place an 1/1 slider here for vocals. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent. (note: you may reduce volume for this slider)
6. 02:36:821 (2) - how about adding a repeat to this slider? It'll ft with vocals quite good, imo.
7. 02:49:920 (4) - this one really needs to be changed - the second reverse appears too fast and it's impossible to notice it in time. It is stressful for average-skilled players, consider replacing 2nd repeat with a circle!

1. Try to use HP Drain:1. It'll fit with your patterns better, imo.
2. 01:09:145 (1) - nazi - I'd remove this NC because 3 NC in a row may stress beginners. (same for 01:10:835 (1) - ?)
   
   Everything looks good here. Good job.

-Bakari- wrote:

Ahhhh~ Groove Coverage. Let's see if I can help you or not.

[General]

1. Your title is incorrect. According to iTunes it is "God Is a Girl (Radio Edit)" Changed
2. What a nice map! But it's quite hard to find it! Add some tags: techno axel konrad dj novus melanie munch covergirl Changed
3. Try to fail any map in multi. You will have gray combo colour. It looks exactly like your combo-colour. It may confuse players. Changed

[Goddess]

1. No way, I've already seen that problem. Playing maps with huge circles is boring for pro pkayers. Consider using CS4! Huge CS kills all the fun from plaing this map. No change, it is on purpose and suits the diff perect, i choose this because of the jumps and that. I find it more playable
2. 00:49:497 (2) - this slider sounds kinda confusing because "caaaan" starts in the middle of this slider and it confuses me alot. I mapped to the bass beat at this part
   Note: 00:51:293 - similar pattern here. same thing
3. 00:55:202 (4,5,1) - after 1/4 here comes 3/4 gap and 1/1 slider starts. I bet no one is able to read it from this stack. Try to unstack (1) to make pattern readable? I mapped to the beat again
4. 01:21:821 (3,3) - in music we can hear claps at 01:22:244 - 01:23:934 - and it's quite awkward that we can't click those beats. consider ending 01:21:821 (3,3) - 1/2 earlier, so it will fit with music much better. I want to creat a built up, like the song does so does the map
5. 01:57:314 - almost the same as above. Consider placing here a circle to ollow vocals closer. It feels like you've missed that beat and it makes me sad :< It feels empty and I think you must place here something! Mapped to the beat
   Note: 02:00:695 - 02:04:075 - 02:07:455 - same here :<
6. 02:22:643 - consider adding a break here? At least for easier diffs. I think this part is too tiring for players. Its the middle of the song and its the chorus, what o.O
7. 03:19:392 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really need those beats? It seems like you can end actual mapping at 03:19:286. The song ends at 03:32:596 - so i do map til there same for all diffs.

[Hard]

1. 00:48:441 (3) - consider adding repeat to this slider. It will fit with background music better. It'll also make your rhythm more consistent. again like above
   Note:00:51:821 (6) -00:55:202 (3) - 01:57:737 (2) - 02:01:117 (3) - same here
2. 01:23:723 (3) - try to remove this circle? It will make your rhythm a bit more enjoyable and consistent, just try it! Changed
3. 01:55:413 (2,3) - try to replace it with a slider? It'll fit with "foreveeeeer" in vocals much better. like above
4. 01:59:216 (4) - I'd remove this circle to make rhythm a bit more consistent. It makes quite a nice effect here, also it sounds good with vocals somehow. o3o I always try to create a pattern for either beat or vocal or both, this is both
5. 02:41:258 (5) - according to your pattern, you've missed a NC here. Check it out! Changed
   Note: 02:44:427 (5,4) - same here and here.

[Normal]

1. Your HP Drain is almost the same as on [Hard] diff. Consider reducing it by one tick. Changed
2. 00:46:328 - consider adding a circle here? That 3/2 gap doesn't plays good, anyway. as above
   Note: 00:49:709 - 00:53:089 - 01:12:103 - same
3. 01:28:582 (2) - nazi - players might mistakenly read it as 2x=reversed slider. Try to move its tail somewhere else? Same for 01:30:272 (2) - 03:06:610 (2,2) - example Used this pattern on a ranked map, won't change this
4. 01:35:342 (2,3,4,1) - no-no-no there's no way for middle-skilled player to read that pattern properly. It's just impossible to read it! Consider using something without stacks :< (01:37:033 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - 03:13:371 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - same) Will see if that gets mentioned by other people too, since due to the new skin i won't change it since it's visible enough to see it and play good
5. 02:13:371 - I'd place an 1/1 slider here for vocals. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent. (note: you may reduce volume for this slider) But her word end at 02:13:159 - "Trust" its just a longer echo word the actual words though ends there
6. 02:36:821 (2) - how about adding a repeat to this slider? It'll ft with vocals quite good, imo. The girl is the word i wanted to map to, so it fits perfect
7. 02:49:920 (4) - this one really needs to be changed - the second reverse appears too fast and it's impossible to notice it in time. It is stressful for average-skilled players, consider replacing 2nd repeat with a circle! Changed

[Easy]

1. Try to use HP Drain:1. It'll fit with your patterns better, imo. Changed
2. 01:09:145 (1) - nazi - I'd remove this NC because 3 NC in a row may stress beginners. (same for 01:10:835 (1) - ?) Changed
   
   Everything looks good here. Good job.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Best of luck!

1. Song Setup - Stack Leniency - I point this out according to a rule.
   Easy - do not have a stack about this. so It is not necessary to use 0.4
   Goddess - Why this diff only use the 0.5 ? I did not understand a reason about it If you use 0.5, I suggest that you change to 0.5 about other diff.
   
   Stack leniency Rule

   Stack leniency must not be set to a point where stacking no longer occurs. The option only exists for advanced patterns where a higher stacking leniency looks horrible or doesn't work.

1. 00:50:554 (2) - add finish to start of the slider. ( it have a bass as other )
2. 00:59:004 (3) - hmm... Sound does not remain almost here. so I do not put a note here in my case. if put it, the volume should lower it. ( about 40%? )
3. 01:12:526 green line - vol40⇒vol70%. I feel this big difference sound to be noisy. If you want to use the vol70%, 01:07:455 (1,2,3) - I recommend that you gradually increasing the volume from these. i mean 01:07:455 (1) - vol40%, 01:09:145 (2) - vol50%, 01:10:835 (3) - vol60%. i think the pattern will be suitable very much here.
4. 01:34:075 (x) - add note. 01:27:737~ i think too simple rhythm in kiaitime. I hope to be able to put a note here in my case.
5. 01:39:145 (x) - ^
6. 01:51:399 (1) - I feel that a sound is too loud. whistle sound in particular. This part does not have a loud sound that much. I recommend volume matching next note. ( about 40~50%) It is important that make volume in accord with music.
7. 01:53:934 (1) - add finish to end of the slider.
8. 02:12:526 (2) - Rhythm that is different from the other. i mean 02:09:990 (3) - 02:12:526 (2) - 02:16:328 (2) - These can use the similar rhythm.
   02:09:990 (3) - 02:16:328 (2) - If you fit into these, 02:12:526 (2) - slider end should be put to 02:13:371. or
   02:12:526 (2) - If you fit into this, 02:09:990 (3,2) - These should be placed in the red tick of the previous. ( 02:09:779. 02:16:540. ) I recommend former suggestion to have constant rhythm.
9. 02:36:821 green line - vol80%. I think that this is slightly big. That volume should be used in the kiai time. I recommended that you change the volume as part of previous. ( 01:07:455 ) for ex: 02:36:821 - vol60%. 02:47:173~ vol70%.
10. 03:04:497 (1) - When played with 4:3 it is slightly off-screen. You must adjust it. http://puu.sh/2VQMu.jpg
11. 03:12:103 (x) - same as 01:34:075 (x)
12. 03:31:962 (1) - remove finish to end of the slider. The sound of slider end is the remainder of the echo from 03:32:385. I felt that the consecutive finish sound did not match.

1. 00:59:004 (3) - same as Easy
2. 01:12:526 green line - ^
3. 01:19:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are the sounds which are connected. 01:19:920 (2,3) - I think that you should put it to 01:20:131 if put these. ( It is like 01:26:469 (1,2,3) - ) or http://puu.sh/2VTg1.jpg , http://puu.sh/2VTgK.jpg etc
4. 01:28:582 (2,1) - 01:30:272 (2,1) - appearance is 1/2 rhythm spacing, but actually it have 1/1 rhythm. If it is overlapped I do not recommend such a pattern... i feel narrow the appearance and it may deceive the spacing and rhythm a little. ( 02:42:948 (1,2) - If you have in the other a pattern like this, it would be very confused it )
5. 01:35:342 (2,3,4,1) - 01:37:033 (2,3,4,1) - 01:38:723 (2,3,4,1) - ^
6. 01:51:399 (1) - same as Easy
7. 01:54:779 (2) - add finish to start and end of the slider.
8. 02:05:765 (2) - remove clap to end of the slider. clap of the different pattern. I think that it does not match even if this is intentional. better to put a clap to repeat instead.
9. 02:12:526 (2) - same as Easy
10. 02:14:216 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider. to put for the beginning of vocal. It is like 02:10:835 (1) -
11. 02:17:596 (1) - ^
12. 02:36:821 green line - same as Easy
13. 02:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:19:709 (1,2,3,4,5)
14. 03:05:765 (1) - Why do you put a finish only this diff? You should unify them in all difficulty. either is fine.
15. 03:06:610 (2,1) - 03:08:300 (2,1) - 03:13:371 (2,3,4,1) - 03:15:061 (2,3,4,1) - same as 01:28:582 (2,1)
16. 03:26:892 (1,1,2,1,2,3) - this combo color I think a little strange >.< 03:27:737 (1) - remove NC is better imo.

1. OD,HD +1 ( I think that it is too easy setting for hard. because BPM is not so fast & placement along the DS & If you're using CS3...etc )
2. 00:23:511 (2) - Why change the slider speed only this? I did not understand a reason. If you change the slider speed here, 00:24:357 (3,4) - I suggest these change the slider speed together. for ex: 00:23:511 (2) - 0.80x, 00:24:357 (3) - 1.00x, 00:25:202 (4) - 1.20x.
3. 00:36:188 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider. to put for the beginning of vocal. It is like 00:34:497 (1) -
4. 00:45:483~00:59:004 - Why do you put clap to 1 ? ( All of clap,finish,whistle is put there... ) In the case of this clap sound, I think that it is the sound that should be put to 2,4. actually 2,4 positions are quiet .
5. 00:51:821 (6) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/2Witl.jpg change the direction. 00:51:399 (5,6,1) - create a different flow in these.
6. 00:56:469 (2,3,4,5) - Suggestion of the flow & design: http://puu.sh/2WiFm.jpg
   
   SPOILER

   304,200,56469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   144,248,56892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   16,144,57314,2,2,P|71:67|167:99,1,210,14|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   208,172,58159,1,4,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:12:526 green line - same as Easy
8. 01:51:399 (1) - ^
9. 01:53:934 (1,2) - I prefer using the circles here. (it is like 00:31:117 (1,2,3) - 02:22:666 (1,2,3) - ) for ex: http://puu.sh/2WiXI.jpg
10. 02:10:835 (1) - add whistle. to put for the beginning of vocal.
11. 02:14:216 (1) - ^
12. 02:36:821 green line - same as Easy
13. 02:59:638 (2,3) - hmm... I feel like you are breaking the rhythm of the song a little by these.. because do not have the sound that should emphasize in these. 02:59:850 sounds are outstanding most, but note is not put there.. >_< so I think you should make a rhythm like this at least: http://puu.sh/2WjvS.jpg
14. 03:01:328 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:08:722 (5) - add clap

1. 00:23:511 (2) - same as Hard
2. 00:26:892 (2) - ^
3. 00:45:483~00:59:004 - ^
4. 00:58:688 (4) - remove whistle to end of the slider. The sound of slider end is the remainder of the echo from 00:58:899. Sound does not remain almost there. so I suggest that you do not put it like hard.
5. 01:12:526 green line - same as Easy
6. 01:20:554 (5,6) - Ctrl+G Natural flow to next note more?
7. 01:34:920 (2,3,4) - Suggestion of the form design: http://puu.sh/2WlbK.jpg Form of various flows
8. 01:51:399 (1) - same as Easy
9. 02:10:835 (1) - add whistle. to put for the beginning of vocal.
10. 02:13:159 (7) - i prefer Ctrl+G flow. http://puu.sh/2WlkU.jpg ( it is like 02:09:145 (4,5) - different flow
11. 02:14:216 (1) - add whistle. to put for the beginning of vocal.
12. 02:16:540 (5) - add whistle. ( same as 02:09:779 (5) - 02:13:159 (7) -
13. 02:36:821 green line - same as Easy

1. very solid SB. but SB load over 5.00 at many places. I worry about only it. ( but I thought it to be all necessary when I looked. so I say nothing ) I hope that do not have any problem~