1. Easy (1,22 stars, 71 notes)
2. Hard (4,05 stars, 148 notes)
3. Kiiwa (4,47 stars, 166 notes)
4. Normal (2,64 stars, 102 notes)

Sieg wrote:

Hello M4M here

General:

Easy:
00:20:986 (4,1) - ok, lets make them interact, straight sliders looks not so great all the time http://puu.sh/2lYDZ Uhm, I don't see any problem here. This is just an alternate version, and I like mine more in this case.
00:24:126 (2,3,4) - also you can adjust this to something like - http://puu.sh/2lYFz http://puu.sh/2lYHj looks much better imo Same here.
00:28:660 (1) - this works much better Well, ok. Changed! http://puu.sh/2lYJv
00:39:126 (4) - may be confusing for easy players I agree, but I want to see, what others may think about this. I find this quite easy to read for newbies.
00:50:986 (1,2) - why people hate to make blankets? http://puu.sh/2lYPd Adjusted.
00:55:172 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this works better imo http://puu.sh/2lYV4 http://puu.sh/2lYVi http://puu.sh/2lYVM http://puu.sh/2lYW4 think about this Err, while having changed something on this pattern, I can't agree with the circle thingy.
01:12:614 (5) - try this? I prefer mine. http://puu.sh/2lYY0
01:29:707 (2,3) - make them curve too? Sure
01:38:428 (1) - end on 01:40:521 Had it there firstly, wasn't sure about length, but sure.

Normal:
OD+1 Nice idea!
00:11:567 (2) - nope, I guess that your style but this really doesn't work well try something like http://puu.sh/2lZ2P Ok, sure.
00:38:428 (7,8) - same ^ Dont see a problem here
00:45:405 (1,2) - that red dot don't make them looks creative or nice Uh, changed.
01:11:916 (7,8,1) - this boring to play, try to make them curve too Well, why not XD
01:38:428 (1) - same as for easy Yep, same here.

Hard:
00:11:567 (5,1) - make this blanket better http://puu.sh/2lZbZ Sure ~
00:31:102 (4,6) - remove red? http://puu.sh/2lZhx Looks more boring to me, so I prefer not to :<
00:33:893 (1) - try this? http://puu.sh/2lZit
01:21:684 (1,2,3) - move 01:22:381 (2) - to 144:280 to make cool blankets? Cool.
01:38:428 (1) - same as for easy Yep.

Don't see any issues in rhythm. Cool song. Good Luck!

Gabe wrote:

Get more mods, Konei <3

Kokatsu wrote:

I'll have a look tomorrow or so, please remind me if I forget it. ;w;

Lololo, I finally did something!

Hard

00:03:544 (3) - NC Yep!
00:11:567 (5,1) - Increase the blanket by a bit, they are too close together for my taste. I really like it like this.
00:12:614 (1,2,3) - Keep the same Angle between them? Changed!
00:22:730 (1) - Lead to the next note more by lowering the Sliderend by a bit. Changed.

00:31:102 (4,6) - These sliders look weird with the red sliderpoint. Just use a white sliderpoint for them and you should be fine. You also should copy and flip (4) to get the shape of (6). Changed.
00:33:893 (1) - This gridmapping. Use some angle for this one. Yup~
00:46:800 (3) - This looks unsymetric to my eye. Looks just fine to me.
00:47:847 (4,5) - You should really think over the shaping of these two sliders. While (4) mainly looks weird, (5) just kills the flow with it's unintuitive movement. Good point No idea what I did there ><
01:12:614 (3,4,5,6,1) - The stream should be more consistent with itself, meaning that you should either use soemthing similar to 01:01:451 (6,7,8,9,1) or use something like this: Fixed.

01:15:405 (4,5,6) - You change your rhythm here, which isn't fitting (IMO). Use something like this: The rhythm change is no problem to me in this place.

01:26:567 (2,3,4) - Just my opinion, but a 1/4 reverseslider would fit better here (since it's getting calmer again). Lol, not really hard to play, is it? I guess it is fine :>
01:35:637 (1,2) - You could use a lower spacing here. Cool, lowered it a bit.

Chatlog for Easy and Normal

13:16 Kokatsu: Hi Konei. o/
13:16 Konei: Hellow :>
13:16 *Kokatsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232179 Pale Green - I'm in blue (Short Ver.) [Easy]]
13:16 Konei: Oh
13:16 Kokatsu: Wäre ein IRCmod Okay oder lieber Forum?
13:16 Konei: Hm
13:17 Konei: momentan fehlt mir die Zeit für irc, aber wenn du später irc Zeit hättest, wäre das cool :>
13:17 Kokatsu: Wann wäre denn "später" für dich?
13:18 Konei: In ner Virtelstunde?
13:18 Kokatsu: lol, das ist ja garnichts, geht klar.
13:18 Konei: Coo
13:18 Konei: *Cool
13:18 Kokatsu: Dann kann ich noch gemütlich eine rauchen.
13:18 Konei: Lol
13:18 Kokatsu: Okay, schreib' mich einfach an, wenn wir anfangen können.
13:31 Konei: Wäre ready 
13:32 Kokatsu: Okay, ich auch.
13:32 Kokatsu: Ich check eben Offset, hatte beim Spielen 'ne miese Acc.
13:33 Konei: Yup, kann gut sein, dass er nicht genau ist
13:35 Kokatsu: 765 krieg ich auf die Schnelle.
13:36 Kokatsu: Wenn du's änderst, lass es nochmal überprüfen, aber das weisst du ja, lol
13:36 Konei: Schon klar
13:37 Kokatsu: Was heisst das ganzer ChingChong in den Tags?
13:37 Konei: Sind die japanischen Zeichen
13:37 Kokatsu: Wodovn?
13:37 Konei: nehme ich aber lieber raus ~w
13:37 Kokatsu: *wovon
13:37 Konei: Vom Spiel
13:37 Kokatsu: Müsste dass dann nicht Source sein?
13:38 Konei: Der Source ist "Sweet Pool"
13:38 Konei: Das es aber keinen Platz für asiatischen Source gib
13:38 Konei: hab ich das in die Tags gepackt
13:38 Kokatsu: Hm, lass es erstmal drin und frag einen MAT oder BAT.
13:38 Konei: ok ó.o
13:39 Kokatsu: VN und OP sind zu kurz, um danach zu suchen, also nimm's aus den Tags.
13:39 Konei: In game nicht
13:39 Konei: über osu!direct
13:39 Kokatsu: Kann auch sein, dass die Regel geändert wurde.
13:39 Kokatsu: I don't know, orz.
13:39 Kokatsu: Wollt's nur erwähnt haben.
13:40 Kokatsu: Lead-In 1500?
13:41 Konei: 2000 fühlt sich zu lang an? :<
13:41 Kokatsu: Du hast ja noch die 700 vom Offset.
13:41 Kokatsu: Also sind's inprinzip 2700
13:41 Konei: Wartö
13:41 Kokatsu: Ich fand's ein bisschen zu lang, vorallem weil der Song so langsam ist.
13:43 Kokatsu: Sag bescheid, wenn's weitergehen kann.
13:43 Konei: Ich finde 2000 ist gut :<
13:43 Konei: Gefällt mir besse
13:43 Kokatsu: Okay.
13:43 Konei: obwohl ich auch nochmal 1500 in Betracht ziehen werde
13:43 Kokatsu: Änder es einfach, wenn es noch jemanden stört. :p
13:44 Kokatsu: Du könntest Tickrate 2 in Betracht ziehen, ich finde es passt ganz gut, da die Ticks so auf die Drums kommen.
13:47 Kokatsu: Und der Ticksound passt gut zu dem Song. owo
13:48 Konei: Ok
13:48 Konei: Einen Moment
13:48 Kokatsu: Kein Problem.
13:48 Konei: 00:50:990 (1) - Hm, hier klingt es ein wenig nervig, nicht?
13:48 Kokatsu: Ich mag's.
13:49 Konei: Eigentlich gute Idee :> 
13:50 Kokatsu: \:D
13:50 Konei: Geändert
13:50 Kokatsu: :3
13:50 Kokatsu: Okay, nochmal kurz zu den Tags
13:50 Kokatsu: Nitro+Chiral Wenn du das benutzt, das gleiche ohne + auch nochmal?
13:50 Kokatsu: Ich hab' kP wer oder was das ist, deswegen bin ich mir nicht sicher. D:
13:51 Konei: Eine Firma
13:51 Kokatsu: Ah, okay, dann also nicht.
13:52 Konei: Lol
13:53 Konei: Tickrate 2 ftw >w<
13:53 Konei: Echt cool lol
13:53 Kokatsu: :D
13:53 Konei: danke xD
13:53 Kokatsu: Kein Ding. xD
13:53 Kokatsu: Ich mag die Kiairefreshes nicht so, aber das ist ja Geschmackssache.
13:53 Konei: Ok
13:54 Kokatsu: Okay, dann endlich zu den Diffs! \:D
13:54 Kokatsu: Easy als erstes.
13:54 Konei: Ok ~
13:54 Kokatsu: Ungenutzte Greenlines:
13:54 Kokatsu: 01:05:986 - 
13:54 Kokatsu: Die danach kann dann auch weg, weil du ja nur die Vol runtersetzt.
13:54 Kokatsu: Also dann die auch weg: 01:06:335
13:54 Konei: Yep
13:54 Kokatsu: 01:06:335 -
13:55 Kokatsu: 01:25:870 - 
13:55 Kokatsu: 01:35:637 - 
13:55 Kokatsu: Die alle weg.
13:55 Konei: Alle removed \:3
13:55 Kokatsu: :D
13:56 Kokatsu: Ich mag die Idee mit den Combofarben, aber
13:56 Kokatsu: Das "knallige" rot und blau sind zu knallig für den BG. :/
13:57 Kokatsu: Setz die beide einfach im Scale etwas nach oben, dann passt's.
13:57 Konei: Für's Video finde ich das eigetnlich ganz passend
13:57 Konei: alles klar
13:57 Kokatsu: Hab' kein Video. o3o
13:58 Konei: Ich ändere das Rot ein wenig ab :>
13:58 Kokatsu: Gut.
13:58 Kokatsu: Blau schmerzt eh nicht so stark im Auge.
13:58 Kokatsu: 00:08:079 - Hier fehlt mir eine Note.
13:59 Kokatsu: Das ist ja einer von den "starken" Parts mit den dunkleren Farben.
13:59 Kokatsu: Und  die 2/1 Pause kam da irgendwie meh rüber.
13:59 Konei: Alles klar ~
13:59 Konei: http://puu.sh/2nGAB
13:59 Konei: Wie ist es mit dem Rot?
14:00 Kokatsu: Erinnert mich an Puff.
14:00 Kokatsu: lol
14:00 Kokatsu: Aber passt. :p
14:00 Konei: LOL
14:00 Konei: ok
14:00 Kokatsu: 00:34:242 (1,2) - Meh
14:00 Kokatsu: Etwas sehr langweilig, IMO.
14:01 Kokatsu: Einen 1/1 Slider mit Reverse für (1)?
14:01 Konei: So welche Parts gehören für mich in ein Easy :<
14:02 Konei: Ich würde es gerne fürs erste behalten
14:02 Konei: Jedoch verstehe ich, was du meinst
14:02 Kokatsu: Könntest du dann wenigstens den Shape von einen der beiden ändern?
14:02 Konei: Das geht klar :>
14:02 Kokatsu: Supi! ~
14:03 Kokatsu: (ich mag den Shape sowieso nicht, orz)
14:03 Kokatsu: Wäre es ein Problem, wenn wir ~20min Pause machen, es gibt Essen. D:
14:04 Konei: Ugh
14:04 Kokatsu: Ich kann's auch verschieben.
14:04 Konei: Ehm, ich wollte gleich weg ><
14:04 Kokatsu: Ah, okay, dann machen wir das jetzt noch weiter. :D
14:04 Konei: in 30 minuten wollte ich weg sein
14:05 Konei: Alles klar :>
14:05 Konei: Dann mal los! ~
14:05 Kokatsu: Wenn wir nicht fertig werden, mach ich den Rest als Forumpost.
14:05 Konei: Super ~
14:05 Kokatsu: 01:02:149 (1,2) - q.q
14:06 Konei: Langeweile?
14:06 Kokatsu: Ja, ist ja das selbe wie oben nur mit anderen Shape.
14:06 Konei: Ok, ändere 2's Shape
14:06 Kokatsu: Gut. :D
14:07 Kokatsu: 01:13:312 (1,2) - Der Cut könnte schöner sein.
14:07 Kokatsu: Sieht etwas schief aus.
14:08 Kokatsu: 01:23:079 (1) - Etwas zu kurvig, sieht in meinen Augen nichtmehr schön aus. :/
14:09 Konei: Beide gefixed 
14:09 Kokatsu: 01:25:870 - Hier bräuchtest du eine Note, der Beat ist zu stark, um ihn auszulassen. Könntest ja die (2) vorher etwas umshapen und dann ein Blanket machen (?)
14:09 Kokatsu: 01:25:870 - Hier bräuchtest du eine Note, der Beat ist zu stark, um ihn auszulassen. Könntest ja die (2) vorher etwas umshapen und dann ein Blanket machen (?)
14:09 Konei: Und 2's shape geändert
14:10 Kokatsu: (wenn du das machst, muss der Snap zur (1) wieder gerichtet werden)
14:11 Konei: Fixed
14:11 Kokatsu: 01:29:009 - Note?
14:11 Kokatsu: Und dann eventuell HP oder OD um 1 senken.
14:11 Konei: Yup, für Konstanz
14:12 Kokatsu: Achne, vergiss es, das würde deine Settings vergewaltigen.
14:12 Konei: Yep
14:12 Kokatsu: Okay, Normal
14:12 Kokatsu: 01:05:986 - greenline
14:13 Kokatsu: Und die folgende auch wieder.
14:13 Konei: Yep
14:14 Kokatsu: 00:18:893 (3,4) - zu kurvig IMO
14:14 Konei: Mag die
14:14 Kokatsu: Okay
14:14 Konei: ></
14:14 Kokatsu: 00:27:963 (7) - Wenn der so horizontal ist, passt der da irgendwie nicht rein, finde ich.
14:15 Kokatsu: Lieber den Endpunkt etwas weiter nach oben.
14:15 Konei: Ok
14:15 Konei: alles klar ~
14:15 Kokatsu: 00:36:684 (5) - Nach (3,4) würde ich hier einen nach unten gecurveten Slider erwarten.
14:15 Kokatsu: vom Flow her.
14:16 Konei: Alles klar
14:16 Kokatsu: 00:57:963 (2,3,4) - Als einzige Stacks in der ganzen Map etwas unpassend, space die ganz normal.
14:17 Konei: A-aber ;w;
14:17 Konei: Nagut 
14:17 Kokatsu: xD
14:17 Kokatsu: 01:01:451 (7) - Mach sowas nicht auf Normals, Reverses sollten schon sichbar sein, solange es keine (Hard/Insane) Kickslider sind.
14:17 Kokatsu: 01:01:451 (7) - Mach sowas nicht auf Normals, Reverses sollten schon sichbar sein, solange es keine (Hard/Insane) Kickslider sind.
14:18 Kokatsu: Also entweder nur einen Reverse oder zwei 1/4 Slider, wenn du den Rhythmus so haben willst.
14:19 Konei: awwww
14:19 Konei: okay 
14:19 Kokatsu: 01:11:916 (7,8) - Sieht etwas zu statisch aus, wenn du (8) etwas anwinkelst geht's.
14:19 Kokatsu: http://puu.sh/2nGXt So oder ähnlich.
14:19 Konei: Okay
14:20 Konei: 01:18:897 (1,2) - Sind auch ein stack
14:20 *Konei runs
14:20 Kokatsu: Ich weiß. :p
14:20 Kokatsu: Mach den weg! :'D
14:20 Konei: Never !!!
14:20 Kokatsu: Okay. ;w;
14:21 Kokatsu: Mir ist das alles etwas zu Gridorientiert. :x
14:21 Konei: Hm okay
14:21 Kokatsu: Aber ist dein Stil, also weine ich nicht.
14:21 Kokatsu: Okay, Hard.
14:21 Kokatsu: 00:03:544 (3) - NC
14:22 Konei: Öhm
14:22 Konei: ich muss jetzt weg
14:22 Konei: kannst du hard auch Forum machen? 3
14:22 Konei: :3
14:22 Kokatsu: Uh, okay, dann mach ich die Hard im Forum, jo.
14:22 Kokatsu: Gut, dann viel Spaß.~
14:22 Konei: Alles klar ><
14:22 Konei: Danke^^

Okay, good luck on this one, it's nice.

• • Tags: what is "スウィーチEプ�Eル"? Translate it in romaji.
  • Try to make the difficulty settings more balanced, for example you can try to do something like this: Easy HP/AR/OD 3, Normal HP/AR/OD 5 and Hard HP/AR/OD 7.
  • 01:24:130 (kiai) - Why this kiai fountain? Just end kiai here and add a kiai fountan at 01:27:269.

• • 00:00:758 (1) - End this slider at 00:01:804 and add a repeat.
  • 00:03:548 (2) - Same thing here.
  • 00:06:339 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is kinda weird and could be difficult to understand for unexperienced players, try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:32:851 (4) - Why this 1/2 slider? It seems totally random for me, remove the repeat and end it 1/2 later. (if you want to keep it then add it here 00:21:688 too)
  • 00:36:339 (2) - Blanket here can be improved a lot, also why don't you try this pattern? It looks better imo:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:02:153 (1,2) - Delete (2), add a repeat on (1) and add a circle at 01:05:641.
  • 01:13:316 (1,2) - Same thing here.
  • 01:25:874 (3) - Delete this circle, start a slider here and end it at 01:26:571.
  • 01:29:711 (3,4) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:38:432 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:35:641.

• • 00:11:571 (2,1) - Move (2) 1/2 later and (1) at 00:11:571.
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:31:455 (3,4,5) - I suggest you to map following the music and not the singer's voice, this part feels a bit weird imo, try to do something like this for example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:35:990 (3,4,5,6) - Same thing here, it's not a big deal, just personal preference.
  • 00:46:804 (2) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:112 y:196.
  • 01:01:455 (7) - Delete this slider and add 2 1/4 sliders, all these repeats here can be confusing.
  • 01:15:757 (3,4) - Delete (4) and move (3) 1/2 later.
  • 01:35:641 (1,2) - Delete this slider and this circle and start the next spinner at 01:35:641.

• • 00:11:571 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:11:571.
  • 00:13:316 (2,3) - Delete (3), add a repeat on (2) and add a circle at 00:14:362.
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:25:176 (4,5) - I don't like the flow here, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:05:990 (5) - Move this circle at x:256 y:332.

Gabe wrote:

Get more mods, Konei <3

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Tags: what is "スウィーチEプ�Eル"? Translate it in romaji. Lol, yeah, removed.
  • Try to make the difficulty settings more balanced, for example you can try to do something like this: Easy HP/AR/OD 3, Normal HP/AR/OD 5 and Hard HP/AR/OD 7. Current one are reasonable, arent they?
  • 01:24:130 (kiai) - Why this kiai fountain? Just end kiai here and add a kiai fountan at 01:27:269. Since for me the KIAI is still there. Also, I want to end it when the same part as in the intro plays.

Easy

• • 00:00:758 (1) - End this slider at 00:01:804 and add a repeat. Nah, I like it with the Sliderticks :3
  • 00:03:548 (2) - Same thing here. ^
  • 00:06:339 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is kinda weird and could be difficult to understand for unexperienced players, try this pattern: Agree, changed ></
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle. Nope, the sound is not loud enough here for me.
  • 00:32:851 (4) - Why this 1/2 slider? It seems totally random for me, remove the repeat and end it 1/2 later. (if you want to keep it then add it here 00:21:688 too) Changed!
  • 00:36:339 (2) - Blanket here can be improved a lot, also why don't you try this pattern? It looks better imo: Good, changed.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:02:153 (1,2) - Delete (2), add a repeat on (1) and add a circle at 01:05:641. Current rhythm seems cooler to me.
  • 01:13:316 (1,2) - Same thing here. ^
  • 01:25:874 (3) - Delete this circle, start a slider here and end it at 01:26:571. Sure.
  • 01:29:711 (3,4) - Try this pattern: Allright ~
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:38:432 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:35:641. Yup!

Normal

• • 00:11:571 (2,1) - Move (2) 1/2 later and (1) at 00:11:571. I prefer my rhythm.
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle. Yep.
  • 00:31:455 (3,4,5) - I suggest you to map following the music and not the singer's voice, this part feels a bit weird imo, try to do something like this for example: I like vocal mapping here, so I stay with mine :3
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:35:990 (3,4,5,6) - Same thing here, it's not a big deal, just personal preference. ^
  • 00:46:804 (2) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:112 y:196. Cool!
  • 01:01:455 (7) - Delete this slider and add 2 1/4 sliders, all these repeats here can be confusing. Yep, allright!
  • 01:15:757 (3,4) - Delete (4) and move (3) 1/2 later. Nope, seems strange.
  • 01:35:641 (1,2) - Delete this slider and this circle and start the next spinner at 01:35:641. Sure.

Hard

• • 00:11:571 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:11:571. Uh, looks really strange,to me.
  • 00:13:316 (2,3) - Delete (3), add a repeat on (2) and add a circle at 00:14:362. Cool.
  • 00:16:106 (x) - Add a circle. Yeah.
  • 00:25:176 (4,5) - I don't like the flow here, try this: Changed.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:05:990 (5) - Move this circle at x:256 y:332. Awkay!

Gabe wrote:

Get more mods, Konei <3

1. Settings seems a bit too high for an Easy difficulty to me, try to reduce AR, HP and OD by 1 tick at least.

1. 00:17:502 (2) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:32:851 (4) - This slider looks ugly compared to the rest of the difficulty, make it curve like the others.
3. 00:59:362 (4) - New combo here as well, you can notice that the lyrics change and also music gets higher.
4. 01:13:316 (1,2) - Try to avoid overlapping these two sliders together, it doesn't look so good.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to have a perfect difficulty setting.

1. 00:12:618 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) and not on (1), since the music actually changes there.
2. 00:16:106 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these two notes together, they might be confusing to read for beginners.
3. 00:17:502 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
4. 00:26:571 (5) - I'd suggest you to add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long for this kind of difficulty.
5. 00:37:734 (6) - Same as above for the same reason, please do that.
6. 00:55:874 (7,1) - New combo should go on (7) and not on (1), since the music actually changes there.
7. 00:59:362 (5) - Add a new combo here then, otherwise it will be too long, also, the music changes here, so you should add it.
8. 01:10:525 (5) - New combo once again, you have too many long combos on this difficulty, and it's not good for a Normal.
9. 01:18:897 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking these together if possible, they might be confusing to read for beginners.
10. 01:32:502 (6,1) - New combo should go on (6) and not on (1), since the new section begins here actually.

1. 00:10:176 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix this through using the distance snap correctly.
2. 00:17:502 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
3. 00:55:176 (6,1) - New combo should go on (6) and not on (1), the music actually changes there.

1. tag 'game', we all know this is a game :3
2. also tag 'kiiwa' since she's GDer

1. Why so many bookmarks orz
2. 00:39:128 (3) - AIMod/AIBat both said this note isn't snapped, please remove it and make a new one
3. 00:03:548 (3,1,2,1,2) - The new combos are messing up here, we should place the new combo like what you did on 00:00:758 (1,2,1,2) -. Add a new combo at 00:03:548 (3) - , remove new combo from 00:04:246 (1) -, swap the nces on 00:04:944 (2,1) - would be more consistent imo
4. 00:06:339 (2,1) - also swap these combos zzz
5. 00:39:827 - idk but a finish sounds pretty nice to emphasize the vocal sound
6. 00:50:990 - ^
7. 00:54:478 - Seems you miss a clap aaa
   I dislike the placement in this diff a bit, but yeah it's your style

1. 00:05:641 (1,2,1) - Try to make a jump with consistent spacing, current is not the same. It would be nicer I think
2. 00:25:525 (5) - How about ctrl+g then move back for the shape? It would be more flow between (5,1) I think (since (5)'s sliderend is toward (1)'s sliderhead)
3. 00:34:944 - Why you don't clap :V
4. 00:39:130 (3) - A bit nazi but could you please lower down the volume here? Seems the volume here is higher than others due to Normal sampleset is too loud
5. 01:07:734 (1) - This shape can be more curve, so I try to do it. Take a look at the example and use da code!
   
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   304,72,67734,38,0,B|260:44|212:76|212:76|172:100|112:80,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:10:525 (5) - Copy ^
7. 01:12:618 (3,4,5,6,1) - Straight line for the stream is too boring! Try to curve it like the example: (Don't forget to check the spacing for the following notes if you use the code)
   
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   164,80,72618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   112,80,72792,1,0,0:3:0:0:
   64,104,72967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   40,152,73141,1,0,3:0:0:0:
   44,208,73316,38,0,P|72:268|196:284,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   Nice diff! <3

1. 00:11:223 - well why you add clap and whistle, sounds really annoying and so inconsistent. Please remove whistle o_o
2. 00:12:269 - Whistle here to keep consistent with 00:09:478 - ? It's nice imo
3. 00:55:874 (1,2) - Since the vocal starts at (2), I'll recommend you swap nc to emphasize the vocal there
4. 00:58:664 (5,6) - Well I know you're doing a nice blanket, but you should still follow the spacing as same as former parts D;
5. 01:01:455 (8,9) - These things are nice, but it would mess up your pattern. Try to add a new combo at (8) to separate (7,8), it would be more readable I think

1. 00:32:851 (4,1) - Well what's wrong with the spacing
   Solid easy is cool and nice as always

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi sry orzzzz xD naah :3

General
- Hm is the Normal custom clap a bit too soft for you? Not that big of a deal but yea
I like the solemn feeling it creates though Seems fine to me either.

- Find a comboburst picture lol & don't forget to delete the blank one (and idk if it matters, but make the "C" in Comboburst.png lowercased) Kay fixed.

- In your .osu files under Events, change the bg code line from 0,0,"BG desu.jpg",1,1 to 0,0,"BG desu.jpg",0,0 fixed.

Easy
01:25:874 (3) - i really like this, but it violates the Distance snap. I'm wondering if a NC would be okay?? but maybe you should fix this anyways orzz... Also, Finish on this done.

Normal
00:58:664 (5,6) - similar as Easy but I think I can let this go lol; & NC would also work on (6) okay~

Hard
00:48:897 (5) - Rotate like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/746836 , better contrast with (4) imo sure
01:20:292 (5,6,7) - Equalize spacing here, i don't see a reason not to yep
01:35:641 (1,2) - Sounds kinda silent almost, i would increase the volume a bit to be safe ok


Very clean! 8Q________
feel free to call me back~~

LunarSakuya wrote:

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