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-xNaCLx-
mod request thorugh pm..

all of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Kantan]
nice~
[Futsuu]
00:23:537 (2) - d
00:28:643 (2) - ^
01:21:143 (2) - slider and note overlapped? reduce the length of the slider to 01:22:420
01:32:792 (1,2) - d (remove finish)
[Muzu]
nice~
[Oni]
00:19:548 (1,2,1) - k k D
[Inner Oni]
nice~

Nice map :) good luck to rank
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

NewibornCLivee wrote:

mod request thorugh pm..

all of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Kantan]
nice~
[Futsuu]
00:23:537 (2) - d
00:28:643 (2) - ^
01:21:143 (2) - slider and note overlapped? reduce the length of the slider to 01:22:420 thx!
01:32:792 (1,2) - d (remove finish)
[Muzu]
nice~
[Oni]
00:19:548 (1,2,1) - k k D

Nice map :) good luck to rank
thanks for mod :)
- Rche -
おまたせー
ニホンゴムズカシイダカラエイゴツカッタ。ゴメンナサイ。
太鼓譜面初modなんだし自己主張なんだし全NGしても構いません。

[Kantan]
SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:11:090 (9) - k
00:15:399 (1) - move 00:15:239 or 00:15:080 or ...remove?
00:16:197 (1,2,1) - d d k -> d k k
00:25:133 (1) - move to 00:24:973 ?
00:25:931 (2,1) - K d -> D k
00:45:239 (1) - d or remove
01:00:239 - add d
01:05:824 (7) - end at 01:07:260
01:21:143 (1) - end at 01:22:101
01:22:580 (1) - k
01:23:218 (1) - remove
01:23:856 (1) - move to 01:23:697
01:26:250 (1) - move to 01:26:090

[Futsuu]

SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:04:548 (4,5) - remove (5), extend (4) to 00:05:984
00:16:516 (1) - k
00:17:633 (1,1,1) - d k k
00:28:643 (2) - move to 00:28:484
00:39:495 (2) - move to 00:39:654
00:43:643 (1) - remove
00:48:750 (1) - remove
00:56:250 (1,1) - d k or k k
01:13:484 (1) - k

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:31:995 (1) - k
00:37:101 (1) - k
00:39:495 (1) - d
01:15:558 (1) - k

[Oni]
SPOILER
GJです!
00:02:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkdd
00:07:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[0gre]
SPOILER
00:01:835 (2) - d
00:04:229 (1,1) - d k or k k

傲慢ちゃんのAA貼ってみたかった。
彡☆
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

justnobody wrote:

おまたせー
ニホンゴムズカシイダカラエイゴツカッタ。ゴメンナサイ。
太鼓譜面初modなんだし自己主張なんだし全NGしても構いません。

[Kantan]
SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:11:090 (9) - k
00:15:399 (1) - move 00:15:239 or 00:15:080 or ...remove?
00:16:197 (1,2,1) - d d k -> d k k
00:25:133 (1) - move to 00:24:973 ?
00:25:931 (2,1) - K d -> D k
00:45:239 (1) - d or remove
01:00:239 - add d
01:05:824 (7) - end at 01:07:260
01:21:143 (1) - end at 01:22:101
01:22:580 (1) - k
01:23:218 (1) - remove
01:23:856 (1) - move to 01:23:697
01:26:250 (1) - move to 01:26:090

[Futsuu]

SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:04:548 (4,5) - remove (5), extend (4) to 00:05:984
00:16:516 (1) - k
00:17:633 (1,1,1) - d k k
00:28:643 (2) - move to 00:28:484
00:39:495 (2) - move to 00:39:654
00:43:643 (1) - remove
00:48:750 (1) - remove
00:56:250 (1,1) - d k or k k
01:13:484 (1) - k

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
00:00:878 (1) - k
00:31:995 (1) - k
00:37:101 (1) - k
00:39:495 (1) - d
01:15:558 (1) - k

[Oni]
SPOILER
GJです!
00:02:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkdd
00:07:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

傲慢ちゃんのAA貼ってみたかった。
彡☆
いくつか修正!
thanks for mod :)
0gre_old
[]

Lundlerol wrote:

ReySHeL's mod reqs

[0gre's Inner Oni]
緑線ずれてるので直しといてね。
00:33:261 - add notes.追加しないと違和感MAX
00:38:368 -  ^
00:44:112 - これを00:43:953 (1) -  に移動。
00:51:293 -  ここを始点に次のdddのdまでのdのストリームを置く方が難易度上がってGOOD
00:51:931 (1) - ^を採用するならここをkに。^をkにしても良い。kにするならここをd
00:52:011 -  ^に続いて採用するならここはdelete
00:53:846 (1) -  ここを始点に3連
00:58:474 (4) -  k


以上でmod終了です。
では頑張って~。
MOD ありがとうございます~ :)
緑線は誤差ミリ秒単位のずれで音が変わらない仕様です


TKSalt wrote:

パジュパディティア゙ヴォデュディアァ゙三 ・▿・))‾▿◝ ),;'.

[0gre's Inner Oni]
00:02:623 (5) - d (というかkdkdkkkdkdみたいな形でも?
00:07:729 (5) - ^
00:38:368 - ^
01:14:272 (3) - k
01:19:379 (3) - ^
01:24:883 - d
01:25:442 (3,4) - 1/4で左にずらしてdddの形は?
01:25:681 (2) - del
01:27:437 - Innerなので音を入れてストリーム繋げてしまうのは?
01:30:149 - k

かぶり、抜けあったらごめんんあさい
♪✌('ω')✌♪三└(┐Lε:)┘♪
繰り返しはありましたが、確実な変化になりました
MOD ありがとうございました!


Naryuga wrote:

from forum pmmmm

[0gre's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:01:027 - k? 00:06:133 - も同じようにk?
  2. 00:20:974 (1,1,2,3,1) - dkddk もしくは kkddk kdddkに違和感を感じました。ここの音楽を聞いてみて1番目がkなら2番目もkになってもいいかな、と思いました
  3. 00:25:921 (3) - K? シンバルが軽めの音なのでKat +Finisherの方がしっくりきました
  4. 00:31:027 (2) - d? ただの好みです特に理由はありません
  5. 00:43:793 (1,1) - ddddkみたいに繋げてもいいかもしれません
  6. 00:46:346 (4) - k/K -> 00:46:506 (1) - delete? 後者の音が余計に感じました
  7. 00:48:899 (1,1) - ふたつ上と同じ感じに
  8. 00:56:399 - add a don pleaseeeee? ;w;
  9. 01:20:814 - d?
  10. 01:20:974 - ^
good luck!
恐ろしく理にかなった指摘で驚きました;
助かりました!


hibarirailwayz wrote:

Hi!
via my PM
These are my opinions; you should not accept all my suggestion, but if you skip my suggestion, I want you tell me the reason!

The Marks I use.
SPOILER
Standard
  1. ^= same contents as upward
  2. NC=New Combo
Taiko
  1. d=don(none)
  2. k=kat(whistle or clap)
  3. D=big don(finish)
  4. K=big kat(whistle/clap and finish)

[0gre's Taiko Inner Oni]
  1. 00:44:441 (2,3,4) - ddk? 00:44:601にシンセサイザーの強めの音が入っていますので。
  2. innerにしては簡単なイメージ。でも、普通に楽しいと思う。
innerと普通のOniの差がいまいちハッキリしません。リズムもそんなに変わりませんし。ちょっと5連多いかなぁ程度で。個人的にはもっとやらかしてほしかった・・・
ランクガンバです~
かもしれませんね^^;
Oni か Inner Oni で迷ったのですが、ReySHeL さんの Oni とあまり違いが際立たないので
裏鬼でシンバルをあまり拾わず、Oni ではないような音、コンボを有り合せました


justnobody wrote:

おまたせー
ニホンゴムズカシイダカラエイゴツカッタ。ゴメンナサイ。
太鼓譜面初modなんだし自己主張なんだし全NGしても構いません。

[0gre]
SPOILER
00:01:835 (2) - d
00:04:229 (1,1) - d k or k k

傲慢ちゃんのAA貼ってみたかった。
彡☆
指摘ありがとうございますヾ(*´∀`*)ノ


qoot8123 wrote:

Request via PM~

[0gre's Inner Oni]
  1. fine!
That's all~
Good Luck~ ;)
hello qoot ~ :)
Thanks for seeing my map !!


NewibornCLivee wrote:

mod request thorugh pm..

all of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Inner Oni]
nice~

Nice map :) good luck to rank
Even there were no pointing outs,
I still feel thanks for seeing my map and happy to see praising ><
[]

この度は、返答が遅れてしまい申し訳ありません
皆様、本当にありがとうございました!

Sorry for beeing late and
Thanks a lot to you who help on mod my map !!


http://puu.sh/2l5Tu
Niko-nyan
hi there m4m with my guest diff

General
Romanized Title : トゥインクルワンダーランド
Volume too loud try change all to 85%

Muzukashii
00:36:143 - add a note because it follow the lyrics
01:22:420 - ^

back

Oni
00:20:206-00:20:984 - so empty try add spinner there

0gre's moe Inner Oni

00:20:206-00:20:665 - add spinner
01:31:516-01:62:473 - ^

uh so hard to mod yours
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Frans Niko wrote:

hi there m4m with my guest diff

General
Romanized Title : トゥインクルワンダーランド
Volume too loud try change all to 85%

Muzukashii
00:36:143 - add a note because it follow the lyrics
01:22:420 - ^

back

Oni
00:20:206-00:20:984 - so empty try add spinner there

uh so hard to mod yours
thanks for mod and star :)
Decipher
(´∀`)ゞ

Kantan
There is nothing wrong here, but I think when downbeat changes to upbeat (and vice versa), probably will be hard to follow by beginners...

Oni
00:04:229 - k
00:18:271 - remove don, drag the kat to here? It doesn't fit with the vocal
00:24:973 - k, a clear high note can be hear here
00:27:526 - ^
00:43:963 - k? the percussion sounds like that
00:49:707 - ^
01:24:016 - reverse with 01:24:175
01:29:122 - reverse with 01:29:282

0gre
00:44:601 - k? (similar with 00:43:963 at Oni)
00:49:707 - ^

the rest is already nice..
good luck (๑→ܫ←๑)
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Light Usagi wrote:

(´∀`)ゞ

Kantan
There is nothing wrong here, but I think when downbeat changes to upbeat (and vice versa), probably will be hard to follow by beginners...

Oni
00:04:229 - k
00:18:271 - remove don, drag the kat to here? It doesn't fit with the vocal
00:24:973 - k, a clear high note can be hear here
00:27:526 - ^
00:43:963 - k? the percussion sounds like that
00:49:707 - ^
01:24:016 - reverse with 01:24:175
01:29:122 - reverse with 01:29:282

the rest is already nice..
good luck (๑→ܫ←๑)
thanks for mod :)
Xakyrie

lolcubes wrote:

:3/
Topic Starter
ReySHeL
thank you star xDD
kg2161012
I think this map is pretty good,so I didn't made any mod.

Good Luck for you :)
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

kg2161012 wrote:

I think this map is pretty good,so I didn't made any mod.

Good Luck for you :)
thx >w<
Stefan
Hi

[Kantan]
00:21:941 (3) - k would sound better.
00:27:048 (2) - Same here to keep it consistent.
00:55:133 (2,1) - k d instead of d k?
00:56:569 (2) - It's pretty hard to hit it as Beginner. Move it to the white Tick before (00:56:409). The Flow would be still good and it's much easier to hit.
01:05:824 (7) - Please fix the Slider here due this Issue: http://puu.sh/2oqbN
01:14:282 (3) - k because you did that at with 00:13:005 (1) too.
01:16:037 (2) - k sounds quite bad here. This Sound needs a "hard" Hit like Don.
01:19:388 (3) - k because it would fit better with 01:14:282 (3) if you change it to k.
01:26:250 (1) - I am really really unsure about it. I would perfer to map it on 01:26:090 to keep it easier and to follow the Voice. It's up to you.

[Futsuu]
Fine. Great Diff.

[Muzukashii]
00:53:697 (1,2) - The Triplet is random imo. I find to remove these circles would make a better rhythm.

[Oni]
00:00:878 (1,2,3,1) - k d k k?
00:01:835 (1) - I find it makes a better Play Flow if you remove it. This circle here sounds too much.
00:01:995 (2) - k
00:05:984 (3,4,5,1,1,1,2) - The same as above.
00:12:447 (1,2) - Make (1) to k and remove (2)?
00:33:271 (2) - Meh.. personally I don't like this Kat here. It feels a bit out of place to hit it. You should remove it.
00:51:463 (1,2) - Make (1) to Don and remove (2). I find the Stream now a bit too unpleasent to play.
01:21:303 - Why are you not using a Slider to fill this?

[0gre]
00:00:878 (1,2,3,1) - k d k k?
00:05:505 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - k? Since Kat and Don fits both good I find it pretty funny to make such a Stream. :P
00:06:143 (2) - d
00:06:463 (1) - k
01:21:622 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - How about that? http://puu.sh/2oEE9

Pretty good Mapset. Inner Oni plays like an Oni. lol Kantan needs some more work imo.
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Stefan wrote:

Hi

[Kantan]
00:21:941 (3) - k would sound better.
00:27:048 (2) - Same here to keep it consistent.
00:55:133 (2,1) - k d instead of d k?
00:56:569 (2) - It's pretty hard to hit it as Beginner. Move it to the white Tick before (00:56:409). The Flow would be still good and it's much easier to hit.
01:05:824 (7) - Please fix the Slider here due this Issue: http://puu.sh/2oqbN
01:14:282 (3) - k because you did that at with 00:13:005 (1) too.
01:16:037 (2) - k sounds quite bad here. This Sound needs a "hard" Hit like Don.
01:19:388 (3) - k because it would fit better with 01:14:282 (3) if you change it to k.
01:26:250 (1) - I am really really unsure about it. I would perfer to map it on 01:26:090 to keep it easier and to follow the Voice. It's up to you.
almost fixed

[Futsuu]
Fine. Great Diff.

[Muzukashii]
00:53:697 (1,2) - The Triplet is random imo. I find to remove these circles would make a better rhythm.

[Oni]
00:00:878 (1,2,3,1) - k d k k?
00:01:835 (1) - I find it makes a better Play Flow if you remove it. This circle here sounds too much.
00:01:995 (2) - k
00:05:984 (3,4,5,1,1,1,2) - The same as above.
00:12:447 (1,2) - Make (1) to k and remove (2)?
00:33:271 (2) - Meh.. personally I don't like this Kat here. It feels a bit out of place to hit it. You should remove it.
00:51:463 (1,2) - Make (1) to Don and remove (2). I find the Stream now a bit too unpleasent to play.
01:21:303 - Why are you not using a Slider to fill this? i like the space here
ill think about Oni
Pretty good Mapset. Inner Oni plays like an Oni. lol Kantan needs some more work imo.
thanks for mod :)
Niko-nyan
when MAT was here? D:
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Frans Niko wrote:

when MAT was here? D:
im looking for the MAT >w<
Dark Fang
Boom Boom

[General]

offset -2 from current (876)

[Kantan]

00:14:282 (3) - k?
00:17:473 - I feel strange flow on here. just saying, 00:17:314 (1) - move to 00:17:473 - , and 00:18:271 (1) - move to 00:18:112 - . if you apply that, some players who inexperienced feel good for playing. simply follow music rather than this beat more good. IMO!
00:45:239 (1) - move to 00:44:920 - here like above. players who inexperienced may confuse by this rhythm -hard to read for them-
01:16:037 - i won't mention it. because this section need highlight >_<
01:24:175 - add a note?

[Futsuu]

01:24:654 (2) - that rhythm is too faint for reading. consider remove or move to 01:24:814 - here -use k-
what the good map

[Muzukashii]

00:17:952 - just suggestion remove 00:18:032 (3) - this circle and 00:18:431 (2) - this circle? because that 3 hit stream is consist by 00:11:729 - this rhythm (and 00:16:835 - ) too early to emphasize beats
i love you what is good map

[Oni]

00:12:207 (1,1,1,2,3) - change to like 01:13:484 - this? I mean ddkkd. current pattern is not good for play feeling
00:18:431 (1) - move to here? i think that's more playable than current
01:19:229 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern change to "ddd k"? for consistent with 00:17:952 -

[0gre's Inner Oni]

00:03:112 (1) - remove Clap? IMO
01:25:612 (1,1,1) - why don't you use "ddk"? that flow better than current IMO

that maps very good and fun for me X.X
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Dark Fang wrote:

Boom Boom

[General]

offset -2 from current (876)

[Kantan]

00:14:282 (3) - k?
00:17:473 - I feel strange flow on here. just saying, 00:17:314 (1) - move to 00:17:473 - , and 00:18:271 (1) - move to 00:18:112 - . if you apply that, some players who inexperienced feel good for playing. simply follow music rather than this beat more good. IMO!
00:45:239 (1) - move to 00:44:920 - here like above. players who inexperienced may confuse by this rhythm -hard to read for them-
01:16:037 - i won't mention it. because this section need highlight >_<
01:24:175 - add a note?

[Futsuu]

01:24:654 (2) - that rhythm is too faint for reading. consider remove or move to 01:24:814 - here -use k-
what the good map

[Muzukashii]

00:17:952 - just suggestion remove 00:18:032 (3) - this circle and 00:18:431 (2) - this circle? because that 3 hit stream is consist by 00:11:729 - this rhythm (and 00:16:835 - ) too early to emphasize beats
i love you what is good map

[Oni]

00:12:207 (1,1,1,2,3) - change to like 01:13:484 - this? I mean ddkkd. current pattern is not good for play feeling
00:18:431 (1) - move to here? i think that's more playable than current
01:19:229 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern change to "ddd k"? for consistent with 00:17:952 -

that maps very good and fun for me X.X
almost fixed :)
thanks for mod~ >w<
0gre_old

Dark Fang wrote:

Boom Boom

[General]

offset -2 from current (876)

[0gre's Inner Oni]

00:03:112 (1) - remove Clap? IMO
01:25:612 (1,1,1) - why don't you use "ddk"? that flow better than current IMO

that maps very good and fun for me X.X

Thankyou !!
I ll have a look~
arien666
[Metadata]
About <s>sauce</s> source, it is correct as this song is firstly from Rb limelight hehe.
Add tag 'colette saucer' as contained current game version.
(Suggestion) Would you add tag 'TWINKLE POP' as pop'n music genre
+ 'SANAE CHAN' as pop'n music character
+ 'Iyama Tatsuya' as Qrispy's real name
+ 'Shintani' as Sana's real name?
+ 'BEMANI' a... whatever

[Skin]
Okay, not related BG( http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=17262377 )...



[Kantan]
00:04:548 (4) - Delete this slider and add a don on here + Add note on 00:05:984 ?
00:09:973 (8) - Make end at 00:10:612
00:25:931 (2) - Little tricky but whatever...
01:11:250 (11,12) - (Suggestion) Would you just leave them as normal not finish?
01:21:143 (1) - Make end at 01:22:101
01:31:356 (1) - (Suggestion) Mute end point?

[Futsuu]
This diff's Preview Time is different from other diffs (72367 <> 11090) I would recommend setting all diffs' Preview Time as 72367. But it is up to you hehe.
00:17:154 (1) - Delete this note. It is too early to show 1/2 dd pattern.
01:17:473 (2) - Delete this note as there's no melody fit on this note :(
01:21:143 (2) - Reduce length by 1/4. It is too hard to make combo on 01:22:580 (1)
01:31:356 (1) - (Suggestion) Mute end point?

[Muzukashii]
01:31:356 (1,1) - It is NOT osu!standard mode so make it as [Kantan]/[Futsuu] :(

[Oni]
01:02:154 - (Suggestion) SV multiplier 0.8 ~ 0.9 as rhythm calms down?
01:09:814 - (Suggestion if you did upper order) ^ Opposite this.
01:31:356 (1,1) - As [Muzukashii] said.







Nothing would be better than this imo.

Decent mapset hehe.
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

arken1015 wrote:

[Metadata]
About <s>sauce</s> source, it is correct as this song is firstly from Rb limelight hehe.
Add tag 'colette saucer' as contained current game version.
(Suggestion) Would you add tag 'TWINKLE POP' as pop'n music genre
+ 'SANAE CHAN' as pop'n music character
+ 'Iyama Tatsuya' as Qrispy's real name
+ 'Shintani' as Sana's real name?
+ 'BEMANI' a... whatever

[Skin]
Okay, not related BG( http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=17262377 )...



[Kantan]
00:04:548 (4) - Delete this slider and add a don on here + Add note on 00:05:984 ?
00:09:973 (8) - Make end at 00:10:612
00:25:931 (2) - Little tricky but whatever...
01:11:250 (11,12) - (Suggestion) Would you just leave them as normal not finish?
01:21:143 (1) - Make end at 01:22:101
01:31:356 (1) - (Suggestion) Mute end point?

[Futsuu]
This diff's Preview Time is different from other diffs (72367 <> 11090) I would recommend setting all diffs' Preview Time as 72367. But it is up to you hehe.
00:17:154 (1) - Delete this note. It is too early to show 1/2 dd pattern.
01:17:473 (2) - Delete this note as there's no melody fit on this note :(
01:21:143 (2) - Reduce length by 1/4. It is too hard to make combo on 01:22:580 (1)
01:31:356 (1) - (Suggestion) Mute end point?

[Muzukashii]
01:31:356 (1,1) - It is NOT osu!standard mode so make it as [Kantan]/[Futsuu] :(

[Oni]
01:02:154 - (Suggestion) SV multiplier 0.8 ~ 0.9 as rhythm calms down?
01:09:814 - (Suggestion if you did upper order) ^ Opposite this.
01:31:356 (1,1) - As [Muzukashii] said.







Nothing would be better than this imo.

Decent mapset hehe.
thanks for mod :)
Jikson[m9]
pmで頼まれたのでMODしに来ました(えい ヽ( ゚∀゚)ノ┌┛)`Д゚)・;'
遅くなってごめんね
MODの初心者なので、いろんなところにもよろしくおねがいします!

本文の前に言わなきゃいけないことあります
私はそこまで日本語使えないので、言いづらいところは英語にしますね
ごめんくださいm(_ _)m
さぁ、はじめましょうか

[Kantan]
ん…ボーカルと主旋律のようで音符を置きましたね
それは分かりますけど、やっぱりリズム難は初心者には早すぎて、鬼畜でもちょっと見えるんだと思います。
私から見たら、少しズレになるかもしれませんが、赤線は句の終りにしか使わなくて、かわりに近い白線に置くのがお勧めです
たとえ
00:01:995 (2) -
こちらは残念ですが合わせを捨てて、00:02:154 (2) - に置きますね
あとは、色のチェンジも変わりすぎだと思います、ちょっとだけですね!

以下はリストです!
00:16:197 (1,2,1) - この子達は白線からの8分三連打に
00:25:931 (2) -は 00:26:090 (2) - に
00:30:080 (4) - 小節線あるからフォローしますw あとのカツはいい
01:11:250 (11,12,1) - 妥協は無理ですねwならDELETEでも考えましょうか…
01:16:995 (2) - は01:17:154 (2) - に
01:25:612 (1) - は01:25:771 (1) - に
01:27:207 (2) - は01:27:367 (2) - に
01:30:718 (2) - デリート

ほかの難易度もあとでMODしますから今はNo Kudosu ね!
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Jikson[m9] wrote:

pmで頼まれたのでMODしに来ました(えい ヽ( ゚∀゚)ノ┌┛)`Д゚)・;'
遅くなってごめんね
MODの初心者なので、いろんなところにもよろしくおねがいします!

本文の前に言わなきゃいけないことあります
私はそこまで日本語使えないので、言いづらいところは英語にしますね
ごめんくださいm(_ _)m
さぁ、はじめましょうか

[Kantan]
ん…ボーカルと主旋律のようで音符を置きましたね
それは分かりますけど、やっぱりリズム難は初心者には早すぎて、鬼畜でもちょっと見えるんだと思います。
私から見たら、少しズレになるかもしれませんが、赤線は句の終りにしか使わなくて、かわりに近い白線に置くのがお勧めです
たとえ
00:01:995 (2) -
こちらは残念ですが合わせを捨てて、00:02:154 (2) - に置きますね
あとは、色のチェンジも変わりすぎだと思います、ちょっとだけですね!

以下はリストです!
00:16:197 (1,2,1) - この子達は白線からの8分三連打に
00:25:931 (2) -は 00:26:090 (2) - に
00:30:080 (4) - 小節線あるからフォローしますw あとのカツはいい
01:11:250 (11,12,1) - 妥協は無理ですねwならDELETEでも考えましょうか…
01:16:995 (2) - は01:17:154 (2) - に
01:25:612 (1) - は01:25:771 (1) - に
01:27:207 (2) - は01:27:367 (2) - に
01:30:718 (2) - デリート

ほかの難易度もあとでMODしますから今はNo Kudosu ね!
Kantanだけで構いませんよ >w<
mod ありがとうございます!
tetsutaro
From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
:idea: Artist - a space between "feat." and "Sana", so that people can search for this even with only "Sana" as keyword.

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 3* Kantan
:idea: Quite a lot of notes at 1/2 offbeats, but nothing much wrong about that wrt. the music.
00:04:548 (4) - End at 00:05:665 instead (or somewhere nearby) and have a don at 00:05:984
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Move 00:16:516 (2) to 00:17:792 (2) or remove completely.
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Add a don at 01:15:239 and 01:16:675
01:26:250 (1) - The vocal 'hand' is 1/2 earlier than this at 01:26:090. Please move.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Kantan
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Add a don at 01:18:431.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Muzukashii
00:01:835 (2) and 00:06:941 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier to better cover the three piano keys
00:04:229 - A katsu here.
00:04:548 (1,2) - Should use one single slider to cover the whole length.
00:48:431 ~ 00:49:388 - Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Change to k_dkkdd
01:17:473 ~ 01:20:026 - Suddenly toned down on complexity. Follow 01:12:367 ~ 01:14:920 or more complex.
01:31:356 (1,1) - Should use one single spinner to cover the whole length.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Oni
01:31:356 (1,1) - Should use one single spinner to cover the whole length.

[Ura Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Ura Oni
Not much problem found.
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
:idea: Artist - a space between "feat." and "Sana", so that people can search for this even with only "Sana" as keyword.

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 3* Kantan
:idea: Quite a lot of notes at 1/2 offbeats, but nothing much wrong about that wrt. the music.
00:04:548 (4) - End at 00:05:665 instead (or somewhere nearby) and have a don at 00:05:984
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Move 00:16:516 (2) to 00:17:792 (2) or remove completely.
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Add a don at 01:15:239 and 01:16:675
01:26:250 (1) - The vocal 'hand' is 1/2 earlier than this at 01:26:090. Please move.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Kantan
:idea: Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Add a don at 01:18:431.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Muzukashii
00:01:835 (2) and 00:06:941 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier to better cover the three piano keys
00:04:229 - A katsu here.
00:04:548 (1,2) - Should use one single slider to cover the whole length.
00:48:431 ~ 00:49:388 - Similar parts of the song should also have similar patterns. Change to k_dkkdd
01:17:473 ~ 01:20:026 - Suddenly toned down on complexity. Follow 01:12:367 ~ 01:14:920 or more complex.
01:31:356 (1,1) - Should use one single spinner to cover the whole length.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Oni
01:31:356 (1,1) - Should use one single spinner to cover the whole length.

[Ura Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Ura Oni
Not much problem found.
thanks for mod :)
0gre_old

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
:idea: Artist - a space between "feat." and "Sana", so that people can search for this even with only "Sana" as keyword.

[Ura Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Ura Oni
Not much problem found.
I am still considering whether it is Inner or Oni ><;

http://puu.sh/2OYET.zip
Garven
[Kantan]
00:04:548 (1) - I'd reduce by two repeats. Give a little more time for recovery.
00:09:973 (5) - I'd reduce by two repeats. Simply sounds better.
00:17:473 (1,1) - Move back 1/2? Fits better with the stronger musical emphasis.
01:05:824 (7) - Reduce by 2 repeats
01:21:143 (1) - ^
01:18:750 (1,2,3) - Instead of this, maybe do a rhythm like here to fit with my previous suggestion:


[Futsuu]
Preview time isn't aligned with other maps.

[Muzukashii]
00:52:580 (1,2,3) - It might be better to save these 1/4s for the kiai times
00:53:697 (2,3,4) - ^

[Oni]
00:51:463 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Should lower the volume on these. Right now it's way too loud to hear why you're using them.
00:56:569 (1) - If anything, this should be k K. Fits the music better.
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Garven wrote:

[Kantan]
00:04:548 (1) - I'd reduce by two repeats. Give a little more time for recovery. スライダーについてはこのままでいきたいです
00:09:973 (5) - I'd reduce by two repeats. Simply sounds better.
00:17:473 (1,1) - Move back 1/2? Fits better with the stronger musical emphasis.
01:05:824 (7) - Reduce by 2 repeats
01:21:143 (1) - ^
01:18:750 (1,2,3) - Instead of this, maybe do a rhythm like here to fit with my previous suggestion:

ok

[Futsuu]
Preview time isn't aligned with other maps. ok

[Muzukashii]
00:52:580 (1,2,3) - It might be better to save these 1/4s for the kiai times
00:53:697 (2,3,4) - ^
ok

[Oni]
00:51:463 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Should lower the volume on these. Right now it's way too loud to hear why you're using them. use 60% volume
00:56:569 (1) - If anything, this should be k K. Fits the music better. removed the big notes and arrangements
thanks for mod Garven-san :)
Garven
That was a lot of changes in the Oni D:

Anyway, looks good still. Good luck~
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

Garven wrote:

That was a lot of changes in the Oni D:

Anyway, looks good still. Good luck~
yes >< thanks!
qoot8123
GO~GO~GO~~~:DDDDDDDDD
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

qoot8123 wrote:

GO~GO~GO~~~:DDDDDDDDD
thanks qoot~~:DDDDDDDD
mancuso_JM_
Hi! I was looking for some taiko mapset to mod, and I see that this is bubble. So, why not? :)

[Kantan:]

• 00:09:973 (5) - I don't like how it plays this drumroll, because it is not representing properly the music. Remember that drumrolls work as 1/4 streams, and if you listen the music properly, the 1/4 is not necessary. I think is better if you place 3 notes in 00:09:973 - 00:10:292 and 00:10:612. I think new players will catch easier the rhythm, plus you can add finishes in them because I think big dons work better in there. Btw, you did that in the next pre-chorus so it'll be consistent
• 00:25:931 (2) - What about making this note a big kat? It'll emphasize better the cymbals imo
• 00:31:516 (1) - I think some big notes will make the map more enjoyable, for example here. The cymbals are really high and need an emphasize imo.
• 00:36:622 (5) - (^)
• 01:32:792 (1,2,3) - I think that kat will represent better those 'bells' sounds than dons. You should replace them in my opinion

[Futsuu:]

• 00:23:856 (3,1) - In my opinion follow much better the song if you swap the hitsounds in these notes. So, the pattern should be d k instead of k d
• 00:28:963 (3,1) - Same here, use d k instead, in addition it provides a better flow i think
• 01:32:792 (1,2,3) - Same as kantan, use kats instead

- As I said in kantan, maybe you can add some other finishes here and there, in the places (or similar places) as I said in Kantan. Nice diff. btw :3

[Muzukashii:]

• 00:01:995 (3) - I'd use a k instead, follow better the piano (?
• 00:07:101 (3) - (^)
• 01:03:271 (3) - A kat here sounds pretty well, follow fine the piano, you should consider this one too
• 01:08:378 (3) - (^)
• 01:32:792 (1,3,4) - I'd use kats instead as I mentioned in the other diffs.

- Pretty good, I really enjoyed this diff.

[Oni:]

• 00:20:984 (x) - I'd add a don here.
• 00:52:101 (2) - After the long stream, with a lot of kats, this don doesn't flow really fine to me. I think is better if you use a kat here instead
• 01:03:271 (3) - A kat here sounds pretty well, follow fine the piano, you should consider this one too
• 01:08:378 (3) - (^)
• 01:32:792 (1,3,4) - Use kats in these notes instead as I said you in the previous diffs.

[0gre's Ura:]

Title Name: I'd add the Oni in the title, All the Ura's diff that I know are Ura Oni so would be better to keep consistency.

Settings:
--> I'd increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick, to make the difficulty a bit more complicated. (HP+1)

• 00:00:878 (T) - I'd use Normal Hitsound sampleset in the whole of the map, first of all for consistency with the other difficulties and then I think that the soft one sounds bad here. Maybe in standard sounds a bit better but not in taiko during the gameplay. So, would be better to change that
• 01:01:995 (T) - (^)
• 01:05:824 (2) - Hmm.. I'd use a kat here, sounds better to me
• 01:32:713 (T) - I'd use the Normal samplset here as well.
• 01:32:792 - 01:35:346 - In these Notes I think kats follow much better the instrumental, as I said in the other difficulties.

- Other than that, enjoyable diff :3.

It is a decent taiko mapset :).
Feel free to call me back after to check my mod
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! I was looking for some taiko mapset to mod, and I see that this is bubble. So, why not? :)
[Kantan:]

• 00:09:973 (5) - I don't like how it plays this drumroll, because it is not representing properly the music. Remember that drumrolls work as 1/4 streams, and if you listen the music properly, the 1/4 is not necessary. I think is better if you place 3 notes in 00:09:973 - 00:10:292 and 00:10:612. I think new players will catch easier the rhythm, plus you can add finishes in them because I think big dons work better in there. Btw, you did that in the next pre-chorus so it'll be consistent change to DDK
• 00:25:931 (2) - What about making this note a big kat? It'll emphasize better the cymbals imo ok
• 00:31:516 (1) - I think some big notes will make the map more enjoyable, for example here. The cymbals are really high and need an emphasize imo. 00:41:729 (1) - ~ 00:50:026 (1) - 00:51:941 (2) - ~ 00:59:601 (1) - not using the big notes here. if then have added, maybe big notes too many
• 00:36:622 (5) - (^) ^
• 01:32:792 (1,2,3) - I think that kat will represent better those 'bells' sounds than dons. You should replace them in my opinion ok

[Futsuu:]

• 00:23:856 (3,1) - In my opinion follow much better the song if you swap the hitsounds in these notes. So, the pattern should be d k instead of k d im along the melody sound
• 00:28:963 (3,1) - Same here, use d k instead, in addition it provides a better flow i think ^
• 01:32:792 (1,2,3) - Same as kantan, use kats instead ok

- As I said in kantan, maybe you can add some other finishes here and there, in the places (or similar places) as I said in Kantan. Nice diff. btw :3 thanks!

[Muzukashii:]

• 00:01:995 (3) - I'd use a k instead, follow better the piano (?
• 00:07:101 (3) - (^)
• 01:03:271 (3) - A kat here sounds pretty well, follow fine the piano, you should consider this one too
• 01:08:378 (3) - (^)
• 01:32:792 (1,3,4) - I'd use kats instead as I mentioned in the other diffs.
all fixed
- Pretty good, I really enjoyed this diff. also thanks!

[Oni:]

• 00:20:984 (x) - I'd add a don here. i want space
• 00:52:101 (2) - After the long stream, with a lot of kats, this don doesn't flow really fine to me. I think is better if you use a kat here instead i unified 00:41:729 (1) - and 00:46:835 (1) - is big notes and 00:51:941 (3) - also, add the big notes. remove long stream
• 01:03:271 (3) - A kat here sounds pretty well, follow fine the piano, you should consider this one too ok
• 01:08:378 (3) - (^) ^
• 01:32:792 (1,3,4) - Use kats in these notes instead as I said you in the previous diffs. ^

It is a decent taiko mapset :).
Feel free to call me back after to check my mod
sorry about my poor English ;w;
thanks for mod!
waiting for 0gre~ :)
0gre_old

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! I was looking for some taiko mapset to mod, and I see that this is bubble. So, why not? :)

[0gre's Ura:]

Title Name: I'd add the Oni in the title, All the Ura's diff that I know are Ura Oni so would be better to keep consistency.

Settings:
--> I'd increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick, to make the difficulty a bit more complicated. (HP+1)

• 00:00:878 (T) - I'd use Normal Hitsound sampleset in the whole of the map, first of all for consistency with the other difficulties and then I think that the soft one sounds bad here. Maybe in standard sounds a bit better but not in taiko during the gameplay. So, would be better to change that
• 01:01:995 (T) - (^)
• 01:05:824 (2) - Hmm.. I'd use a kat here, sounds better to me ✔ changed pattern here
• 01:32:713 (T) - I'd use the Normal samplset here as well.
• 01:32:792 - 01:35:346 - In these Notes I think kats follow much better the instrumental, as I said in the other difficulties. ✔ fixed wid pattern

- Other than that, enjoyable diff :3.

It is a decent taiko mapset :).
Feel free to call me back after to check my mod
thx for modding !
Iv thought about soft hitsound for a long
:o

http://puu.sh/32SJq.zip
mancuso_JM_
Fixed some little inconsistencies via IRC

Changes:
  1. Switch a pair of d k to k d patterns in Futsuu.
  2. Removed a drumroll in Kantan and Futsuu
  3. Added a missed k in 0gre's diff.
  4. Made Kiai sections consistent between ReySHeL diffs. and 0gre's one.
Everything looks good to go now.
Ranked!
Topic Starter
ReySHeL
thanks!!
TKS
grats ReySHeL~ :)
Topic Starter
ReySHeL

TKSalt wrote:

grats ReySHeL~ :)
thanks TKSalt :)
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