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Nujabes Feat. Shing02 - Luv (Sic) Pt3

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Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February-17-14 at 10:31:00 AM

Artist: Nujabes Feat. Shing02
Title: Luv (Sic) Pt3
Tags: Modal Soul
BPM: 95.01
Filesize: 9439kb
Play Time: 04:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Average (2.81 stars, 291 notes)
  2. Soft (1.76 stars, 250 notes)
  3. Tough (4.34 stars, 390 notes)
Download: Nujabes Feat. Shing02 - Luv (Sic) Pt3
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Loooctav
First :3
hpavatar
This is my favorite beatmap ever ! Thank you sir!

With this map i learned to play. First map ever to finish in hard mode.

You can almost play it with your eyes closed if you follow the music. its SO well mapped. Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun

hpavatar wrote:

This is my favorite beatmap ever ! Thank you sir!

With this map i learned to play. First map ever to finish in hard mode.

You can almost play it with your eyes closed if you follow the music. its SO well mapped. Congratulations!
Thanks, glad to hear you're enjoying this map.

Revived
Esqueletinho
It's well mapped indeed! Flows perfectly with the song, IDK why this isn't ranked yet... Atleast on Hard i didn't spot anything out of rhythm. Congrats and good luck on getting this thing ranked!
Kippori
Flows so well, this is the only beat map I can actually feel the rhythm while playing. I hope it gets ranked soon.
dkun
Why is this graved??! :(
CookChefSteak
get this ranked! :O
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun

dkun wrote:

Why is this graved??! :(

CookChefSteak wrote:

get this ranked! :O

Kippori wrote:

Flows so well, this is the only beat map I can actually feel the rhythm while playing. I hope it gets ranked soon.

Myi wrote:

It's well mapped indeed! Flows perfectly with the song, IDK why this isn't ranked yet... Atleast on Hard i didn't spot anything out of rhythm. Congrats and good luck on getting this thing ranked!
Wow, I love that you guys like this map, I'm trying hard now to get this ranked!
Yauxo
Hi there, m4m via chat :3

[General]
I think that the diff names arent allowed anymore, as everyone has to stick to ENHIE, Beginner, Advanced (etc etc) now. Unsure if "Soft" etc are allowed
In general, the mapset looks nicely done to me c:


[Soft]
00:01:529 (3) - Align this one with 00:00:265 (1,2) -
00:23:001 (1) - Optional - Blanket this one maybe?
00:58:997 (1) - Blanket with 00:59:629 (2) -
01:29:941 (3) - Curve this one a little bit c:
02:02:148 (2,3) - Blanket :<
02:02:148 (2,2) - Overlap these maybe
02:10:989 (2) - Optional - Make this one a blanket maybe?
02:36:250 (4,2) - Overlap these
03:28:665 (3,1) - Let this one be under the "tip" of the slider

[Average]
HP -1 Maybe?

00:35:315 (3) - add a circle here
01:10:996 (5) - A finish circle would fit here
01:52:044 (3) - space this one correctly
02:07:832 (3) - This blanket looks weird :< Maybe you could redo this one?
02:51:090 (3) - spacing
03:22:982 (3) - spacing
03:23:613 (4) - move to 115 110 to blend in as a blanket
03:31:192 (3) - spacing
03:38:770 (3) - see 02:07:832 (3) -
03:42:243 (4,5) - Add two circles or let the break start at 03:42:559 (4) -
04:03:714 (2,3) - Blanket this one?
04:18:871 (2,3) - ^
04:22:660 (4,5) - You could add two circles here again

[Tough]
00:51:103 (1,2) - Blanket
00:57:102 (3,1) - Overlap these two, move 00:57:734 (4) - down abit and stretch 00:58:365 (1) - so that it'd fit for the rest of the combo (symmetrical)
01:22:047 (2,4) - Overlap (they are slightly off)
01:49:834 (2,3) - Blanket
02:05:622 (3) - move to 336 216 (for better blankets :3)
02:11:621 (6) - Add one here and generally let the beat "finish" before the break (since its the same in the other diffs)
02:39:092 (3,1) - correct blanketing please :<
03:13:509 (3) - Iam not sure how this slider will be shown for 4:3 players, but since its over 3/4 out of the grid, id say that it'd be better if you could move this one a bit
03:16:035 (3) - Optional, but would look better: You could let this one overlap with the endtick of 03:14:772 (1) - and stretch it for it to be a blanket for 03:15:404 (2) - .This would require some repositioning for the following notes then though.
03:22:666 (2,3) - Blanket maybe?

Generally, before I continue to spam blankets, maybe just go over the rest and see if theres any blanket to fix. Blankets look good and blankets that are slightly off bug me alot :<

04:22:976 (5) - Also goes good with a finish


Hope this helps, good luck with your mapset :3
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Made some changes. Thanks!
I'm keeping the difficulty names the same until further notice.
Avalonia
Yeah Great job :) this map should get ranked
Cyllinus
Not sure if it matters, but
[Tough]
03:23:296 (3) - Object's end is not snapped!
Winek
Hello! sorry for little waiting.
So yeah, change diff name to easy normal hard kds please
Nah seriously, just for this type of song, it feels a bit.. meh. But it's your choice.

I might give out some few unuseful suggestion anyway

[General]
Sincerely, I'm not sure about kiai.

[Soft]

00:25:527 (1,2) - Spacing ?_? It might look pretty, and i have nothing against it, but it's ME, not the other nazi BATs. I mean the same for 00:26:790 (2,1) .

00:39:104 (3) - Sorry, but this note looks copletely random and out of the rythm . I'd really suggest you to remove it and place one at 00:40:367 instead... Anyway, it's just me, I'm not sure it's an important thingy.

00:11:634 (2,3,4) - I'd really keep a contant rythm with 00:12:897 (1) , by the mean of adding a note at 00:14:475. I know it's a bit complicated due to sacing, but i think i found something that might have a good flow while having correct spacing. I know it might look ugly, so feel free to reject this. http://puu.sh/7a0bo/855f75f929.jpg . An alternative way would be to convert the large slider into a 1/1 and adding another 1/1 after. It's about the same suggestion for 00:15:423 (1,2) ; This time tho, the spacing might be much easier

00:21:738 (2,1) - I've got nothing better to do with my life. Blanket? ;~;

00:30:579 (1,2,3) - I think you can really improve the flow here. Try this: http://puu.sh/7a0t3/b5b5e2f892.jpg . Even mine look terrible, but anyway, i think there was a little spacing error, not sure. (Took a break between the mod lol)

00:41:946 (2,3,2) - Idk if i should say it but NAZI it and stack

00:59:629 (2) - I'd rather convert that into 3 circles since you did the same for about the same vocals at 00:57:102 (3,4,5) .

01:11:548 - This break makes no sense whatsoever

01:39:098 - Follow voals, keep constant, add a note. I dont like to look like some kind of "Error modder" so i'll let you see if you want to do it or not, im not pointing out these errors anymore, as you are intelligent right, then you should be able to see them yourself. I might point out some more tho for stupid reasons

02:05:306 (2) - What about removing the clap? I think it would have a great flow with the music at 02:02:780 (3) which has no clap because of 2/1 slider.

02:35:932 (3) - I'd rather remove this one, since this part has like "Rapid-fire" vocals or whatever. It doesn't fit there on my side.

03:09:718 (1,2) - Okay, It's just me, but the timing here doesn't feel. Swap? I mean the timing section, not the placement. But if you swap you'll have to change the placement of course @_# . Real reason is to make more constant with the other part of these.

03:24:874 (1,2) - It feel too random and sudden. I'd remove the 1/2.

[Medium]
AR 6? No. The SV is low, and i really thought at first glance it was something fast when seeing the AR. It's like having AR 10 on BPM 1 Note. Imagine how funny it is o3o Lel, seriously, I'd suggest AR 4 or 5.

00:24:895 (3,1) - To follow a constant rythm of oreder, I'd like to add a note here.

00:35:631 (1,2,3,4) - Make a better (IDK WHAT) shape here with these note. But anyway try avoid the overlap and it should look fine

00:45:735 (1,2,3) - Any reason for DS change?

01:12:296 - Not-really-senseful-break, should be removed.

03:08:457 (3,1) - This blanket isn't really cute.

03:14:772 (1,2) - Little spacing problem.

Very nice diff, I'd say, While i just give crap suggestion.

[Tough]
I've got many suggestion, but these are mainly about constant thingy, which is pretty unuseful. I don't really see why pointing them out, so yeah.
Lot of potential, exept I don't like the inconstancy. Alsoo there are few bezier that are kinda weird. (Actaully I didn't really mod it, I playtested it loooool.)

So yeah sry I playtested your Tough, and I hope my mod is useful.
Pyunni
Great song! hope it gets ranked!!!
LotusFlower108
Great song and map! :D I'm surprised this isn't ranked... But if you keep on pushing to be better at mapping, I'm sure you'll succeed.
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