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hibarirailwayz

Niva wrote:

EDIT : (hibarirailwayz) here's the code to improve your current heart-shaped slider as P o M u T a asked, feel free to modify it though (:


379,352,130187,2,0,B|311:332|257:280|257:280|213:224|99:203|68:123|81:33|179:-14|222:22|252:47|257:46|257:46|262:47|287:24|353:-9|422:34|438:124|398:213|294:224|257:280|257:280|207:331|131:354,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
cool! I accepted!!
wendao
D: easy one Renard?
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Harez wrote:

D: easy one Renard?
no need easy diff :p Normal diff seems Easily Normal. and star rate balance good now~.
Yuki-kun
Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

My Mod

[Niva's Hard]
Fine~

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ?

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120


Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187
Fixed Insane Kiai~.
My Mod

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@ haha, but, i like OD9 this map :D
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ? sorry, i like it :D


Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3
thanks Yuki-kun :)
Cancel
Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good.

[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there.
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap.

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;

[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete??

Good luck (too bad i got rejected for making a gd ;w;)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Cancel wrote:

Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good. not need

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;
ty
Edit: 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",1,1 → 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",0,0 (all diff)
update please :D
dosyeru
Insane
hi
  1. 00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。
  2. 00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう?
  3. 00:15:437 (4) - ^
  4. 00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。

    即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか?
      (3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
  5. 00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加
  6. 00:36:124 - ノート追加
  7. 00:36:187 - Finish削除
    ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう?
  8. 00:40:062 - ^
  9. 00:44:062 - ^
  10. 00:48:062 - ^

    00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。 私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。
  11. 00:52:187 - パーカッション(ボンゴ?)の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう?
     
  12. 01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
      x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。
  13. 02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。
    奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは4つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう?
ODを9にするか8にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD9というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD9を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。


Niva's Hard
hi :)
  1. I have nothing to say to this diff;)
If I had to say about this diff, I would say this diff could be Insane due to high BPM. But this diff is well-designed for players who usually play insane. but still inexperienced. This diff is a good practice one for those players.

Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ
  1. 00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
    1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。
  2. 01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。
  3. 01:33:937 (1) - ^
  4. 01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう?
    会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。



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hibarirailwayz

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M ~ :3

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120
ok

Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3

Cancel wrote:

[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time. Umm.I don't think so, and other parts are little difficult and exciting instead of this easy part.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there ok
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?ok
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there. need not
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap. Renard's "R" iwant keep it!

dosyeru wrote:

Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ
  1. 00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
    1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。ですね。
  2. 01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。 リズムに変化が欲しかったため、このままで。多少難易度の高いリズムと鳴ってはいますが、以前のパートとのスライダーとサークルの順序違いでしかないので、流れでいけるんじゃないかと。
  3. 01:33:937 (1) - ^ 
  4. 01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう?
    会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
 離せるのであれば、離した方が無難ですな。

このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。

一日も早いランクト応援してます
Thanks for modding!! :)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

dosyeru wrote:

Insane
hi
  1. 00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。1.2,1.0のDSを使用してfix
  2. 00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう?神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神
  3. 00:15:437 (4) - ^ GODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGOD
  4. 00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。vocal音でココは取りたいと生まれる時から決めたので今回はkeepで行かせていただきます。折角の提案申し訳ない。

    即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか?
      (3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
  5. 00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加 ok
  6. 00:36:124 - ノート追加 タブン配置等変えないと酷いことになりそうだし、今のままでも十分いいかなと思ったのでkeep
  7. 00:36:187 - Finish削除 ok
    ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう?
  8. 00:40:062 - ^
  9. 00:44:062 - ^ fixed
  10. 00:48:062 - ^
    うむ。。ここのKiaiは連打を入れないでいこうと思ったつもりでした。一応1つだけ入れておきましたが試験的にです。
    あと配置的に入れると色々面倒になる点もあったので、そこまで入れる必要も感じなかったのでとりあえず1つだけ修正です。

    00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。 私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。了解です
  11. 00:52:187 - パーカッション(ボンゴ?)の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう?気持ちとしてはkeepで行きたいです。前にも1回指摘されましたがもう少し保留でいきます。
     
  12. 01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
      x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。 うーん、現在に違和感を感じず結構お気に入りなので申し訳ないですがこのままで逝ってみます。
  13. 02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。 chatより・・
    奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは4つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう?
ODを9にするか8にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD9というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD9を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。 了解です

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ModとStarありがとうございます!
Niva

Cancel wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^ These two is intentional~
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete?? My intention here is to let 00:25:937 (1) - be emphasized more by the slow part before... I increased volume here a bit though via inherit section, hope it blends with the music more now (:
Thanks for the mod xD

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 102187
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:TU4AR
TitleUnicode:TU4AR
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:P o M u T a
Version:Niva's Hard
Source:
Tags:BECAUSE MAYBE! lapfox Niva hibarirailwayz Trauma
BeatmapID:230114
BeatmapSetID:82802

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

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Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change?

Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^

Insane

AR-1

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!! thanks

Insane

AR-1 why....

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY
wait other quote
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Niva

-iCo- wrote:

Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time Ah, not really imo (because this is to emphasize the song here actually), plus about the stack it has used mostly in Reiji-RJ/IceBeam's map and it looks good (:

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^ Ah, about these three this is intentional (including why it isn't stacked) :3

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked Done

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two Rearranged this so (5) isn't overlapped...

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^ Fixed all
Thanks for mod (:

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hibarirailwayz

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change? oh!this is my error
Thax! :)
CPLs
queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937?
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway)
00:45:937 add note?
01:06:437 add a break?
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)


sorry only normal :o
hibarirailwayz

copolah123 wrote:

queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937? There is the storng drum sound at 00:17:937 and, the rhythem you say is little difficult. I'd like to skip
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit There are the pattern clearly, so I don't think I need not fixed. S-S c c S-S S-S/S-S c c S-S (S-S)→c(in order to fit the sound more).Do you understand pattern?
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway) same as this=00:38:187 (1).
00:45:937 add note? If I add a note on the place you suggest, suggestion note and 00:46:187 (1) become double circle in 1/1. I'd like to avoid it!
01:06:437 add a break? need not I think.
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too Sorry, I don't would like to slider's shape change very much.
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern I can't understand what you want to say. The catching sound between previous and present pattern are different.
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)
Umm. your idea is too basic. I want different catching sound. In this part, I catch the voice sound. I think this is not too difficult for normal diff.

sorry only normal :o
Thanks for modding, but I'm sorry I can't accept more than 1 map.
GugUCorn
[Hibari's normal]

  1. 00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
  2. 00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
  3. 00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
  4. 00:48:187 (4) - ^
  5. 01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
  6. 01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
  7. 01:35:937 (5) - clap
[Niva's Hard]

  1. 00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ?
  2. 00:08:187 (1) - clap on head
  3. 00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 :?: but not need to change
  4. 00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219)
  5. 00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1)
irc mod
00:26 P o M u T a: so, mod please >>
00:26 P o M u T a: ><
00:27 *P o M u T a is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232639 Renard - TU4AR]
00:28 [Pisces]: downloading~
00:28 P o M u T a: okay :D
00:28 P o M u T a: irc mod okay ;D
00:31 [Pisces]: 00:03:687 (7) - how about indicating on (112,136)
00:32 P o M u T a: all hidden is i don't like ;_; keep now ._.
00:33 [Pisces]: 00:47:062 (4) - stack on 00:47:187 (1) head?
00:34 P o M u T a: fmm, stoping, but, not bad flow now~. because side flow :D
00:35 [Pisces]: :( ok;
00:35 P o M u T a: sorru ;_;
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:437 -
00:37 [Pisces]: breaktime start here
00:37 [Pisces]: ah no
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:499 -
00:37 [Pisces]: here
00:38 P o M u T a: fmm, i think good now. because, note end D:
00:41 [Pisces]: XD
00:41 [Pisces]: flawless;
00:41 P o M u T a: :D
00:41 P o M u T a: sorry not change ._.
hmm..that's all..
short mod.... :(
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

copolah123 wrote:

queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide) keep for now. if other people , need say.. i'll change.

sorry only normal :o
ty mod
hibarirailwayz

[Pisces] wrote:

[Hibari's normal]

  1. 00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
  2. 00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
  3. 00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
  4. 00:48:187 (4) - ^
  5. 01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
  6. 01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
  7. 01:35:937 (5) - clap
short mod.... :(
All fixed! thanks :)
remy11
from M4M in gave chat

[General]


[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
           交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting :o
00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing :D
Niko-nyan
lol
so pro
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle 表のリズムを今回利用してて、ノートは十分かなと思ったのでkeepとさせていただきます、申し訳ねぇ!

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing :D
thanks modding ~!!
hibarirailwayz

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat


[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ このままのほうが、ルート取りが面白いので、保留
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi 
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
           交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました う~ん。そうですね、同じ向きで続くのも、なんとなく面白いので保留で
なかなか、いい提案なのですが、採用できなくてごめんなさい。今の状態が結構気に入っているので・・・
modding感謝! :) :) :)
Niva

[Pisces] wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

  1. 00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ? It's intentional~
  2. 00:08:187 (1) - clap on head Oh I never noticed this before, nice catch :3
  3. 00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 :?: but not need to change It won't hurt, changed anyway~
  4. 00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219) Another nice catch, fixed~
  5. 00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1) Done

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting :o Talked to P o M u T a, we decided to revert OD to 6...
00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt Agree, fixed~
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~ Umm, keeping this one as this comes from the previous mod
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down It's not actually -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/678233 xD
Thanks for mod both (:

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MillhioreF
[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps.
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too.

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.

It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM :P
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

MillhioreF wrote:

[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps. roger. but, Drum sampleset is small sound._. so, i changed 90→80% :3
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine. i hope this parts fine._.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too. fmm, this is harder jump part. but, It is not difficult if I catch flow, and enjoy part :D

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.
thanks you :D
It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM :P
thanks testplay and suggestion :D
Satellite
こんにちは
From My queue

your request normal only :D

[Hibari's Normal]
01:34:562 (2,3) - リズムがとりづらいと思いました。2,3のnoteを1つのスライダーに変更することをお勧めします

lol

awesome diff~ no kudosu plz!
rank go~ ></
Kitsuneko
domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

General



  1. ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ない いらなければ消しちゃおう

Hibari's Normal


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Nice
Mapping

  1. 00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも
  2. 01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかな カーブにしてみては
  3. 02:10:187 (2) - Good job

Niva's Hard


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. GOOD
Mapping

  1. 00:03:687 (6) - out of screen
  2. 00:13:937 (7) - 1grid down, try check to use Ctrl+J.
  3. 00:24:187 (1) - out of screen
  4. 00:30:187 (1) - move down a little
  5. 00:34:562 (2,3) - out of screen
  6. 00:40:062 (7) - out of screen
  7. 00:47:562 (6) - out of screen, down a little
  8. 01:01:937 (8) - out of screen
  9. 01:03:562 (8,9,1) - out of screen
  10. 01:05:937 (8) - out of screen
  11. 01:21:562 (5) - ^
  12. 01:22:562 (2) - out of screen
  13. 01:26:062 (7) - out of screen
  14. 01:29:562 (5) - out of screen
  15. 01:43:187 (2) - out of screen
  16. 01:47:187 (1) - out of screen
  17. 01:51:187 (1) - out of screen
  18. 01:54:187 (1) - out of screen
  19. 01:56:187 (1) - out of screen
  20. 02:12:937 (3) - out of screen

    checked notes out from Edit screen, I could not be overlooked that.
    (I try check with other screen resolution but same. Or rule was changed? I heard it is Unrankable.)
    However, it easily fix since you're nice mapping style. just move some grids.
    your map is pretty fun. Good job!

Insane


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね
  2. 02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ
Mapping

  1. Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok

ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Kitsuneko wrote:

domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

General



  1. ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ない いらなければ消しちゃおう 削除しました・・
 

Insane


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね 最初はそうだったのですが、指摘されて現在に至っています。厳密な音取りをすると1テンポ遅れたfinishが入ると思うので変更は無しです。ただ、このようなFinishがプレイヤーを混乱させる原因になるなら、変更を考えます。
  2. 02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ fixed


Mapping

  1. Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok roger


ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
thanks modding!
hibarirailwayz
Satelliteさんの意見は採用させていただきました!ドモです!! 8-) 8-) 8-)

Kitsuneko wrote:

domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

Hibari's Normal


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Nice
Mapping

  1. 00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも そっちのほうが綺麗ですね!
  2. 01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかな カーブにしてみては Rの形を変えたくないので、保留で。
  3. 02:10:187 (2) - Good job  Yeah! Nivaさんに感謝!!


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Marcin
What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Marcin wrote:

What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.
http://lapfox.bandcamp.com/album/because-maybe
source.
this name correct
Marcin
Oh well, my bad :P Sorry
Niva
Umm, about the objects...

I'm using 4:3 (800x600) currently, and there's no objects off the screen when I played it/on the Test mode >_< - I know they *may* look off-screen in edit mode, but actually it's not when you play it~ (I also have some ranked maps/GDs with objects placed on ~y:384 btw)

Fixed some and that 1 grid down issue though, thanks for mod :3

SPOILER
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135,195,107687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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327,338,110937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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193,293,111437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,199,111687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,111937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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483,147,112687,2,0,L|337:146,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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375,346,113687,2,0,P|306:321|242:335,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Sieg
Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays better
OD+1 since this is normal
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd
301,311,130187,2,0,B|293:233|486:311|527:187|515:2|354:-13|288:19|288:52|256:84|256:84|223:52|223:19|157:-13|-3:2|-15:187|25:311|218:233|231:373,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Niva's Hard:
this was soooooo awesome until I saw 01:42:187 (1,2,1,2) - eh, such an disappointment Niva. Maybe change this 2 repeat sliders in something... or just add circles instead of second repeat, think about this please, this plays really not so fun as it can be.
01:48:187 (1,2) - ^
01:56:187 (1,2) - ^

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe?
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me
masterpiece

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Sieg wrote:

Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music... fmm,i keep this. if people same opinion, i'll change this.

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe? maybe ok ._.
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me yeah,bit random, but harder part good fit.
masterpiece

Good Luck!
thanks modding and star :D
hibarirailwayz

Sieg wrote:

Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays betterok
OD+1 since this is normal Umm, I'd like to be easy this map's OD
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music I completly catch the drum sound, and now is exciting I think.
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt OK
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd
301,311,130187,2,0,B|293:233|486:311|527:187|515:2|354:-13|288:19|288:52|256:84|256:84|223:52|223:19|157:-13|-3:2|-15:187|25:311|218:233|231:373,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..


Good Luck!
Thanks for modding! :) :)
Sieg

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..
Eh.. :( okay
[Luanny]
:o
hi

[Hibari's Normal]

00:34:187 (1) - softl finish
00:42:187 (1) - ^
01:02:687 (2) - whistle here isn't sounding good imo, remove it?
01:35:562 - whistle to be consistent
01:54:187 (1) - LOL
02:10:187 (2) - nice heart

[Niva's Hard]

This diff is absolutely perfect

00:26:687 (4) - make this blanket with (5)?
01:09:937 (3) - was this intentional? :o

tfw hard is 5 stars while insane is 4,96 lol

[Insane]

00:03:187 (5,6,7) - sorry, this is a no no. The overlap is really weird and I personally don't like the stack
Try this
SPOILER

(7)'s end is stacked with 00:01:937 (3) -
00:12:687 (3) - Rotate 9°
00:12:937 (4) - ^fix the angle if you did this
00:57:874 - add note here, there is a 1/4
01:09:437 (5,1) - this jump is too aggressive imo o_O. select 01:09:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - and ctrl g?
01:09:937 (1) - remove nc and ^if you didn't fix this, put ir between 01:09:812 (5) - and 01:10:187 (1) - using spacing
01:22:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make all the jumps with the same spacing? something more circular like this
SPOILER

use the polygon tool
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream starts too early, there's no 1/4 here 01:39:749 (2) -
01:54:187 (1) - this part is so epic ;_____; why spinner? map it pls
02:02:437 (2) - ctrl g?
02:02:937 (4) - ^?
02:14:187 (1) - normal finish

I hope I could help
good luck o3o
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