0gre wrote:

[MOD REQUEST (Taiko only)]

SIGNs

● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation

[Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

MOD information

[*]00:03:507 - ● ●
Furthermore could have 00:03:123 to ●

1. 00:04:277 - ◎
2. 00:05:238 - ●
3. 00:05:623 - ● ● ● ● ◎
4. 00:06:584 - delete
5. 00:06:969 - ●
6. 00:07:546 - ●●●
7. Try avoid using ●●● , ●●● such this kind of 3-combo in Muzukashii
8. 00:07:930 - ◎
9. 00:09:469　,　00:10:046　,　00:10:430 are ◎ ?
10. 00:10:623 - delete
11. 00:11:392 - ●
12. 00:13:219 - delete
13. 00:15:623　,　00:15:815 are not ◎ ?
14. 00:17:161 ~ 00:26:200 similar as above
15. 00:52:738 - ●
16. 00:58:507 - note
17. 01:04:469 - ●●●
18. 01:05:623 - delete finish
19. 01:06:007 - finish
20. 01:06:392 - ◎ ◎ ◎ ◎
21. 01:14:084 ~ 01:15:238　,　01:15:623 ~ 01:16:777 have them similar arrange
22. 01:19:084 - ●
23. 01:22:161 - listen to the sound carefully around this bit

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]

MOD information

1. 00:02:834 - delete
2. 00:04:853 ~ 00:11:007 similar to Muzukashii's Mod and just see where the big notes place
3. 00:14:853 - ●●●●●
4. 00:17:738 - delete
5. 00:17:930 - ● ● ● ●●● ● ● ●●● ● ● ● ●
6. 00:20:815 - delete or ●
7. 00:25:046 - ●
8. 00:26:200 - note
9. 00:32:450 - add note and 00:31:969 ~ 00:32:546 arrange
10. 00:36:007 - ●
11. 00:55:623 - O o o ooo o o ooo
12. 00:59:277　,　00:59:661 are ●
13. 00:59:661 - ●
14. 01:08:315 - ●
15. 01:08:507 - ●
16. 01:06:392 (2,3,1,1) - ◎ ◎ ◎ ◎
17. 01:09:661 or 01:10:238 - fill with whatever 3-combo or a note but no need to fill both
18. 01:11:200 - note
19. 01:12:353 - note
20. 01:12:738 - delete
21. 01:14:084 ~ 01:15:238 arrange
22. 01:22:161 - normal note
23. 01:23:315 - change spinner to notes
24. 01:26:392 ~ something like ● ● ● ● ● 　 ● ● ● ● ●

Thanks ~

yu_yu12354 wrote:

yo!!!我來啦wwwwwwwwwwwwww
以下全都係建議!
[General:]
大致上無問題!果然係出至觸手圖;w;(被打
太強大了wwwwww

[Taiko muzukashii:]
00:06:200 k? k is already there =w=
00:15:623 (2) finish fixed
00:15:815 (3) finish fixed
00:16:007 (1) finish+whistle
00:16:208 (1) finish+whistle Big Kat is already there w
00:17:161 (1) finish? 因為我聽到音樂→重拍 Patterns like kkD are unrankable in taiko diff... remain unchanged
00:55:623 (1) finsih? fixed
01:14:853 (1) k? k is already there =w=


[Taiko Oni:]
我覺得比較緊要的係,你timing set 的Kiai mode 要跟返其他譜一樣→01:23:123　取消Kiai mode
同埋我覺得01:25:238速度變返正常會比較好(純粹意見....;w; fixed ^^

00:02:161(2) don?
00:16:969 (3) don?
00:17:065 (4) don?
00:17:161 (1) k?
00:26:200 加個don note? fixed
00:53:507 (2) finish?
00:53:892 (1) finish+whistle?

------------------------------------------------
good luck(｀・ω・´)(｀・ω・´)(｀・ω・´)(｀・ω・´)

neonat wrote:

Unfortunately, I do not really have much time to look into detail other difficulties.

Muzukashii

00:03:700 - + k added
00:32:161 (1,2,1) - kkd kkd is already there @@
01:05:623 (2,1,1) - ^

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

I'll support this map until getting ranked
(Of course I'll play it after ranked www)

happy623 wrote:

姨媽^q^~

log

20:31 happy623: ;;
20:31 happy623: ;w;
20:32 IamKwaN: ;w;
20:33 IamKwaN: ;;
20:33 IamKwaN: 哈
20:33 happy623: 偷睇左您幅map
20:33 IamKwaN: ..
20:33 IamKwaN: 做咩5名正言順睇
20:33 happy623: me覺得用多d normal好d ;w;
20:33 IamKwaN: okay ;;
20:39 happy623: try try ur map先;w;
20:41 IamKwaN: 55
20:41 happy623: 5
20:41 happy623: 加Normal
20:41 IamKwaN: 55
20:41 IamKwaN: 有無custom D:
20:41 happy623: 唔係冇左連打個感覺;w;
20:41 happy623: 冇T_T
20:41 IamKwaN: 我自己打都覺 --
20:42 happy623: 頭一個spinner都唔好消音都會實在d ;w;
20:42 IamKwaN: okay ;w;

[Normal]
01:23:123 (8) - remove clap

[Hard]
00:31:007 (7) - 開osu檔將佢換做 307,228,31007,2,0,P|359:248|415:228,2,112.5會唔會好d ? (nice blanket)
00:50:815 (8) - 312,68,50815,2,2,B|272:32|224:48|200:76|200:76|100:76,2,225
01:12:353 (10) - remove clap

[Insane]
SE都只是個人感覺w
00:11:007 (7) - Sampleset換成Drum?
00:12:353 (5) - Drum + Whistle?
00:52:546 (3) - add clap?
01:05:238 (9) - add clap at the head?
01:06:007 (12) - ^
01:12:353 (9) - remove clap
01:23:123 (7) - ^
01:28:700 (1,2,3,4) - drum + clap?
01:28:892 (2,3) - Ctrl + G 會唔會再爽d ;w;

Xinely wrote:

[General]
BG 1 and 2 so big, can reduce the size? 200-300kb i guess fixed
Open AiMod, kiai unsnapped actually they are snapped ;w;. . .
[Easy]
HP-1 fixed
00:05:238 (1) - remove this, it's hard for newbie suddenly note after spin fixed
00:11:007 (4) - NC fixed
00:13:700 (1) - this too, maybe better if delete the spin and change slider 4/4 start from 00:11:777 - , 00:12:546 - repeat in here and end in 00:13:315 - fixed
00:20:238 (5,1) - swap NC fixed
00:23:315 (5,1) - ^ fixed
00:47:930 (6,1) - ^ fixed
00:52:161 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:29:469 (1) - finish? fixed
00:41:392 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:41:777 (2) - NC fixed
00:39:469 (3) - i don't really like many reverse like this, how about make 2 slider 1/2 ? better imo fixed
00:44:853 (1,2,3) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674670 fixed
00:54:469 (4) - x:144 y:92 , if follow this, fix the spacing after this object fixed
00:55:238 - remove finish fixed
00:55:623 (1) - finish fixed
00:57:161 (1,3) - swap NC? this one seems ok for me
01:01:007 (1,3) - ^? fixed
01:06:392 (4,1) - ^ fixed
01:01:392 (2) - 1 grid down fixed
01:17:738 (2) - ^ fixed
01:12:546 (4,5) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674672 fixed
01:21:777 (3) - x:260 y:172 fixed

[Normal]
OD+1 fixed
00:05:238 (1) - same with easy fixed
00:06:392 (3) - x:472 y:188 for perfect blanket, don't forget fix the spacing after this object fixed
00:09:853 (3,4) - change to slider? fixed
00:11:007 (6) - NC this fixed
00:11:777 (1) - delete and change 2 slider 4/4? fixed
00:17:161 (6,1) - swap NC fixed
00:20:238 (6,1) - ^ fixed
00:23:315 (6,1) - ^ fixed
00:27:930 (4) - x:144 y:208 fixed
00:28:700 (5) - x:120 y:128 fixed
00:47:930 (6,1) - swap NC fixed
00:51:007 (5,1) - swap NC fixed
00:55:623 (1) - finish fixed
00:57:161 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:58:700 (4,1) - swap NC follow easy so no fixed
01:00:238 (3,5) - overlap, move please intentionally overlap it ;w;
01:01:777 (1) - finish fixed
01:03:315 (1,3) - swap NC fixed
01:06:392 (5,1) - ^ fixed
01:12:546 (6) - NC its okay imo
01:14:084 (1,3) - swap NC fixed

[Hard]
AR-1 please and OD+1 OD fixed AR seems ok now ;w;
00:05:238 (1,4) - swap NC fixed
00:11:007 (10,1) - ^ fixed
00:13:507 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:17:161 (9,1) - ^ fixed
00:10:334 (8) - remove this fixed
stop this, insane too

[Insane]
AR-1 OD-1 seems okay now coz some test players said OD can even higher lol

P.s: yap i think you must make consistency NC.. NC when in stanza (long white tick), that's better.. overall not bad rhtym but must have consistency NC and hitsound. Call me back again after fix this to full mod

Well Good Luck (:

1. normal音效比较吵, 建议用soft, 然后把二四白线的note改成normal
2. ar太高, 这图没那么难建议ar8
3. 00:21:584 (3) - 叠到(1)比较好..
4. 00:22:930 (6) - 滑条尾去掉clap
5. 00:23:315 (1) - ^
6. 00:24:276 (4,5,6,7) - whistle太多, 隔几个音放一个就好..
7. 后面好像也有点这种问题o.o
8. 00:26:392 (1,3) - 这个滑条都挤到前面去了, 摆平衡一点比较好看, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674809
9. 00:29:469 (1,2,3) - 这里放个速度50%的滑条比较合适..
10. 00:31:007 (2) - 这个和00:26:392 (1,3) 一样..
11. 01:12:353 (9) - 加个note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674813
12. 01:10:430 (4) - 这个用1/2拍的长度就好了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674814

1. hitsound的问题一样..
2. 00:16:584 (1) - 这里间距和前面一样, 加个newcombo比较好不然看成跳了
3. 00:24:853 (6) - 这里空着比较好
4. 00:33:123 (1) - 太远了..
5. 00:50:815 (9) - 把第三个点删了0,0
6. 01:06:584 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674818
7. 01:18:892 (4) - 间距大点或者叠起

1. 00:34:084 (5) - 挡住了reverse arrow不可以 而且这里是3/4..
2. 同一音效也不要连续太多个放..
3. 感觉这normal做的不错 o.o easy没啥问题

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]

[Easy]
AR-1 我覺得okay wor ;w;
00:17:546 (3) - NC 聽某modder講跟大white tick 擺:3
00:18:700 (1) - Del nc ^

[Normal]
整體上比較快 lol

[Hard]
00:07:930 (1) - del nc 跟大white tick D:
00:13:507 (10) - nc ^
00:14:084 (1) - del nc fixed
00:16:584 (5) - nc fixed
00:15:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有d難讀 有無咩建議;w;
00:57:161 (1) - End in 00:57:546 - and del 00:57:546 (2) - fixed
00:58:700 (1) - nc fixed
01:16:007 (6) - nc 無fixed

[Insane]
00:12:738 (7) - nc fixed
00:18:316 (5) - end in 00:18:507 no fixed D:
00:19:565 (2) - del this note ^
00:34:661 (7) - nc fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi


Insane

1. normal音效比较吵, 建议用soft, 然后把二四白线的note改成normal fixed
2. ar太高, 这图没那么难建议ar8 AR9就好了:3
3. 00:21:584 (3) - 叠到(1)比较好.. fixed
4. 00:22:930 (6) - 滑条尾去掉clap ^
5. 00:23:315 (1) - ^ ^
6. 00:24:276 (4,5,6,7) - whistle太多, 隔几个音放一个就好.. fixed
7. 后面好像也有点这种问题o.o fixed o.o
8. 00:26:392 (1,3) - 这个滑条都挤到前面去了, 摆平衡一点比较好看, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674809 fixed
9. 00:29:469 (1,2,3) - 这里放个速度50%的滑条比较合适.. 這個要考慮一下;w;
10. 00:31:007 (2) - 这个和00:26:392 (1,3) 一样.. ;w;?
11. 01:12:353 (9) - 加个note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674813 fixed
12. 01:10:430 (4) - 这个用1/2拍的长度就好了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674814 fixed

Hard

1. hitsound的问题一样..
2. 00:16:584 (1) - 这里间距和前面一样, 加个newcombo比较好不然看成跳了 fixed
3. 00:24:853 (6) - 这里空着比较好 在我看來不錯啊;w;
4. 00:33:123 (1) - 太远了.. fixed
5. 00:50:815 (9) - 把第三个点删了0,0 fixed
6. 01:06:584 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/674818 怎麼了0.0?
7. 01:18:892 (4) - 间距大点或者叠起 但是reverse slider是右邊的0.0

Normal

1. 00:34:084 (5) - 挡住了reverse arrow不可以 而且这里是3/4.. 我想不出更好的排放方法t.t..
2. 同一音效也不要连续太多个放..
3. 感觉这normal做的不错 o.o easy没啥问题

加油

toara_fict wrote:

Hi~・ω・

[Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:20:238 (2) - k
01:06:392 (2,3,1,1) - K K D K Agree~ K K D K fits the melody more >w< -> fixed

This map good~ >w<

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]

00:16:969 (3,4,1,2,1) - ddk k d fixed
00:59:277 (2) - →　00:59:469 (2) - 　？ fixed
01:27:546 (6,1,1,1,2) - 　 d k d d k

I support~ >w<

Lundlerol wrote:

hi~
mod req from my queue

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
00:07:450 - delete fixed
00:23:027 - ^ fixed
00:43:315 (1) - K

00:59:950 - add k added
00:59:853 (1) - k
01:10:046 (2) - kkddk (stream) used kkd instead
01:17:738 (1,2,3) - K fixed

[Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:06:392 - d added
00:09:469 (1) - D fixed
00:10:046 (2,1) - Finish changed to K D instead of D D
00:16:969 (3,4,1) - 　00:23:123 (2,3,1) - 　01:07:738 (3,4,1) - Since kkd is difficult at Muzukashii, you should make it ddd or kkk. The second one changed to ddd, others remain unchanged.
00:19:661 (1,2,1) - 　00:56:584 (3,4,1) - Since ddk is difficult at Muzukashii, you should make it ddd or kkk. these two will become odd if changed to ddd/kkk instead of ddk. Remain unchanged > <

Good luck~_(:3 」∠)_

ctyjason wrote:

Hi,可能有些你已fix,因為這幾小時你有不少mod^^

[Insane]

00:12:738 (1) - NC fixed
00:34:950 (8) - 感覺怪怪的,刪掉 後面有音樂的;w;
00:36:007 (2) - 第1個音加個whistle fixed
00:36:777 (4,1,3,5) - whistle fixed
00:41:969 (3) - endpoint加個clap fixed
00:48:315 (1) - 這裏開始到 00:50:911 (1) - hitsound太大,建議調到70%或以下 70以下咩都聽5到;w;..
01:01:392 (2) - endpoint不要whistle fixed
01:14:853 (4,7,10) - whistle fixed

[Hard]

00:15:238 (1) - NC比較好,因為按的節奏不同了 fixed
00:15:815 (2) - 不建議放在這,玩家不容易才看到 有透明skin嘛 況且我5知擺邊好lol
01:12:546 (1) - 這裏不要jump比較好 新combo不行嗎:3? anyway fixed:3
01:18:892 (4) - 距離錯了 slider end在右面 我認為沒有問題
01:21:392 (4) - 轉為slider,slider在01:21:584 (4)完結 考慮一下;w; 因為我想加強那三重音:3
01:21:777 (5) - 刪掉 ^

[Normal]

00:33:507 (4) - 加個Circle(clap) 本身有:3
00:34:084 (5) - 不建議這樣放,新手玩家比較難看 有沒有建議阿t.t..我想不出來..

[Easy]

00:21:777 (2) - 轉slider fixed
01:17:161 (5) - 這裏不應NC fixed
01:17:738 (1) - NC fixed
01:22:546 (4,5) - 可以放得更好看 ,(4)x:328,y:344 (5)x:456,y:200 fixed

SPOILER

SPOILER

Just to visualize this

1. Don't overuse drum claps (want an example? 00:34:950 (8,9,10,11,12,13) or 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)
2. This diff has very messy parts (due to spacing). You should put jumps where they really fit, otherwise space properly
3. There are some awkward sliders too (such as 00:25:238 (9,10) - The shapes aren't a problem, it's just the flow. The sliders don't fit here)

1. all diff osu!~stand is you make, but you not fixed a Kiai ???
2. AudioLeadIn: 1000 in osu!stand and dif taiko is AudioLeadIn: 2000. you should use 1 in 2
   
3. the Name in taiko diff Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii or Nardo's Taiko Oni, Taiko is redundant
   you should put is Nardo's Muzukashii and Nardo's Oni
4. BG, 2 BG for 4 diff, it's bad.Each diff a BG or taiko use BG2 and osu!stand use BG1 or all diff use only a BG
5. Video 21Mb, you should lower it down
   quite creative about Hit sound

1. 00:05:623 (3) - distance need fixed. x440 y152 better
2. 00:37:161 (3) - not overlap with 00:35:623 (1) -
3. 00:52:161 - you sure put volume is 95%

1. good

1. 00:15:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - it will better if straight http://puu.sh/2prs5 and so that players know their stay if do as me
   01:18:892 (4) - [/color]
   01:27:546 (4) - NC

• AR - 1, sure

1. 00:31:007 (2) - make it better
2. 01:27:161 (4) - NC

JT123 wrote:

u okay,
this my mod

just sugest

btw,delete maen delete beat

[Taiko muzu]

00:03:123 (1) - delete , 00:03:315 (2) - whistel , 00:03:700 (2) - remove whis
00:09:277 (2) - delete
00:29:469 (2) - whist
00:33:892 (3) - move to this time 00:33:700
00:58:507 (2) - delete
01:00:238 (2) - delete
01:12:930 (1,1,1,2,1) - make it same like 01:11:392 (1,1,2,1,2) -
=>01:12:930 (1,1,1,2,1) changed to k d d k k; 01:11:392 (1,1,2,1,2) changed to k d k d d
01:16:200 (1,3) - delete , 01:16:392 (3) - whis, 01:16:969 add DON ,01:17:161 katsu here , 01:17:353 delete
=>01:17:161 changed to D
01:29:277 (2) - whis here

for oni taiko i won't mod it
i lazy to mod oni diff
okay that's my mod
sorry if to short cuz I'm sick now

smallboat wrote:

嗨 來幫你mod
以下是內容:
taiko的難度省略.. (這邊不會orz


整體

Normal的kiai time似乎跟三個難度有差異? fixed

Taiko的話我是不知道要不要一起統一.. Taiko不需要統一

音量方面有做些調整 D的clap音效最好不要太高聽起來覺得怪怪(自己個人感官

Easy

SPOILER

00:09:469 (3) - 綠線 N音效 音量70% fixed
00:11:007 (1) - N音效應該是比較好 我其實覺得normal clap跟這歌不配..
00:11:777 (3) - ^ ^
00:18:700 (1) - 綠線 N音效 音量70% fixed
00:21:392 (1) - N音效 fixed
00:24:084 (3) - N音效 音量70% fixed
00:32:546 (1) - 如果真的要用D 音量調小 比較不會那麼突出
這邊我是調60% (後面的D也很類似 看要不要換 換成75%
00:34:084 (3) - 綠線 N音效 音量70% fixed
00:41:007 (5,6) - 都whistle 音量70% no fixed
00:41:777 (1) - 綠線 N音效 音量70% no fixed
00:47:546 (5) - N音效 no fixed
01:00:238 (1) - 50% 本身就是50%呀
01:12:546 (1) - clap拿掉 no fixed
01:21:777 (3) - N音效 no fixed

Normal

SPOILER

00:14:469 (2) - N音效 fixed
00:15:623 (4,5) - 結尾finish 很奇怪;w; no fixed
00:37:930 (4) - 拿掉clap no fixed
00:38:315 (5) - whistle fixed
00:38:700 (1,2) - 1結尾whistle , 2 +whistle fixed
00:39:853 (3) - 結尾whistle fixed
00:47:546 (5,1) - N音效 fixed
00:51:777 (2) - ^ fixed
00:58:315 (3) - ^ fixed
00:58:700 (4) - ^ fixed
01:00:238 (3) - 綠線 whiste fixed
01:07:930 (1) - N音效 fixed
01:13:315 (3) - 尾端clap拿掉 fixed
01:21:777 (4) - 60% 80% ;w;

Hard

SPOILER

00:33:892 (4,5,6) - N音效 clap拿掉 fixed
00:42:353 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ fixed
00:52:161 (10) - whistle fixed
01:00:238 (5,1) - 5上面的綠線和後面1的綠線音量都60% 75%
01:06:392 (2) - 60% ^
01:12:546 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:623 (2) - 綠線 N音效 不clap 音量70%或60% no fixed
01:22:161 (7) - ^ ^

Insane

SPOILER

00:16:969 (6) - N音效 whistle拿掉 音量70
00:23:315 (1) - N音效 音量70
00:25:238 (9) - N音效 whistle拿掉 音量70
00:33:507 (3) - N音效
00:33:892 (4,5,6,7) - +whistle
00:34:950 (8) - N音效 whistle拿掉 音量70
01:00:430 (3) - N音效 前後clap拿掉 音量70
00:47:161 (1) - 50%
00:52:161 (1) - 60%
00:54:469 (1) - 前面的綠線 音量30%比較好 不會突出
01:02:930 (3) - 60%
01:04:661 (8) - 80%
01:12:161 (8) - N音效 音量70% 不+clap
01:12:546 (1) - 70%
01:16:584 (1) - 80%
01:18:507 (1) - 90%或100%
01:20:815 (4) - 前端whistle
01:21:392 (5) - 後端whistle
01:21:777 (1) - 60%
spinner後面的音量 各減10%
INSANE就不改了 我自己相當滿意hitsound..
DRUM那些太小聲又被人說沒有hitsound似的
改大聲又說要小聲點 我也不知道該怎麼辦

完成..

先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題或想繼續2nd mod(最多2次)可PM給我 謝謝!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Just opened AIMod and saw multiple errors, such as leadin issues, as AIMod might call them or overused kiai. Definitely worth checking every diff with that.
Most important are the unsnapped sections and no breaktime, but the other things aren't minor as well.

It is a bug of AImod: p/2206395/

[Easy]
00:11:007 (1,2,3) - OK, first of all, these drum claps don't fit at all and should be replaced. You can use the drum finish hitsound instead, because it is less intrusive, or you can change the sampleset, but..... that's up to you. fixed
00:23:315 (1,2) - They don't fit here either. If you still want to keep the drum sampleset, use the finish hitsounds of it instead. fixed
00:32:546 (1,2) - Again, same problem. fixed
00:50:238 (3,4) - Same. The hitsound should be erased on (3), the hitsound on (4) can be erased. fixed

[Normal]
00:16:584 (5) - Moving the last node a bit up makes this a better blanket for 00:15:623 (4) 's end and also improves flow. fixed

SPOILER

00:58:315 - WHAI ON EARTH does kiai time start here?? what's the problem? the kiai starts at 00:55:623 instead..
01:11:392 (4) - Overlapping with (2)'s end. intentionally did that to have a symmetric pattern D:

[Hard]
00:04:853 (1) - New combo here. fixed
00:06:200 (1) - Remove new combo here, set it on next slider instead. fixed
00:06:200 (1,2,3) - All in all, this pattern is kinda messy. Also the spacing from (3) to (4) is wrong. I suggest re-arranging this pattern thoroughly. i just arrange them using DS and then CTRL+G I think it could be a style
00:14:661 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is untidy and should be re-arranged. Just because this is a Hard, not everything has to overlap. In this case, the hitbursts are overlapping the upcoming hitobjects. i suppose playing hard means u have a transparent skin already, so just only fix that 3 combo hit to a better place
00:18:508 (5,6,7) - Same problem with untidiness. style D:
00:22:161 (5) - The drum clap doesn't fit here. fixed
00:23:507 (9) - Make the new combo here instead of setting it on the following slider. Besides, erase the drum whistle. fixed
00:29:469 (1) - "Relax" this slider. sorry i dont know wt u mean lol

SPOILER

00:31:007 (6) - Shorten the slider (repeat should be on the red tick), then add a circle at 00:31:584 . Stack it on the next combo's (1). Fits muuuch better IMO. fixed

Just to visualize this

00:33:892 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is confusing (rhythm-based). You could replace circles with sliders. Just my opinion though. Ah, and don't use so many drum claps. drum clap removed but circles are still there coz 00:33:123 (1,2,3) these 3 also follow lyrics so it is reasonable for the whole combo to follow lyrics
00:37:546 (6,7) - Move these somewhere else. You have already used the same technique on 00:36:584 (3,4,5) . suggestion?
00:42:353 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many drum claps. fixed
01:00:430 (6) - Move the second node closer to the red node. Make the first part of the slider more circular. fixed

[Insane]
00:05:238 (1) - New combo here. fixed
00:06:007 (1) - Remove the new combo here. fixed


Now just some general things, because I see them occuring over and over again:

1. Don't overuse drum claps (want an example? 00:34:950 (8,9,10,11,12,13) or 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) fixed
2. This diff has very messy parts (due to spacing). You should put jumps where they really fit, otherwise space properly insane no need to follow DS strictly but i have tried to fix some which I think is random
3. There are some awkward sliders too (such as 00:25:238 (9,10) - The shapes aren't a problem, it's just the flow. The sliders don't fit here) fixed

Go through the diff and fix some of the things mentioned above.

Good luck, y'all!!

Zejky wrote:

Hi IamKwaN
as you want

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Geranal]

1. all diff osu!~stand is you make, but you not fixed a Kiai ??? just wonder does it happen coz they are consistent when i upload them lol now fixed
2. AudioLeadIn: 1000 in osu!stand and dif taiko is AudioLeadIn: 2000. you should use 1 in 2 that's okay for diff audioleadin for guest diffs
   
3. the Name in taiko diff Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii or Nardo's Taiko Oni, Taiko is redundant
   you should put is Nardo's Muzukashii and Nardo's Oni It is taiko map so no fixed
4. BG, 2 BG for 4 diff, it's bad.Each diff a BG or taiko use BG2 and osu!stand use BG1 or all diff use only a BG wts the problem?
5. Video 21Mb, you should lower it down trying to reduce the size and now fixed
   quite creative about Hit sound lol

[Easy]

1. 00:05:623 (3) - distance need fixed. x440 y152 better fixed
2. 00:37:161 (3) - not overlap with 00:35:623 (1) - fixed
3. 00:52:161 - you sure put volume is 95% fixed

[Normal]

• 
  

1. good \:D/

[Hard]

1. 00:15:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - it will better if straight http://puu.sh/2prs5 and so that players know their stay if do as me fixed in another way
   01:18:892 (4) - NC or so that it far, you used time 1/4 no fixed
   01:27:546 (4) - NC no fixed

[Insane]

• AR - 1, sure its better imo

1. 00:31:007 (2) - make it better no fixed
2. 01:27:161 (4) - NC no fixed

i can mod taiko, sorry
your map pro hit sound, need a mod better about hit sound,
that's all for me
GL

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[Easy]
00:09:469 (3) - Remove a reverse. no fix. seems better now imo
00:10:623 - Add a circle? ^
00:37:161 (3) - Try to stack the end of the slider better? fixed
00:50:238 (3) - Stack with (1) fixed
01:23:700 (1) - Move this back one tick and end at the same place. fixed


[Normal]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~ owo removed owo
00:07:546 (6) - Line with (4) (x:108 y:172) fixed
01:01:007 (5) - Maybe break distance for a bit and stack the sliders end with (3) would u mind capture the screen for me .__.?


[Hard]
00:06:200 (1,2,3) - Stack. fixed


[Insane]
- HP Drain +1 ? owo fixed
00:25:815 (10) - Place where (5) was. fixed
00:31:007 (2) - Place the 4th tick at x:72 y:352 fixed


Nice map ~
Good luck with rank! >w<

1. You are overusing kiai i mean this fountais are so much should fix this:
   
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2. Source should be Robotics;Notes without caps
3. You can improve your hitsounds are really bad now imo
4. ロボティクス・ノーツ remove this from tags since is the source got no sense imo

• Unsnapped green line at: 00:08:030 - snap to 00:08:027
  00:09:469 this double repeat can be confuse in easy diff better make to sliders gonna fit better too
  00:11:777 remove this finish from slider body is not following nothing
  00:18:700 clap in the repeat fit alot imo
  00:31:007 remove whistle from slider body is really annoying imo
  00:50:238 (3,4,5,1) - this part is so lazy why no better make some sliders? make it fun for new players
  01:06:392 this so confuse for easy as i say before 2 repeats are not good for this maybe try to make another thing there
  01:09:469 whistle dont fit here add finish gonna sound alot better
  01:12:546 (1,2) - this is just my opinion but drum sound got no sense o.o sound really bad in this kind of songs
  01:28:700 same as 01:06:392
  01:28:700 were are the claps in there?
  00:04:853 this have to be new combo
  Ok this diff is good but you have to work with hitsounds

• 00:14:469 (2,3) - stack they like you did on the previous pattern 00:13:315 (4,1) - for consistency
  00:23:315 why drum sound here?
  00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rythm is wrong remember this is not hard is normal maybe try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:084 this is unrankable previous hitburts of 00:33:315 (3) - dont let see the repeat of (5) fix plz
  00:49:469 (4,1) - stack they perfect
  01:10:238 (2,4) - ugly overlap you see how 2 touch 4 that look so bad try to make it more clean
  01:26:777 so fast after spinner imo maybe remove it?
  same with hitsounds add more

• AR -1 for better difficult spread since normal got 5 and insane 9 this have to be 7
  00:06:200 (5,1,2) - (nazi) stack they perfect are a little wrong
  00:25:046 this unrankable same i tell you in normal about hitburst covering the repeat
  00:54:469 (1,2,3) - here better use 05 spacing 1.0 is so difficult for a hard diff
  01:00:238 (5,6) - why drum sound? dont fit in nothing here
  01:14:661 (3,5) - maybe can stack the tail of they complety?

• 00:21:777 (4) - Unsnapped slider
  00:30:812 green line unsnapped
  00:41:969 (3,4,5) - again drum sound dont following nothing
  00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - im not fan of using 1.0 distance for this streams maybe can you use 0.5?
  01:03:315 (5,6) - stack they perfec a little wrong
  drum hitsounds dont fit

Natsu wrote:

Hi forum pm request o3o

General

1. You are overusing kiai i mean this fountais are so much should fix this: I dont think I am overusing the kiai coz the one ranked has similar kiai to mine.
   
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2. Source should be Robotics;Notes without caps it doesnt matter coz ranked ones have both cap and non-cap
   and official also has both cap and non-cap.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
3. You can improve your hitsounds are really bad now imo remap the hitsound already :3
4. ロボティクス・ノーツ remove this from tags since is the source got no sense imo take a look at these two maps
   http://osu.ppy.sh/s/76947 and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/73390. why make no sense :3?

Easy:

• Unsnapped green line at: 00:08:030 - snap to 00:08:027 the line has been removed
  00:09:469 this double repeat can be confuse in easy diff better make to sliders gonna fit better too fixed
  00:11:777 remove this finish from slider body is not following nothing fixed
  00:18:700 clap in the repeat fit alot imo removed
  00:31:007 remove whistle from slider body is really annoying imo removed
  00:50:238 (3,4,5,1) - this part is so lazy why no better make some sliders? make it fun for new players
  01:06:392 this so confuse for easy as i say before 2 repeats are not good for this maybe try to make another thing there easy no need to be that fun. i think basic is okay for easy
  01:09:469 whistle dont fit here add finish gonna sound alot better removed
  01:12:546 (1,2) - this is just my opinion but drum sound got no sense o.o sound really bad in this kind of songs huh..i use lower volume now
  01:28:700 same as 01:06:392 remove hitsound.
  01:28:700 were are the claps in there? no
  00:04:853 this have to be new combo why D:?
  Ok this diff is good but you have to work with hitsounds

Normal:

• 00:14:469 (2,3) - stack they like you did on the previous pattern 00:13:315 (4,1) - for consistency fixed
  00:23:315 why drum sound here? removed
  00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rythm is wrong remember this is not hard is normal maybe try this: i think it is good imo :3
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:084 this is unrankable previous hitburts of 00:33:315 (3) - dont let see the repeat of (5) fix plz fixed
  00:49:469 (4,1) - stack they perfect fixed
  01:10:238 (2,4) - ugly overlap you see how 2 touch 4 that look so bad try to make it more clean why ugly= =they are symmetric aren't they
  01:26:777 so fast after spinner imo maybe remove it? are u sure? the next note is already in the middle D:
  same with hitsounds add more yeah remake the hitsounds already

Hard:

• AR -1 for better difficult spread since normal got 5 and insane 9 this have to be 7 it is not a rule isn't it?
  00:06:200 (5,1,2) - (nazi) stack they perfect are a little wrong fixed in the previous updates
  00:25:046 this unrankable same i tell you in normal about hitburst covering the repeat are u sure they are unrankable= =? this is a hard diff :3
  00:54:469 (1,2,3) - here better use 05 spacing 1.0 is so difficult for a hard diff consistent DS so no :3
  01:00:238 (5,6) - why drum sound? dont fit in nothing here fixed hitsounds
  01:14:661 (3,5) - maybe can stack the tail of they complety? fixed

Insane:

• 00:21:777 (4) - Unsnapped slider fixed
  00:30:812 green line unsnapped fixed
  00:41:969 (3,4,5) - again drum sound dont following nothing fixed
  00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - im not fan of using 1.0 distance for this streams maybe can you use 0.5? that's okay for me and its the challenging place of my map. can u fc it ?
  01:03:315 (5,6) - stack they perfec a little wrong fixed
  drum hitsounds dont fit fixed

You can improve this map special with hitsounds, sorry for the short mod, but I'm sick I cant concentrate well hope that help you good luck

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:07:930 (1) - Slider should start from here. fixed
00:08:700 (2) - Add whistle, or else this note is just a blank note with nothing to follow. added
00:09:469 (1) - Add clap on the start of the slider. added
00:10:046 (3) - Add clap added
00:10:430 (6) - Add clap on the start of the slider. added
00:47:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Feels like you are abusing the drum. Maybe lower the volume around 40%? remove all those drums
00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Normal hit sounds better IMO fixed

I'm not too sure how I should tackle this diffs hitsound. Drums give more of an comical value and I can't help but to think it doesn't fit to the song.


[Hard]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:08:892 (2,3,4) - Awkward. I would just space it out evenly. fixed
01:18:892 (4) - Add another return fixed

Again, can't help but to think Drums aren't appropriate to the song. Also, this diff needs to tone the soft whistles down a bit. Needs a balance between soft hits and soft whistles.


[Normal]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:31:007 (5) - Increase the slider length. seems better now imo
00:34:084 (5) - Shorten the slider length. ^
00:43:315 (5) - Remove the return and add a note at the end. ^ and for consistency of pattern


[Easy]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
01:04:469 (2) - Way too loud. Lower the volume a bit. hitsound removed



That's all for me. I'm not a big fan of Drum hitsound to be all honest, unless it fits the song. I just think Drum only has a small niche for it. remake the hitsound already. would u mind rechecking my map .__.?

Good luck with the map.

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:238 (1) - Increase the slider length (delete the note after)
00:06:584 (6,7,8) - Make it into a 1/1 returning slider
00:21:777 (4) - Increase the slider length
00:30:815 (1) - Remove clap
00:31:007 (2) - Remove clap and add finish at the start of the slider
00:38:411 (12,13) -Move it 1/4 forward
all fixed

Now the problem is that I can't even hear those drums anymore. The volume is way too low to the point it feels like it was done with soft hitsounds. Better then before though. yeah i realize the background music is already so loud, if there are loud hitsounds, it becomes noisy imo.

[Hard]
00:06:584 (1,2,3) - Increase the slider length (delete the note after) seems weird for me
00:09:469 (5) - Increase the slider length (different slider, but it's the same idea) fixed
00:16:200 (4) - New combo since the spacing changes fixed
00:31:007 (6) - Increase the slider length by 1/4 fixed

Lukareia wrote:

Random Hong Kong taiko mod

[Taiko Oni]
00:10:142 (2,1) - delete fixed

00:15:430 (2,1) - d , K fixed

00:27:930 - add k added

00:47:738 (2,1) - d , K changed to k , D instead.

01:13:892 - add d added

01:18:507 (3) - D fixed

01:19:277 (2,1,1) - k d d or k k d changed to k k d

01:28:315 (2) - k d is better imo ;w;

Quality mod, thanks a lot